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背景大小不合乎要求,改成1024x768
把Good day改为Good Day
Preview Point
impossiblexu's friend
或许需要一个kiai time?
结束在00:59:956
开始在00:40:264
00:03:341(1) - x:72 y:128
00:03:956(2) - x:128 y:248
拉开点会不会更好看呢？
00:12:880(3) - del
00:13:187(1) - 这个开始在00:13:033
00:38:418(2) - x:264 y:296
LOVE PLUS
再减25%的音量..开始时
00:40:110 - kiai开始，同时间的这个note加个finish
结束在00:59:956
00:12:726(7) -这个删掉
(下面没说不加sliderwhistle的..都加就好了)
00:03:341(2) - whistle and sliderwhistle
00:03:649(2) - clap
00:03:956(3) - whistle
00:04:572(6) - whistle
00:05:495(8) - 开头结尾clap,中间whistle
00:06:418(1) - whistle
00:06:726(2) - 开头clap,结尾whistle
00:07:341(3) - clap
00:07:649(5) - 开始whistle,结尾clap
00:08:264(6) - 开头结尾,sliderwhistle全加
00:09:187(1) - clap
00:09:495(2) - 开头whistle,后面clap
00:09:956(3) - 全加上,再去掉结尾的
00:10:418(4) - clap
00:10:726(4) - finish
00:11:341(5) - 开始whistle,结尾clap
00:11:956(6) - 全加上,再去掉结尾的
00:12:880(7) - 结尾加clap
00:16:033~00:25:880 这里用soft的声音(70%的volume)
00:16:880(3) - whistle(只加这个时间点的)
00:17:956(7) - ^
00:19:341(4) - ^
00:20:418(7) - ^
00:21:803(2) - ^
00:23:033(4) - ^
00:24:264(1) - ^
00:24:880(4) - ^
00:25:187(4) - finish
00:25:880这里换回normal用60%的volume
00:27:187(4) - whistle
00:27:803(5) - ^
00:29:649(5) - ^
00:30:264(6) - ^
00:31:341(1) - clap
00:32:572(3) - ^
00:32:880(4) - 全加whistle，去掉结尾
下面到了kiai部分（。。看你的想法，不加的话，就是下一个部分了）
仅指这一部分
最后那部分如果你觉得开始那这么加可以的话。。后面也这么加吧（可能whistle多了些吧
）
其实。。我觉得这你都知道的- -
可能你是不想用24系统的加法？
其实也可以，但我的建议是如果加的话，把音效加成一个整体就好了（这才是主要的）
LOVE PLUS +
100%音量实在有些大了。。
其余同上个难度
背景大小不合乎要求,改成1024x768
把Good day改为Good Day
Preview Point
impossiblexu's friend
或许需要一个kiai time?
结束在00:59:956
开始在00:40:264
00:03:341(1) - x:72 y:128
00:03:956(2) - x:128 y:248
拉开点会不会更好看呢？
00:12:880(3) - del
00:13:187(1) - 这个开始在00:13:033
00:38:418(2) - x:264 y:296
LOVE PLUS
再减25%的音量..开始时
00:40:110 - kiai开始，同时间的这个note加个finish
结束在00:59:956
00:12:726(7) -这个删掉
(下面没说不加sliderwhistle的..都加就好了)
00:03:341(2) - whistle and sliderwhistle
00:03:649(2) - clap
00:03:956(3) - whistle
00:04:572(6) - whistle
00:05:495(8) - 开头结尾clap,中间whistle
00:06:418(1) - whistle
00:06:726(2) - 开头clap,结尾whistle
00:07:341(3) - clap
00:07:649(5) - 开始whistle,结尾clap
00:08:264(6) - 开头结尾,sliderwhistle全加
00:09:187(1) - clap
00:09:495(2) - 开头whistle,后面clap
00:09:956(3) - 全加上,再去掉结尾的
00:10:418(4) - clap
00:10:726(4) - finish
00:11:341(5) - 开始whistle,结尾clap
00:11:956(6) - 全加上,再去掉结尾的
00:12:880(7) - 结尾加clap
00:16:033~00:25:880 这里用soft的声音(70%的volume)
00:16:880(3) - whistle(只加这个时间点的)
00:17:956(7) - ^
00:19:341(4) - ^
00:20:418(7) - ^
00:21:803(2) - ^
00:23:033(4) - ^
00:24:264(1) - ^
00:24:880(4) - ^
00:25:187(4) - finish
00:25:880这里换回normal用60%的volume
00:27:187(4) - whistle
00:27:803(5) - ^
00:29:649(5) - ^
00:30:264(6) - ^
00:31:341(1) - clap
00:32:572(3) - ^
00:32:880(4) - 全加whistle，去掉结尾
下面到了kiai部分（。。看你的想法，不加的话，就是下一个部分了）
仅指这一部分
SPOILER
00:49:956(1) - finish
其实到了这里可以这么加，如果你感觉前面那个加的还可以的话
这里就2,4白线clap为基础，在此基础再寻求变化
变化不要太突然，比如2,4白线的突然转化为1,3白线clap
转换是需要过渡，不过如果开始就选定，2,4（或1,3）白线，建议就持续下去
这样显得更系统化
不过也不能仅靠这个系统，在歌曲曲调弱时，用一些弱的音效(有时也应该减少hitsound)
而加强时，随着note的密度加大，音效也应该跟着提升起来
例如clap----normal----clap--clap--normal的强调作用...（随意举个例子..我不知道这个歌曲是否合适 ）
有时为了达到音效的丰富，也可以用一些custom音效，会带来新鲜感。。。
不过，这个领域太博大...找到合适的音效也要费很大功夫
其实到了这里可以这么加，如果你感觉前面那个加的还可以的话
这里就2,4白线clap为基础，在此基础再寻求变化
变化不要太突然，比如2,4白线的突然转化为1,3白线clap
转换是需要过渡，不过如果开始就选定，2,4（或1,3）白线，建议就持续下去
这样显得更系统化
不过也不能仅靠这个系统，在歌曲曲调弱时，用一些弱的音效(有时也应该减少hitsound)
而加强时，随着note的密度加大，音效也应该跟着提升起来
例如clap----normal----clap--clap--normal的强调作用...（随意举个例子..我不知道这个歌曲是否合适
）有时为了达到音效的丰富，也可以用一些custom音效，会带来新鲜感。。。
不过，这个领域太博大...找到合适的音效也要费很大功夫
最后那部分如果你觉得开始那这么加可以的话。。后面也这么加吧（可能whistle多了些吧
）其实。。我觉得这你都知道的- -
可能你是不想用24系统的加法？
其实也可以，但我的建议是如果加的话，把音效加成一个整体就好了（这才是主要的）
LOVE PLUS +
100%音量实在有些大了。。
其余同上个难度
SPOILER
Download: Saaya Mizuno - Good day (xinhe) [impossiblexu's friend].osu大部分都改了 太谢谢啦H-boy wrote:
impossiblexu's friend
或许需要一个kiai time?
结束在00:59:956
开始在00:40:264
00:03:341(1) - x:72 y:128
00:03:956(2) - x:128 y:248
拉开点会不会更好看呢？
00:12:880(3) - del
00:13:187(1) - 这个开始在00:13:033
00:38:418(2) - x:264 y:296
[Love plus +]
note完全遮挡好像不允许，而且感觉不太好
00:15:495 (1) - 把slide的end拉到00:16:110 (1)之前的白线结束，改排列
00:40:110 (3) - kiai开始改到这
[love plus]
kiai同上
00:48:880 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个重排一下
01:07:803 (5) - dis，重排，虽然能读。改不改都可以
note完全遮挡好像不允许，而且感觉不太好
00:15:495 (1) - 把slide的end拉到00:16:110 (1)之前的白线结束，改排列
00:40:110 (3) - kiai开始改到这
[love plus]
kiai同上
00:48:880 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个重排一下
01:07:803 (5) - dis，重排，虽然能读。改不改都可以
我个弱水平也MOD不出啥东西 就随意说说啦。
EZ: 其实没啥多大问题。。个人是不大喜欢放很多的长圈。。这样整个图就成比转圈了。。
LP:挺好的一张图 没啥可以说的=，=
LP+
00:23:803 (5) - 这里太坑人了 3和5完全叠在一起不好读图
整个图好的我找不到啥毛病啊。。但是现在map这么多 这样的图略显单调了 下次建议弄点出彩的地方~~个人想法~~
star~
EZ: 其实没啥多大问题。。个人是不大喜欢放很多的长圈。。这样整个图就成比转圈了。。
LP:挺好的一张图 没啥可以说的=，=
LP+
00:23:803 (5) - 这里太坑人了 3和5完全叠在一起不好读图
整个图好的我找不到啥毛病啊。。但是现在map这么多 这样的图略显单调了 下次建议弄点出彩的地方~~个人想法~~
star~
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
love plus+用了0.2 Stack Leniency，没有特殊情况的话这是不允许的，请右调一点。
offset:+8
tags为什么用逗号不用空格。source？
[impossiblexu's friend]
friend的F要不要大写？
00:13:045 (1) - 提前1/2结束掉
00:40:276 (1) - 去掉这拍，把之前的slider延长1/2
[LOVE PLUS]
我没明白这个难度的定位是什么。。。首先，这和friend明显有差距，甚至有不少这个BPM下的1/4。作为Hard的话，slider速度又显得差了些。自己考虑一下，然后考虑补个Normal或者什么。
这么短的歌，不要留break了。
HP-1至少。
00:24:892 (4) - 左一格
01:04:276 (1,2,3) - ..1^
01:08:584 (2,3,4) - ...2^
01:19:507 (1) - 最后一拍按出来，然后再转。另外，前面一串让这个难度肯定是Hard了……
[LOVE PLUS+]
HP-1至少。
我觉得玩combo换色看不到意义。
00:08:892 - 加拍
00:25:045 (5) - 看不到慢速的必要
00:30:122 - 加拍补上clap位
00:52:738 - 加拍建议
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
love plus+用了0.2 Stack Leniency，没有特殊情况的话这是不允许的，请右调一点。
offset:+8
tags为什么用逗号不用空格。source？
[impossiblexu's friend]
friend的F要不要大写？
00:13:045 (1) - 提前1/2结束掉
00:40:276 (1) - 去掉这拍，把之前的slider延长1/2
[LOVE PLUS]
我没明白这个难度的定位是什么。。。首先，这和friend明显有差距，甚至有不少这个BPM下的1/4。作为Hard的话，slider速度又显得差了些。自己考虑一下，然后考虑补个Normal或者什么。
这么短的歌，不要留break了。
HP-1至少。
00:24:892 (4) - 左一格
01:04:276 (1,2,3) - ..1^
01:08:584 (2,3,4) - ...2^
01:19:507 (1) - 最后一拍按出来，然后再转。另外，前面一串让这个难度肯定是Hard了……
[LOVE PLUS+]
HP-1至少。
我觉得玩combo换色看不到意义。
00:08:892 - 加拍
00:25:045 (5) - 看不到慢速的必要
00:30:122 - 加拍补上clap位
00:52:738 - 加拍建议
下載的檔案只有三diff
可能要重傳次
可能要重傳次
給星了，大丈夫
STAR ._.
good
star
star
暂停时候的continue retry这些图片略显粗糙 >_> 换个字体吧，另外颜色也和背景太接近了
timing到歌曲后面有off，要加第二条红线。我测是69,786ms，不知道准不准。改好的话别忘resnap
<LOVE PLUS>
AR-2、OD-1吧，不然这个连Hard都算不上，难度分布没法蒙混过关 ._.
01:08:592 (2,3,4) - 对齐
就这些
timing到歌曲后面有off，要加第二条红线。我测是69,786ms，不知道准不准。改好的话别忘resnap
<LOVE PLUS>
AR-2、OD-1吧，不然这个连Hard都算不上，难度分布没法蒙混过关 ._.
01:08:592 (2,3,4) - 对齐
就这些
very good
give a star 
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Love Plus~~~!!!~>w<~
diff spread 不好。
love plus+ 和lolipop plus +两个基本一样的难度，加一个hard+，然后是EASY。
[loli plus+]
这难度后面怎么没改custom音效o.o
love plus+ 和lolipop plus +两个基本一样的难度，加一个hard+，然后是EASY。
[loli plus+]
这难度后面怎么没改custom音效o.o
[General]
Mp3 bitrate is unrankable, unless you can show me some proof that you own the rights to the song, i can't let the mp3 go unless its 128-192 bitrate.
"love" is repeated in tags
Alace, impposiblexu, LOVE PLUS+, are using My.Secret as source while LOVE PLUS is using My Secret, and _loliplus+_ doesnt even have a Source.
I think you should add more audio lead-in to all other difficulties except impossiblexu's because count down is not even showing up.
[Skin]
One problem i have with light colored spinner BGs is that when you clear a spinner it lights up, and it may hurt the eyes or may blind you from follow up notes, just a thought. For reference, check this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58481
[Alace's Taiko]
01:09:746 (26,27) - I dont know, but i think this might look quite bad for Taiko players since the other note is snapped to a different red line
01:15:016 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - I think adding some katsus here would sound better than if it is full of dons.
[LOVE PLUS+]
The only problem i have with this diff is that there are many instance with a spam of new combos, and those may screw up hp calculations.
[LOVE PLUS]
Is it just me or did you make the combo colors match up the backgrounds in the video o.o dunno if intentional or coincidence but either way, good job!
Other diffs are fine, good luck with your beatmap!~
Mp3 bitrate is unrankable, unless you can show me some proof that you own the rights to the song, i can't let the mp3 go unless its 128-192 bitrate.
"love" is repeated in tags
Alace, impposiblexu, LOVE PLUS+, are using My.Secret as source while LOVE PLUS is using My Secret, and _loliplus+_ doesnt even have a Source.
I think you should add more audio lead-in to all other difficulties except impossiblexu's because count down is not even showing up.
[Skin]
One problem i have with light colored spinner BGs is that when you clear a spinner it lights up, and it may hurt the eyes or may blind you from follow up notes, just a thought. For reference, check this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58481
[Alace's Taiko]
01:09:746 (26,27) - I dont know, but i think this might look quite bad for Taiko players since the other note is snapped to a different red line
01:15:016 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - I think adding some katsus here would sound better than if it is full of dons.
[LOVE PLUS+]
The only problem i have with this diff is that there are many instance with a spam of new combos, and those may screw up hp calculations.
[LOVE PLUS]
Is it just me or did you make the combo colors match up the backgrounds in the video o.o dunno if intentional or coincidence but either way, good job!
Other diffs are fine, good luck with your beatmap!~
Add same source to all difficulties
_loliplus+
00:22:284 (4) - is hidden ><
00:45:438 (2,3) - fix this lil spacing
01:04:515 - useless timing section
fun~
LOVE PLUS +
00:09:053 (4) - wrong spacing
00:47:976 (1,1,1) - make them same combo, cuz i hit 00:48:746 (1) - before 00:48:592 (1) - (color confusion @.@)
00:57:823 (1,2,1,1,1) - - this sounds weird, could you change it to something that fits better with the music?
LOVE PLUS
01:07:823 (5) - change into a triplets, is easier to follow @.@
01:18:401 - do this instead, sounds and plays better
impossiblexu's Friend
why i only saw countdown on this difficulty?
00:13:053 (1) - end it half beat earlier
_loliplus+
00:22:284 (4) - is hidden ><
00:45:438 (2,3) - fix this lil spacing
01:04:515 - useless timing section
fun~
LOVE PLUS +
00:09:053 (4) - wrong spacing
00:47:976 (1,1,1) - make them same combo, cuz i hit 00:48:746 (1) - before 00:48:592 (1) - (color confusion @.@)
00:57:823 (1,2,1,1,1) - - this sounds weird, could you change it to something that fits better with the music?
LOVE PLUS
01:07:823 (5) - change into a triplets, is easier to follow @.@
01:18:401 - do this instead, sounds and plays better
impossiblexu's Friend
why i only saw countdown on this difficulty?
00:13:053 (1) - end it half beat earlier
[Alace's Taiko]
I think it would be Muzukashii style so picked up some 1/4 things ;_;
00:37:823 (141) - [Suggestion] Delete finish?
00:47:669 (41,42,43) - Dunno but about sudden 1/4 stream on Muzukashii 4~5, it might not be good imo ;_;
00:48:284 (46,47,48) - ^
00:49:669 (56) - [Suggestion] don?
00:51:361 (63,64,65) - Dunno but about sudden 1/4 stream on Muzukashii 4~5, it might not be good imo ;_; (Affects every 1/4 going after 3 3-note 1/4 going parts)
00:53:823 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - But, I have to pick up these 1/4 going ;_; sorry orz
01:04:900 (1) - Delete finish
Some quick check but whatever :3
pizza <3
I think it would be Muzukashii style so picked up some 1/4 things ;_;
00:37:823 (141) - [Suggestion] Delete finish?
00:47:669 (41,42,43) - Dunno but about sudden 1/4 stream on Muzukashii 4~5, it might not be good imo ;_;
00:48:284 (46,47,48) - ^
00:49:669 (56) - [Suggestion] don?
00:51:361 (63,64,65) - Dunno but about sudden 1/4 stream on Muzukashii 4~5, it might not be good imo ;_; (Affects every 1/4 going after 3 3-note 1/4 going parts)
00:53:823 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - But, I have to pick up these 1/4 going ;_; sorry orz
01:04:900 (1) - Delete finish
Some quick check but whatever :3
pizza <3
Hey there, timing is a little off, me and alace tested a little, in the end we got about +15 ms on the sections.
First Offset: 915
Second Offset: 69806 (this section actually needed 20+ ms after i did some further testing)
Don't forgett to resnap all notes and fix all green lines
nice map
First Offset: 915
Second Offset: 69806 (this section actually needed 20+ ms after i did some further testing)
Don't forgett to resnap all notes and fix all green lines
nice map
Topic Starter
THANKS~~~Gabi wrote:
Hey there, timing is a little off, me and alace tested a little, in the end we got about +15 ms on the sections.
First Offset: 915
Second Offset: 69806 (this section actually needed 20+ ms after i did some further testing)
Don't forgett to resnap all notes and fix all green lines
nice map
Re-check~
Set same Audio Lead-in in all difficulties
_loliplus+
00:22:284 (4) - still hidden
LOVE PLUS +
00:57:823 (1,2,1,1,1) - awww you didn't change it T.T
LOVE PLUS
source: My Secret or My.Secret? @.@
impossiblexu's Friend
no reason of why i only saw countdown on this difficulty? O.o
Set same Audio Lead-in in all difficulties
_loliplus+
00:22:284 (4) - still hidden
LOVE PLUS +
00:57:823 (1,2,1,1,1) - awww you didn't change it T.T
LOVE PLUS
source: My Secret or My.Secret? @.@
impossiblexu's Friend
no reason of why i only saw countdown on this difficulty? O.o
BONUS 80000
oh god the video quality is terrible, I'll ask jericho if he can find a better one D=
Also, isn't "My.Secret" the album name? That's not what source is for, make the Source "LovePlus".
LOVE PLUS:
01:18:882 (2) - This repeat doesn't sync anything and sounds stupid =(
Also, isn't "My.Secret" the album name? That's not what source is for, make the Source "LovePlus".
LOVE PLUS:
01:18:882 (2) - This repeat doesn't sync anything and sounds stupid =(
Topic Starter
Thanks~~~I have the HD video, But it's 96MBLarto wrote:
oh god the video quality is terrible, I'll ask jericho if he can find a better one D=
Also, isn't "My.Secret" the album name? That's not what source is for, make the Source "LovePlus".
LOVE PLUS:
01:18:882 (2) - This repeat doesn't sync anything and sounds stupid =(
~What is more appropriate to the quality of compressed?Other question is so easy,I will fix it now~~
Uh, just noticed some more minor stuff. No kudosu for this.
_loliplus+:
There's "love plus+ " in the tags, which isn't in any other diff. Remove from this diff, or make the tags the same in the other diffs?
LOVE PLUS:
00:39:991 (2) - This note sounds odd. Remove?
EDIT: Yeah, I think it'd be a bit dangerous to rank this now after all that has been done to that map. Rebubbling, shouldn't be too hard to find a BAT to rank it
_loliplus+:
There's "love plus+ " in the tags, which isn't in any other diff. Remove from this diff, or make the tags the same in the other diffs?
LOVE PLUS:
00:39:991 (2) - This note sounds odd. Remove?
EDIT: Yeah, I think it'd be a bit dangerous to rank this now after all that has been done to that map. Rebubbling, shouldn't be too hard to find a BAT to rank it
Topic Starter
Thanks~Larto wrote:
Uh, just noticed some more minor stuff. No kudosu for this.
_loliplus+:
There's "love plus+ " in the tags, which isn't in any other diff. Remove from this diff, or make the tags the same in the other diffs?
LOVE PLUS:
00:39:991 (2) - This note sounds odd. Remove?
EDIT: Yeah, I think it'd be a bit dangerous to rank this now after all that has been done to that map. Rebubbling, shouldn't be too hard to find a BAT to rank it
^ I agree. The second offset did seem a bit early so make that 69826.Gabi wrote:
Second Offset: 69806 (this section actually needed 20+ ms after i did some further testing)
[impossiblexu's Friend]
00:59:991 - How about ending Kiai Time here like the other standard difficulties?
[LOVE PLUS +]
01:19:344 (1) - Maybe do the same thing you did on [LOVE PLUS]? (Note at 01:19:498, spinner at 01:19:652)
[General]
The countdown can't be used since the map starts too fast for it. Therefore, disable the countdown on all difficulties and remove "readys.wav" AND "ready.png" from the folder.
Make each difficulty have 2 seconds of lead-in time.
Just a heads up mafiamaster, the 20+ ms timing that i gave him was already taken into account when i gave him the timing 
If you add another +20 ms it will be +40 ms. Anyways the current timing is correct for me, if you really think it's wrong maybe we need to have an extra person look at it ^^
If you add another +20 ms it will be +40 ms. Anyways the current timing is correct for me, if you really think it's wrong maybe we need to have an extra person look at it ^^(Setted second offset to 69,822) Sounds good now. Rebubbled!
My offset skills suck cocks.