1. Hard (4.76 stars, 651 notes)
2. Normal (3.36 stars, 376 notes)

kuyukiP wrote:

Hello, hello~

General:
Try a BPM of 113.97, then resnap all the notes~
No BG? Are you finding one, or are you going to use the video?
I want a video,but not found

Relax:
Same as below for kiai and hitsound.
Consider going to timing, and then making the slider tick rate 0.5. It sounds better to me, but that's your choice.
Mapping at 02:50:511 on the chorus seems a little weird to me. Any reason why you mapped it like that?


Hard:
At 00:42:117, consider making the hitsound volume lower, to 01:15:811, respectively.
From 01:33:711, do kiai time to 01:54:507.
Sorry,I think no kiai time is better.I'll add kiai time without shiny notes,because it hurts my eye
01:59:771: Consider mapping this part, and making the spinner shorter.
Kiai time at 02:50:576 to 03:13:214. This is unfinished, right?
As above

I'll star this when finished~ maybe I can make a guest difficulty too, if that's okay? Like, an easy?

kuyukiP wrote:

Have you tried changing the timing to 113.97? It sounds better to me like that

ddddd519 wrote:

kuyukiP wrote:

Have you tried changing the timing to 113.97? It sounds better to me like that

I think 114.00 is best...

Sakura Hana wrote:

[osz File Scan!]

[Timing]
Are u sure the offset/BPM is correct? im getting it being kind of early try: 4,281
fixed

[General]
No tags?
fixed

[Hard]
Uneven spacing throughout the beatmap, try to not change the distance snap during the same beatmap, default is 0.8 for a reason.
00:42:632 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing too close. fixed
00:52:500 (5,6) - Mapping to silence? fixed
01:09:342 (5,6) - Mapping to silence?fixed
01:11:974 (7) - Mapping to silence?fixed
And a few others of theese, otherwise fine.

[Relax]
Fine

Hard will need more work before i can star it, feel free to forum PM me for a remod when you're ready

Selee wrote:

等会给详细点的MOD好了 =w= 被人拉去打DOTA...

Offset 4250 fixed
Timing最后一项添加Preview Point fixed
删除文件夹内osb文件 fixed
请保持恒定的Distance Spacing并使用Distance Snap
打起来很单调 排版需要更多考虑
Song Setup的Storyboarding里面取消Letter Box fixed

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
1) The Offset is DIFFRENT on each diff! [Relax] is 4211, but why [Hard] is 4250? Please make sure the offset is same fixed
2) Your bg (Acute2.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (826x767) How to resize?
3) Please fill the Tags, please~ fixed
4) Please set the Preview Point fixed

[Relax]
01:45:526 (5) - Not stack with 01:44:211 (4) at end fixed
02:17:105 (2,3,4) - Move 1 grid left? fixed

[Hard]
00:40:302 (7) - New combo? fixed
00:40:828 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
01:03:197 (7,8) - Spacing error fixed
01:08:723 (2,3) - Is this anti-jump? If no, please fix the spacing[/color] fixed

Good song
STAR

Selee wrote:

看了看...还是没法给mod Normal和Hard的距离问题太严重 ...重排版吧...

还有啊 叠加时候关闭grid snap之后 distance spacing调到0.0x再叠

BG看看行么.. Fixed~

不用KDS了

ddddd519 wrote:

Selee wrote:

看了看...还是没法给mod Normal和Hard的距离问题太严重 ...重排版吧...

还有啊 叠加时候关闭grid snap之后 distance spacing调到0.0x再叠 distance spacing怎么调0.0

BG看看行么.. Fixed~

不用KDS了

wmfchris wrote:

[hard]
0:12:671 (1,2,3) spacing + 1 grid
0:15:039 (4,5,6,7,8) spacing + 1 grid
0:25:039 (3,4,5) up 1 grid
0:34:249 (2,3) down 1 grid
0:41:092 (4,5,6) spacing of (4,5) different from (5,6)
1:03:460 (3) right 1 grid
1:07:934 (1,2) spacing
...
spacing比較亂, 建議用distance snapping + grid level 3 re-snap一次
比如1:20:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) 就出現了3種不同的spacing (1,2,3), (4,5) 和(1,2).....

[relaxing] spacing比hard好, 大致沒大問題~

re-snap好 hard再叫我來吧 : D

wmfchris wrote:

建議用distance snapping + grid level 3 re-snap一次

ddddd519 wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

[hard]
0:12:671 (1,2,3) spacing + 1 grid
0:15:039 (4,5,6,7,8) spacing + 1 grid
0:25:039 (3,4,5) up 1 grid
0:34:249 (2,3) down 1 grid
0:41:092 (4,5,6) spacing of (4,5) different from (5,6)
1:03:460 (3) right 1 grid
1:07:934 (1,2) spacing
...
spacing比較亂, 建議用distance snapping + grid level 3 re-snap一次
比如1:20:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) 就出現了3種不同的spacing (1,2,3), (4,5) 和(1,2).....

[relaxing] spacing比hard好, 大致沒大問題~

re-snap好 hard再叫我來吧 : D

fixed~

wmfchris wrote:

建議用distance snapping + grid level 3 re-snap一次

这个怎么弄呀。

karenying wrote:

check spacing again plz
spacing很亂
...不如重排下
開着distance snapping重排...需要JUMP時按Alt排
BPM 不高也不低 , distance spacing 調1.0x剛剛好
排好了 PM我 , 我再mod

wmfchris wrote:

順帶提一點, distance spacing只是參考用, 沒說過1/4不能疊左一起啊 :3

[hard]
0:15:039 (4,5,6...) right 1 grid
0:35:828 (1) down 1 grid
0:42:144 (1,2) (1) left+down 1 grid, (2) down 1 grid
0:43:723 (4) up 1 grid
0:45:565 (2,3) spacing
1:26:618 (4,5,6...) left 1 grid
1:31:355 (9,10,11,12) left 1 grid
1:48:460 (2,3,5,6) spacing differs
1:50:039 (10,1,2) uneven spacing fixed
....
spacing仍然有問題, 就算開了distance spacing, 每個1/2 spacing還是要一致, 不行的話看AI mod

karenying wrote:

Relax
這diff spacing还是不行啊... 我把relax diff忘了。。
00:24:513(4) - spacing
00:53:986(4) - ^
01:34:644(1,2,3,4) - ^ (這4個notes spacing應該一樣
02:33:723(4) - ^
02:37:934(4) - ^
02:46:355(2) - ^
03:10:302(1) - ^
03:57:407(4) - ^
04:07:407(5) - ^
04:09:249(5) - ^
04:18:986(1) - ^

Hard
音效不給力 求教如何给力

ddddd519 wrote:

求教如何给力

karenying wrote:

ddddd519 wrote:

求教如何给力

hitclap不好聽...

OK mod hitsound when I finish my work :3

Vikon wrote:

最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。

karenying wrote:

Hard
HP/AR/OD+2 fixed

1.一串串hitclap實在不好聽

Vikon wrote:

最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。

我按照這個改改看好了
ps. 01:26:618 (4) - 不過這里2個clap很好聽

2.whistle很好聽,基本不用改

試着把hitsound改至01:32:407
你可以看看,參考着改

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Relax]
00:04:249 (1,2,3) - It's so close,and suddenly jumping to 00:08:460 (1).You have to fix distance. fixed
00:40:828 (3) - Too close. fixed
02:53:723 (4) - Stack or make something like with next ones. fixed
03:10:828 (2,3,4) - You must have some distance between (1) and this pattern. fixed

[Hard]
00:37:934 (1) - Fix distance,place further. fixed
03:45:302 (x) - Isn't it better for 0.5x Timing Section? not better..it will be too slow

Relax is kinda boring,maybe because of way too slow sliders,but Hard is fine.
Good luck.

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Remove miku, kaito, and luka from the tags. They're all in the artist anyway.
If you can, try to remove the audio from the video to save a little bit of space.
Before you start asking for BATs, make sure that you remove the .osb file in your song's folder and do a full resubmission.
If you'd like, please check my user page for some general mapping tips (mostly concerned with distance snap here)

[Relax]
00:16:881 (1) - Maybe position this so the end of it isn't colliding with the 00:14:776 (2) - ?
00:18:986 (2,3) - These are too close together.
00:20:039 (3) - Move the middle slider point left and up one grid. This will line up the end points and look nicer.
00:36:355 (2) - Too close. >< Move up please
Hrm, there seem to be a lot of spacing inconsistencies here. Perhaps start using distance snap as a guide so that your note spacing has a lot more uniformity to it. I'm not saying to use it at all times - just where it makes sense to keep your map's flow good.
01:00:039 (2) - Short curved sliders like this kind of look ugly. If you're going to use a short slider, just make it straight or make the curve much less sharp.
01:20:039 (1) - Hrm, considering what you did just before this, maybe do a single hit here, then a slider from 01:20:565 - to 01:20:960 - ?
01:48:460 (1,1,1,1) - With such a low HP drain, I don't think all these new combos are needed.
01:59:513 (1) - This is a bit too soon after a spinner for such a difficulty. Maybe end the spinner at 01:57:144 - and map a beat at 01:58:986 - ?
02:01:881 (4,5) - Hrm, these don't look so good to me
02:38:986 (1,1,1,1) - New combo thing again, hehe
02:52:934 (1,2,3,4) - Try repositioning these down and to the left. The way osu! stacks these makes it really far away from where they would normally appear.
02:55:039 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:59:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:30:565 (2,1) - Kind of a far jump for this type of difficulty.
03:59:776 (1,1,1) - New combos. -_-
04:16:881 (1,1,1,1) - ^
04:22:407 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:07:802 - Expected a note here
00:53:197 (1,2) - This jump felt unjustified/a bit too extreme for my liking.
01:32:144 (12) - Might sound better if you silenced the end of the slider.

Yeah, give a lot more attention to your Relax difficulty. And in general, both maps feel artificially slow compared to the song. I'd like to suggest that you increase the slider velocity a little on both, but that's a lot of remapping to do, hehe.

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

- Add some tags em....
- Add Kiai Time? no kiai time,it hurts my eyes

[Relax]
Check AIMOD (spacing)
Use Large Size Circles fixed
01:11:355 (5) - extend this slider to end at 01:13:855 (although i dont like it ending on a blue tick...it sounds alot better) fixed
01:15:828 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:17:144 fixed
01:57:407 - remove this break fixed

[Hard]
There are some notes that would look alot better if properly stacked (00:13:737 (3,4) <--- notes like these)
03:33:460 (3) - add a few more repeats to end this slider at 03:33:986 not sound better
03:34:249 (x) - add a note here (with clap) fixed


~STAR (lol i like the vid) GOOD LUCK!

shabao_pig wrote:

个人看法，仅供参考

HARD

00:23:723 感觉需要一个circle fixed
00:37:934 距离有点迷惑，或许可以在00:37:671加一个circle，然后00:37:934到00:38:197用一个slider fixed
00:53:197 尝试互换一下1、2的位置 fixed
01:18:723 距离问题 fixed
01:31:092 这个circle前移1/4拍感觉好点，再调整一下距离 不要>_>

后面总体来说没什么问题

RELAX

00:35:828 这里有点紧密了fixed
00:46:881 5、6离slider太近了 fixed
01:03:723 同上，有遮挡关系会让人误认为是连打 fixed 连打什么的。Easy难度怎么会有>.<
02:19:249 同一类问题，这里显得有点远了 ^
02:20:565 其实这里也可以近一点的 视觉差错嘛>_>
02:46:355 做成三角形吧，距离大一点>_< fixed
02:50:565 这里开始稍微考虑一下Stack Lenienc的影响吧，有点不好看，呵呵fixed
03:59:776 这里的三个1往前移半拍，你要考虑打图的人可能没听过这个歌，所以不要太多的按照歌词来做……fixed

后面有些小距离问题最好调整一下 fixed
star 加油

kuyukiP wrote:

Recheck time. Thanks for calling me out!

General
Is it just me or is there still a black background when playing? Maybe I just haven't re-downloaded in a while.


Relax
-00:08:460 (1) : Perhaps try to make this slider shaped like the one before? (At 00:05:302) fixed
-01:33:723 (1) : Kiai Time? fixed

Hard
-02:38:197 (4) : One grid space down. fixed
-04:10:565 (10) : Kiai Time? fixed
- Consider mapping after the last spinner? not better,I think

Amazing improvement since the last time. Hard definitely better, Relax could use better shaped sliders. Otherwise, really good.
Already starred this ;D

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ General ]

in some places very much want to see Kiai time...

[ Relax ]

(✹) Slider Tick Rate = 1 . beautiful sounds

(✹) 01:11:355 - slider finish here ~ 01:11:881. spiner start here 01:12:144 and finish 01:15:302

(✹) 01:17:934(3) can do the same as the slider and 2 combo 01:15:828?

(✹) 01:24:249 (1) Make slide smoother. does not looks nice

(✹) 02:28:460(4) - take away the slider and put the Circle. and start the spinner here 02:28:986 and finish 02:32:144
(✹) 04:05:828 Add Circle

[ Hard ]

fine..~

I like this map...~STAR

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
需要加slider上拍子的whistle音的时候，不要点slider加，这样会把滑动音也改掉，记得一个一个点音去加，这样的情况比较多，建议彻底查一遍。例00:51:092 (1) @ [Normal] fixed
作曲KurousaP，写进source，然后vocaloid和vocaloid2进tags. fixed

[Relax]
按照惯例也好语法也好，应该叫Relaxing，或者Normal就好 fixed
OD+1. fixed
这个难度的spacing，显得有些混乱，我不确定自己点全了，建议彻查。
00:20:039 (3,1) - 比如这里。 感觉没问题的说。。
00:39:513 (4,1) - 更远。 fixed
00:42:144 (3,1,2) - 没有违和感吗。。 fixed
00:51:092 (1,2) - 再比如。 fixed
01:33:723 (1,2,3) - 这一串小到几乎可以看成1/2了。 fixed
01:51:355 (2,4,5) - 实际玩起来时这里很难看，建议到song setup - advanced 里把stack leniency拉低一点再看。 fixed
02:17:671 (4,1) - 。。 fixed
02:24:776 (1,2,3) - 完全混乱。请看右上角的spacing. fixed
中段的效果不错不过我怀疑有人会大力反对。
03:28:460 (1,2,1,2) - spacing fixed
整体评价是：和Hard比我觉得实在是没用心。

[Hard]
00:53:197 (1,2) - 间距超出理解，音阶变化不大，也没有什么前兆，我觉得在1.5x以内还好说，2x+有点大了。 fixed
01:12:144 (8,1) - spacing. 有距离问题嘛？
01:48:723 (3,4,5) - 把它们右一格，虽然其实是你两边间距不等。。但重叠效果后这么摆不错。 fixed
02:01:618 (1,2) - 同样是不太能理解的跳。 fixed
04:05:565 (4,1) - 建议放远，现在容易理解为1/2 fixed

James2250 wrote:

-Pretty nazi mod but take from it what you want~
-Make the preview point is the same on both difficulties
-Do you need both of these (Vocaloid,Vocaloid2) in tags?
-There are too many short breaks, get rid of most of them and put 2-3 longer breaks in the map (it is annoying to have a break every 20 seconds etc)

Relaxing:
For the parts where it is basically just the singer and no background music, whistles would sound nicer than claps (example 02:16:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) --- try and go through and fix that on all the places
Try and follow 1 distance snap on the easiest difficulty, or else it is confusing for example 00:53:986 (4,5) and 00:59:513 (1,2) should be the same distance apart
For the easiest difficulty you should fix most of the errors that AIMod points out
00:04:249 (1) - add finish
00:05:302 (2) - add finish to the end (doesn't sound good with whistle on slider either) also both sliders would look better being symmetrical
00:08:460 (4) - ^ (add finish to the start, clap to the end) -- not going to list all the places but there are alot of places in the map that finishes work
00:12:671 (1) - add finish to start
00:12:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - add claps to this part
00:21:092 (1,2,3) - whistles on sliders don't fit
00:33:723 (1) - add finish to the start (and any others like this) ---not going to point them all out
00:33:723 (1,2,3,4) - make sure spacing stays equal
00:36:881 (3) - add clap to the end to match other one?
01:07:934 (1) - sliders like this could be more symmetrical
Spacing between 01:22:144 (4,1) and 01:24:250 (1,2,3,4) should be the same
01:30:565 (1) - would sound better with a silenced ending
01:58:986 (1,3) - don't have stuff like this overlap
02:53:723 (4,1,2,3,4) - don't have any of this overlap
Dont have 2 breaks around 1 note 03:20:039 (1) The breaks add automatically..
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same things that was mentioned before with changing claps to whistles on the quieter parts of the song (and continues from here)
04:14:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
Best thing to do for this difficulty is go through the entire thing with 1 distance snap and makes sure everything its snapped (unless the jumps really fit), and adjust some hitsounds so they fit the song more

Hard:
AR + 1
Not going to point them all out but all of the whistles get annoying after a while, try and keep a steady rhythm with claps and remove alot of the whistles
00:13:723 (3,4) - stack stuff like this? (unless you want it like this go through and check them in the rest of the map)
00:42:144 (1,2) - align?
01:01:618 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:144 (8,1) - don't have anti jumps
03:19:513 (1,2) - again don't do this

Prefer Hard alot more, but after some polishing the maps won't look too bad~
PM me after fixes and I will star

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[hard]
03:32:667 (1,2,3) - snap these notes to 1/3 beat spacing to fit the guitar

[relaxing]
03:45:302-03:59:776 the hitsounds are too loud here, take them down 2-3 ticks?

thats all, starring