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Saturio
star!! >3<
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Wolf's Level 4

00:47:392 (5,6,7,8) - 这些在红线上的note建议都分开
00:51:250 - add a note? 前边那几个音是从红线开始的这里最好也从红线开始._.
00:56:821 (2,3) - 上下错位再多一点或者换个方向 (I hate this kind of arrangement x.x)
01:04:321 (2,3,4) - 这两个slider也建议多错开一点,虽然间隔相对长 ._.
01:46:964 (4) - new combo?
02:00:678 (4) - ^
02:19:964 (1,2,3) - 因为这一段是从红线开始的所以建议只叠2和3把1放到其他地方,这样读图比较明了,不用盯着approach circle ._.
02:39:035 - 这个停顿感觉很违和(而且还是stack),如果不想要这个音试着这里用slider带过,或者用jump
02:52:321 (1,2) - 再错开一点._.
03:15:250 (1,2) - 音量调整一下
03:44:178 (2,3,4) - 排成正三角形好看一点._. 后面也是
03:59:178 (1) - 这个slider建议和03:58:749 (7)叠起来
04:00:464 (6,7,8,9,10) - 排漂亮一点._.


Hard

建议用一些Normal进去,感觉太软了 (前边可以适当加一些Normal在过渡的地方,高潮部分只用clap和whistle打拍子显得很无力)

01:40:113 (4,5,6) - 和前边note超过一拍间隔又都在红线上打起来有点羞涩…… (我第一次打直接3个全点在白线上._.) 如果想这么用4前边的白线上加个note垫一下,比较有节奏感
02:00:470 - 同样建议加个note (我的观点是不要为了跟歌词而skip掉太多的白线,这样打起来缺乏节奏感._.)
02:38:613 (11,12,13) - 不喜欢clap串
02:49:970 (9) - ^
02:55:649 (3) - 这个建议整体往前移动1/4拍放到红线上,仔细听了一下这里的人声也不在蓝线上所以还是放到比较整的拍子上比较好(而且03:09:256 (4) 是在红线上)
03:00:041 (12) - 拍拍拍。如果想要加重的话可以尝试一下Normal
03:17:720 (4) - 我总觉得与其放一个音在蓝线上不如前后用两个note把它夹起来._. 而且人声不像伴奏那么准确,没有必要去纠结它在蓝线上还是红线上
03:45:470 (1) - slider在这一串出现的位置提前1/2,感觉这样打起来比较贴合音乐
03:52:541 (1) - ^
03:58:327 (2,3) - 这两个slider和音乐有点脱离了,可以换一种节奏(比如红白红,红白红<下图>),或者直接把note排满


Normal

00:48:899 (8) - 太慢了._. 可以速度x2长度x2
01:07:755 (2,3,4) - 这里的似乎需要在红线上的note否则太死板了,后面的也是,试试这样的节奏
03:40:326 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 一直单点感觉很枯燥,03:41:827或者什么地方插个note
03:54:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里也需要更多的note


暂时这么多 8-)
Kotone
sb不用kd吧
Topic Starter
wmfchris
咁你比番我 XD
Saturio
Miu Matsuoka
star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
Topic Starter
wmfchris

cheukhin1985 wrote:

star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
sor呀 >_<
我做圖平時會內部徵晒guest diff先 orz
所以下次M群請早 >_<
Miu Matsuoka

wmfchris wrote:

cheukhin1985 wrote:

star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
sor呀 >_<
我做圖平時會內部徵晒guest diff先 orz
所以下次M群請早 >_<
ok :D
Ibuki Suika
求歌词
歌姬求交往
8-)
Madoka
star...... lol
Topic Starter
wmfchris
歌詞

SPOILER
《心》
原曲:《ココロ》
作曲、編曲:トラボルタ
(日文)原詞:トラボルタ  原唱:鏡音リン

詞:內木一郎

(靜越世紀 守等你)
 程式 (像夢)思憶裏 守等你
 奇跡 (願被)儲起 守等盼希

有個寂寥極的科學家 灌注血汗賭上是希冀
製作受傳頌的機器人 叫「傳奇」(叫「傳奇」) [註1]

卻說這部淚珠的結晶 有個缺陷仿似在賭氣
我欠缺掉程式稱作「心」 無從明白你

經幾百年 我守等這兒 這篇「傳奇」 結果等太遲
使機器人 覺醒的本事 想探知

想知為何 我給生出來 想知你曾 怎麼的盼待
經千百回 以一生製成 「心」裏愛

現時 能開始 無從阻止 無從阻止
如 限制 頃刻裏被廢
沉思中 明眸怱怱 有淚暗湧
為何從胸口 微微的抖
從幻覺 找到了脈膊
從質感 纏縈傷感 我問這就叫「心」?

這顆心 多麼真 這顆心 多麼深
我已領教了 這 世界裏有興奮
這顆心 多麼真 這顆心 多麼深
我已領教了 這 世界裏有悽暗
這顆心 多麼深 早超出 限禁
心裏面 每感覺 亦太震撼 啊~~

現時才開始 明瞭當初
明白你 怎麼要造我
從「心」底 明瞭孤單 這樣痛楚
傳奇和思憶 埋藏心胸
藏着你 的希冀或痛
從今起 能從「心」中 滿溢四湧

讓我開~口說 來自心中的感覺
誠心~一句 Arigatou
Arigatou、Arigatou
你賜予我這世界 你把一切 都給我
Arigatou、Arigatou
每串過往也有你 伴我走過
Arigatou、Arigatou
有了你這片厚愛 去將鎖困 都打破
Arigatou、Arigatou
現在我「傳奇」中高歌~
Arigatou、Arigatou
此刻的真我 是「心」的結果

〔讀白:〕
呢個係個驚人嘅傳奇,
佢有咗「心」之後,就不停咁
將佢嘅感覺唱出嚟。
不過,傳奇唔係維持咗好耐。
始終,「心」對佢嚟講,太沉重喇,
佢承受唔住,
於是停咗落嚟,唔再郁。
由嗰刻起,佢就一直保持住呢個
天使嘅幸福笑容。

第二項……啊哈哈
Ibuki Suika
是玩osu的人吗?
还是说是香港的acg团体搞的......... :o
Amethyst Wolf

wuliang wrote:

是玩osu的人吗?
还是说是香港的acg团体搞的......... :o
是後者
Topic Starter
wmfchris
說不定會因為這map把她拉進來:D
Amethyst Wolf

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Wolf's Level 4

00:47:392 (5,6,7,8) - 这些在红线上的note建议都分开 以前分開過, 現在感覺比較好
00:51:250 - add a note? 前边那几个音是从红线开始的这里最好也从红线开始._. good idea
00:56:821 (2,3) - 上下错位再多一点或者换个方向 (I hate this kind of arrangement x.x) fixed
01:04:321 (2,3,4) - 这两个slider也建议多错开一点,虽然间隔相对长 ._. 不, 足夠讀出來了
01:46:964 (4) - new combo? ~.~
02:00:678 (4) - ^
02:19:964 (1,2,3) - 因为这一段是从红线开始的所以建议只叠2和3把1放到其他地方,这样读图比较明了,不用盯着approach circle ._.fixed
02:39:035 - 这个停顿感觉很违和(而且还是stack),如果不想要这个音试着这里用slider带过,或者用jump ~.~
02:52:321 (1,2) - 再错开一点._.足夠讀出了
03:15:250 (1,2) - 音量调整一下 =]
03:44:178 (2,3,4) - 排成正三角形好看一点._. 后面也是呃...改了點
03:59:178 (1) - 这个slider建议和03:58:749 (7)叠起来 =]
04:00:464 (6,7,8,9,10) - 排漂亮一点._.=]
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Lanttu
First and second combo color are quite similar to me and it confused me in some places, maybe change the second color a bit? ;u;

[Wolf]
No kiai in this diff?
This diff has some jumps that feel pretty random to me, but I guess no need to change them if you really don't want to.. :V
01:40:542 (5 end) - add clap?
01:42:257 (1 end) - ^
01:47:399 (5,6) -^
01:54:256 (5 end) - ^
01:55:971 (1 end) - ^
02:01:114 (5,6) - ^
02:04:114 (4) - Maybe new combo?
02:30:257 (3) - ^
02:52:328 (1,2) - I don't like these sliders too much, they look and play not very well. >:
03:28:328 (1,2,3) - Remove clap at the end of every slider and add clap to beginning of 2 and 03:29:614 (4), instead?
03:30:042 (1) - Starting from this the clap pattern suddenly changes to red ticks? Nothing wrong with that, I just thought it sounded pretty weird.

[Hard]
00:56:613 (2) - Maybe move the end one grid up so that it's parallel with the previous slider? It would look nice to me. :3
01:18:041 (6) - Maybe new combo?
01:20:613 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to next note?
02:37:113 (4) - New combo?
02:57:470 (7) - ^

[Normal]
00:48:899 (8) - Is it rankable anymore to use red timing sections to slow down sliders? ;_; I'm not sure, but at least new combo here?
01:04:327 (5) - New combo here and remove it from the next note?

Ahhh, hope there were even something helpful in this modding. ;u; Starred~
aesopl19193
kanpakyin
MOD黎...講明先...我會偷懶..
紅色=個人認為你要修改
藍色=意見
[General]
Normal Hard Level4都開左countdown..關左佢
offset未統一.
全部自重去..明明artist不是Rin Kagamine(指

[aesopl's Easy]
Resnap all notes
00:05:613(3)-whistle
00:09:041(1)-^
01:31:434(x)-將個spinner移到01:31:541
01:40:970(4.5)-我始終晤係咁建議easy入面有2個1/2拍癡埋一齊
01:47:827(4.5)-^
之後類似^都省略.晤打出黎 ww
03:21:041(2)-微細spacing問題
03:24:470(2)-下移一格(LV4)
03:57:041(8.1)-在8加上new combo..在(1)remove new combo
04:05:184(2)-同04:04:756(2)對稱

[Normal]
00:51:041(9)-New combo
03:14:613(4)-Remove clap
冇咩可以nazi...就咁= =

[Hard]
00:21:470(6)-New combo and畫好d..>_>
00:24:041(8)-移走clap..用normal
00:46:970(4)-感覺slider頭尾不對稱
00:55:113(8)-下移N格直到同(6)對稱
00:57:256(3)-喂!!畫好d啦(指
01:06:470(2)-4 grid right@_@
01:53:827(7)-New combo
02:34:970(6)-Remove clap
02:38:613(8.9.10)感覺3連打在白線開始會怪怪的..
03:16:327(3)-同(1)對稱
03:20:184(1)-感覺下移N格會好睇好多?
03:22:327(5)-New combo
Kotone
我幫kanpakyin mod的>_<
Wolf's Level 4
何等不自重
00:14:399 - whistle
00:16:757 - ^
00:23:614 - 這串不用normal hitsounds么=/=
00:36:792 - 吵死了這clap
00:38:185 - 別叠着 感覺是應該分開的 叠着太2了
00:43:542 - 這個...spacing突然慢掉
00:51:899 - nazi
01:02:399 - 讚一下 美
01:05:399 - 0.65x unrank ya
01:19:757 - whistle
01:23:185 - ^
01:30:042 - 分開
01:31:114 - no whistle

ya
Vikon
[General]
1) 除左wolf果個diff之外,其他都未加tag...
2) 每個diff 加audio lead-in 1至2秒?? 一開波就讀白,有種太趕ge感覺.
3) baka狼個diff ge offset同其他唔同
4) offset -20 ? (不是指狼果個diff)
5) 將easy以外,其他3個diff ge countdown取消佢?
6) 話時話,幅BG可唔可以換過佢? 既然係新version, 就唔好同當年一樣,太容易令人作比較 (拍肩

[aes's Easy]
00:11:184 (1,2,3) - 覺唔覺呢3個notes之間ge時間好空? 或者將佢地改做有reverse ge slider?
00:26:184 (1) - 玩慣easy,每個note間距係1/1,所以呢個note同之前個slider之間ge間距令人覺得有d怪... 或者將刪除(1)呢個note,然後係00:25:756整個slider,係(2)果度停?
01:07:541 (1) - 間距好空, 或者將(1)變做slider,係01:08:613到停? (間距太空ge話,我驚新手仲易miss)
01:10:970 (4) - 理由同上,將(4)變做slider,係01:12:041到停?
01:12:898 (1,2) - 理由同上,將(1)變slider係(2)到end,然後再加一reverse?
02:05:184 (2) - new combo?
02:06:041 (1) - remove new combo?

[Normal]
00:50:399 個「叫」字好誤導人click早左,或者係呢度開始個slider,然後係00:51:041 (1) 到end?
01:16:327 (1) - 移開呢個slider? 被遮住了中間(有點)不美觀
01:20:613 (1,2) - 係1到整slider,係2到end? 01:21:256 個「我」字好誤導人早click左
01:24:041 (2,3) - 理由同上,係2到整slider,3到end?
01:26:613 (1) - 理由同上,減少一個reverse,然後係01:27:470 果到整slider,係01:28:327 (2) 到end?
01:37:756 (1) - noraml級出現個咁短ge slider.... 有點BT
01:57:470 (4) - 會唔會放得太上? 可唔可以拉返佢落黎?

[Hard]
00:24:041 (3) - 囧, 一來,default clap唔多適合首歌,二黎,default clap連續用 聽起來不太好。 考慮下用我附件果個組合hitsound? soft-hitfinish未必用得著,但只係佢地係一pair黎,鐘意可以參考下..
呢個diff玩落ok順,只係d 連續clap有d騷擾性
如果有用^呢d hitsound,有興趣可以再搵我mod下d hitsound.

[Wolf's Level 4]
nice diff~!
default clap(normal同soft都係)唔多適合首歌... 或者考慮下附件果隻clap鼓聲?
00:57:685 (3) - 呢個slider有d危險...因為佢幾乎被前個slider遮晒咁滯(全遮的話不能rank),安全起計移開佢多d好d
01:02:399 (8) - 覺唔覺個心有d偏,總之有種唔對稱ge感覺..
01:56:399 (2) - 取消這個clap?
02:53:185 (2) - 同樣是危險的slider,移開d?
03:06:899 (6) - ^
03:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 將呢段ge clap頻率由1/1 改返做2/1? 即每2個紅線拍一下, 咁樣做前後層次感好d。
03:47:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Download: soft-pair+1.rar
Topic Starter
wmfchris
sounding -> Saturio 搞緊, 會考慮
aesopl, bakawolf自己改 其他稍後update
Amethyst Wolf
個sounding唔知點解好似畀人改左...同我個style差好多...我要重新改過佢

以上所有sounding mod要無視了:P

個心我都覺樣衰, BAKAYING是在說反義詞對吧?

至於"危險的slider", shin比我更危...也RANK了
而kiai部分, 我想畀一種高潮小小既FEEL, 所以都唔會畀太多停既位係到, 所以VIK後2個MOD我都選擇無視:P

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
TristanShi
聲音有夠萌啊...www
starr.
Kotone
Wolf's Level 4
00:43:113 (3,4) - 這spacing危險
01:04:113 (1,2,3,4,8) - 8-)
no kds
Cirno
Kokoro in Cantonese D:

star..
aesopl19193
The 08 team_Bourdon
:D
aesopl19193
[General]
UPDATE MY EASY

[Wolf's Level 4]
(All suggestion only, feel free to ignore)
00:36:899 (2) - remove clap at the end
00:37:327 (3) - add clap at the start
00:37:756 (4) - remover clap at the end
00:38:184 (5) - add clap at the start
00:39:470 (4) - remove whistle
01:02:399- ????
01:09:470 (1) - finish?
01:10:756 (3) - whistle?
01:11:613 (5) - remove whistle?
01:12:684 (1) - finish at the end
01:19:756 (1) - finish at start
01:30:324 (1) - ^
01:38:613 (1) - finish at start
01:48:041 (1) - no new combo
01:48:898 (3) - new combo
01:52:327 (1) - finish at start
02:01:756 (7) - no new combo
02:02:184 (8) - ^
02:04:113 (1) - ^
02:06:041(X)- add a note

[hard]
01:20:613 (4) - end at 01:21:041, and
01:21:256 - add a note (new combo)
01:21:684 (1) - no new combo

01:24:041 (3) -跟上面3個一樣
01:27:470 (3) - ^
01:30:041 (1) - finish
02:30:256 (1) - whistle
02:32:184(X)- add a note
03:07:756 (1) - finish
03:16:327 (3) - finish at start
03:16:327- like this
03:30:041 (3) - finish at the end only
03:35:613 (3) - remove finish
03:40:541(X)- add note?
03:47:506 (1)- 1grid up
03:47:399 (2,3) - (3) overlap with slider(2), feel odd

[normal]
good.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
updated lol
Ulysses
Star
owl13
STAR
Amethyst Wolf

aesopl19193 wrote:

[Wolf's Level 4]
(All suggestion only, feel free to ignore)
00:36:899 (2) - remove clap at the end
00:37:327 (3) - add clap at the start
00:37:756 (4) - remover clap at the end
00:38:184 (5) - add clap at the start

00:39:470 (4) - remove whistle
01:02:399- ???? 叫左WMF幫我改, 佢應左but無視囉...漲左
01:09:470 (1) - finish?
01:10:756 (3) - whistle?
01:11:613 (5) - remove whistle?
01:12:684 (1) - finish at the end
01:19:756 (1) - finish at start
01:30:324 (1) - ^
01:38:613 (1) - finish at start
01:48:041 (1) - no new combo
01:48:898 (3) - new combo
01:52:327 (1) - finish at start
02:01:756 (7) - no new combo
02:02:184 (8) - ^
02:04:113 (1) - ^
02:06:041(X)- add a note
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Deye
aesopl's easy

00:54:047 (2,4)覺得很怪,不如提前八分之一拍,然後多折返一次.
02:23:184 (1,2,3)稍微建議可以試試(1)加長八分之一拍,(2,3)推後八分之一拍,(3)減少八分之一拍.
02:30:041 (1,2,3)^

wolf's level 4

lovely diff~

01:02:399 (8)總之這處問題很嚴重就是.
Amethyst Wolf
outdate不解釋
Topic Starter
wmfchris
八份一拍 1/8, (驚
aesopl19193

Dr_dy wrote:

aesopl's easy

00:54:047 (2,4)覺得很怪,不如提前八分之一拍,然後多折返一次.
這裡跟鼓聲,所以不改
02:23:184 (1,2,3)稍微建議可以試試(1)加長八分之一拍,(2,3)推後八分之一拍,(3)減少八分之一拍.
02:30:041 (1,2,3)^
-fixed
Thanks :)

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [aesopl's Easy].osu
Kotone
期待sandpig神SB
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aesopl's Easy
tags是空的。。

02:30:041(1) - 这个与后面的(3)做对称

suggestions
00:24:899(x) - add a circle?
01:06:899(x) - ^
01:10:327(x) - ^
01:13:756(x) - ^
01:44:184(3) - clap
01:45:041(5) - ^
01:57:899(2) - ^
01:58:756(3) - ^

Normal

00:24:470(4) - move 1 grid up(lv4)
00:24:899(5) - ^

03:55:756 这里的kiai去掉?

suggestions
When you get a kiai thime, That part use some clap is better(有时是这样吧。。)

Hard

00:24:041(3) - 减少些clap?
01:02:399(7) - move 1 grid left(lv4)
02:45:470(10) - finish
03:00:041(6) - 减少些clap?

Wolf's Level 4

00:48:899 后面这段空着觉得有些空了..不过也可以
01:06:041(5) - finish

star
Roddie
Hi again, Chris. I'm doing my part of the bargain.

aesopl's Easy:
  1. 00:50:613 (3)-Add a finish on the end.
  2. 01:06:041 (1)-I think its better to remove that clap from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
  3. 01:19:756 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  4. 02:02:613 (1)-^
  5. 02:33:470 (1)-^
Normal:
Nothing I can point out.

Hard:
  1. 00:11:184 (1)-Add a finish.
  2. 01:52:327 (2)-^
  3. 03:00:470 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
  4. 04:05:184 (1)-Add a finish?
Wolf's Level 4:
  1. 02:06:041 (x)-It would be best if you add a note here and a finish.
  2. 03:00:899 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  3. 03:07:756 (1)-Add a finish.
  4. 03:16:327 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  5. 03:43:756 (1)-^
  6. 04:00:470 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-This part throw me off a bit. :| I think its best to remove the 2nd note. Like this. So it can be almost identical to this pattern from 03:52:327.
And that's it, I guess. :D

Oh, and Amethyst Wolf. If you're having a little trouble understanding on my mod post on your difficulty, please let me know. Its best that we talk in-game about it if this occurs.

Anyway, good luck getting this ranked~

Star~
ignorethis
喂喂怎么总是粤语歌... :o

offset -10ms,另外感觉有的地方音量偏小了,可以加大一些。

<aesopl's Easy>
01:06:041 (1) - 这里加上折返
01:08:613, 01:09:041 - 这两处加note

<Normal>
这难度做到头吧?
00:46:970 (3) - 这里对齐

<Wolf's Level 4>
00:25:756 (3) - 这里new combo,不然离太近了会让人误认
01:00:684 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个也是,或者拉远一点
01:24:684 (3) - 这个有点难看。。
03:16:113 - 这里加一个note
03:30:041 (1) - 这里开始用红线上clap不好听,不如继续用24白线
Amethyst Wolf

Roddie wrote:

Hi again, Chris. I'm doing my part of the bargain.

aesopl's Easy:
  1. 00:50:613 (3)-Add a finish on the end.
  2. 01:06:041 (1)-I think its better to remove that clap from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
  3. 01:19:756 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  4. 02:02:613 (1)-^
  5. 02:33:470 (1)-^
Normal:
Nothing I can point out.

Hard:
  1. 00:11:184 (1)-Add a finish.
  2. 01:52:327 (2)-^
  3. 03:00:470 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
  4. 04:05:184 (1)-Add a finish?
Wolf's Level 4:
  1. 02:06:041 (x)-It would be best if you add a note here and a finish.
  2. 03:00:899 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  3. 03:07:756 (1)-Add a finish.
  4. 03:16:327 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  5. 03:43:756 (1)-^
  6. 04:00:470 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-This part throw me off a bit. :| I think its best to remove the 2nd note. Like this. So it can be almost identical to this pattern from 03:52:327.
And that's it, I guess. :D

Oh, and Amethyst Wolf. If you're having a little trouble understanding on my mod post on your difficulty, please let me know. Its best that we talk in-game about it if this occurs.

Anyway, good luck getting this ranked~

Star~
about the lastly combo hit, I wanna express that "it's the end of this part"

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ok all fixed
aesopl19193
Pokie
easy未更新?

同埋我dl落黎得easy..
重新full-submit一下
Topic Starter
wmfchris
all fixed~
eveless
[general]
ARTIST shouldnt be Rin Kagamine ,Plz change the real one

[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连,可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线,或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打

[Hard]
我不认为有用中号CS的理由 这个难度打起来感觉比最高难还难

00:59:388 (5) - 打起来不舒服 而且听起来也没必要
02:38:603 (8,9,10) - 不好打,也没必要这么放

我只想说...这难度玩/mod起来可能还不如某些新人mapper的舒服...

[Normal]
00:19:531 (2,3) - 放在这里不适合 很不适合
Amethyst Wolf

eveless wrote:

[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了 拉了點 XD
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连,可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线,或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用根我風格有點不相同啊...
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读這個...
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
ouranhshc
Wolf
00:24:889 (1) - you might not want to have this placed directly under (9) because its making (9) stack awkwardly

01:46:317 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think having jumps going into anitjumps are a good idea. (i'm not saying that you have to change them)
02:00:031 (3,4,5,6) -^
03:21:246 (6,7,1,2) - make spacing even here?
04:06:889 (3) - maybe move this from out under (2), it looks bad ingame

Hard
00:55:531 (9) - maybe place this in line with (7,8)
02:52:960 (6,7) - maybe like this?

04:05:174 (1) - maybe map this spinner and start a spinner 04:07:746 instead?

Normal
01:08:174 (5,6) - make the spacing the same as (1,2) and (3,4)?
01:37:746 (1) - kinda short for a normal diiff
04:01:746 (1) - map this section instead of placing a spinner
04:05:174 (1) - same as [Hard]

Easy
00:56:174 (3) - new combo?
01:30:031 (3) - ^?

good map
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed~
KT_Hin
banvi
:)
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
You can just use the artist's name in the artist field. Even if she's not an actual artist, you can still put whatever name she uses on NND, or even her actual name if you know it :D.

Wolf's Diff:
01:02:388 (3) - You could probably get away with flipping this horizontally. When it plays, the hand will continue to move toward the left of the screen, as the previous notes do, instead of randomly turning to the right.
02:33:674 - FFFFUUUU- 0.5 GAAAAAHH
02:37:531 - I'M GOING TO GOUGE OUT YOUR EYEBALLS AND SKULLFUCK YOU.
03:00:889 - You could probably add a 0.75 section here.
03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern D:. It's too close that it's too hard to read.

Hard:
00:20:710 - GAAAH 0.5 SECTION

Normal:
01:12:888 (1) - FFFFUUU-
01:16:317 (1) - YOUR ASS IS GRASS AND I'M THE WEEDWHACKER
01:26:603 (1) - I guess this is less gay, because you halved the spacing, but overall, I dislike this section having a 0.5
01:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just sounds akward when listening to the lyrics and what you've placed here.
02:40:317 (1) - . . . I guess it works.

Easy:
Cool.

I'm not against 0.5 sections, I just hate where they're placed most of the time.
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed, I'm waiting her response about the artist's name.
KanaRin
Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
Topic Starter
wmfchris

KanaRin wrote:

Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
她本人說的啊。
orioncomet
[Hard]
02:46:317 ~ 03:14:603 - use soft hitsound sound better imo >_<

[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)?
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;;
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2)
some jump look like random to me.. x_x;

other diffs look fine
Amethyst Wolf

orioncomet wrote:

[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing now combo(ed)
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2 Did some fix
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)? ^
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)And did some fix too
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed Am...It's not too hard to read. After all, it's a insane diff
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;; D:
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2) I just make is easier before= =
some jump look like random to me.. x_x; About this, I'll improve it in the future
Thanks for your mod.

Download: chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Rukario
General:
- Why does 'Wolf's Level 4' have a countdown and the other diffs not? Either remove it or add it to all the others.
- Only in aesopl's Easy was Kiai time used. Maybe use it for the other diffs too? Or remove it from aesopl's diff?


Wolf's Level 4:
Not gonna point out the stuff Ploy already pointed out. I pointed them all out and then saw that Ploy already did those.

How about tick rate 1 like all the other diffs?



I have to agree with Ploy that some jumps really feel a bit random.


Other than that, pretty neat mapset.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ok all fixed...
agreed with ploy but ._.
Sakura
[General]
Shouldnt the artist be the vocaloid, and the person that craeted the song with vocaloid in the tags instead?
Why am i not seeing the skip button at the end except on [Hard]?

[Storyboard]
Some storyboard elements have small unnecessary transparencies, Ex: 024.png http://puu.sh/10W6 see the transparencies at the left and right? here's a reversed color version which should make it easier to see http://puu.sh/10W8

[Wolf's Level 4]
01:17:603 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
01:40:103 (4) - Unnecessary extra slider tick is messing up this slider shape a bit
02:13:528 - This break might be a bit too long i recommend you shorten it.
02:53:174 (3) - Unrankable, This slider is hidden below previous slider.
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard

[Normal]
01:17:710 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
02:02:174 (1) - ^
02:43:853 (1) - ^
03:14:710 (1) - ^
03:28:960 (1) - ^
03:43:853 (1) - ^

[Easy]
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard

Edit: Forgot to mention, pretty nice mapset, i like it, feel free to call me for a recheck
Saturio
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ok all fixed~
Sakura
Recheck:
[General]
Source would either be "Vocaloid" or the composer of the vocaloid btw.

[Wolf's Level 4]
03:55:317 (4) - I was wondering why i couldnt see this slider... but it's directly below the previous one, no wonder i thought the previous one hadn't finished fading and this wasn't a slider, sorry but putting sliders directly below other sliders is unrankable.

[aesopl's Easy]
00:25:317 (1) - New combo, it's not being applied correctly because of spinner bug. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60533 see how it's not going 300k but 300?.

Looking better, forum PM me again when it's fixed.
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
okey fixed~
Sakura
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.

No kudosu
Amethyst Wolf

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.

No kudosu
Thx for re-mod. How about now?

Download: Kagamine Rin - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Sakura
Great!
Beuchi
Just passing around~ I know you posted in the queue, sorry for being too late ;~;

Anyways, ahhh this song is so cute, and the cantonese seems to give it an even softer and cuter tone >w<

The storyboard is pretty nice btw, but I think the letterboxes ruin the dark-bright moments sometimes... Just my opinion here x3

Good luck!!
Andrea
[Wolf's Level 4]

03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this extremely confusing.
03:58:746 (7,8,9,1) - ^


Also, make sure to disable Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty like Beuchi said!
Amethyst Wolf
Andrea
Much better.

Ranked~
Megurine Luka
CONG. Nice ver.
eveless
I still dont know why this artist use Kagamine Rin

why you must use Kagamine Rin? It's not the true artist for this song

Also source shouldnt be Vocaloid too...
Topic Starter
wmfchris
not sure about that but this is the willing of the original artist too >_<

DarkRingSystem
:)
OMG this is kokoro~!
eveless

wmfchris wrote:

not sure about that but this is the willing of the original artist too >_<

but you cant , if you dont want chiying to be artist then change others. likes Cantonese or some others

what i said is "Kagamine Rin shouldnt be the artist of this song"

^this is the point
jameskong1
will it be unranked? :cry:
I don't want to 凸 again orz-sno
Topic Starter
wmfchris
I'll look after this next time >A<
KanaRin
GJ
eveless
it should be change
next time is not the reason for make mistake

it must be unrank as soon as possible , otherwise many ppl must to replay it

早点unrank这样玩的人也少 重凹的人也就少
拖着并不好
Alace
unrank because of the wrong artist,
i will recheck it when you fix it
jameskong1
wtf...
KanaRin
Gogo rerank
Snowy Dream
wrong artist..
老师你神了 膜拜
趁现在赶紧star
(<ゝω・)~☆
eveless
yeah go to rerank
Kotone
子瑩=Chiying?拼音沒錯?>A<
唉 算了
Topic Starter
wmfchris

karenying wrote:

子瑩=Chiying?拼音沒錯?>A<
唉 算了
她本人說的

bakaying
kanpakyin
漢語拼音係 ziying
我係打拼音輸入法.實岩^
英文就晤知orz...
Topic Starter
wmfchris
子讀 zi2
嚴格來說英文並無釋音,有時為Tse,但當看Tse一字難以發出讀音 (orz)

粵語並無ch-音
子(zi2)近音ci2相近釋法為 chi

anyway 這是她本人意願啊~~
Kotone
我朋友也叫子瑩 英文是tszying啊 orz
Topic Starter
wmfchris
tsz 冇vowels其實係讀唔出架 orz
Kotone
算吧唉 orz
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. tags: ToraburutaP
  2. SB文件夹里的Thumbs.db删掉后重传
  3. normal-sliderwhistle.wav? 这个其实不必要的._. 选中slider之后再选圈就能不给slider加whistle了
  4. 蛋疼点的话... 标题里 ver. or Ver.?
[Hard]:
  1. 00:11:067 (T) - 这条绿线的设置移到红线上 然后删除
  2. 00:11:281 (T) - 这条也没用吧...
  3. 00:52:317 (T) - ^
  4. 00:52:424 (T) - ^
  5. 03:57:460 (T) - ^
[Wolf's Level 4]:
  1. Soft线上的C1都取消掉吧... 好像没有soft的custom override
  2. 很多地方stack都出错 但是除了移位置并没有很好的解决方案了... 之前的MAT/BAT认为没问题的话 +_+ 不管了
[Normal]:
  1. soft的C1问题以及无用绿线: 00:23:174 01:21:461 01:22:318 01:24:889 01:25:746 01:28:318 01:29:174 01:38:603 02:06:031 03:01:531 03:16:317 03:28:960 03:30:031 03:41:603 03:42:031 03:42:460 等等到末尾... 这是把timing section当做书签了吧么 还是打算做音量变换结果最后阉割掉了 233
[Easy]:
  1. 02:06:031 03:30:031 无用绿线 soft的C1问题
star~
eveless
这还在WIP啊 移到pending去...
Megurine Luka
既然如此那star一下好了
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ver. 畢竟不是專有名詞 嘛 就不改了

其他all fixed ~
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