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Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osuaesopl19193 wrote:
[Wolf's Level 4]
(All suggestion only, feel free to ignore)00:36:899 (2) - remove clap at the end
00:37:327 (3) - add clap at the start
00:37:756 (4) - remover clap at the end
00:38:184 (5) - add clap at the start
00:39:470 (4) - remove whistle
01:02:399- ???? 叫左WMF幫我改, 佢應左but無視囉...漲左
01:09:470 (1) - finish?
01:10:756 (3) - whistle?
01:11:613 (5) - remove whistle?
01:12:684 (1) - finish at the end
01:19:756 (1) - finish at start
01:30:324 (1) - ^
01:38:613 (1) - finish at start
01:48:041 (1) - no new combo
01:48:898 (3) - new combo
01:52:327 (1) - finish at start
02:01:756 (7) - no new combo
02:02:184 (8) - ^
02:04:113 (1) - ^02:06:041(X)- add a note
aesopl's easy
00:54:047 (2,4)覺得很怪,不如提前八分之一拍,然後多折返一次.
02:23:184 (1,2,3)稍微建議可以試試(1)加長八分之一拍,(2,3)推後八分之一拍,(3)減少八分之一拍.
02:30:041 (1,2,3)^
wolf's level 4
lovely diff~
01:02:399 (8)總之這處問題很嚴重就是.
00:54:047 (2,4)覺得很怪,不如提前八分之一拍,然後多折返一次.
02:23:184 (1,2,3)稍微建議可以試試(1)加長八分之一拍,(2,3)推後八分之一拍,(3)減少八分之一拍.
02:30:041 (1,2,3)^
wolf's level 4
lovely diff~
01:02:399 (8)總之這處問題很嚴重就是.
outdate不解釋
Topic Starter
八份一拍 1/8, (驚
ThanksDr_dy wrote:
aesopl's easy
00:54:047 (2,4)覺得很怪,不如提前八分之一拍,然後多折返一次.
這裡跟鼓聲,所以不改
02:23:184 (1,2,3)稍微建議可以試試(1)加長八分之一拍,(2,3)推後八分之一拍,(3)減少八分之一拍.
02:30:041 (1,2,3)^
-fixed
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [aesopl's Easy].osu
期待sandpig神SB
tags推荐用小写
aesopl's Easy
tags是空的。。
02:30:041(1) - 这个与后面的（3）做对称
suggestions
00:24:899(x) - add a circle?
01:06:899(x) - ^
01:10:327(x) - ^
01:13:756(x) - ^
01:44:184(3) - clap
01:45:041(5) - ^
01:57:899(2) - ^
01:58:756(3) - ^
Normal
00:24:470(4) - move 1 grid up(lv4)
00:24:899(5) - ^
03:55:756 这里的kiai去掉？
suggestions
When you get a kiai thime, That part use some clap is better（有时是这样吧。。）
Hard
00:24:041(3) - 减少些clap?
01:02:399(7) - move 1 grid left(lv4)
02:45:470(10) - finish
03:00:041(6) - 减少些clap?
Wolf's Level 4
00:48:899 后面这段空着觉得有些空了..不过也可以
01:06:041(5) - finish
star
aesopl's Easy
tags是空的。。
02:30:041(1) - 这个与后面的（3）做对称
suggestions
00:24:899(x) - add a circle?
01:06:899(x) - ^
01:10:327(x) - ^
01:13:756(x) - ^
01:44:184(3) - clap
01:45:041(5) - ^
01:57:899(2) - ^
01:58:756(3) - ^
Normal
00:24:470(4) - move 1 grid up(lv4)
00:24:899(5) - ^
03:55:756 这里的kiai去掉？
suggestions
When you get a kiai thime, That part use some clap is better（有时是这样吧。。）
Hard
00:24:041(3) - 减少些clap?
01:02:399(7) - move 1 grid left(lv4)
02:45:470(10) - finish
03:00:041(6) - 减少些clap?
Wolf's Level 4
00:48:899 后面这段空着觉得有些空了..不过也可以
01:06:041(5) - finish
star
Hi again, Chris. I'm doing my part of the bargain.
aesopl's Easy:
Nothing I can point out.
Hard:
Oh, and Amethyst Wolf. If you're having a little trouble understanding on my mod post on your difficulty, please let me know. Its best that we talk in-game about it if this occurs.
Anyway, good luck getting this ranked~
Star~
aesopl's Easy:
- 00:50:613 (3)-Add a finish on the end.
- 01:06:041 (1)-I think its better to remove that clap from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
- 01:19:756 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
- 02:02:613 (1)-^
- 02:33:470 (1)-^
Nothing I can point out.
Hard:
- 00:11:184 (1)-Add a finish.
- 01:52:327 (2)-^
- 03:00:470 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
- 04:05:184 (1)-Add a finish?
- 02:06:041 (x)-It would be best if you add a note here and a finish.
- 03:00:899 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
- 03:07:756 (1)-Add a finish.
- 03:16:327 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
- 03:43:756 (1)-^
- 04:00:470 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-This part throw me off a bit.
I think its best to remove the 2nd note. Like this. So it can be almost identical to this pattern from 03:52:327.
Oh, and Amethyst Wolf. If you're having a little trouble understanding on my mod post on your difficulty, please let me know. Its best that we talk in-game about it if this occurs.
Anyway, good luck getting this ranked~
Star~
offset -10ms，另外感觉有的地方音量偏小了，可以加大一些。
<aesopl's Easy>
01:06:041 (1) - 这里加上折返
01:08:613, 01:09:041 - 这两处加note
<Normal>
这难度做到头吧?
00:46:970 (3) - 这里对齐
<Wolf's Level 4>
00:25:756 (3) - 这里new combo，不然离太近了会让人误认
01:00:684 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个也是，或者拉远一点
01:24:684 (3) - 这个有点难看。。
03:16:113 - 这里加一个note
03:30:041 (1) - 这里开始用红线上clap不好听，不如继续用24白线
about the lastly combo hit, I wanna express that "it's the end of this part"Roddie wrote:
Hi again, Chris. I'm doing my part of the bargain.
aesopl's Easy:Normal:
- 00:50:613 (3)-Add a finish on the end.
- 01:06:041 (1)-I think its better to remove that clap from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
- 01:19:756 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
- 02:02:613 (1)-^
- 02:33:470 (1)-^
Nothing I can point out.
Hard:Wolf's Level 4:
- 00:11:184 (1)-Add a finish.
- 01:52:327 (2)-^
- 03:00:470 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
- 04:05:184 (1)-Add a finish?
And that's it, I guess.
- 02:06:041 (x)-It would be best if you add a note here and a finish.
- 03:00:899 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
- 03:07:756 (1)-Add a finish.
- 03:16:327 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
- 03:43:756 (1)-^
- 04:00:470 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-This part throw me off a bit.
Oh, and Amethyst Wolf. If you're having a little trouble understanding on my mod post on your difficulty, please let me know. Its best that we talk in-game about it if this occurs.
Anyway, good luck getting this ranked~
Star~
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Topic Starter
ok all fixed
All Fixed
Thanks to all mods~
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [aesopl's Easy].osu
Thanks to all mods~
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [aesopl's Easy].osu
easy未更新?
同埋我dl落黎得easy..
重新full-submit一下
同埋我dl落黎得easy..
重新full-submit一下
Topic Starter
all fixed~
[general]
ARTIST shouldnt be Rin Kagamine ,Plz change the real one
[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连，可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线，或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打
[Hard]
我不认为有用中号CS的理由 这个难度打起来感觉比最高难还难
00:59:388 (5) - 打起来不舒服 而且听起来也没必要
02:38:603 (8,9,10) - 不好打,也没必要这么放
我只想说...这难度玩/mod起来可能还不如某些新人mapper的舒服...
[Normal]
00:19:531 (2,3) - 放在这里不适合 很不适合
ARTIST shouldnt be Rin Kagamine ,Plz change the real one
[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连，可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线，或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打
[Hard]
我不认为有用中号CS的理由 这个难度打起来感觉比最高难还难
00:59:388 (5) - 打起来不舒服 而且听起来也没必要
02:38:603 (8,9,10) - 不好打,也没必要这么放
我只想说...这难度玩/mod起来可能还不如某些新人mapper的舒服...
[Normal]
00:19:531 (2,3) - 放在这里不适合 很不适合
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osueveless wrote:
[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了 拉了點 XD
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连，可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线，或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用根我風格有點不相同啊...
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读這個...
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打
Wolf
00:24:889 (1) - you might not want to have this placed directly under (9) because its making (9) stack awkwardly
01:46:317 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think having jumps going into anitjumps are a good idea. (i'm not saying that you have to change them)
02:00:031 (3,4,5,6) -^
03:21:246 (6,7,1,2) - make spacing even here?
04:06:889 (3) - maybe move this from out under (2), it looks bad ingame
Hard
00:55:531 (9) - maybe place this in line with (7,8)
02:52:960 (6,7) - maybe like this?
04:05:174 (1) - maybe map this spinner and start a spinner 04:07:746 instead?
Normal
01:08:174 (5,6) - make the spacing the same as (1,2) and (3,4)?
01:37:746 (1) - kinda short for a normal diiff
04:01:746 (1) - map this section instead of placing a spinner
04:05:174 (1) - same as [Hard]
Easy
00:56:174 (3) - new combo?
01:30:031 (3) - ^?
good map
00:24:889 (1) - you might not want to have this placed directly under (9) because its making (9) stack awkwardly
01:46:317 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think having jumps going into anitjumps are a good idea. (i'm not saying that you have to change them)
02:00:031 (3,4,5,6) -^
03:21:246 (6,7,1,2) - make spacing even here?
04:06:889 (3) - maybe move this from out under (2), it looks bad ingame
Hard
00:55:531 (9) - maybe place this in line with (7,8)
02:52:960 (6,7) - maybe like this?
04:05:174 (1) - maybe map this spinner and start a spinner 04:07:746 instead?
Normal
01:08:174 (5,6) - make the spacing the same as (1,2) and (3,4)?
01:37:746 (1) - kinda short for a normal diiff
04:01:746 (1) - map this section instead of placing a spinner
04:05:174 (1) - same as [Hard]
Easy
00:56:174 (3) - new combo?
01:30:031 (3) - ^?
good map
Topic Starter
fixed~
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
You can just use the artist's name in the artist field. Even if she's not an actual artist, you can still put whatever name she uses on NND, or even her actual name if you know it.
Wolf's Diff:
01:02:388 (3) - You could probably get away with flipping this horizontally. When it plays, the hand will continue to move toward the left of the screen, as the previous notes do, instead of randomly turning to the right.
02:33:674 - FFFFUUUU- 0.5 GAAAAAHH
02:37:531 - I'M GOING TO GOUGE OUT YOUR EYEBALLS AND SKULLFUCK YOU.
03:00:889 - You could probably add a 0.75 section here.
03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern D:. It's too close that it's too hard to read.
Hard:
00:20:710 - GAAAH 0.5 SECTION
Normal:
01:12:888 (1) - FFFFUUU-
01:16:317 (1) - YOUR ASS IS GRASS AND I'M THE WEEDWHACKER
01:26:603 (1) - I guess this is less gay, because you halved the spacing, but overall, I dislike this section having a 0.5
01:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just sounds akward when listening to the lyrics and what you've placed here.
02:40:317 (1) - . . . I guess it works.
Easy:
Cool.
I'm not against 0.5 sections, I just hate where they're placed most of the time.
You can just use the artist's name in the artist field. Even if she's not an actual artist, you can still put whatever name she uses on NND, or even her actual name if you know it
.Wolf's Diff:
01:02:388 (3) - You could probably get away with flipping this horizontally. When it plays, the hand will continue to move toward the left of the screen, as the previous notes do, instead of randomly turning to the right.
02:33:674 - FFFFUUUU- 0.5 GAAAAAHH
02:37:531 - I'M GOING TO GOUGE OUT YOUR EYEBALLS AND SKULLFUCK YOU.
03:00:889 - You could probably add a 0.75 section here.
03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern D:. It's too close that it's too hard to read.
Hard:
00:20:710 - GAAAH 0.5 SECTION
Normal:
01:12:888 (1) - FFFFUUU-
01:16:317 (1) - YOUR ASS IS GRASS AND I'M THE WEEDWHACKER
01:26:603 (1) - I guess this is less gay, because you halved the spacing, but overall, I dislike this section having a 0.5
01:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just sounds akward when listening to the lyrics and what you've placed here.
02:40:317 (1) - . . . I guess it works.
Easy:
Cool.
I'm not against 0.5 sections, I just hate where they're placed most of the time.
Topic Starter
fixed, I'm waiting her response about the artist's name.
Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
大階好像比較美
Topic Starter
她本人說的啊。KanaRin wrote:
Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
[Hard]
02:46:317 ~ 03:14:603 - use soft hitsound sound better imo >_<
[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)?
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;;
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2)
some jump look like random to me.. x_x;
other diffs look fine
02:46:317 ~ 03:14:603 - use soft hitsound sound better imo >_<
[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)?
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;;
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2)
some jump look like random to me.. x_x;
other diffs look fine
Thanks for your mod.orioncomet wrote:
[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing now combo(ed)
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2 Did some fix
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)? ^
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)And did some fix too
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed Am...It's not too hard to read. After all, it's a insane diff
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;; D:
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2) I just make is easier before= =
some jump look like random to me.. x_x; About this, I'll improve it in the future
Download: chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
General:
- Why does 'Wolf's Level 4' have a countdown and the other diffs not? Either remove it or add it to all the others.
- Only in aesopl's Easy was Kiai time used. Maybe use it for the other diffs too? Or remove it from aesopl's diff?
Wolf's Level 4:
Not gonna point out the stuff Ploy already pointed out. I pointed them all out and then saw that Ploy already did those.
How about tick rate 1 like all the other diffs?
I have to agree with Ploy that some jumps really feel a bit random.
Other than that, pretty neat mapset.
- Why does 'Wolf's Level 4' have a countdown and the other diffs not? Either remove it or add it to all the others.
- Only in aesopl's Easy was Kiai time used. Maybe use it for the other diffs too? Or remove it from aesopl's diff?
Wolf's Level 4:
Not gonna point out the stuff Ploy already pointed out. I pointed them all out and then saw that Ploy already did those.
How about tick rate 1 like all the other diffs?
I have to agree with Ploy that some jumps really feel a bit random.
Other than that, pretty neat mapset.
Topic Starter
ok all fixed...
agreed with ploy but ._.
agreed with ploy but ._.
[General]
Shouldnt the artist be the vocaloid, and the person that craeted the song with vocaloid in the tags instead?
Why am i not seeing the skip button at the end except on [Hard]?
[Storyboard]
Some storyboard elements have small unnecessary transparencies, Ex: 024.png http://puu.sh/10W6 see the transparencies at the left and right? here's a reversed color version which should make it easier to see http://puu.sh/10W8
[Wolf's Level 4]
01:17:603 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
01:40:103 (4) - Unnecessary extra slider tick is messing up this slider shape a bit
02:13:528 - This break might be a bit too long i recommend you shorten it.
02:53:174 (3) - Unrankable, This slider is hidden below previous slider.
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard
[Normal]
01:17:710 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
02:02:174 (1) - ^
02:43:853 (1) - ^
03:14:710 (1) - ^
03:28:960 (1) - ^
03:43:853 (1) - ^
[Easy]
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard
Edit: Forgot to mention, pretty nice mapset, i like it, feel free to call me for a recheck
Shouldnt the artist be the vocaloid, and the person that craeted the song with vocaloid in the tags instead?
Why am i not seeing the skip button at the end except on [Hard]?
[Storyboard]
Some storyboard elements have small unnecessary transparencies, Ex: 024.png http://puu.sh/10W6 see the transparencies at the left and right? here's a reversed color version which should make it easier to see http://puu.sh/10W8
[Wolf's Level 4]
01:17:603 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
01:40:103 (4) - Unnecessary extra slider tick is messing up this slider shape a bit
02:13:528 - This break might be a bit too long i recommend you shorten it.
02:53:174 (3) - Unrankable, This slider is hidden below previous slider.
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard
[Normal]
01:17:710 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
02:02:174 (1) - ^
02:43:853 (1) - ^
03:14:710 (1) - ^
03:28:960 (1) - ^
03:43:853 (1) - ^
[Easy]
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard
Edit: Forgot to mention, pretty nice mapset, i like it, feel free to call me for a recheck
Topic Starter
ok all fixed~
Recheck:
[General]
Source would either be "Vocaloid" or the composer of the vocaloid btw.
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:55:317 (4) - I was wondering why i couldnt see this slider... but it's directly below the previous one, no wonder i thought the previous one hadn't finished fading and this wasn't a slider, sorry but putting sliders directly below other sliders is unrankable.
[aesopl's Easy]
00:25:317 (1) - New combo, it's not being applied correctly because of spinner bug. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60533 see how it's not going 300k but 300?.
Looking better, forum PM me again when it's fixed.
[General]
Source would either be "Vocaloid" or the composer of the vocaloid btw.
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:55:317 (4) - I was wondering why i couldnt see this slider... but it's directly below the previous one, no wonder i thought the previous one hadn't finished fading and this wasn't a slider, sorry but putting sliders directly below other sliders is unrankable.
[aesopl's Easy]
00:25:317 (1) - New combo, it's not being applied correctly because of spinner bug. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60533 see how it's not going 300k but 300?.
Looking better, forum PM me again when it's fixed.
Topic Starter
okey fixed~
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.
No kudosu
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.
No kudosu
Thx for re-mod. How about now?Sakura Hana wrote:
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.
No kudosu
Download: Kagamine Rin - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu