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ok idk how to speak french
[insane]
00:02:970 (5,6) - i got the impression that this rhythm was a bit too dense here, since it's right at the intro i think a 3/2 slider would fit better. since you start following the left hand piano with the slider repeat and end, it's weird to then make 00:03:525 (6) - clickable since it's not much louder than the ones in the slider.
00:07:599 (1,2,3) - i think
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7405930 is a better rhythm since 00:08:340 - doesn't have a sound that should be clickable imo and 00:08:155 - has a new note in the synth
00:19:081 (5,6) -00:30:933 (5,6) - i think 5 should be a bigger jump than 6 since it has a strong drum hit and 6 has nothing
00:22:414 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7405955 i suggest this rhythm to follow the vocals around here since imo the drum is not doing anything particularly interesting and it's cooler to follow vocals.
00:34:081 - i think this one should have a stack on 00:34:266 (1) - head since you did that stack earlier (like 00:29:822 (1) -
00:36:673 (5,6,7) - this plays kind of awkwardly due to the wide angle with deceleration.
01:04:081 - this section should have same rhythm as 00:13:711 - all the other circles are pretty meaningless imo.
01:09:081 (4,5,6) - i don't think this wide angle is good since it's really awkward to play. (or the next one xd)
01:14:266 (1,2,3) - i don't think 3 is strong enough to warrant this awkward of a movement with an accelerating wide angle.
01:17:414 (1,2,3) - this is also quite awkward
01:20:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern looks kinda weird with 5 being neither a line nor a curve and instead just being a slight adjustment
01:28:711 (7,8) - this is yuuuuuge can you ctrl g 8?
01:30:377 (6,7,1) - wtf is this lmao
01:36:118 (6,7,1) - i highly advise against this kind of sudden movement, you never do this before and it's pretty weird movement to introduce this late into the map.
01:45:562 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - all the 3s are bad imo since they reduce emphasis on the 1 and blah blah and the rhythm should be the same as 13 seconds in as well.
[meep's hard]
00:08:155 (3,4) - d
00:13:711 (1,2,1) - i think these would be better as 1/2 circles with a 1/1 break in between, repeat slider seriously diminishes how important they sound imo.
00:45:933 (9,10) - not quite sure why you have an overmapped triple here lol
actually there's quite a few, i don't really agree with using them on hards but meh
00:54:451 (9,10,11) - this movement is pretty awkward for a hard imo
00:59:266 (4,1) - ctrl g this lol
also the wide angle into it is weird for me =/
01:16:303 (3,4,5) - this 5 isn't really strong enough to warrant an overmap imo
01:19:266 (2,3,4) - same here since the vocal is actually on 2 rather than 4
01:45:007 - the strongest part of the repeat slider is not clickable lol, please change this rhythm
i don't really like the extensive use of wide angles that your style creates. it seems fairly inconsistent to me, as if wide angles are treated the same way as sharp ones with regard to spacing. that's a stylistic difference between us, nothing objective of course. good luck!