loveFantasy wrote:

hi~

[Saber]
- maybe change slider tick rate to 0.5, tick point looks ugly in 1.5 beats slider(rate 1) but is ok on 3 beats slider(rate 0.5)
<00:20:721> (2) closer to (3), maybe x:184 y:216
<01:11:793> (5,6,7) these 2 finishes is really weird for me
<01:19:471> add finish here

all fixed

[Rin]
<00:21:435> add a note?
<00:23:578> confusing spacing, move (1)(3) 1 or 2 grid up (Grid level 3)
<00:28:221> add a note?
<00:33:221> want to hit something here, use note and let spinner start at 34:114 or 34:293 and end at 36:614 No
<00:57:685> add a note
<01:10:007> (3) remove finish, (4) add finish
<01:11:435> (3) remove whistle, (4) remove finish add whistle
<01:16:257> remove finish, add finish on 01:15:721 or 01:16:614

Everything else was fixed

[Sakura]
- you change what (vocal/instrument) you're following now and then, may cause confusion during gameplay
<00:30:007> weird hitsounds... (i know that you're following background instrument)
<00:45:364> (8) y:288
<00:46:436> (1) recommend larger spacing, try (1) x:264 y:144 (4) x:248 y:232?
<01:06:078> add a note, spinner start at 01:06:257
<01:10:543> remove finish
<01:15:900> (1) x:156 y:183 (5) x:229 y:161

Fixed

[Ilya]
- feels ok about this diff
<00:28:221> use hitsounds same as <00:16:793>?
Reiji-RJ doesn't want to fix it
star

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Naming the diffs after the characters... Why not... But for someone who didn't play the game nor watched the anime, these diff names make no sense at all. (and I personnally don't agree with your sorting) It would be a lot better to just give them normal names. Sorry, but i dont wanna change this names
Are you sure the title is "this illusion" ? The title of the opening in the anime is "disillusion"... In VN the title is "THIS ILLUSION" - http://vgmdb.net/album/1575
For all diffs: a more continuous decrescendo on the spinner at the end would sound awesome ok

Saber
Wow, that was a lot harder than I expected. The rhythms used are rather complicated, and the very low spacing makes it hard to make the difference between 3/2 and 1/1. There are also lots of spinners. And the difficulty settings are quite high... I like this, but reduced DS
00:21:435 (8) - This slider is partially hidden by a hitburst. It's not much, but if you can move it away, please do.moved

Rin
The hitsounds are quite low... fixed

Sakura
00:20:543 (1,2,3,4) - I understand why you did that, but these hitsounds are really too low.
00:47:864 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why you lowered the volume on these though. Besides, these claps don't sound very good to me.
01:05:364 (7) - This slider's repeat is hidden by hitbursts. It's playable (for reasons of symmetry...) but if you can move it away, please do.
all fixed

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Saber]
Lol, the way you make the arcs curve.

This is fine.
[Rin]
Also good.

[Sakura]
00:51:078 (8,9) - Lol, jump hard to read orz

But it's good.
[Ilya]
Also good. orz

Star~

Soul-less wrote:

As per request form mod queue~

[General]
- Would be nice if there's some fitting custom hitsounds...XD Maybe was added later
- (Very minor issue) System prompt me to save after resnapping all notes. I didnt find anything

[Saber]
- Slightly cramped placement. Just saying. >_<

[Rin]
- 01:01:435 (1) - I was expecting this beat at 01:01:257 due to the spinner. Probably just me though. fixed

[Sakura]
- 00:26:078 (3) - Don't think the clap's needed here, no?
- 00:36:078 (4) - Either stack this after 00:35:721 (3), or adjust the distance? Weird spacing >_<"
- 00:41:614 (1) - This clap seems extra...hmm.
- 00:41:971 (3,4) - I was expecting a clap at (3), not (4).
- 00:44:471 (4) - Don't think the clap's needed here, either?
- 00:45:543 (9) - Add a clap at the end of this slider?(Assuming you wanted a middle clap for each 4 beat previously, this would smoothen the hitsound transition)
- 01:17:150 (2) - Consider using a finish here.
All fixed

Aleks719 wrote:

По реквесту Айсбима.
Sakura
00:17:328 (1) - ну блин, это не сложно, постарайся выровнять сладеры по точкам для симметрии, выглядит куцо =\
Вроде бы мелочи, но хочется прям исправить
00:25:364 (1) - ^
00:45:543 (9) - сделай хитсаунды наоборот, клэп в начало, свист в конец
00:48:043 (2) - добавить хлопок
00:48:221 (3) - удалить хлопок в начале, добавить свисток
Специально нет хлопков в киай?... ну ок
Исправлено
Rin
01:02:150 (4) - добавить свисток
вообще без хлопков....? ну ок...
Изменил свисток
Saber
Тик рейт -1 Но у меня же 0,5 :о
00:41:614 (4) - финиш вместо свистка
00:43:043 (1) - в начале финиш вместо свистка
00:48:757 (1) - ^
00:53:043 (5) - финиш вместо свистка
00:57:686 (1) - добавить свисток
Все исправил

Илия тоже исправлена.
Ок, стар

Thunderstorm wrote:

Здрасьте) Привет :3

[Saber]

00:26:793 (1) - ИМХО, никакой необходимости в новом комбо Убрал

В целом норм

[Rin]

Slider tick rate 0,5 или 2, единичка здесь что смотрится, что слышится кривовато
01:06:078 - стартуй 1/4 позже, 1/4 растяни.

Все поправил
[Sakura]

Норм



В целом нормуль. Го ранк =) Спасибо, хотелось бы

Raging Bull wrote:

orz I said no WIP. This is my first graveyard map, and I paid no attention that it's in WIP Earlier it was in Pending.

General:
Rename Sakura to Ilya and Ilya to Sakura?
You said Sakura is the darkest and cruelest, so maybe Sakura would be better for insane?
So it would be
Easy - Saber
Normal - (Natsume)Rin :3
Hard - Ilya
Insane - Sakura
No. There are several reason for this. Because Ilya - guest diff, because Sakura, Saber and Rin - route-girls, etc.
Raise volume to 60%. So hard to hear hitsounds.
00:37:328 - Raise this timing section volume to 70% done
01:25:900 - Wow! This is the old one haha. Raise this volume to the new minimum, 5%. done

Saber
00:33:221 (1) - Extend spinner to the big white tick.done
Seems okay.

Rin
00:33:221 (1) - End spinner at 00:35:900 done
Sliders in this difficulty looks a lot better than easy. Maybe polish up sliders in easy. ok

Sakura
00:56:793 (6,7,8) - Space these properly. I don't see much reason why they should be stacked like that. It looks like a stream. done

Ilya
00:34:471 (1) - End spinner at 00:35:900 done


Really nothing much I could point out. Seems pretty well mapped. Thanks :3

Shiirn wrote:

While the video used certainly is from the Fate route, the song itself does not change throughout the story, the real name would be "NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION" - thus, remove "(Fate ver.)" from title.

00:10:185 - is technically the correct offset since this is where the actual clacking starts. Technicality though.
I highly disagree with your naming sense, but whatever.

Saber (easy?)
00:33:221 (1) - start on white tick?

Rin (normal?)
00:20:900 (3) - the vocals hit the previous red tick.

Sakura (hard?)
00:11:078 (1) - i dislike the finish
00:39:293 (4,4,4) - put claps on the end of these for epic hitsounding
01:15:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - supernazi - awkward pentagon

ilya (insane?)
00:48:578 - useless timing section
01:01:346 - why didn't you map anything in this area like you did on other diffs

Shiirn wrote:

While the video used certainly is from the Fate route, the song itself does not change throughout the story, the real name would be "NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION" - thus, remove "(Fate ver.)" from title.

00:10:185 - is technically the correct offset since this is where the actual clacking starts. Technicality though.What's the difference?
I highly disagree with your naming sense, but whatever.

Saber (easy?)
00:33:221 (1) - start on white tick? No

Rin (normal?)
00:20:900 (3) - the vocals hit the previous red tick. Hmm, I think that the vocals hit the white

Sakura (hard?)
00:11:078 (1) - i dislike the finish But I like it
00:39:293 (4,4,4) - put claps on the end of these for epic hitsounding Maybe, but it's too few and unecessary to pop a bubble
01:15:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - supernazi - awkward pentagon

ilya (insane?)
00:48:578 - useless timing section it's too few and unecessary to pop a bubble
01:01:346 - why didn't you map anything in this area like you did on other diffs It's guest diff

jericho2442 wrote:

well popped for spacing issues anyway

it's too few and unecessary to pop a bubble

no......just no, if you Agree with something in a mod then fix it, don't leave something you clearly agree would improve the map just because its bubbled, we dont like that at all -_-

remember that your timing may be right for when your mapping, but remember that the title menu cookie will be wrong due to you not timing the mp3 correctly from start of the first timing section you placed, i really do advise to think about timing the whole map from your first timing section for this reason

Saber
00:15:364 (2,3,4) - same timing, different spacing, kinda not good for a easy diff, make them the same
00:26:793 (2,3,4) - tiny i know but this loooks soooo ugly spacing wise, clean it up i say

Rin
00:27:328 (1,2,3,4) - spacing, the way the jump between (1,2) and (3,4) is totally different yet the same timing in a normal diff, the jump really does not suit and makes the player think the timing is different and also a unpredictable jump like this in a normal diff is not advise, please fix
00:33:221 - i advise to add a note here and make the spinner start at 00:33:400, this way it follows the vocals better because at the moment it feels as if your only playing the first sound of the last vocals when you should be playing both
01:10:186 (4,1,2) - why the jump here, it feels totally pointless, what reason song or map wise for this?

Sakura
(suggestion) 00:23:578 (5) - im really not keen on this being stacked under the slider end at this point, it really became blind imo
(suggestion) 00:48:578 (4) - i really suggest to get rid of this overlap, it really does not look right because its the only overlap like this and feels out of place
01:10:007 (2,1) - due to the way the stacking before this works the player expects this one to work the same, but it dont which makes it really unintuitive to play, i do advise to unstack this which then also flows better with the 01:11:436 (4,5) spacing
(suggestion) 01:12:686 (1,2) - again im not keen on this being stacked under the end, it just felt odd
i really suggest you to go through this diff and fix all the tiny and very ugly changes in spacing, yes its not a needed thing, but it really does make this map look fugly and for the sake of 10min it would make it look much better tbh

Ilya
00:50:721 (4,5) - uh....no.....extremely bad choice of spacing here, felt totally unintuitive and did not suit the pattern style you was using before it, since the other times you didnt use a antijump and suddenly now you do

IceBeam wrote:

ну посмотрим еще разок :3

поставь оффсет 185 всё же,там ведь первый бит в музыке
на игре это не отразится,но для порядка лучше исправить

на каждой сложности много анснапнутых объектов (которые находятся не на линиях)
их можно проверять через File --> Open AIMod
в окошке Snapping должно быть 0,если хоть один объект там - жми Resnap All Notes

[Saber]
00:17:328 (1) - финиш? :о
00:21:078 (3) - не уверен на счёт конца слайдера..раз уж приходиться выбирать между красным и белым,я бы выбрал 00:21:613 всё же,с ним хотя бы ритм по-лучше вроде
00:22:507 (1) - ^ этот бы я тоже сократил до белого
00:23:935 (3,4,5) - раз уж это изя,то вот такие моменты,где чередуется белый и красный тик - лучше реверс-слайдер делать

[Rin]
нормал всё же,может AR -1?

00:23:935 (1,2,3) - эти хлопки не очень подходят,заменить их на свистки может?
00:23:042 - финиш?
00:28:757 (1) - ^ сюда и убрать с 00:29:827 (2)?
00:49:828 (2) - опять же не нужен финиш
01:02:686 (1) - замени на свисток

[Sakura]
00:13:399 - добавить нотку?
00:27:328 (1) - поставь эту нотку ровно между (6) и (2)
00:51:078 (6) - хоть это и хард,но до этого в мапке не было прыжков,может убрать повтор? тогда как раз дистанция будет нормальная
00:57:686 (6,7) - стакнуть может их? :о
01:02:686 (1,2) - ^
01:11:792 (5) - подвинуть немного влево,чтоб симметричным слайдер был?
01:22:686 (5) - 2 грида налево (4 ур.сетки) чтоб паттерн симметричен был?

[Ilya]
как это модить?

вроде всё~
подправь оффсет и сделай реснап
остальное на твоё усмотрение,всё только саджестины

Sakura Hana wrote:

:<

[General]
As Shiirn pointed out earlier the correct stanza would start at offset 10184, this will fix the osu! cookie pulsing

[Rin]
00:13:934 (1,2) - You need to change these sliders somehow, as they are acting as stack 0 which is unrankable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158537

[Saber]
00:23:934 (3) - Fix slider reverse arrow direction http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158538
01:11:256 (5,6,7) - The direction change in here can be quite confusing for new players.