hapi - NTD03 ''26ROAD'' (Full Edit) · forum

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2010-12-19T05:47:58+00:00

Put "Seizure warning" in the description.

Easy time!
00:34:720 (1) Move spinner back 1 blue tick?
01:07:970 (5) Doesn't seem to mesh well with this area.
Normal is fun!
01:31:970 (3) I advise symmetry.

But really, at this point I believe it fully deserves a Star!

Takuya

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Takuya 2010-12-19T06:00:55+00:00

Fixed, Kudosu and thanks <3

Kurai

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Kurai 2010-12-19T15:14:25+00:00

[General]
- You have 4 differant .osb file in your map

SPOILER

Remove hapi - NTD03 26ROAD (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD#03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb
After that, fullsubmit.
- Your background should be 1024*768 and not 960*768 Resize it and fullsubmit
- The tag "hapi" and "NTD03" are useless, they already are in the Artist name and in the tiltle. Remove them in all difficulty

[Easy]
01:07:970 (5) - I think this kind of slider are bad in easy diffs.
01:14:637 (1) - Hide by the previous sliders
01:20:303 (2) - In my opinion, you shouldn't stack this note with (1)
01:27:970 (1) - Extend by 1/1 ?
01:39:970 (2) - Same as 01:07:970 (5)
Why this difficulty hasn't the same lenght as the others ? o_o

[Normal]
00:34:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later or earlier
01:02:137 (2) - It sounds off. Something like that would be better

01:06:637 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier
01:17:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:970 (1) - Remove new combo
01:41:303 (2) - Add new combo
01:58:637 (1,2) - Sounds weird o_o
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:42:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later

[Hard]
00:31:970 (1) - End it 1/2 later
00:45:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:637 (7) - New combo
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:41:137 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier

[Insane]
00:31:804 (6) - Don't stack it with the oter circle, It's very confusing.
01:18:803 (1) - Begin it 1/2 earlier
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970

Star

kriers

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kriers 2010-12-19T15:18:07+00:00

*star*

Takuya

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Takuya 2010-12-19T17:00:24+00:00

All fixed and thanks for the stars~

gogodr

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gogodr 2010-12-21T02:03:48+00:00

:O Love this song

Mesita

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Mesita 2010-12-22T04:18:58+00:00

epic! star!

Napoleona

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Napoleona 2010-12-22T04:27:56+00:00

cool map

rustbell

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rustbell 2010-12-22T04:34:19+00:00

o.o/~

Flute

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Flute 2010-12-22T05:05:50+00:00

my favourites maps xDD

dkun

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dkun 2010-12-22T05:45:12+00:00

~

❤ = ★

Hentai

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Hentai 2010-12-22T06:05:27+00:00

star~ :3

zozozofun

zozozofun 2010-12-22T09:44:02+00:00

stah

laport

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laport 2010-12-22T09:44:37+00:00

star

chocomint

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chocomint 2010-12-22T09:46:34+00:00

star

gto461013

gto461013 2010-12-22T09:54:18+00:00

great job

Shael_old

Shael_old 2010-12-22T09:54:39+00:00

star!

Nilsso

Nilsso 2010-12-22T10:02:21+00:00

starage

Danneh

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Danneh 2010-12-22T12:49:16+00:00

sweet, *star*

AndreasHD

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AndreasHD 2010-12-22T14:42:14+00:00

Very hard but awesome !
STAR

Coy

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Coy 2010-12-22T15:16:46+00:00

I really liked the insane

starred

poisonchan

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poisonchan 2010-12-22T15:31:59+00:00

Star *-* awesome map <3 I really liked the Insane diff ^-^~

giO-

giO- 2010-12-23T01:00:41+00:00

staaaaar

theMikeAG

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theMikeAG 2010-12-23T01:54:35+00:00

A poke'mon beatmap? With a strobe-light Pikachu in the background? This is going to need something a little different than I usually use... colors other than black!
Medium Suggestion. Serious Consideration.

Easy: 01:42:303 (3,1) - This transition doesn't look so great. Please fix. Other than that, no problems I can see.

Normal:00:28:970 (4) - Scoot this note to the right one space.
00:29:303 (1) - You might want to scoot this slider up one space and right two to make it match with 00:27:970 (1,2,3,4). Actually, I suggest that you move all of 00:29:303-00:34:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) at once so that you don't have to adjust anything else.
00:33:303 (2,3,4,5) - You might want to move these notes down one space to match with the slider.
01:04:970 (2) - You might want to scoot this note left one space. If you do, also adjust 01:05:303 (1,2).
01:34:637 (1) - Improper spacing?! Oh noes!
02:09:303 (3) - Scoot this slider down one space to stack on 02:07:970 (1). (Osu really fought with me on this one, but I was able to stack the slider with DS on, so it's proper spacing.) Afterwards, adjust 02:09:970 (4).

Hard:00:37:303 (1,2) - You might want to insert a note in between these two to match with 00:39:970 (1,2,3).
00:44:637 (7) - You might want to scoot this slider down one space to make it nice and neat.
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I've got to give you kudos for this pattern. This is awesome looking!
01:09:970 (1,2,3,4) - This line seems crooked. I suggest that you move (2) up and left one space.
01:56:970 (1) - Maybe move this right one space?
02:38:637 (1,2,3) - These sliders need to stack. Switch the grid level to 4 and they'll line up perfectly.
02:39:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - After you fix those sliders ^ you should scoot these notes over one space (size 3 grid).

Insane: I don't like modding Insanes.

Pika Piiii! Err... I mean starred.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2010-12-23T08:07:38+00:00

Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold

[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical

[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me

[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing

[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing

In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM..

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-12-23T13:02:08+00:00

Pokemon <3

[Insane]
0:26:637 (1) left 1 grid
0:29:803 (5) place at x:128, y:296
0:29:970 (1,2,3,4) stack the ending properly
1:06:607 (1) place like (3,5,7) looks better
1:09:803 (5,6,7,8) uneven spacing

[Hard]
0:37:470 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) up 2 grids
0:43:637 (3,4) spacing different from others
1:44:303 (3,4,5,6) (3,4) right 1 grid, (5) right +down 1 grid, (6) down 1 grid

[Normal] and [Easy]: fine spacing

star

Leafions_old

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Leafions_old 2010-12-23T14:36:34+00:00

<3<3<3<3<3<3 x3 automatic star

Takuya

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Takuya 2010-12-23T15:43:14+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold

[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical

[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me My tetris-like sliders ;_;
[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider My tetris-like sliders ;_;
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing

[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random They first were under the slider, but then I got suggested to move them cause they seemed confusing, I kinda don't find them bad
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing

In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM.. I heavily disagree, but's okay, I'm not trying to "catch'em all".

Fixed (adding hitsounds)

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-12-23T16:08:05+00:00

Catch'em all

looooooooool

Takuya

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Takuya 2010-12-23T17:36:26+00:00

Ahahahhah

Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2010-12-23T22:59:05+00:00

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)

- Storyboard:

01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303

- Easy:

.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?

- Normal:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?

- Hard:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 6, dai
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levalo

- Insane:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente

Sono piacevolmente sorpreso.
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!

Takuya

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Takuya 2010-12-24T00:37:42+00:00

Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)
- Storyboard:
01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303
- Easy:
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?
- Normal:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?
- Hard:
.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 6, dai
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levalo
- Insane:
.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente
Sono piacevolmente sorpreso.
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!

Fatto tutto

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-12-24T12:12:49+00:00

Non hai fatto "Full Submit" quando la hai aggiornata ;~;

Fammi sapere quando lo fai.

EDIT: everything fixed, fun map, promising mapper, my first bubble to you ^_^

RE-EDIT: you silly, don't update or the bubble will pop :3
Rebubbled

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-12-25T04:38:49+00:00

[Hard]
03:00:970 (3) - Should add a new combo here because it's hard to tell that it's different from the previous sliders.
03:04:303 (2) - Suggestion: Maybe add a finish here?
03:04:970 (4) - ^
03:05:636 (6) - ^

[Insane]
01:46:887 (2) - Why the slight pause? You should stick with 1/2 beats like you did with the rest of the song.
01:48:220 (2) - ^
Maybe do something like this?

SPOILER