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hapi - NTD03 ''26ROAD'' (Full Edit)

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Takuya
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Takuya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 26 dicembre 2010 at 2.47.21

Artist: hapi
Title: NTD03 ''26ROAD'' (Full Edit)
Source: Pokemon
Tags: pikachu road 26 remix gold silver
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4132kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,75 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (4,84 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 561 notes)
  4. Normal (4,09 stars, 199 notes)
Download: hapi - NTD03 ''26ROAD'' (Full Edit)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Picture by thegamejc.deviantart.com
Redownload if you got it before 24/12/2010
Seizure Warning!
Last edited by Takuya , edited 8 times in total.
Tchim
13 posts
Joined March 2009
Tchim
Nothing I can think of that should be fixed. Hope this gets ranked quickly, Star.
Last edited by Tchim , edited 2 times in total.
Valde
68 posts
Joined December 2009
Valde
Awesome StoryBoard, Great Map

Piccola mod.

Easy~
Forse dovresti abbassare un po' la velocità degli slider, da 1,00 a 0.80 circa..
01:42:303 (3,1) - Troppo lontani, un po' più vicini e son perfetti.

Hard~
00:59:637 (3,4) - Troppo vicine, non corrisponde al distance snap usato per il resto della map.
01:17:637 (2,3) - Troppo vicine.
01:18:304 (4,5) - Troppo vicine.
02:07:970 (1) - Cos'è? Bruttino da vedere, prova a cambiarlo un po'.
02:39:303 (3,1) - Troppo attaccati, non si vedono bene, dovresti spostarli un po'

Insane~
00:32:304 (3,4,7,8) - Sono un po' difficili da capire.
01:35:637 (6) - Spostalo di un quadrato su.
02:05:303 (1,5) - Il primo copre l'altro, difficili da individuare.
02:38:137 (10) - Cinque volte su cinque che l'ho giocata l'ho missato, impossibile da vedere.

Aggiungigi qualche kiai mode qua e là per renderla più bella.
Star~
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Takuya
1,691 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya
Fixed~
Sanji
98 posts
Joined September 2008
Sanji
good job :)
TuningSquall
41 posts
Joined January 2010
TuningSquall
Ovviamente Star :lol: :lol: :lol:
oWingz
89 posts
Joined March 2010
oWingz
Star :D
dlovan
79 posts
Joined October 2009
dlovan
great map really fast :D
eddieee
253 posts
Joined February 2010
eddieee
good! nice sb and awesome song! i like the streams~ -star-
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
epic sb :D
The Moo Prophet
1 post
Joined August 2008
The Moo Prophet
Very fun, Star.
Rucker
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
561 posts
Joined August 2009
Rucker
nice streams xD
Scane
Scane
awesome map, star~ ^_^
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
Awesome, yes =w=
jaystababe
3 posts
Joined April 2010
jaystababe
HNRGH
I wish I could map like this.
Tak, you are the shit.
Hope this gets ranked!
STAR!
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Put "Seizure warning" in the description.

Easy time!
00:34:720 (1) Move spinner back 1 blue tick?
01:07:970 (5) Doesn't seem to mesh well with this area.
Normal is fun!
01:31:970 (3) I advise symmetry.

But really, at this point I believe it fully deserves a Star!
Takuya
1,691 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya
Fixed, Kudosu and thanks <3
Kurai
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Kurai
[General]
- You have 4 differant .osb file in your map
SPOILER
Remove hapi - NTD03 26ROAD (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD#03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb
After that, fullsubmit.
- Your background should be 1024*768 and not 960*768 Resize it and fullsubmit
- The tag "hapi" and "NTD03" are useless, they already are in the Artist name and in the tiltle. Remove them in all difficulty

[Easy]
01:07:970 (5) - I think this kind of slider are bad in easy diffs.
01:14:637 (1) - Hide by the previous sliders
01:20:303 (2) - In my opinion, you shouldn't stack this note with (1)
01:27:970 (1) - Extend by 1/1 ?
01:39:970 (2) - Same as 01:07:970 (5)
Why this difficulty hasn't the same lenght as the others ? o_o

[Normal]
00:34:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later or earlier
01:02:137 (2) - It sounds off. Something like that would be better

01:06:637 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier
01:17:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:970 (1) - Remove new combo
01:41:303 (2) - Add new combo
01:58:637 (1,2) - Sounds weird o_o
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:42:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later

[Hard]
00:31:970 (1) - End it 1/2 later
00:45:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:637 (7) - New combo
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:41:137 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier

[Insane]
00:31:804 (6) - Don't stack it with the oter circle, It's very confusing.
01:18:803 (1) - Begin it 1/2 earlier
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970

Star
kriers
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Joined April 2010
kriers
*star*
Takuya
1,691 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya
All fixed and thanks for the stars~
gogodr
31 posts
Joined August 2009
gogodr
:O Love this song
Mesita
221 posts
Joined November 2009
Mesita
epic! star!
Napoleona
27 posts
Joined March 2010
Napoleona
cool map :)
rustbell
734 posts
Joined January 2010
rustbell
o.o/~
Flute
68 posts
Joined December 2009
Flute
my favourites maps xDD
dkun
osu! Alumni
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dkun
~

❤ = ★
:)
Hentai
14 posts
Joined May 2010
Hentai
star~ :3
zozozofun
zozozofun
stah
laport
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Joined June 2010
laport
star 8-)
chocomint
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
202 posts
Joined June 2009
chocomint
star :D
gto461013
gto461013
great job
Shael_old
Shael_old
star!
Nilsso
Nilsso
starage
Danneh
157 posts
Joined April 2010
Danneh
sweet, *star*
AndreasHD
478 posts
Joined June 2010
AndreasHD
Very hard but awesome !
STAR :!: :!:
Coy
70 posts
Joined August 2009
Coy
I really liked the insane

starred
poisonchan
257 posts
Joined January 2010
poisonchan
Star *-* awesome map <3 I really liked the Insane diff ^-^~
giO-
giO-
staaaaar :lol:
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
A poke'mon beatmap? With a strobe-light Pikachu in the background? This is going to need something a little different than I usually use... colors other than black!
Medium Suggestion. Serious Consideration.

Easy: 01:42:303 (3,1) - This transition doesn't look so great. Please fix. Other than that, no problems I can see.

Normal:00:28:970 (4) - Scoot this note to the right one space.
00:29:303 (1) - You might want to scoot this slider up one space and right two to make it match with 00:27:970 (1,2,3,4). Actually, I suggest that you move all of 00:29:303-00:34:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) at once so that you don't have to adjust anything else.
00:33:303 (2,3,4,5) - You might want to move these notes down one space to match with the slider.
01:04:970 (2) - You might want to scoot this note left one space. If you do, also adjust 01:05:303 (1,2).
01:34:637 (1) - Improper spacing?! Oh noes!
02:09:303 (3) - Scoot this slider down one space to stack on 02:07:970 (1). (Osu really fought with me on this one, but I was able to stack the slider with DS on, so it's proper spacing.) Afterwards, adjust 02:09:970 (4).

Hard:00:37:303 (1,2) - You might want to insert a note in between these two to match with 00:39:970 (1,2,3).
00:44:637 (7) - You might want to scoot this slider down one space to make it nice and neat.
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I've got to give you kudos for this pattern. This is awesome looking!
01:09:970 (1,2,3,4) - This line seems crooked. I suggest that you move (2) up and left one space.
01:56:970 (1) - Maybe move this right one space?
02:38:637 (1,2,3) - These sliders need to stack. Switch the grid level to 4 and they'll line up perfectly.
02:39:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - After you fix those sliders ^ you should scoot these notes over one space (size 3 grid).

Insane: I don't like modding Insanes. :o

Pika Piiii! Err... I mean starred. :?
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold

[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical

[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me

[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing

[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing


In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM..
wmfchris
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wmfchris
Pokemon <3

[Insane]
0:26:637 (1) left 1 grid
0:29:803 (5) place at x:128, y:296
0:29:970 (1,2,3,4) stack the ending properly
1:06:607 (1) place like (3,5,7) looks better
1:09:803 (5,6,7,8) uneven spacing

[Hard]
0:37:470 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) up 2 grids
0:43:637 (3,4) spacing different from others
1:44:303 (3,4,5,6) (3,4) right 1 grid, (5) right +down 1 grid, (6) down 1 grid

[Normal] and [Easy]: fine spacing

star
Leafions_old
2 posts
Joined October 2010
Leafions_old
<3<3<3<3<3<3 x3 automatic star
Takuya
1,691 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya

kanpakyin wrote:

Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold

[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical

[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me My tetris-like sliders ;_;
[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider My tetris-like sliders ;_;
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing

[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random They first were under the slider, but then I got suggested to move them cause they seemed confusing, I kinda don't find them bad
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing


In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM.. I heavily disagree, but's okay, I'm not trying to "catch'em all".
Fixed (adding hitsounds)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
Catch'em all

looooooooool
Takuya
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Topic Starter
Takuya
Ahahahhah :)
Card N'FoRcE
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4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)
- Storyboard:
  • 01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?
- Normal:

  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?
- Hard:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 6, dai :P
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
    Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levalo :P
- Insane:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
    01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:
    SPOILER
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente
Sono piacevolmente sorpreso.
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!
Takuya
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)
- Storyboard:
  • 01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?
- Normal:

  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?
- Hard:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 6, dai :P
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
    Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levalo :P
- Insane:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
    00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
    01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:
    SPOILER
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente
Sono piacevolmente sorpreso.
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!
Fatto tutto :D
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Non hai fatto "Full Submit" quando la hai aggiornata ;~;

Fammi sapere quando lo fai.

EDIT: everything fixed, fun map, promising mapper, my first bubble to you ^_^

RE-EDIT: you silly, don't update or the bubble will pop :3
Rebubbled
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Hard]
03:00:970 (3) - Should add a new combo here because it's hard to tell that it's different from the previous sliders.
03:04:303 (2) - Suggestion: Maybe add a finish here?
03:04:970 (4) - ^
03:05:636 (6) - ^

[Insane]
01:46:887 (2) - Why the slight pause? You should stick with 1/2 beats like you did with the rest of the song.
01:48:220 (2) - ^
Maybe do something like this?
SPOILER
Takuya
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takuya
Fixed
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