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Hatsune Miku - Star Story [Osu|Taiko]

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Dotsu
Hi~

我的建议:

[General]


  • 加个spinner-approachcircle.png
[Easy]


  • 00:55:050 (1): Finish
    00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手
    01:08:764 (1,2): ^
    01:27:192 (1): 重复+1
    02:08:335 (1): ^
    02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉
[kino’s Normal]


  • 01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
    01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle
    01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
    02:06:621 (4): ^
    02:20:335 (4): ^
[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊

  • 00:30:193 (3): 开头加Whistle
    00:55:050 (4): 这里加Finish
    01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近
    01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下 例如到01:36:330
    01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…
    02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍 在这里加个Circle
    02:28:050 (4): Whistle

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

impossiblexu wrote:

[Easy]


  • 00:55:050 (1): Finish Fix
    00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手Fix
    01:08:764 (1,2): ^Fix
    01:27:192 (1): 重复+1Fix
    02:08:335 (1): ^Fix
    02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉Fix

[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊 Stress..這歌太難就不好玩了0.0

  • 00:30:193 (3): 开头加WhistleFix
    00:55:050 (4): 这里加FinishFix
    01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近Fix
    01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下 例如到01:36:330這個...我覺得還可以..
    01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…加了幾個可行的連打
    02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍 在这里加个CircleFix
    02:28:050 (4): WhistleFix

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~ Thanks>_<
Thanks a lot
kodomonoyume

yangzd88 wrote:

[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大 縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...
fixed the size and space.
but i think it's better to put them in the break >.>
thank you~

also changed some other things.
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no kds for this.
Krisom
Add "Kz" to source. If not, add him to tags. Also, add to tags "livetune"

Also, consider using the oficial artwork made for this song as the background.
Oficial Artwork here:

(don't kudosu)
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返,6的去掉
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解,明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目(或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap?
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉,5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle?(和前面的音调对比)
00:49:907 (2) - ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音?

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orz
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了?
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点
。。。整体感觉略挤orz

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗 Fix

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返,6的去掉 Fix
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解,明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目(或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap?Fix
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉,5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)Fix

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle?(和前面的音调对比)Fix
00:49:907 (2) - ^Fix
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistleFix
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistleFix
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistleFix
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音?留給mapper自己修改

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orzFix
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了?Fix
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了Fix
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点Fix
。。。整体感觉略挤orzLol

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概
謝謝
kioukiou
基本上沒什麼問題

把各難度的Enable countdown取消掉吧,這次不挑出來,後面幾個BAT/MAT還是可能會叫你關掉的

再來就是有辦法再找一個好一點的mp3嗎?

因為音樂有點小聲,我要把音響開很大聲才聽得清楚 .. :

先star.
kino77

impossiblexu wrote:

[kino’s Normal]


  • 01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
    01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle Fixed~
    01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
    02:06:621 (4): ^
    02:20:335 (4): ^
谢谢~~ :)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle?(和前面的音调对比) 感觉不是重音就没改了
00:49:907 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音? Fixed~
谢谢咯~~ :)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
Louis Cyphre
wait wait. Where is Insane? =/
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Louis Cyphre wrote:

wait wait. Where is Insane? =/
Sorry of this...I'm not decide to map a insane of this song...
Because this song is not appropriate to map a Insane..This song is too soft..
Sure
Hi~ :)


[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection.


[kino]
Here is no Tags! D:
01:36:625 (1) - Add new combo at this spinner because of the bug.
02:58:911 (1) - ^
Nice map.


[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines.
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal?
Also nice~


Sorry, I can't mod taiko. >_<
Anyway the map is very good. I enjoyed it. :D
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~ :)

[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection. Resnap it :D

[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines. Fix
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal? Fix
Thanks
jericho2442
add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your pattern
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow ;)
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcombo
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far away
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice though

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 things

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i say

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway ;)
Pokie
irc modded..
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

jericho2442 wrote:

add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder Fix

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your patternFix
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow ;)Fix
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcomboFix
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far awayFix
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)Fix
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice thoughFix

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 thingsFix

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same Fix
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i sayFix

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway ;)
Thanks=v=
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

我是来骗KDS的


Hard

01:22:911 (1) - 换个方向(ctrl+j)?捅来捅去的……(喂)
01:34:911 (2) - 这个我觉得你可以换成3个circle了
02:12:197 (1,2,3,4) - 12叠,34叠._. 我感觉这样舒服点,整拍的时候鼠标移动


kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大,感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好?从1到02:30:197


Easy

还好


想要星星就说嘛 8-)
Kotone
咔嚓咔嚓~

Easy
00:17:768(3) - New combo?
00:19:483(1) - remove new combo
00:55:483 - 這note調大聲點吧...
01:32:768 - 不對稱大丈夫?
02:17:340 - 7 combo 大丈夫?

kino's Normal
AR-1 better

mod的時候被wmf催SB 所以沒看得很清楚 D:
SB很美Map不錯 就醬
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>sandpig Fix some
>karenying Fix

Thanks a lot
kino77

Sandpig wrote:

kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大,感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好?从1到02:30:197
No change shall be done~ :D
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Easy]
Wow. The first easy difficulty that i love to play *.*

[kino's Normal]
  1. 01:07:483 (5) - Well here it looks weird. I would do Stack Leniency -1, but hmm. Your choice :3
[Hard]
Cuuuuute *__*

[Relaxing Taiko~]
I'm not an expert here, but looks well made.

I have nothing to complain hmm. This map is awesome. And so cuuute x3
kino77

ShaggoN wrote:

[kino's Normal]
  1. 01:07:483 (5) - Well here it looks weird. I would do Stack Leniency -1, but hmm. Your choice :3
Sure~ looks better now~
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
Lilac
应该是 "Star Story", 不是 "Star story" 吧? 我不知道。

[kino's Normal]

00:10:911 (1,2,3,4) - 你应当知道这不对称。 我不知道你是不是故意这样的。

Blah, typing in Chinese is hard. I really want to bubble this, I just need confirmation about the title.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Lilac wrote:

应该是 "Star Story", 不是 "Star story" 吧? 我不知道。
...謝謝..真的是Star Story..
kino77

Lilac wrote:

应该是 "Star Story", 不是 "Star story" 吧? 我不知道。

[kino's Normal]

00:10:911 (1,2,3,4) - 你应当知道这不对称。 我不知道你是不是故意这样的。

Blah, typing in Chinese is hard. I really want to bubble this, I just need confirmation about the title.
Ooooops,没注意到呢> <
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
UPDATE ;)
Lilac
那就这。
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Lilac wrote:

那就这。
Thanks..
DeadAlready
late star~ xD
Alace
before ranking
we changed some skin elements (300 100 50 )
i think those elements are more readable

ranked
kodomonoyume
8-)
those
Fun map =P
eveless
Congrats
yongtw123
Congrats~
kino77
Cool~
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