Hatsune Miku - Star Story [Osu|Taiko] · forum

kodomonoyume

Joined June 2009

kodomonoyume 2010-12-14T11:44:04+00:00

lyrics done.

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add the code to all diffs except taiko.
and in [kino's Normal], change "lyrics30.png" to "lyrics31.png".

maybe i'll add something later.

ps. don't forget to add "kino77" to tags

Miu Matsuoka

662 posts

Joined May 2008

Miu Matsuoka 2010-12-14T11:58:40+00:00

hi :3 let me help u do some modding

[General]
Great map~ but it needs a some hitsound editing, coz' the beatmap is a bit boring without good hitsounds~

[Timing]
BPM: 140.000 (is ok~)
Offset: 180

[Easy]
Change Circle Size to largest?
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

[kino's Normal]
The Overall Difficulty can be smaller (by 2)
1:54:629 (2-5) A long stream is not suitable for [Normal] players, deleting (5) may be a good idea~
2:02:722 (5-8) ^ (delete 8?)

[Hard]
Well-arranged notes

0:00:201 I recommend you to arrange the combos in this way:

SPOILER

1:21:822 (2,3) Is it a bit surprising with the sudden jump?
1:32:751 (7,8,9) distance problem?
1:56:322 I suggest you to add one note here
2:52:618 (4,5) put them on the place where the slider starts
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

kds plz~

Lizzehb

645 posts

Joined March 2010

Lizzehb 2010-12-15T05:15:17+00:00

Easy is perfect.

kino's Normal~

01:14:129 - (5,6,7) Make these note into a repeating slider. they look to clumped for a normal.
01:54:629 - (2,3,4,5) ^
02:02:772 - (5,6,7,8) ^
02:28:915 - (2) Move one grid left.

Hard is fine.

And I don't mod taiko.

Star~

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2010-12-15T10:31:19+00:00

hEYOO! Star!

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-16T12:50:05+00:00

Hope it will be N

Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-16T14:58:56+00:00

cheukhin1985 wrote:
[Timing]
BPM: 140.000 (is ok~)
Offset: 180
[Easy]
Change Circle Size to largest? Sorry..no
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]
>_>

[Hard]
Well-arranged notes
0:00:201 I recommend you to arrange the combos in this way:
SPOILER
1:21:822 (2,3) Is it a bit surprising with the sudden jump?So..I add a new combo here
1:32:751 (7,8,9) distance problem? It is a Jump
1:56:322 I suggest you to add one note here
2:52:618 (4,5) put them on the place where the slider starts
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]

kds plz~

Thanks

yongtw123

1,028 posts

Joined April 2009

yongtw123 2010-12-16T16:23:45+00:00

IRC modded. Below are excerpts.

Overall:
Except for kino's diff, try to use more soft-finish (you can use kino's diff as a reference)
Offset too late. You've said 180.

[Easy]
01:58:486 (1) - no clap on reverse

[kino's Normal]
Excellent

]Hard]
No technical error, but I have some suggestions on style.

The triplets at the beginning of song don't feel right to me.
00:14:108 (2,3,4) / 00:23:322 (4,5,6)
Personally I'd attempt triplets during kiai times or other sections of faster beats.

Some jumps are, IMO, too sudden and may not fit the music. Examples:
01:32:751 (1,2,3) - spacing a bit too large
02:28:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd arrange these stacks using accelerated spacing
02:49:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - not optimal, but I like the pattern though

00:27:608 (1) - make volume a bit smaller (to make soft-finish not so obtrusive)
01:07:894 (1) - I'd just use a regular triplet and combine with the 4 after to make a 7-plet
01:36:608 (1) - the timing section near the end of spinner cuts off the volume too suddenly. I suggest gradual decrease of volume.

Good song and nice maps.
Star!

subarasikibuta

559 posts

Joined May 2009

subarasikibuta 2010-12-16T18:13:49+00:00

miku的歌最喜欢这首了～加油～

kodomonoyume

243 posts

Joined June 2009

kodomonoyume 2010-12-17T05:41:40+00:00

some effects added.

SPOILER

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 F,0,151165,152772,1,0

sometimes sb load is more than 5, i'll deal with it later, maybe.

p.s. in [kino's Normal], kiai lines should be put on notes, and please delete the bookmarks.

Last edited by kodomonoyume 2010-12-20T12:00:50+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

eveless

2,080 posts

Joined April 2009

eveless 2010-12-17T05:43:17+00:00

[Hard]
大方向上没什么问题要讲也就一些细节
sliderslide的声音在开始略有点吵考虑要不要用sliderslide.wav静音或者绿线再压一点

00:02:01(T) 这个绿线可以没必要可以直接在第一根红线上改音量
00:03:629 (1,2,3,4) - 间距? 如果是刻意的越来越小建议明显一点如果不是摆再好看点
00:07:058 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:08:772 (5,6,7) - 567之间间距不等
00:23:343 (4,5,6,7) - 我实在不喜欢白线起手的三连还是觉得红线起手舒服
00:54:629 (4) - slider再往下拉点? 挨太近显太挤 01:20:772 (1) 02:16:486 (2) 02:36:201 (3) 同
01:07:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边不太适合建议删掉01:08:451 (4)
01:10:058 (2,3) - 对齐1或者斜更明显点
01:32:772 (1,2,3) - 这个跳有点不太适合虽然能打
01:51:843 (3) - 间距突然变小
02:28:915 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这串蛮难点到
02:56:772 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这串跳...突然就不说了可以摆更好看点o.o

其他难度没什么要讲>_>

yongtw123

1,028 posts

Joined April 2009

yongtw123 2010-12-17T09:24:23+00:00

eveless wrote:
考虑要不要用sliderslide.wav静音

隨然目前沒定論
但是安全起見最好不要把sliderslide/slidertick靜音...

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2010-12-17T14:31:09+00:00

[Relax taiko]
skip :/

[Hard]
0:09:608 (7) down 1 grid
0:22:680 (2) right 1 grid lv4
1:30:394 (2,3) (2) down 2 grids, (3) left 1 grid
1:51:180 (2,3,4) uneven spacing
1:54:822 (3) right 1 grid

[Kino's normal]
0:12:180 (3,4,1...) up 1 grid
0:20:751 (2) left 1 grid
1:04:465 (4) left 1 grid
1:23:751 (3,4) up 1 grid
2:06:608 (4,5,1) left 1 grid

star~

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-18T02:41:11+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Kino's normal]
0:12:180 (3,4,1...) up 1 grid 0 0?
0:20:751 (2) left 1 grid
1:04:465 (4) left 1 grid
1:23:751 (3,4) up 1 grid
2:06:608 (4,5,1) left 1 grid

Other fixed~
Thanks~

Edit:I forgot this~
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-12-18T05:06:06+00:00

[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...

[Easy]
00:01:894 (2) - 1 grid up
00:05:322 (1) - ^
00:08:322 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:751 (2) - New combo
01:13:037 (5,1,2,3) - 點解(1,2,3)不摆成弧线?整個沒有成正方形= =
02:17:322 (1) -

SPOILER

02:19:037 (3) - ^
02:30:608 (4) - ^

[moekino]
00:18:179 (6) - 摆到这里?

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:09:394 (6) - 這個circle的位置好怪異...好像從00:10:465 (1)這開始1/2拍..delete it?
00:36:608 (2) - 將佢反個方向會跳少少(喂
00:40:465 (7) - 擺成直線..好扭曲stress
00:59:965 (8) - 好像有點不對稱?
01:15:179 (4) - 1 grids left
01:20:537 (1,2,3) - 這個連打好嚇人..刪左2?
01:30:394 (2) - 位置怪怪的..關掉gird snap修一修會好看點..
01:32:751 (7) -與01:31:037 (4)相對擺成直線
02:13:251 - 加一個circle..好似有點難讀
02:35:965 (2,3) -

SPOILER

[Taiko]
唔識mod太鼓..sry

~good

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-18T08:08:34+00:00

>yangzd88

Fix some...Thanks>"<

aabc271

osu! Alumni

1,334 posts

Joined August 2009

aabc271 2010-12-18T15:22:02+00:00

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by kanpakyin

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Relax Taiko~]

I prefer diff name [Relaxing Taiko~] because Relax is a verb. Not really an issue though ~

Try offset 193 ? By using 25% playback rate, i can hear that 180 is too early. Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset ~

00:13:894 ( 38 ) Use big note ?

00:27:608 ( 78 ) ^

00:55:037 ( 43 ) ^

01:08:751 ( 1 ) ^

01:22:465 ( 42 ) ^

02:44:751 ( 152 ) ^

00:58:144 ( 52 ) Delete this note ?

No errors found, nice job ~

I think this song is too relaxing, so it is not very suitable for a Taiko diff
But anyway, the current Taiko diff is fine ~
Star and good luck~

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-19T03:31:44+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
[moekino]=///=
00:18:179 (6) - 摆到这里?
SPOILER
[attachment=1:f487a]2.png[/attachment:f487a]
可素..可素..这样会挡道后面的1也> <

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-12-19T05:37:30+00:00

Hi~

我的建议:

[General]

加个spinner-approachcircle.png

[Easy]

00:55:050 (1): Finish
00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手
01:08:764 (1,2): ^
01:27:192 (1): 重复+1
02:08:335 (1): ^
02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉

[kino’s Normal]

01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle
01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
02:06:621 (4): ^
02:20:335 (4): ^

[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊

00:30:193 (3): 开头加Whistle
00:55:050 (4): 这里加Finish
01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近
01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下例如到01:36:330
01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…
02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍在这里加个Circle
02:28:050 (4): Whistle

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-19T09:45:00+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
[Easy]

00:55:050 (1): Finish Fix
00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手Fix
01:08:764 (1,2): ^Fix
01:27:192 (1): 重复+1Fix
02:08:335 (1): ^Fix
02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉Fix

[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊 Stress..這歌太難就不好玩了0.0

00:30:193 (3): 开头加WhistleFix
00:55:050 (4): 这里加FinishFix
01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近Fix
01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下例如到01:36:330這個...我覺得還可以..
01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…加了幾個可行的連打
02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍在这里加个CircleFix
02:28:050 (4): WhistleFix

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~ Thanks>_<

Thanks a lot

kodomonoyume

243 posts

Joined June 2009

kodomonoyume 2010-12-19T11:01:13+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...

fixed the size and space.
but i think it's better to put them in the break >.>
thank you~

also changed some other things.

SPOILER

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no kds for this.

Last edited by kodomonoyume 2010-12-20T12:00:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Krisom

osu! Alumni

2,867 posts

Joined April 2009

Krisom 2010-12-19T20:53:23+00:00

Add "Kz" to source. If not, add him to tags. Also, add to tags "livetune"

Also, consider using the oficial artwork made for this song as the background.
Oficial Artwork here:

SPOILER

(don't kudosu)

NatsumeRin

osu! Alumni

4,032 posts

Joined August 2009

NatsumeRin 2010-12-20T11:46:12+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返，6的去掉
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解，明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目（或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap？
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉，5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比）
00:49:907 (2) - ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orz
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了？
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点
。。。整体感觉略挤orz

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-20T12:49:10+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗 Fix

[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返，6的去掉 Fix
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解，明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目（或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap？Fix
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉，5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)Fix

[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比）Fix
00:49:907 (2) - ^Fix
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistleFix
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistleFix
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistleFix
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？留給mapper自己修改

[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orzFix
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了？Fix
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了Fix
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点Fix
。。。整体感觉略挤orzLol

[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概

謝謝

kioukiou

774 posts

Joined June 2008

kioukiou 2010-12-20T15:19:03+00:00

基本上沒什麼問題

把各難度的Enable countdown取消掉吧,這次不挑出來,後面幾個BAT/MAT還是可能會叫你關掉的

再來就是有辦法再找一個好一點的mp3嗎?

因為音樂有點小聲,我要把音響開很大聲才聽得清楚 .. :

先star.

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-21T07:33:16+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
[kino’s Normal]

01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
02:06:621 (4): ^
02:20:335 (4): ^

谢谢~~

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle？（和前面的音调对比）感觉不是重音就没改了
00:49:907 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音？ Fixed~

谢谢咯~~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu

Louis Cyphre

2,684 posts

Joined October 2009

Louis Cyphre 2010-12-21T12:10:26+00:00

wait wait. Where is Insane? =/

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-21T12:37:29+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
wait wait. Where is Insane? =/

Sorry of this...I'm not decide to map a insane of this song...
Because this song is not appropriate to map a Insane..This song is too soft..

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-12-21T15:10:41+00:00

Hi~

[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection.

[kino]
Here is no Tags! D:
01:36:625 (1) - Add new combo at this spinner because of the bug.
02:58:911 (1) - ^
Nice map.

[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines.
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal?
Also nice~

Sorry, I can't mod taiko. >_<
Anyway the map is very good. I enjoyed it.

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-21T16:52:10+00:00

ykcarrot wrote:
Hi~

[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection. Resnap it

[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines. Fix
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal? Fix

Thanks

jericho2442

osu! Alumni

1,918 posts

Joined March 2009

jericho2442 2010-12-22T11:39:55+00:00

add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your pattern
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow

(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcombo
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far away
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice though

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 things

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i say

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway

Pokie

osu! Alumni

2,630 posts

Joined December 2009

Pokie 2010-12-22T13:56:31+00:00

irc modded..

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

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Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-23T07:12:55+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder Fix

Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your patternFix
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow Fix
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcomboFix
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far awayFix
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)Fix
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice thoughFix

Hard

at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 thingsFix

1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice

01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same Fix
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i sayFix

------------------------------------
nice maps anyway

Thanks=v=

Sandpig

847 posts

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2010-12-25T02:59:30+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

我是来骗KDS的

Hard

01:22:911 (1) - 换个方向（ctrl+j）？捅来捅去的……（喂）
01:34:911 (2) - 这个我觉得你可以换成3个circle了
02:12:197 (1,2,3,4) - 12叠，34叠._. 我感觉这样舒服点，整拍的时候鼠标移动

kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大，感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好？从1到02:30:197

Easy

还好

想要星星就说嘛

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2010-12-25T05:09:56+00:00

咔嚓咔嚓~

Easy
00:17:768(3) - New combo?
00:19:483(1) - remove new combo
00:55:483 - 這note調大聲點吧...
01:32:768 - 不對稱大丈夫?
02:17:340 - 7 combo 大丈夫?

kino's Normal
AR-1 better

mod的時候被wmf催SB 所以沒看得很清楚 D:
SB很美Map不錯就醬

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2010-12-25T05:37:17+00:00

>sandpig Fix some
>karenying Fix

Thanks a lot

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-26T08:11:40+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
kino's Normal

01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大，感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好？从1到02:30:197

No change shall be done~

ShaggoN

689 posts

Joined September 2008

ShaggoN 2010-12-26T23:41:01+00:00

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Easy]
Wow. The first easy difficulty that i love to play *.*

[kino's Normal]

01:07:483 (5) - Well here it looks weird. I would do Stack Leniency -1, but hmm. Your choice :3

[Hard]
Cuuuuute *__*

[Relaxing Taiko~]
I'm not an expert here, but looks well made.

I have nothing to complain hmm. This map is awesome. And so cuuute x3

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-12-27T02:17:58+00:00

ShaggoN wrote:
[kino's Normal]
01:07:483 (5) - Well here it looks weird. I would do Stack Leniency -1, but hmm. Your choice :3

Sure~ looks better now~
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu

Lilac

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Lilac 2010-12-27T07:21:30+00:00

应该是 "Star Story"，不是 "Star story" 吧？我不知道。

[kino's Normal]

00:10:911 (1,2,3,4) - 你应当知道这不对称。我不知道你是不是故意这样的。

Blah, typing in Chinese is hard. I really want to bubble this, I just need confirmation about the title.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2010-12-27T07:53:04+00:00

Lilac wrote:
应该是 "Star Story"，不是 "Star story" 吧？我不知道。

...謝謝..真的是Star Story..

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kino77 2010-12-27T14:03:26+00:00

Lilac wrote:
应该是 "Star Story"，不是 "Star story" 吧？我不知道。

[kino's Normal]

00:10:911 (1,2,3,4) - 你应当知道这不对称。我不知道你是不是故意这样的。

Blah, typing in Chinese is hard. I really want to bubble this, I just need confirmation about the title.

Ooooops,没注意到呢> <
Download: Hatsune Miku - Star story (kanpakyin) [kino's Normal].osu

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2010-12-27T17:10:18+00:00

UPDATE

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