cheukhin1985 wrote:
[Timing]
BPM: 140.000 (is ok~)
Offset: 180
[Easy]
Change Circle Size to largest? Sorry..no
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]
>_>
[Hard]
Well-arranged notes
0:00:201 I recommend you to arrange the combos in this way:
1:21:822 (2,3) Is it a bit surprising with the sudden jump?So..I add a new combo here
1:32:751 (7,8,9) distance problem? It is a Jump
1:56:322 I suggest you to add one note here
2:52:618 (4,5) put them on the place where the slider starts
2:59:751 What are those green lines for? If they are for volume changing, please make the gaps between them balance, like [kino's Normal]
kds plz~
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隨然目前沒定論eveless wrote:
考虑要不要用sliderslide.wav静音
Other fixed~wmfchris wrote:
[Kino's normal]
0:12:180 (3,4,1...) up 1 grid 0 0?
0:20:751 (2) left 1 grid
1:04:465 (4) left 1 grid
1:23:751 (3,4) up 1 grid
2:06:608 (4,5,1) left 1 grid
Thanks a lotimpossiblexu wrote:
[Easy]
00:55:050 (1): Finish Fix
00:44:764 (5,6): 会误导新手Fix
01:08:764 (1,2): ^Fix
01:27:192 (1): 重复+1Fix
02:08:335 (1): ^Fix
02:58:050 (5): 这里的Finish去掉Fix
[Hard]
好简单的Hard啊 Stress..這歌太難就不好玩了0.0
00:30:193 (3): 开头加WhistleFix
00:55:050 (4): 这里加FinishFix
01:29:764 (5,1): 有点近Fix
01:36:621 (1): 转盘提前一下 例如到01:36:330這個...我覺得還可以..
01:55:264 (5,6,7): 整张图唯一的1/4连打吗…加了幾個可行的連打
02:22:264 (1): Slider 向后移并缩小半拍 在这里加个CircleFix
02:28:050 (4): WhistleFix
Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~ Thanks>_<
fixed the size and space.yangzd88 wrote:
[storyboard]
中間staff的sb字之間間距太大 縮短?
staff放intro那裡?...
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謝謝NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
Easy的lead-in是2001其他是2000这该吐槽吗 Fix
[Easy]
00:39:621 (4,6) - 建议是4的whistle换到折返,6的去掉 Fix
01:12:192 (3) - 从这开始不是很理解,明显的慢歌clap没有必要如此密啊。。。毕竟这实质是70BPM的曲目(或者如果可以用音量区别一拍和三拍的clap?Fix
02:34:478 (4,5) - 4折返的whistle去掉,5的第三折返加上whistle (xxoxo)Fix
[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle?(和前面的音调对比)Fix
00:49:907 (2) - ^Fix
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistleFix
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistleFix
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistleFix
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音?留給mapper自己修改
[Hard]
00:28:050 (2) - 这里开始为什么是S不是S1。。。我听不出哪里需要slider音orzFix
01:07:907 (8) - 开头的那个clap漏了?Fix
之后仍然是觉得clap太紧了Fix
01:22:050 (4,1) - 距离建议远点Fix
。。。整体感觉略挤orzLol
[Relaxing Taiko~]
犯困。。。没什么问题吧大概
谢谢~~impossiblexu wrote:
[kino’s Normal]
01:08:550 (9): 加Clap
01:20:550 (4): 开头加Whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6): New combo 后面的1去掉New combo
02:06:621 (4): ^
02:20:335 (4): ^
谢谢咯~~NatsumeRin wrote:
[Kino's Normal]
00:36:192 (2) - 尾whistle?(和前面的音调对比) 感觉不是重音就没改了
00:49:907 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:764 (1) - 尾whistle Fixed~
01:25:478 (6) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:06:835 (5) - 去whistle Fixed~
02:49:478 & 02:49:693 - 加音? Fixed~
Sorry of this...I'm not decide to map a insane of this song...Louis Cyphre wrote:
wait wait. Where is Insane? =/
Thanksykcarrot wrote:
Hi~
[Hard]
Great, nothing to point out to me. ^^
Just one thing. Resnap all green lines for perfection. Resnap it
[Easy]
AR +1 / Resnap all green lines. Fix
02:02:340 (3) - Its direction looks a bit weird. Fix it to vertical or horizontal? Fix
Thanks=v=jericho2442 wrote:
add a approachcircle.png to your maps folder Fix
Easy
00:19:483 (4) - newcombo here to follow your patternFix
01:00:625 (7,1,2) - newcombo the (7) remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (2) creates a very nice combo flow Fix
(suggestion) 01:06:625 (5) - newcomboFix
01:22:054 (4) - mover closer to (3) its abit far awayFix
01:55:483 (4,5) - if you wanna flow to the music put a newcombo on (5) if you wanna flow to your current combo pattern put a new combo on (4)Fix
(suggestion) 02:54:626 (3,4) - to me it plays better with the 2 repeats on the (3) rather than the (4), your choice thoughFix
Hard
at the start of the map you break your combo pattern, you can do one of 2 thingsFix
1) 00:19:483 (3) - newcombo // 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo
or
2) 00:21:197 (5) - newcombo // 00:22:911 (1) - remove new combo
either of them will work nice
01:57:625 (2,3,4,5,6) - only a small thing but (2,3,4) has different spacing to (4,5,6) i advise to make them the same Fix
02:34:911 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) insted i sayFix
------------------------------------
nice maps anyway
No change shall be done~Sandpig wrote:
kino's Normal
01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - 间隔有点大,感觉还应该加点NOTE
02:29:768 (1,2) - 感觉这两个中间用一个slider拖一下比较好?从1到02:30:197
Sure~ looks better now~ShaggoN wrote:
[kino's Normal]
- 01:07:483 (5) - Well here it looks weird. I would do Stack Leniency -1, but hmm. Your choice :3
...謝謝..真的是Star Story..Lilac wrote:
应该是 "Star Story", 不是 "Star story" 吧? 我不知道。
Ooooops,没注意到呢> <Lilac wrote:
应该是 "Star Story", 不是 "Star story" 吧? 我不知道。
[kino's Normal]
00:10:911 (1,2,3,4) - 你应当知道这不对称。 我不知道你是不是故意这样的。
Blah, typing in Chinese is hard. I really want to bubble this, I just need confirmation about the title.
Thanks..Lilac wrote:
那就这。