BaD MonsterZ wrote:

hello i will mod this when u will finish the map. Very nice map keep finishing it.

BaD MonsterZ wrote:

00:45:870 (1,2,3) - Not sure if you map the chorus or the instrumental there but if it's chorus it would be better to set a slider velocity of 0,50x on those sliders and then remove the note 00:47:013 (4)


01:43:013 (1,2,3) - Same as I mentioned earlier, you should set a slider velocity of 0,50x and remove this note 01:44:155 (4)

BaD MonsterZ wrote:

01:05:655 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - That curve in this stream looks a bit weird. Maybe you can move this to make a straight line stream in the direction of 01:06:155 (1)

BaD MonsterZ wrote:

- A lot of objects are not snapped to the timeline. Check the AImod and fix this (Ctrl+Shift+a)

Hou Rearu wrote:

I should just change slider velocuty, w/o changing sliders them selfs?

BaD MonsterZ wrote:

just change slider velocity without changing sliders yea

1. You probably should have asked for my beginner queue since this is your first map lol
2. 00:09:012 (1) - delete this note, it's better to start on the downbeat.
3. Spacing:
   
   Proper spacing is very important in maps. For lower diffs, consistent spacing helps newer players develop a relationship between time and distance between notes. See this for a longer explanation. For normal and easy diffs, it is highly recommended (almost an ironclad rule nowadays) that you keep distance snapping (DS) on for the entire map for the reason stated above.
   
   Example: 00:09:012 (1,2,3) - uses 1.4 DS, 00:09:584 (3,4,5) - uses 1.6 DS, and 00:10:727 (5,6) - uses 0.9 DS. Just pick one and stick with it for the entire song. I think anywhere from DS 1.1 - 1.4 would be a good choice
4. 00:10:726 (5,6) - avoid overlaps like these, they don't look good. if you follow the spacing advice above, these will naturally go away
5. 00:18:013 (6,7,8,9) - I would nerf this a little, 210 bpm continuous 1/2 notes are too difficult for normal players
6. Be consistent with hitsounds. No reason why 00:27:869 (2) - this section has normal hitsounds while the other sections have soft hitsounds
7. 00:36:727 (5) - these only require 3 control points to make a nice slider with the new algorithm http://puu.sh/nvQh6/50ee6d9c8f.jpg same with places like 01:33:870 (1) - 01:36:155 (1) -
8. Rhythm:
   
   1. Downbeats (big white ticks) are typically important beats in the song and should have a clickable object to represent them, especially if a strong sound from the music falls on this beat. Along those lines, if you have no idea when to add new combos (NCs), a simple way is to add a NC every downbeat or every 2 downbeats.
      Examples: For you, it's a little messed up because your offset is incorrect, but once you fix that, hopefully you'll notice that places like 00:50:441 - 00:51:584 - 00:55:013 - 01:22:441 - etc....should be clickable
      
   2. If you're following the drums/vocal/instrument in your song, don't just suddenly switch to mapping a different part of the song unless you have a strong reason to. Otherwise, you will confuse new players.
      Examples:
9. 01:06:155 (7) - change to a note, don't use 1/4 rhythms in normal
10. 01:25:013 - make this clickable, it's a better transition to get back to 1/1 rhythm http://puu.sh/nvQGN/2a3ec8135d.jpg
11. 01:36:155 (1,2) - avoid overlaps
12. 01:48:441 (6) - no reason to break 1/1 rhythm http://puu.sh/nvQPr/9a30afedaf.jpg
13. 02:28:584 (7) - this should also start on a white tick
    Sorry, but I think you'll have to remap large parts of this diff. The spacing concern is an especially important issue to fix if you're aiming for rank.

1. 00:09:584 - map this part out since you did it in normal. Break times should be consistent across all difs if possible
2. For harder diffs, spacing is a key component in dictating how intense certain notes feel. In general, notes that land on strong beats (remember downbeats?) should have a larger spacing from the previous note so that it feels more emphasized and matches with intensity of the music
   Examples: 00:34:441 (3) - 01:01:870 - (should be clickable) 01:03:013 (4) - 01:27:013 (2) - 01:46:441 - (should be clickable) etc...
3. 00:36:727 (1) - you should learn to make sliders like this http://puu.sh/nvRoP/fe16e382ff.jpg it will help give you a lot more control over slidershape in the future
4. 00:52:584 (3,4,5) - avoid linear flows like these, they don't play very well imo

ecdonald wrote:

Hello! from my queue, sorry for my late and laziness


[Insane]

00:45:874 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end) - it should be like that, suits music very nice
00:46:302 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end) - same
00:46:731 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
Unsnapped green lineat: 02:12:441 - snap to 02:12:444 - okay fixed

[Stare you.]

00:45:873 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
00:46:301 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
00:46:730 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
01:01:301 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
01:43:016 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
01:43:444 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
01:43:873 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
02:03:301 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end) - ^
Unsnapped green line at 03:12:584 - snap to 03:12:587 - fixed
and snap kiai pls - no idea how.

00:21:301 (3) - how about like this? http://puu.sh/nMcKb/c50e0e0258.jpg - uhm, well got your point, fixed but my way
00:23:444 (2) - this overlapping to 00:23:016 (1) - doesn't looks so beautiful, how about avoid this? - Well fixed, i think...
01:32:944 (6) - add note to follow song's drum? - sure
03:14:444 (1) - add NC? - why not.
03:15:587 (10) - ^ - ya

good luck! I will check more if I have time

HighTec wrote:

oh boy it's finally done
it has been through A LOT of testing, yes everything should be nice to play
http://puu.sh/nNctv/f8b06d0359.osu

note: unhitsounded

CookieKivi wrote:

Heh, can i create a Light Insane or Insane for this Map?

WhozChaos wrote:

I'ma Just Say This
When giving kudosu you're not supposed to give KD more than once to the same person and only give when the thing they do is deemed to be helpful