Hana - Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem · forum

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-12-10T21:10:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月3日 at 3:18:21

Artist: Hana
Title: Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem
Source: Subarashiki Hibi
Tags: KEROQ Kukirikigaku Shoujo to Shounen no Uta Cyborg Pookz
BPM: 182
Filesize: 10516kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.18 stars, 76 notes)
Hard (4.91 stars, 261 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 395 notes)
Normal (2.56 stars, 97 notes)
Pook (5 stars, 376 notes)

Download: Hana - Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem
Download: Hana - Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#19

Pook by Pookz

Last edited by Aenna 2011-01-02T18:18:38+00:00, edited 15 times in total.

Asagiri Mai

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Asagiri Mai 2010-12-10T21:12:11+00:00

1st!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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2げとっ！

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Ozouni 2010-12-11T06:03:13+00:00

くうきりきがくしょうじょ　と　しょうねん　の　うた

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すばひび

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123456doit~

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あえんあさんだ

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Cuuuuri 2010-12-11T09:50:45+00:00

ﾄﾞ━(ﾟДﾟ)━ﾝ!!

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-12-11T16:57:22+00:00

thank you for stars~

dNextGen

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dNextGen 2010-12-11T17:01:25+00:00

Aenna wrote:
thank you for stars~

ok

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Orgol 2010-12-12T06:19:29+00:00

SSSSTAR~

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ド安定

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FutakiKanata 2010-12-14T11:19:57+00:00

subahibi！！！

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神曲

Sure

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Sure 2010-12-16T15:40:00+00:00

[General]
- The MP3 quality is CBR 320kbps now. It is not rankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps~192kbps.
- Disable Letterbox during breaks. Because the video ratio is 4:3. It doesn't looks good when break time.

[Pook]
00:05:058 (3) - removing clap is better
00:24:178 (5) - clap at start of slider
00:31:761 (10) - finish at start of slider
00:36:047 (6) - clap at start of slider
01:03:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest put clap at every note and adjust audio volume. Yeah, it would be nice when gradually increase volume from 55 to 90.

01:08:354 (4) - clap at start of slider

[Insane]
01:03:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Refer to mod post for Pook, please.
01:33:409 (3) - put clap instead of whistle

[Hard]
01:03:409 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as Insane.

[Normal]
Using mute slidertick at the whole time is unrankable.
00:00:113 ~ 00:10:662 - slidertick sound bothers me only this section. It fits well in other sections.

Nice job

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2010-12-16T15:53:25+00:00

NICE!!

Star~

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-12-16T16:09:15+00:00

thank you for mod,star!

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-12-16T18:09:17+00:00

idol

taNa

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taNa 2010-12-17T08:04:40+00:00

LOL

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-12-17T10:16:15+00:00

sliderticks are not allowed to be all silenced atm (the nuke on DJPop's map is an extreme example)

Too many finishes on the chorus part

Consider using a custom hitsound?

Jumps in Pook dif feel kinda random for me, not a big deal though

KSHR

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KSHR 2010-12-17T22:37:49+00:00

Iris大好きですヽ(*´∀｀)ノww

kiddly

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kiddly 2010-12-18T15:52:57+00:00

seems no problem for me

double star~

loli_milk

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★

Akiros_old

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star

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-12-28T06:19:51+00:00

-Hard-
00:26:482 (2,3,4) - turn off grid snap and fix spacing._.
suggestions: (Hard&Insane)
00:23:845 (1) - add a finish on the beginning of the slider?
00:26:482 (2) - +finish?
00:34:394 (1) - add a finish on the beginning of the slider?
00:37:032 (3) - ^
00:39:669 (1) - ^

-Insane-
ohh nice!

-Pook-
some suggestions here:
00:11:235 (4) - remove this circle? a bit uncomfortable here.
00:53:762 (5) - ^
01:08:845 (1) - it's hidden D: it's fine to me, but I don't know if it's fine to everyone.
01:12:554 (2) - remove this circle? a bit uncomfortable here.

That's all. Jumps are fine.

Call me back and tell me what you are going to do/fix :3

star for now.

EDIT: bubbled! nice work!

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-12-28T16:08:46+00:00

I don't agree with the difficulty spread.

Make an easier difficulty if you don't want to delete Pook's difficulty or just remove Pook's difficulty for balance the difficulty spread.

Map is fine itself, but I have to pop for now, sorry >_<

EDIT: After checking I found 2 little things to get fixed.

[Easy]

01:15:273 (1) - Kiai time should end here, with doing this you won't have the weird hitsound change on this slider as well -> 01:14:614 (4).

[Normal]

01:15:273 (x) - End kiai here like the other difficulties.

EDIT2: Re-Bubbled~

Alace

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Alace 2011-01-04T18:31:24+00:00

oops
first offset:121 (+12ms to all green lines before 43635(
second offset:43635 (you need to add x 0.5 green lines in hard insane pook diffs)

I like pook diff so much XD
pretty good mapset

Aenna

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Aenna 2011-01-04T19:34:31+00:00

fixed~

Alace

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Alace 2011-01-05T15:42:51+00:00

I am really sorry,
the second offset should be 43625
No kds for this post thx

EDIT:good rebubble

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POW

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Venus 2011-01-15T02:45:49+00:00

nice map

star~

moneto_old

moneto_old 2011-01-16T09:49:31+00:00

Fun map as always

Muya

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Aenna

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Aenna 2011-01-18T07:21:11+00:00

thank you~

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はよらんく

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hayo

rank

yaya

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yaya 2011-01-30T11:07:24+00:00

sorry ill point some shit nazi
[Easy]
00:00:121 (1) - make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53213
00:26:494 (1) - ^
00:59:449 (1) - ^
01:02:086 (4) - ^
01:31:097 (1) - ^

Aenna

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Aenna 2011-01-30T11:47:51+00:00

thank you for mod!

fixed~

yaya

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