Itu tag yang Crono benerin, beda sama diff lain (Cek AiMod)
Terus di semua diff tag tambahin nama Crono, puxtu ada, tapi ko Crono ga ada? :<
Hitsoundnya harap dibenerin lagi, soalnya di awal ada, kesananya ilang hitsoundnya (Normal diff)

NM
HP: OK
OD: OK

HD
HP: 7.5 (Besarin dikit lah)
OD: OK

puxtu's MX
HP: OK
OD: OK

Crono's SC
HP: 8.5 (Tapi kalau ga mau yaudah 8 aja)
OD: OK

1|2|3|4
NM
00:11:784 (11784|1) - Tambahin Clap
00:32:363 (32363|2) - Pindahin ke kolom 1?
00:34:558 (34558|0) - Kasih Whistle?
00:41:692 (41692|2) - Kasih Clap?
00:47:363 (47363|0,47363|3) - w baca di threadnya Feerum, katanya ga boleh pake hitsound yang sama, but up to you
01:06:021 (66021|3) - Kasih Clap?
01:21:753 (81753|2) - ^
01:22:485 (82485|3) - ^
01:23:034 (83034|3,83217|1,83399|2) - Ini juga kali ya? (kasih Clap)
01:23:948 (83948|1) - ^
01:24:680 (84680|0) - ^
01:25:412 (85412|2) - ^
01:26:509 (86509|1) - Pindahin ke kolom 4?
01:25:960 (85960|1) - Kasih Clap
01:26:692 (86692|2) - ^
01:27:607 (87607|2) - ^
01:28:339 (88339|2) - ^
01:28:887 (88887|0) - ^
01:33:095 (93095|3,93095|0) - Kasih Whistle sama Finish
01:33:460 (93460|2,94192|2) - Kasih Clap
01:34:924 (94924|2,95656|2,96387|3,97119|2) - ^
01:37:851 (97851|2,98582|2) - ^
01:39:314 (99314|2,100046|1) - ^
01:40:778 (100778|3) - ^
01:41:509 (101509|2) - ^
01:46:265 (106265|0,106265|2) - Kasih Whistle sama Finish
01:46:631 (106631|1,107363|2) - Kasih Clap
01:48:095 (108095|0) - ^
01:48:460 (108460|2,108826|1) - ^
01:49:558 (109558|3,110290|2) - ^
01:51:021 (111021|2) - ^
01:52:119 (112119|3) - Kasih Finish
01:53:217 (113217|1) - Kasih Clap
01:53:948 - Add note 1 disini, terus kasih Clap
01:55:412 (115412|0,116143|0) - Kasih Clap
01:56:875 (116875|0) - ^
01:58:704 (118704|0,119070|1) - ^
01:59:802 (119802|2) - ^
02:00:534 (120534|0) - ^
02:01:082 (121082|1) - Pindahin ke kolom 1
02:01:265 (121265|2) - Kasih Clap
02:01:997 (121997|2) - ^
02:02:729 (122729|3) - ^
02:04:558 (124558|3) - ^
02:05:656 (125656|1) - ^
02:07:485 (127485|1) - Add 1 note lagi, terus kasih Clap
02:08:582 - Add 1 atau 2 note
02:07:485 (127485|1) - Add 1 note lagi
02:11:875 (131875|1) - Add 1 note, terus kasih Clap
02:21:021 (141021|1) - Pindahin ke kolom 4?
02:27:973 (147973|3,147973|2) - Kasih Whistle sama Finish
02:28:339 (148339|2) - Kasih Clap
02:29:070 (149070|2) - ^
02:29:802 (149802|2) - ^
02:30:534 (150534|2) - ^
02:31:265 (151265|2) - ^
02:31:997 (151997|2) - ^
02:32:729 (152729|3) - ^
02:33:460 (153460|3) - ^
02:33:826 (153826|2) - Kasih Whistle
02:34:192 (154192|0) - Kasih Clap
02:37:119 (157119|3) - ^
02:37:851 (157851|3) - ^
02:38:582 (158582|2) - ^
02:39:314 (159314|3) - ^
02:39:680 (159680|1) - Kasih Whistle
02:40:046 (160046|0) - Kasih Clap
02:40:778 (160778|3) - ^
02:41:509 (161509|3) - ^
02:42:241 (162241|0) - ^
02:42:973 (162973|2) - ^
02:43:704 (163704|3) - ^
02:44:436 (164436|0) - ^
02:46:265 (166265|0,166265|3) - Hitsoundnya sama
02:52:485 (172485|0) - Kasih Clap
02:53:217 (173217|2) - ^
02:53:948 (173948|3) - ^
02:54:680 (174680|1) - ^
02:55:412 (175412|3) - ^
(Capek w ngatur hitsoundnya mz xD)

HD
00:05:290 (5290|2,5290|3) - Pindahin ke kolom 2 sama 3?
00:10:778 (10778|2) - Pindahin ke kolom 4?
01:21:021 (81021|3,81090|2,81159|0,81227|1,81296|2,81387|0,81387|1) - Flip?
02:14:436 (134436|1,134436|3,134436|2) - Ilangin salah satu

[General]

1. Why did you remove Easy? I mean, you've already mapped it, I don't see why you would just remove it, but ok.
2. I think the offset might be 878, idk.
3. You've got a fairly wide diff gap between NM and HD. I'd suggest adding a 2* difficulty or something, but idk if people really care that much about mid 2* diffs (I do tho T.T)
4. I think OD ~7.7 is fine for HD since there's a fairly small ratio of notes to LNs. I would increase the HP to ~7.5 though due to density of notes.
5. Crono-, you know you still owe me a mod from when I modded Galaxy Collapse back in May or whatever? Just passive-aggressively reminding you.

[NM]00:21:936 - Why don't you use a 1/2 trill here like you did at 00:16:082 since the guitar plays the same riff for like, two measures or something.
00:23:948 (23948|0) - I'd consider extending this LN down to 00:23:765 since the drum roll starts there.
00:33:095 (33095|0,33460|3) - Are these for the vocals? Cause they honestly feel out of place when this section has been playing short notes to the kicks the entire time.
00:35:564 (35564|2,35747|1) - If these notes are supposed to be for the snare, they should be at 00:35:473
00:35:198 - I'd also recommend adding a note here for the drum kick like you did at 00:11:784 (11784|1) so it leads into the LN.
00:36:021 (36021|3,37485|0,38948|1,40412|0) - And etc. What are these LNs following? There's no sustained sound in the background like a held guitar note or vocal. The guitar is constantly playing a different note, so I can't tell what these Lns are for. They just appear to be in the map simply to be there without a reason from the music.
00:44:985 - 00:46:082 - I'd highly suggest adding notes here because this is a transition into the next section and the drums are much more prominent here.
00:46:814 - You kind of accent the wrong notes here as in, you use a double for the kick and ignore the snare completely. Try this instead
00:51:387 (51387|2,51753|1) - I dislike vocal mapping, so I'ma try not to say too much about it, but these LNs that are mapped to the vocal really break the flow of the section because you go from 1/2 stream with some doubles to suddenly hold notes and then back to doubles when the background instrumentals (which is what most players tend to focus on when playing in order to play the proper beat) aren't sustained in any way and keep the 1/2 beat going.
00:55:046 to 01:00:899 - Vocal mapping. Uhm, really, I'd shy away from that cause it breaks the flow you've set up. Players are expecting a steady 1/2 beat but you suddenly switch to a 1/1 beat instead which is going to throw some people off.
01:04:009 (64009|1) - I don't think this shield is necessary, maybe move it to 1?
01:09:680 - I guess I can see the pattern you're trying to make here, but it's inconsistent because you'd expect 01:12:607 (72607|0) to be in 3 similar to 01:11:509 (71509|1,71509|0,71875|1) - 's pattern.
01:21:387 - In this section, why don't you use doubles for the snares like at 01:22:485 - 01:23:034 - 01:23:399 for example
01:25:595 - You're also missing a note for the kick here.
01:29:345 (89345|1,89436|0) - You haven't used 1/4 at all in this measure, and you've only used it twice in the song to transition from drum to guitar. Randomly using it here is going to throw off players and come unexpectedly since you didn't map it at places like 01:29:985 - 01:30:076 - 01:30:442 and etc.
01:35:656 (95656|2,96021|2) - Move these notes into separate columns because they look weird as jacks on their own. You could make jacks with some of the other doubles instead and keep these then
01:46:265 - The second chorus is basically a repeat of what I've said above, except this time you removed the doubles for the snares which is inconsistent because normally, in Mania, unless you're confined by the number of columns, if you map a chorus one way, unless the next chorus is really different, you map the second chorus in about the same way with a little note variation.
02:10:046 (130046|2,130046|0,130320|0,130320|2,130595|3,130595|1) - Why did you make these doubles when they're only kicks? If anything, 02:13:339 (133339|3,133613|0,133887|2) should be doubles because they're snares and more heavily accented.
02:56:875 - Why don't you have a note here? There's a kick and it breaks the flow if you put a random break here.
03:14:871 (194871|0,194963|1) - These need to be lowered down to 03:14:826 which is 1/8 and I'd probably suggest moving 03:14:871 (194871|0) to 3 and 03:14:963 (194963|1) to 2 so that it's an easy roll for normal leveled players to hit.

[HD]00:13:156 (13156|1,13521|2,13887|3,14253|1) - Honestly, I feel like the LNs similar to this are a bit overkill. Are they supposed to represent the guitar? Because if so, the guitar is playing a steady 1/2 riff the entire time. Are they supposed to represent the open hihat? If so, they're probably too quiet to be mapped at this difficulty because the LNs feel a little uncomfortable and it's difficult to tell what you tried to map here.
00:23:857 - You're missing a note here for the snare drum. Also, this pattern looks a bit weird to play, maybe try this instead so it's easier to hit.
00:32:180 (32180|0) - What's this for? Remove it because it's either very quiet or a ghost note.
00:35:198 - Again, I think this burst is a bit messy looking, so try this instead
00:44:070 (44070|2,44070|3,44253|0,44253|3) - If these are only kicks, why do you emphasize them using doubles when the snares are represented with doubles? I'd consider nerfing these kind of notes down to singles.
00:44:985 (44985|1) - This should have another note though, because it's a snare and it's louder than the kicks.
00:45:351 (45351|1) - Assuming you follow mainly the drums in this section, remove this note because there's no snare/kick here and the guitar plays on 00:45:259
00:46:082 - This kind of pattern triggers me ._. Joking, but no, 00:46:265 (46265|0,46265|2) only have toms on them, so I'd consider removing 00:46:265 (46265|0) so you make a roll with 00:46:082 (46082|0,46174|1,46265|2)
01:00:534 - I think I forgot to mention this earlier, but you don't really see jumptrills used in hard difficulties because of how much they inflate the star rating, and because of the fact that players are this level haven't really been introduced into this pattern yet. Using a simple 1/4 roll is fine for bursts like these.
01:14:985 - Add a note here to keep the flow going because this becomes an awkward pause without a note here to keep the beat (and there's a hihat click here too).
01:30:168 (90168|2) - I suggest moving this to 1 because rolls are easier to read at this difficulty level.
01:31:082 (91082|3,91174|2,91265|3) - This minitrill might be a bit unexpected at this level, and even more so since it's found in a stream. Also, the hand balance is very right hand oriented since 01:30:991 (90991|0,91540|0) are the only two notes played in 1 throughout this entire burst. Try something like this instead
02:11:692 - Ok, I think this burst definitely needs a little more direction. All the notes are pretty randomized making a jumpburst like this really hard to read, especially at this difficulty level when most players haven't ever had to read a jumpstream or anything similar. Try something like this

[Crono's SC]Hey, so not trying to be pushy, but I did that m4m a long time ago for you Anyways, to get your attention, I'll do a quick mod over your diff
00:13:247 (13247|2) - Are you sure this note is really necessary? The hihat here is incredibly quiet and almost blends in with 00:13:339 (13339|3) as one longer note.
00:28:704 (28704|2) - Assuming you're just following the guitar here and ignoring the bass, you should remove this note because there's only bass and no guitar here since the guitar only plays on the upbeat of beat 3 and 1.
00:41:875 (41875|2,41875|3) - The first two jacks are pretty doable, but the third one doesn't really feel that good to play since most players automatically divide the song into 2's (assuming the time sig is 4/4) since it's easier to read stuff that way. Putting it into 3 makes it a bit more complicated, but due to the LNs, I don't really know how you'd solve this.
00:45:351 (45351|2,45442|0,45899|0,45991|3) - I think these might be ghost notes, because at 25% speed I can't really hear any 1/4, and definitely not at 100% where players won't notice it at all.
00:51:387 - LNs like these break the flow imo since you suddenly go from 1/2 to 1/1 beat, but I think Minseo already pointed that out and got flamed for it (poor minseo)
01:00:442 (60442|0,60442|1) - I'd make this a single note since it's only a kick. Maybe remove the note in 1?
01:06:479 (66479|0) - I also think this is a ghost note, but at this point, I'm just listening to the song at 75% and skimming for errors.
01:09:314 (69314|2,69314|3) - Reduce this to a single note because it's more like a kick rather than a snare.
01:22:668 (82668|1,82668|2,82759|0,82759|3,82851|1,82851|2) - These are barely audible hihats, why are they doubles? reduce them to single notes because they aren't very loud compared to the other sounds in this section.
01:44:436 - Alright, that's cool what you did here, props man.
01:57:515 (117515|0,117515|1) - Remove the note in 1 since it's just a kick?
02:06:204 (126204|3,126204|2,126296|3,126296|2) - Well this is kind of random and unexpected. It also feels a little uncomfortable to play since as a player, you would be expecting to hit a jumptrill, but then this pops up like, "Nah, man, jack me instead" I think you did it to add variation to the various jumptrills in this map, but I think a different jumptrill like a {13}{24} splittrill would have been better.
02:21:296 (141296|1) - Honestly, all these ghost notes man, or I'm just deaf.
02:46:997 (166997|1) - There's a crash here, but it's layered on top of a kick rather than a snare, so I think a triple note would be fine.

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- Needs some serious remapping, like, all the notes are perfect and everything, the placement is fine, I can actually pass and stuff. I do have to comment on the note placement though, I think that the jumptrills are fine, though lacking in a bit of challenge. The lack of LNs is what really makes this my favorite diff of the mapset, because unlike SC, nothing is forced here, and the pauses are natural, and I shouldn't have just used Crono's diff as an example cause he'll probably get mad at me like he did Minseo. Hm, I would also like to comment that I really enjoy your Abstract Nonsense map. Tokyo Teddy Bear was the the second Mania map I ever played and I think it was really fun since the patterns in EZ helped to introduce me to lots of pattern (this is my first vsrg ever). As for the jacks, they play really well, although there are some times when you jack 3 notes together when the guitar plays a longer jack like from 01:13:156 to 01:15:351 but there's a jumptrill in the way, and tbh, long jacks are tedious and make me feel like I'm playing a taiko convert. A wall of text is something that is frowned upon in most, actually virtually all Internet societies, including forums, chat boards, and Uncyclopedia. You should not make walls of text because it can get you banned anywhere unless it is a place that encourages walls of text. I highly doubt any place does support something so irritating and annoying, but anything can exist, but not really because unless you are in heaven then that can happen. But no one actually knows that was just a hypothesis, a lame one that is. Actually not really lame. You can create a wall of text supporting site, but you would be hated if you do that, so do not. But you can if you like, but I discourage that. Now on to the actual information of walls of texts. The wall of text was invented when the Internet was invented, but actually it was slow at that time. So whenever it became fast. But there would need to be some free or not free community for people, and that community would be able to have walls of text. But that community probably wouldn't have actually invented the wall of text. So basically, no one except God and Al Gore knows when or where or how the wall of text existed/was invented. Noobs probably invented, but probably not. Who knows. Walls of texts are usually filled with a lot of useless information and junk. Information and junk can be the same, but only if the information is junk or the junk is information. But who cares. The information/junk inside a wall of text are usually related to wherever the wall of text is located, but the best walls of text, which are actually the most irritating, most eye-bleeding ones, are completely random. Walls of text usually make the reader asplode or have their eyes bleed and fall out of their sockets. A number of people can stand it, but not read them. Actually some people can stand and read them. Those people do not have short attention spans. These are boring and patient people who have no life or have all the time in their hands, which are the same, but not really. The punishment of what making walls of text varies of the strictness of the community. But it doesn't really matter. Nobody cares. Walls of texts should be free of links, different font colors, strange characters, which are those other symbols used in society, and capital letters because it ruins the whole purpose of the infamy of walls of texts. It makes them look fucking dumb and weird. Walls of texts are obviously free of huge spaces and outstanding things like capital letters. Of course, paragraphs should never be in a wall of text. Walls of text are known to create nausea, confusion, head explosion, and others. The others being something I can not think of either because I am lazy or if I do not feel like it or I can not actually think of anything. Like what the fuck? That was a rhetorical question right there. What the fuck? You are actually not requesting a satisfactory answer, you just say that because you try to be funny or you feel like it or if you are pissed off. You must get a proper bitch-slapping to stop making walls of text, but if you are weird then that doesn't apply to you. Walls of text are defeated by deleting them or splitting them into paragraphs. Or some other things that would work but will take hours to think of. People are considered a nuisance if they create walls of text. This might be the end. If you hope this is the end, I am not sure. But if I was not sure then I wouldn't be talking. I should know. Or should I? The best way to make a better and good wall of text is to copy and paste what you previously typed or write. Hey, that reminds me. Walls of text aren't always on the internet! They could be anywhere that is able to produce symbols. D'oh. A wall of text is something that is frowned upon in most, actually virtually all Internet societies, including forums, chat boards, and Uncyclopedia. You should not make walls of text because it can get you banned anywhere unless it is a place that encourages walls of text. I highly doubt any place does support something so irritating and annoying, but anything can exist, but not really because unless you are in heaven then that can happen. But no one actually knows that was just a hypothesis, a lame one that is. Actually not really lame. You can created a wall of text supporting site, but you would be hated if you do that, so do not. But you can if you like, but I discourage that. Now on to the actual information of walls of texts. The wall of text was invented when the Internet was invented, but actually it was slow at that time. So whenever it became fast. But there would need to be some free or not free community for people, and that community would be able to have walls of text. But that community probably wouldn't have actually invented the wall of text. So basically, no one except God and Al Gore knows when or where or how the wall of text existed/was invented. Noobs probably invented, but probably not. Who knows. Walls of texts are usually filled with a lot of useless information and junk. Information and junk can be the same, but only if the information is junk or the junk is information. But who cares. The information/junk inside a wall of text are usually related to wherever the wall of text is located, but the best walls of text, which are actually the most irritating, most eye-bleeding ones, are completely random. Walls of text usually make the reader asplode or have their eyes bleed and fall out of their sockets. A number of people can stand it, but not read them. Actually some people can stand and read them. Those people do not have short attention spans. These are boring and patient people who have no life or have all the time in their hands, which are the same, but not really. The punishment of what making walls of text varies of the strictness of the community. But it doesn't really matter. Nobody cares. Walls of texts should be free of links, different font colors, strange characters, which are those other symbols used in society, and capital letters because it ruins the whole purpose of the infamy of walls of texts. It makes them look fucking dumb and weird and dumb. Walls of texts are obviously free of huge spaces and outstanding things like capital letters. Of course, paragraphs should never be in a wall of text. Walls of text are known to create nausea, confusion, head explosion, and others. The others being something I can not think of either because I am lazy or if I do not feel like it or I can not actually think of anything. Like what the fuck? That was a rhetorical question right there. What the fuck? You are actually not requesting a satisfactory answer, you just say that because you try to be funny or you feel like it or if you are pissed off. Now I just copied and pasted part of this huge wall of text, which is actually not. Wait what? Nice right? Ba boom a rhetorical question right there. Is this the end for the sanity of your eyes? What the fuck did you actually read up to here? Or did you skip to near the end and read this? Either way, you fail in life. Just kidding. Or was I? Oh well. Congratulations, or not, actually not. Get a life right now. I found a cheap life on eBay, but cheap lives are rare. Well, good luck in finding one. Not! Okay go kill yourself, but I wasn't meaning that. So go sit in the corner in your house. I do not care which, just stay there and rot. If you are not in a place with a corner, then lucky you. Find one if you can. There is no other option because I said so. Now if you pity yourself for reading this like most do, then do something productive and useful to the environment. My goodness. OK this is me here. I am starting a new section of this article. I didn't read anything in this article above here, but nevermind, because I have something important to say, and you really have to read this. So just skip everything above and just come to this part and start reading and agreeing. The wall of text was invented by engineers using typewriters. Everything was in typewriter font (because it was made on typewriters - remember when I explained that in the previous sentence?) and the point was to use all of the paper, because paper was very expensive back then, it had just been invented I think. So anyway, the point was, no margins at the top or bottom or sides. If you left a quarter inch on the sides of the paper, that was very bad. And the guiding principle was "This was hard to write, so it should be hard to read". Because they were software engineers, not writing engineers. Is there even such a thing a writing engineers? Probably. But anyway, please go back to the top of this article and read it over again. You'll get the point after you read it for approx. 10 to 15 times. OK have you done that now? Good. Now let's be honest - you're not reading down this far. Are you? Nobody would read down this far, unless they were a crazy person. Are you a crazy person? You might be. Now I'm afraid - it's just me alone with a crazy person. No one else has read down this far, just you, so it's just the two of us alone together here. Are you going to do something crazy? Maybe you will. Please don't hurt me. If you promise not to hurt me, I'll give a coupon good for a free Grand Slam Breakfast at Denny's. OK? Now just do this one thing for me, read the article over again, just one more time, and if you really truly don't agree with everything in it, then fine, I'll retire from my job with the railroad and we'll call the whole thing off and just go dancing, just the two of use, me (the writer) and you (a completely random crazy person who has actually read down this far), and boy won't we turn heads when we show up at Rockefeller Center with the entire Donner Party in tow! We'll dance all night to strains of the Lemon Pipers while the Italian 12th Armored Division prevents the Allies from thrusting into our rear! Ah, what memories we'll make, I'll never forget you, my completely insane random person. By the way this is magnificent example of wall of text. You have to be proud you read it all. Now please read mod again, and this time pay attention. Wait a minute. didnt it say earlier that there shouldn't be any capitals. But you know, I really love eating rice, and I have a final tomorrow at 7 in the morning but it's like 11 pm now, so I'm going to have the worst time getting up tomorrow. Legit though, this already is a nice diff and everything; the only qualms I have about it are just aesthetics because it has that messy kind of feel which is nice and fitting for the song, and it still plays well, but that's just the way I look at maps. I can't really think of anything else to write here cause I think I already made a big enough wall of text. I claim no credit though, because I took a fair chunk of the text from some random website talking about walls of text and how they're bad for forums. But you know people who write long mods and don't box it up? Like, oh my god, no, why would you not use a spoiler box when you have like 100 lines of text, holy hell.
00:43:156 (43156|1) - Actually looking through this, I think if you removed this, it'd do well to accent the pause in the drums.
00:47:180 (47180|2,47180|1,47363|0,47363|1,47546|2,47546|3) - Since the guitar notes are ascending, why not try a stair pattern like this
00:51:387 (51387|0) - Maybe move this to 3 since in this section you use two 1/2 jacks.
00:55:412 (55412|3,55412|0,55412|1) - Since this triple is a different sound than the crash at 00:55:046 (55046|0,55046|3,55046|1) wouldn't you want to make it different rather than being a 1/1 jack? So maybe try this instead
01:25:778 (85778|2,85778|1) - Just my opinion on visuals here, it might look nicer if you were to make this a {34} double and move 01:25:686 (85686|0) to 2 so it's like a jumptrill like 01:26:143 (86143|1,86143|0,86235|2,86235|3,86326|1,86326|0) but with a single note in the center. Wtf am I talking about now.
01:30:808 (90808|1,90899|2) - Why not just control J this and make an easy to read {4321} roll.
02:27:973 - La la la la la la la la la la la la monsterrrrr
02:39:223 (159223|3,159223|2) - This is a kick, so make it a single?
03:03:095 - There are those LNs, waiting for their time to shine. They're great.

22:43 Crono: excuse could I ask you to check something? It's literally just one small change, but a BN has already approved but may have overlooked it
22:43 juankristal: mmh
22:43 juankristal: sure
22:43 juankristal:
22:43 *Crono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949601 Reol - MONSTER [Crono's SC]]
22:43 Crono:
22:43 juankristal: oh lmao
22:43 juankristal: its so funny because
22:43 juankristal: I was checking that map before you asked this
22:44 juankristal: because I really like the song
22:44 Crono: lmao
22:44 juankristal: such a good song
22:44 Crono: 01:06:387 (66387|2,66479|0) -
22:44 juankristal: I also mapped it LOL
22:44 Crono: thinking I should make these a 12 for consistency
22:44 juankristal: whats up with that?
22:45 Crono: 01:06:296 (66296|3,66296|0) -
22:45 Crono: same exact sound
22:45 Crono: 01:06:387 (66387|2) - as this
22:46 juankristal: I dont think 01:06:479 (66479|0) - has a sound
22:46 Crono: but for some reason I have it as it is now
22:46 Crono: agreed
22:46 juankristal: you can just move 01:06:479 (66479|0) - to the white tick
22:46 Crono: thanks!
22:46 juankristal: so it would be like http://puu.sh/qzpcu/73d2d85b15.jpg
22:47 juankristal: which BN is checking your map btw
22:47 Crono: Avalon will be checking in 3 weeks according to RE-USEABLE
22:48 juankristal: mmh
22:48 juankristal: I think you should get some more mods
22:48 juankristal: I mean, is hard for me to judge because I am really biased since I also mapped this xD
22:49 juankristal: but it feels really akward to play at least for me
22:49 Crono: lol, don't like LN?
22:49 juankristal: I love LNs
22:49 juankristal: but I dont think they fit really well in a song like this
22:49 juankristal: 02:55:778 (175778|0) -
22:49 juankristal: those ones are really cool
22:50 juankristal: 02:53:948 (173948|0) - I might even split this into 2 double notes to do some vocal emphasys
22:50 juankristal: but thats up to you xD
22:50 juankristal: 02:58:339 (178339|2) - same here
22:50 juankristal: 02:59:802 (179802|3) -
22:50 juankristal: I know it follows like the guitar but
22:50 juankristal: maybe that works better
22:51 Crono: well the LNs are vocal focused uring the chorus, guitar focused during rhe rest
22:51 Crono: but I'll try it
22:51 juankristal: like, the problem I find with the map
22:51 juankristal: and the LNs
22:51 juankristal: specially in the intro
22:51 juankristal: is that you have so many cases where the guitar pitch repeats itself
22:51 juankristal: that it makes the long note really weird to follow
22:52 juankristal: 00:15:899 (15899|2,16082|3,16265|2,16448|3,16631|2,16814|3) - that part works really well for example tho
22:54 juankristal: 01:54:497 (114497|1) - and maybe that long note should be deleted Xd
22:54 Crono: 01:06:387 (66387|2) - are referring to these with awkward pitch?
22:55 juankristal: that one is a jumptrill part
22:55 juankristal: xD
22:55 juankristal: I mean for example this ones: 00:13:156 (13156|1,13339|0,13521|1) -
22:55 juankristal: those 3 are the same pitch sound yet different columns
22:55 Crono: dammit
22:55 juankristal: I mean, you cant really put those 3 in the same column because thats how LNs work xD
22:56 juankristal: same goes 00:12:607 (12607|2,12790|3,12973|2) - here
22:56 juankristal: 00:13:704 (13704|3,13887|2,14070|1) -
22:56 juankristal: 00:14:253 (14253|0,14436|1,14619|2) -
22:56 juankristal: 00:14:802 (14802|3,14985|2) -
22:56 juankristal: 00:15:168 (15168|0,15351|1) -
22:56 juankristal: 00:15:534 (15534|0,15717|1,15899|2) -
22:56 juankristal: those blocks are all same pitch
22:56 juankristal: well, maybe not exactly the same
22:56 juankristal: but they sound quite similar
22:57 Crono: there is definitely change in pitch (perks of using Studio DJ headphones) and I have to favor playability for consistency with other diffs
22:58 juankristal: fair enought then
22:58 juankristal: like, despite that I imagine it is a cool map
22:58 juankristal: it just has that
22:58 juankristal: lemme replay it just in case
23:02 juankristal: well, it wasnt that bad
23:02 juankristal: xD
23:02 juankristal: I remember having a lot of issues before but now I just nailed it lol
23:02 Crono: haha
23:02 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5832845
23:02 juankristal: #fuckjacks
23:03 juankristal: but yeah, it should be good then
23:03 juankristal: maybe a touch or two but yeah
23:03 Crono: lel these jacks are easy xD
23:03 juankristal: 02:06:204 (126204|3,126204|2,126296|3,126296|2) - well those might be a bit weird xD
23:04 Crono: nice score btw
23:04 juankristal: 02:13:156 (133156|0,133247|0,133339|0) - and those xD
23:04 juankristal: thanks
23:04 juankristal: but anyways
23:04 juankristal: I hope the best for the map because I would like to see this song in the ranked pool of mania
23:04 juankristal: so good luck with it
23:04 Crono: thanks
23:05 juankristal: that moment where I would like to be a BN
23:05 juankristal: xD
23:05 Crono: feel free to post a this as a MOD xD
23:05 juankristal: lmfao

00:12:607 (12607|2) - This LN should end here 00:13:156 -
00:36:021 to 00:44:802 - In this section, some of the snare sounds have triples, while some has doubles only
01:10:960 (70960|1) - I think this LN should start here 01:10:778 - But you can keep it if you intended this
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want this to be a jack (just my suggestion, can keep yours)
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want to add note here to emphasize the cymbals?
02:14:710 - add 2 notes here to be consistent with the previous part
02:40:046 to 02:44:436 - The snares in this section should be triples
02:51:387 to 03:01:265 - You should add 1note for every cymbal sound in this section

02:27:973 - The measure lines after this point are incorrect ;n; you should add a red line here to fix it (BPM 164, 4/4)

You should take "REOL" out of the tags, since it's in the artist field as well. (Capital letters don't make a difference.) Also, could you explain the source of the "Monstah" tag for me?

How come the OD on EZ is higher than on NM?

EZ needs to be hitsounded before I can bubble ;n;

EZ
lol no hitsounds

NM
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:51:753 -
00:54:680 -
01:01:265 -
01:03:460 -
01:10:046 -
02:30:534 -
02:33:460 -
02:40:046 -
02:42:241 -
00:22:485 (22485|3) - shouldn't this be a clap
01:36:021 (96021|0) - don't think this should be a clap
02:45:534 (165534|2,165899|2,166265|3) - why whistles?

HD
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:15:899 -
00:21:753 -
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:37:851 -
00:42:241 -
01:02:729 -
01:37:119 -
00:57:058 (57058|2) - wrong place for clap, should be at 00:56:875 -
03:03:460 - 03:04:558 - 03:04:924 - 03:08:948 - 03:09:680 - 03:10:412 - 03:12:241 - 03:12:607 - missing whistles

puxtu's MX
00:38:948 (38948|0) - think this is supposed to be soft
01:36:021 (96021|3) - same
01:42:058 (102058|3) - same

Crono's SC
00:19:924 (19924|2) - unneeded clap?
00:37:119 - missing claps v
00:38:582 -
00:53:948 -
02:04:192 -
02:45:899 -
03:01:814 (181814|2) - this should definitely be drum, not soft l0l
soft-hitnormal is used very inconsistently in this diff. I won't point out each inconsistency, but pls try to improve it before I recheck

I would appreciate if you checked each difficulty again for hitsound mistakes! it's a bit sloppy right now

There are a few places where it's hard to hear the snare, but I made judgements based on what would make sense for the drum line as well as what I could hear

EZ
00:12:607 - double for crash?
00:11:875 - it might be better if this LN ends here at the beginning of the next sound
00:33:095 (33095|0,33095|3,33460|2,33460|1,33826|3) - i'm not sure what the purpose of this section is. Maybe you could just follow the previous pattern?
00:50:656 - how come you only use two lanes here?
01:36:021 - it's probably best not to repeat this pattern so many times here. http://puu.sh/uxc2l.png
02:29:345 (149345|3) - this should be on 1/1 snap.
02:33:278 (153278|0) - same
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - these LNs are inconsistent in length with the other LNs. You should end them on the 1/1 snap
02:57:058 (177058|0) - should be on 1/1 snap
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - you need to make these snaps consistent with HD, MX, and SC ;n;

NM
00:36:021 - there should probably be two note here, it's a very strong beat. Or at least one ;n;
00:36:387 - 00:42:241 - 00:51:753 - 00:54:680 - 01:10:046 - 02:40:778 - double for snare?
00:56:875 - 01:53:948 - 02:35:656 - suggest double to follow the pattern
01:52:119 - again, double for the crash (also to follow the pattern)
02:02:729 - this double is inconsistent with the rest of the section, should be a single
02:03:826 - what an omission! I suggest adding a LN
02:11:387 (131387|1) - should be on 1/4 snap
02:23:491 (143491|0,143674|2,143857|0,144040|2) - this rhythm is ill-advised; the strong beats are on the 1/2 snap. I might suggest something like this http://puu.sh/uxdis.jpg (remember to mind the hitsounds)
02:34:009 - missing note? also 02:33:826 - should be a double to follow the pattern and for the crash
02:42:424 - missing note again
03:00:534 - 03:01:265 - 03:02:363 - 03:02:729 - these doubles just seem to be randomly placed. you should either use a regular pattern or only use singles until 03:03:095 -
03:14:802 (194802|2,194848|1) - make consistent with HD, MX, and SC pls
the crashes in this diff are inconsistent. some of them are doubles and some of them are singles. I would really appreciate if you tried to make them more consistent ;n;

HD
00:12:973 -00:15:899 - 00:22:119 - these should be double for consistency
00:19:924 - same, but you might also want to move 00:20:107 (20107|3) - to the first lane to avoid a three-note jack
00:21:021 - 00:21:387 - no reason for triples, i think. May be better to stick with doubles.
00:27:241 - add a single note for consistency with the other chords in the section
00:44:070 (44070|2,44253|3) - these should both be doubles for the kicks
01:09:589 - it's a bit weird that there's no notes here. Can I suggest this? http://puu.sh/uxeg8.jpg (make sure to replace hitsounds)
01:11:143 - this should be a double (for the kick), not 01:11:326 -
01:21:021 - 1/4 doesn't quite fit here. I suggest using one LN instead ;n;
01:25:412 - 01:27:607 - 01:28:339 - possibly triples for consistency with earlier triples?
01:29:070 - missing note i believe
01:30:534 - double for snare? also might want to add a note at 01:30:442 -
02:03:735 - I'm not sure if this jack is appropriate for this level. It seems to be the only 1/4 jack in the whole map ;n;
02:06:753 - to 02:08:582 - looks a bit strange to me that the fourth lane is empty for so long
02:23:765 - I think the double should be here for the snare, not at 02:23:674 -
03:00:899 - should be a double to follow the pattern, i think
03:02:637 - 03:08:674 - 03:12:607 - 03:13:979 - might be better to add notes here for the drums

puxtu's MX
no suggestions

Crono's SC
00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare