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李白也搞不定麼?...
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cube已经搞完了 \:D/ 只是没时间去抓人了kanpakyin wrote:
李白也搞不定麼?...
wow~ let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.
[General]
CLEAR~!
[Easy]
00:17:539 (1) - perhaps you can align this note to (2) diagonally like you did with (3,4) so that the transition from the next note looks smoother during gameplay since it makes a shape?
00:31:118 (1) - some people might mind about this overlap since it's being covered and the slight overlap make the diff look bad IMO. perhaps you can move this up where it can be fully visible for beginners?
00:37:874 (2) - do Ctrl+H for this because the transition is already smooth from the last 2 notes. since it's facing the other way, the flow and transition is broken since it's facing the other way.
01:00:924 (3) - same as above about the flow and transition.
01:09:076 (2) - i can hear a cymbal clash here, so add a finish to go along with it.
01:11:790 (4) - NC here. this is where the lyrics in the song change.
01:20:937 (3) - ^
01:38:922 (3) - i suggest that you use this code so that the slider looks symmetrical.
02:25:704 (4) - how about moving the note here? same reason as 00:31:118 about the overlap.
02:33:170 (1) - same as 01:09:076, but at the beginning.
[Normal]
00:13:467 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll be consistent with (1) since it shows emphasis in the vocals/instrumental.
00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above but just add the whistles since they're only circles.
00:27:050 (4) - maybe flip it the other way so that it'd be easier to get to, and thus increasing the flow for this?
00:36:518 (4) - NC here. same reasons as easy about it. the lyrics change in this part of the song.
00:41:605 (4) - try a stack on (2) for a smoother transition in the diff?
00:48:727 (2,3) - same as 00:13:467.
02:08:753 (5) - same as 00:36:518.
02:12:822 (2,3) - same as 00:14:824.
02:33:170 (2) - finish here. you can hear the cymbals here in this part.
[Hard]
00:13:467 (3) - same as normal.
00:14:527 (5,1) - same as above, but move the whistle from the beginning of (5) to the beginning of (1).
00:16:182 (1) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (1) - ^
00:19:915 (1) - same as above, but move it to the end from the beginning.
00:21:612 (3) - same as 00:13:467.
if you notice, the whistles show emphasis in the guitar.
00:30:779 (6) - add a timing point at the end of this slider. the sampleset sounds too distracting and it might throw off players during gameplay IMO. i suggest something around 20%, if not, no less then 30-35%.
01:13:825 (8) - can you curve this slider, similar to (9)? if you see during gameplay, it looks like a straight slider and from what i see, it's supposed to curve, as if it's taking a slight turn.
01:38:244 - add a 1/2 slider but delete (5) while you do this. it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother during gameplay. i heard a part in the vocals in which that i feel a slider should fit here since there's a hold in it.
02:10:787 (5) - i think that you should straighten this slider because i understand that they're all curved, but the flow in this plays awkwardly during gameplay IMO.
02:33:170 (4) - same as normal.
[Garven-sama~]
00:15:164 (3,4,5) - maybe you can move them like this. when i played this part, the flow here played awkwarly during gameplay for me.
00:59:397 (6) - is there a reason why a finish is there? it sounds distracting and unfitting to this part of the song. i suggest replacing it for a whistle since it's quiet and matches the vocals. if you ignore this, then you should decrease the volume of the finish a bit more so that it doesn't sounds distracting during gameplay.
01:04:327 - perhaps a circle here? i feel that something is missing here to follow up in the vocals/instrumental from (1,2), and it feels as if the flow stopped for some odd reason.
01:07:550 (3) - is the end intentionally at 0%?
02:20:958 (7,8,9) - i like the way how you added the whistles here. from what i see, nice way of showing emphasis in the vocals.
02:28:417 - same as 01:04:327.
[C.Hero]
00:07:362 (5) - i'm thinking a stack on the beginning of the slider for a smoother transition to the song during gameplay. it plays awkwardly here during gameplay IMO.
00:13:467 (2) - same as hard.
00:14:824 (1) - ^, but at the beginning.
00:16:182 (4) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (6) - same as 00:14:824.
02:11:127 (6) - i suggest moving this note down because the spacing would look evened out in this diamond pattern. the DS should be between 1.50-1.60 and i think this would make the flow smoother during gameplay.
03:12:505 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps stacking the ends together might work on the previous combo? same as above, but this time, it's the transition that should increase during gameplay.
03:39:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - - i got an idea for the streams in this combo. you know how you increased the spacing in the last combo? do the same thing here, but for (1-5), use 0.6 and for (6-10), use 0.8 so that flows to the guitar. in other words for every riff, the spacing increases each stream, and i think that would make a nice challenge for players IMO.
04:25:406 (4) - can you do a perfect stack at the ends? personally everytime i see that slider end showing for a bit, i find it a bit distracting for me during gameplay.
04:35:081 (8) - move this to the left, aligning this note to (4,8), that way the flow is smoother during gameplay.
and i guess that's it. whenever you're done, catch me in-game for a re-check :3.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.
[General]
CLEAR~!
[Easy]
00:17:539 (1) - perhaps you can align this note to (2) diagonally like you did with (3,4) so that the transition from the next note looks smoother during gameplay since it makes a shape?
00:31:118 (1) - some people might mind about this overlap since it's being covered and the slight overlap make the diff look bad IMO. perhaps you can move this up where it can be fully visible for beginners?
00:37:874 (2) - do Ctrl+H for this because the transition is already smooth from the last 2 notes. since it's facing the other way, the flow and transition is broken since it's facing the other way.
01:00:924 (3) - same as above about the flow and transition.
01:09:076 (2) - i can hear a cymbal clash here, so add a finish to go along with it.
01:11:790 (4) - NC here. this is where the lyrics in the song change.
01:20:937 (3) - ^
01:38:922 (3) - i suggest that you use this code so that the slider looks symmetrical.
SPOILER
01:47:050 (1) - why not align this note to (3) going down? i feel that if you do this, the flow will increase and it'll be more straightforward then leaving the slider up there IMO. if you ignore this, the perhaps you can flip the slider like this. same reason.424,232,98922,2,0,B|368:248|344:248|344:248|320:288|344:320|344:320|368:320|424:336,2,240
02:25:704 (4) - how about moving the note here? same reason as 00:31:118 about the overlap.
02:33:170 (1) - same as 01:09:076, but at the beginning.
[Normal]
00:13:467 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll be consistent with (1) since it shows emphasis in the vocals/instrumental.
00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above but just add the whistles since they're only circles.
00:27:050 (4) - maybe flip it the other way so that it'd be easier to get to, and thus increasing the flow for this?
00:36:518 (4) - NC here. same reasons as easy about it. the lyrics change in this part of the song.
00:41:605 (4) - try a stack on (2) for a smoother transition in the diff?
00:48:727 (2,3) - same as 00:13:467.
02:08:753 (5) - same as 00:36:518.
02:12:822 (2,3) - same as 00:14:824.
02:33:170 (2) - finish here. you can hear the cymbals here in this part.
[Hard]
00:13:467 (3) - same as normal.
00:14:527 (5,1) - same as above, but move the whistle from the beginning of (5) to the beginning of (1).
00:16:182 (1) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (1) - ^
00:19:915 (1) - same as above, but move it to the end from the beginning.
00:21:612 (3) - same as 00:13:467.
if you notice, the whistles show emphasis in the guitar.
00:30:779 (6) - add a timing point at the end of this slider. the sampleset sounds too distracting and it might throw off players during gameplay IMO. i suggest something around 20%, if not, no less then 30-35%.
01:13:825 (8) - can you curve this slider, similar to (9)? if you see during gameplay, it looks like a straight slider and from what i see, it's supposed to curve, as if it's taking a slight turn.
01:38:244 - add a 1/2 slider but delete (5) while you do this. it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother during gameplay. i heard a part in the vocals in which that i feel a slider should fit here since there's a hold in it.
02:10:787 (5) - i think that you should straighten this slider because i understand that they're all curved, but the flow in this plays awkwardly during gameplay IMO.
02:33:170 (4) - same as normal.
[Garven-sama~]
00:15:164 (3,4,5) - maybe you can move them like this. when i played this part, the flow here played awkwarly during gameplay for me.
SPOILER
00:41:266 (5,6,7) - why not make a triangle out of this like you did with (2,3,4)? i feel that the flow here is broken in this triangle since it branches off to a different kind of triangle during gameplay IMO.420,128,14824,2,0,B|420:208,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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00:59:397 (6) - is there a reason why a finish is there? it sounds distracting and unfitting to this part of the song. i suggest replacing it for a whistle since it's quiet and matches the vocals. if you ignore this, then you should decrease the volume of the finish a bit more so that it doesn't sounds distracting during gameplay.
01:04:327 - perhaps a circle here? i feel that something is missing here to follow up in the vocals/instrumental from (1,2), and it feels as if the flow stopped for some odd reason.
01:07:550 (3) - is the end intentionally at 0%?
02:20:958 (7,8,9) - i like the way how you added the whistles here. from what i see, nice way of showing emphasis in the vocals.
02:28:417 - same as 01:04:327.
[C.Hero]
00:07:362 (5) - i'm thinking a stack on the beginning of the slider for a smoother transition to the song during gameplay. it plays awkwardly here during gameplay IMO.
00:13:467 (2) - same as hard.
00:14:824 (1) - ^, but at the beginning.
00:16:182 (4) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (6) - same as 00:14:824.
02:11:127 (6) - i suggest moving this note down because the spacing would look evened out in this diamond pattern. the DS should be between 1.50-1.60 and i think this would make the flow smoother during gameplay.
03:12:505 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps stacking the ends together might work on the previous combo? same as above, but this time, it's the transition that should increase during gameplay.
03:39:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - - i got an idea for the streams in this combo. you know how you increased the spacing in the last combo? do the same thing here, but for (1-5), use 0.6 and for (6-10), use 0.8 so that flows to the guitar. in other words for every riff, the spacing increases each stream, and i think that would make a nice challenge for players IMO.
04:25:406 (4) - can you do a perfect stack at the ends? personally everytime i see that slider end showing for a bit, i find it a bit distracting for me during gameplay.
04:35:081 (8) - move this to the left, aligning this note to (4,8), that way the flow is smoother during gameplay.
and i guess that's it. whenever you're done, catch me in-game for a re-check :3.
Thanks!Byakugan249 wrote:
[Garven-sama~]
00:15:164 (3,4,5) - maybe you can move them like this. when i played this part, the flow here played awkwarly during gameplay for me.
I find the current iteration better flow-wise - it's aiming straight for the next combo.
00:41:266 (5,6,7) - why not make a triangle out of this like you did with (2,3,4)? i feel that the flow here is broken in this triangle since it branches off to a different kind of triangle during gameplay IMO.
If you listen to the way the musical phrase lilts between essentially the same two notes until the end with "dakara" trailing into the next phrase, that's how I chose to represent it.
00:59:397 (6) - is there a reason why a finish is there? it sounds distracting and unfitting to this part of the song. i suggest replacing it for a whistle since it's quiet and matches the vocals. if you ignore this, then you should decrease the volume of the finish a bit more so that it doesn't sounds distracting during gameplay.
It's there to emphasize the vocals. I do it later in the next chorus as well. I like using the soft finish, and the volume feels good to me. I like a loud part to give a strong emphasis to the phrase.
01:04:327 - perhaps a circle here? i feel that something is missing here to follow up in the vocals/instrumental from (1,2), and it feels as if the flow stopped for some odd reason.
I don't want the 1/2 rhythms to endlessly drone on. It's boring.
01:07:550 (3) - is the end intentionally at 0%?
That helps date how old this map is, haha. Set to 5%.
02:20:958 (7,8,9) - i like the way how you added the whistles here. from what i see, nice way of showing emphasis in the vocals.
They were supposed to be soft whistles emphasizing the guitar, actually. >_>
02:28:417 - same as 01:04:327.
SPOILER
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232,40,125362,1,8,0:0:0
156,12,125532,1,0,0:0:0
80,36,125701,1,8,0:0:0
72,276,126040,5,4,0:0:0
148,252,126719,1,0,0:0:0
224,228,127397,1,0,0:0:0
300,204,128075,1,0,0:0:0
436,116,128753,5,0,0:0:0
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80,52,129770,1,0,0:0:0
80,260,130109,5,0,0:0:0
156,232,130279,1,8,0:0:0
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260,128,130618,1,0,0:0:0
320,180,130787,1,8,0:0:0
376,236,130957,1,8,0:0:0
432,296,131127,2,0,B|464:280|504:232|464:184|432:168,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,292,132144,5,0,0:0:0
376,88,132822,1,2,0:0:0
64,56,133839,6,0,B|132:60|104:164|176:168,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,276,134517,1,0,0:0:0
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48,108,136382,1,2,0:0:0
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172,384,137738,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,137907,1,8,0:0:0
340,384,138077,1,0,0:0:0
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496,136,138585,1,8,0:0:0
336,288,138924,2,0,B|292:200,1,96.0000022888184,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,96,139263,1,8,0:0:0
176,48,139433,1,0,0:0:0
104,92,139602,6,0,B|32:156|32:156|32:252,1,192.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,320,140111,1,0,0:0:0
164,352,140280,1,0,0:0:0
244,324,140450,1,0,0:0:0
332,324,140619,1,8,0:0:0
412,288,140789,1,0,0:0:0
448,208,140958,2,0,B|472:116,1,96.0000022888184,2|0,2:2|0:0,0:0:0
388,136,141297,2,0,B|388:40,1,96.0000022888184,2|0,2:2|0:0,0:0:0
328,208,141636,2,0,B|304:116,1,96.0000022888184,2|2,2:2|0:0,0:0:0
256,44,141975,5,8,0:0:0
204,116,142145,1,0,0:0:0
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392,216,144518,1,8,0:0:0
256,8,144857,5,0,0:0:0
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256,288,145704,1,0,0:0:0
340,272,145874,1,0,0:0:0
412,224,146043,1,8,0:0:0
460,152,146213,1,0,0:0:0
448,68,146382,5,8,0:0:0
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264,304,147229,1,0,0:0:0
416,284,147399,1,8,0:0:0
472,220,147568,1,8,0:0:0
388,200,147738,6,0,B|296:104|232:80|192:88,1,191.999994140625,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,72,148247,1,0,0:0:0
48,296,148587,1,0,0:0:0
60,212,148756,1,8,0:0:0
124,156,148926,1,0,0:0:0
180,224,149096,2,0,B|224:280|296:280|360:256,1,191.999994140625,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,88,149775,2,0,B|224:32|296:32|360:56,1,191.999994140625,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,348,150455,6,0,B|309:285|309:285|288:298|238:303|214:269,1,191.999994140625,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,84,150964,2,0,B|230:147|230:147|257:133|300:132|325:165,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,216,151474,1,0,0:0:0
352,240,151644,1,0,0:0:0
360,244,151728,1,8,0:0:0
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112,52,152493,5,0,0:0:0
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104,280,153002,1,0,0:0:0
172,324,153170,2,0,B|284:372|408:328,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,288,153848,1,0,0:0:0
332,136,154187,1,0,0:0:0
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176,348,155458,1,0,0:0:0
284,300,155712,1,0,0:0:0
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356,84,156560,2,0,B|312:16|224:0|148:76,1,240
100,136,157238,1,0,0:0:0
60,204,157407,1,0,0:0:0
60,284,157577,1,2,0:0:0
96,356,157746,1,0,0:0:0
164,316,157916,1,0,0:0:0
232,276,158085,1,0,0:0:0
232,356,158255,1,4,0:0:0
300,316,158424,1,0,0:0:0
368,276,158594,6,0,B|440:236|456:148,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,60,159103,2,0,B|276:40|256:20|256:20|236:40|172:64,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,112,159611,1,8,0:0:0
36,224,159781,1,8,0:0:0
34,231,159865,1,0,0:0:0
32,240,159950,2,0,B|12:304|12:304|68:280|104:316,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,360,160459,1,4,0:0:0
304,336,160628,1,0,0:0:0
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336,288,172146,5,12,0:0:0
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256,192,173502,12,4,174859,0:0:0
Hey, I just went over the timing a bit, just in case, and it looks fine now more or less.
Though, I know that I already made it for you, I had some small doubts about certain things, but because of consistency it would be good to change.
04:52:213 - change to 137 bpm
04:52:886 - 4/4
04:53:513 - 4/4
04:54:211 - 4/4
04:54:840 - 4/4
04:55:715 - 4/4
^ I guess the signature isn't that important since you already spam red lines, but whatever haha.
Also one more thing: 02:51:463 (2) - this ends on a wrong tick.
(no kd)
Though, I know that I already made it for you, I had some small doubts about certain things, but because of consistency it would be good to change.
04:52:213 - change to 137 bpm
04:52:886 - 4/4
04:53:513 - 4/4
04:54:211 - 4/4
04:54:840 - 4/4
04:55:715 - 4/4
^ I guess the signature isn't that important since you already spam red lines, but whatever haha.
Also one more thing: 02:51:463 (2) - this ends on a wrong tick.
(no kd)
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot! I'll fix them once get a pc.
This is from my cellphone :3 (the auto mail hehe
This is from my cellphone :3 (the auto mail hehe
Topic Starter
the [i] things are really difficult to read x_x, hope your cold get better now.Byakugan249 wrote:
wow~ let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.
[General]
CLEAR~!
[Easy]
00:17:539 (1) - perhaps you can align this note to (2) diagonally like you did with (3,4) so that the transition from the next note looks smoother during gameplay since it makes a shape? I don't tend to do that.
00:31:118 (1) - some people might mind about this overlap since it's being covered and the slight overlap make the diff look bad IMO. perhaps you can move this up where it can be fully visible for beginners? slidertrack is clear and the timing gap is really huge.
00:37:874 (2) - do Ctrl+H for this because the transition is already smooth from the last 2 notes. since it's facing the other way, the flow and transition is broken since it's facing the other way. If you mean this.
01:00:924 (3) - same as above about the flow and transition. ^
01:09:076 (2) - i can hear a cymbal clash here, so add a finish to go along with it. done. also in other diffs
01:11:790 (4) - NC here. this is where the lyrics in the song change. no, it's in the middle of lyrics
01:20:937 (3) - ^ ^ and it's still a short combo
01:38:922 (3) - i suggest that you use this code so that the slider looks symmetrical. I don't mean to do that.SPOILER01:47:050 (1) - why not align this note to (3) going down? i feel that if you do this, the flow will increase and it'll be more straightforward then leaving the slider up there IMO. if you ignore this, the perhaps you can flip the slider like this. same reason. ok424,232,98922,2,0,B|368:248|344:248|344:248|320:288|344:320|344:320|368:320|424:336,2,240
02:25:704 (4) - how about moving the note here? same reason as 00:31:118 about the overlap. no
02:33:170 (1) - same as 01:09:076, but at the beginning. done, also in other diffs.
[Normal]
00:13:467 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll be consistent with (1) since it shows emphasis in the vocals/instrumental. no, and did some change about whistle consistent in Hard diff.
00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above but just add the whistles since they're only circles. no
00:27:050 (4) - maybe flip it the other way so that it'd be easier to get to, and thus increasing the flow for this? it's not hard and flow good.
00:36:518 (4) - NC here. same reasons as easy about it. the lyrics change in this part of the song. that's for pattern as you see.
00:41:605 (4) - try a stack on (2) for a smoother transition in the diff? no. I seldom use stacks in this situation.
[Hard]
00:30:779 (6) - add a timing point at the end of this slider. the sampleset sounds too distracting and it might throw off players during gameplay IMO. i suggest something around 20%, if not, no less then 30-35%. that's intended.
01:13:825 (8) - can you curve this slider, similar to (9)? if you see during gameplay, it looks like a straight slider and from what i see, it's supposed to curve, as if it's taking a slight turn. no.
01:38:244 - add a 1/2 slider but delete (5) while you do this. it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother during gameplay. i heard a part in the vocals in which that i feel a slider should fit here since there's a hold in it. in fact this note is to make things smoother. I dont feel like to leave a stop before 01:38:922 (1)
02:10:787 (5) - i think that you should straighten this slider because i understand that they're all curved, but the flow in this plays awkwardly during gameplay IMO. no.
02:33:170 (4) - same as normal.
[C.Hero]
00:07:362 (5) - i'm thinking a stack on the beginning of the slider for a smoother transition to the song during gameplay. it plays awkwardly here during gameplay IMO. no
02:11:127 (6) - i suggest moving this note down because the spacing would look evened out in this diamond pattern. the DS should be between 1.50-1.60 and i think this would make the flow smoother during gameplay. I don't tended to make that pattern.
03:12:505 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps stacking the ends together might work on the previous combo? same as above, but this time, it's the transition that should increase during gameplay. that would make the spacing afterwards too much.
03:39:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - - i got an idea for the streams in this combo. you know how you increased the spacing in the last combo? do the same thing here, but for (1-5), use 0.6 and for (6-10), use 0.8 so that flows to the guitar. in other words for every riff, the spacing increases each stream, and i think that would make a nice challenge for players IMO. it's not good in this circlesize and confusing.
04:25:406 (4) - can you do a perfect stack at the ends? personally everytime i see that slider end showing for a bit, i find it a bit distracting for me during gameplay. I was trying.
04:35:081 (8) - move this to the left, aligning this note to (4,8), that way the flow is smoother during gameplay. ok
and i guess that's it. whenever you're done, catch me in-game for a re-check :3.
ahh my cold? i feel a lot better, and in my future mods, i changed the text for the suggestions :3.
怒連著割れたリンゴ一起搞♂了! 
Topic Starter
再见 已经被告知周末才能看了Pokie wrote:
怒連著割れたリンゴ一起搞♂了!
Topic Starter
waiting for how widescreen bg would go now. back to wip
aww i was gonna re-check this .
oh well whenever you're ready...
.oh well whenever you're ready...
Colin, King of WIP.
Garven wrote:
Colin, King of WIP.
Especially with a 300 star map that has like 1 minute of it mapped out of 4 minutes.
Apparently I also starred it a crap ton of time :<
Apparently I also starred it a crap ton of time :<
and?
Heatherfield wrote:
and?
Topic Starter
できた！
Took you long enough. Bah, I can't stay mad. It's done! ヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ
God map!ヽ(・∀・)ノ
get this map ranked already ;_;
yo i'm here for the re-check .
[Easy]
01:09:076 (2) - consider unstacking this because i feel that it'd be easier for beginners if it's unstacked. the notes would be fully visible for beginners during gameplay.
01:24:674 (2) - for this one, you should follow the DS so that it wouldn't throw off beginners in their sense of rhythm during gameplay.
[Normal]
01:18:057 (3,4) - remove the claps at the end because to me, it broke the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it sounds unfitting to follow as well IMO.
02:32:493 (1) - for this one, i suggest using the drum sampleset and adding a clap at the beginning/end and the repeat. it'll show emphasis in the drums in the BGM during gameplay.
[C.Hero]
02:54:520 (1) - after discussing with the staff on this slider and getting opinions, i think it'd be readable if you can avoid the overlap from the beginning and the end like this. the code is in the box if you can't do this.
and that's all or now.
.[Easy]
01:09:076 (2) - consider unstacking this because i feel that it'd be easier for beginners if it's unstacked. the notes would be fully visible for beginners during gameplay.
01:24:674 (2) - for this one, you should follow the DS so that it wouldn't throw off beginners in their sense of rhythm during gameplay.
[Normal]
01:18:057 (3,4) - remove the claps at the end because to me, it broke the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it sounds unfitting to follow as well IMO.
02:32:493 (1) - for this one, i suggest using the drum sampleset and adding a clap at the beginning/end and the repeat. it'll show emphasis in the drums in the BGM during gameplay.
[C.Hero]
02:54:520 (1) - after discussing with the staff on this slider and getting opinions, i think it'd be readable if you can avoid the overlap from the beginning and the end like this. the code is in the box if you can't do this.
SPOILER
256,192,174520,6,0,B|320:280|352:224|312:160,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
and that's all or now.
Topic Starter
updated!Byakugan249 wrote:
yo i'm here for the re-check
[Easy]
01:09:076 (2) - consider unstacking this because i feel that it'd be easier for beginners if it's unstacked. the notes would be fully visible for beginners during gameplay.
01:24:674 (2) - for this one, you should follow the DS so that it wouldn't throw off beginners in their sense of rhythm during gameplay.
done.
[Normal]
01:18:057 (3,4) - remove the claps at the end because to me, it broke the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it sounds unfitting to follow as well IMO. umm, I don't think removing them can be better. added a clap on the repeat on 3, home that could fix something.
02:32:493 (1) - for this one, i suggest using the drum sampleset and adding a clap at the beginning/end and the repeat. it'll show emphasis in the drums in the BGM during gameplay. normal-hitnormal is enough for that imo.
[C.Hero]
02:54:520 (1) - after discussing with the staff on this slider and getting opinions, i think it'd be readable if you can avoid the overlap from the beginning and the end like this. the code is in the box if you can't do this.SPOILER256,192,174520,6,0,B|320:280|352:224|312:160,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
changed the track a bit.
and that's all or now.
Everything looks good to me, so here's your bubble back
好
終於準備送走了嗎owo
2年历史见证，叼爆炸
周末還沒rank的話我就來看一下 /w\
I don't get why supercell has so broken BPM.... but anyway seems fine.
Ranked.
Ranked.
2年历史 见证奇迹
finally!
owo
Wait wait I wanna remap my di- j/k It's about time, Colin. You're bad at predictions, btw. 1 year my ass.