1. Another (4,73 stars, 184 notes)
2. Easy (1,27 stars, 49 notes)
3. Extra (5,27 stars, 203 notes)
4. Hyper (3,55 stars, 137 notes)
5. Insane (4,08 stars, 178 notes)
6. Normal (1,97 stars, 82 notes)
7. Rararagi (6,03 stars, 223 notes)
8. Shmik's Advanced (2,32 stars, 98 notes)

wajinshu wrote:

[General]
Отключи коунтдовни и вайдскрин

wajinshu wrote:

[Easy]
00:20:074 (2,3) -

open

00:21:274 (3) - NC
00:35:074 (3,1) - Не делай стаки в изиках
00:36:874 (2,1) - Бланкет
00:42:874 (1,3) - Стак сделай

wajinshu wrote:

[Normal]
00:11:674 (1,2) - Такие стаки в нормале не делай сложно прочитать новичкам
00:27:874 (1,2) - ^
00:32:674 (1,2) - ^
00:34:474 (4,5) - ^
00:46:474 (3,4) - ^

wajinshu wrote:

00:25:474 (2,3) - Странное флоу

Сделай вот так

Дс слишком большой уменьш до 1.2 или 1.1

Удачи

Namki wrote:

[General]
Ну что ж ты, комбоцвета-то поставь кастомные.
И вайдскрин отруби.

Namki wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:074 (2) - не люблю я слайдеры, заканчивающиеся на белые тики, тебе ведь нужно выделить этот белый тик.
00:41:674 (2,1) - такие оверлапы не приветствуются в низших диффах.
00:47:074 (5) - вот, с большого белого тика хорошо бы начать объект или поставить серкл.

Namki wrote:

[Normal]
00:06:874 (1,2,3) - вот мне два застраканных серлка не нравится, застакай один, как ты делал после этого. вот так
00:14:074 - не самая лучшая идея изменять СВ в нормале. Хотя это изменение подходит.
00:42:274 (1) - а вот такое может быть анранкабельно. Я про изменение СВ.
00:48:874 (2,3) - предлагаю так.

Namki wrote:

[Hard]
200 бпм D:
00:28:474 (1,2) - между ними поправь спейсинг, должен же быть 1.4х.
00:06:874 (1,2) - странный антиджамп, по музыке его там быть не должно.
00:24:874 (7,1) - между ними маленький спейсинг.
00:34:174 (4,1) - здесь 1.7 а, 00:38:974 (5,1) - здесь 1.4, сделай одинаковыми, ведь момент в треке одинаков, а спейсинг различается.

Namki wrote:

[Insane]
00:47:074 (1,2,3,4) - как-то это слишком экстримально, даже если там 1/6.
Крутая диффа!

1. 00:35:674 (1) - Touch the HP bar, reduce it a bit
2. 00:46:474 (4,5) - I'll go for just a slider here. The next pattern is hard enough, better prepare for it with just a slider just before.
3. 00:50:674 (1) - Wrong spacing (and bad flow) Ctrl+G!

1. 00:32:674 (1) - Would be cool if you map the downbeat... It's the beginning of the kiai besides!

1. 00:07:474 (2) - Would suggest to ctrl+j for better flow
2. 00:12:274 (3,4,5,6) - I think this is really hard for a hard diff tbh, there's so little feedback in the music to prevent it...
3. 00:20:374 (6) - I'd rather place it around x166y292 it plays really bad when the next slider is at the tail I think..
4. 00:38:074 (2,3) - I'd go in this direction for better flow http://puu.sh/n43IS/94d02a34ee.jpg
5. 00:38:974 (5) - Around x400 y224, feels a bit high spaced! Maybe it's just me
6. 00:47:974 (3,4,1) - Really straight flow, not sure if I like it personally I'd go for somethis like this http://puu.sh/n43Oz/888e7108f0.jpg flows better to me.

1. 00:19:474 (5) - Curve it for better looking flow? http://puu.sh/n43SF/4888f6b7ef.jpg
2. 00:25:474 (6) - Place it around x344y176 I really don't like when the next slider is placed just under the reverse, it really plays bad I'm not kidding!
3. 00:29:374 - You miss some pretty strong notes here I think
4. 00:41:374 (4) - ctrl+j for better flow?
5. 00:42:874 (3) - NC cause new sv
6. 00:50:074 (8) - NC? Pretty strong

1. 00:24:574 (4) - NC? You did it here 00:20:374 (1,2) -
2. 00:32:374 (4) - NC needed cause it your constant high spacing creates here an anti jump!
3. 00:39:874 (3) - x46y110 (lol wasnt perfectly aligned and I could see it !!)
4. 00:42:274 (3) - NC cause new SV
5. 00:48:874 (3,5) - I'd stick on the NCs going by 2 it follows the music pretty well
6. 00:49:924 (6) - Tricky :c
7. 00:50:674 (2) - NC?

1. 00:17:074 (2) - NC goes here not here 00:16:774 (1) - (readability ><) you did it here 00:21:874 (1) -
2. 00:26:374 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:23:674 (1,2) - Would curve those for more flow http://puu.sh/n44ru/f1cbe4bfcc.jpg

1. 00:42:574 (2) - NC
2. 00:42:874 (3) - ^

1. 00:42:574 (2) - NC xD
2. 00:44:874 (4) - I'd put NC here instead of 00:44:974 (1) - here for readability
3. 00:45:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Good luck

Yales wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:35:674 (1) - Touch the HP bar, reduce it a bit
2. 00:46:474 (4,5) - I'll go for just a slider here. The next pattern is hard enough, better prepare for it with just a slider just before.
3. 00:50:674 (1) - Wrong spacing (and bad flow) Ctrl+G!

Yales wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:32:674 (1) - Would be cool if you map the downbeat... It's the beginning of the kiai besides!

Yales wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:07:474 (2) - Would suggest to ctrl+j for better flow
2. 00:12:274 (3,4,5,6) - I think this is really hard for a hard diff tbh, there's so little feedback in the music to prevent it...
3. 00:20:374 (6) - I'd rather place it around x166y292 it plays really bad when the next slider is at the tail I think..
4. 00:38:074 (2,3) - I'd go in this direction for better flow http://puu.sh/n43IS/94d02a34ee.jpg
5. 00:38:974 (5) - Around x400 y224, feels a bit high spaced! Maybe it's just me
6. 00:47:974 (3,4,1) - Really straight flow, not sure if I like it personally I'd go for somethis like this http://puu.sh/n43Oz/888e7108f0.jpg flows better to me.

Really fun diff

Yales wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:25:474 (6) - Place it around x344y176 I really don't like when the next slider is placed just under the reverse, it really plays bad I'm not kidding!
2. 00:42:874 (3) - NC cause new sv
3. 00:50:074 (8) - NC? Pretty strong

Cool diff too

Yales wrote:

1. 00:19:474 (5) - Curve it for better looking flow? http://puu.sh/n43SF/4888f6b7ef.jpg
2. 00:29:374 - You miss some pretty strong notes here I think
3. 00:41:374 (4) - ctrl+j for better flow?

Yales wrote:

[Another]

1. 1. 00:24:574 (4) - NC? You did it here 00:20:374 (1,2) -
   2. 00:32:374 (4) - NC needed cause it your constant high spacing creates here an anti jump!
   3. 00:39:874 (3) - x46y110 (lol wasnt perfectly aligned and I could see it !!)
   4. 00:42:274 (3) - NC cause new SV
   5. 00:48:874 (3,5) - I'd stick on the NCs going by 2 it follows the music pretty well
   6. 00:49:924 (6) - Tricky :c
   7. 00:50:674 (2) - NC?

Yales wrote:

[Extra]

1. 00:17:074 (2) - NC goes here not here 00:16:774 (1) - (readability ><) you did it here 00:21:874 (1) -
2. 00:26:374 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:23:674 (1,2) - Would curve those for more flow http://puu.sh/n44ru/f1cbe4bfcc.jpg

Yales wrote:

[Shiraragi]

1. 00:42:574 (2) - NC
2. 00:42:874 (3) - ^

Yales wrote:

[Mararagi]

1. 00:42:574 (2) - NC xD
2. 00:44:874 (4) - I'd put NC here instead of 00:44:974 (1) - here for readability

Yales wrote:

1. 00:45:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Good luck

1. HP 7 is way too high, HP 5.5 or HP 6.
2. OD 8 is too high in my opinion for a song under 4.5 SR, consider OD 7.5.
3. 00:07:774 (4,1) - This is a rather large jump for no apparent reason in the song. I recommend CTRL-G'ing the slider and curving it to blanket 00:07:174 (2) - this a bit.
4. 00:18:874 (3) - I don't like how you ignored the "ra" here by making it a slider rather than 3 1/4th notes.
5. 00:24:574 (4) - This is incorrectly mapped, its actually 1/6th notes and should look this like.
6. 00:25:174 (5) - ^
7. 00:29:974 (4,5,6,7) - These are also 1/6ths actually.
   
   At this point, I'm going to stop modding this because it looks like you have a lot of timing errors in the map itself. Call me back when that stuff is fixed (you can do that via PM or in-game.) Also, as a general note, a lot of the song appears to be 1/6th rather than the 1/8th you've mapped it in, so... you'll probably have to remap every difficulty.
   
   Another quick example. Around 13 seconds you have a 1/8th stream mapped thats actually a 1/12th stream. It should be this.

CrypticMech wrote:

Ehh, here from #modreqs - this needs a bit of work

[Insane]

1. HP 7 is way too high, HP 5.5 or HP 6.
2. OD 8 is too high in my opinion for a song under 4.5 SR, consider OD 7.5.
3. 00:07:774 (4,1) - This is a rather large jump for no apparent reason in the song. I recommend CTRL-G'ing the slider and curving it to blanket 00:07:174 (2) - this a bit.
4. 00:18:874 (3) - I don't like how you ignored the "ra" here by making it a slider rather than 3 1/4th notes.
5. 00:24:574 (4) - This is incorrectly mapped, its actually 1/6th notes and should look this like.
6. 00:25:174 (5) - ^
7. 00:29:974 (4,5,6,7) - These are also 1/6ths actually.
   
   At this point, I'm going to stop modding this because it looks like you have a lot of timing errors in the map itself. Call me back when that stuff is fixed (you can do that via PM or in-game.) Also, as a general note, a lot of the song appears to be 1/6th rather than the 1/8th you've mapped it in, so... you'll probably have to remap every difficulty.
   
   Another quick example. Around 13 seconds you have a 1/8th stream mapped thats actually a 1/12th stream. It should be this.

09kami wrote:

[General]

• 
  
  M4M
  my map : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/881416
  
  Tag add :Nico Nico Douga
  
  [Mararagi]

1. 00:24:574 (4,5,6,1) - maybe it should be in sync with this place. 00:25:174 (2,3,4,1) -
   
2. 00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - for the 1/12 slider
   
3. 00:29:374 (4,5,6) - does not conform to this difficulty
   
4. 00:33:774 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - for the 1/6 slider
   
5. 00:39:274 (1,2,1,2) - for the 1/6 slider
   
6. 00:45:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - does not conform to this difficulty
   
   [Shiraragi]
   
   Only the highest degree of difficulty of the name of the custom
   
7. 00:34:674 (1) - no nc
   
8. 00:37:224 - add cirle
   
   [Extra]
   
9. 00:17:974 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - jumping doesn't look like a law
   
10. 00:20:674 (3,4) - change position
11. 
    [Another]
    
12. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - To reduce the angle of the jump
    
    [Insane]
    
13. 00:23:074 (1,2,3,4,1) - To reduce the angle of the jump
    
    [Hard]
    
14. 00:41:074 (3) - Be covered in
    
15. 00:47:674 (1,2,3,4) - In hard, this ds is very dangerous

09kami wrote:

[General]

• 
  
  M4M
  my map : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/881416 done, sir
  
  Tag add :Nico Nico Douga done, sir
  
  [Mararagi]

1. 00:24:574 (4,5,6,1) - maybe it should be in sync with this place. 00:25:174 (2,3,4,1) - I think that my version looks nice
   
2. 00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - for the 1/12 slider You can show how it will look like?
   
3. 00:29:374 (4,5,6) - does not conform to this difficulty fixed
   
4. 00:33:774 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - for the 1/6 slider ok, fixed ;(
   
5. 00:39:274 (1,2,1,2) - for the 1/6 slider fixed ;(
   
6. 00:45:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - does not conform to this difficulty fixed ;(
   
   [Shiraragi]
   
   Only the highest degree of difficulty of the name of the custom fixed
   
7. 00:34:674 (1) - no nc fixed
   
8. 00:37:224 - add cirle lol, I think it will be difficult for the passage
   
   [Extra]
   
9. 00:17:974 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - jumping doesn't look like a law why not? I think, just fine, it's the Extra
   
10. 00:20:674 (3,4) - change position well, I think it does not look very
    
    [Another]
    
11. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - To reduce the angle of the jump fixed
    
    [Insane]
    
12. 00:23:074 (1,2,3,4,1) - To reduce the angle of the jump fixed
    
    [Hard]
    
13. 00:41:074 (3) - Be covered in fixed
    
14. 00:47:674 (1,2,3,4) - In hard, this ds is very dangerous fixed

JustGreedy wrote:

[Hard]

00:36:874 (5) - Было бы лучше поместить эту ноту под предыдущий слайдер
00:33:874 (3) - ^
00:38:974 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:44:374 (4) - x188 y44

[Another]

00:24:574 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/n5hC6/a8a96c89fb.jpg
00:26:224 (4,5) - Думаю, это слишком большой джамп для этого диффикла
00:45:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+Shift+S (сделай меньше)

-Tochi wrote:

• 
  

  General

1. Inconsistency in ComboColours. once I tried
   
2. Video file has an audio stream: araragi-san.mp4 fixed

• 
  

  Mararagi

1. 00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - Move to x:36 y:176 so the end of the stacks with 00:14:974 (4,5,6,7) - doesn't look too messy like that. fixed
2. 00:17:824 (2,3,1,2) - This looks confusing to play and it breaks the flow, but i can feel that you won't change it lol. you are absolutely right!
3. 00:22:624 (4,5,6,1) - Same as i said before about this. Same for the others like this. ^
4. 00:19:774 (4,5,6,1) - This spaced jump stream-to-slider flow very awkward, try to Ctrl+G the slider and move it a bit more down. Would be a lot better to play like the other part like this. fixed
5. 00:23:074 (2) - Move this to x:401 y:233 would flow better since the spacing before was too low. fixed

• 
  

  Expert

1. 00:16:624 (2,3) - This spacing could actually be a little bigger, try doing a zig-zag like: http://puu.sh/n5Ctg/25b0b2dc06.jpg Feels more satisfying to the music. fixed
2. 00:17:824 (2,3,4) - This is really hard to hit, i recommend to either stack it or make it easier to hit. fixed
3. 00:25:174 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is most likely the same as here 00:25:024 (1,2) - which can confuse people, try to make it more clear that it's a 1/4 double by moving it closer to the slider. fixed
4. 00:32:524 (4,5) - This is overmapped since there's no sound at the exactly part. you should make it 1/6 with only to circles like: http://puu.sh/n5CNT/f53656791a.jpg And to make it more clear that it's 1/6, try spacing it closer to the next circle and further from the one before. probably fixed

• 
  

  Extra

1. 00:32:749 (4) - Delete since it's overmapped (no supporting sound). fixed
2. 00:32:524 (2) - This should be 1/6 on here 00:32:574 - there's no sound at the 1/4 white line. Remember to make the spacing consistent.probably fixed

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:06:874 (1,2) - Make it a slider so it fits as a pattern with the other sliders. fixed
2. 00:35:074 (5) - NC here? Easier to read like that imo. fixed
3. 00:35:674 (1,2,3) - There's some beats here you could map too, because i don't think the long slider fits here unless it's a Normal or Easy, but it isn't. fixed
4. 00:39:874 (3) - Same as the other part like this. fixed
5. 00:44:874 (1,2) - The only DSed 1/6 circle before a slider in the map, i would stack it on the slider's head to fit with the rest of the song. fixed

• 
  

  Feedback

  
  Nice map good luck!

1. 00:08:074 (1) - Fix the blanket around the 2 on the slider end. The easiest way to make a perfect blanket is to position your cursor such a way that you can see the approach circle of the 2 (I used the time 00:08:824 -) and then instead of using one point to adjust the slider (like you are) use two. The second one helps you get a more precise and pretty curve.
2. 00:10:174 (4) - Reposition to sit kind of between the 1 and 2. I personally liked the coords x132||y316.
3. 00:10:474 (1) - Blanket this underneath the starting slider end for 00:09:274 (3) - that.
4. 00:14:674 (3) - I can of like this note better as a circle rather than a slider, purely because it eliminates that awkward rhythm you've created with the slider end. An alternative to this (if you really want to keep the slider) is to soften the slider end.
5. 00:18:574 (2) - Blanket the end of the underneath that triplet from the previous combo.
6. 00:28:474 (1,2) - So for these two sliders I like the rhythm they have, but they should probably land ont he snares rather than the blue ticks (the snares are on the red ticks).
7. 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - Lets talk about this rhythm a bit. So earlier on in this section (which is probably my favorite part of the song because its just so much fun to play) you followed what I believe is the trumpet. This is really blatant here: 00:33:874 (1,2,3,4) -. However, this section is pretty challenging rhythmically because if you map it incorrectly you're missing some important beats - so on an Insane, you need to be consistent with what you follow, the trumpet and the bass, just the bass, or just the trumpet, maybe even the vocals? So if you're following the trumpet here: 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - then there is a trumpet note on the red tick. If you're following the trumpet and the bass then you still need to add that note on the red tick. If you're following the vocals, then its fine as is. (I recommend not changing this actually, but it needs to be addressed as a learning experience mostly.)
8. 00:42:574 (2) - This slider makes me break a lot. Its kind of a fast jump to get on it then it goes pretty fast in the opposite direction of your jump. I'm typically fine with sliders like these on higher difficulties, but it seems a bit extreme for an Insane.
9. 00:47:974 (2,3) - Re-position the 2 and 3 with the same DS you were using for these jumps so that the 3 blankets 00:47:074 (1) - that.
   
   Overall, this diff is tons of fun to play.

1. Lets talk about inconsistencies in distance spacing on parts of the song that are very similar and should have the same DS. These notes 00:06:874 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - have a DS of 1.9, which is cool. I think its a bit extreme for an opening but its not entirely all that difficult to play... so you could keep it. (I'd still look for better alternatives though.) Anyway, then you go into the sliders which are about 1.8 DS away 00:09:274 (1,2,1,2) - and are also significantly easier to play than your 1,2 notes earlier. That doesn't really sit right with me when they have the same intensity and sound. I really commend reworking this first small section (just up to the preview point).
2. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hello, Satan wants his pattern back. As a person who actually plays these kind of starred maps for consistent FC's, it totally cramped up my hand (it could be because I hadn't warmed up yet and this was my first map of the day). I just feel like something better could go here. I'd also like to point out that the 3 may be better than the slider, because the 4 is actually being placed on a "shh" which is kind of weird to me, personally.
3. 00:31:774 (2) - Blanket that 3 from the previous combo, or offset it a bit more. You've been mostly offsetting your potential blankets in this diff, which I like, so maybe continue that here instead of a blanket.
4. 00:41:224 - You should really put a note here, the trumpet is strong.
5. 00:41:824 - ^
6. 00:42:574 (2) - You have the same issue with this slider as you did in the previous diff. you're going perpendicular with your flow, and in the opposite direction, and because of the SV it just causes a lot of annoying slider breaks. Not to mention that for this one the transition to the next slider 00:42:874 (1) - is really brutal and I hate it. I don't think this is meant to be so difficult, and tbh I'd just CTRL+G that next slider.
7. 00:47:674 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hello Satan v2. This is like an unnecessarily hard Kneesocks ending, with a bit less thought put into it. So lets break this down a bit. From 00:47:674 (1) - here to 00:48:124 (2) - here shes saying a certain type of araragi. Then from 00:48:274 (1) - here to 00:48:724 (2) - here shes saying another type of araragi. Same for 00:48:874 (1) - here to 00:49:324 (2) - here. So, my current issue I have with this jump set is that the distance spacing in the actual "araragis" are different, which shouldn't be the case (in my opinion). What I think you should do is keep these: 00:47:674 (1,2,1,2) - and then change everything after. Make sure to keep the DS for each "aragi" the same and try to keep them similar-ish to have a bit of pattern going.
   
   We done here.

1. 00:09:874 (3) - Make another triangle with this one, the current pattern here doesn't make much sense.
2. 00:10:474 (1,2) - Theres no reason to have these two sliders here when you've been doing the 1,2 jump then 3 slider pattern. Keep your patterns consistent, especially when they only repeat 4 times.
3. 00:16:474 (1,2,3) - So quite a few popular mappers do this, where they change their distance spacing in a series of almost linear jumps. I'm not a huge fan of it and I'd advise changing it, but clearly its rankable so thats up to you.
4. 00:17:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - Satanic jump pattern v3. This pattern really doesn't make much sense. You have a vertical jump followed by a sharp angle that takes you to two horizontal jumps. Its not very fun for the user to play and I'd advise reworking them.
5. 00:17:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Everyone needs a compliment every once in a while, and I absolutely love these jumps and how they fit with the music, good job here.
6. 00:20:974 (4) - Go ahead and blanket this underneath the the slider head of 00:20:074 (4) - .
7. 00:21:274 (1,2,3) - I'd like if these were spaced the same as the previous time she says the word (idunknowjapanese).
8. 00:21:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - These aren't as bad as Satanic jump pattern v3, but they are a bit annoying to play, I'd call it Lil' Lucifer pattern v1. Also, you don't NEED to change it, but I still think you can do something better here.
9. 00:26:074 (1,2,3) - ^
10. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
11. Now as a quick note, this is becoming important to me (consistency) in an Extra diff because a lot of playing Extras and higher comes from pattern reading. If you aren't consistent with patterns in your map, then it becomes annoying for the player to play. Sure, non-consistent Extras are rankable and have even been ranked in the past two weeks, but as a mapper you should be pushing for something above the bare-minimum (at least in my opinion).
12. 00:27:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - We found Satanic jumps v4, these are just really bad and should be changed, I don't have much to say about it.
13. 00:41:674 (3,4,5,6,1) - Like consistency in patterns, consistency in distance spacing is even more important. I don't really get why these are so spread out.
14. 00:42:574 (2,1) - I'm going to point these out again.
15. 00:50:074 (1) - Blanket this on 00:48:424 (2) - that.
    
    Okay, not as bad as Another actually, but not as good as Insane IMO.

1. 00:15:424 (8) - This note doesn't exist, remove it.
2. 00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent DS'd stream where the intensity didn't change from the previous stream.
3. 00:16:924 (4) - This note doesn't exist either, the trumpet falls on a different beat.
4. 00:17:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really dislike these jump patterns tbh. You should get a mod in here thats good with jump patterns and get them to nazi mod all of your jump patterns.
5. 00:17:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is entirely random and doesn't fit the intensity of the song.
6. 00:20:574 (3,4) - Why the stream jump here? It makes no sense.
7. 00:21:274 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Why, did you stop trying? Firstly, you've completely changed your color combos here for no reason. Second, 00:21:724 (2) - this note doesn't exist. Finally, it makes no sense again.
   
   I'm going to stop here again, because this one is a bit too random for my tastes. While the other have a possibility of being ranked with a bit more work and some more experienced mods, this one is really far off from being rankable just because it structurally makes 0 sense to me.

1. This really needs a lot of work, try applying some of my suggestions for your other diffs to this and perhaps even consider remapping it.

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

General

1. Nothing to say

Insane

1. 00:10:474 (1) - Maybe stack with 00:09:274 (3) - 's head fixed
2. 00:11:074 (2,2) - Collides fixed
3. 00:18:574 (2) - Maybe stack with 00:17:974 (6) - fixed
4. 00:31:474 (1,2) - ^ with 00:31:024 (4) - fixed
5. 00:35:074 (1,2,3,1) - It can be hard to read but this is insane
6. 00:39:874 (1,2,3,1) - ^ ^

Another

1. 00:12:774 (4,6) - Stack? fixed

Hmm okay that was a lame mod lol, nice song/map it reminds me that I need to watch that anime
Good luck!

CrypticMech wrote:

Round 2 at your request. Midmod EDIT: I noticed you updated some stuff on the Insane/Another while I was modding them, I apologize if some of my mods don't apply now, but I don't feel like going back to check on them.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:074 (1) - Fix the blanket around the 2 on the slider end. The easiest way to make a perfect blanket is to position your cursor such a way that you can see the approach circle of the 2 (I used the time 00:08:824 -) and then instead of using one point to adjust the slider (like you are) use two. The second one helps you get a more precise and pretty curve.
2. 00:10:174 (4) - Reposition to sit kind of between the 1 and 2. I personally liked the coords x132||y316. fixed
3. 00:10:474 (1) - Blanket this underneath the starting slider end for 00:09:274 (3) - that. fixed
4. 00:14:674 (3) - I can of like this note better as a circle rather than a slider, purely because it eliminates that awkward rhythm you've created with the slider end. An alternative to this (if you really want to keep the slider) is to soften the slider end. fixed
5. 00:18:574 (2) - Blanket the end of the underneath that triplet from the previous combo. fixed
6. 00:28:474 (1,2) - So for these two sliders I like the rhythm they have, but they should probably land ont he snares rather than the blue ticks (the snares are on the red ticks).
7. 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - Lets talk about this rhythm a bit. So earlier on in this section (which is probably my favorite part of the song because its just so much fun to play) you followed what I believe is the trumpet. This is really blatant here: 00:33:874 (1,2,3,4) -. However, this section is pretty challenging rhythmically because if you map it incorrectly you're missing some important beats - so on an Insane, you need to be consistent with what you follow, the trumpet and the bass, just the bass, or just the trumpet, maybe even the vocals? So if you're following the trumpet here: 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - then there is a trumpet note on the red tick. If you're following the trumpet and the bass then you still need to add that note on the red tick. If you're following the vocals, then its fine as is. (I recommend not changing this actually, but it needs to be addressed as a learning experience mostly.)
8. 00:42:574 (2) - This slider makes me break a lot. Its kind of a fast jump to get on it then it goes pretty fast in the opposite direction of your jump. I'm typically fine with sliders like these on higher difficulties, but it seems a bit extreme for an Insane. fixed
9. 00:47:974 (2,3) - Re-position the 2 and 3 with the same DS you were using for these jumps so that the 3 blankets 00:47:074 (1) - that.
   
   Overall, this diff is tons of fun to play.

[Another]

1. Lets talk about inconsistencies in distance spacing on parts of the song that are very similar and should have the same DS. These notes 00:06:874 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - have a DS of 1.9, which is cool. I think its a bit extreme for an opening but its not entirely all that difficult to play... so you could keep it. (I'd still look for better alternatives though.) Anyway, then you go into the sliders which are about 1.8 DS away 00:09:274 (1,2,1,2) - and are also significantly easier to play than your 1,2 notes earlier. That doesn't really sit right with me when they have the same intensity and sound. I really commend reworking this first small section (just up to the preview point).
2. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hello, Satan wants his pattern back. As a person who actually plays these kind of starred maps for consistent FC's, it totally cramped up my hand (it could be because I hadn't warmed up yet and this was my first map of the day). I just feel like something better could go here. I'd also like to point out that the 3 may be better than the slider, because the 4 is actually being placed on a "shh" which is kind of weird to me, personally.
3. 00:31:774 (2) - Blanket that 3 from the previous combo, or offset it a bit more. You've been mostly offsetting your potential blankets in this diff, which I like, so maybe continue that here instead of a blanket.
4. 00:41:224 - You should really put a note here, the trumpet is strong. fixed, but it seems to me that 00:41:274 - the note will sound better here
5. 00:41:824 - ^ I think everything is good
6. 00:42:574 (2) - You have the same issue with this slider as you did in the previous diff. you're going perpendicular with your flow, and in the opposite direction, and because of the SV it just causes a lot of annoying slider breaks. Not to mention that for this one the transition to the next slider 00:42:874 (1) - is really brutal and I hate it. I don't think this is meant to be so difficult, and tbh I'd just CTRL+G that next slider. fixed maybe
7. 00:47:674 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hello Satan v2. This is like an unnecessarily hard Kneesocks ending, with a bit less thought put into it. So lets break this down a bit. From 00:47:674 (1) - here to 00:48:124 (2) - here shes saying a certain type of araragi. Then from 00:48:274 (1) - here to 00:48:724 (2) - here shes saying another type of araragi. Same for 00:48:874 (1) - here to 00:49:324 (2) - here. So, my current issue I have with this jump set is that the distance spacing in the actual "araragis" are different, which shouldn't be the case (in my opinion). What I think you should do is keep these: 00:47:674 (1,2,1,2) - and then change everything after. Make sure to keep the DS for each "aragi" the same and try to keep them similar-ish to have a bit of pattern going. not very clear explanation
   
   We done here.

[Extra]

1. 00:09:874 (3) - Make another triangle with this one, the current pattern here doesn't make much sense.
2. 00:10:474 (1,2) - Theres no reason to have these two sliders here when you've been doing the 1,2 jump then 3 slider pattern. Keep your patterns consistent, especially when they only repeat 4 times.
3. 00:16:474 (1,2,3) - So quite a few popular mappers do this, where they change their distance spacing in a series of almost linear jumps. I'm not a huge fan of it and I'd advise changing it, but clearly its rankable so thats up to you.
4. 00:17:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - Satanic jump pattern v3. This pattern really doesn't make much sense. You have a vertical jump followed by a sharp angle that takes you to two horizontal jumps. Its not very fun for the user to play and I'd advise reworking them. fixed
5. 00:17:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Everyone needs a compliment every once in a while, and I absolutely love these jumps and how they fit with the music, good job here.
6. 00:20:974 (4) - Go ahead and blanket this underneath the the slider head of 00:20:074 (4) - . fixed
7. 00:21:274 (1,2,3) - I'd like if these were spaced the same as the previous time she says the word (idunknowjapanese). fixed
8. 00:21:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - These aren't as bad as Satanic jump pattern v3, but they are a bit annoying to play, I'd call it Lil' Lucifer pattern v1. Also, you don't NEED to change it, but I still think you can do something better here. fixed
9. 00:26:074 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
10. 00:26:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
11. Now as a quick note, this is becoming important to me (consistency) in an Extra diff because a lot of playing Extras and higher comes from pattern reading. If you aren't consistent with patterns in your map, then it becomes annoying for the player to play. Sure, non-consistent Extras are rankable and have even been ranked in the past two weeks, but as a mapper you should be pushing for something above the bare-minimum (at least in my opinion).
12. 00:27:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - We found Satanic jumps v4, these are just really bad and should be changed, I don't have much to say about it. fixed
13. 00:41:674 (3,4,5,6,1) - Like consistency in patterns, consistency in distance spacing is even more important. I don't really get why these are so spread out.
14. 00:42:574 (2,1) - I'm going to point these out again. fixed
15. 00:50:074 (1) - Blanket this on 00:48:424 (2) - that. fixed
    
    Okay, not as bad as Another actually, but not as good as Insane IMO.

[Expert]

1. 00:15:424 (8) - This note doesn't exist, remove it. fixed
2. 00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent DS'd stream where the intensity didn't change from the previous stream. fixed
3. 00:16:924 (4) - This note doesn't exist either, the trumpet falls on a different beat. fixed
4. 00:17:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really dislike these jump patterns tbh. You should get a mod in here thats good with jump patterns and get them to nazi mod all of your jump patterns. fixed
5. 00:17:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is entirely random and doesn't fit the intensity of the song. fixed
6. 00:20:574 (3,4) - Why the stream jump here? It makes no sense. fixed
7. 00:21:274 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Why, did you stop trying? Firstly, you've completely changed your color combos here for no reason. Second, 00:21:724 (2) - this note doesn't exist. Finally, it makes no sense again. I tried to fix it
   
   I'm going to stop here again, because this one is a bit too random for my tastes. While the other have a possibility of being ranked with a bit more work and some more experienced mods, this one is really far off from being rankable just because it structurally makes 0 sense to me.

[Mararagi]

1. This really needs a lot of work, try applying some of my suggestions for your other diffs to this and perhaps even consider remapping it. last time here was written to remove it may as well be even better?

[]
Sorry for the nazi, its the only way I know how;;
Good luck!

Haya wrote:

Hey, M4M

Easy

1. 00:27:274 (2,4) - Stack beginning of (4) on end of (2) fixed
2. 00:28:474 (3) - Put sliderpoint to x84, y180 and sliderend to x130, y71 for a better blanket. fixed
3. 00:42:874 (1) - Straight slider looks boring, make it a little bit curved fixed
4. 00:45:274 (3) - Point the slider down like this to make the flow better
   SPOILER

   

Normal

1. 00:47:674 - Something like this feels way better fixed
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:13:474 (1) - Why is this kickslider on 1/12? Use 1/8! fixed this in all diff
2. 00:14:974 (1,2,3) - Again, use 1/8 to follow the melody no. listen to her words. she says a-ra-ki, that is, there should be three notes
3. 00:29:074 (2) - Connect this slider better with previous and next one so you get a better flow fixed
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:474 (1,2) - This overlap looks ugly imo. but I'll leave it, because I think it looks cool!
   

Insane

1. 00:42:574 (2) - Better blanket if you put white sliderpoint to x224, y332 and sliderend to x162, y318 fixed
2. 00:49:324 (2) - Would be more fun to play if you don't stack it and keep flow going fixed

Gabe wrote:

привет :3 привет!

General
Seems like the video is not working. Everytime I open any difficulty on the editor, it doesn't load https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4696697
Yes, I redownloaded many times and it still happens. What if you just resubmit the map again? I, of course, try to download again. but in my video editor with no problems (and no one who saw this card, these problems was not there)

Easy
AR-1 maybe? ok

1. 00:21:874 (1) - I see that you added a new combo here and I believe it's because it felt too long for you, right? The thing is that, I would suggest you to delete it because it's not consistent with your previous combo. Try to make it more consistent difficulty-wise. ok
2. 00:26:074 (1) - First, delete the new combo, it belongs to the previous combo. It will be more consistent that way. ok
3. 00:26:074 (1) - Second, I do not like the emplacement of this slider, it is somehow stacking the half of one of the previous circles and it looks so weird because your spacing is usually looking fine. I would suggest you to completely stack this slider with 00:23:674 (1) - to prevent the half-stacked objects. Make sure to keep the spacing consistent after. ok
4. 00:27:274 (2,3) - This blanket can be done better, it's minor, but it's worth fixing. ok
5. 00:28:474 (6) - Again, to make sure the combo is consistent, I suggest you to add a new combo to follow your previous combos which started at "Araragi-san~" and naturally, delete this one combo 00:31:474 (1) - . ok
6. 00:44:674 (2,1) - That one is just a comment related to 00:26:074 (1) -. So like I said I didn't like the emplacement of the slider because it was stacking the previous circle, it's pretty much the same thing here except that here, it looks better because of the flow it has with the previous slider. ok
7. 00:45:274 (3,1) - It will actually make sense if you put both objects in the same combo. ok

Normal
The Approach Rate is too HIGH for a normal difficulty. Let's downgrade it a bit to 4.5
Found nothing wrong in here, the combos are okay, the hitsounds are okay, the spacing is reasonable even though it looks too spaced for a normal difficulty. The only thing I can say is that I feel unconfortable over this difficulty because it looks too hard to be a normal. Maybe that's how the mapping is nowadays?! ok lol

Hard
AR-1 would fit better over here considering I asked you to amke the changes on the other difficulties

1. 00:08:074 (1) - There's a big jump over here, I would like you to considerate this and maybe make the changes. ok

Insane

1. 00:16:924 - Feels like there's missing something over here. I'm suggesting you to add a circle at this emplacement so it feels less empty, also, since it's an Insane difficulty, most of the aspect of the song has to be covered. ok
2. 00:19:974 (2,3) - just a lil' suggestion. Why not stacking both circles together? The way the spacing is right now, it feels like you have to rush to click both circles and if you stack both circles at (2)'s place, its going to be better. It will play like those 00:27:274 (6,7,8) - , really.ok

Well done (Y)

Another

1. 00:20:574 (2) - Just a suggestion. That would be nice if this circle was stacked with the next slider, it will make an effect like 00:22:699 (2,3) - is doing c: ok
2. 00:51:274 (1) - This circle doesn't have to be THAT far from the other two sliders! Why not moving it around x:444 y:240? ok

Expert

1. 00:29:074 - Missed a clap in here darling? c: oh, fixed
2. 00:42:274 (1,1,1) - so.. you're telling me you're able to catch those three sliders? impressive. we also do extra, so it will come down! and, yes, I am able to do this ^^

Nice one!

I thought I was done but.. NEVER MIND, THERE'S AN EXTRA DIFFICULTY. that's why we call it "Extra" right? aha

Extra
I have nothing to say over here, but, is it normal that the Extra is easier than the Expert? Wouldn't it be the other way round? ;_;
Anyways, that's a nice difficulty! ok, I will change the names of

Удачи!

BoatKrab wrote:

oh Chiyuyu you're AWESOME!
I love this beatmap, it's really good!
Good luck with it!

Take my star!

1. Video wasn't working for me so I converted to .avi for you, should work now PLEASE USE THIS

1. 00:21:274 (3) - Consider moving this up a little. For players that use a large score meter, it can cover up part of the circle (minor).
2. 00:30:274 (2,3) - Blanket (minor)
3. 00:36:874 (2,1) - ^

1. I can't find anything big here. Only complaint I can see is maybe ~1.5 DS might be a big step up from your Easy diff.

1. 00:42:274 (1,2) - These are really fast. Maybe slow them down a tad.

1. 00:26:074 (1,3) - Stack?
2. 00:47:074 (1,3) - ^

1. 00:12:274 (1,2,3,4) - Squares :<
2. 00:39:274 (1,2,1,2,3) - This part tripped me up, maybe combine combos.

1. 00:16:474 (1,2,3) - Hardest part in the whole song because obtuse angle, just fyi.
2. 00:44:874 (1) - I think you can make the ending a little harder starting from around here, maybe earlier.

1. 00:30:174 (3,4) - I know what you're doing here, but this spacing is kinda weird.
2. 00:34:374 (2,1) - I think these should be part of the spaced stream instead of stacked.
3. 00:46:074 (3,1,3,1) - I like this...

Bluekrait wrote:

Chiyuyu's M4M request

[General]

1. Video wasn't working for me so I converted to .avi for you, should work now PLEASE USE THIS ok

[Easy]

1. 00:21:274 (3) - Consider moving this up a little. For players that use a large score meter, it can cover up part of the circle (minor). ok
2. 00:30:274 (2,3) - Blanket (minor) but perhaps there is not a blanket?
3. 00:36:874 (2,1) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. I can't find anything big here. Only complaint I can see is maybe ~1.5 DS might be a big step up from your Easy diff. I think it's not so scary

[Hard]

1. 00:42:274 (1,2) - These are really fast. Maybe slow them down a tad. ok

[Insane]

1. 00:26:074 (1,3) - Stack? nooooooo, I think, so it looks cooler!
2. 00:47:074 (1,3) - ^ fix

[Another]

1. 00:12:274 (1,2,3,4) - Squares :< Well, kind of like it was a normal square, but I did it again, just in case
2. 00:39:274 (1,2,1,2,3) - This part tripped me up, maybe combine combos. ok

[Expert]

1. 00:16:474 (1,2,3) - Hardest part in the whole song because obtuse angle, just fyi. yeah, i think its ok
2. 00:44:874 (1) - I think you can make the ending a little harder starting from around here, maybe earlier. maybe i fix it

[Extral]

1. 00:30:174 (3,4) - I know what you're doing here, but this spacing is kinda weird. lol
2. 00:34:374 (2,1) - I think these should be part of the spaced stream instead of stacked. ok
3. 00:46:074 (3,1,3,1) - I like this... :)

Sorry for the light mod. Honestly, I think it's rank ready. <3
/me throws

kolgar wrote:

Easy diff:
00:38:074 (1) - I don't think it is good to have notes even partially out of screen on diffs under 2,5-3*, new players wouldn't know what to do there. Well, there is not direct too much beyond the screen
It is not recommended to use combos >4 in easy/normal diffs, try to fix that too. Well, I do not think 5 combo is very straight extra
Normal diff:
00:31:474 (2) - Again it is partially out of screen, but here not that badly.
I don't like the stacking of notes in this difficulty, it will be hard to aim for new players.
And yet again the combos >4 are not recommended.
Hard diff:
Nothing really wrong found here, I think this diff is done.
Insane diff:
00:50:974 (2,1) - I think this jump is unexpectively long, one way to solve is to longer distance between 00:50:674 (1,2) - , or just lower the spacing between these two. not too big a leap for the Insane
This one is not a style of mapping I like, but it is ok ranking-wise.
Another diff:
Again not my style of mapping, but nothing bad to point out here.
Expert diff:
00:21:274 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't make sense to me.
00:45:574 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Really the hardest part of the beatmap, Pattern is hard to read, my solve: change spacing between 00:46:074 (3,1) -
00:50:674 (1,2,1,2,1) - I don't like this pattern, since it is hard to realize that there is no break between 00:51:124 (2,1) -
I think this diff needs the most work from all in this mapset. nooo, this pattern is good!!!
Extra diff:
00:29:974 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern really stands out from the rest of the map, it doesn't make sense while all other 1/6 patterns before have no spacing change.
00:33:774 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - another super hard part, very colourful to me, I would personally change combo colours there.
00:45:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Too hard to read. Change spacing or combo colours.

Overall your map is nearly finished. Nothing more to say.

Kisses wrote:

This map is so well made it blew my mind Oo

Shmiklak wrote:

М4М

Ку

Основное

1. Требуется адвансед или что то другое среднее между нормалом и хардом. эта проблема уже решена :^)

Easy

1. 00:06:874 (1) - Перемести красную точку что бы она была точно по центру. То есть как бы что бы поворот был одновременно с этим звуком (не знаю как его описать). Еще также предлагаю убрать белую точку. В итоге будет что то такое http://puu.sh/o8643/11d59478bd.jpg ок
2. 00:23:674 (1) - финиш плиз ок
3. 00:27:274 (2,1) - поправь бланкет ок

Найс

Normal

1. 00:50:674 - изменение СВ в низших диффах запрещено (ну почти) ок
2. 00:37:774 - все таки это нормал и ты можешь использовать слабые доли. Проще говоря ставь ноту. ок
3. 00:38:074 (1) - Ctrl+< немного по-другому сделала

Hard

1. 00:16:474 (1,2,1,2) - не уверен что такие джампы разрешены. ок

Жди адвансед :^) окес :^)

Reana wrote:

Random mod :3

Expert

1. Usually... Expert is higher diff then Extra... blablabla
2. 00:13:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's 1/12, not a 1/8. (100 BPM lol) But it can be really fast if you put circle, so replace it with reverse slider. fix
3. 00:16:474 (1,2,3) - This looks bit weird, imo, move (3) right to make a triangle. fix
4. 00:30:874 (5) - NC fix
5. 00:40:774 (2,3,1) - This can confuse players, so put more distance between (2) and (3). fix
6. 00:51:124 (2,1) - Put less DS. It's too large. fix

Extra

1. 00:13:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as Extra, 1/12. fix
2. 00:22:474 (5) - Try to move bit higher cause it touches (1). fix
3. 00:29:374 (4) - NC fix
4. 00:29:974 (1,2,3,4) - This looks weird, so just put with same DS or stack it but, imo, it looks very cool!
5. 00:37:774 (1) - Remove NC fix
6. 00:44:874 (1) - Remove NC, then put NC in 00:45:274 (3) - fix
7. 00:51:124 (2,1) - Reduce DS fix

Stefan wrote:

I can ensure that the artist is not Mayoi Hachikuji. Please check out the link: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16829206



Artist name is fillin. I highly doubt the title is right as well but that requires someone which is more in-depth with that.
No kudos for this.

Kisses wrote:

oh look a random mod

@Insane 00:42:574 (2) - NC? There is a slight SV change and you did do it for your other diffs so I feel like you might aswell ok

yh I only modded 2 diffs cos why not np

Kisses wrote:

oh look a random mod

Shmik's advanced

1. 00:15:874 (5,6,7,1) - This plays really weird imho. The triplet doesnt seem to be in the right place also the stack makes it hard to read as well. If you still want the blue ticks in this pattern how about a rhythm similar to this? http://puu.sh/o8xhX/9ab281aa24.jpg or http://puu.sh/o8xuP/53a832873a.jpg
   What ever you do I definitely think the triplet so be at 00:15:574 and also recommend not have 1/1 beats stacked behind triplets, not for this diff anyways
2. 00:20:524 (5) - rotate so it curves towards slider (1)?
3. 00:30:124 (5) - Use this rhythm; it's simpler, has clickable objects on the right note and flows a lot better imho http://puu.sh/o8xKg/4331884b94.jpg
4. 00:33:124 (6) - You can delete this cricle. It;s not needed as the sound is very, very minor. Deleting it also adds emphasis to 00:33:274 (1) which is what you want imo
5. 00:35:374 (6) - Move to 00:35:224? I didnt get what you missed this sound yet mapped 00:35:374 which is really minor in comparison. in fact 00:35:374 is almost none existent
6. 00:36:724 - You can add a circle here if you want for flow. It's one of the beats of the melody you're following
7. 00:36:874 (4,5) - ctrl+g matches the vocals better imo and im guessing thats what you're going for
8. 00:39:874 (4,5) - ctrl + g because reasons
9. 00:44:074 (3,5) - If you can make these not touch that would be great
10. 00:45:874 (2) - Turn this unto a 1/2 slider? its make the rhythm feel lesss empty without the pause at 00:46:174 . its also similar sound to 00:45:274 (1)
11. 00:47:524 (8) - I would delete this. The sound is so minor and doesnt play that well to have 5 single taps for this section and for the diff itself
12. 00:47:074 (5,6,7,1) - If you do the above unstack (5,6,7) and (1)
13. 00:50:674 (2) - just a sugestion http://puu.sh/o8yID/7186d36f46.jpg It feels good to have a clickable object at the end

@Insane 00:42:574 (2) - NC? There is a slight SV change and you did do it for your other diffs so I feel like you might aswell

yh I only modded 2 diffs cos why not

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1. Metadata should be the following (provided by KwaN, and confirmed by me) :
   

   Romanised Artist/Artist: fillin
   Title: モグのテーマ
   Romanised Title: Mog no Theme

2. В теги может уйти Final Fantasy VI т.к. это фоновая музыка оттуда, намиксованая с аниме.
3. C гостевого адвансда куда-то пропало видео. Верните его, пожалуйста, домой.
4. К слову, из самого видео нужно удалить аудиодорожку, а не обеззвучить ее. Переконвертите, пожалуйста.
5. Видео-оффсет немного уходит не туда. Пропишите что-то около 200мс, будет синхрон со звуком.

1. Выстави слайдер тикрейт на 1. Ритм-то в основном очень простой на сложности, двойка слишком часто тикает.
2. Попробуй OD/HP 2. Тройка слишком высоко для изи на 100 БПМ.
3. 00:15:874 (3) - вот тут репит слайдера не привязан к чему-либо в музыке. Убери повтор и поставь серкл на 00:15:874 (3) - для более интуитивного маппинга под "вокал".
4. 00:20:074 - 00:20:674 - вот тут я бы просто ставил серклы подряд. Вокалы на красных тиках начинаются и мапать их на изи очень неудобно, лучше на ударных сакцентироваться.
5. 00:24:874 (3) - опять нет синхрона. Начинается под одно, кончается уже под другое. Попробуй опять же акцентироваться на ударных. Как-то так
6. 00:29:074 - вот тут и надо было закончить слайдер, а на 00:29:674 - уже другая часть трека, которая требует собственный кликабельный объект. Туда можно кружок поставить.
7. 00:38:074 (1,2) - вот тут она сначала произносит два варианта Арараги-сан, а потом начинает что-то другое, а по ритму все смешивается в одну кашу. Я попробовал бы по вокалам тут замапать как-то так.
8. 00:43:474 - закончи слайдер тут, вокалы и ударный очень просят. 00:44:074 - а вот сюда можно потом кружок поставить.
   
   Было бы круто, если бы у тебя получалось чуть аккуратнее следовать основным вокалам/битам. Понимаю, что это бывает достаточно непросто, но это важно.

1. 00:08:674 - старайся делать тяжелые и сильные биты кликабельными для игроков. Если они смогут их нажать, то ощущение будет намного лучше, чем от простого дропа слайдера.
2. 00:11:674 (1,2) - давай по вокалу замапаем? Два слайдера тут прозвучат намного логичнее, т.к. совпадают с вокалами.
   Note: 00:15:274 (4,5) - вот тут аналогично с примером выше. Первый пойдет под "саан", а второй под инструмент на фоне.
   
   Мне не нравится твой выбор спейсинга. х1.5 означает, что расстояние между нотиами вполтора раза больше скорости слайдеров, из-за этого курсор постоянно то ускоряется, то замедляется. Играть можно, но для такого трека как-то слишком рвано и резко. Может снизить до х1.2?

1. 00:09:874 - 00:10:474 - cbильные ударные биты, которые почему-то некликабельны для игроков. Т.е. вместо сильного клика, игрок просто отпускает слайдер. Играется совсем слабо. Попробуй поставить серклы на эти биты.
2. 00:13:624 (4) - на слайдере были вокалы, которые снапались на 1/4, но ты их игнорируешь. А тут, 00:13:624 (4) - практически овермап, т.к. ударные там ну совсем слабые. Зачем? Попробуй не отходить от основных вокалов и битов, они достаточно сложные для маппинга адвансда. Ну, как-то так, например.
3. 00:16:474 (1,2) - в музыке нет ничего, что бы поддерживало такие углы слайдеров. Зачем ломать флоу и неестественным образом сокращать слайдеры?
   Note: 00:38:074 (1,2) - аналогично.
4. 00:20:524 (5) - а на белом тике барабан, который звучит громче и четче вокалов. Его игнорировать ну совсем плохая идея. 00:25:174 (5) - вот тут аналогично. Попробуй два 1/4 cлайдера. Для лоу-бпм Адвансда это юудет в самый раз.
   Note: 00:30:124 (5,6) - можно что-то типа такого ритма, тоже зайдет.
5. 00:32:224 (4) - перебор. В ритме этого бита нет, или он не выражен достаточно ярко. После этого, кстати, можно анстакнуть, для играбельности.
6. 00:35:224 (6,7) - эти должны снапаться на 1/6. Я бы поставил (6) на 00:35:274 - и просто убрал (7), т.к. там получится слишком сложный дабл.
   Note: 00:36:124 (2,4) - аналогично снапаются за 1/6 перед слайдерами. Но даблы это слишком сложно, поэтому я бы их просто убрал.
7. 00:37:774 - cюда очень просится отдельный серкл, который бы оочень круто отображал ударные.
8. 00:40:074 (5) - опять снапается на 1/6. Попробуй что-то типа этого
9. 00:42:124 (4) - там опять 1/6, твой слайдер не в ритм. Замени на один серкл, который будет стоять на 00:42:274.
10. 00:47:224 (6) - cкорее всего придется убрать, там не один бит между (5,7), а два. Опять же, 1/6.
    
    Сейчас нужно включить замедленное воспроизведение и послушать весь трек очень внимательно, попутно исправляе 1/4 на 1/3 или 1/1, там где это требуется.

1. Играется чуть сложнее обычного харда. Давай переименуем в Hyper?
2. 00:08:674 - давай вместо репита слайдера сюда приземлим крун. Ударные очень сильные, грешно из не сделать кликабельными.
3. 00:14:974 (1,2,3) - замени на слайдер, сходу читать 1/6 в харде это не просто. Особенно, когда все это стакнуто.
4. 00:20:074 - вместо второго репита, который, кстати, трудновато прочитать, лучше поставить слайдер. Страшный пример
5. 00:29:374 - закончи слайдер тут, а после него там 1/6 вокалы. Можно и не мапать на харде.
   Note: 00:29:674 (2,3) - аналогично, закончить раньше на сильном барабане.
6. 00:39:574 (2) - удлини в два раза и убери повтор. На 00:39:674 - нет ничего такого, что бы требовало бита в карте.
7. 00:42:574 (1) - давай серкл по вокалу сюда впишем. Неплохо зазвучит.
   
   Сложновато. В остальном все хорошо.

1. 00:08:674 - 00:09:874 - давай их кликабельными. Как и в Харде. Причина такая же, сильный бит лучше делать кликабельным
2. 00:20:074 (3) - давай заменим на слайдер? Там вот это "сааан" нужно выделить.
3. 00:26:824 (4) - раньше так же стакался 1/6, лучше здесь анстакнуть, для понятности ритма.
4. 00:39:574 (2) - удлини в два раза и убери повтор.Как и в харде. На 00:39:674 - нет ничего такого, что бы требовало бита в карте.
5. 00:42:574 (1) - меня не очень радует этот изгиб слайдера. Уж слишком он внезапный и агрессивный. Давай сделаем что-то, что более характерно твоему стилю?
   
   Хорошо.

1. 00:13:474 (1) - а разве ты его не под 1/12 снапала раньше? Попробуй сделать так же, как на Харде и Инсейне.
2. 00:15:274 (4) - вокалы так и просят слайдер под длинное "сааан". Почти как на 00:16:174 (3) -
   
   Очень хорошо.

1. 00:42:874 (1,1) - можно прочитать как 1/6. Стакни или отодвинь их?
2. 00:46:074 (3,1) - а тут точно нужен этот джамп. Я бы его убрал, НК неплохо выделяет изменения в треке.
   
   Миленько. Потестить бы еще, и будет очень хорошо.

1. 00:30:174 (3,4) - я бы спейсинг сравнял с предыдущим триплетом, для большей читабельности.
2. 00:37:774 (2,3,1) - в такие стаки бывает сложно вписаться и прочитать с разгону. Давай анстакнем?
   
   Я бы потестил спейсинг и джампы, но у меня скилла маловато для теста таких вещей. Погоняй самостоятельно, спроси пару друзей. Если играется - супер!

Bakari wrote:

Арарарарараги-сан?


[Shmik's Advanced]

1. 00:09:874 - 00:10:474 - cbильные ударные биты, которые почему-то некликабельны для игроков. Т.е. вместо сильного клика, игрок просто отпускает слайдер. Играется совсем слабо. Попробуй поставить серклы на эти биты.
2. 00:13:624 (4) - на слайдере были вокалы, которые снапались на 1/4, но ты их игнорируешь. А тут, 00:13:624 (4) - практически овермап, т.к. ударные там ну совсем слабые. Зачем? Попробуй не отходить от основных вокалов и битов, они достаточно сложные для маппинга адвансда. Ну, как-то так, например.
3. 00:16:474 (1,2) - в музыке нет ничего, что бы поддерживало такие углы слайдеров. Зачем ломать флоу и неестественным образом сокращать слайдеры?
   Note: 00:38:074 (1,2) - аналогично.
4. 00:20:524 (5) - а на белом тике барабан, который звучит громче и четче вокалов. Его игнорировать ну совсем плохая идея. 00:25:174 (5) - вот тут аналогично. Попробуй два 1/4 cлайдера. Для лоу-бпм Адвансда это юудет в самый раз.
   Note: 00:30:124 (5,6) - можно что-то типа такого ритма, тоже зайдет.
5. 00:32:224 (4) - перебор. В ритме этого бита нет, или он не выражен достаточно ярко. После этого, кстати, можно анстакнуть, для играбельности.
6. 00:35:224 (6,7) - эти должны снапаться на 1/6. Я бы поставил (6) на 00:35:274 - и просто убрал (7), т.к. там получится слишком сложный дабл.
   Note: 00:36:124 (2,4) - аналогично снапаются за 1/6 перед слайдерами. Но даблы это слишком сложно, поэтому я бы их просто убрал.
7. 00:37:774 - cюда очень просится отдельный серкл, который бы оочень круто отображал ударные.
8. 00:40:074 (5) - опять снапается на 1/6. Попробуй что-то типа этого
9. 00:42:124 (4) - там опять 1/6, твой слайдер не в ритм. Замени на один серкл, который будет стоять на 00:42:274.
10. 00:47:224 (6) - cкорее всего придется убрать, там не один бит между (5,7), а два. Опять же, 1/6.
    
    Сейчас нужно включить замедленное воспроизведение и послушать весь трек очень внимательно, попутно исправляе 1/4 на 1/3 или 1/1, там где это требуется.

Вполне неплохо, дифы попроще требует внимания, но остальное выглядит очень неплохо.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Bakari wrote:

Арарарарараги-сан?

[General]

1. Metadata should be the following (provided by KwaN, and confirmed by me) :
   

   Romanised Artist/Artist: fillin
   Title: モグのテーマ
   Romanised Title: Mog no Theme

2. В теги может уйти Final Fantasy VI т.к. это фоновая музыка оттуда, намиксованая с аниме.
3. C гостевого адвансда куда-то пропало видео. Верните его, пожалуйста, домой.
4. К слову, из самого видео нужно удалить аудиодорожку, а не обеззвучить ее. Переконвертите, пожалуйста.
5. Видео-оффсет немного уходит не туда. Пропишите что-то около 200мс, будет синхрон со звуком.

[Easy]

1. Выстави слайдер тикрейт на 1. Ритм-то в основном очень простой на сложности, двойка слишком часто тикает.
2. Попробуй OD/HP 2. Тройка слишком высоко для изи на 100 БПМ.
3. 00:15:874 (3) - вот тут репит слайдера не привязан к чему-либо в музыке. Убери повтор и поставь серкл на 00:15:874 (3) - для более интуитивного маппинга под "вокал".
4. 00:20:074 - 00:20:674 - вот тут я бы просто ставил серклы подряд. Вокалы на красных тиках начинаются и мапать их на изи очень неудобно, лучше на ударных сакцентироваться.
5. 00:24:874 (3) - опять нет синхрона. Начинается под одно, кончается уже под другое. Попробуй опять же акцентироваться на ударных. Как-то так
6. 00:29:074 - вот тут и надо было закончить слайдер, а на 00:29:674 - уже другая часть трека, которая требует собственный кликабельный объект. Туда можно кружок поставить.
7. 00:38:074 (1,2) - вот тут она сначала произносит два варианта Арараги-сан, а потом начинает что-то другое, а по ритму все смешивается в одну кашу. Я попробовал бы по вокалам тут замапать как-то так.
8. 00:43:474 - закончи слайдер тут, вокалы и ударный очень просят. 00:44:074 - а вот сюда можно потом кружок поставить.
   
   Было бы круто, если бы у тебя получалось чуть аккуратнее следовать основным вокалам/битам. Понимаю, что это бывает достаточно непросто, но это важно.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:674 - старайся делать тяжелые и сильные биты кликабельными для игроков. Если они смогут их нажать, то ощущение будет намного лучше, чем от простого дропа слайдера.
2. 00:11:674 (1,2) - давай по вокалу замапаем? Два слайдера тут прозвучат намного логичнее, т.к. совпадают с вокалами.
   Note: 00:15:274 (4,5) - вот тут аналогично с примером выше. Первый пойдет под "саан", а второй под инструмент на фоне.
   
   Мне не нравится твой выбор спейсинга. х1.5 означает, что расстояние между нотиами вполтора раза больше скорости слайдеров, из-за этого курсор постоянно то ускоряется, то замедляется. Играть можно, но для такого трека как-то слишком рвано и резко. Может снизить до х1.2?

[Shmik's Advanced]

1. 00:09:874 - 00:10:474 - cbильные ударные биты, которые почему-то некликабельны для игроков. Т.е. вместо сильного клика, игрок просто отпускает слайдер. Играется совсем слабо. Попробуй поставить серклы на эти биты.
2. 00:13:624 (4) - на слайдере были вокалы, которые снапались на 1/4, но ты их игнорируешь. А тут, 00:13:624 (4) - практически овермап, т.к. ударные там ну совсем слабые. Зачем? Попробуй не отходить от основных вокалов и битов, они достаточно сложные для маппинга адвансда. Ну, как-то так, например.
3. 00:16:474 (1,2) - в музыке нет ничего, что бы поддерживало такие углы слайдеров. Зачем ломать флоу и неестественным образом сокращать слайдеры?
   Note: 00:38:074 (1,2) - аналогично.
4. 00:20:524 (5) - а на белом тике барабан, который звучит громче и четче вокалов. Его игнорировать ну совсем плохая идея. 00:25:174 (5) - вот тут аналогично. Попробуй два 1/4 cлайдера. Для лоу-бпм Адвансда это юудет в самый раз.
   Note: 00:30:124 (5,6) - можно что-то типа такого ритма, тоже зайдет.
5. 00:32:224 (4) - перебор. В ритме этого бита нет, или он не выражен достаточно ярко. После этого, кстати, можно анстакнуть, для играбельности.
6. 00:35:224 (6,7) - эти должны снапаться на 1/6. Я бы поставил (6) на 00:35:274 - и просто убрал (7), т.к. там получится слишком сложный дабл.
   Note: 00:36:124 (2,4) - аналогично снапаются за 1/6 перед слайдерами. Но даблы это слишком сложно, поэтому я бы их просто убрал.
7. 00:37:774 - cюда очень просится отдельный серкл, который бы оочень круто отображал ударные.
8. 00:40:074 (5) - опять снапается на 1/6. Попробуй что-то типа этого
9. 00:42:124 (4) - там опять 1/6, твой слайдер не в ритм. Замени на один серкл, который будет стоять на 00:42:274.
10. 00:47:224 (6) - cкорее всего придется убрать, там не один бит между (5,7), а два. Опять же, 1/6.
    
    Сейчас нужно включить замедленное воспроизведение и послушать весь трек очень внимательно, попутно исправляе 1/4 на 1/3 или 1/1, там где это требуется.

[Hard]

1. Играется чуть сложнее обычного харда. Давай переименуем в Hyper?
2. 00:08:674 - давай вместо репита слайдера сюда приземлим крун. Ударные очень сильные, грешно из не сделать кликабельными.
3. 00:14:974 (1,2,3) - замени на слайдер, сходу читать 1/6 в харде это не просто. Особенно, когда все это стакнуто.
4. 00:20:074 - вместо второго репита, который, кстати, трудновато прочитать, лучше поставить слайдер. Страшный пример
5. 00:29:374 - закончи слайдер тут, а после него там 1/6 вокалы. Можно и не мапать на харде.
   Note: 00:29:674 (2,3) - аналогично, закончить раньше на сильном барабане.
6. 00:39:574 (2) - удлини в два раза и убери повтор. На 00:39:674 - нет ничего такого, что бы требовало бита в карте.
7. 00:42:574 (1) - давай серкл по вокалу сюда впишем. Неплохо зазвучит.
   
   Сложновато. В остальном все хорошо.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:674 - 00:09:874 - давай их кликабельными. Как и в Харде. Причина такая же, сильный бит лучше делать кликабельным
2. 00:20:074 (3) - давай заменим на слайдер? Там вот это "сааан" нужно выделить.
3. 00:26:824 (4) - раньше так же стакался 1/6, лучше здесь анстакнуть, для понятности ритма.
4. 00:39:574 (2) - удлини в два раза и убери повтор.Как и в харде. На 00:39:674 - нет ничего такого, что бы требовало бита в карте.
5. 00:42:574 (1) - меня не очень радует этот изгиб слайдера. Уж слишком он внезапный и агрессивный. Давай сделаем что-то, что более характерно твоему стилю?
   
   Хорошо.

[Another]

1. 00:13:474 (1) - а разве ты его не под 1/12 снапала раньше? Попробуй сделать так же, как на Харде и Инсейне.
2. 00:15:274 (4) - вокалы так и просят слайдер под длинное "сааан". Почти как на 00:16:174 (3) -
   
   Очень хорошо.

[Extra]

1. 00:42:874 (1,1) - можно прочитать как 1/6. Стакни или отодвинь их?
2. 00:46:074 (3,1) - а тут точно нужен этот джамп. Я бы его убрал, НК неплохо выделяет изменения в треке.
   
   Миленько. Потестить бы еще, и будет очень хорошо.

[Rararagi]

1. 00:30:174 (3,4) - я бы спейсинг сравнял с предыдущим триплетом, для большей читабельности.
2. 00:37:774 (2,3,1) - в такие стаки бывает сложно вписаться и прочитать с разгону. Давай анстакнем?
   
   Я бы потестил спейсинг и джампы, но у меня скилла маловато для теста таких вещей. Погоняй самостоятельно, спроси пару друзей. Если играется - супер!

Вполне неплохо, дифы попроще требует внимания, но остальное выглядит очень неплохо.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

1. 00:11:374 - add a circle here
2. 00:19:174 (2) - add reverse to this slider maybe?

1. 00:35:074 (5,6) - replace these with a slider

1. 00:29:074 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing between these

1. 00:16:924 - should be a note here
2. 00:21:724 - ^
3. 00:26:524 - ^
4. 00:31:324 - ^

1. 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - Rework on this pattern
2. 00:39:874 (1,2,3) - ^

1. 00:35:274 (2,3) - increase space between these

1. 00:39:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - rework on this pattern

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Yo , From #modreqs

Normal :

1. 00:11:374 - add a circle here ok
2. 00:19:174 (2) - add reverse to this slider maybe? No, I think it is inappropriate here

Hyper :

1. 00:29:074 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing between these ok

Rararagi :

1. 00:16:924 - should be a note here No, it is not particularly suited for vocals and music
2. 00:21:724 - ^
3. 00:26:524 - ^
4. 00:31:324 - ^

Insane :

1. 00:35:074 (1,2,3) - Rework on this pattern And what's wrong with him? I think he is not bad
2. 00:39:874 (1,2,3) - ^

Extra :

1. 00:35:274 (2,3) - increase space between these ok

Another :

1. 00:39:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - rework on this pattern ok