Hi
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*Sigh* Oh, well~ Anyway, good luck getting this ranked!
Star!
General:
- How about if you put in "TV Size" into the title? Since this is the cut version anyway.
- 00:18:348 (1)-It would sound better if you remove the whistle from the end and replacing it with a clap.
- 00:20:143 (2)-^
- 01:30:599 (2)-Try removing that finish from the reverse arrow and replacing it with a clap? Maybe it a would sound better.
- 00:17:451 (7)-Remove the whistle and replace it with a finish. It sounds better that way.
- 00:19:694 (3)-Remove the whistle from the beginning and replace it with a clap.
- 00:21:265 (6)-Remove the whistle from the first reverse arrow and replace it with a clap.
- 00:39:889 (2)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. It would sound better, in my opinion.
- 01:05:693 (6)-I think you forgot to add a clap on the last reverse arrow.
- 01:08:161 (4)-Maybe add a clap on the beginning?
- 00:19:694 (3)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a clap.
- 00:21:489 (3)-^
- 00:41:684 (7)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a clap instead?
*Sigh* Oh, well~ Anyway, good luck getting this ranked!
Star!