lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~(>w<~)

General;
- Easy y Normal no tienen BG .w. Ayudame a buscar un nuevo bg que no se vea tan feo con los lyrics :T
- Ahhhhh !! Intente todo ;w; bajar un capitulo en latino, bajar el ost latino, buscar en todas la paginas que pude pero no puedo encontrar un audio de mejor calidad asdasdassd si es que l encuentro lo pongo aqui ;w;
- Despues de 10min buscando recorde que tenia un mp3 de esta cancion por ahi tirado en mi carpeta -
No se si es mejor calidad para ti pero prueba ;w;
http://puu.sh/WpY

Lol, lo probare orita.

SB;
- En "lyrics - 20" dice ambisionan, acaso no es ambicionan ? Con "C' Ya lo sabia, pero como que gonzvlo no dijo nada... D:!!
- Las letras, todas ellas, tienes que ponerles outer glow negro al 100% es para que no tenga nada blanco o "noise" alrededor como aqui

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Hmm okay, los agregare luego
O en realidad no se si tu le pusiste brillo amarillo bueno la cosa es que me fastidia, claro solo a mi porque soy muy quisquillosa con estas cosas ~ asi que si no quieres no lo hagas, o si quieres avisame y yo lo hago (: Nah, lo hare yo, quiero aprender
Ademas porque cada "lyric" tiene un punto al final .w. Porque no? xD

Normal;
- 00:20:364 >> Agrega una nota
- 00:22:383 >> Borra esta nota
- 00:38:534 >> Hazlo terminar en 00:38:982 y agrega una nota en 00:39:431 empieza el nuevo combo ahi tambien
- 01:22:051 >> Hazlo terminar en 01:22:499 y agrega una nota en donde terminaba con finish y nuevo combo, le da mas enfasis
Preferiria no hacer eso, pero esperare por mas opiniones.

Insane;
- 01:36:743 >> Muevelo al tick blanco que sigue, suena mejor Lol, check krisom's mod post

* Star ~

ziin wrote:

Both my brother and myself sing in english/latin/german exceptionally well, but for some reason whenever we sing in spanish it sounds terrible.
That's great, being polyglot is awesome, perhaps you're trying with the wrong song?

*Links Video*
I'm not even sure if that "thing" is a song.

ErufenRito wrote:

o/ Lovhin

- En "lyrics - 20" dice ambisionan, acaso no es ambicionan ? Con "C' Ya lo sabia, pero como que gonzvlo no dijo nada... D:!! Oh vamos, no leí palabra por palabra, estaba a punto de irme.

James2250 wrote:

o/ James

Easy:
-Was about to say keep kiai consistent on this difficulty but its a guest one so ok~ Erufen fix this if you want.
-Gotta love symmetrical mapping <3
01:14:873 (4,2) - arrange this pattern so these don't overlap so much? OMG

1. Lyrics - 04 - Debido a que la canción es antigua, se usó la doble grafía en esta canción, cambia "Oscuridad" a "Obscuridad"
2. Lyrics - 05 - Si empieza 1/2 se ve mejor.
3. Lyrics - 08 - Falta una tilde en "Tú"
4. Lyrics - 10 - Obscuridad
5. Lyrics - 22 - Acá escucho "Si él no te interesO" , hay una version de la letra dice " Si él no te interesA" . Eso me hizo dudar, qué escuchas tú ?
6. Lyrics - 24 - Obscuridad

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Gonzvlo wrote:

[*]Lyrics - 22 - Acá escucho "Si él no te interesO" , hay una version de la letra dice " Si él no te interesA" . Eso me hizo dudar, qué escuchas tú ?

1. How about if you put in "TV Size" into the title? Since this is the cut version anyway.

1. 00:18:348 (1)-It would sound better if you remove the whistle from the end and replacing it with a clap.
2. 00:20:143 (2)-^
3. 01:30:599 (2)-Try removing that finish from the reverse arrow and replacing it with a clap? Maybe it a would sound better.

1. 00:17:451 (7)-Remove the whistle and replace it with a finish. It sounds better that way.
2. 00:19:694 (3)-Remove the whistle from the beginning and replace it with a clap.
3. 00:21:265 (6)-Remove the whistle from the first reverse arrow and replace it with a clap.
4. 00:39:889 (2)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. It would sound better, in my opinion.
5. 01:05:693 (6)-I think you forgot to add a clap on the last reverse arrow.
6. 01:08:161 (4)-Maybe add a clap on the beginning?

1. 00:19:694 (3)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a clap.
2. 00:21:489 (3)-^
3. 00:41:684 (7)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a clap instead?

Hushu wrote:

Mm... Look, I can't possible give your map attention if you have not fallowed my previous mod for your other song. Ignored.

ErufenRito wrote:

Also, particularly this song, the mp3 was pretty much gotten from a mic, recorded from a tv.

ziin wrote:

... but I think it's much harder to sing in spanish than a number of other languages

Krisom wrote:

All Diffs-
01:41:178 - Agrega un spinner/slider acá que termine en 01:42:525 -
Erufen, descargué el mapa pero el timing no coincide mejor agregalo tú~

Easy-
01:03:268 (1,1) - hngggggg mappea otra cosa o algo, este ritmo es muy eww para un easy x_x
Te refieres al spinner? (Erufen enviame un Pm cuando Krisom responda :3)

Normal-
01:40:281 (4) - Por que, de todas las diffs, este es el unico con normal finish? >w<

Krisom wrote:

blah blah blah

Gonzvlo wrote:

I told you to make sure that the video is "OK" adding a warning doesn't help at all (delete that quote), I know it's kinda silly but you should make sure, Ask some BATs.

Odaril wrote:

General
"dan" is doubled in the tags. It is required. As for me, i always search for this map typing "dan dan", if i delete one of them, this map would no longer be shown as a result
The video is fine imo... It doesn't even deserve the NSFW tag to me. Lol well, there are people that may has problems with it... So yeah xD

Normal
00:51:835 (8) - Is the last repeat really needed ? I think it'd be better without it, it sounds weird to me right now. Yes... i have tested so many times when i mapped this part, and retested when other people have commented about it, and im 100% that it is required, at least for me.
01:03:727 (4) - The number of repeats of this slider surprised me (enough to combobreak). I was only expecting one repeat.
01:05:747 (6) - If you change ^ you might have to change this one as well, all the more so because there are other sliders right after it.
Alright, fair enough. Modified

Odaril wrote:

EDIT: the double tag is indeed not needed - having it once is enough. I won't pop again since it's not even an issue, but remember it.

1. Por alguna razón tuve que hacer update después de bajar el mapa D:
2. Como comentario, el video no es el "primero" que se usó con esta canción; es este: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9k7FXrLxXtA. Pero no importa mucho
3. Podrías.. Este.. Podrías... Usar este mp3: http://www.dilandau.eu/download_music/mi-corazon-encantado-1.html#0
   No me fije los kbps pero cualquier cosa se puede re-encodear.
4. Nada.

1. 47:123 (4) - Remueve el clap, y colócalo al final del slider. Suena mejor

1. Ok iba a decir un par de cosas nazi pero no son lo suficientemente importantes como para mencionarlas

1. No sentí muy bien el flujo, para ser sincero, pero será cuestión de costumbre :O

narakucrimson wrote:

[Easy]

1. 47:123 (4) - Remueve el clap, y colócalo al final del slider. Suena mejor :)

Puedes hacer esto por mi erufen~

Gonzvlo wrote:

narakucrimson wrote:

[Easy]

1. 47:123 (4) - Remueve el clap, y colócalo al final del slider. Suena mejor :)

Puedes hacer esto por mi erufen~

Thanks Naraku :3

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Resubmit all the maps because the maps ask to be updated when I first dled the file.

narakucrimson wrote:

Por alguna razón tuve que hacer update después de bajar el mapa D:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Resubmit all the maps because the maps ask to be updated when I first dled the file. Done

Also, I recommend that someone recheck the timing. For me, I used 444-446 till 01:26:160. Afterward, I get a jump of +6-8 for the offset. I am a little worried about this, so please provide someone else to check this.
You can suck my **** timing ;D
Also, using timing of 444 for now because I agree with it.


Easy:
fine

Normal:
+1-2 AR to make the map feel a little faster, the map seems like it is dragging on or something. AR +2

Insane:
00:18:394 - Align the kiai section with the kiai section in normal Ops... it took me a while to notice the difference... This probably happened because i forgot to select this section when i was moving timing sections.

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Very few problems in my eyes. I will have to pop over the updating issue and maybe also the kiai, so please fix those, and if you can find someone else, have them check the timing. For now, star!