happy birthday girl
eally don't see the need of HP6 here, nerf it down to HP5.i think i gotta ask you a bit of stuff about the last point, but i tried changing a bit there
Nerf the OD to 4.
00:32:780 (55) - move the note to 00:33:125 - , by far a stronger sound you could follow and provide a better break phase.
00:57:263 (114) - might skip this note to break off the relatively long combo chain.
02:01:056 - 02:20:367 - it's strange how much lighter you've made the late kiai parts compared to the first one. I don't think it's design-wise a good concept, try to make them approx. equal from the density. (Either nerf first kiai or buff late kiais)
hihi, uh i accidentally closed out of the tab when i wass writing but thankfully i did get a screenshot of what i wrote... most of it at least sorry for the clumsinesssorry for late reply, fixed it all! thank you!!
01:41:746 (1) - 01:57:953 (1) - similarly to what i said at 01:19:677 (1) - , try to use all the sounds available to make this section fit in between the kantan and muzukashii correctly
-> remember to apply 1st kiai changes to 2nd kiai as well
in the 3rd kiai, feel free to apply the same changes as you did in the other two kiais, but the intensity here is slightly higher due to the presence of bass kicks, etc. for instance, 02:10:539 (1,1,1,1,1) - could be k k d d k d d k k d. more freedom for denser
02:21:056 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - try to make this section more dense, as this is kind of the final buildup of the song after all
hope this helped a bit c:
just in case someone thinks i didn't write that screenshot, here is the full pic https://puu.sh/zeLNl/a17a030b6f.png
-Shiguri's Futsuu-shouldve fixed it all, except that one thing where i replied to, thanks for modding!
00:13:470 (1) - finisher maybe? that weird cymbal thing is too clear, and a finish would follow nicely
00:24:504 (1) - ^, but because it would emphasize the change of rhythm of the song
00:46:573 (1) - ^, literally does a mix here lol
00:49:677 - Maybe try a kdk k d here? would simplify a little bit (yeah this includes deleting 00:51:056 (1) -
00:56:056 (1) - Delete this maybe? the pattern is too long imo, besides without it, it would give more focus to that violin
00:57:608 - What about K ddd d k, it would simplify the rhythm a bit better imo
00:59:504 - and here dkkd k would nerf that long pattern a bit
01:05:711 (1) - deleting this would be better to nerf this pattern imo, too long
01:08:642 (1) - What about a finisher here? ee idk really, there are notes that sound exactly the same as this one without a finish then,
dont really like how it sounds as well
01:13:125 - you could add a d here, theres a sound too clear imo
01:19:677 (1) - Maybe finisher? change of rhythm
01:29:332 - and you could add a k here, to follow the piano/bell (idk what instrument is that, sorry) sound
01:30:711 (1) - Maybe finisher? change of rhythm and cymbal sound thing would fit nicely with it
02:00:884 (2) - Maybe delete to shorten pattern? too long imo
02:03:125 - you could add a k here, would follow that increasing pitch instrument at the background
02:16:056 (1) - and why not delete this? shorten pattern
02:17:263 (1) - maybe make this d? would give more emphasis on the next note
its pretty good uwu