1. ADRENALINE (6,01 stars, 1825 notes)

Black Emptiness wrote:

hi. m4m.

ADRENALINE:
* Artist's name in Unicode should be: ノマ Just realised that the artist and recording studio is Japanese, it's changed!
* 00:08:917 (4) - Turn this slider more to the right to fit the consistency with 00:07:858 (1,3) - . Done, also changed jump pattern a bit.
* 00:09:623 (3,4) - Try to keep same distance snap like at 00:09:270 (1,2) - . Did that on previous suggestion.
* 00:22:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - Insert here a 1/8 slider (you can hear it from the music that it's not 1/4) That would be waaaay too hard to play consistently.
* 00:45:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^^
* 05:56:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I tried this section once, and felt that it really didn't work out.
* 00:35:858 (1,1) - Unnecessary notes. Like that part too much to change it.
* 01:19:858 (1) - End this slider at 01:20:388 - . That's the same as saying "Remove a note from a full stream". It sounds a little weird on playback. Sorry buddy
* 01:28:665 (1,1,1) - Meaningless new combos. Remove them. I'll change this if other people say the same thing, it's mainly because of the pattern.
* 01:33:570 (2) - Convert this slider to a stream (1/4). Did that, great idea!
* 02:07:912 (1,2) - Use 1/8 sliders with reverse arrows to fit properly in the rhythm. GENIUS
* 03:40:423 (1,2) - ^
* 02:50:957 (1) - End this slider at 02:52:369 - . And put some notes in the empty space afterwards. Nah the rhythm is supposed to be mirrored showed by the two circle sliders. I like the suggestion though!
* 03:41:116 (1) - Snap it properly.
* 05:06:087 (6,7) - Replace them with 1/4 slider. No thanks, looks fine to me!

Good luck, Spork Lover. Thanks!

deadpon3 wrote:

Hi! m4m from #modreq

General:

Well, the tags may be a little problem with ranking, you know... O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A- JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA xD

ADRENALINE:

Really cool, fun to play diff. Just few issues that makes the gameplay worse. Thanks for the kind words dear sir! *Bows*

00:02:211 (1) - I feel like the song shouldn't start with a repeater.
00:09:976 (5) - This one could be a jump instead of a repeater imo. Did something, might be too hard though idk.
00:12:623 (4,5,6) - Too spaced since it's only few seconds of gameplay, you should stack it a bit. No thanks
00:12:799 (6) - Also, make it a 1/3 repeater that fits to the wobble. It sounds undermapped like this. I donno
00:22:682 (1,2,3,4) - That should be 1/8 repeater. No thanks
00:35:505 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Oh please, 1 NC is enough. 1/3 notes, so no-can-do.
00:45:270 (1,2,3,4) - Also 1/8 repeater. Please don't undermap. I don't know how to change this without it breaking the consistency.
00:57:270 (1,1,1,1,1) - Another NC spam. Removed two of the NC's
01:09:270 (5,6) - I'm pretty sure they have to be 1/16.
01:28:314 (1,1,1,1) - Weird overlap + NC spam. Removed nc's, didn't remove pattern, like the pattern.
02:07:912 (1,2) - In this moment, there is suppose to be 1/8 repeater from white to red pike, and a note on blue pike next to it. Already changed this on a previous mod!
02:30:134 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Guess what Removed two of the NC's like on the last pattern
02:43:899 (2,1) - They look weird overlaped like this. Changed it slightly.
03:41:116 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Emmm... okay I'll shut up about these xd The NC's have a purpose (1/3's)
05:43:890 (1,2,3,4) - Strange slowing down the jumps :/ I made the backwards sliders accelerate
05:54:295 (1) - Why not regular circle? Music allows it.
05:54:988 (1) - ^ ^^
05:55:682 (1) - ^ ^^
05:57:069 (1) - I don't think that NC is needed. I like it

And why is there so many timing points on the last spinner? It's because sound when you spin gets lower and lower the further into the song you go ^^

Nevermind ^^ Haha

That's it, good luck You too, thanks for the mod!

Kardet wrote:

Hiya, just a short mod.

In general I don't think the hitsounds are loud enough, it might just be me.
(oh god the tags, why does every brain power have them)

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For places where the rhythm changes ( 00:35:505 (1,1,1,1,1) - here, 00:57:623 (1,1,1) - here, 02:30:134 (1,1,1) - here.) I think the hitsounds should be louder so theres more feedback when you hit them, adding claps when theres 3 notes worked alright for me. Didn't feel right to not have any when playing.
00:35:858 (1,1) - These two notes aren't following anything in the song, maybe remove them and add a single/slider at 00:35:917 (2) - I don't know if that's the best solution to be honest.
01:28:314 (1,1,1,1) - This stopped the momentum too much for me when I played it.Removed NC's (due to previous mod), and now I got convinced to change the pattern, you'll get what ya want >:D, it's not changed THAT much though.
When you're splitting up the rhythm in the chorus you often have the next notes quite close to where the stream ended. ( 01:41:727 (5,6) - 01:52:825 (5) - Reworked the two you mentioned slightly.
03:28:024 (4,5) - ) I think generally since it is 6 stars, you can afford to put these farther away. Yes sir!
02:42:487 (1,2) - these and 02:48:134 (1,2) - these sliders don't look too good when they are overlapping
02:48:134 (1) - This slider doesn't look very good imo. I changed the rotation and stuff, so I idk how big of an aesthetic issue it is now.
02:59:418 (1,2,3,4) - This group doesn't look good, maybe add more spacing between 2 and 3? Changed overlap
03:25:163 (1) - add whistle Done (duh, bad mistake ;_;)
03:27:764 (3,4,5) - Mentioned it before, but this group doesn't play that nicely. I'll keep it for now, might change it later on.
Going back to the point where you didn't have enough feedback on different bpm. 03:41:116 (1) - This whole section, mainly the notes in 1/3, I personally found quite hard to play the first time round, and they are very quiet on the default hitsounds. Theres not enough feedback to them, you can hear the song but not the hitsound because of how soft it is. I'd say you could just switch it to the normal sampleset, but thats down to you. To say it myself, I'm really not a fan of the normal sampleset in this song. I know where you're getting at, but I should probably try to find some custom hitsounds for those sections. I'll see what happens I guess.

Overall you've got a fairly consistent mapping style through which is nice. That made my day, thanks brah <3
Good luck. Thanks man!

did my mod and refreshed the page, and there's two mods before me lol

Exile- wrote:

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00:01:858 - Spinner at the beginning?
00:02:564 - You're missing the beat on a white tick. Consider adding reverse arrow
00:05:741 (3,4) - Rotate 45 degrees to the left. Flows a lot better
00:06:447 (1,2,3,4) - This back and forth pattern is quite hard to do after the rotative motion of 00:05:741 (3,4) - these notes. I would suggest you to make some kind of anticlockwise quadrangle.
00:12:623 (4,5,6) - That's way too much for a slow part
00:12:975 (7) - Map 2 notes on 1/3 instead of this one
00:13:328 (9) - Change into 1/4 slider to build an emphasize
00:14:564 (4) - make it similar to 00:13:505 (1,3) -

00:20:122 (4) - the curve should start from the stronger note which is 00:20:210 (5) - this one here. That's the main rule of making curved streams
00:20:564 (1,2,1,2) - If you want to separate them in part they should be facing the same direction. In this way, you should use ctrl + G on 00:20:741 (2) -
00:21:976 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:22:682 (1,2,3,4) - Change them into 1/8 sliders
00:45:270 (1,2,3,4) - ^, I hope you can find the rest
00:35:858 (1,1) - Listen to this part carefully
00:39:976 (2) - Blanket, same to 00:37:858 (3) - , 00:38:564 (6) -, 00:40:682 (3) -
00:42:799 (5) - That's what I was talking about
00:43:505 (2,1) - You don't have to connect these notes. Even more, it looks unsightly
00:49:152 (2,3,4) - The flow here isn't that great, you should use rotative motion
00:52:682 (6) - It just asks for 2 notes here
01:09:270 (5,6) - Yeah, you can follow these sounds but I think the drums are more audible here (change to 1/4)
01:09:976 (1) - This slider is too long imo, you can try to follow the sounds starting from 01:10:682 -
01:18:976 (3,4) - Never do this, it's not only unreadable but has a terrible flow, you can place sliders in this position every second one, not one after another (or you can unstack them to make it more readable)
01:33:570 (2) - Drums don't end here, continue slider stream
01:37:218 (4,1) - As I said before, you shouldn't connect them (and you have similar patterns in the whole difficulty)
01:41:727 (5,6) - I don't really understand it. You're missing the strong beat 01:41:900 - here. At least try to make a triple
01:52:825 (5) - ^
02:00:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A-
02:08:781 (1) - Start it from 02:08:693 - since you want to emphasize the sound from 02:08:605 (1) - this note
02:29:781 (1,1,2) - Inconsistent distance
02:30:487 (1,1) - Unstack them to make it more readable
03:14:758 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - We need faster sliders! Its the middle of the kiai time!
03:23:428 (3) - Delete reverse arrow, you should place a note 03:23:775 - here cause it too audible to be an end of the slider
03:27:764 (3,4,5) -
03:47:011 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hi dopamine!
03:49:786 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - A little mindfuck here o.O Start jumping from the first note
04:13:196 (2) - Too early, listen to this carefully. Stream sliders should end 04:13:370 - here
04:51:867 (1) - Why slow down here? You should follow the same sound as before
04:52:214 (2) - NC because of the SV change
05:01:231 (1,2) - Stream here?
05:12:676 (1) - Change to 1/8 slider like you did before
05:18:225 (1) - ^
05:24:468 (1,1) - Too slow, we need jumps on circles instead of slow sliders!
05:28:977 - You keep missing these white ticks
05:30:017 (4,5) - AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E- FASTER
05:57:243 (1) - Start it from 05:57:156 -


Good luck!!

Yales wrote:

o/ o/!!!

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13:41 Yales: your combo colors are a bit hard to see with your bg tbh
13:41 Spork Lover: Oh really?
13:41 Spork Lover:
13:41 Spork Lover: I'll probably change the background and/or colors then
13:41 Yales: I think so, you should be careful about that (multiple maps got unranked for this sh**)
13:42 Spork Lover: Oh ;_;
13:42 Spork Lover: Yeah then I'll definitely change that ,o.O
13:43 Yales: 00:22:682 (1) - 1/8 slider no?
13:43 Yales: until 00:23:035 (5) -
13:43 Yales: 00:45:270 (1) - ^
13:43 Spork Lover: Lemme check
13:44 Spork Lover: I get your point, will change that ASAP
13:44 Spork Lover: Also made 5-8 before 22:682 curvy instead
13:45 Yales: 01:13:505 (2) - NC is needed for new sv, rly cool pattern though
13:45 Yales: ah
13:45 Yales: it turned into irc mod rofl
13:45 Yales: :c
13:45 Spork Lover: Lel np, I'll give you kudosu xD
13:45 Spork Lover: Or a m4m or something
13:45 Spork Lover: xD
13:45 Yales: another one XD
13:46 Yales: 01:18:799 (2,3,4,5) - rly like this style
13:46 Spork Lover: You're so kind xD
13:47 Spork Lover: One guy complained about the 3,4 overlap, and I was like "But that's the whole point ,o.O"
13:47 Yales: ye
13:47 Yales: everyone will complain about it
13:47 Yales: but dont listen to them
13:48 Spork Lover: Yeah I'm stubborn when an idea ruins the whole point of that section :p
13:48 Yales: "chinese style" is always criticized and yet it's the most creative style -> the best
13:49 Yales: lol
13:49 Spork Lover: Imo it feels amazing if you nail them
13:49 Yales: you like skystar dont you? x)
13:49 Spork Lover: Yeah huge Skystar fanboy xD
13:50 Spork Lover: Look at my drunk mapping section after 2nd kiai
13:50 Yales: I can see that
13:50 Spork Lover: There's some Dopamine and HW inspired stuff there too
13:50 Spork Lover: :p
13:51 Yales: 03:12:330 (1,2) - you made them by 2... exploit it http://puu.sh/nng2G/f8748d705e.jpg
13:51 Yales: 03:13:024 (1,2) - ^
13:51 Yales: 03:28:024 (4) - clap sounds bad tbh
13:52 Spork Lover: It's mirrored with the other 4 kicksliders
13:52 Spork Lover: I'll mirror that exploit
13:52 Spork Lover: To the others too
13:52 Yales: yep !
13:52 Yales: was just talking of the spacing :p
13:52 Yales: 03:47:011 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - lol
13:52 Yales: lol
13:53 Yales: and right after hahaha
13:53 Spork Lover: xD
13:53 Spork Lover: I'm a huge fan of those x)
13:53 Spork Lover: Donno why
13:53 Yales: ya
13:54 Yales: I wish i could map like fazhen/hw/skystar ... Hollow Yalestar0019 :c
13:54 Spork Lover: I can't, I just steal patterns
13:54 Spork Lover: lel
13:54 Spork Lover: xD
13:56 Spork Lover: Erm
13:56 Spork Lover: I'm still trying to make that "mirrored kick slider pattern" pretty
13:56 Spork Lover: lel
13:58 Yales: 03:11:983 (1,2,1,2) - just put those a bit further
13:58 Yales: 03:12:330 (1,2,1,2) - and those 2
13:59 Yales: or*
13:59 Spork Lover: I completely reworked it
13:59 Spork Lover: Made some backwards kicksliders
13:59 Spork Lover: It fits I think
14:00 Yales: alright
14:00 Yales: the map is fun, there's lots of cool pattern with some interesting flow
14:00 Spork Lover: Very happy to hear that
14:00 Spork Lover: I'm not even that experienced with mapping x)
14:00 Yales: it needs more mods I think though
14:01 Spork Lover: Agreed
14:01 Spork Lover: Some sections are wonky
14:01 Spork Lover: Removed the clap btw
14:02 Spork Lover: Post the thingy on the forum for some kudosu :O
14:02 Spork Lover: If you wanna
14:02 Yales: 01:20:564 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - stuff like this are rly well though
14:02 Yales: t
14:03 Yales: a bit sad the music kinda changes here 01:20:917 (4,5) - then but the idea is here
14:03 Spork Lover: Thanks !
14:03 Yales: ok!
14:04 Spork Lover: At least it's still before the verse continues
14:04 Spork Lover: Like, before the white tick
14:04 Yales: yep ^^
14:05 Spork Lover: I'll add ya real quick, so I remember to mod yours x) I feel I owe ya >:D
14:05 Yales: dont worry :O

jamiesalvador wrote:

small

00:12:623 (4,5,6,1) - This could be made to flow better from the note just before Agreed, changed it around a bit.

00:19:946 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - stream shape here doesn't look aesthetically good compared to other ones Changed it around

00:38:035 (4,5) - Jump here is random, as well as other parts in that section like 00:26:564 (3,4) - and 00:27:270 (3,4) - whereas in the section straight after you chose to not use any jumps at all I changed the pattern a bit in the mentioned section, the spacing isn't changed all that much.

01:09:976 (1) - I feel like you could map the part the the end of the slider overlaps like this part 01:13:505 (1,1,1) - or as a simple stream, or you may want to just focus on the wub and leave it like that If you come with a specific suggestion with placement and such, I'd most likely make use of it

01:19:329 (5) - the angle of this is wrong Don't agree

01:19:858 (1) - could be placed so that it doesn't go under the previous 5 (01:19:329 (5) - ) Purposely done, not changing

01:37:825 (6,7,8,1) - This is an awkward shape for the slider Changed a tiny bit.

01:41:553 (6,7,8) - This slider jump seems random Listen to the vocals, that's the thing I'm following.

03:23:775 (4,5) - very small jump for such an energetic part compared to the start where it's building up and you have 3x the jumps, inconsistencies overall Made spacing bigger.

03:36:174 (8,1) - spacing Don't see the problem here

I'll just say a lot of the streams have awkward turns and really only a few pull it off like this one 00:42:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Thanks for the mod brah

HydroCannon13 wrote:

Hey dude, here's the m4m

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1. 00:00:447 (1) - just suggestion, but maybe terminate spinner at 00:01:858? its when the lyrics start Nice suggestion, fixed!
2. 00:41:741 (1,2) and 00:43:152 (1,2) - why make these reverse when you didn't do the same at 00:19:152 (1,2,1,2) and 00:20:564 (1,2,1,2)? Made the first part of both stream sections reverses, and made the second half kicksliders. (Took more work than I thought lmfao)
3. 00:47:035 (2) - the 3rd reverse here has a strong note under it, maybe make it clickable? Done
4. 00:52:682 (6) - same thing here, the end of the slider has a strong note Done
5. 00:57:270 (1) - maybe just me, but this is really sudden xD I would take sv down a bit Made it 0.25x slower
6. 01:12:094 (1) - same with this one, sv shouldn't be too high because the space slider occupies doesn't match well (I hope im making sense xD), I would put it at 1.00x Turned that slider down by 0.25x again (1,25, not 1,00, I still want it to have slider velocity change) :3, I get your point !
7. 01:13:858 (1) - this should extend to the next blue tick, maybe with a lower sv Done, awesome suggestions man
8. 02:29:781 (1) - ^ Extended it and made SV 0,25x slower like in previous suggestions.
9. 02:56:601 (1) - maybe move this away from 02:56:424 (2) for more emphasis as a prominent note? That means I would have to do it for the next section too, and it would look weirder I think, so nah
   That time skip doe hehe :3
10. 05:13:023 (3,4,5) - I think you missed a lot of strong beats by putting just 3 1/2 sliders, think you should maybe change this part so that you get some of the stronger notes, like you did at the beginning of the previous 2 kiais Made some jumps and kicksliders.
11. HP, I think should be increased to 7-8 The HP is another meme in itself, not changing unless it's unrankable like this.

Very nice and epic map you have here, good luck making the meme great again I'm flattered
Sry theres nothing near the end, I'm not good at mapping dubstep lol Haha dw man, this was my first attempt at "drunk mapping" too x)

waefwerf wrote:

Mod for mod

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00:06:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These jumps are excessive; there's not really anything in the music, strictly speaking, that suggest big jumps, except for at 00:07:505 (3,4,1). This goes for a lot of the other jumps in this intro section too, with jumps that don't really show up in the song. It's hard to balance properly though, because it can easily get boring. Didn't add this, since it'd ruin consistency a lot.
00:12:623 (2,3,4,5) - 4 and 5 are incorrectly snapped, it should be a 1/3 and not a 1/4, like at 00:35:211 (1,1,1,1). I changed the slider on the first stream into a 1/3 slider, but that's about it.
00:43:682 (4,1) - This really could do with being made into a jump, moving the start of the stream down. This also gives better spacing to move the timing of the corner at 00:44:123 (4,5,6), which doesn't really fit with the music when there's no corner at 00:44:476 (8,1,2). Considering the corner, not making the jump due to first stream.
01:10:682 (2,3,4) - Incorrect rhythm, there are only 1/3 notes here. Changed.
01:14:917 (1,2) - The 1/8 beats aren't in the song. I suggest making a closely spaced stream here instead. DOn't think I did this.
01:17:035 (2) - NC Done
01:32:523 (1,2,3,4,1) - There isn't anything in the song on these blue ticks. This would be a great place to put the otherwise common jumps. Don't think I did this either.
01:33:221 (2) - 1/16 is excessive. I hear a beat on yellow ticks and blue ticks, nothing noisy enough to warrant a 1/16 slider. I'll change this if I get this mentioned to me more.
03:19:874 (4) - Corners on blue ticks are (at least IMO) harder to play properly, and there's not really anything suggesting a corner. Corners, like jumps, can be used to emphasize beats in streams. Bad mistake, changed!

03:44:324 (2,3,4,5) - This is hard to read because the spacing is not far from 03:41:809 (1,1,1,1,1,1) which had a different tempo, namely 1/3. In this section, you often have to guess whether you are going to play 1/4 or 1/3, typically because the spacing is too similar between the two. An alternative woudl be to make more erratically placed 1/3 beats, like the dopamine-esque triangle stacks, since they look quite like normal streams at the moment. Did something
03:48:052 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't change beatsnap between 1/3 and 1/4 like this. Either make the 1/3 a slider or do more to differentiate the spacing. Increasing the spacing of the 1/3 beats to make them more jump-like would probably be the way to go on this. Did something here too :3
03:54:902 (5,6) - Corner should be at (6), not (5). Also NC at (6). Done

03:57:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lol
04:04:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Could be a good place to make some gimmicky spacing, such as a heavily spaced but decelerating stream. Increased spacing gradually.
04:06:087 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - To spice things up, Ctrl+H 04:06:087 (1,2,3,4) and move to something like the picture, and Ctrl+H 04:06:780 (1,2).

alt pattern

Didn't do this, I like flowy patterns more.

04:10:942 (2,3) - 1/3, not 1/4 Done
04:13:023 (1) and 04:46:318 (1) - The middle beat of each of these is not in the song. Done
04:39:728 (5,6) - 1/3 snap, also NC. added slider + 2 jumps.
04:50:480 (1,2,3) - Resnap to 1/3 (and change pattern accordingly ) Dopamine hype?
04:58:803 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Most of this might be 1/3, not sure how much though. Go listen to it. Didn't change anything here, unnoticeable I think.

In general, this section suffers somewhat from being "too smooth", but wubs in general are hard to map properly. Many "drunk" maps are like that, so it'll be fine. Thanks a lot for the suggestions, super helpful!

Dextersydney wrote:

Mod.

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00:22:682 (1,2,1,2) - Hard to follow along, instead try using a similar note of 00:19:152 (1) - for the rhythm. Imo those kicksliders are fine, since it's the very end of the stream.
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - Notes should be a couple ticks down. Moved the square sliders.
01:57:160 (1,2) - I would like to point out that this spacing can be tricky as notes are pretty close on time. I MIGHT rework this pattern in the future.
02:02:709 (1,2) - spaced notes seem to be off of the grid. As long as they aren't more than 50% off the grid, it's rankable
02:02:882 (2,1) - this as well. Same thing
02:04:270 (2,1) - I would take a look at this as well. Did a tiny change to the rotation and position of the first slider.
02:24:840 (3,4,5,6) - Notes don't match that much into the music at the note points, take a look at 02:28:722 (2,3) - these. Don't think the problem is too big, but I repositioned them a little bit.
02:36:134 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to the previous one, there is nothing going on in the music at the point time. Decreased spacing a lot here
03:05:383 (3,4) - spacing? Nah this is totally acceptable
03:18:226 (1,2,1,2) - Make the patterns similar to 03:17:879 (1,2) - Another pattern I MIGHT consider :3
03:38:342 (1,2,3) - Distance space this. Changed positioning a bit.
03:45:624 (4,5) - I would keep a watch on notes like this, distance is far away. Nah it isn't all that bad I think.
03:48:052 (1,2,3) - Keep notes a little bit more closer I actually did the opposite in the last mod ;D
04:07:821 (2,3) - Same as the previous. Same answer :3
04:11:983 (1,1,1,1,1) - Extremely hard to read. Changed it to a 1/3 pattern in the last mod
04:13:370 (3,4,1,2,3) - These notes dont have anything in common at it's current position. True, I reworked this jump section a bit
04:23:428 (3) - Would move note closer to 04:24:121 (1) - ? Nah, it's ok (It's all about holding the slider for long enough :p)
04:34:179 (1,1,1,1,1) - Cramped on the top of the play area. Gonna consider spacing them differently, but I don't think it's too bad.
04:56:549 (1,1,1) - Cramped on top once again. This I don't agree with, there's a few sliders near middle and bottom.
05:24:988 (2,1) - Spacing is a bit bizarre, try putting (2) closer to (1) like 05:27:763 (2,1) - would be a good example. It's a mirrored pattern in both examples, which is what I'm following, so I don't think that'll be changed all that much.
05:53:601 (1,2,1,2) - Close notes in general, I would suggest you do something similar to 05:27:763 (2,1) That would be crazy hard I think
Overall: Remember that there is a play area and make sure notes are not cramped in one spot, it becomes hard to read if this occurs. I would suggest you do the same for the spacing on streams. I do a lot of perfect overlaps intentionally for reading challenges in the wub section, but I understand that some sections can get a bit cramped :3

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nice map I'm flattered <3

1. 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think here you can reduce the spacing. I agree with increasing it to the beat, but what you have now is a little too much i think.
2. 00:09:270 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here you can also change up the spacing, instead of having the same spacing on all the notes. I know the song doesn't really change here, staring with lower and going high spacing would be cool.
3. 00:50:035 (6) - I think this note would be better place at X:132 Y:228.
4. 01:26:379 (4) - I think would be better at X:320 Y:96. It fits well with the beat change.
5. 02:36:134 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could make these notes look something like this. You could even space (3) and (4) more if you want.
   
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6. 02:59:243 (2) - You can put this note at about X:136 Y:312 to emphasize that beat.
7. 03:04:158 (2) - You can move this to X:420 Y:160 and then make 03:04:333 (1,2,1,2) - look like this
   
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8. 03:48:746 (5,6,7,8) - I saw this and thought about how they would play as sliders. Maybe you can try it and see what you think.

Doj wrote:

Adrenaline

1. 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think here you can reduce the spacing. I agree with increasing it to the beat, but what you have now is a little too much i think. Didn't reduce it by much, like 0,2x
2. 00:09:270 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here you can also change up the spacing, instead of having the same spacing on all the notes. I know the song doesn't really change here, staring with lower and going high spacing would be cool. Nah, might change the pattern in later mods tho
3. 00:50:035 (6) - I think this note would be better place at X:132 Y:228. Placed it in middle of triangle instead (128/256)
4. 01:26:379 (4) - I think would be better at X:320 Y:96. It fits well with the beat change. Nah it's for blanket reasons :3
5. 02:36:134 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could make these notes look something like this. You could even space (3) and (4) more if you want.
   
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   Did something similar, but with less spacing.
6. 02:59:243 (2) - You can put this note at about X:136 Y:312 to emphasize that beat. Done
7. 03:04:158 (2) - You can move this to X:420 Y:160 and then make 03:04:333 (1,2,1,2) - look like this
   
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   Fun suggestion, I'm stealin' that :3
8. 03:48:746 (5,6,7,8) - I saw this and thought about how they would play as sliders. Maybe you can try it and see what you think. Nah that wouldn't work in the same way

Hope this mod helps lol It did ^^ Hope mine to you did as well
GL! THANKS :O

1. why the "fined tuned" difficulty settings? I see no reason to use HP5.6 and OD9.2, moreover, I don't think you should use more than OD8.5 for this BPM
2. would have preferred a 1366x768 bg and a 192kbps mp3 (also a SS uniform, really?)
3. you have a shitton of redundant green timing sections, if you're gonna use the same SV, volume and hitsound set, there's no reason to add a timing section
4. combo 3 and 4 are too similar, if you're gonna keep them anyway, make them one combo apart

1. Very poor sense of spacing, some parts have big jumps which add a lot of momentum, followed by very tight sliders, for example: 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) -
   there's absolutely no reason in the song to slow down like that, this is just frustrating to play
2. Be careful when using linear flow with irregular spacing, this kind of flow is very unnatural to play because it forces the player to actively try to control their momentum, for example: 00:10:329 (3,4,1) -
   try it yourself, with whatever is your equipment, try to quickly and accurately aim the pattern I linked above, once on (4), you feel that you have to stop awkwardly and focus on aiming again even though you'll be going in the same direction
   This kind of flow is better used with constant spacing, or to emphasize some uncommon audio patterns which require additional attention from the player
3. Use more different DS for your streams, they're the same everywhere, don't play naturally and are a pain to aim most of the time. If the part is slow, use a small DS for your streams, if it's directly after a jump, do a stack first to help the player control his aim then progressively rebuild the momentum by increasing the DS
4. be consistent in your NCs, have a clear guideline for when you want to place one, I'd recommend just once every one or two measures, with occasional ones on unusual or paired jumps, changes in rhythm (1/4 to 1/3 etc) or in SV
5. A bit less general but I wanted to point out this: 00:23:388 (1,1,1,1) -
   You have very defined clearly cut notes here in the song, but the flow you mapped stays very fluid, which doesn't fit the song at all here, you want to cut the flow like the notes are cut in the song, I'd suggest using 0.5x SV with big jumps, or maybe even just circles instead of sliders
6. The obligatory aesthetics mod, don't curve your sliders too much (ex: 00:23:652 (1) - ), unless they're long enough to form a loop:
   
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   also blankets, and be consistent with the tight ones, you want to pick a certain spacing and stick with it for consistency in your design
   Try to visualize the parts of your map a bit more before actually mapping them, try to structure your patterns in advance and not just go object after object, this will help you choosing the right slider shape for example, instead of just thinking "which shape have I not done for a while now?", it's okay to spam the same shape, provided it fits the structure you chose. You do'nt mindlessly cycle through your shape bank in hope to keep your map fresh.
   I might be projecting a bit too hard here though so don't mind this if you don't relate lol, just take it as a general advice
7. Your rhythm is often out of place, you often have a constant rhythm in some parts of the song but you use a lot of different rhythms like 01:23:385 (1,2,3,4,1) - or 01:26:907 (1,2,3,4) - , for no reason other than maybe diversity.
   The player, when playing repetitive parts, will prefer consistency in the rhythm and patterns to having to stay focused on what is basically nothing in the song. The player likes to be driven by the rhythm of the song, and hates when you break it in the map.
   This actually applies for non-repetitive parts to a certain extent, the bottom line is that you need to create a consistency in your rhythm, and always try to point out the most important beats.
   This is something that'll come with experience though.
   Also you're not accentuating the right notes in the chorus, for ex: 01:42:594 (5,7) - , 01:37:565 (3,5) - , or accentuating the wrong ones: 01:36:871 (2) -
8. More personal than objective, but I prefer short 1/3 streams to be less straight, with tighter angles to help focusing on aiming each of the circle individually. Helps with accuracy a bit, it's more from a alternating playstyle point of view though, if you're a singletapper, you might not really get my point.

Alheak wrote:

M4M

[Metadata n stuff]

1. why the "fined tuned" difficulty settings? I see no reason to use HP5.6 and OD9.2, moreover, I don't think you should use more than OD8.5 for this BPM I can agree that the OD is probably too high. The HP drain will be changed if I start adding less NC's for emphasis. Oh, and it's just part of my style to use fine-tuned stats, like monstrata has a "OD8.7" policy for his extras
2. would have preferred a 1366x768 bg and a 192kbps mp3 (also a SS uniform, really?) Yeah I need to change the resolution on the background.
3. you have a shitton of redundant green timing sections, if you're gonna use the same SV, volume and hitsound set, there's no reason to add a timing section I'm not 100% sure how I should think about this, since there's a change on either SV, volume or hitsounds everytime ;o
4. combo 3 and 4 are too similar, if you're gonna keep them anyway, make them one combo apart I decided to just remove them straight up lol

Ok, this will be more of a general mod than a precise one, there are a lot of conceptual and aesthetic flaws Sounds good!

1. Very poor sense of spacing, some parts have big jumps which add a lot of momentum, followed by very tight sliders, for example: 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - I assume that I could make the slider spacing larger on some sections like the one you mentioned.
   there's absolutely no reason in the song to slow down like that, this is just frustrating to play I get your point, I'll fix some stuff up!
2. Be careful when using linear flow with irregular spacing, this kind of flow is very unnatural to play because it forces the player to actively try to control their momentum, for example: 00:10:329 (3,4,1) -
   try it yourself, with whatever is your equipment, try to quickly and accurately aim the pattern I linked above, once on (4), you feel that you have to stop awkwardly and focus on aiming again even though you'll be going in the same direction
   This kind of flow is better used with constant spacing, or to emphasize some uncommon audio patterns which require additional attention from the player Changed that specific pattern a lot to add more flow, and will do this to more sections.
3. Use more different DS for your streams, they're the same everywhere, don't play naturally and are a pain to aim most of the time. If the part is slow, use a small DS for your streams, if it's directly after a jump, do a stack first to help the player control his aim then progressively rebuild the momentum by increasing the DS Can you give an example of a place where my streams should be different?
4. be consistent in your NCs, have a clear guideline for when you want to place one, I'd recommend just once every one or two measures, with occasional ones on unusual or paired jumps, changes in rhythm (1/4 to 1/3 etc) or in SV I try to do that already, but might have some inconsistencies in between. I'll most likely not change those too much, unless some obvious NC issues are mentioned in future mods!
5. A bit less general but I wanted to point out this: 00:23:388 (1,1,1,1) -
   You have very defined clearly cut notes here in the song, but the flow you mapped stays very fluid, which doesn't fit the song at all here, you want to cut the flow like the notes are cut in the song, I'd suggest using 0.5x SV with big jumps, or maybe even just circles instead of sliders I like the suggestion, but I like the flowy pattern more I think.
6. The obligatory aesthetics mod, don't curve your sliders too much (ex: 00:23:652 (1) - ), unless they're long enough to form a loop: Hmm, I can agree in most cases I think, I'll keep it in mind!
   
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   also blankets Yup, I'll add those when I se them fit., and be consistent with the tight ones, you want to pick a certain spacing and stick with it for consistency in your design Aight
   Try to visualize the parts of your map a bit more before actually mapping them, try to structure your patterns in advance and not just go object after object, this will help you choosing the right slider shape for example, instead of just thinking "which shape have I not done for a while now?", it's okay to spam the same shape, provided it fits the structure you chose. You don't mindlessly cycle through your shape bank in hope to keep your map fresh. Really good point, I have to think ahead, I'll do that in the future
   I might be projecting a bit too hard here though so don't mind this if you don't relate lol, just take it as a general advice
7. Your rhythm is often out of place, you often have a constant rhythm in some parts of the song but you use a lot of different rhythms like 01:23:385 (1,2,3,4,1) - or 01:26:907 (1,2,3,4) - , for no reason other than maybe diversity. For the intro part, I'm a big fan of those 4 sliders or 8 circles patterns, which might make it feel that way. But when I've reworked the flow a bit more, it might feel a lot different.
   The player, when playing repetitive parts, will prefer consistency in the rhythm and patterns to having to stay focused on what is basically nothing in the song. The player likes to be driven by the rhythm of the song, and hates when you break it in the map.
   This actually applies for non-repetitive parts to a certain extent, the bottom line is that you need to create a consistency in your rhythm, and always try to point out the most important beats.
   This is something that'll come with experience though.
   Also you're not accentuating the right notes in the chorus, for ex: 01:42:594 (5,7) - , 01:37:565 (3,5) - , or accentuating the wrong ones: 01:36:871 (2) - Hmm, I'll see what can do >.<
8. More personal than objective, but I prefer short 1/3 streams to be less straight, with tighter angles to help focusing on aiming each of the circle individually. Helps with accuracy a bit, it's more from a alternating playstyle point of view though, if you're a singletapper, you might not really get my point. I alternate 100% as well, and I don't see a problem with it as long as the map is a high star diff. (Basically I don't really feel much of a difference I think)

That's a nice brick of text, but try to keep all of this in mind when mapping, map a lot more, experiment, don't try to make THE map every time, just try out things and see how they go Will do man!

Good luck Thanks a lot, I'm very happy that you focused on the intro section for this, since I needed a lot of help with that!

Trent83 wrote:

M4M

[that diff :3]

Mod

00:02:388 (2) - hmm this slider doesnt accords with the song try to re-map it It's either this or 4 jumps, and I don't want that from the start. sorry
00:12:623 (2,3,4) - Dont kill the flow, that part feels weird, try to remove this circle 00:12:711 (3) - it will give you more flow and a best playability I think you misunderstand what I'm trying to do here; There's a part in the song, where it's 1/3's, and removing that note would mess that up even more :3
00:23:388 (1) - put the point of the curve of the slider (the point of the middle in the slider xDD) in the center for a best esthetic Oh yeah, didn't see that, fixed!
00:24:182 (1) - Ctrl+G for fix flow Nah idk if it's the best idea, I like the suggestion, but I like the other way better I think :3
00:24:182 (1,1) - overlap Not noticeable while playing ^^
00:35:505 (1,1) - Why this is un-snapped try to use an offset there It's 1/3, so it is snapped <3
00:39:270 (2,1) - Blanket? Changed in a different way.
00:57:741 (2,3) - Same Same
01:09:270 (1,2) - i didnt reccomd this i thing is better an spinner Nah, those sliders are acceptable on 6* songs.
01:28:314 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap I like it like this
01:32:872 (1) - the vocal maintains here is better u use and slider Might change it in later mods.
02:19:899 (1,2) - Fix flow it feels a little weird Rotated slider 2.
02:39:486 (6) - put this a little down for follow the curve doesn't need to stack a lot xDD But the stack is the entire purpose
02:41:781 (1,2) - 1 large spinner? because the object number 1 goes with the song but not the full part the object 2 is good but 1 i doubt I don't like using spinners like that.
03:52:734 (3) - This object confuses and this 03:53:601 (2,3) - I know, it's supposed to be like that. ^^
05:57:156 (1) - End this spinner 06:00:537 (1) - here is better Changed.

Sorry if the mod is isnt so useful i am not good at xtras It's ok but thanks for mod and Good Luck Thanks <3

squirrelpascals wrote:

Okay i lost my entire mod for this map so im going to go over the whole fucking thing again and try to remember what I said, I might be breif. Italics = highly recommend

Adrenaline

• First off, love the twist on color scheme from usual brain power maps

• 00:12:623 (4,5,1,1,1) - Use this rhythm Want the pattern to be different from the next one.

• 00:36:094 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps seem very underwhelming. Try to Increase spacing, maybe just the y cords Considering this highly.

• 00:47:741 (2) - ctrl+g? Nah, would break the flow imo

• 00:57:270 (1) - Why is hitvolume 5% here? change to like 20 or something audible Will change if it's unrankable like that.

• 01:07:152 (1,2,1,2) - Why the sv slowdown? Music doesn't call for it imo My mapping style is screaming SV change <3

• 01:09:270 (1,2) - Please end on a blue tick. Or you loose some hp on these jumps x3 Nope, sounds weird :3

• 01:11:152 (1) - Make a circle? Naaah :3

• 01:10:682 - Starting from here on this bassy part, to make this more readable, only nc on a sv change. Will help alleviate a lot of reading problems Changed the NC's to fit suggestion :3

• 01:14:917 (1,2) - Same as 01:09:270 (1,2) Same response

• 01:16:329 (1,1,1) - Dont need sv changes here, imo Will change if future mods tell me to ^^

• 01:19:152 (4,5,6,7) - Make 4 and 5 one slider and 6 and 7 one slider. Music calls for more held out rhythm. Otherwise proceed to mod below Didn't do this one

• 01:19:152 (4,5) - Switch the placement of these two? That would make a killer pattern also. Ignore if you did mod above But I did this one, looks amazing

• 01:19:858 (1) - Map something over this. You can get a lot more creative than that c: Well, I just did this.. Erm, maybe? this will work? xDhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4780648

• 01:23:737 (3,1) - fix blanket? Done, ew that was ugly.

• 01:28:314 (1,2,3,4) - Space more? like 00:36:094 (1,2,1,2) Nah, I like reverse slider patterns like this.

• 01:32:872 (1,2) - Same as 01:14:917 (1,2) and 01:09:270 (1,2) Same response :3

• 01:37:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Continue kicksliders here to the stuttery voice? Nah, you'll see why later.

• 01:44:848 (6,7) - kickslider here? Yeah, I'll change that.

• 02:00:282 (1,2,3,4) - Long slider here Done

• 02:29:781 (1) - Hitvolume here should be more audible Will change if unrankable :3

• 02:30:487 (1,1) - Make this overlap more obvious. Very hard to read That's the whole point

• 02:41:781 (1,2) - YOu get the point. Won't change it here x)

• 02:42:487 (1) - More audible Hmm, it's a slow part with ONLY long sliders, I think it's ok.

• 03:24:469 (1) - Why is this a repeat slider? Make one big slider I made that reverse slider twice, so it shouldn't be much of a problem.

• 03:28:024 (4,5) - press ctrl+g for cool pattern The transition from 5 to 6 will suck if I do that D:

• 03:38:168 (4,1) - put a jump here? Maybe

• 03:41:809 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove nc on bold?: 1,1,1,1,1,1 This is for HP recovery.

• 03:48:399 (5,6,7,8) - Make these 2 kicksliders for better rhythm? You'll see later why I don't do that.

• 03:49:959 (1,1,1,1,1) - Please, remove all of these nc's. This is very hard to read HW style, you'll see why later x)

• 03:50:826 (1) - make this a triple. Trust me. The third sound isn't audible to me, I might consider two notes tho.

• 03:52:214 (1) - Same Even less here

• 03:52:561 (2) - nc? Done.

• 03:57:416 (1,1) - Flow from these 2 notes is choppy. (Might sound hypocritical from my map sry) I agree though, your map is like that on purpose, mine isn't, thanks for this suggestion, changed! ^^

• 03:59:063 (1) - Start this on the big white tick, you need to emphasize that note I value the wub sound higher.

• 04:01:231 (1) - To make this more intresting, I'd use this repeat slider 3 times for each time the synth changes pitch

• 04:01:925 (1) - get rid of the repeat and make one kickslider I assume you mean a 1/8 kickslider, I donno, it doesn't feel bad, but I don't disallow it either

• 04:07:821 (2) - Increase sv here so that reverse arrows arent so cluttered by the actual hit circle Did it to 3rd slider only 'cause pitch changes :3

• 04:08:861 (1) - End this on next blue tick? Good idea.

• 04:11:636 (1) - Make this 2 kicksliders. That would break consistency from the last vertical section.

• 04:11:636 - No more nc's from here until this kick slider part ends Same here.

• 04:13:196 (2) - Make this a kickslider also? Nah I was told last time due to a previous mod to remove it, which I agreed to.

• 04:18:919 (1,1) - end on blue tick Nope

• 04:21:000 (2) - Something like this from here would be better But then blue tick wub isn't mapped

• 04:33:139 (1,2,3,4) - 2 kicksliders? Nope, I've made that stream a lot of times

• 04:34:526 (1,1,1,1) - remove all nc's Consistency break if I do

• 04:36:954 (2) - sv change here, need to nc Done

• 04:45:624 (1) - Make this 2+ repeat sliders? (Second one on white tick) Made kick sliders for the new hitsounds :3

• 04:56:029 (1) - 2 repreat sliders recommended, no nc's untill kickslider section ends It has a small audible part that makes this acceptable

• 04:57:416 (2) - nc here not before Nc'ed, but I kept the last NC too due

• 05:16:144 (4,5,6) - Make slider? Made reverse slider.

• 05:33:139 (3,1) - Overlap is weirdo. Put 3 on slidertail of 1? Moved a bit

• 05:54:295 (1) - Why a kickslider? Make circle. I like the kickslider, it probably can't get more intense than this.

TheArchist wrote:

Oh well time to mod it I guess. I've been putting it off for far too long; let's see what I can make of it!

First things first, my pass: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4786218. Yes, I suck; however I wanted to play it to get an idea of how it plays before anything else. I've explained already that I mod based on how I find the song fun to play in a PM (I think), so I'm gonna focus on that more rather than aesthetics, though I may find some aesthetic things to nitpick every now and then.

From there on, it's up to you on whether you consider my mod worthy or not. Anyway, lets get to it.

Oh, and here's a small talk over PM that I also think is relevant, but I believe you've already applied some of it. Feel free to skip this.

SPOILER

2016-03-20 13:42 TheArchist: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/888053 NOMA - Brain Power]
2016-03-20 13:42 TheArchist: noice map
2016-03-20 13:43 Spork Lover: Thanks <3
2016-03-20 13:43 Spork Lover: I'm trying pretty hard to get it ranked x)
2016-03-20 13:43 TheArchist: i'm fairly shit, but i'll see what i can offer as a mod
2016-03-20 13:43 Spork Lover: I just need to get more consistent stream sections
2016-03-20 13:44 Spork Lover: That would be very generous of you, thanks a ton!
2016-03-20 13:47 TheArchist: i feel its really the spacing that you might need to look out for tbh
2016-03-20 13:47 Spork Lover: Yup
2016-03-20 13:47 Spork Lover: That's the main thing I've been changing since last week
2016-03-20 13:48 Spork Lover: If you focus your mod on that, the mod will especially help
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: disclaimer though
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: a)
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: i'm shit
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: like
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: 55k rank tier shit who likes your map
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: b)
2016-03-20 13:48 Spork Lover: No worries man
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: i base my mods on how the song plays rather than aesthetics and shit
2016-03-20 13:48 TheArchist: hope that doesn't bother you
2016-03-20 13:50 Spork Lover: Yeah man everyone has their own way of modding, I'll give the feedback I can on the mod when you're done
2016-03-20 13:56 Spork Lover: Did a small update after 3 minutes
2016-03-20 13:56 Spork Lover: Update it so update doesn't overlap the mod ^^
2016-03-20 13:56 TheArchist: small thing, but sometimes i couldn't tell when the notes were 1/2 or 1/4 sometimes because of spacing on a sightread
2016-03-20 13:57 Spork Lover: Give an example
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: streams in this part ish
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: 03:38:342 -
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: have the spacing that some 1/3s use here
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: 03:41:809 -
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: threw me off if anything lol
2016-03-20 13:58 Spork Lover: Ah
2016-03-20 13:58 Spork Lover: I get ya
2016-03-20 13:58 TheArchist: one thing i noticed
2016-03-20 13:59 Spork Lover: But the reason I can't change the spacing of either is because it's consistent for both sections
2016-03-20 13:59 Spork Lover: (I tryed making it noticeable with the "NC spam" x)
2016-03-20 13:59 TheArchist: lol prob i didn't care about the notice part and tried to play it using my rhythm
2016-03-20 13:59 TheArchist: thats why it stuck out to me
2016-03-20 13:59 TheArchist: idk i'll have to playtest it more and see
2016-03-20 14:00 Spork Lover: Yeah it's a valid opinion

00:12:623 (4,5,1,1,1) - Make this (4,5,6,1,2) or (1,2,3,1,2). Either way, I think that the notes as they are can be a little distracting and don't necessarily contribute to how you want to read the pattern. While playing it I misread quite a few times because I was assuming they'd be 1/2 but got slammed with 1/3 into slider into jump lol. Did 1,2,3,1,2, let's see how it goes <3

Also I think 00:13:034 (1) is quite unfriendly to reach after playing through that part a bit. I recommend something like this after messing with it a little: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4786275 I moved the other note a bit closer instead

00:37:505 (1,2,1,2) - I think those notes are slightly lower for where you're going with them. 00:38:035 (2,1) feels rather sharp to jump towards. The music itself is rather repetitive in nature, and since you haven't gradually nudged major changes in spacing (the closest I can think of is galvenize maps but I literally can't be arsed to give an example right now), I think changing the spacing of that particular jump would be something you're interested in. Maybe something like this would be better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4786317 I moved the first 4 jumps a bit up wards and rotated the 3rd and 4th note a little bit upwards :3, not 100% as your suggestion, but fairly close.

00:50:035 (6) - The song being repetitive as it is and how you've mapped it makes that play a lot... weirder than I thought. The spacing between the other notes and this one seems a little weird as it's just one change in a constant part per se. I dunno if that's intentional or not, but it played a little weird to me. However, it's probably not too much in the grand scheme of things. I did the exact opposite and added ANOTHER triangle a bit later, and reworked a section (A lot of changes, let's just say that <3)

01:36:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Subjective opinion here, but I think you should've that part entirely in 1/2 sliders to match the vocals at that point. Fits better with the music in my opinion alongside making the aimy motion required here match the music more. Just my opinion, once again. This tends to show up later as well, so I'm not going to repeat myself on this. Nah I don't agree, since I do it on the 3rd, 4th, 7th and 8th section in the chorus. ^^

01:52:738 - I think you add a strong slider finish to the end of the nearby slider, mess with the slider velocity to make the end one 1/2 note later or add a note here to emphasize the distorted vocals, in all honesty. Wow, bad mistake from my part, changed! (Looks a lot better now <3)

03:09:556 (3,4) - I think four sliders in that section fit a lot more when you play it since it fits the beat more than the timings you already have. That sort of change up while in a stream section fucked my rhythm sense a lot more than I thought because it's not exactly the same structure as the stream section has. I get that this part follows vocals a little bit, but I think it could follow it better with the slider idea. Feel free to disregard it if you don't agree. Yeah, I don't agree for one reason: The vocals are goin' in 1/2's for that slider.

03:54:642 (2,3,4,5) - I think this part is better in 1/3 and then you swap to the 1/4 burst right after after listening to it quite a bit. Nah music is following the beat here, but I NC'ed the first note of the stream to help the player out a little.

And uh wow. I had less to say on it that I thought I did LOL. Anyway hope my mod helps in anyway, I guess. Trust me, it really did!

The quality of the suggestions outweighted the length by a mile, very nice mod! Thanks a TON for the mod !

Spork Lover wrote:

02:48:134 (1) - Holy shit this slider sucks, plz fix

Lemmen wrote:

i don't even know how to mod


This is all I got lol
00:27:623 (1) - I feel like this slider has a really bad flow from the previous combo where the spacing is too big for the rhythm, try to change spacing to something more like from 00:30:271 (4) - to 00:30:447 (1) - Made a triangle pattern with the sliders to make it flow a bit better.
01:38:085 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Has a really strange bend that feels pretty weird playing compared to other streams I'll figure something out here eventually, will take a lot of work >.<
02:07:912 (1) - This shouldn't have a reverse arrow as there's only 2 sound at the time and not 3, feels weird to play aswell There is 3 sounds :3, listen carefully on 25-50% playback
05:57:156 (1) - Personally think this should be a huge slider with resembling a skull but that's personal preference. I like the suggestion, but I don't think I'm gonna do that for now x)

Thanks <3










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