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Juanes - Lo Que Me Gusta A Mi

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Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 20 de noviembre de 2010 at 07:17:07 p.m.

Artist: Juanes
Title: Lo Que Me Gusta A Mi
BPM: 95
Filesize: 5001kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Challenging (4.47 stars, 284 notes)
  2. Difficult (2.89 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Relaxing (1.08 stars, 159 notes)
Download: Juanes - Lo Que Me Gusta A Mi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st #Spanish Beatmap

Pending:
  1. Relaxing (Easy 100%)
  2. Difficult (Normal 100%)
  3. Challenging (Hard 100%)
Last edited by Gonzvlo , edited 1 time in total.
Krisom
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2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
IRC modded. Gave new offset, break suggestions, stack suggestions, naziied hitsounds and sliderbodies.

Starred
+ Kudosu Starred for spanish <3
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
Hola

Solo sugerencias hago yo :)

General
01:21:696 - 02:42:538 : eso de bajar el volumen , suena (es estupido decir suena pero bueno) como mal , nose pero ami parecer no me gusta , podrias probar subiendo el volumen cada vez mas en cada hit (me hago a entender? lo pongo en general porke al parecer esta en las 3 diffies. )

~Relaxing~
- y si pruebas con s tick rate 2 ? D:
01:29:907 : mueve 2 grids a la derecha

~Difficult~
01:51:380 : si pruebas poner en Audio "Normal" me gusta como suena el otro finish XD.
02:15:065 (5) : prueba moverlo a 02:15:380 (hay tu vees el spacing)

~Challenging~
00:30:223 : clap y no whistle
00:30:538 : whistle.

RECUERDA. son solo sugerencias , ya ques mis mod son horribles.

star para ti , para agrandar la lista de mapas en spanish.

saludos.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
S P A N I S H <3

General;
- Everything is fine here ~

Info of the Song;
- Tags >> Add the name of the album ??

Looks;
- I'm not sure if those colors look good ...

Relaxing;
- 00:20:177 >> What does this timing section do ?? I mean ... because there are no notes before this
- 01:03:380 >> Add finish ??
- 01:07:170 >> Finish ??
- 01:13:486 >> Add finish ??
- 01:23:591 >> Extend kiai time for the chorus on this part ??
- 01:51:380 >> Remove whistle
- 02:33:065 >> Add finish ??
- 02:36:223 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 02:39:380 >> Finish ??
- 02:52:328 >> Move to 02:52:012

Difficult;
- 00:55:801 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 01:00:854 >> Add finish
- 01:02:117 >> ^
- 01:03:380 >> ^
- 01:07:170 >> ^
- 01:12:222 >> ^
- 01:16:012 (1,3,5) >> ^
- 02:05:907 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 02:16:328 >> ^
- 02:51:696 >> ^
- 02:54:598 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 03:14:749 >> ^

Challenging;
- 01:00:854 >> Finish
- 01:05:907 (1,3,7) >> ^
- 01:10:959 (1,3) >> ^
- 01:16:012 >> ^
- 01:23:591 >> Change to normal finish ??
- 02:14:117 >> Remove new combo
- 02:15:696 >> New combo
- 02:28:012 >> Finish

* Star ~ :3
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Seems you are getting popular among mappers & modders, Gonzvlo.
Oh, and another spanish song, nice.

Relaxing
01:03:380 (2) - Finish in 01:03:380? (Seems lovhin456 suggests this too.)
01:12:223 (5) - Add finish?
01:30:854 (1) - Remove finish from 01:30:854? (Well, I thought put circle 01:30:854 and 3-time-return slider in 01:31:486 would be good too.)
02:07:801 (2) - Spacing seems somewhat short?

Difficult
01:00:854 (1~7) - Well, put some finishes like you did in 'Relaxing'?
01:08:433 (4) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
01:13:486 (6) - ^
01:16:012 (1,3,5) - Add finish? (Well, finish with lowered volume might be work?)
01:30:854 (1) - Remove finish?
01:41:275 (1) - Players might confusing with this, as spacing is halved suddenly. (But formation seems nice, hmm...)
02:24:223 (5) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
03:03:380 (2) - Spacing is slightly longer, but I think player can read this note properly.

Challenging
00:48:223 (4) - Add clap in 00:48:854?
00:50:117 (X) - Add something like a circle or slider from here to 00:50:433 or something like that?
01:00:696 ~ 01:19:170 - Well, put some finishes like you did in 'Relaxing'? (As I said before, finish with lowered volume might be work?)
02:51:696 (1) - Remove finish?

Well, nice map. Mod might be helpful, might be not, as it's kinda good map already.
(We definitely need spanish map catagory, yeahy.)
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
As wmfchris request
Here my mod:
-------------------------------------
Blue=Just a suggestion
I think you should fix this
:?: =I can't understand
:!: =The most important thing
Here we go:
-------------------------------------
Relaxing
00:27:380(3)Horizontally with (1)
00:45:696(1)hairlike spacing.I think you better to fix this
01:24:222(x)add a note here and add clap sound?
01:30:538(x)add a note here
01:38:749(3)left 1 grid(LV3)
02:25:486(2)add a finish here?
02:44:433(5)^
02:52:012(x)add a note here

Difficult
00:28:012(4)lol,cut this slider to two?
01:00:854(1)Change this note to Normal hitsound?
01:21:696(2)volume+1?
01:33:308(5)Remove finish
02:21:380(5)swap new combo
02:44:433(6)add a finish

Challenging
00:40:486(9)Move to 00:40:328
00:41:117(x)add a note here
00:50:117(x)^
01:26:117(5)add a finish here
02;20:907(9.10)overlap on at the of the slider(8)
02:44:433(5)add a finish

Good luck
*Star
narakucrimson
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Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hola! Te molesta si lo hago en español? De todas formas lo voy a hacer en español xD

[General]

Muy buen trabajo, se le nota mucha dedicación. Me gustan más todavía los mapas que son bien simétricos, aunque no me salgan hacerlos xD
Excelente trabajo con los hitsounds.


[Relaxing]

Está todo bastante funcional, y es lindo a la vista.

2:07:801 (2) - Tal vez el espaciamiento sea muy poco acá :/ No es un gran problema, pero no vendría mal si lo agrandaras al que venís usando como standar.

Quizás le subiría 1 al AR.


[Difficult]

1:10:328 (6) - Qué tal si empezás el combo acá, y se lo sacás al siguiente círculo?
1:51:380 (1) - Podrías perfectamente sacar el nuevo combo. Lo mismo en challenging, aunque tampoco es que quede mal.


[Challenging]

40:486 (9) - Qué onda con este slider? No entiendo porque lo usás de 1/6. Podría ser perfectamente de 1/4 de largo, y empezar en 40:328, así:
SPOILER
Creo que suena mucho mejor.
40:959 (x) - De paso, podrías agregar un círculo acá.
1:28:170 (SP) - Qué tal si le agregás un whistle?
2:35:907 (9) - Nuevo combo?



Muy bueno, de verdad. Ahí tenés mi estrella!
Gonzvlo
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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Thanks Guys.

Mod's Feedback, If any of the modders want to read it.

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

S P A N I S H <3

Info of the Song;
- Tags >> Add the name of the album ?? The album is "Mi Sangre" and I think it'd be too generic.

Looks;
- I'm not sure if those colors look good ... I'm open for suggestions.

Relaxing;
- 00:20:177 >> What does this timing section do ?? I mean ... because there are no notes before this Reduces volume :3
- 01:03:380 >> Add finish ?? I'm following the music for the "Finishes" It's not consistent but D:
- 01:07:170 >> Finish ?? ^
- 01:13:486 >> Add finish ?? ^
- 01:23:591 >> Extend kiai time for the chorus on this part ?? I want to use kiai time only for the last chorus.
- 01:51:380 >> Remove whistle Oops, Ok.
- 02:33:065 >> Add finish ?? Same as above.
- 02:36:223 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note Ok ^-^
- 02:39:380 >> Finish ??
- 02:52:328 >> Move to 02:52:012 Sounds better on 1/2 imo.

Difficult;
- 00:55:801 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note Let's keep combo's consistency.
- 01:00:854 >> Add finish Ok.
- 01:02:117 >> ^
- 01:03:380 >> ^
- 01:07:170 >> ^
- 01:12:222 >> ^
- 01:16:012 (1,3,5) >> ^ Ok ^^^^
- 02:05:907 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 02:16:328 >> ^
- 02:51:696 >> ^
- 02:54:598 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 03:14:749 >> ^ I want to keep combo's consistency ^

Challenging;
- 01:00:854 >> Finish
- 01:05:907 (1,3,7) >> ^
- 01:10:959 (1,3) >> ^
- 01:16:012 >> ^ All done.
- 01:23:591 >> Change to normal finish ??
- 02:14:117 >> Remove new combo
- 02:15:696 >> New combo
- 02:28:012 >> Finish Done,done,done.

* Star ~ :3
Wow nice eye for hitsounds, ty.

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lepidopodus wrote:

Seems you are getting popular among mappers & modders, Gonzvlo.
Oh, and another spanish song, nice.

Relaxing
01:03:380 (2) - Finish in 01:03:380? (Seems lovhin456 suggests this too.) Ok since 2 modders said that, I'll add it.
01:12:223 (5) - Add finish? Uh fine.
01:30:854 (1) - Remove finish from 01:30:854? (Well, I thought put circle 01:30:854 and 3-time-return slider in 01:31:486 would be good too.) Finish removed.
02:07:801 (2) - Spacing seems somewhat short? Fixed.

Difficult
01:00:854 (1~7) - Well, put some finishes like you did in 'Relaxing'?
01:08:433 (4) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
01:13:486 (6) - ^
01:16:012 (1,3,5) - Add finish? (Well, finish with lowered volume might be work?)
01:30:854 (1) - Remove finish? All done.
01:41:275 (1) - Players might confusing with this, as spacing is halved suddenly. (But formation seems nice, hmm...) D:
02:24:223 (5) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
03:03:380 (2) - Spacing is slightly longer, but I think player can read this note properly. Small jump :D

Challenging
00:48:223 (4) - Add clap in 00:48:854? Ok.
00:50:117 (X) - Add something like a circle or slider from here to 00:50:433 or something like that? Ok.
01:00:696 ~ 01:19:170 - Well, put some finishes like you did in 'Relaxing'? (As I said before, finish with lowered volume might be work?)
02:51:696 (1) - Remove finish? Ok. and Ok ^

Well, nice map. Mod might be helpful, might be not, as it's kinda good map already.
(We definitely need spanish map catagory, yeahy.) We have it ;D
Seems that I'm not good at placing hitsounds. Ty :P

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kanpakyin wrote:

Relaxing
00:27:380(3)Horizontally with (1) I don't get this D:
00:45:696(1)hairlike spacing.I think you better to fix this Ok.
01:24:222(x)add a note here and add clap sound? I think it's ok if I don't place that circle (Easy)
01:30:538(x)add a note here ^
01:38:749(3)left 1 grid(LV3) Nice eye, fixed.
02:25:486(2)add a finish here?
02:44:433(5)^ Ok, All the finishes were added.
02:52:012(x)add a note here Same explanation as above.

Difficult
00:28:012(4)lol,cut this slider to two? D: why? I like this slider.
01:00:854(1)Change this note to Normal hitsound? It seems fine to me.
01:21:696(2)volume+1? Nah, I'm using the same volume for all the diffs, and It seems ok.
01:33:308(5)Remove finish Ok.
02:21:380(5)swap new combo I want to keep combo's consistency.
02:44:433(6)add a finish Ok.

Challenging
00:40:486(9)Move to 00:40:328 Ok.
00:41:117(x)add a note here Nah it's ok w/o that circle.
00:50:117(x)^ ^
01:26:117(5)add a finish here I didn't use a finish there b4, why would I add it D:?
02;20:907(9.10)overlap on at the of the slider(8) Sorry, I don't get it >W<
02:44:433(5)add a finish Ok.

Good luck
*Star
Thanks :D

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narakucrimson wrote:

Hola! Te molesta si lo hago en español? De todas formas lo voy a hacer en español xD D:

[Relaxing]
2:07:801 (2) - Tal vez el espaciamiento sea muy poco acá :/ No es un gran problema, pero no vendría mal si lo agrandaras al que venís usando como standar. Ok.
Quizás le subiría 1 al AR. Creo que está bien así, pero lo subiré si algún modder + lo sugiere.

[Difficult]
1:10:328 (6) - Qué tal si empezás el combo acá, y se lo sacás al siguiente círculo? Creo que se vería mal por los colores, y porque perdería la consistencia.
1:51:380 (1) - Podrías perfectamente sacar el nuevo combo. Lo mismo en challenging, aunque tampoco es que quede mal. Antes estaba sin new combo, pero creo que está mejor así.

[Challenging]

40:486 (9) - Qué onda con este slider? No entiendo porque lo usás de 1/6. Podría ser perfectamente de 1/4 de largo, y empezar en
Creo que suena mucho mejor. No suena bien D:? Lo cambiaré si alguien más lo sugiere.
40:959 (x) - De paso, podrías agregar un círculo acá. ^
1:28:170 (SP) - Qué tal si le agregás un whistle? Ok, suena bien.
2:35:907 (9) - Nuevo combo? Oops, Ok ;D

Muy bueno, de verdad. Ahí tenés mi estrella!

Gracias :D
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Challenging:

00:45:380 - Consider adding a circle here.
02:04:012 (4) - Consider moving this slider 1/4 earlier, so it would start at 02:03:854, and end at 02:04:486, and add a circle at 02:04:644
02:04:959 (6) - Consider moving this slider 1/4 later, so it would start at 02:05:117 and end at 02:05:749, and add a circle at 02:04:959 (6). Don't modify 02:05:907 (8). Lol.

Difficult:

02:56:749 (5) - This is slightly offscreen. Althought if you could avoid making it toucht he hp bar would be even better for me. But yeah, it is offscreen.

Found nothing else in your maps =o
Althought they do reminds me of someone, Lol :T
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
I have to concede that is impressive >_>
Gonzvlo
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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

ErufenRito wrote:

Challenging:

00:45:380 - Consider adding a circle here. Added
02:04:012 (4) - Consider moving this slider 1/4 earlier, so it would start at 02:03:854, and end at 02:04:486, and add a circle at 02:04:644 Done
02:04:959 (6) - Consider moving this slider 1/4 later, so it would start at 02:05:117 and end at 02:05:749, and add a circle at 02:04:959 (6). Don't modify 02:05:907 (8). Lol.

Difficult:

02:56:749 (5) - This is slightly offscreen. Althought if you could avoid making it toucht he hp bar would be even better for me. But yeah, it is offscreen. I tried ;_;

Found nothing else in your maps =o
Althought they do reminds me of someone, Lol :T, Lol Who's him/her?
Thanks ^-^ , and Thanks Termerys for the Star.
Hyguys
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Joined May 2010
Hyguys
OMG ITZ JUANES <3<3<3
as you requested

Relaxing(or easy)
:arrow: 00:40:012 (X) Add a beat here with clap
:arrow: 00:43:801 (4) Align with that slider end
:arrow: 00:46:065 (6) Align with that slider start
:arrow: 01:17:275 (3) Remove Finish
:arrow: 01:18:538 (5) ^

Difficult(or normal)
:arrow: 01:51:380 (1) Remove new combo
:arrow: 02:23:591 (4) Align with the previous (5)
:arrow: 02:27:380 (1) Whistle

Challenging(or hard)
:arrow: 01:01:499 (2) Remove whistle add clap
:arrow: 01:02:749 (3) ^
:arrow: 01:04:012 (4) ^
:arrow: 01:51:380 (1) Remove new combo
:arrow: 02:35:591 (8) Better
:arrow: 03:09:696 (1,2,3,4) Spacing
:arrow: 03:10:959 (1,2,3,4) ^


Star
Krisom
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Krisom

ErufenRito wrote:

Althought they do reminds me of someone, Lol :T
He probably means me, though I find Gonz's style quite different to what I've been doing in my newest maps. You'll see when I submit Tequila and Turning Japanese~
Gonzvlo
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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Hyguys wrote:

Relaxing(or easy)
:arrow: 00:40:012 (X) Add a beat here with clap I have to deny.
:arrow: 00:43:801 (4) Align with that slider end Ok
:arrow: 00:46:065 (6) Align with that slider start ^
:arrow: 01:17:275 (3) Remove Finish Listen to the music, there's a finish.
:arrow: 01:18:538 (5) ^ ^

Difficult(or normal)
:arrow: 01:51:380 (1) Remove new combo I want to keep consistency
:arrow: 02:23:591 (4) Align with the previous (5) Fixed.
:arrow: 02:27:380 (1) Whistle ?

Challenging(or hard)
:arrow: 01:01:499 (2) Remove whistle add clap I've used Whistles instead of Claps for this part on every diff ~.~
:arrow: 01:02:749 (3) ^
:arrow: 01:04:012 (4) ^
:arrow: 01:51:380 (1) Remove new combo I want to keep consitency.
:arrow: 02:35:591 (8) Better Ok.
:arrow: 03:09:696 (1,2,3,4) Spacing That's obviously intended.
:arrow: 03:10:959 (1,2,3,4) ^
Thanks :]
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hola! Interesante canción de Juanes! :D

Bueno...ahora sí voy al grano con mi modding!!

[Relaxing]
SPOILER
- Recomiendo correr la perilla del volumen 1 raya a la izquierda.
-01:19:801 (7) - Mueve ese círculo 1 grid arriba (LVL3)...lo digo por estética. Podrías poner un Finish (?)
-01:20:433 (1) - Pon un Whistle, o silencia la última parte del Slider.
-02:41:275 (1) - Lo mismo que dije en 01:20:433 (1)
-02:44:433 (5) - Finish al principio del Slider.
-03:02:749 (2) - demasiado largo el bucle de ese slider...podría confundir al jugador novato. recórtalo hasta la posición 03:04:128 y en lo que sobra, usa otro patrón rítmico.
-No veo más problemas

[Difficult]
SPOILER
-02:10:959 (6) - recomiendo poner ese circle en la mismo lugar donde finaliza el anterior slider.
-02:52:328 (1) - Mueve ese circle hacia abajo. No me gusta que quede montado sobre el resto del anterior slider.

[Challenging]
SPOILER
-0:40:959 (?) - Recomiendo que pongas una nota
-00:42:538 (4) Recomiendo que sigas este patrón
-00:49:959 (7) - Córralo, respetando el espaciado
-00:50:117 (8) - no deberías hacer este slider una curva? no me gusta ese slider lineal con esa inclinación S:
-03:09:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - extraño patrón cerrado...pero no tengo nada que decir

Buen map y Slider Art! Ya como está finalizado el map y está bien hecho, te doy estrella!
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Umm, maybe use these colors ??
Combo1 : 216,249,254
Combo2 : 0,45,128
Combo3 : 16,126,237
Combo4 : 101,197,254

No kds ~
Gonzvlo
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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

lovhin456 wrote:

Umm, maybe use these colors ??
Combo1 : 216,249,254
Combo2 : 0,45,128
Combo3 : 16,126,237
Combo4 : 101,197,254

No kds ~
Ok :D
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
star~
Mashley
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Joined September 2008
Mashley
Nice stylish map. Bubbled.
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
Relaxing:
00:45:696 (1) - Move up by 1 Level 3 Grid so it does not go offscreen.

Fix and I'll rank.
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo

Larto wrote:

Relaxing:
00:45:696 (1) - Move up by 1 Level 3 Grid so it does not go offscreen.

Fix and I'll rank.
Fixed, and also added a missing Clap on "Challenging" and changed a pattern on "Difficult" to avoid an overlap, Thanks
SPOILER
Changed Pattern:
02:54:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
Larto
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Larto
ül
Krisom
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Krisom
>w< Congratz Gonz! Nisiquiera le tuve que dar bubble :P!!!

Language Spanish and Genre would be Pop >w<
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Juanes *.*

Gratz <3
Gonzvlo
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Thanks Larto, Ty guys <3
lovhin456
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Congrats ~ :3
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