SCREEN mode - Naked Dive (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki

kjounouchi wrote:

can i make insane diff ??
sure, bro :)
Djontor
ok this insane diff for this map
Djontor
Updates :D
Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki

kjounouchi wrote:

Updates :D
Thx for your hard work :D
CyberX
put our name in tag
Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki

CyberX wrote:

put our name in tag
Thx for reminding me, forgot about it
Lefia
NM queue here

[easy]

00:21:211 (3) belum simetris

[normal]

01:13:616 (5) belum dempet

[insane]

00:42:952 (2,3) overlap (?)

[new world]

AR 9,3 better

00:06:023 (10) NC
00:29:946 (1) remove NC , NC di 00:30:135
01:00:705 (7) NC
01:01:275 (1) Remove NC
01:02:224 (4) NC

GL~
Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki

MadaoX wrote:

NM queue here

[easy]

00:21:211 (3) belum simetris -> fixed

[normal]

01:13:616 (5) belum dempet -> ok, fix

GL~
Thx kang modnya :D
CyberX

MadaoX wrote:

[new world]

AR 9,3 better Fixed

00:06:023 (10) NC Fixed
00:29:946 (1) remove NC , NC di 00:30:135 Fixed
01:00:705 (7) NC Fixed
01:01:275 (1) Remove NC Fixed
01:02:224 (4) NC[/notice][/box] Fixed

GL~
Thanks for your mod
MokouSmoke
from my queue~
[General]
  1. why slidertick rate 2? 1 is fine.

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:616 (1,2) - In general for lower diffs, you want the map to flow as smoothly as possible. issue: http://puu.sh/nn4Wp/0ff3cda3d2.jpg suggestion for fix: http://puu.sh/nn52Q/e4c4ca23f1.jpg
  2. 00:18:933 (4) - end this slider at 00:19:313 - to follow drums better. Also, it's better to avoid 1/2 rhythms for easy.
  3. 00:26:528 (1,2) - fix blanket t/208596
  4. 00:27:287 (2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn5mi/84137740f9.jpg
  5. 00:40:958 (4,1) - swap NC, try to keep the NC on the downbeat (big white tick) samething at 00:43:996 (4,1) -
  6. 00:44:756 (1) - rotate -54 degrees for better flow from 00:43:996 (4) -
  7. 00:49:692 (4,1) - blanket here?
  8. 00:51:591 (3,4) - fix flow. suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn68t/01588ee17d.jpg
  9. 01:03:743 (3) - shape can be improved http://puu.sh/nn6bW/3755d4c58e.jpg
  10. 01:06:022 (2,4) - better blanket http://puu.sh/nn6hA/03834a30ff.jpg

[Normal]
  1. note placement feels a little random. try to use more patterns in your mapping
    [*00:10:104 (4) - Don't start slider on blue tick, it's very confusing to beginners. suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn6tP/ecf5050e15.jpg
  2. 00:18:173 (3) - curve slider other way for better flow
  3. 00:51:591 - strong beat here should have clickable object
  4. 00:53:110 (1,2) - make sliders flatter for better flow http://puu.sh/nn6E3/163f892e31.jpg
  5. 00:59:186 (1) - shape can be improved: http://puu.sh/nn6Lc/7e18f019ba.jpg
  6. 01:05:262 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm so snare drum at 01:05:642 - is clickable
  7. 01:06:022 (3) - suggest 1/2 slider+ note

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:680 (4) - break into 1/2 slider + note to capture electronic instrument
  2. 1/4 DS needs fixing throughout map. ex: 00:13:616 (1,2) - 0.23 DS, 00:13:996 (2,3) - 1.02 DS, 00:15:135 (5,6) - 0.33 DS, etc... please pick one DS and use for all 1/4 rhythms
  3. 00:19:313 (8,9,1) - avoid linear flows. they do not play well

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:053 (3,1) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn7kJ/40c5171b3c.jpg
  2. 00:02:007 (1,2) - swap NC. in general, you should NC on downbeat (big white tick)
  3. 00:03:531 (2) - I would delete this note to give 00:03:416 (1) - more emphasis
  4. 00:06:307 (1) - don't start 1/4 sliders on blue ticks. it will confuse players. try this to follow music better: http://puu.sh/nn7tv/5dcf4c88b2.jpg
  5. 00:11:718 (1,1) - unneccesary NC
  6. 00:13:616 (1,3,4) - your claps sound random and not good. Claps are generally used on offbeats (2nd and 4th white ticks after every big white tick mark). try that, I think it will be much better. also, recommend you use drum hitsound whenever you hear drum in song
  7. 00:14:471 (4) - no sound on blue tick. music is at 00:14:566 -
  8. 00:19:787 - 00:21:306 (2) - ^
  9. 00:25:199 (4) - using red tick marks to purposely change SV midway is unrankable now. a lot of other places this happens too
  10. 00:25:768 (1,2,3) - 00:28:806 (1,2,3) - fix stack
  11. 00:29:566 - fill in this gap since it's insane and vocal sound here
  12. 00:55:768 (3,4,5,6,1) - flatten so stream flows into slider better http://puu.sh/nn7S0/99a0a657ad.jpg
  13. 00:57:762 (2) - 00:58:142 (5) - 00:58:332 (1) - overmapped, no sounds on these clickable objects. please try to follow music as closely as possible
  14. 01:02:224 (1) - I feel this entire section is overmapped. This uses way too many 1/4 sliders for an insane diff
  15. 01:08:585 (2,3) - avoid overlap

[New World]
  1. I'm pretty sure only highest diff may have custom name, even if it is GD. rename to Extra
  2. 00:02:416 - make downbeat clickable
  3. 00:06:023 (10) - same comment about NC, use NC on downbeat
  4. 00:09:059 - add note here
  5. 00:09:629 (3,4,5) - why all of a sudden stop following electronic instrument? move 00:09:629 (3,4) - to 00:09:534 -
  6. 00:12:097 (3) - just make this a circle, repeat slider is mapped to nothing
  7. 00:13:616 (4,5) - replace with circles, there are no blue tick sounds in song
  8. 00:18:173 (2) - break into 2 1/4 sliders
  9. 00:18:838 - make this clickable, it's the last note of the electronic instrument
  10. 00:22:541 (1) - please don't abuse 1/4 sliders. make this a circle
  11. 00:22:730 (2) - break into two notes to follow song
  12. 00:24:154 (6) - no 1/8 sound in song x.x
  13. 00:36:591 (4) - delete. it's overmapped and silencing a note is basically unrankable
  14. 00:40:768 (1) - ctrl+g twice and reposition, otherwise 1/4 jump too much http://puu.sh/nn8Bi/1c7cc984fb.jpg
  15. 00:42:287 (1) - prefer triplet into 00:42:477 (2) -
  16. 00:42:287 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, your 1/4 spacing looks larger than your 1/2 spacing right now which makes no sense
  17. 00:46:465 (3,4) - pls make smaller jump. this is 4.74x jump and song isn't even very intense here. if you look at the next part, 00:47:034 (1,2,3,4) - song is about the same, but this is much easier than your previous patterns. Try to use big jump only when the song calls for it.
  18. 00:50:262 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam unnecessary, and even if you decide to keep, it should be on the white ticks, not the red since the strong beats are on the white ticks
  19. 00:51:022 (1,2) - larger spacing
    Your spacings are quite strange because there are quite a few places where your 1/4 rhythms have bigger spacing than your 1/2 rhythms. I think you should rework some of the jumps so the map is more readable.

[Phantom]
  1. 00:10:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you should NC in groups of 4 and only change spacing after each group of 4 to help players read streams.
  2. 00:21:876 (3,4,5,6) - DS
  3. 00:26:148 (3,4,1) - don't make 1/1 spacing look smaller than your 1/2 spacing x.x better to ctrl+g 00:26:718 (1,2) - so 1/1 gap is stacked
  4. 00:37:920 (1) - are you sure you want to do 10 seconds of continuous streaming?
  5. 00:51:591 (1) - prefer if this was a note and you made a triplet pattern at 00:51:211 (6,7,1) -
  6. 01:11:908 (3,4,5) - DS
  7. 01:14:566 (2,3,4,5) - don't make 1/2 spacing smaller than 1/4 spacing

I think the higher difficulties could use some more work. I would check that 1/1, 1/2, and 1/4 rhythms should have different enough spacings that players can differentiate between the different rhythms since BNs have been pretty picky about that. Good luck!
CyberX

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
[New World]
  1. I'm pretty sure only highest diff may have custom name, even if it is GD. rename to Extra Fix
  2. 00:02:416 - make downbeat clickable Fix
  3. 00:06:023 (10) - same comment about NC, use NC on downbeat Fix
  4. 00:09:059 - add note here Fix
  5. 00:09:629 (3,4,5) - why all of a sudden stop following electronic instrument? move 00:09:629 (3,4) - to 00:09:534 - Fix
  6. 00:12:097 (3) - just make this a circle, repeat slider is mapped to nothing Fix
  7. 00:13:616 (4,5) - replace with circles, there are no blue tick sounds in song Fix
  8. 00:18:173 (2) - break into 2 1/4 sliders Fix
  9. 00:18:838 - make this clickable, it's the last note of the electronic instrument Fix
  10. 00:22:541 (1) - please don't abuse 1/4 sliders. make this a circle Fix
  11. 00:22:730 (2) - break into two notes to follow song Fix
  12. 00:24:154 (6) - no 1/8 sound in song x.x Fix
  13. 00:36:591 (4) - delete. it's overmapped and silencing a note is basically unrankable Fix
  14. 00:40:768 (1) - ctrl+g twice and reposition, otherwise 1/4 jump too much http://puu.sh/nn8Bi/1c7cc984fb.jpg Fix
  15. 00:42:287 (1) - prefer triplet into 00:42:477 (2) - Fix
  16. 00:42:287 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, your 1/4 spacing looks larger than your 1/2 spacing right now which makes no sense Fix
  17. 00:46:465 (3,4) - pls make smaller jump. this is 4.74x jump and song isn't even very intense here. if you look at the next part, 00:47:034 (1,2,3,4) - song is about the same, but this is much easier than your previous patterns. Try to use big jump only when the song calls for it. Fix
  18. 00:50:262 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam unnecessary, and even if you decide to keep, it should be on the white ticks, not the red since the strong beats are on the white ticks Fix
  19. 00:51:022 (1,2) - larger spacing Fix
    Your spacings are quite strange because there are quite a few places where your 1/4 rhythms have bigger spacing than your 1/2 rhythms. I think you should rework some of the jumps so the map is more readable.
Thanks for you mod
Djontor

MadaoX wrote:

NM queue here

[insane]

00:42:952 (2,3) overlap (?) Fixed

GL~
Thank's for your mod
Djontor

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:053 (3,1) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn7kJ/40c5171b3c.jpg Fixed
  2. 00:02:007 (1,2) - swap NC. in general, you should NC on downbeat (big white tick)Fixed
  3. 00:03:531 (2) - I would delete this note to give 00:03:416 (1) - more emphasisFixed
  4. 00:06:307 (1) - don't start 1/4 sliders on blue ticks. it will confuse players. try this to follow music better: http://puu.sh/nn7tv/5dcf4c88b2.jpg Fixed
  5. 00:11:718 (1,1) - unneccesary NC Fixed
  6. 00:13:616 (1,3,4) - your claps sound random and not good. Claps are generally used on offbeats (2nd and 4th white ticks after every big white tick mark). try that, I think it will be much better. also, recommend you use drum hitsound whenever you hear drum in song Fixed
  7. 00:14:471 (4) - no sound on blue tick. music is at 00:14:566 - Fixed
  8. 00:19:787 - 00:21:306 (2) - ^ Fixed
  9. 00:25:199 (4) - using red tick marks to purposely change SV midway is unrankable now. a lot of other places this happens too Fixed
  10. 00:25:768 (1,2,3) - 00:28:806 (1,2,3) - fix stack Fixed
  11. 00:29:566 - fill in this gap since it's insane and vocal sound here Fixed
  12. 00:55:768 (3,4,5,6,1) - flatten so stream flows into slider better http://puu.sh/nn7S0/99a0a657ad.jpg Fixed
  13. 00:57:762 (2) - 00:58:142 (5) - 00:58:332 (1) - overmapped, no sounds on these clickable objects. please try to follow music as closely as possible Fixed
  14. 01:02:224 (1) - I feel this entire section is overmapped. This uses way too many 1/4 sliders for an insane diff Fixed
  15. 01:08:585 (2,3) - avoid overlap Fixed
Thank's sir for your mod :)
Djontor
CyberX
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TitleUnicode:Naked Dive (TV Size)
Artist:SCREEN mode
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Creator:Kuro Fuyusaki
Version:Cyber's Insane
Source:無彩限のファントム・ワールド
Tags:musaigen no phantom world CyberX kjounouchi mai kawakami reina izumi koito minase kurumi kumamakura ruru
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61,147,68964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,80,69059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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368,288,72477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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220,65,73616,2,0,P|231:101|264:138,1,71.4999967269899,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,192,74376,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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192,280,74756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,160,74946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,208,77034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,112,77224,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki
aaa, im sorry i can't feedback the recent mod because of schedules

80% applied changes
Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki
Because i have time to spare i'll spread my respon about MokouSmoke's mod :)

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
[General]
  1. why slidertick rate 2? 1 is fine. -> fixed

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:616 (1,2) - In general for lower diffs, you want the map to flow as smoothly as possible. issue: http://puu.sh/nn4Wp/0ff3cda3d2.jpg suggestion for fix: http://puu.sh/nn52Q/e4c4ca23f1.jpg -> yep, fixed
  2. 00:18:933 (4) - end this slider at 00:19:313 - to follow drums better. Also, it's better to avoid 1/2 rhythms for easy. -> fixed
  3. 00:26:528 (1,2) - fix blanket t/208596 -> fixed
  4. 00:27:287 (2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn5mi/84137740f9.jpg -> hmm, well, i'll try for other placing
  5. 00:40:958 (4,1) - swap NC, try to keep the NC on the downbeat (big white tick) samething at 00:43:996 (4,1) - -> fixed
  6. 00:44:756 (1) - rotate -54 degrees for better flow from 00:43:996 (4) - -> fixed
  7. 00:49:692 (4,1) - blanket here? -> nope, but i'll think to change the placing
  8. 00:51:591 (3,4) - fix flow. suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn68t/01588ee17d.jpg -> fixed
  9. 01:03:743 (3) - shape can be improved http://puu.sh/nn6bW/3755d4c58e.jpg -> i confused with this part, so i'll think for another flow, like spinner?
  10. 01:06:022 (2,4) - better blanket http://puu.sh/nn6hA/03834a30ff.jpg -> fixed the circle before too

[Normal]
  1. note placement feels a little random. try to use more patterns in your mapping -> yea i think so, not used to make a normal diff
    [*00:10:104 (4) - Don't start slider on blue tick, it's very confusing to beginners. suggestion: http://puu.sh/nn6tP/ecf5050e15.jpg -> fixed
  2. 00:18:173 (3) - curve slider other way for better flow -> fixed
  3. 00:51:591 - strong beat here should have clickable object -> fixed
  4. 00:53:110 (1,2) - make sliders flatter for better flow http://puu.sh/nn6E3/163f892e31.jpg -> okay then, though the description a bit different
  5. 00:59:186 (1) - shape can be improved: http://puu.sh/nn6Lc/7e18f019ba.jpg -> fixed
  6. 01:05:262 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm so snare drum at 01:05:642 - is clickable -> fixed, tho i have a differ opinion
  7. 01:06:022 (3) - suggest 1/2 slider+ note -> i'll think about it

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:680 (4) - break into 1/2 slider + note to capture electronic instrument -> fixed
  2. 1/4 DS needs fixing throughout map. ex: 00:13:616 (1,2) - 0.23 DS, 00:13:996 (2,3) - 1.02 DS, 00:15:135 (5,6) - 0.33 DS, etc... please pick one DS and use for all 1/4 rhythms -> fixed, tho i still using a random DS XD
  3. 00:19:313 (8,9,1) - avoid linear flows. they do not play well -> change to slider at vertical below

[Phantom]
  1. 00:10:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you should NC in groups of 4 and only change spacing after each group of 4 to help players read streams. -> fixed
  2. 00:21:876 (3,4,5,6) - DS -> remake the pattern
  3. 00:26:148 (3,4,1) - don't make 1/1 spacing look smaller than your 1/2 spacing x.x better to ctrl+g 00:26:718 (1,2) - so 1/1 gap is stacked -> okay
  4. 00:37:920 (1) - are you sure you want to do 10 seconds of continuous streaming? -> till 2 more modder were complaining, i'll remake it
  5. 00:51:591 (1) - prefer if this was a note and you made a triplet pattern at 00:51:211 (6,7,1) - -> fixed?
  6. 01:11:908 (3,4,5) - DS -> fixed anyway
  7. 01:14:566 (2,3,4,5) - don't make 1/2 spacing smaller than 1/4 spacing -> okay o/

I think the higher difficulties could use some more work. I would check that 1/1, 1/2, and 1/4 rhythms should have different enough spacings that players can differentiate between the different rhythms since BNs have been pretty picky about that. Good luck! -> Thank you, sir :)
Djontor
Topic Starter
Kuro Fuyusaki

kjounouchi wrote:

i'm glad this post still alive ;w;

okay applying mod

and bro, always check your AImod first ~_~
DJMax
M4M

Easy Normal and Hard is quite beautiful and comfortable to play, so i will mod begin from insane

Jontor's Insane
I noticed that you really like to use parallel and perpendicular slders but I recommend you to change some of them to a better shape in order to make the flow smoothly.

00:03:646 (2,2) - this two could be copy and ctrl+h, then these sliders would have a better look.
00:11:528 (3,1,1) - these could change to 3 parallel sliders and 00:11:528 (3) - should be nc
00:13:427 -there should be a beat here and you ignored it and 00:13:332 (3) - the end of this slider do not have a sound, could change the end of the slider to 00:13:427 or delete the slider and put two notes instead
00:13:332 (3,1) - pls blanket
00:13:616 (1,2) - ∧
00:15:515 (4,5) - ∧
00:24:249 (1,2) - these sliders are almost touched
00:24:534 (2,3) - these are already touched, plz change their coordinate to make sure they are seperate
00:25:199 (4,5) - blanket would be better
00:28:237 (2,3) - ∧
00:29:566 (5) - wrong rhythm, it should be 1/3 beats
00:36:686 (2,3) - not touch would be better
00:36:971 (3) - this sliders end should on 00:37:256
00:38:490 (2,4) - better not to overlap
00:56:148 (1,2) - make a better blanket
00:59:186 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - nice stream!
01:01:654 (5) - better to change to 3 times back and add a note at 01:02:034
01:02:224 (1,2) - these should be 1/3 beats
01:03:743 (1,2) - ∧
01:08:300 (1,2) - ∧
01:09:819 (1,2) - ∧(if you dont want to change these is ok
01:12:857 (1,2,3,4) - nice sliders
01:17:509 (1,2,3) - better to change to a triangle
01:26:148 (2) - this is unrankable

Cyber's Insane
you r really good at making streams, but these streams are not beautiful enough, hope you can do better in the future
00:08:585 (1,2) - blanket or stack
00:13:237 (3) - straight would be better
00:23:300 (1,2) - better to blanket
00:24:819 (1,1) - this is not smooth to play, consider to put the tail down
01:00:325 (1,2,3,4) - this is not proper, why not let the distance bigger?

Phantom
Nice map!!!incredible stream and beautiful mapping!

Some diffs of this map is not ready, but I believe these mappers could make them better and finally rank.
GL!!!!!
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