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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
hitsounds having delay:
drum-hitnormal.wav, use this instead: http://puu.sh/o0tRs/add0086ab9.wav
soft-hitclap.wav: http://puu.sh/o0tZc/82c3cbcb95.wav
soft-hitfinish.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u3a/2458e90371.wav
soft-hitnormal2.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u52/714ddcce4e.wav
soft-hitnormal20.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u6t/53759acc88.wav

drum-sliderslide.wav(48byte) is not a total silenced hitsound(44byte), please use your drum-sliderwhistle.wav(44byte) ver instead

mod soon, in 1~2 days
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

Minakami Yuki wrote:

hitsounds having delay:
drum-hitnormal.wav, use this instead: http://puu.sh/o0tRs/add0086ab9.wav
soft-hitclap.wav: http://puu.sh/o0tZc/82c3cbcb95.wav
soft-hitfinish.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u3a/2458e90371.wav
soft-hitnormal2.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u52/714ddcce4e.wav
soft-hitnormal20.wav: http://puu.sh/o0u6t/53759acc88.wav

drum-sliderslide.wav(48byte) is not a total silenced hitsound(44byte), please use your drum-sliderwhistle.wav(44byte) ver instead

mod soon, in 1~2 days
done (ฅ＞ω＜*ฅ)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
no kds for this post

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 整个mapset没有一个diff下了combo color
Easy
  1. sv远大于ds，建议按0.7ds remap
Normal
  1. od+1
  2. 00:05:827 (1,1) - 延长到后面一根红线听起来更适合normal的节奏
  3. 00:11:044 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得你可以两条长白线下一个nc
  4. 00:48:870 (1,2,1,2) - 可以调整一下把00:50:500 (2) - stack在00:48:870 (1) - 尾巴上
  5. 01:00:609 (1) - 这个头clap听起来很突兀啊
  6. 01:13:653 (3) - nc
  7. 01:24:088 (1,2,1,2,1) - 我个人觉得24clap更好一点

    我从简单难度先开始看，看到这我觉得你音效上还是下的很有问题
    这歌穿插钢琴的时候我认为应该用soft whistle，normal的哨声其实不太合适
    另外13clap的下法的确是没太看懂
    我觉得你可以找找自定义音效把clap声音换成那个音乐里面的类似咚的声音，效果应该不错
    或者你就用他们gd的音效也可以，默认音效实在操蛋
Hard
  1. normal 1.0sv, hard 1.6sv? are you sure?
  2. 00:05:990 (2) - 看了很多人都说了，我也认为应该跟鼓，结束在00:06:316 - ，后面一样
  3. 00:06:642 - 00:07:946 - 00:09:251 - 00:10:555 - hard难度这里为什么不下note？
  4. 00:20:174 (1,2) - 这1/1很容易误读成1/2，可以00:20:826 (2) - ctrl+g然后稍微调整下位置
  5. 00:24:087 (7) - nc?
  6. 00:25:392 (1,2) - 00:31:261 (2) -
  7. 00:39:250 (6,7) - 不建议突然antijump
  8. 00:43:653 (3,4) - 00:49:685 (5,6) - ^
  9. 01:00:609 (5) - nc，而且01:00:609 (5,6,7) - 这三个滑条拉的也不好看
  10. 01:01:913 (6,7) - 缩短1/4收在红线上。红线beat太明显略过的话并不好
  11. 01:06:153 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这里就是在偷懒啊，明明可以下节奏的，就算这么下：http://puu.sh/o1Jpd/8aa4aed1d6.jpg 也比你那个好得多
  12. 01:12:348 (1,1,1) - 这样摆岂不是更好？ http://puu.sh/o1JtH/03b6b1c1b0.jpg
  13. 01:28:164 (5) - 前面nc这里怎么不nc？
  14. 01:48:218 - why no note here?
  15. 01:58:653 - ^
  16. 02:04:522 (1) - ugly slider
  17. 02:07:620 (3) - 02:08:925 (5) - nc

    kiai的节奏下的我没有看下去的欲望，你会喜欢一个全是1/4折返slider的部分吗？
Hikari's Light Insane
  1. 00:31:750 (7) - 还是改成四连？
Insane
  1. 00:06:356 (2) - 我觉得还是跟鼓好，建议放红线上，后面一样，我第一次打的时候全跟鼓按全是100
  2. 00:06:642 - 另外这个音我也建议跟，后面一样
  3. 00:30:609 (6) - nc
  4. 00:44:305 (1,2,3) - 没叠好？
  5. 01:01:913 (4,1) - ugly slider
  6. 01:04:033 (1) - 这两个建议改成circle
  7. 01:07:131 (1,2,3,4) - 这种1/4滑条的摆法打起来很不顺手的，改个摆法？
  8. 01:46:261 (5,1) - swap nc
  9. 01:47:240 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:48:544 (9) - 这里只有1/4
  11. 01:58:979 (10) - ^
  12. 02:07:131 (3) - 02:08:435 (5) - 02:09:740 (7) - nc
lsahi's Another
  1. 00:11:370 (2,5) - 没叠好？
  2. 00:17:566 (7) - nc
  3. 00:36:316 (3) - 1/4 slider instead?
  4. 00:41:533 (3) - ^
  5. 00:42:022 (1) - remove nc due to 00:36:805 (2) -
  6. 00:45:283 (2,3,4) - 我个人打起来最不爽的梗，比较坑人，个人建议改
  7. 00:50:501 (2,3,4) - ^
  8. 00:57:512 (3) - 这个1/6没怎么看懂
  9. 01:31:751 (9,10) - 1/4 slider instead?
  10. 01:32:974 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 当中插1/4滑条的话nc这么下比较好：http://puu.sh/o1O8E/4fc69ac014.jpg
  11. 01:34:196 (7,8,9,10) - 最后四个我建议给一个缓冲期，用1/4滑条代替？
  12. 01:35:012 (1) - remove nc
  13. 02:09:740 - add a note with finish 并且让转盘从02:09:740 (1) - 开始
  14. 02:09:740 (1) - 为什么要加finish？最后明明啥都没有，不如消音
Extra
  1. 00:04:686 (1) - according to osu!Standard Ranking Criteria:
    Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
    auto cant get 1000 bonus on your spinner, it's unrankable
  2. 00:07:661 (3) - same as insane
  3. 00:16:261 (5) - nc
  4. 00:20:174 (5,1) - swap nc, 如果改的话稍微让他们错一下位
  5. 00:26:696 (5) - nc
  6. 01:33:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 14443的摆法迷惑性太大了，我觉得还是就四个一组的比较好，反正你这个梗01:31:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 也只不过是原地连打，为什么后面就要从01:33:300 (2) - 开始呢？
  7. 01:36:370 (1) - 应该snap在1/8上，即01:36:357 -
  8. 01:35:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 个人认为你这堆1/4摆的很卡手，当然只是个人认为
  9. 01:45:120 (2) - 多一次折返？
  10. 01:48:666 (6) - 这里只有1/4，就算你要造1/8也不应该把滑条头snap在1/8上
  11. 02:04:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 既然你把二连拆开，那么真要突出那段钢琴这里应该这么下： http://puu.sh/o1OMT/64dc58889e.jpg ，最后一个note可以考虑换成1/4滑条
  12. 02:07:131 (3,5) - nc
  13. 02:09:413 (6,7) - blanket?
JJburst's EXEX
  1. 可以改叫Ultra，比较符合官方diff命名的思路
  2. 00:04:686 (1) - according to osu!Standard Ranking Criteria:
    Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
    auto cant get 1000 bonus on your spinner, it's unrankable
  3. 01:22:946 (1) - same as above
  4. 00:42:348 (5) - 强调finish我觉得应该加个nc
  5. 01:03:218 (5) - nc
  6. 01:36:370 (3) - 应该snap在1/8上，即01:36:357 -
  7. 01:38:272 (7) - 1/8
  8. 01:57:674 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个我觉得应该和前面保持相同ds
  9. 02:00:609 (4) - nc
  10. 02:01:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我个人对这段音乐感受是应该逐渐增加ds，而且我觉得你这diff后面还可以再加难一点
低难度质量不行
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

Minakami Yuki wrote:

no kds for this post

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 整个mapset没有一个diff下了combo color
done
Easy
  1. sv远大于ds，建议按0.7ds remap
remap done fixed√

Normal
  1. od+1 fixed√
  2. 00:05:827 (1,1) - 延长到后面一根红线听起来更适合normal的节奏 fixed√
  3. 00:11:044 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得你可以两条长白线下一个nc fixed√
  4. 00:48:870 (1,2,1,2) - 可以调整一下把00:50:500 (2) - stack在00:48:870 (1) - 尾巴上 fixed√
  5. 01:00:609 (1) - 这个头clap听起来很突兀啊 fixed√
  6. 01:13:653 (3) - nc fixed√
  7. 01:24:088 (1,2,1,2,1) - 我个人觉得24clap更好一点 fixed√

    我从简单难度先开始看，看到这我觉得你音效上还是下的很有问题
    这歌穿插钢琴的时候我认为应该用soft whistle，normal的哨声其实不太合适
    另外13clap的下法的确是没太看懂
    我觉得你可以找找自定义音效把clap声音换成那个音乐里面的类似咚的声音，效果应该不错
    或者你就用他们gd的音效也可以，默认音效实在操蛋

    非常抱歉这里是我的一个失误了 我忘记我皮肤会把默认音效覆盖掉 之前下音效都是习惯性的把皮肤的音效复制到歌里面 但这首貌似是落下了 所以我添加了低难度的几个基础音效 现在听着应该会非常顺畅了
Hard
  1. normal 1.0sv, hard 1.6sv? are you sure? 关于hard用sv1.6的想法 我想其实在这里并没有大碍 因为这首歌本来就BPM较高 SV取1.6是为了让这个难度更加具备快歌的节奏感 但考虑到和normal的差距是有点大 所以我打算把AR修改为AR8.3 另外 实在不行的我或者可以把难度名改为Hyper?
  2. 00:05:990 (2) - 看了很多人都说了，我也认为应该跟鼓，结束在00:06:316 - ，后面一样 fixed√
  3. 00:06:642 - 00:07:946 - 00:09:251 - 00:10:555 - hard难度这里为什么不下note？ fixed√
  4. 00:20:174 (1,2) - 这1/1很容易误读成1/2，可以00:20:826 (2) - ctrl+g然后稍微调整下位置 fixed√
  5. 00:24:087 (7) - nc? fixed√
  6. 00:25:392 (1,2) - 00:31:261 (2) - fixed√
  7. 00:39:250 (6,7) - 不建议突然antijump fixed√
  8. 00:43:653 (3,4) - 00:49:685 (5,6) - ^ fixed√
  9. 01:00:609 (5) - nc，而且01:00:609 (5,6,7) - 这三个滑条拉的也不好看 fixed√调整了下后面两个滑条
  10. 01:01:913 (6,7) - 缩短1/4收在红线上。红线beat太明显略过的话并不好 fixed√
  11. 01:06:153 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这里就是在偷懒啊，明明可以下节奏的，就算这么下：http://puu.sh/o1Jpd/8aa4aed1d6.jpg 也比你那个好得多 fixed√
  12. 01:12:348 (1,1,1) - 这样摆岂不是更好？ http://puu.sh/o1JtH/03b6b1c1b0.jpg fixed√
  13. 01:28:164 (5) - 前面nc这里怎么不nc？ fixed√
  14. 01:48:218 - why no note here? fixed√
  15. 01:58:653 - ^ fixed√
  16. 02:04:522 (1) - ugly slider fixed√
  17. 02:07:620 (3) - 02:08:925 (5) - nc fixed√

    kiai的节奏下的我没有看下去的欲望，你会喜欢一个全是1/4折返slider的部分吗？ kiai remap done√ 但有一段我打算做为最高潮段所以没改 这里01:59:305 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 做为节奏最密集的地方 我不想压缩到1/1或1/2盖过去 但考虑到如果频繁1/4短滑条的话会加大这个难度 所以没有修改这里 但其他前面的基本都改了个节奏
Hikari's Light Insane
  1. 00:31:750 (7) - 还是改成四连？ fixed√
Insane
  1. 00:06:356 (2) - 我觉得还是跟鼓好，建议放红线上，后面一样，我第一次打的时候全跟鼓按全是100 fixed√
  2. 00:06:642 - 另外这个音我也建议跟，后面一样 fixed√
  3. 00:30:609 (6) - nc fixed√
  4. 00:44:305 (1,2,3) - 没叠好？ 这种貌似不是没叠好 因为这里是直接复制粘贴的 错开的原因大概是因为SL=3
  5. 01:01:913 (4,1) - ugly slider 重新改了下 fixed√
  6. 01:04:033 (1) - 这两个建议改成circle fixed√
  7. 01:07:131 (1,2,3,4) - 这种1/4滑条的摆法打起来很不顺手的，改个摆法？ 我把1和3改成了circle fixed√
  8. 01:46:261 (5,1) - swap nc fixed√
  9. 01:47:240 (1,2) - ^ fixed√
  10. 01:48:544 (9) - 这里只有1/4 这里的确是5个1/8 因为我在这里跟的是钢琴声 01:47:973 (6,7,8) - 从这一段放慢到25%来听就可以听出 这里跟1/8其实很流畅
  11. 01:58:979 (10) - ^ 同上
  12. 02:07:131 (3) - 02:08:435 (5) - 02:09:740 (7) - nc 01:47:973 (6,7,8) - fixed√
lsahi's Another
  1. 00:11:370 (2,5) - 没叠好？
  2. 00:17:566 (7) - nc
  3. 00:36:316 (3) - 1/4 slider instead?
  4. 00:41:533 (3) - ^
  5. 00:42:022 (1) - remove nc due to 00:36:805 (2) -
  6. 00:45:283 (2,3,4) - 我个人打起来最不爽的梗，比较坑人，个人建议改
  7. 00:50:501 (2,3,4) - ^
  8. 00:57:512 (3) - 这个1/6没怎么看懂
  9. 01:31:751 (9,10) - 1/4 slider instead?
  10. 01:32:974 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 当中插1/4滑条的话nc这么下比较好：http://puu.sh/o1O8E/4fc69ac014.jpg
  11. 01:34:196 (7,8,9,10) - 最后四个我建议给一个缓冲期，用1/4滑条代替？
  12. 01:35:012 (1) - remove nc
  13. 02:09:740 - add a note with finish 并且让转盘从02:09:740 (1) - 开始
  14. 02:09:740 (1) - 为什么要加finish？最后明明啥都没有，不如消音
Extra
  1. 00:04:686 (1) - according to osu!Standard Ranking Criteria:
    Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
    auto cant get 1000 bonus on your spinner, it's unrankable det this fixed√ [/color]
  2. 00:07:661 (3) - same as insane fixed√
  3. 00:16:261 (5) - nc fixed√
  4. 00:20:174 (5,1) - swap nc, 如果改的话稍微让他们错一下位 fixed√
  5. 00:26:696 (5) - nc fixed√
  6. 01:33:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 14443的摆法迷惑性太大了，我觉得还是就四个一组的比较好，反正你这个梗01:31:913 我想了下 把这里改成了个圈型连打
  7. (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 也只不过是原地连打，为什么后面就要从01:33:300 (2) - 开始呢？ 01:33:299 (2) - 因为这里开始有一个很明显的换音
  8. 01:36:370 (1) - 应该snap在1/8上，即01:36:357 - fixed√
  9. 01:35:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 个人认为你这堆1/4摆的很卡手，当然只是个人认为 调整成了稍微简单点的位置 应该顺手多了
  10. 01:45:120 (2) - 多一次折返？ fixed√
  11. 01:48:666 (6) - 这里只有1/4，就算你要造1/8也不应该把滑条头snap在1/8上 这里是1/8 因为跟到了那段轻的钢琴音 1/8的位置调整了下
  12. 02:04:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 既然你把二连拆开，那么真要突出那段钢琴这里应该这么下： http://puu.sh/o1OMT/64dc58889e.jpg ，最后一个note可以考虑换成1/4滑条 fixed√
  13. 02:07:131 (3,5) - nc fixed√
  14. 02:09:413 (6,7) - blanket? fixed√
JJburst's EXEX
  1. 可以改叫Ultra，比较符合官方diff命名的思路
  2. 00:04:686 (1) - according to osu!Standard Ranking Criteria:
    Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
    auto cant get 1000 bonus on your spinner, it's unrankable
  3. 01:22:946 (1) - same as above
  4. 00:42:348 (5) - 强调finish我觉得应该加个nc
  5. 01:03:218 (5) - nc
  6. 01:36:370 (3) - 应该snap在1/8上，即01:36:357 -
  7. 01:38:272 (7) - 1/8
  8. 01:57:674 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个我觉得应该和前面保持相同ds
  9. 02:00:609 (4) - nc
  10. 02:01:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我个人对这段音乐感受是应该逐渐增加ds，而且我觉得你这diff后面还可以再加难一点
低难度质量不行


EDIT: esay已经把SV降到0.7后remap完 nm也修改了 hard更换成117的GD
Last edited by 09kami , edited 14 times in total.
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira

Minakami Yuki wrote:

no kds for this post

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 整个mapset没有一个diff下了combo color

lsahi's Another
  1. 00:11:370 (2,5) - 没叠好？fixed
  2. 00:17:566 (7) - ncfixed
  3. 00:36:316 (3) - 1/4 slider instead?个人感觉现在听起来比较舒服
  4. 00:41:533 (3) - ^^
  5. 00:42:022 (1) - remove nc due to 00:36:805 (2) -
  6. 00:45:283 (2,3,4) - 我个人打起来最不爽的梗，比较坑人，个人建议改确实。叠到4了
  7. 00:50:501 (2,3,4) - ^^
  8. 00:57:512 (3) - 这个1/6没怎么看懂跟小提琴
  9. 01:31:751 (9,10) - 1/4 slider instead?好
  10. 01:32:974 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 当中插1/4滑条的话nc这么下比较好：http://puu.sh/o1O8E/4fc69ac014.jpg受教了
  11. 01:34:196 (7,8,9,10) - 最后四个我建议给一个缓冲期，用1/4滑条代替？好
  12. 01:35:012 (1) - remove ncfixed
  13. 02:09:740 - add a note with finish 并且让转盘从02:09:740 (1) - 开始吼
  14. 02:09:740 (1) - 为什么要加finish？最后明明啥都没有，不如消音fixed
感谢
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO

Minakami Yuki wrote:

JJburst's EXEX
  1. 可以改叫Ultra，比较符合官方diff命名的思路 fixed√
  2. 00:04:686 (1) - according to osu!Standard Ranking Criteria:
    Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
    auto cant get 1000 bonus on your spinner, it's unrankable deleted√
  3. 01:22:946 (1) - same as above deleted√
  4. 00:42:348 (5) - 强调finish我觉得应该加个nc fixed√
  5. 01:03:218 (5) - nc fixed√
  6. 01:36:370 (3) - 应该snap在1/8上，即01:36:357 - fixed√
  7. 01:38:272 (7) - 1/8 这个本来就是1/8啊= =
  8. 01:57:674 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个我觉得应该和前面保持相同ds fixed√
  9. 02:00:609 (4) - nc fixed√
  10. 02:01:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我个人对这段音乐感受是应该逐渐增加ds，而且我觉得你这diff后面还可以再加难一点 拆连打对于我来说已经是极难的一种了，可能看起来不是那么炫酷，我觉得已经够反人类了= =
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
[General]
  1. Not sure if it's just me, but due to the strange background size - I get really weird white lines at the side of my screen...
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:392 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - etc. NC spam is not something you should do in easier difficulties. It messes with the drain a lot and is overall quite confusing in the first place. Would say that in this difficulty it's done excessively.
[Hard]
  1. AR8.3? Not needed and creates a huge AR gap between Normal -> Hard (5 - 8.3 seems too extreme in my eyes)
[Hikari's Light Insane]
  1. Good overall. Many hitsounds are missing at parts like 00:51:153 (3) - 00:53:761 (2) - etc. but those might've been intentional. It leaves something to be desired tho.
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:392 (3) - Why skip the cymbal ;_;?
  2. 01:08:109 (8,1) - 01:54:740 (5,6) - Too large, keep spread and overall difficulty of the Insane itself in mind.
[lsahi's Another]
  1. 00:31:914 (1,2,3) - 00:37:131 (1,2,3) - 00:58:001 (1,2) - etc. They are all spaced the same, yet different in snaps. Would say this is quite confusing. Move (2) closer to (1)?. Im some cases it might not matter that much, but it becomes complicated when you do it too much...
  2. 00:39:740 (1,2,3) - Here the 1/4 spacing is even larger if you take in account the slider leniency lol
  3. 01:12:186 (6,1) - 02:05:827 (1,2,3) - Could be further away from each other, when you take in account 1/4 spacing overall <_<
[Extra]
  1. 00:19:522 (1,2,3,4) - No double-finish hitsounds going on like 00:15:609 (1,2,3,4) - 00:25:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ?
  2. 00:45:935 (2) - 01:09:413 (2) - 01:10:718 (2) - 01:13:653 (1) - 02:04:522 (1) - Finish?
  3. 00:46:913 (5,6) - Seems quite large to be honest? Your other 1/2 patterns don't seem this large at all <_<
  4. 00:59:957 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds too soft at 30%, especially when you consider previous sequence was full out 100... also (3) in this sequence sounds really underemphasized now since that one has an actual clap <_<
  5. 01:03:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2) - Many hitsounds missing in this stream.. (slider end, 9 could use finish for example..)
  6. 01:37:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, found the spacing decrease here rather strange, any particular reason?
  7. 01:51:642 (7) - NC here instead, and remove at (1)?
  8. 02:03:218 (1,2,3,4) - Way too loud and overpowering.. lower volume?
  9. Many hitsounds are missing and in many cases I found that 100% is just too loud where I can't even hear the song itself anymore...
[JJburst's Ultra]
  1. 00:17:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You sure you don't want a jump at (4,5)? In every similar patterns, there's a jump between the normal jump and the triplet - which strangely isn't the case here.
  2. 00:36:479 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:32:566 (1) - ?
  3. 00:38:924 (6,1) - Hmm, considering the strange flow and the rather large 1/4 jump, I'd say reduce the spacing to make this easier to hit?
  4. 00:41:289 - Kinda expected this one to be mapped though, the piano seems quite strong here, at 00:49:685 (3,4,5,6) - it's mapped completely. Obviously completely up to you though.
  5. 00:48:055 (4) - NC for consistency again? Also, it's kinda needed here in my point of view, due to perfect stacking.
  6. 01:13:734 (1) - Even though it ends on the large white tick, I found that it still ends on a rather strange place that doesn't really have a strong sound at all? COnsider ending it on 01:13:734 - instead? That bell sound is completely skipped now :c
  7. 01:40:229 (7,2) - 01:40:229 (7,2) - Looks too cramped in my eyes, partially due to perfect stacking... up to you...
Contains too many questionable elements for my likings, sorry.

Good luck with the ranking process!
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO

appleeaterx wrote:

[JJburst's Ultra]
  1. 00:17:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You sure you don't want a jump at (4,5)? In every similar patterns, there's a jump between the normal jump and the triplet - which strangely isn't the case here. fixed√
  2. 00:36:479 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:32:566 (1) - ? fixed√
  3. 00:38:924 (6,1) - Hmm, considering the strange flow and the rather large 1/4 jump, I'd say reduce the spacing to make this easier to hit?It's not so hard as a 1/4 slider here..
  4. 00:41:289 - Kinda expected this one to be mapped though, the piano seems quite strong here, at 00:49:685 (3,4,5,6) - it's mapped completely. Obviously completely up to you though.　I'm not following piano here :(
  5. 00:48:055 (4) - NC for consistency again? Also, it's kinda needed here in my point of view, due to perfect stacking.　fixed√
  6. 01:13:734 (1) - Even though it ends on the large white tick, I found that it still ends on a rather strange place that doesn't really have a strong sound at all? COnsider ending it on 01:13:734 - instead? That bell sound is completely skipped now :c :?Idk what to follow here
  7. 01:40:229 (7,2) - 01:40:229 (7,2) - Looks too cramped in my eyes, partially due to perfect stacking... up to you... :( What's up here?
Thank you apple~

FIXED
osu file format v14

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09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

appleeaterx wrote:

[General]
  1. Not sure if it's just me, but due to the strange background size - I get really weird white lines at the side of my screen... ummm..maybe it's not a picture
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:392 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - etc. NC spam is not something you should do in easier difficulties. It messes with the drain a lot and is overall quite confusing in the first place. Would say that in this difficulty it's done excessively. fixed√
[Hard]
  1. AR8.3? Not needed and creates a huge AR gap between Normal -> Hard (5 - 8.3 seems too extreme in my eyes) AR=8 fixed√
[Hikari's Light Insane]
  1. Good overall. Many hitsounds are missing at parts like 00:51:153 (3) - 00:53:761 (2) - etc. but those might've been intentional. It leaves something to be desired tho. lol hitsound copy my dif
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:392 (3) - Why skip the cymbal ;_;? fixed√
  2. 01:08:109 (8,1) - 01:54:740 (5,6) - Too large, keep spread and overall difficulty of the Insane itself in mind. fixed√
[lsahi's Another]
  1. 00:31:914 (1,2,3) - 00:37:131 (1,2,3) - 00:58:001 (1,2) - etc. They are all spaced the same, yet different in snaps. Would say this is quite confusing. Move (2) closer to (1)?. Im some cases it might not matter that much, but it becomes complicated when you do it too much...
  2. 00:39:740 (1,2,3) - Here the 1/4 spacing is even larger if you take in account the slider leniency lol
  3. 01:12:186 (6,1) - 02:05:827 (1,2,3) - Could be further away from each other, when you take in account 1/4 spacing overall <_<
[Extra]
  1. 00:19:522 (1,2,3,4) - No double-finish hitsounds going on like 00:15:609 (1,2,3,4) - 00:25:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ? fixed√?
  2. 00:45:935 (2) - 01:09:413 (2) - 01:10:718 (2) - 01:13:653 (1) - 02:04:522 (1) - Finish? fixed√
  3. 00:46:913 (5,6) - Seems quite large to be honest? Your other 1/2 patterns don't seem this large at all <_< fixed√
  4. 00:59:957 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds too soft at 30%, especially when you consider previous sequence was full out 100... also (3) in this sequence sounds really underemphasized now since that one has an actual clap <_< fixed√ hum......mabey 60%?
  5. 01:03:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2) - Many hitsounds missing in this stream.. (slider end, 9 could use finish for example..) fixed√
  6. 01:37:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, found the spacing decrease here rather strange, any particular reason? 01:37:783 (3,4,5,6) - I think there's a difference here compared to the front.
  7. 01:51:642 (7) - NC here instead, and remove at (1)? fixed√
  8. 02:03:218 (1,2,3,4) - Way too loud and overpowering.. lower volume? fixed√
  9. Many hitsounds are missing and in many cases I found that 100% is just too loud where I can't even hear the song itself anymore... lower volume
[JJburst's Ultra]
  1. 00:17:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You sure you don't want a jump at (4,5)? In every similar patterns, there's a jump between the normal jump and the triplet - which strangely isn't the case here.
  2. 00:36:479 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:32:566 (1) - ?
  3. 00:38:924 (6,1) - Hmm, considering the strange flow and the rather large 1/4 jump, I'd say reduce the spacing to make this easier to hit?
  4. 00:41:289 - Kinda expected this one to be mapped though, the piano seems quite strong here, at 00:49:685 (3,4,5,6) - it's mapped completely. Obviously completely up to you though.
  5. 00:48:055 (4) - NC for consistency again? Also, it's kinda needed here in my point of view, due to perfect stacking.
  6. 01:13:734 (1) - Even though it ends on the large white tick, I found that it still ends on a rather strange place that doesn't really have a strong sound at all? COnsider ending it on 01:13:734 - instead? That bell sound is completely skipped now :c
  7. 01:40:229 (7,2) - 01:40:229 (7,2) - Looks too cramped in my eyes, partially due to perfect stacking... up to you...
Contains too many questionable elements for my likings, sorry.

Good luck with the ranking process!
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09kami
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09kami
New changes

◾Easy ◾Hard ◾Hikari's Light Insane ◾Insane ◾Normal
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◾JJburst's Ultra
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira

appleeaterx wrote:

[lsahi's Another]
  1. 00:31:914 (1,2,3) - 00:37:131 (1,2,3) - 00:58:001 (1,2) - etc. They are all spaced the same, yet different in snaps. Would say this is quite confusing. Move (2) closer to (1)?. Im some cases it might not matter that much, but it becomes complicated when you do it too much...Oops I've just paid my attention to the pattern instead of playing.00:31:914 (1,2,3) - 00:37:131 (1,2,3) - fixed while I think here is the best way for me so I keep 00:58:001 (1,2) -
  2. 00:39:740 (1,2,3) - Here the 1/4 spacing is even larger if you take in account the slider leniency lolfixed as above
  3. 01:12:186 (6,1) - 02:05:827 (1,2,3) - Could be further away from each other, when you take in account 1/4 spacing overall <_<fixed
Good luck with the ranking process!
thanks for mod xD
DreaM117er
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Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
in 5 hours works. :)
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

DreaM117er wrote:

in 5 hours works. :)
:) NICE
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
[EZ]
感觉更需要在意一点视觉DS 提升质量 但是不影响rank

00:59:305 (1) - del nc
01:29:305 (1,1) - 想摆对称但是不懂这样对于EZ危不危险
01:34:522 (1) - 建议不叠，EZ

[NM]
视觉DS+1

00:41:696 (1) - del nc
00:50:826 (1,2) - swap nc

[m god's HD]
00:39:251 (4) - overmap，音乐里是1/4，强烈建议改，况且这是个Hard
00:41:207 (2) - ^
00:49:686 (4) - ^

祝顺利起飞

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/221768 M4M
110
74 posts
Joined June 2014
110
[Easy]

看起来蛮舒服的

00:14:957 (2) - 感觉可以往右一点舒服
00:20:174 (2) - 后面两个往右一些 就可以两边一样长了
00:33:870 (3) - 结尾和00:34:522 (1) - 头往左一点
不改的话把00:34:522 (1,2) - blanket好
00:44:957 (1,2) - ^
01:34:522 (1) - 叠了有点难
01:50:174 (1) - 横过来
01:57:348 (1,2) - 平行
02:09:413 (1) - 同上面一样拉的两边一样长比较好看

[Normal]
00:07:131 (1) - 这个可以再加半拍
01:13:653 (1) - 可以多弄点花样 感觉适合各种弯曲
01:29:305 (1) - 这里可以短1-2拍转盘用一个note收尾
02:05:826 (1,2) - 尾巴blanket好一点再把另一个头拉近一点
02:09:413 (3) - 可以换成2个note

[m god's hard]
惊

00:30:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 神 但感觉包括后面这个旋律容易让人读错

然后美丽 good luck
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

yf_bmp wrote:

[EZ]
感觉更需要在意一点视觉DS 提升质量 但是不影响rank

00:59:305 (1) - del nc fixed√
01:29:305 (1,1) - 想摆对称但是不懂这样对于EZ危不危险 这个地方我打算看看yuki怎么说 我也是想摆对称 可是对称的话AIMOD就会出现DS得问题
01:34:522 (1) - 建议不叠，EZ fixed√

[NM]
视觉DS+1 这个地方我不是很懂 听他们解释是说看上去像视觉DS是看上去像间隔一样 但我这图全图都是开DS做的 如果让DS+1的话那不是要全图都要remap? 所以考虑下我暂时不改动这里 不过打算看下后面两个摸怎么说
00:41:696 (1) - del nc fixed√
00:50:826 (1,2) - swap nc fixed√

[m god's HD]
00:39:251 (4) - overmap，音乐里是1/4，强烈建议改，况且这是个Hard
00:41:207 (2) - ^
00:49:686 (4) - ^

祝顺利起飞

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/221768 M4M

[Y o s h i n o] wrote:

[Easy]

看起来蛮舒服的

00:14:957 (2) - 感觉可以往右一点舒服 fixed√
00:20:174 (2) - 后面两个往右一些 就可以两边一样长了 fixed？
00:33:870 (3) - 结尾和00:34:522 (1) - 头往左一点 fixed√
不改的话把00:34:522 (1,2) - blanket好
00:44:957 (1,2) - ^ fixed√
01:34:522 (1) - 叠了有点难 fixed√
01:50:174 (1) - 横过来 这里没什么大碍 不打算改了
01:57:348 (1,2) - 平行 fixed√
02:09:413 (1) - 同上面一样拉的两边一样长比较好看 fixed√

[Normal]
00:07:131 (1) - 这个可以再加半拍 这里不打算改
01:13:653 (1) - 可以多弄点花样 感觉适合各种弯曲 fixed√
01:29:305 (1) - 这里可以短1-2拍转盘用一个note收尾 不用
02:05:826 (1,2) - 尾巴blanket好一点再把另一个头拉近一点 02:06:805 (2,3,1) - 实际上这里是个对称 前面没有考虑blanket
02:09:413 (3) - 可以换成2个note 02:09:413 (3) - 这个滑条其实是直接把02:06:805 (2) - 调了个位置 所以考虑一致性这里也不打算改

[m god's hard]
惊

00:30:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 神 但感觉包括后面这个旋律容易让人读错

然后美丽 good luck
谢MOD
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
@yf_bmp: 全改，故意給人家抓的 :)
@[Y o s h i n o]: 加了NC，還有改掉09爺爺的堆疊值(09爺爺SL連Hard都調1會死人的)，我不相信大家的讀圖能力這麼弱

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201,40,51805,5,0,1:0:0:0:
201,40,52131,5,0,3:0:0:0:
112,57,52294,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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256,192,73734,12,0,76262,0:0:0:0:
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471,350,114577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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474,115,115229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,34,115392,6,0,P|393:40|342:46,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,114,115718,2,0,P|258:109|212:104,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,41,116044,2,0,L|110:51,3,37.5
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236,350,128436,6,0,P|284:340|402:333,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,233,128925,2,0,P|382:229|308:215,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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222,242,129740,5,4,1:2:0:0:
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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yf_bmp
我的意思是，要说的视觉问题和EZ一样.。。。
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
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09kami

yf_bmp wrote:

我的意思是，要说的视觉问题和EZ一样.。。。
哦哦哦 理解了 不过NM除了一些小地方我是因为要和前面叠起来有一些DS的小偏差 所以大概没问题
09kami
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09kami

yf_bmp wrote:

我的意思是，要说的视觉问题和EZ一样.。。。
Streliteela
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Streliteela
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:871 (2,3) - 这两个东西调好，如果放稍微平行些的话强迫症就不会难受了（
    SPOILER
  2. 01:05:827 (1) - 一定要做成这种形状咩;w;弧的地方能不能弄得再圆润一些啊
  3. 01:09:740 (2) - 这个，我觉得换成一个1/2折返节奏上更好些

[Normal]
  1. 00:46:913 (2,1) - stack
  2. 01:24:087 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这一段的节奏我觉得非常怪，讲道理这一段是1212式的节奏，你却强行全部用了折返滑条把这段变成了123123式，最后导致01:28:979 - 这里很违和地被空出来了而且01:26:044 (1) - 的尾巴还压了一个长白线很明显的重音；之所以ez你用了类似的排列而没有体现出来问题是因为类似01:25:066 - 的地方你空出来了一拍，这样变成了123x123x也凑巧对上了节奏。建议改一下
  3. 01:45:609 (1) - 不需要nc吧
  4. 02:03:218 (1,2,3) - 摆成一条直线吧

m神的hard，你说还用摸吗？

就这样了，gl~
09kami
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09kami

Streliteela wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:48:871 (2,3) - 这两个东西调好，如果放稍微平行些的话强迫症就不会难受了（ fixed√
    SPOILER
  2. 01:05:827 (1) - 一定要做成这种形状咩;w;弧的地方能不能弄得再圆润一些啊 我想再小提琴那两个音的地方放一个转折 于是就变成这种形状了233 没什么大问题不用改
  3. 01:09:740 (2) - 这个，我觉得换成一个1/2折返节奏上更好些 fixed√ 改成了两个1/2滑条

[Normal]
  1. 00:46:913 (2,1) - stack fixed√
  2. 01:24:087 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这一段的节奏我觉得非常怪，讲道理这一段是1212式的节奏，你却强行全部用了折返滑条把这段变成了123123式，最后导致01:28:979 - 这里很违和地被空出来了而且01:26:044 (1) - 的尾巴还压了一个长白线很明显的重音；之所以ez你用了类似的排列而没有体现出来问题是因为类似01:25:066 - 的地方你空出来了一拍，这样变成了123x123x也凑巧对上了节奏。建议改一下 考虑了下后 我直接把最后01:28:000 (1) - 这个滑条换成了两个1/2滑条
  3. 01:45:609 (1) - 不需要nc吧 fixed√
  4. 02:03:218 (1,2,3) - 摆成一条直线吧 fixed√

m神的hard，你说还用摸吗？

就这样了，gl~

:) 谢谢S酱
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
bg比较黑，combo color就应该稍微亮一点，例如128,128,192或者0,128,128之类的比较好

E
00:12:349 (1) - remove nc
01:51:479 (1) - ^

N
00:07:131 (1) - extend 1/2?

I
00:10:229 (2) - 1/1+note?
00:44:305 (1,2,3) - ?那就把它叠好啊

lsahi
00:57:512 (3) - 小提琴？我还是只能听到1/4

Ex
01:33:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 啪啪啪啪太吵了
kiai部分的clap也太多了，24clap够用，clap音效的话可以用jjburst那图里面的drum-finish
09kami
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09kami

Minakami Yuki wrote:

bg比较黑，combo color就应该稍微亮一点，例如128,128,192或者0,128,128之类的比较好 fixed√

E
00:12:349 (1) - remove nc fixed√
01:51:479 (1) - ^ fixed√

N
00:07:131 (1) - extend 1/2? fixed√

I
00:10:229 (2) - 1/1+note? fixed√
00:44:305 (1,2,3) - ?那就把它叠好啊 我直接把1那个复制粘贴了2遍啊 现在又重新弄过好像还是这个样子

lsahi
00:57:512 (3) - 小提琴？我还是只能听到1/4 我看了下貌似是只有1/4 于是直接帮改了

Ex
01:33:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 啪啪啪啪太吵了 蓝线部分的clap取消了
kiai部分的clap也太多了，24clap够用，clap音效的话可以用jjburst那图里面的drum-finish KIAI部分我删减了一部分蓝线的音效 音效方面的话我感觉还是用现在的就好 因为JJB那个音效有点吵 感觉和我其他的音效不是很搭配
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
we did several changes on
*changed bg(higher resolution instead)
*timing
*removing unused hitsounds

bubbled
good luck on qualifying
smallboat
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smallboat
Normal:
00:10:229 (2) - 這滑條尾端縮到前面紅線吧，這節奏是跟00:08:924 (2) - 一樣的，改了會比較好掌握。
01:54:740 (1) - 這怎麼單一NC了好像誤加。

Hikari's Light Insane:
00:31:587 (5,6,7,8) - 把這stream間距弄一致吧，在Light Insane不應該放這麼難讀的stream

Insane:
00:54:087 (2) - 節奏間距這麼開而且又是一種新的旋律該是要NC了吧
00:56:696 (2) - 同上
01:01:913 (4) - 有點長，NC一下這兩個特別的slider吧
01:06:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 人家another的串也沒像Insane那樣長，建議改一下這裡區別難度
01:09:576 (2) - 少了一個節奏哦，背景音樂挺明顯的加一個note比較好play吧
01:12:348 (1) - 同01:06:153
01:51:805 (1) - 同上
02:04:522 (1) - 這個16 note stream建議還是改了下和考慮，我不認為QAT和下層modder能賞個臉呀

Another:
01:00:283 (3,4) - 別靠著了還是分開點吧
01:13:653 (1) - 轉盤後面靜音比較好，太大聲好突兀

Extra:
00:54:087 (2) - 節奏間距這麼開而且又是一種新的旋律該是要NC了吧
00:56:696 (2) - 同上
01:38:272 (1,2,3) - 怎麼感覺有一種(1)是三連串的錯覺
01:58:979 (3,4,5) - 君媽說這都堆在一起了不能讀，還是改了吧 (上面那個建議也改了

Ultra:
01:40:881 (1,2) - 聽起來沒有特殊的旋律額外要加新的NC，建議取消
01:41:533 (1,2) - 同上
09kami
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smallboat wrote:

Normal:
00:10:229 (2) - 這滑條尾端縮到前面紅線吧，這節奏是跟00:08:924 (2) - 一樣的，改了會比較好掌握。 fixed√
01:54:740 (1) - 這怎麼單一NC了好像誤加。 fixed√

Hikari's Light Insane:
00:31:587 (5,6,7,8) - 把這stream間距弄一致吧，在Light Insane不應該放這麼難讀的stream fixed√

Insane:
00:54:087 (2) - 節奏間距這麼開而且又是一種新的旋律該是要NC了吧 fixed√
00:56:696 (2) - 同上 fixed√
01:01:913 (4) - 有點長，NC一下這兩個特別的slider吧 fixed√
01:06:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 人家another的串也沒像Insane那樣長，建議改一下這裡區別難度前面4个连打改成了滑条 fixed√
01:09:576 (2) - 少了一個節奏哦，背景音樂挺明顯的加一個note比較好play吧 加了个折返 fixed√
01:12:348 (1) - 同01:06:153 加了个折返 fixed√
01:51:805 (1) - 同上 这一段我感觉貌似不用改吧 01:51:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:52:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这两段的钢琴音连得很紧 而且这个地方或许可以留个梗？
02:04:522 (1) - 這個16 note stream建議還是改了下和考慮，我不認為QAT和下層modder能賞個臉呀 保留目前看法

Another:
01:00:283 (3,4) - 別靠著了還是分開點吧 fixed√
01:13:653 (1) - 轉盤後面靜音比較好，太大聲好突兀 fixed√

Extra:
00:54:087 (2) - 節奏間距這麼開而且又是一種新的旋律該是要NC了吧 fixed√
00:56:696 (2) - 同上 fixed√
01:38:272 (1,2,3) - 怎麼感覺有一種(1)是三連串的錯覺 fixed√
01:58:979 (3,4,5) - 君媽說這都堆在一起了不能讀，還是改了吧 (上面那個建議也改了 fixed√

Ultra:
01:40:881 (1,2) - 聽起來沒有特殊的旋律額外要加新的NC，建議取消 fixed√
01:41:533 (1,2) - 同上 fixed√
smallboat
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smallboat
Okay let this map go. Qualified
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wait someone really reacted to these weird copy paste requests they sent out?

I mean congrats though i didn't expect anyone to actually react to something that was written with that little effort so i'm surprised
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Accidently I forgot to notice that thing, thanks Sieg check the hitsound issue, and confirm fixed. Reb it.
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req
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