Yo
[Hard]
00:12:916 (1,2,3) - move either 3 or 2 to get a nicer triangle spacing?
00:18:026 (1,2,3) - kinda uncomfortable because it's so far right, rotate 1 a little to the left maybe?
00:22:817 (5) - missed oportunity for a blanket ;(
00:26:330 (2) - so far down :O maybe move the entire thing starting with 00:25:053 (4) - a little up-right?
00:29:524 (4) - i think having a 1/2 slider on 00:29:524 - and a circle on 00:30:163 - fits better here so you dont miss out on the lyrics
00:51:242 (1,3) - i think moving 3 a little bit more left is better here, the angle is kinda weird
00:57:311 (2) - x64 y39, adjust 00:57:630 (3) - propely
01:01:463 (1) - with this slider your're missing the "strong" beat on 01:02:102 - so maybe just have a circle on 01:01:463 - and a 1/1 break and follow up with a slider on 01:02:102 - to match the lyrics again
01:06:573 (1) - same thing here
01:11:683 (1,2,3,4) - like so
01:21:904 - what's up with the spacing increase in this part? i dont really see why, the song doesnt pick up in intensity
01:33:401 (3) - straight slider with the same angle as 01:32:763 (2) - to continue the pattern?
01:38:192 - hmm i see you avoiding sliders on red ticks but i think you're missing out the lyrics here a lot :/ Just personal preference
01:42:344 - i'd be fine with it if the spacing increase started here.
01:50:010 (1,3) - too close to each other, space it the same as 01:50:010 (1,2) - meaning 2 and 1's sliderhead
02:15:241 (4,5,1) - autostacking wrecks the spacing here, move it a little further out (view -> check "stacking" to see for yourself)
02:57:720 (3) - that's just weird do something else with it please
03:01:552 (1) - give that one the same angle as 03:00:275 (4) - as in make it a straight slider
03:11:453 (4) - mhhh i'd say switch 2 and 4 and reverse 03:11:773 (1) - or something
Nothing major here, just some suggestions based on preference that i think would make this a little more polished.
[Lu]
00:11:000 (2,3,4) - i dont know what's going on here but meh, maybe make 4 blanket 3 or something the overlap is really weird.
00:16:749 (4) - slightly sloppy blanket grrrrrr
00:18:026 (1) - reveverse and copy and rotate 180 to replace 00:18:665 (2) - , very weird flow
http://puu.sh/rz55V/1c158547b0.jpg01:01:463 (1) - that weird slider again, see it's something you personally enjoy so dont take my word for it
01:11:683 (1) - ctrl+g
01:20:626 (4) - nc? 00:34:634 (3) - here as well i just noticed. just to indicate the slowdown...maybe
01:20:626 (4,1) - jumps a little big for my taste and the setting of the diff/song
01:35:957 (3) - ctrl+g
01:41:705 (4) - ^ here as well, it even creates a nice jump into the chorus/kiai
02:11:728 (1) - kind of inconsistent that you have the spinner here instead of the slowed down slider, just for the sake of consistency (with the Hard diff as well) consider having a slider here as well
02:12:686 - additionally, the recovery period after the spinner is a little small for a "soft" hard, i'd really recommend changing to a slider.
02:24:344 (1) - this one doesnt fit here with the piano, it's skipping one 1/4, just change to 2 1/4 sliders or a reverse with a circle
03:02:510 (4) - hnggggggg
03:07:301 (2) - same angle as 03:06:662 (1) - maybe, just to make it look nicer
[Normal]
00:39:744 (3,4) - move those a little to the right
01:41:705 (4) - blanket maybe?
01:58:952 (5) - a little too far up for my taste. 01:57:675 (1,2,3,4) - just adjust the curve here and move it a little down if you want
[Easy]
01:30:846 (3) - sliiiiiiiightly off blanket grrrrrr
01:37:234 (1,3) - those too
02:43:667 (1,3) - mirroring messed up the sliderpaths, adjust a little 02:44:944 (3) - this one
Best easy i've ever seen, seriously.
[Beginner]
nothing here
really cute set
One thing that i have noticed though is that the timing feels kinda hit or miss in some parts... i assume this is performed so nothing really to be done here, OD is compensating for that anyways
good luck