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Adarin

Joined June 2009

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Adarin 2010-11-15T06:13:51+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 28 December 2010 at 1:36:58 PM

Artist: Mr. Projectile
Title: You Need
Source: Sin City
Tags: sin city breakbeat ambient scratch
BPM: 135
Filesize: 3369kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.66 stars, 66 notes)
Hard (3.91 stars, 163 notes)
Insane (4.89 stars, 295 notes)
Normal (1.95 stars, 103 notes)

Download: Mr. Projectile - You Need
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Adarin 2010-12-28T02:38:51+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Jarby

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Joined August 2008

Jarby 2010-11-16T11:16:48+00:00

00:35:596 - The slowdown here feels a bit excessive. I think it'd be better off not existing or at least made more subtle.
Pretty big volume changes after the kiai time. Perhaps you could make those more subtle as well.
The background is currently the wrong size. Here is an altered version.

Insane:

00:12:262 (12) - Isn't really symmetrical. See this guide for assistance.
00:31:151 (2,3,4,5) - Very cluttered, doesn't seem to fit the rest of the map.
01:28:040 (2,3,4,5) - Cluttered patterns etc

Hard:

00:26:707 (4) - Center it and use the symmetry magic techniques mentioned above in the guide linked.
01:23:596 (4) - See above.

Easy:

00:24:929 (1,2) - The overlap here is a bit aesthetically displeasing. You could move it to a different position.

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-11-16T11:52:01+00:00

00:35:596 - The slowdown here feels a bit excessive. I think it'd be better off not existing or at least made more subtle.
I personally quite like the slowdown but if I hear from a few more people that it'd be better off not existing, then I'll change it.

Pretty big volume changes after the kiai time. Perhaps you could make those more subtle as well.
Fixed.

The background is currently the wrong size. Here is an altered version.
Changed the image to 1024 x 768 and fixed.

Insane:

00:12:262 (12) - Isn't really symmetrical. See this guide for assistance.
Fixed.

00:31:151 (2,3,4,5) - Very cluttered, doesn't seem to fit the rest of the map.
Fixed.

1:28:040 (2,3,4,5) - Cluttered patterns etc
Fixed.

Hard:

00:26:707 (4) - Center it and use the symmetry magic techniques mentioned above in the guide linked.
Fixed.

01:23:596 (4) - See above.
Fixed.

Easy:

00:24:929 (1,2) - The overlap here is a bit aesthetically displeasing. You could move it to a different position.
Fixed.

Lilac

Elite Mapper

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Joined December 2008

Lilac 2010-12-06T09:31:53+00:00

Nice map. Personally, I'd bubble it.

[Easy]
HP Drain -1 (Maybe.)

[Normal]
Same Slider Velocity as Easy...

ok

[Hard]
Cool.

[Insane]
Any reason why the Default Skin is forced on this difficulty but not on the others?

01:23:373 (4) - Could be shaped better. (Along with the other one you copy and pasted.)

If you don't know how you could do that, I'll be happy to show you. Kudosu star. Don't kudosu if you don't want to, not worth 2 kudosu.

Adarin

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Topic Starter

Adarin 2010-12-06T10:04:53+00:00

Lilac wrote:
Nice map. Personally, I'd bubble it.

Thanks

[Easy]

HP Drain -1 (Maybe.)
HP Drain changed to 2.

[Insane]

Any reason why the Default Skin is forced on this difficulty but not on the others?
I didn't realise the others hadn't been forced. Fixed so that Default Skin is forced on all difficulties for the sake of hitsounds.

01:23:373 (4) - Could be shaped better. (Along with the other one you copy and pasted.)
I quite like these sliders - they seem to fit alright with the song so I might leave them unless I hear more complaints.

Shiro

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2010-12-06T13:07:59+00:00

General
Your map seems to be ready for mods. Move it to pending.
Third combo colour blends too much with the background. Make it lighter.

Easy
00:42:707 (1) - Spacing issue: it is as close to (2) as (2) was to the previous (1) but the time gap is not the same.
00:49:818 (1,2) - These two overlap in a bad way, flip (1) vertically ?
01:09:373 (2,3) - These two overlap in a bad way, flip (3) horizontally ?

Normal
seems alright

Hard
seems alright

Insane
Having a OD higher than the AR rate doensn't make sense and is confusing. Lower the OD by one, because the AR doesn't need to be too high for a calm song.

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-12-06T13:31:48+00:00

General

Third combo colour blends too much with the background. Make it lighter.
Fixed.

Easy

00:42:707 (1) - Spacing issue: it is as close to (2) as (2) was to the previous (1) but the time gap is not the same.
Fixed.

00:49:818 (1,2) - These two overlap in a bad way, flip (1) vertically ?
Fixed.

01:09:373 (2,3) - These two overlap in a bad way, flip (3) horizontally ?
Fixed.

Insane

Having a OD higher than the AR rate doensn't make sense and is confusing. Lower the OD by one, because the AR doesn't need to be too high for a calm song.
Fixed.

Larto

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Joined June 2008

Larto 2010-12-18T13:44:27+00:00

Offset: 56
And maybe use Tick Rate 2?
And you'll probably need to either cut the mp3, or map more of the song on all difficulties.

Insane:
The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?
00:26:500 (4) - That circle could be prettier~
01:23:389 (4) - ^

Hard:
The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?

Normal:
00:11:596 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:485 (1) - ^

Easy:
00:14:262 (3) - New Combo
01:11:151 (3) - ^
01:29:818 - Add break

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-12-18T13:48:06+00:00

Larto wrote:
Offset: 56
And maybe use Tick Rate 2?
And you'll probably need to either cut the mp3, or map more of the song on all difficulties.

Insane:
The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?
00:26:500 (4) - That circle could be prettier~
01:23:389 (4) - ^

Hard:
The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?

Normal:
00:11:596 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:485 (1) - ^

Easy:
00:14:262 (3) - New Combo
01:11:151 (3) - ^
01:29:818 - Add break

My internet is currently very slow so I will get to work on that and upload it as soon as I can. Thanks for looking at the map!

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-12-25T04:08:22+00:00

Offset: 56
Fixed.

And maybe use Tick Rate 2?
I found it was a little too noisy on Easy and Normal so the Tick Rate has been left as 1 on those difficulties but has been changed to 2 on the Hard and Insane difficulties.

And you'll probably need to either cut the mp3, or map more of the song on all difficulties.
MP3 has been cut.

Insane:

The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?
Changed to 0.60x.

00:26:500 (4) - That circle could be prettier~
It wasn't intended to be a perfect circle but attempted to fix. Please check again?

01:23:389 (4) - ^
It wasn't intended to be a perfect circle but attempted to fix. Please check again?

Hard:

The part where you use 0.5 slider speed might be better with a speed that isn't all THAT slow. 0.75 or 0.8?
Changed to 0.75x.

Normal:

00:11:596 (1) - Remove new combo
Fixed.

01:08:485 (1) - ^
Fixed.

Easy:

00:14:262 (3) - New Combo
Fixed.

01:11:151 (3) - ^
Fixed.

01:29:818 - Add break
Fixed.

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-12-26T07:44:48+00:00

Offset changed to 54 - 56 just sounded a bit off.

Adarin

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Adarin 2010-12-27T12:46:50+00:00

Offset changed to 125.