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u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Taiko]

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Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 17, 2016 at 5:10:43 PM

Artist: u's
Title: Love wing bell (TV Size)
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: ラブライブ！muse LL lovelive Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjo Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空
BPM: 133
Filesize: 2663kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.88 stars, 168 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.14 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.51 stars, 278 notes)
  4. Oni (2.77 stars, 338 notes)
Download: u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rin + Shinzo = Rinzo

Mod: 22
Thank You for Mod
Charlotte
【R】
PatZar
Ppuskalin
Raediaufar
Aste-
Surono
Labyr
Nishizumi
yuzu__rinrin
Ichigaki
iloveyou4ever
-Tenshi-
Nanatsu
Skeuddy
Prophecy
Volta
IControl
Zetera
neonat
Chocola_2287
Lost The Lights
Last edited by Shinzo- , edited 26 times in total.
Charlotte
1,905 posts
Joined December 2013
Charlotte
Hi from game-in chat.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • song setup→Design→Widescreen Support(uncheck please)
[ Kantan]


  • HP3 is very easy.7 or 8 please.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    Your map is 2/1-pattern is very very long. need 4/1 break time.
[ Futsuu]


  • HP4 is very easy.6 or 7 please.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    00:57:022 (98,99,100,101) - This rhythm is hard to Futsuu player.

    01:26:796 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - hard to Futsuu player.

    Your map is 1/1-patter is very very long...01:00:631 - 01:34:917 -

    For example

    01:03:789 - remove.because,01:03:338 - here is vocal end.so 01:03:789 - this break time is good.

    & 01:00:631 (106,107,108,109,110) - too simple... You can change other pattern.
[ Muzukashii]


  • HP6 is good. OD5 is good.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    00:11:232 (38,39,40,41,42) -

    01:07:172 (220,221,222,223,224) -

    01:13:714 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260) -

    1/4 pattern is long & hard...><; unrankble...This pattern is Oni...other

    01:00:631 - 01:06:496 - too simple...><;
You need to understand more deeply

t/152263 (Taiko mapping Guide)

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248187 (Nardo's wing bell) for your information

Good luck :)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from game-in chat.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • song setup→Design→Widescreen Support(uncheck please)
[ Kantan]


  • HP3 is very easy.7 or 8 please.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    Your map is 2/1-pattern is very very long. need 4/1 break time.
[ Futsuu]


  • HP4 is very easy.6 or 7 please.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    00:57:022 (98,99,100,101) - This rhythm is hard to Futsuu player.

    01:26:796 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - hard to Futsuu player.

    Your map is 1/1-patter is very very long...01:00:631 - 01:34:917 -

    For example

    01:03:789 - remove.because,01:03:338 - here is vocal end.so 01:03:789 - this break time is good.

    & 01:00:631 (106,107,108,109,110) - too simple... You can change other pattern.
[ Muzukashii]


  • HP6 is good. OD5 is good.

    BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

    00:11:232 (38,39,40,41,42) -

    01:07:172 (220,221,222,223,224) -

    01:13:714 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260) -

    1/4 pattern is long & hard...><; unrankble...This pattern is Oni...other

    01:00:631 - 01:06:496 - too simple...><;
You need to understand more deeply

t/152263 (Taiko mapping Guide)

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248187 (Nardo's wing bell) for your information

Good luck :)
all fixed aaaaaa ><
thanks for the mod i feel so noob
and i just realize someone already map this song for taiko x..x
Verniy_Chan
2,321 posts
Joined May 2014
Verniy_Chan
u's ?
ngak nyangkah ya~ xD

+taiko
[R]
1,058 posts
Joined November 2013
[R]
in-game PM chat
langsung aja deh

Shinzo- wrote:

and i just realize someone already map this song for taiko x..x
RIPe

maybe cuma muzu aja gpp yah xD ga terlalu pandai mod dibawah diff itu

[Muzukashii]
00:07:623 - delete, overlap

00:11:458 - dari ga ada breaknya, my suggest
| 00:12:135 - | 00:12:360 - | 00:13:939- | 00:14:165 - | delete
| 00:12:586 - to 00:13:714 - | coba dibuat kkk d k k d

00:14:390 - add d
00:14:841 - delete
00:15:293 - delete

00:26:120 - add note ? kayaknya monoton

00:27:699 - delete, overlap
00:28:375 - ^
00:28:826 - ^
00:29:729 - ^

00:40:556 - add note ?

00:43:939 - pindah ke tick biru di belakang
00:44:841 - pindah 00:44:165 -

00:45:744 - delete , no sound

00:49:578 - add note ?

00:52:736 - delete , overlap
00:55:668 - add note ?

00:57:699 (144,145,146) - 00:58:601 (148,149,150) - triplet dengan struktur finisher di akhir seperti ddD kkK ga dianjurkan (Unrankable) bisa diremove finishernya atau di delete note ditengah

01:09:202 - dari disini kalo bisa dikasih break sedikit, delete beberapa note
01:23:638 - ^


yah cuma itu aja
Good Luck :D
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Verniy_Chan wrote:

u's ?
ngak nyangkah ya~ xD

+taiko
wkwkwk begitulah xD

[R] wrote:

in-game PM chat
langsung aja deh

Shinzo- wrote:

and i just realize someone already map this song for taiko x..x
RIPe

maybe cuma muzu aja gpp yah xD ga terlalu pandai mod dibawah diff itu

[Muzukashii]
00:07:623 - delete, overlap

00:11:458 - dari ga ada breaknya, my suggest
| 00:12:135 - | 00:12:360 - | 00:13:939- | 00:14:165 - | delete
| 00:12:586 - to 00:13:714 - | coba dibuat kkk d k k d

00:14:390 - add d
00:14:841 - delete
00:15:293 - delete

00:26:120 - add note ? kayaknya monoton

00:27:699 - delete, overlap
00:28:375 - ^
00:28:826 - ^
00:29:729 - ^

00:40:556 - add note ?

00:43:939 - pindah ke tick biru di belakang
00:44:841 - pindah 00:44:165 -

00:45:744 - delete , no sound

00:49:578 - add note ?

00:52:736 - delete , overlap
00:55:668 - add note ?

00:57:699 (144,145,146) - 00:58:601 (148,149,150) - triplet dengan struktur finisher di akhir seperti ddD kkK ga dianjurkan (Unrankable) bisa diremove finishernya atau di delete note ditengah

01:09:202 - dari disini kalo bisa dikasih break sedikit, delete beberapa note
01:23:638 - ^


yah cuma itu aja
Good Luck :D
all applied, thank youuuuu >w<
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
yha
16:42 Shinzo-: aaaa
16:42 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
16:42 Shinzo-: oni ny dah kelar o.o
16:42 PatZar: ye gw donlot tar
16:42 Shinzo-: boleh ga biar cuman liat sepintas gitu ._.
16:43 Shinzo-: ok xD
16:44 *PatZar is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875609 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
16:44 PatZar: nani the song
16:44 *PatZar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878632 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Oni]]
16:45 PatZar: 00:11:345 (38) - d keknya lebih confort imo
16:45 PatZar: 00:14:616 (54,55) - diantara 1/4 gap itu, masih bisa dimasukin don
16:46 PatZar: ada unrankable pattern
16:46 PatZar: ooO
16:46 Shinzo-: ok done
16:46 Shinzo-: yg mana ? x..x
16:46 PatZar: sampleset jadiin N
16:47 Shinzo-: ok
16:47 PatZar: 00:27:924 (90,91,92) -
16:47 Shinzo-: itu yg unrankable ?
16:47 PatZar: beat yang 1/4 ga boleh ada ooO/ooX
16:47 PatZar: cuma liat sempintas doang
16:47 Shinzo-: ohhh yaampun
16:47 Shinzo-: bentar fix fix aaaa
16:48 Shinzo-: 00:57:699 (176,177,178) - kek ini juga kan akwkwwk
16:48 PatZar: lagu simple kek gini ooX agak ngeharsh juga so jngan pake
16:48 PatZar: 00:57:699 (175,176,177) - klo yang ini "mungkin" sebagian bn ada yang setengah nolak ada juga yang sengah biasa" aja
16:49 PatZar: volume set jadiin 85%
16:49 Shinzo-: emmmm kalo gitu mending di ooo aj ._.
16:49 PatZar: boleh o O boleh ooo
16:49 PatZar: gmna ngeemphasisnya aja wkkw
16:50 *PatZar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Kantan]]
16:50 Shinzo-: okk
16:50 PatZar: dikantan 00:01:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2/1 D D keknya ga terlalu masalah juga tp ada yang kerepotan juga
16:50 PatZar: liat orng ngemod aja klo yang bagian ini
16:50 PatZar: so kd me :v
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

PatZar wrote:

yha
16:42 Shinzo-: aaaa
16:42 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
16:42 Shinzo-: oni ny dah kelar o.o
16:42 PatZar: ye gw donlot tar
16:42 Shinzo-: boleh ga biar cuman liat sepintas gitu ._.
16:43 Shinzo-: ok xD
16:44 *PatZar is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875609 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
16:44 PatZar: nani the song
16:44 *PatZar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878632 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Oni]]
16:45 PatZar: 00:11:345 (38) - d keknya lebih confort imo
16:45 PatZar: 00:14:616 (54,55) - diantara 1/4 gap itu, masih bisa dimasukin don
16:46 PatZar: ada unrankable pattern
16:46 PatZar: ooO
16:46 Shinzo-: ok done
16:46 Shinzo-: yg mana ? x..x
16:46 PatZar: sampleset jadiin N
16:47 Shinzo-: ok
16:47 PatZar: 00:27:924 (90,91,92) -
16:47 Shinzo-: itu yg unrankable ?
16:47 PatZar: beat yang 1/4 ga boleh ada ooO/ooX
16:47 PatZar: cuma liat sempintas doang
16:47 Shinzo-: ohhh yaampun
16:47 Shinzo-: bentar fix fix aaaa
16:48 Shinzo-: 00:57:699 (176,177,178) - kek ini juga kan akwkwwk
16:48 PatZar: lagu simple kek gini ooX agak ngeharsh juga so jngan pake
16:48 PatZar: 00:57:699 (175,176,177) - klo yang ini "mungkin" sebagian bn ada yang setengah nolak ada juga yang sengah biasa" aja
16:49 PatZar: volume set jadiin 85%
16:49 Shinzo-: emmmm kalo gitu mending di ooo aj ._.
16:49 PatZar: boleh o O boleh ooo
16:49 PatZar: gmna ngeemphasisnya aja wkkw
16:50 *PatZar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Kantan]]
16:50 Shinzo-: okk
16:50 PatZar: dikantan 00:01:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2/1 D D keknya ga terlalu masalah juga tp ada yang kerepotan juga
16:50 PatZar: liat orng ngemod aja klo yang bagian ini
16:50 PatZar: so kd me :v
jaad =="
but thanks lol
snz
877 posts
Joined February 2015
snz
Mod From PM Request

[Kantan]
00:30:405 (37) - Change This To k
00:42:586 (54) - Change This To d
01:03:338 (79) - ^
01:21:383 (103) - ^
01:28:601 (112) - Change This To k
[Futssu]
00:04:691 (5,6,7) - Change To K (Sounds Better)
00:26:345 (38,39) - Ctrl+G
00:29:052 (42) - Change This To D
00:38:074 (54) - Change This To k
00:49:578 - Add One k Here
01:01:533 (97,98) - Ctrl+G
01:06:947 (110,111) - ^
01:15:067 (133) - Add Finish Here
01:34:917 (186) - Change This To D
[Muzukashii]
00:10:556 (7) - Change This To k
00:22:511 (44) - Delete This
00:27:924 (56) - Change This To k
00:36:947 (83) - Delete This
00:52:511 (120) - Delete Finish
01:02:661 (157,158) - Ctrl+G
01:14:165 (199) - Change This To d
01:21:834 (225,226) - Change To k
[Oni]
00:28:037 (92) - Change This To k
00:38:751 (122) - ^
00:43:488 (136,137) - Ctrl+G
00:49:353 (150,151) - ^
01:07:849 (218) - Change This To K
01:11:232 - Add One d Here
01:15:067 (251) - Change This To d
01:19:127 (267,268) - Ctrl+G

Good Luck With Rank. :D
Raediaufar
879 posts
Joined November 2014
Raediaufar
[General]
click
Before we go to the pattern please fix things I mentioned

- All slider velocity should be 1.4
- Please set the slider velocity on Muzukashii diff to 1.61.4, I feel like playing with HR mod when play that diff because of that thing is not fixed
- goddamn title is spaced a lot, maybe you not use default bracket font, please delete those brackets "Love wing bell（TVサイズ）" change what I bold to normal bracket and don't forget to add space before kurung tutup

Now let me try to fix that gap between Muzukashii and Oni that is too small (baik di pattern maupun star)

[Muzu]

click
00:13:037 (15) - delete
00:16:195 (25) - delete
00:19:804 (34,35) - delete
00:21:383 (37) - delete
00:21:608 (37) - k
00:29:052 (57) - d
00:32:210 (65) - snap to 00:32:435 -
00:32:886 (67) - delete
00:34:240 (70,71) - delete
00:35:819 (73) - delete
00:43:826 (93) - fix this please even oni don't have note here, move it to 00:43:939 -
00:44:165 (94) - delete
00:45:180 - add d, alternate should be fun in here for muzu player :3
00:52:398 (113) - delete
00:57:022 (126) - no need to add finish here
00:57:811 (129) - delete
00:58:714 (132) - delete, don't add too much alternate here because oni isn't too hard so muzu menyesuaikan
00:59:729 (136) - k
00:59:954 (137) - delete, habis not 1/2 panjang lu lanjutin alternate kkk mati lahh
01:07:172 (161,162,163,164,165) - gile lu shin map muzu yg mudah lagi lu kasih alternate 5 not. Oke lah sebenarnya muzu ada yang gitu tapi kalo mau naroh 5 alternate harus ada break panjang sebelum dan sesudah 5 not dan dilihat ini map juga map mudah jadi gak gue saranin banget lu naroh kek gini
Jadi? 01:07:511 (164) - delete
01:10:781 (176) - delete
01:11:684 - add d
01:12:586 (181) - delete
01:13:488 (184) - delete
01:18:450 (200) - delete
01:24:315 - add d
01:25:217 (224,225,226) - delete
01:27:022 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - mau tavvuran lu :VVVVVVV seumur hidup gue main muzu gak pernah ada not ginian njer ini mah buat Inner Oni :VVVVVVV
01:27:022 (228,229,231,232,233) - delete njer
01:27:247 (228,229) - k
01:30:180 (237,238) - delete
01:30:405 (237) - k
01:33:338 (247,248,249) - delete

habis gue apply in semua mod gua muzu jadi 2.3* aja

Ni muzu juga kebanyakan big don sama big kat gue gasuka map yang kebanyakan itunya kecuali lu ET mapper kayak si INDOMIE GORENG :VVVVVV

[Oni]

click
00:15:969 (58) - k
00:50:706 (154) - k
01:15:067 (250) - ganti ini jadi k biasa ato delete 01:14:954 (249) -
01:20:480 (272) - ni juga, ubah jadi k biasa to delete 01:20:368 (271) -

Oni nya bagus anjay gak kek muzu berantakan

testplay

-------------------

BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

^ ni apply jeg dari charlotte. 1.6 juga gue rasa kurang pas buat map low bpm ginian
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Ppuskalin wrote:

Mod From PM Request

[Kantan]
00:30:405 (37) - Change This To k
00:42:586 (54) - Change This To d
01:03:338 (79) - ^
01:21:383 (103) - ^
01:28:601 (112) - Change This To k
[Futssu]
00:04:691 (5,6,7) - Change To K (Sounds Better)
00:26:345 (38,39) - Ctrl+G
00:29:052 (42) - Change This To D
00:38:074 (54) - Change This To k
00:49:578 - Add One k Here
01:01:533 (97,98) - Ctrl+G
01:06:947 (110,111) - ^
01:15:067 (133) - Add Finish Here
01:34:917 (186) - Change This To D
[Muzukashii]
00:10:556 (7) - Change This To k
00:22:511 (44) - Delete This
00:27:924 (56) - Change This To k //no those kind of pattern is only for oni
00:36:947 (83) - Delete This
00:52:511 (120) - Delete Finish
01:02:661 (157,158) - Ctrl+G
01:14:165 (199) - Change This To d
01:21:834 (225,226) - Change To k // changed 01:22:059 (226) - only
[Oni]
00:28:037 (92) - Change This To k // idonthinkso
00:38:751 (122) - ^ // no sorry
00:43:488 (136,137) - Ctrl+G // no xD
00:49:353 (150,151) - ^
01:07:849 (218) - Change This To K
01:11:232 - Add One d Here // little break will be better imo
01:15:067 (251) - Change This To d // not really fit imo sorry
01:19:127 (267,268) - Ctrl+G

Good Luck With Rank. :D
thanks for mod >w< no reply means accepted

Raediaufar wrote:

[General]
click
Before we go to the pattern please fix things I mentioned

- All slider velocity should be 1.4
- Please set the slider velocity on Muzukashii diff to 1.61.4, I feel like playing with HR mod when play that diff because of that thing is not fixed
- goddamn title is spaced a lot, maybe you not use default bracket font, please delete those brackets "Love wing bell（TVサイズ）" change what I bold to normal bracket and don't forget to add space before kurung tutup

Now let me try to fix that gap between Muzukashii and Oni that is too small (baik di pattern maupun star)

[Muzu]

click
00:13:037 (15) - delete
00:16:195 (25) - delete
00:19:804 (34,35) - delete
00:21:383 (37) - delete
00:21:608 (37) - k
00:29:052 (57) - d
00:32:210 (65) - snap to 00:32:435 -
00:32:886 (67) - delete
00:34:240 (70,71) - delete
00:35:819 (73) - delete
00:43:826 (93) - fix this please even oni don't have note here, move it to 00:43:939 -
00:44:165 (94) - delete
00:45:180 - add d, alternate should be fun in here for muzu player :3
00:52:398 (113) - delete
00:57:022 (126) - no need to add finish here
00:57:811 (129) - delete
00:58:714 (132) - delete, don't add too much alternate here because oni isn't too hard so muzu menyesuaikan
00:59:729 (136) - k
00:59:954 (137) - delete, habis not 1/2 panjang lu lanjutin alternate kkk mati lahh
01:07:172 (161,162,163,164,165) - gile lu shin map muzu yg mudah lagi lu kasih alternate 5 not. Oke lah sebenarnya muzu ada yang gitu tapi kalo mau naroh 5 alternate harus ada break panjang sebelum dan sesudah 5 not dan dilihat ini map juga map mudah jadi gak gue saranin banget lu naroh kek gini
Jadi? 01:07:511 (164) - delete
01:10:781 (176) - delete
01:11:684 - add d
01:12:586 (181) - delete
01:13:488 (184) - delete
01:18:450 (200) - delete
01:24:315 - add d
01:25:217 (224,225,226) - delete
01:27:022 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - mau tavvuran lu :VVVVVVV seumur hidup gue main muzu gak pernah ada not ginian njer ini mah buat Inner Oni :VVVVVVV
01:27:022 (228,229,231,232,233) - delete njer
01:27:247 (228,229) - k
01:30:180 (237,238) - delete
01:30:405 (237) - k
01:33:338 (247,248,249) - delete

habis gue apply in semua mod gua muzu jadi 2.3* aja

Ni muzu juga kebanyakan big don sama big kat gue gasuka map yang kebanyakan itunya kecuali lu ET mapper kayak si INDOMIE GORENG :VVVVVV

[Oni]

click
00:15:969 (58) - k
00:50:706 (154) - k
01:15:067 (250) - ganti ini jadi k biasa ato delete 01:14:954 (249) -
01:20:480 (272) - ni juga, ubah jadi k biasa to delete 01:20:368 (271) -

Oni nya bagus anjay gak kek muzu berantakan // hehe maafkan, aku masih belajar xD

testplay

-------------------

BPM133 so SV1.4 is good.

^ ni apply jeg dari charlotte. 1.6 juga gue rasa kurang pas buat map low bpm ginian
thanks for mod raedi, 95% accepted xD
sorry can't reply each of it /x..x
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
MOD via LINE

umm.. Maybe testplay.. Idk






Doneee~
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
lol banyak yg gw kenal ni modder2.. wah nengok trit di indo itu pasti kkwkwkw

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>General
[*]udah lakuin blom kata2 si asta? spread muzu sama oni tuh XD trus futsuu sama kantan klitan mudah tapi, panjang2.. kalau diff jadi gampang itu dari sr kliatan.. coba buat si futsuu srnya deket 1.7 atau kalau bagus lagi minimal deket 1.6 segini (tergantung tempat rest sama hitsounding kamu), kantan juga kalau bisa jadi 0.xxxxxxxx srnya, bukan 1.xxx XD oh ya kalau hitsounding jgn dibuat susah2 di low diff.. sebisa mungkin buat similar kalau nada sama
  1. HP di Muzukashii kok 5? ganti jadi 7 biar konsisten sama diff lain
  2. Muzukashii lupa spinner? cuma tau di diff ini doang, coba check diff dibawahnya juga XD
>Oni
  1. 00:12:586 - ini pola ddk bisa jadi 1/6 dddk, walau ga ada inner kan yg paling susah Oni kan, why not to changing it? bagus buat ngikut musik. ( ga susah, ga menantang lol )
  2. 00:13:714 - kenapa ga kasih ini finisher? nada kuat 00:11:909 - kaya ini, tapi gapapa sih ga kasih finisher kalau tujuannya buat 00:15:518 - nekan ini finisher buat pergantian ritme
  3. 00:25:443 - pola juga sama dengan sebelumnya.. buat variasi biar menarik kalau mau, jadi ganti kat? vokal tinggi atau ctrl g jadi dk 1/2 buat 00:21:608 - mirror variasinya?
  4. 00:44:165 - ada nada violin kan? kenapa ga tambah note? karna kamu buat pola stream 00:43:714 - dari violin kan, jadi atur konsistennya dgn apa yg kamu taruh..
selanjutnya keknya ga ada yg perlu aku notis.. lagi males kwkwk, tapi ini masih undermapped dan banyak yg pola yg bosenin, padahal nada banyak yg beda beda kan? atur oke variasnya.. dan coba lagi playback (kalau perlu di slow playback) trus isi nada yg masih kosong kek drum, biola, piano atau vocal.. yah menurutku ini fine2 aja, tapi sebisa mungkin untuk ngisi lebih ditempat yg terasa perlu buat jadi pola dan juga untuk jaga konsisten spread buat diff dibawahnya

>Muzukashii
  • males buat notis yg lain, cuma liat penyebaran mapnya oke?
  1. sebisa mungkin ngurangin note biar spreadnya aman.. 00:02:887 - misal ini xxxxx di Oni, di muzu bisa dibuat xx xx atau xxx x dll, tergantung penekanan pola yg kamu suka.. tapi keep juga boleh karna ini semua nada penting kan? 00:03:338 - mungkin ganti ini jadi kat jadi gampang untuk di hit untuk muzu
  2. 00:45:180 - disini triplet, tapi di Oni bukan triplet. jadi di buat jadi 1/2 aja trus di Oni di jadiin 3plet. biar spreadnya bagus

    di sekitar awal, coba kurangin note biar ga sama kek Oni, pas msk kiai dirasa banyak 1/2 pola yg panjang sama 1/1 yg ngikut vokal
    bingung mau ngapain XD yg penting spread muzu harus mudah dari Oni misal: ada 1/2 atau stream 1/4 xxx jadi x x di Muzu, trus improve 1/1 biar ga terlalu mudah dan atur 1/2 biar ga sama si Oni
>Futsuu
  1. lumayan ini, tapi pas 1st kiai trus masuk 2nd kiai sampe selsai.. terlalu panjang, butuh rest biar ga pegel, walaupun slow bpm tapi pikirkan player yg newbie, biar ga pegel lol *cari 1/1 yg perlu di delete untuk rest atau biar penekanan vokal/music bagus.. aku beri contoh: 01:10:781 (121,122) - ini bisa di delete karna ga ada nada yg penting dan cocok buat rest menurutku, tapi sebisa mungkin jgn tergantung dgn kata2 nub ini XD pokoknya ini terlalu panjang
>Kantan
  1. sama sih kek Futsuu.. tapi gpplah ini bpm slow, di kiai rest 4/1 jarang kliatan. coba buat 1 rest point aja di setiap kiai, kalau bisa lebih kalau penekanan si lagu bagus *ga brani buat ngomong kata aslinya.. remmm,,,,, aa ga jadi XD*
cuma segini aja, sperti kek comment ya XD dari pada ngepoin satu satu buat sugesti ya percuma, baru kali ini kan ngemap taiko? jadi ini kek saran
semoga membantu, happy Mapping! (kalau perlu bantuan, tinggal chat in game)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Surono wrote:

lol banyak yg gw kenal ni modder2.. wah nengok trit di indo itu pasti kkwkwkw

Request via PM Site

>General
[*]udah lakuin blom kata2 si asta? spread muzu sama oni tuh XD trus futsuu sama kantan klitan mudah tapi, panjang2.. kalau diff jadi gampang itu dari sr kliatan.. coba buat si futsuu srnya deket 1.7 atau kalau bagus lagi minimal deket 1.6 segini (tergantung tempat rest sama hitsounding kamu), kantan juga kalau bisa jadi 0.xxxxxxxx srnya, bukan 1.xxx XD oh ya kalau hitsounding jgn dibuat susah2 di low diff.. sebisa mungkin buat similar kalau nada sama
  1. HP di Muzukashii kok 5? ganti jadi 7 biar konsisten sama diff lain
  2. Muzukashii lupa spinner? cuma tau di diff ini doang, coba check diff dibawahnya juga XD
>Oni
  1. 00:12:586 - ini pola ddk bisa jadi 1/6 dddk, walau ga ada inner kan yg paling susah Oni kan, why not to changing it? bagus buat ngikut musik. ( ga susah, ga menantang lol )
  2. 00:13:714 - kenapa ga kasih ini finisher? nada kuat 00:11:909 - kaya ini, tapi gapapa sih ga kasih finisher kalau tujuannya buat 00:15:518 - nekan ini finisher buat pergantian ritme
  3. 00:25:443 - pola juga sama dengan sebelumnya.. buat variasi biar menarik kalau mau, jadi ganti kat? vokal tinggi atau ctrl g jadi dk 1/2 buat 00:21:608 - mirror variasinya?
  4. 00:44:165 - ada nada violin kan? kenapa ga tambah note? karna kamu buat pola stream 00:43:714 - dari violin kan, jadi atur konsistennya dgn apa yg kamu taruh..
selanjutnya keknya ga ada yg perlu aku notis.. lagi males kwkwk, tapi ini masih undermapped dan banyak yg pola yg bosenin, padahal nada banyak yg beda beda kan? atur oke variasnya.. dan coba lagi playback (kalau perlu di slow playback) trus isi nada yg masih kosong kek drum, biola, piano atau vocal.. yah menurutku ini fine2 aja, tapi sebisa mungkin untuk ngisi lebih ditempat yg terasa perlu buat jadi pola dan juga untuk jaga konsisten spread buat diff dibawahnya

>Muzukashii
  • males buat notis yg lain, cuma liat penyebaran mapnya oke?
  1. sebisa mungkin ngurangin note biar spreadnya aman.. 00:02:887 - misal ini xxxxx di Oni, di muzu bisa dibuat xx xx atau xxx x dll, tergantung penekanan pola yg kamu suka.. tapi keep juga boleh karna ini semua nada penting kan? 00:03:338 - mungkin ganti ini jadi kat jadi gampang untuk di hit untuk muzu
  2. 00:45:180 - disini triplet, tapi di Oni bukan triplet. jadi di buat jadi 1/2 aja trus di Oni di jadiin 3plet. biar spreadnya bagus

    di sekitar awal, coba kurangin note biar ga sama kek Oni, pas msk kiai dirasa banyak 1/2 pola yg panjang sama 1/1 yg ngikut vokal
    bingung mau ngapain XD yg penting spread muzu harus mudah dari Oni misal: ada 1/2 atau stream 1/4 xxx jadi x x di Muzu, trus improve 1/1 biar ga terlalu mudah dan atur 1/2 biar ga sama si Oni
>Futsuu
  1. lumayan ini, tapi pas 1st kiai trus masuk 2nd kiai sampe selsai.. terlalu panjang, butuh rest biar ga pegel, walaupun slow bpm tapi pikirkan player yg newbie, biar ga pegel lol *cari 1/1 yg perlu di delete untuk rest atau biar penekanan vokal/music bagus.. aku beri contoh: 01:10:781 (121,122) - ini bisa di delete karna ga ada nada yg penting dan cocok buat rest menurutku, tapi sebisa mungkin jgn tergantung dgn kata2 nub ini XD pokoknya ini terlalu panjang
>Kantan
  1. sama sih kek Futsuu.. tapi gpplah ini bpm slow, di kiai rest 4/1 jarang kliatan. coba buat 1 rest point aja di setiap kiai, kalau bisa lebih kalau penekanan si lagu bagus *ga brani buat ngomong kata aslinya.. remmm,,,,, aa ga jadi XD*
cuma segini aja, sperti kek comment ya XD dari pada ngepoin satu satu buat sugesti ya percuma, baru kali ini kan ngemap taiko? jadi ini kek saran
semoga membantu, happy Mapping! (kalau perlu bantuan, tinggal chat in game)
ok all fixed x..x
thanks for modd surono >w<
and Nardo's map is qualify xD
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
lol, ternyata.. kalau bisa kamu jadiin referensi mapnya dia. tapi jgn jiplak kwkwk
(terutama spread low diffnya kwkwk, tapi bagus lho SRnya dari pada pnya Nardo)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Surono wrote:

lol, ternyata.. kalau bisa kamu jadiin referensi mapnya dia. tapi jgn jiplak kwkwk
(terutama spread low diffnya kwkwk, tapi bagus lho SRnya dari pada pnya Nardo)
Serius ane ga liat diff nardo pas nge fix ._.
Tpi ya sudah kudagu akan seperti ini lel

Thanks btw xD
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
et map taiko
Labyr
186 posts
Joined February 2014
Labyr
hi, mod req via game-chat and PM (?)
it became late, sorry.

d → don
k → kat
D → big don
K → big kat

[ General]
  1. Oni diff → Widescreen support exclude a check.
[ Kantan]
  1. there is really much 1/2 note pattern. ignore the some sounds, please use rest of 1/4.
  2. for example, 00:01:984 - , 00:12:811 - , 00:18:225 - remove... etc.
you must reconsider the notes color by deleting the notes.
should refer to existing ranked map.

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:20:029 (29,30,31) - change k d k　use d k d just before that, and follow Vocal.
  2. 00:34:465 (49,50,51) same as 00:20:029 -
  3. 01:05:142 - change d
  4. 01:06:947 - remove finisher
  5. 01:07:398 - remove notes
  6. 01:07:849 - change K
  7. 01:10:105 - change d　follow Vo.
  8. 01:11:458 (119,120) - remove finisher
  9. 01:21:834 (144,145) - remove notes
  10. 01:22:285 - change K
need rest (notes space) of 1/3 in futsuu. please arrange the some rest.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:49:578 - change k
  2. 01:10:105 - change d　because there is much k in the outskirts, balance is seen by making d.
  3. 01:11:007 - remove　there isn't a sound to place notes, and to need rest of 1/2 in Muzu.
  4. spinner end 01:38:526 - ?
[ Oni]
  1. 00:05:142 (15,16) - change d　I think that ddK fits about the pitch of the sound.
  2. 00:18:112 - add note?　similarly 00:32:548 -
  3. 00:20:932 - change k　follow Vocal.
  4. 00:24:315 - ^
  5. 00:25:894 (87,88) - swap ^
  6. 00:28:150 - change k
  7. 00:35:368 - same as 00:20:932 -
  8. 00:38:751 - same as 00:24:315 -
  9. 00:40:330 - same as 00:25:894 -
  10. 00:42:586 - change k　follow Vocal.
  11. 00:48:902 - move to 00:49:127 - and 00:49:127 (156,157) - swap
  12. 01:04:917 (214,215) - swap　similarly 01:19:127 (276,277,278) -
  13. spinner end 01:38:526 - ?
first taiko mapset for rank? Good Luck ;)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Labyr wrote:

hi, mod req via game-chat and PM (?)
it became late, sorry.

d → don
k → kat
D → big don
K → big kat

[ General]
  1. Oni diff → Widescreen support exclude a check.
[ Kantan]
  1. there is really much 1/2 note pattern. ignore the some sounds, please use rest of 1/4.
  2. for example, 00:01:984 - , 00:12:811 - , 00:18:225 - remove... etc.
you must reconsider the notes color by deleting the notes.
should refer to existing ranked map.

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:20:029 (29,30,31) - change k d k　use d k d just before that, and follow Vocal.
  2. 00:34:465 (49,50,51) same as 00:20:029 -
  3. 01:05:142 - change d
  4. 01:06:947 - remove finisher
  5. 01:07:398 - remove notes
  6. 01:07:849 - change K
  7. 01:10:105 - change d　follow Vo.
  8. 01:11:458 (119,120) - remove finisher
  9. 01:21:834 (144,145) - remove notes
  10. 01:22:285 - change K
need rest (notes space) of 1/3 in futsuu. please arrange the some rest.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:49:578 - change k
  2. 01:10:105 - change d　because there is much k in the outskirts, balance is seen by making d.
  3. 01:11:007 - remove　there isn't a sound to place notes, and to need rest of 1/2 in Muzu.
  4. spinner end 01:38:526 - ?
[ Oni]
  1. 00:05:142 (15,16) - change d　I think that ddK fits about the pitch of the sound.
  2. 00:18:112 - add note?　similarly 00:32:548 -
  3. 00:20:932 - change k　follow Vocal.
  4. 00:24:315 - ^
  5. 00:25:894 (87,88) - swap ^
  6. 00:28:150 - change k
  7. 00:35:368 - same as 00:20:932 -
  8. 00:38:751 - same as 00:24:315 -
  9. 00:40:330 - same as 00:25:894 -
  10. 00:42:586 - change k　follow Vocal.
  11. 00:48:902 - move to 00:49:127 - and 00:49:127 (156,157) - swap
  12. 01:04:917 (214,215) - swap　similarly 01:19:127 (276,277,278) -
  13. spinner end 01:38:526 - ?
first taiko mapset for rank? Good Luck ;)
thanks for mod xD some are reject and some are applied, sorry can't reply each of it..
>w<
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
tolol, skrng ganti nama ke jiwitt3t3
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

PatZar wrote:

tolol, skrng ganti nama ke jiwitt3t3
Salahkan mereka xD wkwkk
Makasih star ny btw
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
Joined March 2013
Nishizumi
Hi, this is m4m as you requested

[Oni]

ilangin Widescreen Support
turunin HP drainnya jadi 5, naikin OD nya jadi 5 juga. standarnya oni aja.

  1. 00:08:300 - remove clap ? biar konsisten sama 00:01:082
  2. 00:09:202 (29,32,36) - add finish ? konsisten sama bagian sebelumnya, yang banyak penekanan entah di suara lonceng atau gitar. dan, (29) ganti ke D ?
  3. 00:11:571 - delete aja ? biar ngepasin suara drum berhenti di 00:11:458
  4. 00:42:586 - ganti ke k ? suaranya agak meninggi gitu dari (135) ke sini
  5. 00:55:894 - move ke 00:56:120 - ? buat ngisi suara vokal. soalnya dari bagian sebelum-sebelumnya, pada ngikutin pitch vokal
  6. 01:11:232 - delete aja ? buat ngisi sedikit istirahat, soalnya bagian sini panjang amat notenya, dari 01:09:202 - sampe 01:14:165 - ga ada istirahatnya
  7. 01:19:127 - ganti ke d ? vokalnya kedengeran rendah kayak 01:19:578
  8. 01:25:668 - sama kaya 01:11:232 - delete
  9. 01:32:435 - delete sini ? keliatan agak panjang juga notenya
[Muzukashii]

naikin HP jadi 6 ? OD turunin jadi 4.5 ? *agak ragu kalo masalah turunin OD =.=*

  1. 00:03:112 - delete ? biar jaga gap sama futsuunya juga
  2. 00:04:465 - sama kaya di atas
  3. 00:07:849 (18,19) - ganti ke k ? biar konsisten sama note paling awal
  4. 00:10:330 - delete ? sama kaya 00:03:112
  5. 00:11:684 - delete ? sama kaya 00:04:465
  6. 00:57:360 (119,122) - remove finisher ? keknya bakal agak susah ngehit big note di tick biru, tapi bpmnya juga pelan..hmm bingung
  7. 01:08:300 (156,158) - swap these ? biar ngikutin dari 01:07:398
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:07:849 (10,11) - swap these ? biar ngikutin note paling awal, di bagian (11)nya itu d
  2. 00:08:300 (11,12,13,15,17,20) - add finish ? biar konsisten sama bagian sebelumnya
  3. 01:00:180 - delete ? biar ga terlalu panjang notenya
  4. 01:13:037 - sampe 01:17:774 - kepanjangan tuh notenya ? please reduce it
  5. 01:18:450 - sampe 01:24:992 - same as above
[Kantan]

decrease od to 3

  1. 00:11:909 - add finish ? sama kaya diff yg lain
  2. 00:29:954 - sama kaya diatas
  3. 00:46:195 - sama kaya di atas
  4. 01:15:067 - kenapa ga pake big note ?
alright, hope it would help you. good luck :)
yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
Joined July 2014
yuzu__rinrin
hi

from game chat

I can not read and write English

mod
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:067 (51) - move 00:45:293 -
    The sound of the drum is sounding
[Fustuu]
nice map
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:300 - 00:11:909 - Or big note is the need ?
  2. 01:01:082 (134) - change d
  3. 01:15:518 (178) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:58:262 (186) - change big ?
  2. 01:34:127 - add k
  3. 01:34:353 - add d


Good luck
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi, this is m4m as you requested

[Oni]

ilangin Widescreen Support
turunin HP drainnya jadi 5, naikin OD nya jadi 5 juga. standarnya oni aja.

  1. 00:08:300 - remove clap ? biar konsisten sama 00:01:082
  2. 00:09:202 (29,32,36) - add finish ? konsisten sama bagian sebelumnya, yang banyak penekanan entah di suara lonceng atau gitar. dan, (29) ganti ke D ?
  3. 00:11:571 - delete aja ? biar ngepasin suara drum berhenti di 00:11:458
  4. 00:42:586 - ganti ke k ? suaranya agak meninggi gitu dari (135) ke sini
  5. 00:55:894 - move ke 00:56:120 - ? buat ngisi suara vokal. soalnya dari bagian sebelum-sebelumnya, pada ngikutin pitch vokal
  6. 01:11:232 - delete aja ? buat ngisi sedikit istirahat, soalnya bagian sini panjang amat notenya, dari 01:09:202 - sampe 01:14:165 - ga ada istirahatnya
  7. 01:19:127 - ganti ke d ? vokalnya kedengeran rendah kayak 01:19:578
  8. 01:25:668 - sama kaya 01:11:232 - delete
  9. 01:32:435 - delete sini ? keliatan agak panjang juga notenya
[Muzukashii]

naikin HP jadi 6 ? OD turunin jadi 4.5 ? *agak ragu kalo masalah turunin OD =.=*

  1. 00:03:112 - delete ? biar jaga gap sama futsuunya juga
  2. 00:04:465 - sama kaya di atas
  3. 00:07:849 (18,19) - ganti ke k ? biar konsisten sama note paling awal
  4. 00:10:330 - delete ? sama kaya 00:03:112
  5. 00:11:684 - delete ? sama kaya 00:04:465
  6. 00:57:360 (119,122) - remove finisher ? keknya bakal agak susah ngehit big note di tick biru, tapi bpmnya juga pelan..hmm bingung
  7. 01:08:300 (156,158) - swap these ? biar ngikutin dari 01:07:398
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:07:849 (10,11) - swap these ? biar ngikutin note paling awal, di bagian (11)nya itu d
  2. 00:08:300 (11,12,13,15,17,20) - add finish ? biar konsisten sama bagian sebelumnya
  3. 01:00:180 - delete ? biar ga terlalu panjang notenya
  4. 01:13:037 - sampe 01:17:774 - kepanjangan tuh notenya ? please reduce it
  5. 01:18:450 - sampe 01:24:992 - same as above
[Kantan]

decrease od to 3

  1. 00:11:909 - add finish ? sama kaya diff yg lain
  2. 00:29:954 - sama kaya diatas
  3. 00:46:195 - sama kaya di atas
  4. 01:15:067 - kenapa ga pake big note ?
alright, hope it would help you. good luck :)
all applied thanks so much >w<

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi

from game chat

I can not read and write English

mod
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:067 (51) - move 00:45:293 -
    The sound of the drum is sounding
[Fustuu]
nice map
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:300 - 00:11:909 - Or big note is the need ?
  2. 01:01:082 (134) - change d
  3. 01:15:518 (178) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:58:262 (186) - change big ?
  2. 01:34:127 - add k
  3. 01:34:353 - add d


Good luck
all applied too xD
thank youu ^0^
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki
just structural mod, nothing else
w
16:55 Shinzo-: hi chi >w<
16:55 Ichigaki: hi ken
16:55 Ichigaki: ada apa?
16:55 Shinzo-: itu... irc .. kelupaan o.o
16:57 Ichigaki: wah 
16:57 Ichigaki: map apa ya? wkwkwk
16:57 Shinzo-: yg taiko xD
16:57 Ichigaki: ohh ;x
16:57 Shinzo-: wktu itu janjian jumat tpi w ga on sorry
16:57 Ichigaki: maaf kelupaan, udah jarang main :c
16:57 Ichigaki: wkwkwkw
16:57 Ichigaki: sekarang bisa?
16:58 Shinzo-: bisa
16:58 Shinzo-: :D
17:00 Ichigaki: sebentar ya
17:00 Shinzo-: ok
17:07 Ichigaki: ehh
17:07 Ichigaki: map apa? :o
17:09 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
17:16 *Ichigaki is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878632 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Oni]]
17:17 *Shinzo- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878632 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Oni]]
17:17 Ichigaki: 00:08:977 (28) - sepertinya ini mending dihapus aja sih
17:17 Shinzo-: ok xD kecil bgt suara ny lel
17:17 Ichigaki: 00:09:879 (31) - sama ini juga
17:17 Shinzo-: done
17:18 Ichigaki: 00:11:571 - ini nggak diadd k aja?
17:19 Ichigaki: kedengaran suara sih, tapi ntar jadinya 5-plet
17:19 Shinzo-: tadinya ada tpi dihapus :3
17:19 Ichigaki: oh yaudah, paham kok
17:19 Shinzo-: xD
17:20 Ichigaki: 00:45:969 - add note buat vocal
17:20 Shinzo-: ok
17:21 Ichigaki: 01:07:511 (224) - kalau ini mending dihapus juga gimana?
17:22 Ichigaki: 01:09:879 (233,234) - ctrl+g, buat variasi
17:22 Shinzo-: hmmmokeoke
17:22 Ichigaki: soalnya aku lihat kebanyakan kdkdkdkdk aja gitu
17:23 Shinzo-: ohhh iyaiya
17:23 Ichigaki: 01:13:488 (250) - trus ini juga dihapus, toh di 01:14:390 - ga ada note juga
17:23 Shinzo-: ane re-arrange yg sebelumny jdivariasi soalny itu rada cocok dgn dkk
17:24 Ichigaki: oh ok ok
17:24 Ichigaki: 01:17:661 (268) - ga ada suara bukannya? hapus aja 
17:25 Ichigaki: beda sama ini 01:20:368 - kedengaran dikit
17:25 Shinzo-: ayyy nice
17:25 Ichigaki: 01:23:638 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,302,303,304,305,306) - buat variasi deh, jangan kdkdk lagi lol
17:25 Ichigaki: maksudnya jangan semuanya
17:26 Shinzo-: ohhh oke
17:27 Ichigaki: 01:32:999 (333) - remove
17:28 Shinzo-: itu buat melody ny ._.
17:28 Ichigaki: ah
17:28 Ichigaki: iya sih
17:28 Shinzo-: deleted then
17:28 Shinzo-: tapi salah snap sih hmmm
17:28 Ichigaki: ayy lol
17:29 Ichigaki: 01:34:127 (342) - move to 01:34:127 (342) - 
17:29 Ichigaki: eh
17:29 Ichigaki: 01:34:578 - *
17:29 Shinzo-: yay gud gud
17:29 Ichigaki: 01:33:902 - 01:33:958 - sebenernya ada note di 1/8 ini, terserah kamu mau diadd apa nggak
17:30 Ichigaki: bisa jadi diadd 1/4nya aja
17:30 Shinzo-: ngga de xD
17:30 Ichigaki: 01:33:902 - 
17:30 Shinzo-: nanti di 01:34:127 -  klo ga di add juga aneh
17:31 Shinzo-: jadi mending ga xD
17:31 Ichigaki: oke deh
17:31 Shinzo-: :)
17:31 Ichigaki: oni done
17:31 *Ichigaki is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875611 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Muzukashii]]
17:31 *Shinzo- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875611 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size) [Muzukashii]]
17:32 Ichigaki: 00:28:037 (49) - hapus aja ini, ga suara 
17:33 Ichigaki: 00:28:150 (50) - trus ini diganti k soalnya rada tinggi vocalnya
17:33 Shinzo-: buat vocal sih sbnrny but ok deh hapus
17:33 Shinzo-: okeoke
17:33 Ichigaki: 00:45:744 - ga pengen ngemap snarenya?
17:34 Shinzo-: gpp di break aja deh xD
17:34 Shinzo-: di oni kaga di add ugha XD
17:35 Ichigaki: oh ya?
17:35 Ichigaki: leh
17:35 Ichigaki: oke deh
17:37 Shinzo-: tik tok... ntar futsuu/kantan ga usah xD *ato kalo bisa post wkwkwk :P* soalny dkit lagi off :O
17:37 Ichigaki: 01:27:022 (217,218,219) - bagian ini rada aneh? :u
17:37 Ichigaki: ohh ok
17:37 Ichigaki: emang smpe muzu :c
17:37 Ichigaki: aku nggak tau cara mapping fuutsu sama kantan tbh
17:37 Shinzo-: wkwkwkkw okeoke xD
17:37 Shinzo-: gpp
17:38 Shinzo-: lel
17:38 Shinzo-: 01:27:473 -  added di sini biar ga aneh
17:38 Ichigaki: sip
17:38 Ichigaki: done
17:38 Shinzo-: ok post aja >w<
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever
PM mod request W_W
Sorry for being late
[General]
Nice

[Muzukashii]
00:31:533 - add d here?

00:56:345 - remove this,add k at 00:56:120 -

00:57:924 - change to k?

01:08:526 - change to d and next to k

[Oni]
00:12:360 - no pitch change,change to d

00:32:435 - these tjree notes change to kdk?

00:48:902 - I suggest to remove this note,you may consider to add a note at 00:49:127 -

00:56:345 - remove this,I think 2-notes pattern is ok here

00:57:924 - You may choose to add finisher here(I know it's not good to add a finisher in 1/4 pattern,but it's not consistency with others)
Or you can remove the finisher at 00:57:022 -

01:22:285 - change to K?

01:33:225 - remove this?

Great map owo I'll throw a star to this :)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

iloveyou4ever wrote:

PM mod request W_W
Sorry for being late
[General]
Nice

[Muzukashii]
00:31:533 - add d here? ok

00:56:345 - remove this,add k at 00:56:120 - ok

00:57:924 - change to k? ok

01:08:526 - change to d and next to k nice

[Oni]
00:12:360 - no pitch change,change to d okk

00:32:435 - these tjree notes change to kdk? oke

00:48:902 - I suggest to remove this note,you may consider to add a note at 00:49:127 - okay

00:56:345 - remove this,I think 2-notes pattern is ok here ok

00:57:924 - You may choose to add finisher here(I know it's not good to add a finisher in 1/4 pattern,but it's not consistency with others)
Or you can remove the finisher at 00:57:022 - i choose to remove the finish

01:22:285 - change to K? okie

01:33:225 - remove this? okok

Great map owo I'll throw a star to this :) really ? >w< thanks for the star yay ^^
thank you for the mod i<3u4ever xD
-Tenshi-
383 posts
Joined March 2012
-Tenshi-
Hello~

[General]
  1. Everything looks fine.
[Kantan]
  1. OD 3 Would be better, as OD 2 is really low and will reduce the gap between this and your futsuu.
  2. Overall, you're kantan need more 4/1 breaks. From 00:15:518 to 00:42:586 for the most part. I will give you what note i would remove, but obviously you can try something else if you think that's better :3.
    00:18:225 (16) - Delete and maybe change this one 00:17:323 (15) - to k afterward?
    00:25:443 (25) - Delete this one too, because you have like 00:20:029 (17,18,19) - and 00:23:638 (22,23,24) - : a kantan player will need some rest to adjust for the next pattern.
    00:32:661 (34) - Delete and i would change 00:31:759 (33) - to k aswell.
    00:39:879 (44) - Delete for the same reason as 00:25:443 (25) -
  3. 00:48:902 (54) - Deleting this one would make a good 1/4 break.
  4. 00:55:894 (63) - Move to 00:56:120 ? This sounds off and it may confuse kantan players.
  5. 00:59:729 (67) - Remove to make a break before the kiai start?
  6. 01:06:496 (76) - Looks like you're followng the vocals, so changing to k would fit more to the song.
  7. 01:09:653 (80) - Sounds better with a don here imo.
  8. 01:24:090 (98) - k for the same reason as above, and would make the reverse parttern of 01:07:849 (78,79,80,81) - ( If you applied to the previous suggestion :3 ).
[Futsuu]
  1. Nothing to say in this diff but 01:25:894 (149,150,151) - remove finishers, this sounds really bad to me and there's nothing that justify it imo.
  2. 01:28:375 (155) - move it here 01:28:601 and change it to k, it follow more the vocals and it's better imo. ( You can add a d here 01:28:826 too, that sounds cool too).
[Muzukashii]
  1. OD 4 or 5, but 4,5 is kinda meh in taiko.
  2. 00:15:067 (18) - I feel like i would remove this one, making a quick little break before the next part of the map start :3.
  3. 00:41:909 (83) - Add a k here? Follow nicely the vocals and could act like a little build-up for the upcoming part :3.
  4. 00:48:676 (98,99) - move it one 1/2 tick on the left, to follow the vocals.
  5. 01:25:894 (216,217,218) - Same as futsuu, sounds really weird.
  6. 01:34:917 (1) - Why did you add a spinner here if there's not in previous diffs? Remove it are make a spinner in kantan and futsuu too :3.
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:586 (41,42,43,44) - Make it 1/4 stream instead, 1/6 doesn't fit the map, as it's kinda slow-paced map. just make it ddk :3.
  2. 01:25:894 (296,298,300) - Same as futsuu and muzu.
  3. 01:34:917 (1) - Same suggestion for the spinner as muzu.
Good luck for ranking~
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hello~

[General]
  1. Everything looks fine.
[Kantan]
  1. OD 3 Would be better, as OD 2 is really low and will reduce the gap between this and your futsuu.
  2. Overall, you're kantan need more 4/1 breaks. From 00:15:518 to 00:42:586 for the most part. I will give you what note i would remove, but obviously you can try something else if you think that's better :3.
    00:18:225 (16) - Delete and maybe change this one 00:17:323 (15) - to k afterward?
    00:25:443 (25) - Delete this one too, because you have like 00:20:029 (17,18,19) - and 00:23:638 (22,23,24) - : a kantan player will need some rest to adjust for the next pattern.
    00:32:661 (34) - Delete and i would change 00:31:759 (33) - to k aswell.
    00:39:879 (44) - Delete for the same reason as 00:25:443 (25) -
  3. 00:48:902 (54) - Deleting this one would make a good 1/4 break. i don't think so xD
  4. 00:55:894 (63) - Move to 00:56:120 ? This sounds off and it may confuse kantan players.
  5. 00:59:729 (67) - Remove to make a break before the kiai start?
  6. 01:06:496 (76) - Looks like you're followng the vocals, so changing to k would fit more to the song.
  7. 01:09:653 (80) - Sounds better with a don here imo.
  8. 01:24:090 (98) - k for the same reason as above, and would make the reverse parttern of 01:07:849 (78,79,80,81) - ( If you applied to the previous suggestion :3 ).
[Futsuu]
  1. Nothing to say in this diff but 01:25:894 (149,150,151) - remove finishers, this sounds really bad to me and there's nothing that justify it imo.
  2. 01:28:375 (155) - move it here 01:28:601 and change it to k, it follow more the vocals and it's better imo. ( You can add a d here 01:28:826 too, that sounds cool too).
[Muzukashii]
  1. OD 4 or 5, but 4,5 is kinda meh in taiko.
  2. 00:15:067 (18) - I feel like i would remove this one, making a quick little break before the next part of the map start :3.
  3. 00:41:909 (83) - Add a k here? Follow nicely the vocals and could act like a little build-up for the upcoming part :3.
  4. 00:48:676 (98,99) - move it one 1/2 tick on the left, to follow the vocals.
  5. 01:25:894 (216,217,218) - Same as futsuu, sounds really weird.
  6. 01:34:917 (1) - Why did you add a spinner here if there's not in previous diffs? Remove it are make a spinner in kantan and futsuu too :3. should i really need to have spinner on all diff ? o.o
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:586 (41,42,43,44) - Make it 1/4 stream instead, 1/6 doesn't fit the map, as it's kinda slow-paced map. just make it ddk :3. i liked the 1/6
  2. 01:25:894 (296,298,300) - Same as futsuu and muzu. it really fit to the song imo, but fixed on futsuu and muzu
  3. 01:34:917 (1) - Same suggestion for the spinner as muzu. same
Good luck for ranking~
no reply means yes <3
thanks for the mod >w<
Nanatsu
1,153 posts
Joined June 2013
Nanatsu
so many finishers on intro and overall x.x you can reduce some parts since it's calm song


00:07:285 - remember 1/4 ddd or kkk is acceptable pattern for muzu diff. i don't think it's a problem to add.

00:13:037 - add d

00:13:488 - add k ( accept only 1 way can be better too for playability )

00:17:097 - add k

00:20:029 - 00:20:932 - 1/2 ddkdk

00:24:315 - add d

00:25:217 (41) - change to k

00:34:465 - 00:35:368 - ddkdk too

00:38:751 - add d

00:39:653 (78) - change to k

00:42:360 - add ( reference : kdk )

00:56:571 (121) - you should move to 00:56:458 - here to follow vocal. and for consistency too?

01:07:285 (157) - i can see you focused on vocal mapping so move it to 01:07:511 - would be better to emphasize

01:11:232 - 01:12:360 - 1/2 dkdkkd

01:17:548 (192,193) - swap color. kdkdkdkdk isnt fun to play tbh lol

01:21:721 (205) - same suggestion. but you should change color too

01:26:120 - add

01:28:375 - delete and 01:28:601 - 01:29:503 - ddkkd

01:34:691 - this isn't necessary but delete it will be a bit better to emphasize spinner
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Nanatsu wrote:

so many finishers on intro and overall x.x you can reduce some parts since it's calm song


00:07:285 - remember 1/4 ddd or kkk is acceptable pattern for muzu diff. i don't think it's a problem to add.

00:13:037 - add d

00:13:488 - add k ( accept only 1 way can be better too for playability )

00:17:097 - add k

00:20:029 - 00:20:932 - 1/2 ddkdk no for the gap between futsuu and oni

00:24:315 - add d

00:25:217 (41) - change to k

00:34:465 - 00:35:368 - ddkdk too same

00:38:751 - add d

00:39:653 (78) - change to k

00:42:360 - add ( reference : kdk )

00:56:571 (121) - you should move to 00:56:458 - here to follow vocal. and for consistency too? they said it's confusing but, ok then

01:07:285 (157) - i can see you focused on vocal mapping so move it to 01:07:511 - would be better to emphasize

01:11:232 - 01:12:360 - 1/2 dkdkkd

01:17:548 (192,193) - swap color. kdkdkdkdk isnt fun to play tbh lol

01:21:721 (205) - same suggestion. but you should change color too

01:26:120 - add

01:28:375 - delete and 01:28:601 - 01:29:503 - ddkkd

01:34:691 - this isn't necessary but delete it will be a bit better to emphasize spinner no sorry hehe xD
thanks for the mod <3 >w<)~
Skeuddy
233 posts
Joined May 2012
Skeuddy
Hey

Muzukashii
  1. 00:03:112 - Some note
  2. 00:10:330 - ^
  3. 00:12:699 - ^
  4. 01:08:413 - ^ (d)
  5. 01:13:939 (180) - Delete
  6. 00:55:894 - kd d dk k dk k dk
Oni
  1. 00:11:684 (38) - k
  2. 00:15:518 (55) - ^
  3. 00:29:052 (94) - ^
  4. 00:13:037 (45,46) - Swap
  5. 00:49:353 (155,156) - ^
  6. 00:56:571 (175,176,177,178,179) - ddd k k
  7. 01:06:270 (215) - Delete
  8. 01:29:503 (314) - d
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Skeuddy wrote:

Hey

Muzukashii
  1. 00:03:112 - Some note re-arranged instead
  2. 00:10:330 - ^
  3. 00:12:699 - ^ will re-consider
  4. 01:08:413 - ^ (d) no
  5. 01:13:939 (180) - Delete why ? D:
  6. 00:55:894 - kd d dk k dk k dk
Oni
  1. 00:11:684 (38) - k
  2. 00:15:518 (55) - ^ no
  3. 00:29:052 (94) - ^ ^
  4. 00:13:037 (45,46) - Swap
  5. 00:49:353 (155,156) - ^
  6. 00:56:571 (175,176,177,178,179) - ddd k k noo
  7. 01:06:270 (215) - Delete
  8. 01:29:503 (314) - d

yay thanks for mod >w<
no reply means yes <3
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
Quick lookmod as requested.
[]

[Kantan]
00:38:977 (41) - k better
00:47:999 (50) - D
01:35:142 - 01:36:721 - add a spinner?

Comment: Solid Difficulties, really nice <3

[Futsuu]
00:13:037 (45,46) - Swap
00:49:353 (155,156) - ^
00:43:488 (61) - d
00:52:059 - add d?
01:08:751 (113) - k

Comment: nice!

[Muzukashii]
00:03:112 - Some note
00:10:330 - ^
00:12:699 - ^

Comment: No comment =w=, great
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Prophecy wrote:

Quick lookmod as requested.
[]

[Kantan]
00:38:977 (41) - k better
00:47:999 (50) - D i don't think so hehe xD
01:35:142 - 01:36:721 - add a spinner? yeah but i just want to make diffrences with the ranked one

Comment: Solid Difficulties, really nice <3 thanks :D

[Futsuu]
00:13:037 (45,46) - Swap
00:49:353 (155,156) - ^ i can't apply those^ since your timing maybe is wrong ?
00:43:488 (61) - d
00:52:059 - add d? maybe a little break hehe xD
01:08:751 (113) - k

Comment: nice!

[Muzukashii]
00:03:112 - Some note
00:10:330 - ^
00:12:699 - ^

Comment: No comment =w=, great

no reply means applied <3
thanks for the mod yayy >w<
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy

Shinzo- wrote:

maybe a little break hehe xD
hehe :3
Volta
1,622 posts
Joined March 2014
Volta
halo.

[General]
01:00:405 - preview pointnya lebih baik disini, biar langsung kedengeran chorusnya.
01:34:917 (1) - kenapa di muzu ama oni ada spinner tapi di kantan ama futsuu engga?

[Kantan]
00:09:202 - ganti jadi d? agak monoton kalo k semua. pitchnya juga relatif lebih rendah dibanding note sebelumnya.
00:23:638 (22,23,24) - karena sebelumnya ddd, disini agak membosankan kalo pake pattern yang sama. coba ganti jadi ddk atau kkd

00:42:135 - rasanya gak terlalu dibutuhin. delete?

00:47:999 - ganti jadi k, karena nadanya meninggi lebih baik ganti warna disini
00:50:706 - k, biar lebih simpel?
00:55:217 - k
00:58:826 - kenapa disini gak dikasih finisher?

01:11:909 - pindah ke 01:10:105 - , lebih baik konsisten dengan 01:02:887 -
01:17:323 - ganti jadi k, jadi nada rendah di 01:17:774 - lbih kerasa
01:26:345 - pindah ke 01:24:541 - , terus 01:24:992 (95,96) - swap ini

[Futsuu]
00:08:300 - , 00:09:202 - , 00:10:105 - , 00:11:007 - hmm rasanya finishernya gak perlu deh. gak ada yang perlu ditekankan. di kantan juga gak pake. if applied finisher di muzu dan oni dihapus juga biar lebih konsisten

00:18:676 - pindah ke 00:17:774 - ? lebih menegaskan vokalnya
00:20:481 (29) - ganti jadi k dan pindah ke 00:21:383 -

00:29:052 - kalo finishernya diilangin 00:29:954 - bisa terasa lebih kuat

00:31:308 - pindah ke 00:32:210 - biar konsisten ama mod sebelumnya
00:34:917 - pindah ke 00:35:819 - trus bikin kkd

00:47:548 - delete. di bagian ini spreadnya terlalu deket sama muzu dan terlalu jauh sama kantan
00:47:999 (68,69,70) - k-kk?
00:49:578 - delete
00:52:962 - delete

01:05:142 - ganti jadi d, soalnya nadanya turun
01:09:879 - mungkin bisa tambah d
01:13:037 - d
01:24:315 - mungkin bisa tambah k

01:31:759 - delete buat ngasi break


good luck (¦3[▓▓]
IControl
473 posts
Joined January 2013
IControl
iControl's Mod

Kantan
00:17:323 (15) - d sounds softer

00:18:225 - add d? up 2 you

00:19:127 (17) - k Higher than previous notes

00:20:481 (19) - remove The piano sounds longer here. Mapping the the vocals here don't fit kantan imo


00:21:834 (20) - d or remove up 2 you again

00:22:736 (21) - k
00:24:090 (23) - k k piano sounds higher in these parts

00:25:443 - add d?

00:29:277 - add k This k is strong enough for it not to be ignored even if its kantan

00:32:661 - same suggestions as before for this part

01:29:503 (102) - k Vocals sound high enough

fustuu
Overall same suggestions as kantan

00:36:044 - add k maybe look for parts like so fustuu and kantan can be a bit more diffrent

Nice song Good luck :) !
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Volta wrote:

halo.

[General]
01:00:405 - preview pointnya lebih baik disini, biar langsung kedengeran chorusnya.
01:34:917 (1) - kenapa di muzu ama oni ada spinner tapi di kantan ama futsuu engga?

[Kantan]
00:09:202 - ganti jadi d? agak monoton kalo k semua. pitchnya juga relatif lebih rendah dibanding note sebelumnya.
00:23:638 (22,23,24) - karena sebelumnya ddd, disini agak membosankan kalo pake pattern yang sama. coba ganti jadi ddk atau kkd

00:42:135 - rasanya gak terlalu dibutuhin. delete?

00:47:999 - ganti jadi k, karena nadanya meninggi lebih baik ganti warna disini
00:50:706 - k, biar lebih simpel?
00:55:217 - k
00:58:826 - kenapa disini gak dikasih finisher?

01:11:909 - pindah ke 01:10:105 - , lebih baik konsisten dengan 01:02:887 -
01:17:323 - ganti jadi k, jadi nada rendah di 01:17:774 - lbih kerasa gaa ah utk yg 3 itu, jadiny sama kek yg versi ranked nanti
01:26:345 - pindah ke 01:24:541 - , terus 01:24:992 (95,96) - swap ini

[Futsuu]
00:08:300 - , 00:09:202 - , 00:10:105 - , 00:11:007 - hmm rasanya finishernya gak perlu deh. gak ada yang perlu ditekankan. di kantan juga gak pake. if applied finisher di muzu dan oni dihapus juga biar lebih konsisten

00:18:676 - pindah ke 00:17:774 - ? lebih menegaskan vokalnya
00:20:481 (29) - ganti jadi k dan pindah ke 00:21:383 -

00:29:052 - kalo finishernya diilangin 00:29:954 - bisa terasa lebih kuat

00:31:308 - pindah ke 00:32:210 - biar konsisten ama mod sebelumnya
00:34:917 - pindah ke 00:35:819 - trus bikin kkd

00:47:548 - delete. di bagian ini spreadnya terlalu deket sama muzu dan terlalu jauh sama kantan
00:47:999 (68,69,70) - k-kk?
00:49:578 - delete
00:52:962 - delete

01:05:142 - ganti jadi d, soalnya nadanya turun
01:09:879 - mungkin bisa tambah d
01:13:037 - d
01:24:315 - mungkin bisa tambah k

01:31:759 - delete buat ngasi break


good luck (¦3[▓▓]
No reply means ye <3 thanks for mod qq >w<)~

IControl wrote:

iControl's Mod

Kantan
00:17:323 (15) - d sounds softer

00:18:225 - add d? up 2 you

00:19:127 (17) - k Higher than previous notes

00:20:481 (19) - remove The piano sounds longer here. Mapping the the vocals here don't fit kantan imo


00:21:834 (20) - d or remove up 2 you again

00:22:736 (21) - k
00:24:090 (23) - k k piano sounds higher in these parts

00:25:443 - add d?

00:29:277 - add k This k is strong enough for it not to be ignored even if its kantan

00:32:661 - same suggestions as before for this part

01:29:503 (102) - k Vocals sound high enough

fustuu
Overall same suggestions as kantan

00:36:044 - add k maybe look for parts like so fustuu and kantan can be a bit more diffrent

Nice song Good luck :) !
some are accept and some are reject, thanks for mod :D
Zetera
Medal Hunter
1,019 posts
Joined November 2010
Zetera
Hi, you requested a mod. This is a short song and it only has low diffs, so there won't be much to point out I'm afraid.

[Kantan]

|00:53:413 (56,57) - I am not confident enough to claim that this kind of rhythm is okay in a Kantan, it might simply be too confusing in comparison to other patterns. A k at 00:54:315 - might do a good job.
|01:15:067 (81,82,83,84) - You might want to make that consistent to 01:00:631 (63,64,65,66) - , but you're not obliged to. But if you do decide to change it, I suggest some variation at 01:19:578 (87,88,89,90) - (You might as well just swap the patterns.)

[Futsuu]

|01:09:879 - I'd make this a k, out of the same reason for which we use ddk and not dkk. With ddk, you end the pattern with one distinct circle, which is ultimately more effective.
|01:15:518 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - ddk k kkk d? I believe it fits better to the music than the current pattern due to the vocals.

[Muzukashii]

|00:10:105 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to make this consistent to 00:02:887 (5,6,7) - , then use dkkdk. With dkkdk, your pattern is consistent and variable at the same time (comparing dkk d with dkkdk shows that ddk is the same but the last circle is different)
|00:27:699 - Put a k here if you want to make this consistent to00:42:135 - , but only do so if you did not follow the vocals in the second pattern.

[Oni]

|01:07:172 (217,218,219) - I suggest you swap colours on this one to emphasize the flute.
|01:24:090 - Turn this into a k for consistency with 01:16:871 - , because the music doesn't change.
|01:38:300 - You might want to extend the spinner up to where the last sound stops to make it slightly more challenging.

Welp, as I said, not much to be pointed out. Good luck!
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Zetera wrote:

Hi, you requested a mod. This is a short song and it only has low diffs, so there won't be much to point out I'm afraid.

[Kantan]

|00:53:413 (56,57) - I am not confident enough to claim that this kind of rhythm is okay in a Kantan, it might simply be too confusing in comparison to other patterns. A k at 00:54:315 - might do a good job.
|01:15:067 (81,82,83,84) - You might want to make that consistent to 01:00:631 (63,64,65,66) - , but you're not obliged to. But if you do decide to change it, I suggest some variation at 01:19:578 (87,88,89,90) - (You might as well just swap the patterns.)

[Futsuu]

|01:09:879 - I'd make this a k, out of the same reason for which we use ddk and not dkk. With ddk, you end the pattern with one distinct circle, which is ultimately more effective.
|01:15:518 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - ddk k kkk d? I believe it fits better to the music than the current pattern due to the vocals.

[Muzukashii]

|00:10:105 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to make this consistent to 00:02:887 (5,6,7) - , then use dkkdk. With dkkdk, your pattern is consistent and variable at the same time (comparing dkk d with dkkdk shows that ddk is the same but the last circle is different)
|00:27:699 - Put a k here if you want to make this consistent to00:42:135 - , but only do so if you did not follow the vocals in the second pattern.

[Oni]

|01:07:172 (217,218,219) - I suggest you swap colours on this one to emphasize the flute.
|01:24:090 - Turn this into a k for consistency with 01:16:871 - , because the music doesn't change.
|01:38:300 - You might want to extend the spinner up to where the last sound stops to make it slightly more challenging.

Welp, as I said, not much to be pointed out. Good luck!
ok all applied except on kantan xD
thanks for mod >w<)~

UPDATED WITH NEW BG
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,532 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Kantan

00:16:420 (14) - move to 00:12:811 instead, that section is much brighter in sound, also leaves some resonance for 00:15:518 (13)
00:29:052 (29) - why have finish on this one?
00:53:413 (56,57) - being the only one with 3/2 beat rhythm here, it's quite isolated in the whole difficulty
01:17:323 (84) - k?
01:26:796 (97) - dunno about this one, it's much lower in pitch than the previous 2, I would think it would change as well

Futsuu

00:22:736 (32,36) - k? Pitch is higher
00:51:608 (75) - k? same pitch as 00:51:157 (74)
01:25:894 (148) - why finish here? Doesn't seem that much different from the other notes around it

Muzukashii

00:17:999 (27,28) - kd instead? It sounds like it's going down in tone
00:21:608 (36,37) - kk? They sound similar
00:25:217 (45,46) - ^
00:39:653 (82,83) - ^
00:47:999 (103) - remove the finish, it's quite additional to the music here
00:53:413 (117,121) - doesn't sound more impactful than the music around it tbh, I do not really see the need for the finishes
01:13:262 (181) - why finish?
01:16:420 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - dkddkkd? :
SPOILER
01:22:285 (211) - don't you usually put a finish here? You did that at 01:07:849 (163)
01:13:262 (181) - why finish? That's just like 01:13:262 (181) but there is nothing really there for using the finish. For most part, you used it to start the phrases, but the start was 01:11:458 (175) - which you did not do so anyway
01:16:420 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - same as 01:16:420 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196)
01:22:285 (211) - no finish? You did that at 01:07:849 (163)
01:25:894 (225) - no finish? You used to finish on every start of new phrase, makes it confusing now as to what exactly the finishes are trying to be following, if it happens randomly, like 01:26:796 (228) - why finish
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
ok thanks for mod neonat >w<
all applied :D
Skylish
1,069 posts
Joined June 2013
Skylish
If you think that you need a proper mod from me, you may contact me again! :) You can decide whether I deserve kds.

sth you asked from me but you afk atm
18:51 Shinzo-: hi
18:51 Skylish: hi, what can I help you?
18:52 Shinzo-: can i req a mod ?
18:53 Skylish: currently not, but it may depends on the genre....
18:53 Shinzo-: hue
18:53 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/875610 u's - Love wing bell (TV Size)]
18:54 Skylish: welp, you've got lots of mod already.
18:55 Skylish: I will take a fast look now.
18:55 Skylish: ** this song seems to be modded already by Nardo. XP
18:56 Skylish: you may check this first: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248187
18:56 Skylish: Nardo's ver.
18:59 Skylish: I think I cannot give any mod right now (you can check my queue for the reason as you can get to me). Here's some recommendation instead: (are you still here?)
19:01 Skylish: nvm, I will savelog and post my recommendation on the thread, in case you are afk.
19:01 Skylish: For Oni, I think it lacks notes density and there are too many Finishes
19:02 Skylish: but it is understandable due to the music... you can add notes density in Kiai because the music is hyperer.
19:06 Skylish: in Muzu, I see that there is problem of consistencies between Muzu and Oni. You have to fix them well. Some of the notes in Muzu are mis-matched with the pitches.
19:07 Skylish: A major problem aroused: you may abuse Finish, this song is not that rhythmic imo, so I advise you to reduce the use of Finish.
19:10 Skylish: Kantan is quite well.
19:11 Skylish: Here's another issue about the preview pt, I think 01:00:631 - is a better option
19:12 Skylish: the difficulty spread between Muzu and Oni is not enough, probably you did not make Oni hard enough.
19:12 Skylish: I think that's it, if you still want to have a mod from me, then contact me again in forum via PM / in-game.
KamizonoShinobu
722 posts
Joined October 2011
KamizonoShinobu
Hi , a bit late M4M

General
Oni seems to rip the spread... making it to 3* would be better
Why not use japanese for source name?
Skip kantan, perfect condition already
futsuu
00:26:345 (37) - compare to prev note, low pitch, d plz
00:52:285 (76) - compare to next note, high pitch, k plz
01:18:676 (132,133) - 01:19:578 (134,135) - both ctrl + G
this sound better for me
01:26:796 (150) - d , relatively low pitch
spinner should end at the end of sound effect

muzu
00:07:398 (18) - prefer d
00:26:120 (48) - prefer k
00:40:556 (85) - ^
00:49:353 (106,108) - ctrl + G , pitch flow from low to high
01:10:330 (172,173) - ctrl + G
01:24:090 (217,218,219,220,221) - - kkdkd , delete that 1/4 3plet , don't see a point putting notes there
better than the current one (for me)
01:34:014 (252,253,254,255) - what are these notes doing...I think they are off-track. kkk d _ is better

Oni
As said in general box, this oni should be harder to maintain spread. Or make muzu easier to fix spread
HP too low, increase to 6~7 plz
osu file format v14

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Title:Love wing bell (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Love wing bell（TVサイズ）
Artist:u's
ArtistUnicode:μ's
Creator:Chocola_2287
Version:Oni(ModTest)
Source:Love Live! School idol project
Tags:ラブライブ！muse LL lovelive Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjo Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空
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I made an another oni for this , u can make reference to it
GL on ranking this map!
Shinzo-
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Topic Starter
Shinzo-
ok thanks for mod chocola xD ye i applied some =w=)b
Lost The Lights
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Lost The Lights
Hi, Sorry again for the late m4m ;w;

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion

[Kantan]
  1. Since the music is basically starting here 00:06:496 - it wouldn't hurt to add a note here 00:07:398 - It has a more notable sound than from 00:01:082 - to 00:06:496 -
  2. 00:25:443 - This break in special feels weird imo. Maybe add a note here?
  3. 00:29:052 - Would suggest to change this note to d, it sounds lower than 00:28:601 -
  4. 00:39:879 - Same as before, add a note here since the break feels a little bit weird.
  5. 00:55:894 - This note would sound much better at 00:56:120 -
  6. Since it's kiai time, I would suggest you to add a note here 01:14:616 - so the break isn't that long. (It also feels nice imo)
  7. 01:28:601 - I don't think you should ignore adding a note here, idk, I think the music it's calling for it.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:345 (37,38) - I would ctrl+g these notes, they sound much better that way.
  2. 00:29:277 - It's futsuu, not kantan. Add a note here.
  3. 00:34:465 - Change to k for consistency with 00:20:029 -
  4. 00:39:879 (56,57) - Same as before, ctrl+g these notes.
  5. 00:55:894 - As kantan, I think this note would sound much better here 00:56:120 - , also remove the finisher and change it to k? There's nothing strong to put a finisher there. Also change 00:56:571 - to d.
  6. 01:14:616 - Again, not a kantan, no reason to miss this right?
  7. 01:30:180 - I highly recommend to move this note to 01:31:082 -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:706 - Highly suggest to add a note here, specially a k.
  2. 00:23:864 - Same as before, but use dkkddk for this pattern starting from 00:23:413 - .
  3. 00:58:262 - 00:58:601 - 00:58:826 - k d k respectively, they sound way better.
  4. 01:24:090 - Suddenly making this pattern kdkdk feels weird, Change starting from this point to kkddk.
  5. 01:25:217 - This triplet isn't really strong in the music, so I recommend deleting it and instead add a k here 01:25:668 - for vocals (Since that's pretty much what you're following here)
[Oni]
  1. 00:07:285 - k please, kkd sounds way more better.
  2. 00:12:586 - nopenopenopenopenope. There is absolutely no need of a 1/6 here. make it a normal ddk please.
  3. 00:14:390 - If you dont want to make it kkd you can make it dkd, they both fit more than kdd.
  4. 00:31:308 - k k d sounds better as vocals are going up then down.
  5. 00:38:751 - k, this sounds higher than 00:38:977 -
  6. 00:41:458 - Same pattern I suggested you in Muzu, dkkddk.
  7. 00:57:022 (177,178) - Both sound better as k, so k K.
  8. 01:14:841 - Sounds way better as ddk.
That's everything I got. I hope this mod helps!
Shinzo-
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Shinzo-
Thanks for mod xD
Sorry can't reply... x..x
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