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JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size) [Osu|CatchTheBeat]
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idkCryptic wrote:
is it finally happening??
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General
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- :3
Could you provide a source, please?It's good
- OD 2/3/5/7/8 for the standard diffs? Are you sure these shouldn't be more linear?
- Maybe AR 8.3 -> 8.5 on the highest diff for more of a difference from the previous one (made it better imo)
- :D
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Rockezek's Easy
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- 00:01:657 (1,2) - seems imperfect to me, I moved the middle point on 00:03:486 (2) - to the right by 1 tiny grid =w=
- 00:05:315 (1,2) - imperfect blanket
- 00:55:620 (1) - Maybe you could extend this spinner out until 00:58:821 - ? It sounds more proper to end it here.
- 01:06:596 (4,5,1) - for a better appearance, maybe you can try doing something like this and tilting (1) up so the flow is less linear and seems more "curved"?
- 01:08:425 (2,3) - Flow here seems to go backwards. Why not tilt the slider like this so it overlaps with the slidertail at (1)?
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Mk's Normal
General
- 00:03:486 (1) - Curve this to the right instead for a more natural look out of 00:03:257 (4) - ?
- 00:40:528 (2) - something like this might be better here, since it uses the previous slider to show the direction of the next note.
- 00:41:900 (1,1) - I don't know the distances for standard between spinner and object, but isn't this a bit close? Consider giving some more room between these two for reaction.
- 01:25:803 (1) - Same as the first point, except maybe you can curve it upwards instead :3
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Hard
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- 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - Is there a reason these are all different distances from each other? Make them consistent since they don't differ really
- 00:09:888 (3) - tilt this a bit more to the right for better flow out of 00:09:431 (2) - and into 00:10:803 (1) - ?
- 00:54:019 (2) - maybe you want to move this to the right and blanket it with 00:54:477 (1) - ??
- 01:23:974 (1,2) - blanket? O:
- 01:25:803 (1,2) - also imperfect;w;;
- 01:29:233 (6,1) - I feel like you can give this some more distance since it has the finish and it should have more emphasis than the previous 3 notes.
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Insane
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- 00:00:971 (1,2,3) - These seem really compressed, maybe you should increase the distance here a bit
- 00:04:400 (5,6,1) - These 1/1 stacks are a bit confusing due to the low AR, maybe you want to space them out so they dont directly overlap
- 00:10:574 - As the diff below the "Extra" I think you could really include a note here :3
[ Voli's Special Blend ]
General
- 00:04:858 (4,1) - This distance seems pretty large even with the 1/1 spacing between them. I'd really lower this a bit.
- 00:17:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This flow feels really awkward considering the spacing is low and the flow is really linear, which makes it feel a bit choppy. Pardon my placements since I'm not a standard mapper, just a standard player, but something along a more triangular style like this would be cool to see.
- 00:47:160 (3,1) - Maybe you can blanket these two?
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Jusen's Rain
General
- 00:04:858 (5) - Tilting this a bit more to the left would really help, since the sliderend is really easy to miss for a player that wants to move to 00:05:315 (1) - .
- 00:05:315 (1,2) - maybe adjusting to something like this would make less of a shallow pattern?
- 00:10:803 (1) - Try x:376 for this. In the previous patterns, you've had to dash to catch them, but for this one, you don't, so its best to keep the consistency here.
- 00:15:605 (6) - Try moving this to x:200 for a less choppy spacing between them all
- 00:16:291 (1,2,3) - These notes are really quite compact, which makes them kind of awkward to play. Spacing them out a bit would really help here.
- 00:18:120 (1) - This note shouldn't be against the wall as per the new ranking criteria (it's a guideline but this hdash is uncomfortable to play because the catcher hits the wall). Please adjust the hdash and move 00:18:120 (1) - to x:496.
- 00:18:120 (1,2) - don't stack notes like this please :< move 00:18:806 (2) - to x:448
- 00:21:550 (3,4) - Should have an hdash in between them in order to have consistency with the previous diffs
- 00:27:952 (4,1) - I really don't like how these sliders are nearly vertical, it really breaks the flow and makes the patterns play weird, try making them more or even fully horizontal, please!
- 00:44:873 (2,1) - Should really be an hdash
- 00:53:333 (3,4) - no stacks please flowbreakers aaaaaaaaa try 00:53:791 (4) - to x:496 and 00:54:019 (5,6) - to x:296.
- 00:59:507 (1) - x:32 for a consistent spacing between this and (2)
- 01:10:025 (2,3) - hdash here?
- 01:16:199 (6,1) - way way way too high distance here, either reduce or just make it a hyper
- 01:25:117 (1,2) - also high distance, hyper it?
I'm not 100% confident in the quality of the CTB diff currently, maybe when I recheck some things will change, but the mapper should try to go through and adjust some uncomfortable distances and some hyperdash inconsistencies.
call me back I guess and we'll see what we can do.
thank you!Ascendance wrote:
[] General
- 00:04:858 (4,1) - This distance seems pretty large even with the 1/1 spacing between them. I'd really lower this a bit. its a new combo jump, and its honestly way easier to play than in looks in the editor because of the large pause in between the notes. I could change this, but doing that would require entire restructure of the pattern around it too, since its a really structure based map. I haven't seen it cause playability issues yet, so keeping this for now
- 00:17:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This flow feels really awkward considering the spacing is low and the flow is really linear, which makes it feel a bit choppy. Pardon my placements since I'm not a standard mapper, just a standard player, but something along a more triangular style like this would be cool to see. but all the note combos in that section have ''linear'' patterns though D: suddenly adding a triangular jump pattern would really mess with the overall spacing and mapping style of that section
- 00:47:160 (3,1) - Maybe you can blanket these two?
also made some minor changes to some other patterns throughout the map
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Thanks for the mod~Ascendance wrote:
General
- 01:06:596 (4,5,1) - for a better appearance, maybe you can try doing something like this and tilting (1) up so the flow is less linear and seems more "curved"? I don't see any problem with appearance, and personally, I like it how it is~
- 01:08:425 (2,3) - Flow here seems to go backwards. Why not tilt the slider like this so it overlaps with the slidertail at (1)? Is just a commonly used pattern, there's no flow going backwards (are you thinking of that because of the repeat in the slider?). I like better how my pattern flows and sorry, but I totally disagree with your suggestion.
No changes from me~
thanks both for explaining why you declined them, im not a standard modder so sorry if my suggestions seemed weird, im trying to improve <:
Mod Reply
General
Thanks for the mod
- 00:04:858 (5) - Tilting this a bit more to the left would really help, since the sliderend is really easy to miss for a player that wants to move to 00:05:315 (1) - . I prrefer to keep my current patern because the jump to the next slider warrants.
- 00:05:315 (1,2) - maybe adjusting to something like this would make less of a shallow pattern? I like your pattern, so, i'll change.
- 00:10:803 (1) - Try x:376 for this. In the previous patterns, you've had to dash to catch them, but for this one, you don't, so its best to keep the consistency here. Moved.
- 00:15:605 (6) - Try moving this to x:200 for a less choppy spacing between them all. Moved too.
- 00:16:291 (1,2,3) - These notes are really quite compact, which makes them kind of awkward to play. Spacing them out a bit would really help here. Not really need space, because it is not so strange to me, but I will try to increase
- 00:18:120 (1) - This note shouldn't be against the wall as per the new ranking criteria (it's a guideline but this hdash is uncomfortable to play because the catcher hits the wall). Please adjust the hdash and move 00:18:120 (1) - to x:496. I use Ctrl + H to the slider, but you tell me to move the same element, perhaps it was a mistake and want yours to move the circle.
- 00:18:120 (1,2) - don't stack notes like this please :< move 00:18:806 (2) - to x:448 I do not understand what you mean, but, i made another pattern ;w ;.
- 00:21:550 (3,4) - Should have an hdash in between them in order to have consistency with the previous diffs. I'll try to do it o:.
- 00:27:952 (4,1) - I really don't like how these sliders are nearly vertical, it really breaks the flow and makes the patterns play weird, try making them more or even fully horizontal, please! Maybe you do not like it, but instead to me if, therefore I will keep, and I will not break the flow, because it creates an effect.
- 00:44:873 (2,1) - Should really be an hdash I prefer to keep the dash.
- 00:53:333 (3,4) - no stacks please flowbreakers aaaaaaaaa try 00:53:791 (4) - to x:496 and 00:54:019 (5,6) - to x:296. Do it.
- 00:59:507 (1) - x:32 for a consistent spacing between this and (2) ^.
- 01:10:025 (2,3) - hdash here? Maybe.
- 01:16:199 (6,1) - way way way too high distance here, either reduce or just make it a hyper Done.
- 01:25:117 (1,2) - also high distance, hyper it?Do it.
Update
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Topic Starter
It's my turn I guess. /w\ Will post the reply and update all the things tomorrow!
Topic Starter
Thank you very much for modding! Updated!>w<Ascendance wrote:
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Spread/Other
- OD 2/3/5/7/8 for the standard diffs? Are you sure these shouldn't be more linear? Totally agree with this! Managed to make it a bit more "linear" despite the jump from the Normal to Hard is still quite big. xD
- Maybe AR 8.3 -> 8.5 on the highest diff for more of a difference from the previous one (made it better imo) I was talking to Voli about this and he said the AR was even higher at the beginning of mapping the difficulty, but he lowered it to 8.3 since he does believe in this way the players will approach nicely the jumps he managed over it.
[] General
- 00:01:657 (1,2) - seems imperfect to me, I moved the middle point on 00:03:486 (2) - to the right by 1 tiny grid =w= My mom isn't proud of my blankets. ;w;
- 00:05:315 (1,2) - imperfect blanket OHHH! HOW DARE YOU!!! *slaps himself*
- 00:55:620 (1) - Maybe you could extend this spinner out until 00:58:821 - ? It sounds more proper to end it here.I see what you mean here, but it actually ends where the music stops. that's why I didn't want to extend it until that spot since it would mislead the actual purpose of placing a spinner there.
- 01:06:596 (4,5,1) - for a better appearance, maybe you can try doing something like this and tilting (1) up so the flow is less linear and seems more "curved"?
- 01:08:425 (2,3) - Flow here seems to go backwards. Why not tilt the slider like this so it overlaps with the slidertail at (1)? I actually agree with you here, but since it's ezek's part I'll leave it up to him. xdxd
[] General
- 00:03:486 (1) - Curve this to the right instead for a more natural look out of 00:03:257 (4) - ? That would work but in fact, the transition is way more intuitive if the direction of the previous slider is mirrored to the actual slider in matter. So in this way, the cursor and they way players approach this pattern becomes intuitive and easy to read.
- 00:40:528 (2) - something like this might be better here, since it uses the previous slider to show the direction of the next note. Sorry, MkGuh, you're not my wife anymore. xdxd
- 00:41:900 (1,1) - I don't know the distances for standard between spinner and object, but isn't this a bit close? Consider giving some more room between these two for reaction. Oh! In this case is fine since the length and the transition is readable for players. Hence, the spinner is predictable.
- 01:25:803 (1) - Same as the first point, except maybe you can curve it upwards instead :3 I would rather don't touch this slider since MkGuh did it with a lot of effort. D: Otherwise he'll kill me. ;w; *runs*
[] General
- 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - Is there a reason these are all different distances from each other? Make them consistent since they don't differ really. Fixed! But tried instead a blanket to give variation to the segment in general.
- 00:09:888 (3) - tilt this a bit more to the right for better flow out of 00:09:431 (2) - and into 00:10:803 (1) - ? YUSSS! FIXED!
- 00:54:019 (2) - maybe you want to move this to the right and blanket it with 00:54:477 (1) - ?? A blanklet with those never was my intention to do here since the motion would be killed awkwardly. ;w;
- 01:23:974 (1,2) - blanket? O: OMG CALLING THE POLICE! UH HI UH HI UH HI***
- 01:25:803 (1,2) - also imperfect;w;; D: WHO MADE THIS!!! I'LL REPORT THIS TO PEPPY AHHHHHHHHH!
- 01:29:233 (6,1) - I feel like you can give this some more distance since it has the finish and it should have more emphasis than the previous 3 notes. I get what you mean here, but I think we should focus on the level oif the difficulty. Adding a jump here would mislead players since the triangular pattern is already too hard due the high spacing. Therefore, breaking the DS here with a higher rhythm-emphasis wouldn't fit well. What do you think?
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- 00:00:971 (1,2,3) - These seem really compressed, maybe you should increase the distance here a bit. Changed! _(:3 J L)_ Hope it looks better to yout eyes! -w-7
- 00:04:400 (5,6,1) - These 1/1 stacks are a bit confusing due to the low AR, maybe you want to space them out so they dont directly overlap. I'm sorry but I'm afraid that I disagree with this suggestion. While approach rate has an influence considering how fast the objects appear, it doesn't have a big impact with the rhythm. Hence, I do believe this stack emphasize nicely the instruments that show up in this spot.
- 00:10:574 - As the diff below the "Extra" I think you could really include a note here :3 Oh, I can! But honestly saying, the sound that comes up there isn't as strong as to be emphasize with a circle. /w\ Do you really think it's worth to add it?
jusen's diff
00:18:120 (1) - ????? why is it offscreen lol 00:18:806 (2) - to x:356 / 00:19:035 (3) - x:52 / 00:19:721 (4) - to x:156 / 00:19:949 (1) - x:452 fixes the pattern fine https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377470
00:21:321 (2) - x:76 for less condensed flow
01:17:342 (3) - x:336 same reason as above
01:24:202 (4,5) - reduce distance a lot or make it an hdash
01:26:489 (5) - turn this into a circle at 01:26:489 - and make an hdash to a circle at 01:26:717 - x:156 to hdash to the appropriate rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377491
01:26:717 (1,2,3) - no stack plz make more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377496
00:18:120 (1) - ????? why is it offscreen lol 00:18:806 (2) - to x:356 / 00:19:035 (3) - x:52 / 00:19:721 (4) - to x:156 / 00:19:949 (1) - x:452 fixes the pattern fine https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377470
00:21:321 (2) - x:76 for less condensed flow
01:17:342 (3) - x:336 same reason as above
01:24:202 (4,5) - reduce distance a lot or make it an hdash
01:26:489 (5) - turn this into a circle at 01:26:489 - and make an hdash to a circle at 01:26:717 - x:156 to hdash to the appropriate rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377491
01:26:717 (1,2,3) - no stack plz make more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377496
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Ascendance wrote:
jusen's diff
00:18:120 (1) - ????? why is it offscreen lol 00:18:806 (2) - to x:356 / 00:19:035 (3) - x:52 / 00:19:721 (4) - to x:156 / 00:19:949 (1) - x:452 fixes the pattern fine https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377470
00:21:321 (2) - x:76 for less condensed flow
01:17:342 (3) - x:336 same reason as above
01:24:202 (4,5) - reduce distance a lot or make it an hdash
01:26:489 (5) - turn this into a circle at 01:26:489 - and make an hdash to a circle at 01:26:717 - x:156 to hdash to the appropriate rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377491
01:26:717 (1,2,3) - no stack plz make more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5377496
All fixed, thanks for the recheck!
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Topic Starter
rebubbled
Topic Starter
Thank you very much, Ascendance! >w<
Rocket, call Xinely for recheck and ranked you maps >w<
jusen :
00:21:550 - 00:22:007 - why whistle? they dont fit imo if you hitsound them as vocal (so i suggest to remove them) , 00:21:778 - 00:22:693 - finish dont fit too, instead it would be better with whistle as you know spam whistle finish are very bad in hitsounding stuff
00:27:266 - why not map this when the vocal and drum are strong?
00:25:437 (3) - finish doesnt fit too
01:19:172 - remove whistle, no spam ;;
01:26:489 - ^
01:22:602 (4) - remove finish aaa
00:29:096 - ^
00:52:876 (1) - ^
00:30:925 - ^ (as i asked happyrocket too to remove in all diffs)
00:21:550 - 00:22:007 - why whistle? they dont fit imo if you hitsound them as vocal (so i suggest to remove them) , 00:21:778 - 00:22:693 - finish dont fit too, instead it would be better with whistle as you know spam whistle finish are very bad in hitsounding stuff
00:27:266 - why not map this when the vocal and drum are strong?
00:25:437 (3) - finish doesnt fit too
01:19:172 - remove whistle, no spam ;;
01:26:489 - ^
01:22:602 (4) - remove finish aaa
00:29:096 - ^
00:52:876 (1) - ^
00:30:925 - ^ (as i asked happyrocket too to remove in all diffs)
Topic Starter
Updated with Jusen's changes since his hitsounds are basically a copy from my difficulties. \w/
hyped gmneklngltkb;tenb;rswmv;rmsgv
let's go
The end.
Finally, gratz!
My dear, your effort were finally rewarded! I hope you can get much more qualified maps s you always helped people with their ones <3 I knew you'd do it, cutie!
g j
You are so coool! Gratz!!!!
Primer calificado, congrats /
/First qualified map hype
Felicidades Rocket :b
Felicidades Rocket :b
Fookin yes
nice :3
It's ranked!!
Gratz HR!!!
Gratzz for your first ranked maps, Rocket-chan!
I was playing the Rain diff and something caught my eye, and upon further inspection of the diff I noticed this could be improved:
[General]
[General]
- Because the buttons for the pause menu are placed on the left of the screen, rather than the center as in the default skin, the arrows that appear when you navigate through said menu using the keyboard are off, as can be seen on the following screenshot. I know you wanted to keep the pause background cute, but it looks bad and should be fixed
- On Hard and above, 00:46:931 (3,4) - are wrongly snapped (detail on more correct snaps can be seen in the mod for the Rain). I'm not sure how standard mapping handles these weird snaps, but I think it's worth checking it again.
- Assuming 00:45:330 (1,2,3,4) - follows the vocals, as hinted by the sliders, 00:46:931 (3,4) - are slightly off. After discussing a bit with JBHyperion, (3) sounds better at the 1/8 at 00:46:988 - , while (4) sounds better at the 1/6 at 00:47:236 -.
- There's also some weird NC usage at some parts, let me point them out:Le NC Mod
- 00:21:092 (1) - It's weird that you used NC on this at expense of the next stanza. I'd switch the NC to 00:21:778 (4) - for consistency.
- 00:24:751 (1,2,3) - Same goes for this part.
- 00:26:352 (1,2) - You could swap the NCs on these.
- 00:28:638 (1,2) - There's no point in having a 2 notes combo like this in CtB.
- 00:31:839 (1) - 1 note combo ;(, NC should be at 00:32:754 (2) - instead.
- 00:33:669 (1,4) - More inconsistency in NC usage, NC should be on (4) to mark the new stanza.
- 00:35:498 (1,2) - NC should be in (2) to mark the new stanza. It should also be removed on 00:37:099 (1) -
- 00:41:672 (1,2) - NCs should be swapped here and removed on 00:42:815 (1) - and 00:44:644 (1) -
- 00:56:306 (1,2,1) - Two note combo, decide where are you going to keep the NC.
- 00:59:507 (1,3) - NCs should be swapped here. (3) marks the beginning of the Kiai, it's weird that you didn't NC it.
- 01:01:108 (1) - No need to NC this since you're adding 1 NC every stanza in the Kiai.
- 01:17:800 (1) - ^Same thing
- 01:21:687 (1,3) - NCs should be swapped, same reason.
- 01:23:516 (1,3) - Same
- 01:25:117 (1,2) - Same
- 01:26:717 (1) - Shouldn't be NCed for consistency.
- 00:01:657 (1,2,3,4) - I think these distances can be improved. 00:01:657 (1,2) - felt a bit too large, so I'd decrease it a bit by moving 00:02:114 (2) - to x:208. If you want to keep the hyperdash between 00:02:800 (3,4) - , move (3) to the left accordingly. Another option would be to move (3) to x:312, I think that also fits well.
- 00:09:888 (3,4) - I think this distance can be reduced a bit, because it feels easily misseable. I'd move (4) to something around x:120
- 00:14:461 (1,2,3,4) - The "ma ma ma" vocals are pretty strong as individual sounds, so the distances here are really underwhelming. I heavily recommend increasing the distances between these notes, and I would maybe add an hyperdash between the last 2 as a sort of crescendo.
- Given that the section 00:45:330 - 00:51:504 - is a really calm part, I think you added some notes which aren't necessary, as they take away that "calm" feeling. 00:48:074 (5,4) - aren't necessary, and you could even go as far as to remove 00:49:217 (3) - too, to increase emphasis on the vocals, but I understand it's there for the drum sound.
- 01:00:879 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I think you could Ctrl+H this whole lot. It will create a more interesting jump on 01:00:650 (4,5) - , and on 01:06:367 (3,4) - . If you think the jump 01:06:367 (3,4) - becomes too large, you can move 01:06:824 (4,5,6,7) - a bit to the left.
- 01:12:998 (1,2,3) - Again, the "ma ma ma" vocals are really strong, so it would make sense to make the distance 01:12:998 (1,2) - larger, even a hyperdash.
rip :v
;w;
well i *think* it doesn't necessarily need a dq, these things rather seems like suggestions than errors, and im not sure if that menu is good enough reason for a dq, but then again, i dont know anything about ctb nor skinning.
lets see how dis goes like
well i *think* it doesn't necessarily need a dq, these things rather seems like suggestions than errors, and im not sure if that menu is good enough reason for a dq, but then again, i dont know anything about ctb nor skinning.
lets see how dis goes like
about skin, menu is questionable, so yeah, it needs a DQ asap