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It's really messy, consider this mod heavily in favour of this mod! Try and test all of them, unless you think it's too hard, or it sounds weird, or it breaks your flow should you reject it.00:18:373 (1,2,3) - 2 should be 00:18:842 - here and 3 should be 00:19:310 - here.
00:22:826 (1) - should be 00:23:060 - here.
00:26:107 - add a circle on this tick.
00:27:982 - same
00:31:264 (2) - this note is on the wrong tick, should be 00:31:146 - here; there's a note here 00:31:381 - . Well it should look like this in the end https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876140
00:55:873 - A slider from here to 00:56:107 - here please.
01:19:076 (4) - move this to where 5 is. Replace 5 with a slider that ends 01:19:545 - here.
01:22:943 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:31:381 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:34:076 (2) - move this circle to (260,196) and add another circle on this 01:33:959 - tick exactly where 2 is.
01:34:310 (3) - make this a stream. So in the end this whole part should look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876208 .
01:39:467 (3,4,5) - make this looks like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876213 this.
01:53:529 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here.
01:55:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - should look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876237 this.
02:04:779 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole section should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876274. Redesign how the stream should look as you wish.
02:06:654 (1) - slider end doesn't match the rhythm, the beats should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876299 . Redesign the sliders as you wish.
02:08:529 (1,2,3,4) - this whole section, remap it, at least it should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876327 .
02:18:842 (3,4,5) - fix spacing.
02:38:998 - add a slider like the previous ones here.
02:41:576 - insert break time, or map this part as well, you can't leave it blank.
02:46:029 (2,3) - spacing , to be consistent with 02:44:154 (2,3) -
02:52:123 (3,4,5) - spacing.
02:53:998 - add a slider here.
02:55:170 - add a circle here.
02:56:576 (6,7) - spacing.
02:57:051 - add a circle here.
03:04:779 - insert break .
03:10:404 - insert break.
03:12:748 (1,2,3,4) - turn all of these into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876390.
03:24:935 (5) - turn this into a slider.
03:29:154 (2) - spacing.
03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream starts 03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, and map to 1/4s not 1/2s.
03:33:373 (1) - spinner starts 03:32:904 - here.
03:44:154 (4) - turn this into a slider.
03:45:560 (2) - remove this note and put a slider from 03:45:326 - to 03:45:560 - here. Also add a circle 03:45:795 - here.
04:04:779 (2) - New combo (NC) and/or fix spacing.
04:11:352 - map this section!!
00:22:826 (1) - should be 00:23:060 - here.
00:26:107 - add a circle on this tick.
00:27:982 - same
00:31:264 (2) - this note is on the wrong tick, should be 00:31:146 - here; there's a note here 00:31:381 - . Well it should look like this in the end https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876140
00:55:873 - A slider from here to 00:56:107 - here please.
01:19:076 (4) - move this to where 5 is. Replace 5 with a slider that ends 01:19:545 - here.
01:22:943 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:31:381 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:34:076 (2) - move this circle to (260,196) and add another circle on this 01:33:959 - tick exactly where 2 is.
01:34:310 (3) - make this a stream. So in the end this whole part should look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876208 .
01:39:467 (3,4,5) - make this looks like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876213 this.
01:53:529 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here.
01:55:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - should look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876237 this.
02:04:779 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole section should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876274. Redesign how the stream should look as you wish.
02:06:654 (1) - slider end doesn't match the rhythm, the beats should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876299 . Redesign the sliders as you wish.
02:08:529 (1,2,3,4) - this whole section, remap it, at least it should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876327 .
02:18:842 (3,4,5) - fix spacing.
02:38:998 - add a slider like the previous ones here.
02:41:576 - insert break time, or map this part as well, you can't leave it blank.
02:46:029 (2,3) - spacing , to be consistent with 02:44:154 (2,3) -
02:52:123 (3,4,5) - spacing.
02:53:998 - add a slider here.
02:55:170 - add a circle here.
02:56:576 (6,7) - spacing.
02:57:051 - add a circle here.
03:04:779 - insert break .
03:10:404 - insert break.
03:12:748 (1,2,3,4) - turn all of these into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876390.
03:24:935 (5) - turn this into a slider.
03:29:154 (2) - spacing.
03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream starts 03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, and map to 1/4s not 1/2s.
03:33:373 (1) - spinner starts 03:32:904 - here.
03:44:154 (4) - turn this into a slider.
03:45:560 (2) - remove this note and put a slider from 03:45:326 - to 03:45:560 - here. Also add a circle 03:45:795 - here.
04:04:779 (2) - New combo (NC) and/or fix spacing.
04:11:352 - map this section!!
It's really hard starting out mapping on your own, especially it seems like you haven't got yourself enough music theory. Hopefully there'll be people who are open-minded and try to help you along the way.
Good luck with mapping in the future.
Oh and don't take this as an offence or anything like that, I'm being honest here so that you can realise what's going wrong with your mapping. Don't hate me please ;-;
Apply it as soon as you can, you might expect Hako to mod your flow later if he accepts it.
Topic Starter
Thanks for telling me on my error beatmap. I had fixed my beatmap and up to date it. I think you enjoyed listening this music while finding my error in my beatmap right?LMT1996 wrote:
Hard2DeadIt's really messy, consider this mod heavily in favour of this mod! Try and test all of them, unless you think it's too hard, or it sounds weird, or it breaks your flow should you reject it.00:18:373 (1,2,3) - 2 should be 00:18:842 - here and 3 should be 00:19:310 - here.
00:22:826 (1) - should be 00:23:060 - here.
00:26:107 - add a circle on this tick.
00:27:982 - same
00:31:264 (2) - this note is on the wrong tick, should be 00:31:146 - here; there's a note here 00:31:381 - . Well it should look like this in the end https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876140
00:55:873 - A slider from here to 00:56:107 - here please.
01:19:076 (4) - move this to where 5 is. Replace 5 with a slider that ends 01:19:545 - here.
01:22:943 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:31:381 - add a circle here at this tick.
01:34:076 (2) - move this circle to (260,196) and add another circle on this 01:33:959 - tick exactly where 2 is.
01:34:310 (3) - make this a stream. So in the end this whole part should look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876208 .
01:39:467 (3,4,5) - make this looks like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876213 this.
01:53:529 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here.
01:55:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - should look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876237 this.
02:04:779 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole section should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876274. Redesign how the stream should look as you wish.
02:06:654 (1) - slider end doesn't match the rhythm, the beats should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876299 . Redesign the sliders as you wish.
02:08:529 (1,2,3,4) - this whole section, remap it, at least it should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876327 .
02:18:842 (3,4,5) - fix spacing.
02:38:998 - add a slider like the previous ones here.
02:41:576 - insert break time, or map this part as well, you can't leave it blank.
02:46:029 (2,3) - spacing , to be consistent with 02:44:154 (2,3) -
02:52:123 (3,4,5) - spacing.
02:53:998 - add a slider here.
02:55:170 - add a circle here.
02:56:576 (6,7) - spacing.
02:57:051 - add a circle here.
03:04:779 - insert break .
03:10:404 - insert break.
03:12:748 (1,2,3,4) - turn all of these into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4876390.
03:24:935 (5) - turn this into a slider.
03:29:154 (2) - spacing.
03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream starts 03:31:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, and map to 1/4s not 1/2s.
03:33:373 (1) - spinner starts 03:32:904 - here.
03:44:154 (4) - turn this into a slider.
03:45:560 (2) - remove this note and put a slider from 03:45:326 - to 03:45:560 - here. Also add a circle 03:45:795 - here.
04:04:779 (2) - New combo (NC) and/or fix spacing.
04:11:352 - map this section!!
It's really hard starting out mapping on your own, especially it seems like you haven't got yourself enough music theory. Hopefully there'll be people who are open-minded and try to help you along the way.
Good luck with mapping in the future.
Oh and don't take this as an offence or anything like that, I'm being honest here so that you can realise what's going wrong with your mapping. Don't hate me please ;-;
Apply it as soon as you can, you might expect Hako to mod your flow later if he accepts it.
Umm yeah it was... enjoyableMasato96 wrote:
Thanks for telling me on my error beatmap. I had fixed my beatmap and up to date it. I think you enjoyed listening this music while finding my error in my beatmap right?
. It's not really my favourite genre but ok I can listen to it. 
But yeah, sometimes test the map on your own and if you think that it sounds weird, make a note and fix it. There are still existing issues (of course and I think there's quite a lot of issues actually), but I'd rather leave that to other modders. Keep trying to get into modding queues, there should be people who wish to help you fixing your map if you don't know how to, especially when you're a new mapper.
Good luck and don't give up on just a few setbacks.
PS: don't kd this lol you'll get into trouble if you kd this post.
- BPM change, offset was late. (offset might be -2/+2 off)
- Please use Distance Snap (only on easy and normal) and take off grid snap
- .mp3 bit rate is 235, this is not very important now, but when you are close down the ranking process, your .mp3 has to be 192 minimum
- Slider can be a little more prettier. Read this guide if you already haven't and practice these sliders. Some of them are have out-dated styles but it still works. t/208596
- 5% volume is no good. 100% is no good either. usually around 40-60% is fine, but it all depends on the music.
this song title reminds me of my life
Topic Starter
Thanks for the advice. I appreciate itBoobs wrote:
FOR ALL DIFFICULTIES
- BPM change, offset was late. (offset might be -2/+2 off)
- Please use Distance Snap (only on easy and normal) and take off grid snap
- .mp3 bit rate is 235, this is not very important now, but when you are close down the ranking process, your .mp3 has to be 192 minimum
- Slider can be a little more prettier. Read this guide if you already haven't and practice these sliders. Some of them are have out-dated styles but it still works. t/208596
- 5% volume is no good. 100% is no good either. usually around 40-60% is fine, but it all depends on the music.
I didn't mod individual difficulties because i am currently flooded with mod requests. Instead, i focused on some fundamental flaws of your map. Mapping is hard to get into, don't give up because it is difficult. Your NM request from p/5040843/ is done