wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:805 (3) - right 1 grid?Fixed
00:36:077 (2,3) - make them into a stright lineFixed
00:40:077 (5) - left 1 gridFixed
01:08:805 (1) - right 1 gridFixed

[Normal]
nice for me

Japanese feel instrument, relaxing song

star*2~Thx :-O

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Easy
Remove lead-in, it's useless in this diff.

Sorry, I've found only this.Better then nothing

Star~

1. I see some interesting BG / Combo colours here, That's nice.
2. You'll need to add the following files: "Approachcircle.png" and "Hitcircleoverlay", because you have a custom hitcircle here, so you'll need those file to avoid skin mixing.
3. Also add the same Lead In time for all the mapset.
4. Since you're using a custom Scorebarcolour, You'll also need Scorebar-bg, Scorebar-ki, Scorebar-kidang, etc. (All the files related to the score bar) You can add the default ones if you want.

1. 01:23:714 (1) - This slider should start here: 01:23:895 - , it sounds better , try it-
2. 01:34:986 (2) - Horizontal flip and kill that ugly overlap, simple uh?
3. 01:44:441 (1,2) - Try this
4. 00:53:532 (X) - A circle is missing here, You used that in the other patterns, so consider adding it.
5. 01:28:077 (1) - Random New Combo, Remove it please.

1. The 3rd and 4th combo colour look almost the same while playing, So why don't you change the order of the colours so it's not confusing anymore.
2. 00:08:441 (1,2,1,2) - This looks messy, why don't you make the 2nd (2) like this
3. 00:20:441 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part needs some hitsounds, probably just some whistles.
4. 01:40:441 (2) - Why don't use whislte here like you did with the other sliders ?

1. 00:31:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent between patterns, this whole patterns needs more spacing.
2. 00:48:805 (1) - Random New Combo, remove it, it's not necesary.
3. 00:48:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is too long, Use New Combo on (5).
4. 01:14:623 (1) - Remove this New Combo.
5. 01:34:441 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent, (3), (4) and (5) have different spacing than (8), (1) and (2).
6. 01:34:441 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Check the spacing used in the first pattern and the one used in the 2nd pattern, It's different while in the time line the pattern it's the same, so please use the same spacing for all the patterns like this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. I see some interesting BG / Combo colours here, That's nice.
2. You'll need to add the following files: "Approachcircle.png" and "Hitcircleoverlay", because you have a custom hitcircle here, so you'll need those file to avoid skin mixing.Those are allready in here O.o
3. Also add the same Lead In time for all the mapset.Fixed
4. Since you're using a custom Scorebarcolour, You'll also need Scorebar-bg, Scorebar-ki, Scorebar-kidang, etc. (All the files related to the score bar) You can add the default ones if you want.

Easy

1. 01:23:714 (1) - This slider should start here: 01:23:895 - , it sounds better , try it-hmmm not really sure about that one
2. 01:34:986 (2) - Horizontal flip and kill that ugly overlap, simple uh?Fixed
3. 01:44:441 (1,2) - Try thisFixed
4. 00:53:532 (X) - A circle is missing here, You used that in the other patterns, so consider adding it.Fixed
5. 01:28:077 (1) - Random New Combo, Remove it please.Fixed

Normal

1. The 3rd and 4th combo colour look almost the same while playing, So why don't you change the order of the colours so it's not confusing anymore.Fixed
2. 00:08:441 (1,2,1,2) - This looks messy, why don't you make the 2nd (2) like thisFixed
3. 00:20:441 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part needs some hitsounds, probably just some whistles.Fixed
4. 01:40:441 (2) - Why don't use whislte here like you did with the other sliders ?Forgot it sry :-/

Hard

1. 00:31:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent between patterns, this whole patterns needs more spacing.Fixed
2. 00:48:805 (1) - Random New Combo, remove it, it's not necesary.Fixed
3. 00:48:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is too long, Use New Combo on (5).Fixed
4. 01:14:623 (1) - Remove this New Combo.Fixed
5. 01:34:441 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent, (3), (4) and (5) have different spacing than (8), (1) and (2).Fixed
6. 01:34:441 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Check the spacing used in the first pattern and the one used in the 2nd pattern, It's different while in the time line the pattern it's the same, so please use the same spacing for all the patterns like this.Fixed

Well, Nice job for a 2nd beatmap. Have a Star.1st

H-boy wrote:

tags :use lowercase letter is better
del the .osb file

Easy

nice~

suggestions
01:03:714(x) - add a circle with a whistle hitsoundFixed
01:09:168(x) - ^Fixed
01:14:259(3) - vertical to (2)Fixed

Normal

00:14:259(2) - remove whistle(except 00:14:623)Fixed
01:44:805(2) - Make symetricFixed

suggestions
01:20:441(x) - add a circleFixed
01:26:259~01:28:077 (1,2,3,1) - move 1 grid downFixed

Hard

01:21:350(1) - delFixed

star

1. scorebar-colour.png if you need a custom HP bar, you should put all the elements a HP should have in the folder
2. hitcircle.png also here, you need a hitcircle-overlay.png and an approachcircle.png
3. there are only 2 diffs when i got this (easy is gone) :S, a full submit can fix this.

1. 01:24:805 (2) - end this at 01:25:714

1. 00:10:986 (4,5,6) - no, use 1/3 snap, 1/4 doesn't work here
2. many things like ^ should be fixed

1. the combo colors are quite alike to the BG's color, you'd better change them to something more comfortable to play
2. disable countdown

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. scorebar-colour.png if you need a custom HP bar, you should put all the elements a HP should have in the folder
2. hitcircle.png also here, you need a hitcircle-overlay.png and an approachcircle.png
3. there are only 2 diffs when i got this (easy is gone) :S, a full submit can fix this.

[Easy]:

1. 01:24:805 (2) - end this at 01:25:714

Fixed

[Normal]:

1. 00:10:986 (4,5,6) - no, use 1/3 snap, 1/4 doesn't work hereFixed
2. many things like ^ should be fixed

[Hard]:

1. the combo colors are quite alike to the BG's color, you'd better change them to something more comfortable to playFixed
2. disable countdownFixed

well done 1st map star~

Keksi wrote:

Keksi's Mod:

Grün: Request
Blau: Wäre nett wenn du das änderst.
Rot:Ändern!

[Easy]
01:14:320- (3) weg hört sich nicht gut an naja hört sich auch doof an wenn nichts da is xD


[Normal]
00:41:919- Mach die (2) und (1) so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49446Fixed


[Hard]
Alles ok


sternchen~

Xeno32 wrote:

[Hitsound Volume]
Lower it by 1 or two ticks. Still too loud IMOFixed

[Custom Hitsounds]
Maybe use the custom hitsound I have attached to take away the annoying slider noises, making it much more appealing to listen too.
Remember to enable custom hitsound override 1Fixed

[Hard]
00:26:986 (1) - Could use better spacing. Tiny bit confusing, but nothing to serious. (Try and not to overlap, its ugly)Fixed
00:41:532 (1) - 1 Grid down Fixed
00:45:895 (3) - 1 Grid UpFixed

Map to end.

[Normal]
Apart from being linear and a few overlaps. It's a good diff.

Map to end.

[Easy]
While it is easy. You break the flow of the song on a dozen occasions. I personally think this can be a nicer diff. Void of hitnotes makes it a bore to play.

01:00:805 (1) - stood out as ugly.Fixed

narakucrimson wrote:

Gift4Gift :3

Here it goes!

[Easy]

40:805 (2, 3) - Even if the distance snap isn't wrong, I don't like how the dostance on this combo variates. So how about moving these 2 grids left and one down?changed but in an other way
50:986 (2) - Add a whistle here, and remove it from 3.Fixed
54:259 (3) - Ok now this distance from 2 here wouldn't be a problem for a pro player (like me xDDDDD - just joking), but for a relatively new player, it would be hard to read. Maybe you could stack 3 under 2, or put it at the right distance snap.Fixed
1:03:714 (4) - New combo here, and remove it from the next circle.Fixed
1:45:532 (2) - A finish might sound too rough for this, but at least I'd like to hear a whistle here.Fixed


[Normal]

There are too many combo changes on the beggining xDD
I'd suggest to keep one new combo, and remove another. And repeating the process:

Keep, remove, keep, remove, keep, remove. At least until the map changes it's flow - that is on 09:532 guess its ok that way maybe ill think about it

16:441 (2) - The score of this slider CAN'T cover the end of the next slider. You don't know either if there's a repetition or not. Place it in some othre way.Fixed
23:714 (1) - Add a whistle.Fixed


[Hard]

1:08:805 (2) - Move this one grid right.Fixed
1:45:532 (1) - Again, add at least a whistle here?Fixed


There isn't too much to say. You have done quiet a good job.
Here's your birthday gift :3

artpiggo wrote:

sorry for late modding.

Normal
00:20:441 symmetry in half of screen is better I think Fixed and i guess it looks better now
00:43:350 maybe put clap sound in first note of the sliderNot necessary
00 58 986 repeat decrease 1 and put in purple I thinkNot necessary
01 10 623 maybe put it up one grid I don't want it across the previous oneFixed
01 45 895 maybe put 2 spinners continuous to end mapDoesnt fit to the music :-/

Hard
00 04 077(1,2,3) you want this w/o distance snap(d.s.) hmm ? but I think it isn't clear for me Yeah without (at least those parts)
00 08 441 ^ ahh so you really want it w/o d.s rule ok then, I'll enjoy it (but 0.8x and 1.5x d.s. maybe better for me )
slider in 00 38 259(1)& 00 43 714(7)& 01 14 623(6)& 01:24:441(5) I really want it to have whistle sound when I slide it.
01:02:623 I prefer it to be straightgot a sliderslide sound allready and dont like that scratchy sound from the whistle sliderslide
01:41:532(2,3,4) I prefer it to be symmetry as previous set and also in 01 43 714 too.Fixed
And maybe spinner ending? Doesnt fit to the music :-/
nice sound nice song nice map ! I really don't think that you are beginner one lolz

Good luck! Star then!

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Easy]
00:20:441 (2) - 1 Grid right :3Fixed
01:13:168 (2) - ^Fixed
[Normal]
00:53:532 (1) - move it like this http://puu.sh/M3sFixed (looks better)
01:43:350 (1) - 1 Grid upFixed

[Hard]
fine, but i dont like the style of this diff.


Have a Star~

Wiinter wrote:

Hey, sorry for being late >__<

Easy
01:24:805 (2) - I think you could change the shape of this slider to something like this http://puu.sh/MyC, as soon as it looks better and doesn't affect the time the slider ends.Fixed

Normal
00:06:259 (1) - uh this is nazi but this spacing is a liiittle wrong ><Fixed
00:44:804 (2) - I'd shorten a little this slider, making it like this http://puu.sh/MyPFixed
00:54:623 (3) - change this spacing to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51489? The one you have now is not bad, but I'd say this one looks betterFixed

Hard
01:14:623 (6) - I'd start the new combo here instead of doing it on 01:14:986 (1), buut it's up to you.

That's all. The first diff is a little too boring, but meh, I guess it's what an easy is supposed to be. Star ^_^

Joshua Lost wrote:

Hi~Here's my poooooor mod~xDD
With my poooooor English....@_@

[Hard]
00:04:441(2)Spacing?Feel strange...
00:28:441(1-5)I consider that you can make them more neat...
00:37:168(1-5)^
01:28:077(1)The end point is strange...How about next white line?added one there
Maybe mapping under GRID LV3 will be better I guess..><

[Normal]
00:42:259(3-6)Well,I don't like the design here.changed it a bit

[Easy]
00:53:895(x)I suggest to add a note here.Fixed
01:22:805(2)Starting this slider from 01:22:623.I mean,keep you slider start from white line,otherwise they will be too hard for beginners.
01:23:895(1)^uh ill think about a solution to this

That's all....All my suggestion only o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
STAR~~~>w<

vincerio wrote:

hi~
here's my suggestion~

open .osu in notepad and fix this...
audio lead-in: 2000 in all diffs pls ;w; (now = 1996 in Hard, 2007 in Normal, 2006 in easy) OMG!Fixed


[Hard]
00:26:986 - useless timing section (nothing is changed)Fixed
00:53:16 - ^
01:13:16 - ^Fixed
01:14:62 - ^Fixed
02:27:53 - ^ Fixed
00:44:441 - I don't feel that this song really need kiai
00:46:259 - move the end of slider up 2 grid lv 4Fixed
00:53:168 - make it more symestry shapeFixed
00:55:714 - move the end of slider down 1 grid lv 4Fixed
00:54:623 - move its repeat end down 1 grid lv 4 Fixed
01:00:077(5) - make it have the same shape like (3)Fixed

[Normal]
removed kiai
nicely fine to me :3

[Easy]
removed kiai
perfectly fine to me

~star

galvenize wrote:

[Hard]

Nothing wrong technically.

This map would be more enjoyable if you played with the volume of the hitsounds... Something like:

01:33:895 (5) - Set volume at 2
01:34:441 (8) - Set it back at 5.check the result u brought me on an idea

Now play that part again. Doesn't it sound better ? Try finding other spots like this one.

Not much I can say about the rest of the mapset. Pretty good how it is.

Rogue Galaxy, used to play this game back on the ps2. Forgot about that song though lol.
I guess it appears when u see Simons family search for him
That's about it.

nante wrote:

[General]
You need new approachcircle.png(a little bigger than current)
Try 803 offset.Fixed
I'd rather start kiai time at 00:26:984 and end it where current one is starting. And if you do that, add 2nd kiai time starting 01:14:984 (T) and ending at 01:19:348 (T)i like it how it is right now

[Easy]
Circle Size +1Fixed
00:08:439 (4) - why suddenly a whistle, previous notes are on the same bg music and they aren't whistledFixed
00:40:075 (1) - whistle at the end ?Fixed
00:40:803 (2) - whistle?Fixed
00:41:166 (3) - remove whistle?Fixed
01:34:984 (2) - remove whistle from begginingFixed
01:44:439 (1) - whistle? To be consistant with 01:40:075 (1)Fixed

[Normal]
Approach Rate, Overall Difficulty -1.its ok how it is now
01:07:712 (4) - maybe a new combo?new combo at 5

[Hard]
Audioleadin is different from other diffs(1996, since all other have 2000)oh though i fixed all
00:48:439 (1) - remove new comboFixed
00:48:803 (2) - new combo[/color]
01:26:984 (4) - new comboFixed

star

Aleks719 wrote:

Nice music, relaxing... Beauty bg's...
~Star~, at first (:
At second, my mod :

Hard
Music is soft... Very nice patterns, but there is little wishes ^^
00:32:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a triangle of notes. (4) put in place of (1), (5) put in place of (2)

SPOILER

It will be hardly then now, but seems pretty, imoFixed
00:35:712 (1,2,3,4) - slightly to alignok should be fixed

SPOILER

00:48:075 (4,5) - remove whistlesFixed
01:28:075 (1) - remove whistle, make end of spinner 1/3 earlyDont get where excaly he should be
01:36:803 (1) - remove whistleFixed

Normal
01:11:348 (2) - remove whistle from the start and 1st reverseFixed
01:12:439 (3) - remove whistleFixed
01:13:530 (5) - remove whistle from the start 1st and 3rd reverse, add whistle to the 2nd reverseFixed
01:26:621 (2) - remove whistle from the endFixed
01:32:439 (1) - remove whistle from the start and 1st reverseFixed
01:33:893 (3,4) - remove whistlesRemoved from 3 but 4 sounds good to me
01:35:712 (6) - remove whistle from the endFixed

Easy
00:18:257 (4) - make it 1/3 later, imo, it will be sounds betterDont get where excaly he should be
00:36:075 (2) - remove whistle from the endFixed
00:37:893 (1) - ^Fixed
01:40:075 (1) - remove whistle from the end and reverseFixed
01:41:166 (2) - add whistleFixed
01:44:439 (1) - remove whistle from the end and reverseFixed

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod

[Easy]
00:11:712:Do something like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52732)?Fixed
00:40:075(1):Do something like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52733)?
01:14:257(3):Put it under the sliderFixed

[Normal]
00:05:524(2):Do something like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52735)?Fixed
00:42:257(3):Do something like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52736)?
00:43:712(5):Put it under the slider
00:43:893(6):^
01:36:075(7):^
01:36:257(8):^

[Hard]
00:09:894(2):00:42:257(3):Do something like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52737)?Fixed

I don't have other to say.Good map,star~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
-2 OD
-1 HP
-1 AR

[Hard]
00:21:893 (2,3,4,5) - can you fli horizontally, flip vertically and reverse selection(all from "Edit" menu) ? in that mode it better fit the part
Fixed
not much to mod... you can just have it bubbled by someone

Garven wrote:

I think I stole this from #modreqs, but you also requested me to mod it as well, hehe:

[General]
Do you think you can reduce the filesize on BG_Easy.jpg? It's fairly large for an image.
Parts of the text for your scorebar are sticking into your hpbar image.
I really don't think this type of song warrants kiai use, tbh.
Can you get someone to doublecheck the timing? It feels a little early, and I'm not good at timing. ><

[Easy]
00:29:166 (3) - Eeh, don't like the curve on this. Applies to other iterationsFixed
00:33:530 (1,2) - This doesn't flow very well, and the curve is pretty sharp. Maybe do a more shallow curve with the one slider leading to where the 2 is right now?Fixed
00:53:166 (1,2,3,4) - I really don't recommend using stacks in easy difficulties - especially when sliders are involved.Fixed
00:57:530 (1) - This part felt kind of empty of hit sounds compared to what you used around it.Fixed
01:13:166 (2,3) - Stacking againFixed
01:24:803 (2) - Hrm, maybe like this? Fixed

SPOILER

01:26:984 (1) - Use two points on this slider to make it smootherFixed

[Normal]
Hrm, the way you use repeating sliders gets a little confusing. Some are four hits, some are three, some are two, occasionally five... It can be pretty confusing to Normal level players going through this. If you can find a way to simplify some of the rhythms or make things more consistent with that type of slider's usage, the map would play a lot better to me.
Along that line, some of the slider chains get a little tough also for a Normal difficulty.
More sliders I don't like the looks of, if you can maybe go for more smooth curves and such.
Otherwise this is okay.

[Hard]
Looks fine. There are small things I could nazi, but I don't feel like it.

Check out RJ's guide to delicious sliders to help out with sprucing up the looks of your sliders.

Work on toning down Normal a bit and it will greatly improve the set as a whole, imo.

DragonSparta wrote:

Easy
Fine~ Hp Drain -1

Normal
01:45:530 (3) - One grid left Fixed
Fine~
_______________________________
Star~
No kudosu for this because not many errors I could find

Rukarioman wrote:

So okay ich mach einfach mal meinen ersten mod in Deutsch lol.

Easy:
00:18:257 (4) - Hier füg mal eine whistle hinzu.Gefixed
Generel würd ich ein bisschen mehr Hitsound mäßig sehn. Nur whistles durch den ganzen Song ist ein bisschen langweilig^^Überall was hinzugefügt :-D

Da sist eigentlich alles was ich sagen kann. Ziemlich solide und coole Map.
Schau dir die Hitsounds noch ein wenig and und dann ruf mich nochmal für eine bubble.^^

Hushu wrote:

Everything is fine! Starred!thx for 2 stars :-O

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall:
The default soft-hitclap doesn't really well fit the music.
I would've used something softer but it's ok.

[Easy] & [Normal]
No error I can pick on. Solid.

[Hard]
00:57:893 (2) - not so prettyFixed

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Already a good mapset. ^^

Feel free to NOT give kudosu for this limited mod lol

Lesjuh wrote:

Offset 790 and you're good to go ;DFixed and a big thx :-D