1. H-boy's KaGi (4.96 stars, 215 notes)
2. huang's Easy (2.58 stars, 76 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 285 notes)
4. Normal (3.77 stars, 112 notes)

• Offset: -460 or 1040(offset -9ms) (If you really want to map beginning, use
  
  first one)
  Same lead-in: 1996 or 2000
  Preview Point at 00:11:531
  Same Kiai: 00:35:531-00:44:531 01:20:531-01:29:531
  Combo color suggestion:
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 255,255,176
  Combo2 : 190,190,255
  Combo3 : 255,179,179
  Combo4 : 181,255,176

  BG resize:
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  
  
  To kgsky: Remember, you are mapping for players, not mapping for tricks

• 00:40:790 (5,1) - Spacing
  01:08:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you read these?
  01:22:602 (4,5) - Use 1/1 rather than 1/2?

• 00:16:968 (5) - Shorten 1/4 beat?
  00:25:031 (4) - 1 grid down in lv3?

• 00:24:656 (2,3) - 2 makes 3's reverse unreadable...move 2 to somewhere else
  00:27:281 (4,6) - Stacking (Disable the grid snap, use 0.0x distance spacing)
  00:33:093 (4,5) - ^
  00:33:843 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这种坑爹的排版...去重摆
  00:34:781 (9) - Extend 1/4 beat?
  00:42:843 (4,5,6) - Stacking
  00:49:406 (11) - New combo
  00:52:781 (11) - ^
  01:04:968 (8,1) - 1 is unreadable...
  01:06:281 (3,5) - ^
  01:09:843 (6,7) - Spacing

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Offset: -460 or 1040(offset -9ms) (If you really want to map beginning, use
  
  first one)
  Same lead-in: 1996 or 2000
  Preview Point at 00:11:531
  Same Kiai: 00:35:531-00:44:531 01:20:531-01:29:531
  Combo color suggestion:
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 255,255,176
  Combo2 : 190,190,255
  Combo3 : 255,179,179
  Combo4 : 181,255,176

  BG resize:
  
  SPOILER

  [attachment=2:01b26]1.jpg[/attachment:01b26]
  [attachment=1:01b26]2.jpg[/attachment:01b26]
  [attachment=0:01b26]3.jpg[/attachment:01b26]
  
  To kgsky: Remember, you are mapping for players, not mapping for tricks

[huang's Easy]

Map something different in second part please...This song isn't that long...
Also it's kinda hard for beginners, maybe remove some 1/2 beats?


[Normal]

I strongly recommond you to map from 00:11:531.. Because the music was cut badly, the beginning part feel nonsense...

Too many stacking in your map just confusing players, why don't you arrange them differently...

• 00:40:790 (5,1) - Spacing
  01:08:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you read these?
  01:22:602 (4,5) - Use 1/1 rather than 1/2?

[H-boy's KaGi]

从玩家角度来说, 音效很违和

• 00:16:968 (5) - Shorten 1/4 beat?
  00:25:031 (4) - 1 grid down in lv3?

[Insane]

Too many stacking in your map just confusing players, why don't you arrange them differently...

• 00:24:656 (2,3) - 2 makes 3's reverse unreadable...move 2 to somewhere else
  00:27:281 (4,6) - Stacking (Disable the grid snap, use 0.0x distance spacing)
  00:33:093 (4,5) - ^
  00:33:843 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这种坑爹的排版...去重摆
  00:34:781 (9) - Extend 1/4 beat?
  00:42:843 (4,5,6) - Stacking
  00:49:406 (11) - New combo
  00:52:781 (11) - ^
  01:04:968 (8,1) - 1 is unreadable...
  01:06:281 (3,5) - ^
  01:09:843 (6,7) - Spacing

其实很早mod完了 但是网站挂了...重mod T_T

• Some BGs are quite bad quality too, can't you find something better? :<
  You can add preview poits, if you want to. H-boy did.
  Please capitalize the Source correctly: "Arakawa Under the Bridge"
  Please name the tags correctly: "H-boy", not "h boy"
  Where is the video from? When i looked at Youtube, i got another video (I can tell that it's correct btw, i was just curious)
  Black as custom colour is really hard to see. Please consider changing it.
  I don't like how this mp3 sounds... Did you ripped this from a Youtube video or something? The beginning is cutted and Normal starts awkwardly because of that (Since i'm giving you a new mp3, you have to fix them).
  New mp3 for you. I already renamed it (please use simplier names :S) so just replace and use this offset: 0. Be CAREFUL because you'll have to full reload the map and move all the beats (Just select them all) IN EVERY DIFFICULTY.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Slidertick rate 0,5 feels empty, 1 sounds ok.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:42:843 (1) - extend up to 00:46:031
  01:02:531 (2) - add new combo; 01:01:781 (1) - remove new combo.

• I don't know why the .osu file has a different name yet it still works. I'd change it, but i'm not sure if this will break something.
  .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Why is this the only difficulty that starts right away?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:02:156 (3) - stack correctly
  00:08:531 (1) - extend up to 00:08:531 (1); 00:11:156 (1) - delete this.
  00:17:531 (1,2,3,4) - this may feel weird to read.
  00:22:406 (5) - move farther
  00:28:406 (5,1) - 00:40:781 (5,1) - kinda sudden jumps for a regularly spaced beatmap
  01:03:656 (3) - move farther
  01:08:906 (2) - just stack this on the endpoint of 01:09:281 (3)
  01:09:281 (3,4,5) - hard to read, probabily

• .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:16:968 (5) - i think this slider resnapped wrong. Please check it.

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:27:843 (6,1) - misreadable for a 1/2 spacing
  00:46:968 (2,1) - ^
  00:43:406 (5,6) - stack correctly
  00:54:093 (4) - sounds weird
  00:55:968 (9,10,11) - why so far?
  01:13:218 (6,7) - ugly jump
  The map feels really unpolished btw: some "jumps" are playable but the seem a bit "nonsense" while playing. Try to give the map a shape and some consistancy.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  Everything is unsnapped. I can tell even without AImod. You forgot to resnap, didn't you? (Oh well you'll have to use my new mp3 anyway so you'll have to resnap in every diff anyway :3)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Some BGs are quite bad quality too, can't you find something better? :<
  You can add preview poits, if you want to. H-boy did.
  Please capitalize the Source correctly: "Arakawa Under the Bridge"
  Please name the tags correctly: "H-boy", not "h boy"
  Where is the video from? When i looked at Youtube, i got another video (I can tell that it's correct btw, i was just curious)
  Black as custom colour is really hard to see. Please consider changing it.
  I don't like how this mp3 sounds... Did you ripped this from a Youtube video or something? The beginning is cutted and Normal starts awkwardly because of that (Since i'm giving you a new mp3, you have to fix them).
  New mp3 for you. I already renamed it (please use simplier names :S) so just replace and use this offset: 0. Be CAREFUL because you'll have to full reload the map and move all the beats (Just select them all) IN EVERY DIFFICULTY.

tank for your mp3 but i don't know how to change it

- Normal:

• I don't know why the .osu file has a different name yet it still works. I'd change it, but i'm not sure if this will break something.
  .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)color=#FF4000]I find the my sound have mistakes when i finish this diff..[/color]
  Why is this the only difficulty that starts right away?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:02:156 (3) - stack correctly
  00:08:531 (1) - extend up to 00:08:531 (1); 00:11:156 (1) - delete this.
  00:17:531 (1,2,3,4) - this may feel weird to read.
  00:22:406 (5) - move farther
  00:28:406 (5,1) - 00:40:781 (5,1) - kinda sudden jumps for a regularly spaced beatmap
  01:03:656 (3) - move farther
  01:08:906 (2) - just stack this on the endpoint of 01:09:281 (3)
  01:09:281 (3,4,5) - hard to read, probabily

- Insane:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:27:843 (6,1) - misreadable for a 1/2 spacingX I think it enough well
  00:46:968 (2,1) - ^X ^
  00:43:406 (5,6) - stack correctly
  00:54:093 (4) - sounds weird
  00:55:968 (9,10,11) - why so far?
  01:13:218 (6,7) - ugly jump
  The map feels really unpolished btw: some "jumps" are playable but the seem a bit "nonsense" while playing. Try to give the map a shape and some consistancy.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  Everything is unsnapped. I can tell even without AImod. You forgot to resnap, didn't you? (Oh well you'll have to use my new mp3 anyway so you'll have to resnap in every diff anyway :3)

Sorry, you need to work a bit more. Maps are quite a good start, but you absolutely need new BGs and the new mp3 i provided.

orioncomet wrote:

- on some .osu have something like 'suneohua' maybe because after you fix you didn't save, then plz try to save (ctrl+s or File > Save) and do a full submit again, before you fixing any modding below and don't exit editor while you're fixing it. because it will say your map "not yet submitted"

- set preview point to all difficulties and make sure they are the same.
- fix tag 'h boy' to 'h-boy'.
- delete uesless audio-lead-in from huang's Easy, H-boy's KaGi and Insane.
- black combo color really hard to see, change it to gray or something lighter.

[huang's Easy] - look fine

[Normal]
00:16:781 (4) - dont feel like to see note a bit under silder on Normal diff, could you fix it
00:17:906 (2) - a bit far from (1)?
00:22:406 (5) - spacing? a bit too close to (4)
00:30:281 (3) - spacing? a bit too far from (2)
00:41:156 (1) - Ctrl+H, and fix spacing a bit. just look too far from (5)
01:06:281 (3) - a bit far from (2)?
01:09:281 (3) - hidden silder, fix it to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39621
01:16:406 (4) - a bit too far from (3)?
forgive me, i just dont like random spacing change and hidden notes stuff on Normal diff

[H-boy's KaGi]
- [Just asking] spacing a bit too hug maybe +1 to circle size?
00:46:031 (1,2,3) - hidden silders?
00:49:406 (1,2,3) - ^
this diff have some hidden notes too, but i will think this diff is Insane so fine.
But If this diff is just a Hard diff, so need fix those hidden notes a bit.
look good ~

[Insane]
- resnap all notes on this diff with 1/4 beat snap divisor
- look like random spacing on some parts x-x but fine, i guess~
- would like to ask you to add some new combo on some parts that spacing changed (want to suggest you to add though, but I think it'd better If you do it yourself)
00:33:656 (1) - hidden note?
00:43:406 (5,6) - stack them under the silder (a bit look messy there >_<!)
01:29:531 - suggest to add note here


Rawr.. long mod post from me.. XD I'm lazy writer (many ppl know) anyways those are not nazi though, hope you understand.

Odaril wrote:

General
Add "huang" to the tags for all diffs ?
Just a tip for your future maps: instead of calling the backgrounds weird names like the ones you have, just call them "bg1.jpg" or something like that; it will make it a lot easier to replace if you need to replace them, since you will just have to change the picture without changing anything in the diffs themselves if the new picture has the same name as the previous background.
Your video width is over 800. I don't think it's unrankable, but if you can, try to make it a bit smaller.
Normal and Insane both have a countdown, while the other diffs don't. Either choose to have one for all diff or not to have one. (I'd personnally suggest to remove it, but it's your call)
The timing feels a bit weird to me. If you want to map on the vocals, you need a timing that is more accurate.

Normal
00:04:406 (3,1,2) - Spacing issue: the time difference is the same but they are spaced differently.
00:05:531 (3,4,5) - ^
00:11:531 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner imo. Try to at least make the spinner end 1/2 sooner ?
00:19:781 (7,1) - This jump is confusing and unexpected imo. Besides, having such a wide jump in a Normal doesn't sound like a good idea. Space them using DS ?
(nazi) 00:20:906 (2,3,4) - space them more evenly ?
(suggestion) 00:24:656 (4,5,6) - one grid (lvl 2 since that's what you are using) to the left so that the spacing stays even.
(suggestion) 00:31:031 (5,1) - I think this spacing can confuse ~new players... Move (1) further from (5)'s end ?
00:34:031 (5,1) - Same as 00:19:781 -
00:37:781 (5,6,1) - Spacing issue: the time difference is the same but they are not spaced evenly.
01:02:156 (6,1) - Same as 00:19:781 -
01:05:906 (2,3,4) - Spacing issue: the time difference is the same but they are not spaced evenly. Move (4) up to fix it.
01:22:031 (3,4,5) - Confusing stack. Move (4) and (5) away ?

Insane
00:17:553 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly while the time different is the same.
00:24:843 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a previous note. Change the slider's orientation.
00:39:281 (5) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a previous note. Change the slider's orientation.
00:43:593 (6,7,9) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly while the time difference is the same (I'm talking about the stacks of course).
00:46:968 (2,1) - Confusing spacing: I expected (1) to be 1/2 after the previous note. Move it further away ?
00:51:468 (6) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a previous note. Change the slider's orientation.
01:05:906 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst. It would be better to change the slider's orientation to make sure it's readable.
01:19:218 (10) - ^

huang's Easy
Why are this diff's kiai times different from the other diff's ?
This plays a bit weird because it's mapped on the vocals (I think ?) but the vocals are off-beat, so it becomes sometimes confusing.

H-boy's KaGi
huh... give this a standard difficulty name ? if not, say in the map description what kind of difficulty it is supposed to be :/
Hm... nothing really wrong with the diff, but I'd suggest to change the overlapping pattern such as 00:46:031 (1,2,3,4) - as they play really bad and look terrible.