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Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-01-04T11:15:21+00:00

Good luck~
Don't forget add GDers to tags!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-04T20:46:17+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
Good luck~
Don't forget add GDers to tags!

Sure I won't and thanks (:

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-01-05T01:15:54+00:00

Hello o3o7

Mekki

1,795 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-05T01:15:59+00:00

hellow o3o

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2016-01-07T22:23:57+00:00

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues

Combo ColorsCombo1 : 190,229,226
Combo2 : 152,212,208
Combo3 : 123,189,208
Combo4 : 132,169,129

Easy

00:13:642 (2) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:26:733 (4) - Blanket this with (3)

Normal

I feel like you can raise the approach rate to 5.
00:05:642 (5) - Putting the linear node directly on the slidertick allows this to clearly turn precisely on-beat.
00:08:551 (5) - This is a copy so do it here too^

Hard

Raise AR to 7, or at least 6.5, since you use triples.
00:01:279 (1,2) - Move this so that (2)'s start is on 00:02:733 (1) -
00:16:551 (3,4,1) - These can be blanketted together better.
00:18:369 (5) - I don't like how this hits (1) while it snakes out. I don't know exactly what to recommend to fix this, though.
00:19:460 (3,1) - These are blanketted poorly.
00:22:369 (2) - Why not blanket with (1)?
00:25:097 (2) - move this so that it is directly on 00:26:006 (1) - 's slider track.

Auxent's Insane

Keep the combo colors here. Call me old fashioned, but I like guest difficulties with different combocolor sets.
00:02:369 (5,1) - These are blanketted improperly.
00:05:642 (1) - Stacking. don't forget to move 00:06:733 (6) - too.
00:07:097 (1) - Stacking.
00:07:824 (3,4,5) - These three sliders can be made to blanket eachother while having (5) end on (3)'s ending. Best of luck! I had it done but forgot to save it just in case.
00:09:642 (9,10) - Select these two and stack (10) correctly.
00:11:460 (5,6,7) - Technically speaking, these can be stacked with the 10 above there^, but it's hard to notice this.
00:12:915 (1,4) - more stacking that isn't readily apparent, (1)'s ending can be stacked on the same spot! ^
00:14:006 (5,1) - Fix the blanket
00:15:824 (1) - this is not in line with its combo's hexagonal pattern.

Insane

00:02:733 (1,2) - These aren't parallel.
00:09:097 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This star pattern can be way neater.
00:15:460 (4) - not quite perfect. Move last node a tiny bit to the left.
00:16:551 (3) - Doesn't blanket (1), if you care about that.
00:18:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - star pattern pls
00:21:642 (1,3) - These aren't parallel.
00:31:097 (3,4,5,6,1) - I can't tell if this is trying to be a star pattern or an incomplete hexagon pattern. Pick one and make it neat <3
00:36:188 (1) - On every other diff this note has a hitsound.

Deep

See my comments re: combo colors.
00:01:279 (1,7) - Stack these.
00:14:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern can be made perfect.
00:19:642 (6) - The placement of this feels kind of random. Maybe you can find a better spot for it where it isn't budging against the other notes?
00:27:824 (2,4) - Blanket these.
00:32:551 (3) - Stack with previous combo's (8)

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-08T09:40:16+00:00

Thanks Shiirn for modding! Fixed some points.Waiting for Auxent and Bakari

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-01-08T10:56:20+00:00

Applied everything, thanks a lot. The colours although will stay as they are, I'd rather keep mine.

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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-08T12:57:50+00:00

Updated.Waiting for Auxent now! Also changed the combo colours and added the GDers' name to tags

Auxent

Auxent 2016-01-08T15:30:08+00:00

Fixed everything except combo colors. Thank you very much.

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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-08T15:40:45+00:00

Updated!

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2016-01-09T17:59:16+00:00

M4M~

[Easy]
• This diff has different Combo Colours than the other diffs.
• I feel like that the SV is quite high for an Easy, maybe it's just me though.
• 00:11:097 (3,1) - I think you can stack it.
• 00:12:915 (1,2) - I'd suggest to rotate (2) so you can make a clean blanket, this way I get triggered so hard because I'm a blanket lover.

• 00:20:551 (3,4) - If you move (3) more beneath the 2/1 slider and curve (4) a little more you can stack the sliderend of 00:21:642 (1) with (3).
• 00:26:006 (3,4) - You can improve this blanket without having any problems (or probably even less because I kinda dislike the transition of 00:27:460 (1,2) ).
• 00:32:551 (4) - I think it'd be very cool if you'd copy 00:31:824 (3) and rotate it for a very neat flow. It's up to you though.

[Normal]
• 00:16:551 (2,6) - This overlap kind of disturbs me. Maybe change the position of 00:14:369 (4,5,6) a little bit so you can blanket 00:15:824 (1) on the left of (6) and have enough space to not let it overlap?
• 00:21:642 (1,2) - Looks strange somehow. I think the sliderbody should be closer to the sliderend of 00:21:642 (1) .

[Hard]
• I think there's a bit inconsistency with triplets. Imo both kiai parts are exactly the same. There's a triplet at 00:17:824 (2,3,4,5) but not at 00:29:279 (2,3) even though it's the same. Asking it this early because I can't tell if there's a system behind it.
• 00:01:642 (2,1) - Would be cool if the sliderhead of (2) would be completely in the sliderbody in (1) like this. This appears a few times, but it's up to you if you want to change it or not.
• 00:02:733 (1,3) - Isn't there a way to place (3) a bit further away? Of course this isn't a problem, but something like this disturbs me a little sometimes. :v
• 00:08:551 (1,5) - Little but visible overlap.
• 00:11:824 (2,3,4) - The triplet appears too early. It should start 00:12:006 here because you always mapped it to this sound before.
• 00:10:551 (2,4) - Mentioned it above already.
• 00:16:551 (3,1) - Maybe there's a way to blanket it?
• 00:19:279 (2,1) - Too close if you ask me.
• 00:19:460 (3,1) - This looks a bit unclean. I think the only way to fix it is to use more anchors.
• 00:21:642 (1,1) - You probably know. But honestly I have the feeling that you did it on purpose. ;_;
• 00:25:097 (2,1) - Meep. Probably on purpose. If not, at least I mentioned it.

• 00:31:097 (3,1) - Improve blanket (if it's supposed to be one)?

Now it's getting fun, I'm not the best at modding anything above Hard. :v

[Auxent's Insane]
• 00:11:460 (5,1) - Maybe stack them?
• Maybe it's just me, but imo pattern like 00:16:188 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:26:006 (1,2,3,4,5) are weird to play if there's not a strong flow break between the last circle and the slider. At least if you hover them, what the most people do, I think.
• 00:34:369 (6,1) - I think you can also stack them, as there won't be any changes in playability.

Looks great otherwise. c:

[Insane]
• 00:19:460 (5,6,1) - You could improve this little crying blanket.
• 00:28:006 (2,3,4,5) - This one is sad too.

Yeah, I feel bad for not getting much as emphasizing and such are great here.

[Deep]
• 00:14:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the only of all jump pattern where you choose not to do at least 1 bigger jump (I don't let sliderend -> (2) count) which is a bit strange. Definitely noticable for me.
• 00:17:824 (4,5,6) - Shouldn't here be a triplet like in the second Kiai?

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2016-01-09T18:29:09+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Applied everything, thanks a lot. The colours although will stay as they are, I'd rather keep mine.

The comment on combo colors was more directed at "I like it when guest diffs have different combo colors". I liked your colors just fine.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-12T19:30:13+00:00

Thanks for mod Stjpa!Fixed few points from your mod. Waiting for GDers

Auxent

Auxent 2016-01-14T16:44:30+00:00

@Stjpa - Fixed stacks, leaving patterns like it is. Thank you.

osu file format v14

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riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-01-14T17:25:00+00:00

Applied everything, thanks a lot!

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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-14T17:41:18+00:00

Updated!

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-01-14T18:30:22+00:00

In my room, i saw my imagination~

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-01-15T21:57:19+00:00

Hi~

[Insane]

00:08:551 (1,2) - Don't you want to blanket them ?
00:17:824 (2,3,4) - stack them on 00:16:551 (3) - 's tail ?
try to moove 00:24:369 (8) - x:240 and y:140 and 00:24:188 (7) - x:392 y:140 better structure imo
00:24:915 (2) - Ctrl + G imo better flow

[Auxent's Insane]

00:16:551 (4) - increase spacing to emphasize here.
00:31:097 (3) - stack
00:33:279 (1) - ^

[Deep]

00:06:369 (4) - Maybe try to curve it to make 00:06:915 (6) - blanketed
00:15:097 (4) - Maybe moove it to make it blanketed with 00:14:369 (1) - for a better structure imo..
00:19:460 (5) - why u didn't emphasize here, you emphasized this beat all the time exept here.
00:36:188 (1) - i don't really like the choice of a spinner here, why u don't finish like all diff ?

Really nice set ! Love it !

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-01-16T08:02:50+00:00

None of the suggsted blankets are meant to be blankets. The spinner is here for the fading sound and to make scores vary. The one thing about emphasis is fixed, thank you.

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172,348,1733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,348,1824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,368,2006,1,2,0:0:0:0:
111,193,2188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,258,2369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,148,2551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,2733,6,0,P|80:280|36:244,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,104,3097,2,0,P|132:157|108:194,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,48,3460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,8,3642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,68,3824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,20,4006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,104,4188,6,0,P|464:120|392:116,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,214,4551,2,0,P|312:198|384:202,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,249,4915,2,0,P|476:265|404:261,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,356,5278,2,0,P|323:340|395:344,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,344,5551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,350,5642,6,0,L|339:259,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,156,6006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,6188,2,0,P|208:200|176:180,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,6369,2,0,P|216:104|204:44,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,4,6733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,64,6915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,7097,6,0,P|448:212|452:264,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,332,7460,2,0,P|296:288|312:240,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,352,7824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,276,8006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,356,8188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,8369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,304,8551,6,0,L|132:292,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,8915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,184,9097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,9279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
41,197,9460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,40,9642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,112,9824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,12,10006,6,0,P|196:32|136:24,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,116,10369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,10551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,332,10733,2,0,P|232:324|284:328,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,11097,2,0,P|372:259|326:251,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,140,11460,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,296,11642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,212,11824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,12006,2,0,P|336:196|352:168,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,248,12188,2,0,P|404:288|416:348,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,223,12551,2,0,P|209:183|197:123,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,16,12915,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,116,13097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,76,13279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,16,13642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,172,13824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,14006,2,0,P|120:80|180:96,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,14369,6,0,P|44:220|20:156,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,14733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,306,14915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,15097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,364,15279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,336,15460,2,0,P|360:324|412:284,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,56,15824,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,168,16006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,16188,2,0,P|328:304|384:312,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,248,16551,2,0,P|136:296|136:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,16915,2,0,P|84:116|24:112,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,80,17460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,17642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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253,103,18097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,95,18188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,18369,2,0,P|164:268|164:324,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,18733,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,280,18915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,384,19097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,19279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,340,19460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,167,19642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,95,19824,2,0,P|17:56|14:0,1,95
193,0,20188,6,0,P|193:40|173:104,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,236,20551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,20733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,160,20915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,332,21097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,132,21279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,21460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,21642,6,0,P|284:284|248:248,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,348,22006,2,0,P|160:348|208:336,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,228,22369,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,276,22551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,296,22733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,196,22915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,52,23097,6,0,P|36:88|8:148,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,23460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,23642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,320,23824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,208,24006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,24188,2,0,L|372:236,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,24551,6,0,P|336:80|288:124,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,24915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,20,25097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,148,25279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,268,25460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,88,25642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,25824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,332,26006,6,0,P|376:336|316:368,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,26369,2,0,P|256:264|304:284,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,26733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,16,26915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,108,27460,6,0,P|292:80|268:28,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,27824,2,0,P|162:128|221:121,1,95
304,264,28188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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356,160,28551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-16T08:42:24+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
Hi~

[Insane]
00:08:551 (1,2) - Don't you want to blanket them ? It looks blanketed to me o.o
00:17:824 (2,3,4) - stack them on 00:16:551 (3) - 's tail ? nah.also it isn't visible in game so it couldn't be considered as an overlap
try to moove 00:24:369 (8) - x:240 and y:140 and 00:24:188 (7) - x:392 y:140 better structure imo sure fixed
00:24:915 (2) - Ctrl + G imo better flow it flows fine to me o_o
Really nice set ! Love it ! Thanks!

Thanks for mod Sotarks! Waiting for Auxent

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2016-01-16T09:24:50+00:00

M4M~

[Easy]
00:12:915 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these a little better? it's only a little bit off

Not much to say really xD

[Normal]
00:07:097 (1,5) - I'd try to get rid of this overlap, it's kinda an eyesore imo
00:13:642 (2,6) - ^
00:16:551 (2,6) - ^
00:33:279 (1,4) - ^

It might be just me but i don't really like overlaps like that in a normal cause it makes it look kinda cluttered and messy when it should be really easy to see everything for newer players

[Hard]
00:02:551 (4,2) - tiny overlap that looks unintentional

[Auxent's Insane]
00:08:551 (5) - NC to stay with pattern
00:11:460 (5) - ^
why nc 00:16:915 (1) - instead of 00:17:279 (2) - for consitency

[Insane]
I like dis

[Deep]
00:09:279 (4,5) - idk if i'd stack these ( i think it's the only 1/2 stack in the whole map)

Not much imo, seems solid

wasin

wasin 2016-01-16T16:26:12+00:00

M4M

General: fine

Easy
00:13:642 (2) - Seem this slider it doesn't fit, make sure this slider blanket with 00:12:915 (1) - In my opinion if you want to make it perfect you can move the end of slider(2) a bit down, it could be better than your own

00:32:551 (4) - Make this straight slider to be curve slider for better flow with 00:33:279 (1) - ???

Normal
00:21:642 (1,2,3) - It could be better if you do something about these notes to be this it makes better flow and more pretty shape.

00:31:642 (3) - Can you move this circle depart from 00:31:824 (4) - a bit, i think is too close

00:35:460 (5) - Seem here the blanket looks ugly, can u fix the blanket ?

Hard
00:09:642 (5) - Again if you look carefully the blanket doesn't balance with 00:08:551 (1) - , but if you don't mind it's ok

00:13:642 (3) - Looks strange, make it better flow with 00:14:369 (1) - by change this slider to be curve slider is the best choice

00:31:824 (1) - ^

Auxent's Insane
00:08:551 (5) - NC here for short combo

00:11:460 (5) - ^

00:26:551 (4) - In my opinion move circle(4) to X:236 Y:292 is the to make the difference of 00:26:006 (1,2,3,4) - these circles the same.

Insane
00:06:733 (5) - Fix the blanket ?

00:12:188 (3,4) - I saw a circle(3) higher than slider(4) a bit, i suggest you move the circle(3) a bit down like this 00:12:915 (1,2) -

Sorry for Deep diff I don't have enough experience to modding diff above 4 stars

Overall good song, suggest before sleep just listen to the song it makes your dream so cool, gl on ranking

Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2016-01-16T23:14:47+00:00

too many overlaps /me dies

general

there is only equalizer in the SB, why u disabled the widescreen support lol
it looks really not good

epilepsy warning because of sb? idk actually, probably its not really needed

ez

sv 1.0 for 165 bpm in easy? are you sure about this?

00:04:915 (2,1) - really not nice overlap

00:08:551 (3) - actually touches the HP bar if it is full

00:23:824 (4) - this is too curved. maybe u will do a blanket here with 00:23:097 (3,4) - third slider?

00:26:006 (3) - what about changing direction a bit and doing a blanket with the next slider. this way will works much better imo

00:31:824 (3) - this blanket can be improved

nurml

00:07:097 (1,5) - really not cool overlap

00:18:006 (6) - why

00:31:642 (3,4) - check the spacing here, its a bit different from other places

00:34:733 (4,5) - improve this blanket please xd boo (why ppl dont like to use blankets at all ;_;)

hard

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
tons of overlaps ;_;
should i mention them?
they do nothing at playing, but map really doesnt look careful

00:06:733 (5,1) - is it so hard?

00:14:733 - sound here is much stronger than 00:14:915 - here lol. also i got a slider break when i played it caz it brokes the rhytm

00:20:188 (1) - why it is so hard to do smth like this? looks much better imo

00:26:733 (2,1) - same thing again ^

00:34:733 (1,1) - fix at least this overlap, caz its really strange

auxent

od 6? we have it already in hard. change to 7 or at least 6.5

00:08:551 (5) 00:11:460 (5) - missed NCs i guess

00:18:369 (7,4) - correct the overlap here

00:20:551 (3,4) - maybe u will make them more similar? this way doesnt look nice caz most of your sliders are copies of the ones that were before

00:31:824 (5) - NC

00:32:551 (7,1) - u can stack this better

00:34:369 (6,1) - stack the circle with the head of the slider, will look much better imo, no need in these overlaps

00:34:733 (1,2,3,4) - kinda random jumps as there are no changes in music at all xd

ins

looks much better than ur prevouse diff. more careful i guess

00:13:642 (4,5) - maybe try this

00:21:642 (1) - if u are using a straight line, flow should be like this boom
, so better move this to x=246 y=129

00:28:188 (4,5) - maybe a normal blanket here?

бакари

00:02:188 (6,2) - можно стакнуть и получше

00:02:006 (5,6) - какой-то сомнительный джамп учитывая то, что стронг бит находится на (5) серкле

00:11:097 (5,5) - какой-то уж совсем не очень оверлап

00:18:097 (6,7) - обязательно делать разный спейсинг? или это ошибка

00:30:733 (3,1) - а ведь можно было сделать аккуратный бланкет, эх, не нравится мне эта неаккуратность

00:35:460 (4,5) - а вот здесь должен быть (как и здесь 00:35:824 (6) - ) 1/2 слайдер, поскольку звуки 00:35:460 (4) - и 00:35:824 (6) - тут одинаковы

i really dislike those overlaps (exspecially in the hard diff), but who cares?

anyway, gl

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2016-01-17T10:27:10+00:00

hello ByBy13, I'm here for m4m.

[General]

the storyboard has some issue. I'm not sure if it was intended but here it is... the storyboard freeze in 00:18:915 - till 00:19:188 ; here 00:24:551 - 00:24:642 ; and here 00:35:460.

[Easy]

00:10:006 (1,2) - I think it will be better if you swap these. slider first and then note. it should be good to emphasize the music.
00:11:460 (4) - slightly ugly imo. try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4352340

[Normal]

00:26:733 (5) - just my preference, I prefer to bent up this slider.
00:30:369 (1) - move the red point to 276,96.
00:31:824 (4) - make this a 1/1 slider. slider end at 00:32:188
00:34:733 (4) - this too. try it.

[Hard]

00:06:188 (2,3,4,5,1) - the triplet doesn't feel right. try this (you can also apply my pattern if you want) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4352365
00:07:733 (3) - delete this. doesn't fit with the music.
00:08:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this kind of rhythm and preferably this pattern too. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4352388 . and the hitsound will be like
00:08:551 (1) - whistle on head only ; 00:08:915 (2) - no hitsound ; 00:09:097 (3) - whistle on head only ; 00:09:460 (4) - no hitsound ; and 00:09:642 (5) - whistle on head only
00:21:097 (3,4) - you really should swap this. note first then slider.

[Auxent's Insane]
nothing found

[Insane]

00:15:006 - you can add a note here if you want.
00:16:460 - this too ^

[Deep]

00:09:279 (4,5) - this is weird. 5 should never be stacked. sorry I don't have any idea to fix this but you should try to change it because the flow is bad in that part.

[]
that's all. very sorry for short and poor mod. :'(

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-01-17T10:54:30+00:00

Rukaru wrote:
hello ByBy13, I'm here for m4m.

[General]
the storyboard has some issue. I'm not sure if it was intended but here it is... the storyboard freeze in 00:18:915 - till 00:19:188 ; here 00:24:551 - 00:24:642 ; and here 00:35:460.

Hah? freeze? it's working here! <__<
Well, I used from XinCrin program, and yep, it's working here!

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2016-01-17T11:26:57+00:00

...I don't know. it's happening here.
nevertheless, if yours is working then it's fine. maybe it just me.

Auxent

Auxent 2016-01-17T12:37:38+00:00

@Rukaru It freezes to me too.
Just wanted to say thank you to all modders for modding my difficulty. I have applied all of you suggestions.
Because I didn't have better job to do, I've fixed and improved storyboard a little.
@Byby13: Before you will apply the new storyboard, remove from .osu files the "//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)" lines because KittyAdventure left "Diff.Specific" function turned on or probably he copied it into the wrong files. The sprites should be labeled with "bar.png". Also don't forget to remove bar.png from your current SB folder.

Here we go.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-17T12:58:12+00:00

Thanks Auxent for SB improvement!

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-01-17T13:10:36+00:00

Auxent wrote:
@Rukaru It freezes to me too.
Just wanted to say thank you to all modders for modding my difficulty. I have applied all of you suggestions.
Because I didn't have better job to do, I've fixed and improved storyboard a little.
@Byby13: Before you will apply the new storyboard, remove from .osu files the "//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)" lines because KittyAdventure left "Diff.Specific" function turned on or probably he copied it into the wrong files. The sprites should be labeled with "bar.png". Also don't forget to remove bar.png from your current SB folder.

Here we go.

I already send a osu. file with not sb again but idk why byby13 not apply with i send sb used osb. file <__<
Thank you, Auxent~ <3

edit: auxent: why your spectrum is 2?

here, i help you to remove:

Auxent's Insane

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: In my room.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 1279
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:In my room
TitleUnicode:In my room
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:ByBy13
Version:Auxent's Insane
Source:
Tags:Grow Color Auxent Bakari ByBy_ChAn
BeatmapID:871027
BeatmapSetID:399061

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"c98Cn5k.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 132,115,200
Combo3 : 176,198,197

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Last edited by Kyouren 2016-01-17T13:15:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-01-17T13:11:04+00:00

Xellie wrote:
[Deep]
00:09:279 (4,5) - idk if i'd stack these ( i think it's the only 1/2 stack in the whole map) Let's keep it as it does the emphasis thing for the intro quite well.

Not much imo, seems solid

Slayed wrote:
бакари

00:02:188 (6,2) - можно стакнуть и получше все-равно не видно в игре \w/

00:02:006 (5,6) - какой-то сомнительный джамп учитывая то, что стронг бит находится на (5) серкле в этом и суть, что после (5) игрок прыгает.

00:11:097 (5,5) - какой-то уж совсем не очень оверлап да ну, его же не видно в игре?

00:18:097 (6,7) - обязательно делать разный спейсинг? или это ошибка ошибка, конечно же ;c

00:30:733 (3,1) - а ведь можно было сделать аккуратный бланкет, эх, не нравится мне эта неаккуратность бланкет, который никто не увидит. зачем портить флоу ради сомнительного улучшения видимого только в редакторе?

00:35:460 (4,5) - а вот здесь должен быть (как и здесь 00:35:824 (6) - ) 1/2 слайдер, поскольку звуки 00:35:460 (4) - и 00:35:824 (6) - тут одинаковы но слайдер выходит на конец дифы и стоит для выделения фэйд-аута, а джампы следуют сильным битам

@Rukaru How come that the stack here is bad? For the intro part it works just fine, creating an emphasis on the beat with a stop in the flow. Care to explain what exactly is wrong with it?

Thank you for the mods, here is the code. *clickie*

Now, can somebody please, explain why is the SB in .osu files? And why does it freeze at the points already mentioned by Rukaru?

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-01-17T18:55:09+00:00

M4M (as I requested IG)

General

- You can add Touhou as a source since this is Touhou Arranged after all.
- And you can add NAGI☆ to the tags since she is the one who arranged it.
source: http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Grow_Color

Deep

- I think you can up the volume in the kiai time. Not by much though, only to 55%
- 00:01:733 (3) - I can't hear this note in the song. You dont have to delete it though as it plays fine.
- 00:06:188 (3) - Dont think It would hurt to CTRL+G this. It plays better in my opinion.
- 00:09:279 (4,5) - Not sure why you'd stack these. The song says otherwise.
- 00:18:006 (5,6,7) - I think it would be better if you spaced them out a little more so the player stays moving.
- 00:36:188 (1) - This spinner shouldnt be too loud since the song is fading out. Maybe even delete spinner?

Decent difficulty.

Insane

- I think you can up the volume in the kiai time. Not by much though, only to 55%
- 00:15:006 - A triple here would make it play better.
- 00:01:733 (3) - I can't hear this note in the song. You dont have to delete it though as it plays fine.
-00:10:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt look too good. tried something real quick

Couldn't find more to be honest. Pretty good.

Auxent's Insane

- HP6?
- I think you can up the volume in the kiai time. Not by much though, only to 55%
- 00:32:551 (7,8,1) - This felt kinda weird the first time i played it since 8 wants me to go down right. Not a big deal, just a missread I guess.
- 00:11:642 (2) - Move this up a bit?

Very good!

Hard

- There is alooot of movement to be a hard difficulty. Not big of a deal though.
- I think you can up the volume in the kiai time. Not by much though, only to 55%
- OD6 is too high. Put OD5
- 00:10:006 (1,3) - I really want to make these symmetrical, but that might ruin the spacing.
- 00:19:460 (3,1) - Blanket (if it works)
- 00:21:642 (1,2) - Not too fond with these flows, especiually in lower difficulties. It disorients the player, so I suggest you come up with something else

Best diff in looks.

Hope you liked the mod. Very good map indeed, so have a star.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

meii18 2016-01-17T19:32:57+00:00

Perhaps I will apply the mods tomorrow or tuesday if my PC will be at repairing since I have the screen broken
Thanks for mods guys! @Bakari: Can you remove what's under Storyboard Layer 3 and resend the osu. file? Because I've changed the SB and I can't update your difficulty

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-01-17T20:32:04+00:00

м4м
modding is pretty fun

[Easy]

00:08:551 (3) - move red dot to tick for aesthetics? too nazi lol
00:23:097 (3,4) - meh, this blanket, maybe improve it?

00:27:460 (1,4) - maybe create a blanket here? will look nice

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00:30:369 (1,3) - ^same thing

[Normal]

00:04:188 (1,3) - make it parallel? now it's looks randomly (for me). Also ctrl+j will good too http://puu.sh/mzlRj/318bda28ef.jpg
00:07:824 (3) - move to 188 324 for nice triangle patterns
00:15:097 (6,1) - just a suggestion http://puu.sh/mzm3n/250861869d.jpg. just looks uncomfortable for me lol
00:34:733 (4,5) - ;_; pls improve this blanket

[Hard]

00:02:006 (3) - tail of this slider looks too weird for me. It does not make any sense lol. although you can make it like 00:03:279 (2) - . this fine
00:06:279 (3) - ~~i can't hear to sound here, so i think that this is overmapped~~ okay, sound here but too hard to hear it lol
00:16:551 (3,1) - maybe try to make blanket?
00:18:369 (5) - this overlap lol
00:19:460 (3,1) - here you can improve the blanket i guess
00:21:642 (1) - this flow looks a bit awkward. Maybe use ctrl+j to 00:22:369 (2) -
00:26:006 (1) - 145 348 for aesthetics

[Auxent's Insane]

00:09:279 (3,4,5,6) - i'm not sure that this this square is right, recheck it pls
00:11:642 (2) - move a bit down for right straight flow
00:14:369 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:09:279 (3,4,5,6)
00:15:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - recheck this pentagon, not right again lll
00:34:006 (5) - uncomfortable for game. Stack with 00:33:279 (1) - will be nice since you continue a nice square flow
00:34:733 (1,2,3,4) - just like this more http://puu.sh/mzo1T/730070729c.jpg
00:36:188 (1) - move to 420 88 (for straight flow like other diffs)

[Insane]

00:10:006 (1,6) - overlapp, maybe fix it?
00:12:006 (1) - why nc?
00:30:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - don't like this flow, just a my suggestion http://puu.sh/mzorE/6406cecb79.jpg
00:31:824 (1) - meh this form, simple sliderwawe will be better
00:32:369 (2,3,4,5) - straight flow hard for playing here, how about http://puu.sh/mzoyT/2c9a10ddc0.jpg?
00:34:733 (1) - stack with end of 00:34:006 (4) - will be more accurate

[B a k a r i]

00:08:188 (5,1) - слишком близко как-то, не очень комфортно чувствуется. Подними слайдер немного вверх
00:09:279 (4,5) - такое себе флоу, тут стак с концом слайдера вообще идеально смотрелся бы

Last edited by FCL 2016-01-18T12:41:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-01-18T04:37:32+00:00

Hi. Here for M4M. Hope this helps!

[General]

00:05:642 (1) – In my opinion, the hitsounds are a little loud compared to the music since the song is calm. Maybe try lowering the volume in the .mp3 file or reduce the audio on these green lines?

There were a lot of places where blankets were off, so I'm guessing you don't care about them, so I won't mention them.

[Deep]

Each measure of the song in the kiai section has the same level of spacing going on. While this does go with the music, it might be nice for the player to have moments of rest to break up some of the repetitive spacing. This is pretty subjective, and I wouldn't be surprised if this lead to an awkward pattern in the exact way I'm suggesting, but try reducing the spacing at 00:24:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – by doing something like Ctrl + Shift + S by .8 or .9 to give a small rest here. I suggest here because the volume does this thing where it gets quiet at the beginning of the measure and then grows later, but see if there are other measures you can change instead or in addition where a change in the level of spacing would go with the music from a global perspective.

00:31:642 (8,1) – This spacing is pretty low compared to the other downbeats in this section. Am I just not picking up your intention behind this inconsistency, or would moving (1) to around 312, 128 and possibly rotating it feel nicer?

[Insane]

00:07:642 (2,3,4) – Recheck the rhythm here. It sounds to me like the ¼ note occurs in the melody at 00:07:915 – and not at (3) (Comments below very related).
00:10:551 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:05:642 (1) – Starting here, each measure has a ¼ triple in it. Then at the kiai's you reduce the number of triples. This makes the pacing of the map odd since at the beginning, the section is slightly less intense, but is emphasized more than the kiai. Secondly, the Deep difficulty didn't use this many ¼ triples here, so it's odd that a lower difficulty uses harder rhythms (which could be an issue with Deep instead)

00:26:733 (5,1) – The overlap here is so minor that it looks odd. Can you rotate (1) so that they don't overlap?

00:31:824 (1) – Why use the red anchor in a way that makes the slider not continuous? I tend to like the design of smoother sliders like this rough example: http://puu.sh/mzq5J/9a57ab1ee4.jpg

[Auxent's Insane]

00:02:006 (4,5) – Just me, but I tend to like it more when sliders flow more smoothly into each other like: http://puu.sh/mzr0E/275e5d3b04.jpg
00:19:460 (3,4) – This kind of pattern is very self disruptive with the curvature of (3) going against the flow from (2) and then an anti-flow with the flow into (4). If you want to break up the circular undertones, why not use more back and forth flow, like maybe: http://puu.sh/mzSp0/df16c13a93.jpg
00:08:551 (1,2,3) – I don't think you need (2) to be a flip of (1), it's fine being a rotation. So try rotating (2) by 20 degrees like: http://puu.sh/mzQjc/e4490ef991.jpg
00:25:279 (3,4) - ^ (I don't think you need the blanket, try: http://puu.sh/mzskX/6f04102729.jpg)
00:07:824 (3,4) – ^ (make room by taking the suggestion below or by moving 00:06:006 (2) - up)

00:04:551 (3,4) – I'd like to see one of two changes. You can make these more symmetrical (For instance: http://puu.sh/mzrGP/71f203877c.jpg the red line is perpendicular to one slider at its midpoint and the black line is the same for the other. If the sliders were symmetrical, these would be the same line). The other way you can change this is to do what you do at 00:10:733 (3,4) – and go for a more diamond shape

00:08:915 (2,3,4,5,6) – The structure here looks a bit odd due to inconsistent spacing and angles. Why not just make a square off of polygon creator?

00:10:006 (1) – Consider making this curved instead?

00:16:551 (4,5) – Why have the spacing here by 1.6x? Isn't 00:16:551 (4) - a stronger note because of the hitsound, which would hence make the jump more appropriate into this? Doing so would also set you up for a more symmetrical trapezoid on 00:16:188 (2,3,4,5) - .

00:21:279 (5,6) – Why the high spacing between these? It seems like the volume and pitch are getting lower, which I think a lower spacing fits better.

00:23:097 (1,2,3,4) – You could have a nicer pentagon/hexagon looking pattern here if you make the angle at (1,2,3) be the same as (2,3,4)

00:32:551 (7,8) – Why aren't these mirrored? I think it would look nicer/more cohesive if one was a flip of the other.

00:34:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) – The intention behind the jump into (3) is to go with the melody right? I'm like this, but there's also a strong note on (5) in the melody, and it feels like it starts something that's separate from the previous notes of (2,3). So I think this should also get a jump (a smaller jump to reflect the lowering pitch/volume, but a spacing larger than the normal DS fits nicely here). Try moving (5) to ~323, 151 and (6,1) to 432, 327: http://puu.sh/mzDo2/91114a0d73.jpg

[Hard]

00:01:642 (2,3) – This is kind of a general remark about the spacing of the map, but to me this feels like too big a jump. I see the intention so I'm okay if you stick with it, just giving my perspective on this.

00:02:551 (4,2) – In my view, there's a lot of awkward-looking overlaps like this one. I'd try to stack more often or move slightly so they don't overlap
00:12:551 (5,3) – like this one could be stacked
00:19:279 (2,1) – and these could be moved slightly. etc
00:21:642 (1) – moving this to 162, 142 would stack on the midpoint which might look nice.

00:08:551 (1,5) – These could blanket nicer or 00:09:279 (4,5) – could be more symmetrical, or even just making (4,5) have the same curve. I much prefer the symmetry (rough example: http://puu.sh/mzCMn/a144b15e76.jpg) which could be set up by rotating/not curving 00:08:551 (1) – as much and/or giving up the blanket at 00:08:551 (1,4) - . Alternatively, don't try to relate 00:08:551 (1,5) – and just curve away like: http://puu.sh/mzCUS/e9ea65d194.jpg

00:20:733 – It's probably just me, but I always think there's a click here because of the melody, which makes me dislike the long slider. Maybe if the spacing into (2) was smaller, I could read this more easily, but idk, it's hard to see what I can add without taking too much of what you want.

[Normal]

00:01:279 (1) – Consider giving this a counter-clockwise curve?

00:30:369 (1,4) – Why aren't these copy-pasted? I think it would make the pattern more cohesive. Also, 00:23:097 (4) – is the best of the three sliders, so I would use this instead. If the point was to do something like emphasizing the note at 00:30:733 - , then I would move the red anchor to ~308, 86 to better reflect that

[Easy]

00:01:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – The flow is very similar here across each measure. It would have been nice if 00:08:551 (3) – was ctrl H'd to give the map balance across the screen since the whole beginning has x<256. I could see this being a way to set up emphasis for 00:12:915 (1) - , but idk if it's worth it.

00:31:824 (3,4,1) – Might be nicer if this had some symmetry (not necessarily across the y-axis, any line of symmetry will do)

riffy

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riffy 2016-01-18T14:02:43+00:00

DavidEd wrote:
Deep
- I think you can up the volume in the kiai time. Not by much though, only to 55% I'd keep it as it is, I like the effect the current level gives
- 00:01:733 (3) - I can't hear this note in the song. You dont have to delete it though as it plays fine. But there is a note, and it does sound strong enough to be mapped
- 00:06:188 (3) - Dont think It would hurt to CTRL+G this. It plays better in my opinion. Not really happy with the flow it results in, sorry
- 00:09:279 (4,5) - Not sure why you'd stack these. The song says otherwise. I guess this didn't work the way I wanted it to. Let's kill the stack
- 00:18:006 (5,6,7) - I think it would be better if you spaced them out a little more so the player stays moving. Good point.
- 00:36:188 (1) - This spinner shouldnt be too loud since the song is fading out. Maybe even delete spinner? Did some stuff to it, will keep it, though.

Decent difficulty.

Done @FCL

I doubt that players of the target skill level will get stressed with such a kiai section. It does feel a bit tiring, but I think it's just right for the hardest diff. Fixed the other thing, though.@pinataman

thanks, guys!

*Clickie*

Auxent

Auxent 2016-01-18T19:20:04+00:00

Thanks for your mods.

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meii18

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meii18 2016-01-18T19:47:38+00:00

Thanks! I will apply the mods once I will get my PC back from repairing ;_;

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2016-01-18T21:13:55+00:00

Spectrum is not centered, you should fix this, it looks a bit bad

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-01-19T06:57:10+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Spectrum is not centered, you should fix this, it looks a bit bad

Auxent!!!!! =___="

I will reworking again, because Auxent doing! -___-"

Rukaru

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Rukaru 2016-01-19T12:47:11+00:00

Bakari wrote:
@Rukaru How come that the stack here is bad? For the intro part it works just fine, creating an emphasis on the beat with a stop in the flow. Care to explain what exactly is wrong with it?

okay, in my opinion it doesn't emphasize anything. from my perspective, the music didn't suggest to use a stacked note. I don't hear any sound that told you to stop there. they 00:09:279 (4,5) - also have different sound thus stacking is not recommended. the flow might be fine but I feel the stack here is forced.

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