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Bara-
Heyo

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Strange thing, this seems to happen for most of the maps I check nowadays, is it maybe something which happened on my PC (as I recently added some "images" to music to send it to my iPhone

[tfot]
00:01:193 (2) - Please s[ace them, a stack felt rather awkward, as the music sounds like 1/4 (or is it 1/6?)
00:24:740 (4) - To keep consistency, NC this as well (to Nc every beat)
00:25:089 (6) - ^^
00:25:786 (1,1) - This jump is rather awkward, due to high spacing, and having the same DS as the next 1/4 objects. People might think (1) starts at the blue tick, and therefore miss
01:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate it pleast, so it flow better into the next set of objects, like you do with the next 8 notes!
01:46:368 (1) - Why is there an NC?
02:04:507 (4,7) - NC both for more emphasis on the beat
02:08:926 (1) - Shouldn't it start 1/6 earlier?
02:55:786 (1) - OMG SUCH A NICE SLIDER
03:33:635 (2) - Please Ctrl G to make it a bit more easier to hit
03:33:984 (2) - ^^
03:34:333 (2) - ^^
04:39:653 (8,1) - Why is this at a lower DS compared to the rest?
04:54:740 (5,1) - ^^
04:58:926 (1) - Since the music is quite silent in the break, why not stack it under 04:58:519 (1) - to give it more emphasis

I love this map
I hope your GD will be like this :P
Call me when it's fixed for bubble
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]

Black Emptiness wrote:

the faith of truth:
* 00:31:629 (4,1) - Aesthetically speaking, this connection between these two notes is not nice. Try to use the same distance snap or move the stream (starts from 00:31:717 (1) - ) down. I think it fits nicely here, emphasizing on the change in beat at 00:31:717 (1) - where it gets less intense, that's why the spacing in lower starting from here
* 01:13:578 (3) - This note is really hard to read. I recommend to place it where slider 01:13:926 (1) - starts. It's pretty fine here. No issues from various testplays I've seen
* 01:45:845 (8,9,1,2) - It would be nice to see the same stream shape as here: 01:46:629 (4,5,6,7,8) - . I tried using curvy pattern before for that pattern, it doesn't seem it fits the pattern with the upcoming curvy stream
* 02:05:903 (1) - New combo is unnecessary here. That NC is to clearly tell that there's a change in rhythm starting from this point.
* 02:08:926 (1) - Same here. Similar, NC use to identify that this slider is different from the others
* 02:26:484 (3,1) - You can blanket 02:26:484 (3) - a bit better. Looks perfect to me
* 02:28:228 (1,2,3,4) - Is this "not stacking" on purpose? If not, you should fix it. This is intentional
* 02:43:577 (1,2,3,4) - Try Ctrl+J. It will look better. I'll stick to my current pattern, looks nice as it is
* 04:15:321 (1) - The slider is occupied by a circle-shaped stream and it's quite bad to read. As I mentioned before, maybe placing it somewhere else would help. Is not really that difficult to read due to the high AR
* 04:41:396 (4,1,2) - Make a round pattern / cleaner pattern (not sharp) like you did before with the "8 pattern". The reason why I didn't stick with the "8" stream pattern here because there's obvious change in the song intensity here

This is my first mod and first post. I didn't find anything else.

He's right ^
Good luck, Scarlet.
Thanks for the mod! Sorry for being stubborn though :? Will get to yours soon!

Bara- wrote:

Heyo

[General]
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Strange thing, this seems to happen for most of the maps I check nowadays, is it maybe something which happened on my PC (as I recently added some "images" to music to send it to my iPhone
Pretty sure these files aren't in my folder
[tfot]
00:01:193 (2) - Please s[ace them, a stack felt rather awkward, as the music sounds like 1/4 (or is it 1/6?) Kinda, changed direction here
00:24:740 (4) - To keep consistency, NC this as well (to Nc every beat) Hmm, alright
00:25:089 (6) - ^^ Don't think there's a need for NC for this though
00:25:786 (1,1) - This jump is rather awkward, due to high spacing, and having the same DS as the next 1/4 objects. People might think (1) starts at the blue tick, and therefore miss Most testplays I've seen so far doesn't have a problem playing this part. Hmm, I'll reduce 00:25:786 (1) - by 1/8 beat then
01:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate it pleast, so it flow better into the next set of objects, like you do with the next 8 notes! Alright~
01:46:368 (1) - Why is there an NC? The piano at this part is rather different than the one before, also a small change in stream spacing at this point too
02:04:507 (4,7) - NC both for more emphasis on the beat Alright~
02:08:926 (1) - Shouldn't it start 1/6 earlier? Actually the beat clearly starts at 02:08:926 - that's why I map it there. But then feels a little off starting 1/6 later than the red tick. Will follow yours then
02:55:786 (1) - OMG SUCH A NICE SLIDER Thanks~ 8-)
03:33:635 (2) - Please Ctrl G to make it a bit more easier to hit Yup, it is
03:33:984 (2) - ^^ ^
03:34:333 (2) - ^^ ^
04:39:653 (8,1) - Why is this at a lower DS compared to the rest? Adjusted the whole streams here
04:54:740 (5,1) - ^^ Adjusted whole 1/4 slider jumps here
04:58:926 (1) - Since the music is quite silent in the break, why not stack it under 04:58:519 (1) - to give it more emphasis Nah, feel really awkward to remain on the same spot for the last name. Making it further also complements well with the finish too!

I love this map
I hope your GD will be like this :P
Call me when it's fixed for bubble
Thanks for the mod Bara- :D
I remapped the entire last section since it is rather awkward to play. See if it is okay @@
Bara-
i believe in you
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]
Thanks Bara- <3
Kyrzer
Nothing i can really do here, all i can do is shoot a kudosu star <3

Nice map btw :3
ffstar
holy shiet it is bubbled OwO so mow
where 2nd bubble..................
SYAHME
I like your mapping style, go approved.
BeatofIke
Minor things fixed. Good luck!
This is bubble #2~
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]

arronlim13 wrote:

Nothing i can really do here, all i can do is shoot a kudosu star <3

Nice map btw :3
Sorry for the late reply. Thanks for the star! :D

ffstar0716 wrote:

holy shiet it is bubbled OwO so mow
where 2nd bubble..................
OwO

SYAHME wrote:

I like your mapping style, go approved.
Thanks~ Working on it!

BeatofIke wrote:

Minor things fixed. Good luck!
This is bubble #2~
Thanks for the bubble~ :)
Bara-
Wow nice
ffstar
this is happening
Rumia-
gogo yapzor
pishifat
snapping stuff:
01:08:693 (3) - snapping in entirely 1/6 or separating between 1/8 and 1/6 is more acceptable. the part before the red tick is sort of ambiguous about snapping and the part afterwards is clearly 1/6, so like using 1/8 for 1/6 doesnt really work
01:17:763 (3) - same as 01:17:589 (2) - (so 1/6). mapping the same thing in the song with differnet rhythm is umwhat
01:26:048 (3,4,5) - 3 is 1/6 then 4 and 5 are 1/4
01:31:194 (3,4,5) - 1/6
01:43:054 (3) - 1/4
some piano stuff in the kiais aren't exactly right, but i think those were discussed on rlc's map with the result of "just do whatever sounds ok snapping is dumb there"

not snapping stuff:
01:29:275 (1,2,3) - and 01:29:973 (1,2,1) - song is repeating the same rhythm for so rhythm should reflect that
02:05:554 (1) - transitions into the 1/3 section better if tail of this is snapped in 1/3 as well
02:08:228 (3) - sv change isnt being applied because green line is in the wrong place
03:10:002 - missing something on the main instrument (which you prioritize everywhere after here)
03:26:833 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:28:228 (2,3,4,5) - can't tell what you're trying to follow with rhythm here. 03:27:095 (4) - makes me think you want to follow the main instrument, but you ignore the same sounds on 03:26:920 - 03:27:443 - . be clearer about what you're following in the music here
03:28:926 (1) - holy strongest sound of the phrase and it's on a sliderend could you like do something about it
03:34:682 (2) - are u missing a repeat on this lol
03:59:275 (1) - song is really making these blue ticks stand out. rhythm should show that
04:43:228 (1,2) - a lot more intuitive to click between each white tick rather than on some 1/6 tick

if you can do something about these i'll rebub
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]

pishifat wrote:

snapping stuff:
01:08:693 (3) - snapping in entirely 1/6 or separating between 1/8 and 1/6 is more acceptable. the part before the red tick is sort of ambiguous about snapping and the part afterwards is clearly 1/6, so like using 1/8 for 1/6 doesnt really work
Yea, changing to 1/6 should solve the problem
01:17:763 (3) - same as 01:17:589 (2) - (so 1/6). mapping the same thing in the song with differnet rhythm is umwhat
Changed this small section to 1/6
01:26:048 (3,4,5) - 3 is 1/6 then 4 and 5 are 1/4
Alright
01:31:194 (3,4,5) - 1/6
ALright
01:43:054 (3) - 1/4
Don't think so, clearly sounds like a 1/6 to me
some piano stuff in the kiais aren't exactly right, but i think those were discussed on rlc's map with the result of "just do whatever sounds ok snapping is dumb there"
Well, hopefully is fine for mine xd
not snapping stuff:
01:29:275 (1,2,3) - and 01:29:973 (1,2,1) - song is repeating the same rhythm for so rhythm should reflect that
Didn't really notice that lel, fixed!
02:05:554 (1) - transitions into the 1/3 section better if tail of this is snapped in 1/3 as well
Alright
02:08:228 (3) - sv change isnt being applied because green line is in the wrong place
LOL, never noticed this. Fixed!
03:10:002 - missing something on the main instrument (which you prioritize everywhere after here)
Followed the rhythm from other similar parts
03:26:833 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:28:228 (2,3,4,5) - can't tell what you're trying to follow with rhythm here. 03:27:095 (4) - makes me think you want to follow the main instrument, but you ignore the same sounds on 03:26:920 - 03:27:443 - . be clearer about what you're following in the music here
Hopefully is fine now xd
03:28:926 (1) - holy strongest sound of the phrase and it's on a sliderend could you like do something about it
Alright
03:34:682 (2) - are u missing a repeat on this lol
Never really noticed this lel, fixed!
03:59:275 (1) - song is really making these blue ticks stand out. rhythm should show that
Yup, followed your rhythm
04:43:228 (1,2) - a lot more intuitive to click between each white tick rather than on some 1/6 tick
Alright
if you can do something about these i'll rebub
Thanks for your mod and time! :D
Err, do I need to ask the previous BNs to rebubble too?
Bara-
Since he popped yes
When he rebubbles ask me for a recheck
Sadly enough you can't ask BeatofIke anymore since he's no longer a BN
pishifat

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

01:43:054 (3) - 1/4
Don't think so, clearly sounds like a 1/6 to me
object 2 is clearly 1/6, but 3 is clearly 1/4 :( they're the same instrument so comparing should make it obvious

and u ended up changing 01:17:938 (4) - for some pattern thing but it's still 1/4, not 1/6 :(

:(
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]

pishifat wrote:

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

01:43:054 (3) - 1/4
Don't think so, clearly sounds like a 1/6 to me
object 2 is clearly 1/6, but 3 is clearly 1/4 :( they're the same instrument so comparing should make it obvious

and u ended up changing 01:17:938 (4) - for some pattern thing but it's still 1/4, not 1/6 :(

:(
LOL, at first I tried listening to these two parts at 25%, the 1/6 seems really obvious here. But when I play it at 75%, 1/4 beat becomes more apparent. Oh god. Anyway, changed these parts to 1/4 :D
pishifat
9223372036854775807
Seijiro
wow, am I late for the party or...
Anyway, recheck from #modreqs.

Looks like the snaps provided by pishi work well and I see no other problems



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Bara-
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I'll look at it tomorrow, I was quite busy irl recently
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]

pishifat wrote:

9223372036854775807

MrSergio wrote:

wow, am I late for the party or...
Anyway, recheck from #modreqs.

Looks like the snaps provided by pishi work well and I see no other problems

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Thanks a lot guys~

Bara- wrote:

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I'll look at it tomorrow, I was quite busy irl recently
Alright, take your time~
Rumia-
happening man
Bara-

Rumia- wrote:

happening man
It happened :)
Tornado
\ :D /
Akasha-
Ctrl + Shift + I is real lolol
Congratulations
Luel Roseline
Finally yes!
Enon
(´・ω・)凸
Underforest
nice song
Signum
Congratulations
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]
Thanks everyone~ :D
Luel Roseline
Finally...Completely ranked!
Bara-
Hooray!
Topic Starter
[ -Scarlet- ]
Thought it would take a week (7 days) to rank.
Looks like is 11 days instead LOL
Enon
(´・ω・)凸 GREATZ (´・ω・)凸
Rtyzen
gratz~ :)
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