m4m reply
interesting map, good luck!
truth thing
- why are there two background files in the folder? http://i.imgur.com/exWAvrp.jpg
- I tried to testplay but my stamina is too bad today so I fail later
first the things I noticed while playing (before I failed, lol): - 00:26:135 (1,1,1,1) - nc spam and spacing makes this look like 1/3 to, just remove the nc spam to make it better to read, so it will be more like 00:38:693 (1,2,3,4) -
- 00:29:449 (2,3) - again a bit weird to read, I think stacks would do the job just
now editor stuff; - the stream spacing in the pre 14s Intro part feels a bit random to me, as the sound doesn't change that much, yet you change spacing every few notes? putting chanes on something like 00:19:507 (1) - is fine for me though as they sound differently and all
- 00:23:692 (1,1,1) - bigger spacing for each combo would actually be really nice with the piano here though
- 00:25:089 (6,1) - real stack or moving 6 somewhere else seems nicer
- 00:36:077 (1) - how about moving down to stack on 00:36:600 (1) - ? having a complete stop here would go great with the break in the music, just like you did on 00:57:182 (7,1) - . In fact you do it here again 01:19:507 (6,1) - . So doing it also on the first time would be great
- 00:40:438 (1,4) - can you move 1 bit right? this overlap doesnt really look nice imo http://i.imgur.com/7mR4knq.jpg
- 00:44:188 (4,5) - space the same as the two times before? like you did 00:42:792 (5,6) -
- 01:08:606 (2,3) - trnasition into the held slider felt weird to me, maybe you can, sth like http://i.imgur.com/yONMxgw.jpg seems to read and play nicer here
- 01:24:304 pretty audible 1/4, maybe maker 3 a kickslider?
- 01:26:048 (3) - snapping feels weird to me, is there even anything on the blue tick? using 1/6 here to seems more fitting, as the sounds on 01:26:019 - 01:26:077 - are very audible, sth like this rhythm http://i.imgur.com/I41NU53.jpg feels better to me
- 01:36:252 - nc on the blue ticks instead would look much nicer here http://i.imgur.com/Al9PfEX.jpg
- 01:39:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the first sound are differen from 4+ you could try starting with a 1/6 repeat to make a better transition http://i.imgur.com/jfi95fd.jpg maybe even ncspam the 1/6 to make it clearer, stuff like 01:45:496 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - or 01:49:856 (4,5,6,7) - looks (nearly) the same but is 1/4
also those 1/6 stacks are brutal on a sub 6* map, but that should not be your problem since they fit, just make the transitions to the measier and have them easier to read - 02:17:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem here, nc and really low spacing makes it look like 1/6, easiest fix owuld be changing the 1/6 (nearly) stack mentioned before somehow
- 02:27:705 (1) - coul actually use a hearable sliderslide here to fit the music, same for 02:37:473 (1,3) - and some others
- 02:55:786 (1) - might look nice if you changed the first nodes a bit to blanket the right part of it, this should give you an idea what I mean: http://i.imgur.com/Hvr0hsO.jpg
- 03:20:554 (1,2,3,4) - would look niver if curved smoother/symmetrically http://i.imgur.com/Mmwy53d.jpg
- 03:28:752 (6) - bigger spacing + now 2x repeat makes the chance very high to let go too early and sliderbreak here
- 03:29:275 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - nc on the blue ticks instead? would look better imo
- 03:34:856 (1) - the fact that you use 1/3 and 1/6 snapping before combined with low spacing makes this looks more like a 1/6 stream also :v
- for the kiai it feels like the curcing of some of those rounded stream like 04:14:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could be a bit smoother
- 04:47:938 (3,4) - lol is this giant jump really needed? the 1/2 dont even seem that strong, 04:47:066 (5,1) - is already a bit huge for my taste, but better since those are sliders
- 04:58:286 (1,1,1,1,1) - here you actually nc spammed the 1/6 stream like I suggested for the first one, so do it on the first one mentioned too? also this is really going to frustrate players, lol ending the map with a spaced quint that plays like 258 1/4 stream seems really unexpetced :v