1. 00:29:393 (4) - Move this lower a bit? Spacing too large I think;
2. Also is there any original video clip to add in the mapset? Like Brain Dog?

Nevo wrote:

I found one thing lmfao

Insane -
00:42:343 (3) - this is offscreen reworked entire section

shit picture

siwu320 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

About Insane nothing more to say about it, a suggestion:

1. 00:29:393 (4) - Move this lower a bit? Spacing too large I think; Changed but still emphasising (5)
2. Also is there any original video clip to add in the mapset? Like Brain Dog?
   

   Bakari wrote:

   We'd really appreciate it if you could avoid sharing/linking the video.

This set looks perfect, get ranked plz~

celerih wrote:

This has been modded so many times, let's see if I can find things

[Insane]
00:19:716 (1) - Fix the slider shape here, it looks wrong. Either that or remake this slider. This is just a suggestion but pretty much not what you have right now is better tried something else
00:34:147 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of having the sliders curved here. I think it would look better with straight ones here ok

[Exteme -Aniki-]
00:03:323 (4,1) - Spacing here is off. It should be larger since it's a 1/1 time between the two. Another solution would be to replace the two circles by a 1/1 slider, which I think fits more here IMO it's fine here
00:15:454 (4,1) - I'd also increase the spacing here but there I can
00:22:835 (2,3,4) - These three aren't aligned properly. The 4 needs to be higher fixed

[Challenge -Gay Bar-]
00:03:978 (1) - Move this to x:437 y:214. the reason is so the spacing between 00:03:651 (4,1) - matches the spacing of 00:03:159 (2,5) - that way sure
00:19:716 (1) - Use an approach circle to fix the curve at the end of the slider done
00:39:229 (6,1) - These two are slightly off angled i guess fixed
00:42:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This last stream plays pretty bad. Try having the second part of it go up instead of down changed

[CRN's GOLD FINGER]
00:16:765 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 stack doens't have anyhting different to make it readable that it's 1/3. Maybe not have it be a stack to contrast with the 1/4 stacks and create a difference?
00:35:295 (8,1) - Why is the spacing between these two less than the notes before when the beat on 00:35:458 - is louder and more important than the ones before? It should be more emphasized
00:42:999 (1,2,3,4) - Nothing in the song really justifies such a big spacing increase on these four notes. The last note it's fine but these ehhhhhh

1. 00:02:995 (1,2,3,4) - Here is way more spaced compared to 00:09:224 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should make consistent
2. 00:11:192 (1,2,3) - Linear flow with these kicksliders is really awkward, you could change it up but I think it worked better as triples like 00:05:495
3. 00:14:962 (3,4) - Spacing between these is different from the following sliders so I'd make it consistent here
4. 00:35:458 (1,2,3,4) - Think these should be spaced out way more, especially when you have bigger spacing for 1/2

1. 00:02:667 (1,2,3,4) - This section is kinda cramped and uncomfortable, I suggest changing it up. Rough suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7002772
2. 00:05:290 (1,2) - I think these should be swapped in the timeline, I think it fits so much better (then make sure to swap hitsounds)
3. 00:10:208 (5,6,1) - Same here, I suggest swapping (6,1) and putting the double under slider end of (5)
4. 00:11:028 (3,4) - Spacing is off slightly, (4) should be closer to (3)

1. 00:19:716 (1) - Sudden 0.5 is harsh so make a turn near the start so going too fast at start doesn't break slider
2. 00:30:704 (2,1) - The sharp angle is quite uncomfortable, if you ctrl+g (1) it makes it makes really nice circular flow
3. 00:38:901 (6) - I would position this more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7002755 so spacing is equal and makes nice triangle

Toehoe wrote:

Insane

1. 00:02:667 (1,2,3,4) - This section is kinda cramped and uncomfortable, I suggest changing it up. Rough suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7002772 I like the current pattern, so I'll leave it as it is right now
2. 00:05:290 (1,2) - I think these should be swapped in the timeline, I think it fits so much better (then make sure to swap hitsounds) Then spacing goes wrong :/
3. 00:10:208 (5,6,1) - Same here, I suggest swapping (6,1) and putting the double under slider end of (5) ^
4. 00:11:028 (3,4) - Spacing is off slightly, (4) should be closer to (3) Visually it looks fine tho

Extra

1. 00:19:716 (1) - Sudden 0.5 is harsh so make a turn near the start so going too fast at start doesn't break slider Slightly changed the shape
2. 00:30:704 (2,1) - The sharp angle is quite uncomfortable, if you ctrl+g (1) it makes it makes really nice circular flow Also I moved these two sliders so it won't be near offscreen
3. 00:38:901 (6) - I would position this more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7002755 so spacing is equal and makes nice triangle Ok!

How'd you like that huh?

XVoIR wrote:

Toehoe wrote:

Insane

1. 00:05:290 (1,2) - I think these should be swapped in the timeline, I think it fits so much better (then make sure to swap hitsounds) Then spacing goes wrong :/
2. 00:10:208 (5,6,1) - Same here, I suggest swapping (6,1) and putting the double under slider end of (5) ^

sdafsf wrote:

toehoe

sdafsf' Light Insane
00:02:995 (1,2,3,4) - Here is way more spaced compared to 00:09:224 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should make consistent its on purpose because this part is less intense
00:11:192 (1,2,3) - Linear flow with these kicksliders is really awkward, you could change it up but I think it worked better as triples like 00:05:495 its fine at this spacing
00:14:962 (3,4) - Spacing between these is different from the following sliders so I'd make it consistent here i think its fine since the spacing change is after a long slider and on a white tick. its also insignificant
00:35:458 (1,2,3,4) - Think these should be spaced out way more, especially when you have bigger spacing for 1/2 i disagree

thanks for the mod! if any of these points are definite flaws instead of just your opinion contact me back

update

no changes

Toehoe wrote:

sdafsf wrote:

toehoe

sdafsf' Light Insane
00:02:995 (1,2,3,4) - Here is way more spaced compared to 00:09:224 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should make consistent its on purpose because this part is less intense
00:11:192 (1,2,3) - Linear flow with these kicksliders is really awkward, you could change it up but I think it worked better as triples like 00:05:495 its fine at this spacing
00:14:962 (3,4) - Spacing between these is different from the following sliders so I'd make it consistent here i think its fine since the spacing change is after a long slider and on a white tick. its also insignificant
00:35:458 (1,2,3,4) - Think these should be spaced out way more, especially when you have bigger spacing for 1/2 i disagree

thanks for the mod! if any of these points are definite flaws instead of just your opinion contact me back

update

no changes

I think you should definitely change 00:14:962 (3,4) - since the sudden large spacing and then back to small spacing again is bad flow and makes me miss (5) by moving my cursor too far instinctively

It's not a large problem but it stands out to me, if you think it's fine as it is then no worries

1. 00:06:110 (3) - I really feel like something's missing here. I'd start the next slider at this point instead
2. 00:41:852 (4) - I'd remove this note here. I feel like it doesn't really follow any rhythm, and it doesn't seem to be missed when it's gone

1. 00:14:142 (5) - since the two previous sliders were in a "pattern", I'd ctrl+g this slider.
2. 00:24:966 (1,3) - intentional overlap?

1. 00:34:393 (4) - adding a note here seems appropriate after the previous sliders

1. 00:07:257 (3) - ctrl+g this slider for better flow?

1. 00:03:487 (x) - add a note here. really feels like something's missing without it

Frost wrote:

hi, from q
sry for being slow lol np i'm slow too

Challenge -Gay Bar-

• 00:04:470 (2,3) - this curve triggers me lol lol
  00:29:884 (7) - should be 2 notes instead of a slider imo, the 2 sounds are pretty sharp i tried

Extreme -Aniki-

• 00:03:323 (4,1) - the AR makes it readable, but the spacing is really similar to that of the jumps that were twice as fast just before it, making it awkward imo changed to anti-jump ;]
  00:19:716 (1) - oh yes oh yeah
  00:22:835 (2,3) - doesn't really need to be a triple tbh, just the one on the red tick is fine IMO it fit

gr8 mapset and amazing song gl on rank !!!
(sorry for rlly short mod but the mapset's pretty polished already lol)

Gyeoul wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.
Sorry in advance for the really simple mod, there wasn't much I could add

[Hard]

1. 00:14:142 (5) - since the two previous sliders were in a "pattern", I'd ctrl+g this slider. ok
2. 00:24:966 (1,3) - intentional overlap? yep, even INTERNATIONAL (getit????)

[sdafsf's Insane]

1. 00:34:393 (4) - adding a note here seems appropriate after the previous sliders

[Insane]

1. 00:07:257 (3) - ctrl+g this slider for better flow? i don't think it'll be better

[Extreme -Aniki-]

1. 00:03:487 (x) - add a note here. really feels like something's missing without it there's no sound for it tho

found the next diffs way too overmapped, but well.. people seem to like it. hahah. good luck with the mapset! hard maps are fun:)

Gyeoul wrote:

[MrDorian's Normal]

1. 00:06:110 (3) - I really feel like something's missing here. I'd start the next slider at this point instead but there's slider here lol
2. 00:41:852 (4) - I'd remove this note here. I feel like it doesn't really follow any rhythm, and it doesn't seem to be missed when it's gone deleteed

2. 00:01:356 (1,3) - mb change form?
3. 00:04:798 (5) - i think you need bigger jump on 00:04:962 (6) - because this beat strong. You can move (5) on x282 y183.
4. 00:12:175 (1,4) - ^
5. 00:25:622 (4) - ^ need jump, can move on x354 y39.
6. 00:42:016 (1,2,3,4) - make a square?
7. 00:15:782 (5) - NC mb?

1. 00:05:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can make fine star.
2. 00:09:224 (1,2) - something as this or this.
3. 00:16:437 (3,1) - blanket?
4. 00:22:999 (5,6) - i think its better.
5. 00:43:326 (1) - x209 y268?

Lama Poluna wrote:

[Challenge -Gay Bar-]

1. 00:05:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can make fine star. actually
2. 00:09:224 (1,2) - something as this or this. Right now it flows better
3. 00:16:437 (3,1) - blanket? blanketetored
4. 00:22:999 (5,6) - i think its better. changed!
5. 00:43:326 (1) - x209 y268? challanged

Other diffs is good.
nice set, why its not ranked? i also want to know

cute boy wrote:

from le q

insane:

00:16:765 (1) - your other difs have no nc on this triplet, so i think its ok to have it as a 5 of the last combo changed

extra:
rather have this 00:14:470 (1) - be like this 00:02:667 (1) - or vice versa, just a little nitpicky thing uhhhhh
00:33:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i personally dont like how the 5,6 are but u dont have to change, just a suggestion dw i fixed it, back then i couldn't come with something better

extreme:
00:03:487 - nothing on this beat? yes

challenge:
00:09:224 (1,2) - dont like how this looks, visually weird to me made it more straight into (2) whoops i changed wrong diff anyway fixed

final dif:
00:43:327 (1) - nc maybe???? idk not my diff

sry short mod, maps are well done

Chibi Maruko wrote:

shoot 5 kudosu :3
wanted this map for rank

i also want this ranked

deadpon3 wrote:

loved when

Idealism wrote:

loved/ranked when

caren_sk wrote:

wake up !!