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Panic! at the Disco - I Write Sins Not Tragedies

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Gonzvlo
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 09 de noviembre de 2010 at 10:10:48 p.m.

Artist: Panic! at the Disco
Title: I Write Sins Not Tragedies
Tags: A Fever You Can't Sweat Out Krisom
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8402kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Calm! (0.76 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Krisom's Tragedies (4.95 stars, 425 notes)
  3. Nervous! (2.46 stars, 171 notes)
  4. Panic! (3.96 stars, 252 notes)
Download: Panic! at the Disco - I Write Sins Not Tragedies
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Haven't you people ever heard of closing the god damn door?!

Pending:
  1. Calm! (Easy 100%)
  2. Nervous! (Normal 100%)
  3. Panic! (Hard 100%)
  4. Krisom's Tragedies (Insane 100%)
Last edited by Gonzvlo , edited 5 times in total.
braian5234
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Joined April 2010
braian5234
star!
Torran
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Joined November 2008
Torran
osu! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 170 , Offset 280
Starred~!
Krisom
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Krisom
I took less than expected with my ubberly huge ammount of work/studies/requests these days. One guest diff down, 3 more to go.

I went with a much more crazy approach at this song than my usually Y-axis symmetry centered style, as the song is more crazy.

Oh, and fast sliderspeed.

Download: Panic! at the Disco - I Write Sins Not Tragedies (Gonzvlo) [Krisom's Tragedies].osu
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456
OHH, Hi ~ :3

General;
- Everything fine ~

Skin;
* Ohh, I'm going to be very picky, by the way, what kind of programm do you use ?? I use photoshop :3 Oh and, nice font you used there, goes with the theme very well ~
- Errm ... why did you include the template default numbers ?? I guess because they look good right ??
- I would switch 300g and 300k, feels weird in the way they are
- Section-pass looks like an "O" not a circle but is okk, if you don't want to change
- Umm, spinner circle approach feels weird to me, since the other elements look very detailed but this one is plain, but is okk again if you don't want to change and actually is good to have at least one simple element because if you use too many detailed and flashy elements the skin looks like is too much ~
- If you look close to the start of the HP bar you can see a space, please make the HP bar the same length of the score bar BG, also look closely too your numbers, they have white noise/little pixels around some of them (actually I'm being very very picky here) you can probably get rid of them with a black glow of course not too much or the glow will cut. By the way the numbers is an optional thing to do.


- I don't like how the score bar BG touches the numbers either ...^
- Scorebar-colour and scorebar-colour-0 ?? Shouldn't it be scorebar-colour-0 and scorebar-colour-1 for them both to work ?? (If that's what you're aiming for of course)
- Add sliderpoint10 and sliderpoint30 if possible ~

SB;
- Try to clean up "tapeshut" a bit more then add a black glow maybe ??
- Nice SB ~

Calm!;
- 00:43:338 >> Remove clap, add finish ??
- 00:54:985 >> Switch to a soft finish ??
- 01:08:044 >> Could you switch the soft finish here for a normal one, or make the finish louder ??
- 01:17:574 >> This spinner feels empty without a hitsound ... but I don't know which hitsound will work
- 01:45:103 >> Remove clap, add finish ??
- 02:22:162 >> Remove clap, add finish ??
- 02:26:044 >> Why new combo ?? Remove ??
- 02:41:574 >> Remove whistle, add finish ??
- 02:58:515 >> I don't like the clap here, remove it ??

Nervous!;
- 00:21:456 >> Add finish
- 01:08:044 >> Switch with a normal finish
- 01:41:927 >> Add finish
- 02:38:397 >> End at 02:44:044 ??
- 02:58:162 (2,3) >> Spacing, I don't like this just to keep symmetry ... This was the only part I failed and there are more ways in which you can keep symmetry, make it look good and keep it as a normal, oh and remove clap from start of (3)

Panic!
- 00:45:456 >> Add a finish
- 02:16:868 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 02:58:515 >> Remove clap ?? Not sure ...

Krisom's Tragedies;
- Is okk ~ ...

* Star ~ :3
Gonzvlo
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lovhin456 wrote:

OHH, Hi ~ :3

Calm!;
- 00:43:338 >> Remove clap, add finish ?? Not too sure
- 00:54:985 >> Switch to a soft finish ?? ^
- 01:08:044 >> Could you switch the soft finish here for a normal one, or make the finish louder ?? Ok (:
- 01:17:574 >> This spinner feels empty without a hitsound ... but I don't know which hitsound will work Fixed
- 01:45:103 >> Remove clap, add finish ?? Same as above
- 02:22:162 >> Remove clap, add finish ?? ^
- 02:26:044 >> Why new combo ?? Remove ?? Oops, Fixed it.
- 02:41:574 >> Remove whistle, add finish ?? Ok
- 02:58:515 >> I don't like the clap here, remove it ?? It seems fine imo.

Nervous!;
- 00:21:456 >> Add finish Ok.
- 01:08:044 >> Switch with a normal finish Did something with this.
- 01:41:927 >> Add finish Ok
- 02:38:397 >> End at 02:44:044 ?? No, It's fine here.
- 02:58:162 (2,3) >> Spacing, I don't like this just to keep symmetry ... This was the only part I failed and there are more ways in which you can keep symmetry, make it look good and keep it as a normal, oh and remove clap from start of (3) Reduced spacing.

Panic!
- 00:45:456 >> Add a finish Ok
- 02:16:868 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note ^
- 02:58:515 >> Remove clap ?? Not sure ... Nah it's ok.

Krisom's Tragedies;
- Is okk ~ ...

* Star ~ :3
Thanks, I'll take care of the Skin/SB problems tomorrow.(Please don't mod the Skin/Sb, until I finish fixing them)
poisonchan
257 posts
Joined January 2010
poisonchan
Hi :3 Quick mod here >w< ~
Remember, are juuuuust sugestions :3
I'm can't mod Easy and Normal >w< So... I will try only the Panic! and Krisom's Tragedies ^^

Panic!
00:24:456 - Add a beat here, sounds.. better i guess.

00:25:338 (2) - Move this slider to 00:25:515
00:25:338 - If you did that ^ add a beat here.
00:26:044 (4) - Move this slider to 00:26:221
00:26:044 - If you did that ^ add a beat here. (Something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35087)

00:50:397 (3) - Move this beat to 00:50:221
00:50:574 - Add a beat here
00:50:750 (4) - Move this slider to 00:50:927
00:51:279 (5) - ^ If you did that, delete this beat. (Something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35089)

00:53:221 (5) - Move this beat to 00:53:044
00:53:574 (6) - Move this beat to 00:53:397
00:53:750 - Add a beat here or a slider till 00:53:927

01:47:574 (3) - Move this slider to 01:47:397
01:47:927 - Add a beat here
02:27:103 - Add a beat here

Maybe you should think about this breaks... I guess you can use your imagination and do something instead of adding them ^^
I will come back to mod Krisom's Tragedies >w< ( orz, I have school now)

Sorry for my bad english, and sorry if the mod doesn't makes sense ^^

Great map. Star!
Gonzvlo
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poisonchan wrote:

Panic!
00:24:456 - Add a beat here, sounds.. better i guess.

00:25:338 (2) - Move this slider to 00:25:515
00:25:338 - If you did that ^ add a beat here.
00:26:044 (4) - Move this slider to 00:26:221
00:26:044 - If you did that ^ add a beat here. (Something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35087)
01:47:574 (3) - Move this slider to 01:47:397
01:47:927 - Add a beat here
Done the ones quoted, Thanks
Gonzvlo
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Skin/SB mod Done.

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

Skin;
* Ohh, I'm going to be very picky, by the way, what kind of programm do you use ?? I use photoshop :3 Oh and, nice font you used there, goes with the theme very well ~ Yup I use photshop too. Oh the font is the same that Panic! atD uses.

- Errm ... why did you include the template default numbers ?? I guess because they look good right ?? Yeah those go
look good along with the skin.

- I would switch 300g and 300k, feels weird in the way they are I like it that way, I'll keep them

- Section-pass looks like an "O" not a circle but is okk, if you don't want to change Lol, It's an O :P , I'll keep it it's funny and different.

- Umm, spinner circle approach feels weird to me, since the other elements look very detailed but this one is plain, but is okk again if you don't want to change and actually is good to have at least one simple element because if you use too many detailed and flashy elements the skin looks like is too much ~ Oh this is because the spinner is almost transparent so the approach circle must be clearly noticable.

- If you look close to the start of the HP bar you can see a space, please make the HP bar the same length of the score bar BG, also look closely too your numbers, they have white noise/little pixels around some of them (actually I'm being very very picky here) you can probably get rid of them with a black glow of course not too much or the glow will cut. By the way the numbers is an optional thing to do. Ok cleared and fixed.

- I don't like how the score bar BG touches the numbers either ...^ Oh I didn't notice that because I use widescreen.

- Scorebar-colour and scorebar-colour-0 ?? Shouldn't it be scorebar-colour-0 and scorebar-colour-1 for them both to work ?? (If that's what you're aiming for of course) Sorry, Forgot to delete that file when I was testing the skin.

- Add sliderpoint10 and sliderpoint30 if possible ~ I'll re-color the template's one, they'll fit perfectly.

SB;
- Try to clean up "tapeshut" a bit more then add a black glow maybe ?? This is fine imo. Althought I'll clean it up a bit more
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Krisom's Insane

Hmm... I can see that you sometimes add an extra notes after sliders and sometimes not... They are not that consistent thoughout the map
I mean this:

00:48:809 (9) - This circle could be deleted OR-
02:27:632 - Here could be added a circle.
Although if it were for me, i would delete them all.

Panic!

00:16:691 - I highly recommend adding a circle here. If youre afraid that you may screw up the pattern, just stack it with 00:16:868 (1) -
00:24:632 (4) - And to move this 1/2 earlier (00:24:456)

00:28:338 - Add circle here and delete 00:28:691 (2) -

00:41:750 (5) - Delete this and move the next slider 1/2 earlier (00:41:927 (5) move it so it starts at 00:41:927 (5))
00:42:809 - Add a circle here. This is really optional, unlike others :T

00:50:397 (3) - Move it 1/2 earlier

Sighs, im starting to feel nazi D:

But here's a part where you could just ignore adding a circle in those red tick, while those that required it, you didnt added them. :l
Heres what i mean:
01:15:280 (3) - This is not really necessary
01:15:985 - A circle here is more necessary than ^

02:14:927 (4,5) - This jump was unexpected.
02:27:103 - Consider adding circle here


02:51:456 - I think you forgot to add whistle here :l
02:54:985 - And here too.

Hmm remember that they are just suggestions, some may have more priority though :x

Nervous!

00:14:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - Would have sounded better 1/2 later
02:02:397 (2) - This should should have been in 02:02:221, in any case

Calm!

02:02:397 (2) - This should should have been in 02:02:221, in any case

I guess the rest is fine.
Joon
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Joon
hi

my modding

[Calm!]
00:42:632 (4) - Start Notes add finish
02:22:162 (1) - hmm... remove clap and volume change 0

[Nervous!]
00:39:456 (2) - Middle Notes add finish
02:18:632 (6) - add finish
02:29:573 (2) - Middle Notes add finish

[Panic!]
02:27:103 (10) - Start Notes add finsih

cool
Sandpig
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Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


it is really hard for me to play with this cursor....you don't need to change it I just mention.


Krisom's Tragedies

02:49:515 (11,12,1) - increase the distance so that player doesn't need to slow down his cursor here
02:52:338 (12,13,1) - ^


Panic!

00:31:338 (1) - add a repeat instead of 2?
02:02:750 (1) - remove clap


Nervous!

good


Calm!

no issue here


nice map 8-)
Gonzvlo
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Thanks you but Sorry, I could not agree with your mod :(

EDIT: About the cursor, I'll remove it if someone else agrees with you.
Last edited by Gonzvlo , edited 1 time in total.
Jako87
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Jako87
Couldn't find anything wrong.

Great map and long sliders are allways fun! 8-)
James2250
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James2250
(Hey this one was on the first songs I tried to map)
Skin slider ball so it fits with the theme more?
Not sure about those long spinners, I guess they can just pass
Mostly spinner comments that seem to follow the lyrics more, up to you if you want to change them or not -- they are fine either way

Calm:
00:43:338 (1) - starts on white tick but 01:39:985 (1) - starts on a red tick (same lyrics in the song) type and keep it consistent?
00:31:691 (3) - add a repeat
00:54:985 (1) - start at 00:55:162
01:17:574 (1) - end at 01:19:338
01:30:632 (1,2,3) - don't like the flow here, remap it somehow?
01:51:456 (1) - start at 01:51:632?
02:41:750 (3) - add note? (and put finish on this one)

Nervous:
00:54:985 (1) - start at 00:55:162
01:18:279 (1) - end at 01:19:338
01:39:809 (1) - start at 01:39:985
01:51:456 (1) - start at 01:51:632
02:22:162 (1) - start at 02:22:338
02:33:809 (1) - start at 02:33:985
02:38:397 (1) - sounds better ending at 02:41:750

Panic:
Same spinner comments if you want to change them
02:17:750 (2) - add note
02:29:044 (2) - ^

Krisom's Tragedies:
01:21:456 (1,2,1,1,2) - boring to stack them all?

Nice maps
*star*
Krisom
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I'll fix my modposts later today, wait for me :3
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
Krisom's Tragedies :

02:17:750 (4) - 1 grid down
02:18:103 (5) - ^
02:29:044 (4,5) - Looks better like this imo


Panic! :

00:16:691 (1) - Remove new combo
00:17:221 (3) - Add new combo

Nervous! :

Fine ~

Calm :

Fine ~

I can't find more errors, sorry.
Gl with the map
Krisom
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Krisom

Verdisphena wrote:

Krisom's Tragedies :
02:17:750 (4) - 1 grid down
02:18:103 (5) - ^
02:29:044 (4,5) - Looks better like this imo
All done

James2250 wrote:

Krisom's Tragedies:
01:21:456 (1,2,1,1,2) - boring to stack them all?
Done

shabao_pig wrote:

Krisom's Tragedies
02:49:515 (11,12,1) - increase the distance so that player doesn't need to slow down his cursor here
02:52:338 (12,13,1) - ^
None done, I like this technique.

ErufenRito wrote:

Krisom's Insane

Hmm... I can see that you sometimes add an extra notes after sliders and sometimes not... They are not that consistent thoughout the map
I mean this:

00:48:809 (9) - This circle could be deleted OR-
02:27:632 - Here could be added a circle.
Although if it were for me, i would delete them all. I added the missing circle
Download: Panic! at the Disco - I Write Sins Not Tragedies (Gonzvlo) [Krisom's Tragedies].osu
Gonzvlo
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Updated.
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
yo Gonz

[General]
- I'm wishing that the tape shut can be used again but I guess there isn't any good place huh the tape shut make me think "Huh? did I just miss a note?"
- try re-snaping all notes on all diff, idk why but the game always prompt me to save even though I didn't make any change

[Nervous]
01:51:632 (1) - add finish? just like on calm diff
02:36:985 (1) - a little too far from the center
maybe something like a mustache ?
SPOILER

[Panic]
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle on the start and the end of this slider? well just to continue the 1/1 whistle pattern
01:17:574 (x) - and maybe add another circle with whistle here while you at it
01:34:515 (11) - uhh...clap?
01:37:338 (2,3) - not symmetry here
01:54:632 (1) - the other 2 diff use normal but this one use soft, maybe change the other diff to soft or change this to normal
(I prefer normal btw)
02:15:456 (5) - a trap?

[Krisom Tragedies]
re-name it to crazy Krisom :twisted:
jk, anyway this really doesn't feels like your usual krisom map, in a good way of course. Only one thing that bother me, 02:22:868 (5) the empty space after this note feels awkward for me

Great map set, gorgeous skin, here have my star
~Star
Gonzvlo
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Sallad4ever wrote:

yo Gonz

[General]
- I'm wishing that the tape shut can be used again but I guess there isn't any good place huh the tape shut make me think "Huh? did I just miss a note?"
- try re-snaping all notes on all diff, idk why but the game always prompt me to save even though I didn't make any change

[Nervous]
01:51:632 (1) - add finish? just like on calm diff
02:36:985 (1) - a little too far from the center
maybe something like a mustache ?

[Panic]
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle on the start and the end of this slider? well just to continue the 1/1 whistle pattern
01:17:574 (x) - and maybe add another circle with whistle here while you at it
01:34:515 (11) - uhh...clap?
01:37:338 (2,3) - not symmetry here
01:54:632 (1) - the other 2 diff use normal but this one use soft, maybe change the other diff to soft or change this to normal
(I prefer normal btw)
02:15:456 (5) - a trap?
Everything Fixed, Thanks Sallad (:
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