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Dark PHOENiX - Taketori Hishou

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Royal Flare
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Royal Flare
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月6日 at 18:19:35

Artist: Dark PHOENiX
Title: Taketori Hishou
Source: Touhou
Tags: NanaDesu
BPM: 192
Filesize: 6102kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Help me! (4.93 stars, 428 notes)
  2. Just for fun (4.02 stars, 210 notes)
  3. Nana (5 stars, 683 notes)
  4. rockit's Taiko (5 stars, 1169 notes)
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Taketori Hishou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's my first beatmap.
I love this song very much!
And hope you like it too.
============================
Just for fun (4.08 stars, 176 notes)
Help me! (4.94 stars, 431 notes)
Nana (5 stars, 684 notes)(by NanaDesu)---(woring :D)
rockit's Taiko (5 stars, 1169 notes)Thank you =W=
============================
._.Thanks for your mod:
2010.10.31-NanaDesu's mod
2010.10.31-mystica's mod
2010.11.1-ballban's mod
2010.11.1-vivicat's mod
2010.11.3-Selee's mod
2010.11.5-Tiny stone's mod
2010.11.6-Leorda's mod
2010.11.9-Lovely Crab' mod
2010.11.12-Gonzvlo's mod
Last edited by Royal Flare , edited 58 times in total.
NanaDesu
NanaDesu
mod in qq :D
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
~STAR~
CarlJohnson
12 posts
Joined August 2009
CarlJohnson
:)
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
here is Mod.you also can ignore it
[Joke]
00:53:437 (1,2,3) snap意味不明
01:07:812 这个L下面转圈好纠结
01:41:562 来回到01:42:499感觉多好
01:46:562 ^
01:52:187 snap
02:16:562 ^
02:22:812 ^ 不过这个我听起来感觉就不好嗯
02:51:562 重叠slider是UNRANK
03:06:562 参见前面
[fun]
01:07:812 这是故意这么放么 如果是要叠一起那就是重新snap
01:14:999 snap
01:43:749 这有一串变snap的我没看懂意义嗯 至少是我没看懂
[help me]
[stress]各种 好吧我承认我讨厌小圈
[nana]
好吧 192BPM的2.0SV 再见 至少不是给我这种沙包打的

总体来说乐感还是不错嗯 需要的就是distance snap如果各种snap不对的话 打图的人也很苦恼嗯.
嘛 总体来说还好嗯 加油吧少年
Yimo_Coppola
24 posts
Joined May 2010
Yimo_Coppola
（｀^ω^′）Try to play with.
SaaSa_old
7 posts
Joined August 2010
SaaSa_old
:D
NanaDesu
NanaDesu
更新難度 :D

11/2更新

Download: Dark PHOENiX - (Arrow Realize) Taketorihisyou (xlFXTZ) [Nana].osu
Last edited by NanaDesu , edited 6 times in total.
abcde1234qaz
120 posts
Joined September 2009
abcde1234qaz
:)
miku
186 posts
Joined March 2009
miku
我来吐槽了 :P
以下mod纯属个人观点
随便吐槽
如果有觉得说的对的就改吧
如果觉得不好就无视吧
不要有压力
[金馆长] :lol: :lol:

[it's a joke]
snapping有问题 请Timing-->Resnap All Notes
00:35:316 (3) - 往右一格?
00:44:691 (4) - 往左一格?
00:57:816 (1) - 好大一个H..噗.. 不过个人感觉滑到右边的竖杠的时候很难看清是往下滚还是网上滚啊..
01:07:812 (3) - L..? 我觉得好难看..
01:10:312 (4) - P..? 理由同上..
02:31:566 (2) - 太畸形..

[just for fun]
00:21:562 (2) - 长了1/4拍
00:29:374 (4) - 感觉这里突然跳的很莫名其妙..
00:31:874 (4) - 同上..
01:05:937 (6) - 1/8 好吓人..
01:10:312 (1,2) - 两个slider末端没重叠 不美观
01:54:374 (3) - 没重叠

[Nana]
一看这名字就知道一定是神触难度.. :o
果然跳的不是一般的跳啊 >.>
00:18:437 (4) - 跟前一个note好近..很容易看成1234是同一个节奏的..
00:19:062 (1,2,3,4) - 位置感觉太靠上了..
00:32:187 (7) - 减一个来回感觉好一点..?
00:46:562 (6) - 跟前一个slider太近了..感觉像是连打和slider是连着的..但是中间一小格空隙..坑爹啊 >.>
00:48:280 (5,9) - 不喜欢这种突然减慢速度的slider...
00:53:280 (4) - 同上..
01:27:812 (1) - 同上..
01:31:562 (3,4) - 好变扭..
后面怎么就没了..囧
这难度不是给鼠标玩的 :o

[Help me!]
00:21:875 (7) - 减个来回?
00:42:812 (3) - 往右一格
01:17:030 - 再来个note?
01:17:108 - 同上
01:27:187 (6) - 没重合
01:39:999 (5,1,2,3) - 这几个间距很诡异啊..把5和1分远一点吧..(好时间 9999
02:24:687 - 再来个note?
02:24:765 - 再来个note?
02:24:843 - 再来个note?
02:24:921 - 再来个note?
02:24:999 - 再来个note?
02:37:187 (4) - 这个slider太蛋疼了.把方向换一下吧..不然根本看不清这是slider啊..
02:44:530 - 再来个note?
02:44:608 - 再来个note?
02:52:187 (4) - 往左一格
03:15:937 (4) - 同上
03:20:312 (5) - 明显距离不对啊..up主自己调一下..
吐槽完毕~感觉还不错~
star~
NanaDesu
NanaDesu

ballban wrote:

我来吐槽了 :P
以下mod纯属个人观点
随便吐槽
如果有觉得说的对的就改吧
如果觉得不好就无视吧
不要有压力
[金馆长] :lol: :lol:


[Nana]
一看这名字就知道一定是神触难度.. :o ..
果然跳的不是一般的跳啊 >.>
00:18:437 (4) - 跟前一个note好近..很容易看成1234是同一个节奏的.. ok
00:19:062 (1,2,3,4) - 位置感觉太靠上了.. 錯覺
00:32:187 (7) - 减一个来回感觉好一点..? yes
00:46:562 (6) - 跟前一个slider太近了..感觉像是连打和slider是连着的..但是中间一小格空隙..坑爹啊 >.> &
00:48:280 (5,9) - 不喜欢这种突然减慢速度的slider... 特色
00:53:280 (4) - 同上.. ^
01:27:812 (1) - 同上.. ^
01:31:562 (3,4) - 好变扭..
后面怎么就没了..囧 沒做完
这难度不是给鼠标玩的 :o 我板子也玩不了._.
465704819
3 posts
Joined July 2010
465704819
:arrow: :?: 无语
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
vivicat
打个星先>_>
mod in-game
加油 :D
miku
186 posts
Joined March 2009
miku
对了
再吐槽一个
[Nana]
你的note颜色里面
那个红色
跟BG混在一起 玩的时候看不清楚..
调一下吧..

你个神触 >.>
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Royal Flare

ballban wrote:

对了
再吐槽一个
[Nana]
你的note颜色里面
那个红色
跟BG混在一起 玩的时候看不清楚..
调一下吧..

你个神触>.>
Nana必须触 >_>
LQX
55 posts
Joined November 2009
LQX
>w<
bambool
49 posts
Joined August 2009
bambool
给星，加油。
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]

Title: Taketori Hishou

Source: Touhou

Tag: Add NanaDesu in all difficulties

You need a preview point (Timing----Set Current Position as Preview Point, remember it has to be the same in all diffs)

BPM: 192.00
Offset: 322

You need to resize all backgrounds to 1024*768..

Not sure about kiai...because it seems whole song is in kiai ._.

Make the combos color same, also delete one of the blue?

[It's a joke]

00:57:816 (1,2,3,4) - 噗

Since there's a BPM change, I can't give a full mod... Also which difficulty shall I mod??
I'll check this and mod later.

Star
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0

[stress]
sisiJiang
89 posts
Joined February 2010
sisiJiang
hi~
I'm from sunny holic's Modding Queue

图不错,不过有点难，辛苦了.
=================
下面说的全都只是一些建议，要不要采用，得由你自己决定，看适不适合你的风格。

It's a joke
00:19:072 (2,3) - 把 2和3 重叠在一起吧？ 因为你后面的 00:22:822 (1,2,3) - 是重叠在一起的
00:57:822 (1) - 这个slider 有点蛋疼。。（只是吐槽一下而已，不要在意）
01:15:947 (2) - 这个弄成 1.0 DS 吧 有点不协调
01:22:822 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个跳对于新手来说有点难（大概）

Just for fun
整个难度多处换颜色（也就是 new combo） 太频繁，去掉一些吧
00:38:447 (2) - 我想吐槽他长得有点丑 and 00:43:447 (2) 。如果非要这个形状，这样如何？
SPOILER

01:17:197 这里的 break 有点长，足足20秒 01:27:822 或者 01:32:822 开始吧？（这不算什么问题，改不改都行）
01:46:259 (1) - 右1，2格？
01:50:634 (8) - spacing 错了吧？
02:16:572 (3) - ^

Help me!
00:55:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个的位置，是专门处理成这样的？还是随便放，成了这样的？ （小问题，要仔细看才能看的出来。没有多少人会蛋疼地去研究spacing 是不是对的很齐）
00:26:103 (3) - 这里加一个note 怎样？ 如果加了，记得修正spacing
这个难度没用 grid snap。有点不好看。很多地方都有点歪的感觉。用心把整个图都检查一下吧。（总之，都是一些小问题）

Nana
太难了，玩不了。所以可能帮不了你太多。 （玩了2次都是C 的路过，黑化nana不厚道啊
00:19:853 (1) - 这个取消new combo 吧
01:45:009 (7) - 左一格
03:45:322 (3) - 最后一个去掉拍手换成finish
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Royal Flare
谢谢=W=
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Royal Flare
[quote="Tiny stone"]hi~
I'm from sunny holic's Modding Queue

图不错,不过有点难，辛苦了.
=================
下面说的全都只是一些建议，要不要采用，得由你自己决定，看适不适合你的风格。

It's a joke
00:19:072 (2,3) - 把 2和3 重叠在一起吧？ 因为你后面的 00:22:822 (1,2,3) - 是重叠在一起的(ok)
00:57:822 (1) - 这个slider 有点蛋疼。。（只是吐槽一下而已，不要在意）(....我自己也想吐槽
01:15:947 (2) - 这个弄成 1.0 DS 吧 有点不协调（ok）
01:22:822 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个跳对于新手来说有点难（大概）(>_> 应该没问题吧.....（怀疑）....

Just for fun
整个难度多处换颜色（也就是 new combo） 太频繁，去掉一些吧（ok）
00:38:447 (2) - 我想吐槽他长得有点丑 and 00:43:447 (2) 。如果非要这个形状，这样如何？(改掉了...)
SPOILER
[attachment=0:c4863]slider.jpg[/attachment:c4863]

01:17:197 这里的 break 有点长，足足20秒 01:27:822 或者 01:32:822 开始吧？（这不算什么问题，改不改都行）（是因为做不下去了，偷懒...）
01:46:259 (1) - 右1，2格？（ok）
01:50:634 (8) - spacing 错了吧？(貌似没错)
02:16:572 (3) - ^（^）

Help me!
00:55:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个的位置，是专门处理成这样的？还是随便放，成了这样的？ （小问题，要仔细看才能看的出来。没有多少人会蛋疼地去研究spacing 是不是对的很齐）（>_>专门放的，已经对齐了）
00:26:103 (3) - 这里加一个note 怎样？ 如果加了，记得修正spacing（我会反应不过来....XD）
这个难度没用 grid snap。有点不好看。很多地方都有点歪的感觉。用心把整个图都检查一下吧。（总之，都是一些小问题）（我很伤心的告诉你，我用了grid snap...）
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
Delete 2 OSB

[It's a joke]
Click the spoilerbox, sorry for picky

SPOILER
*) If this a normal or easy diff, please reduce the slider velocity, it's waaaay too fast
*) Please reduce a bit the Approach Rate, HP Drain Rate, Overall Difficulty and Circle Size, that's is not good for easy/normal diff
*) Don't use 0,5x BPM Adjustment, new/beginner/average player will confusing

00:50:009 (3) - Make symetric?
00:51:259 (4,5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:50:009 (3)
00:57:822 (1,2,3,4) - Why there is word "H-E-L-P" in each slider??
01:32:822 (1) - Remove the whistle at slider trace (keep the slider at beginning and end of slider)
01:35:322 (2) - ^
01:41:572 (4) - The 1/2 repeating slider is inappropriate for easy/normal diff, since this song is so fast
01:41:572 (4,1) - Spacing error
01:46:572 (4) - The 1/2 repeating slider is inappropriate for easy/normal diff, since this song is so fast
01:49:697 (3) - ^
02:22:822 (4) - This slider are too short easy/normal diff
02:23:759 (5) - ^
02:26:572 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 02:25:322 (1)
02:27:822 (3) - Not stack perfectly with 02:26:572 (2)
02:29:072 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 02:27:822 (3)
02:31:572 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 02:30:322 (1)
02:32:822 (3) - Not stack perfectly with 02:31:572 (2)
02:55:322 (1) - The 1/2 repeating slider is inappropriate for easy/normal diff, since this song is so fast
02:56:572 (2) - ^
03:01:572 (2) - ^
03:09:072 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 03:07:822 (3)
03:10:790 (2) - This short slider are make NO sense
03:12:040 (4) - ^
03:13:290 (6) - ^
03:16:572 (3) - The 1/2 repeating slider is inappropriate for easy/normal diff, since this song is so fast

[Just for fun]
01:12:822 (6) - New combo?
01:54:697 (1) - Extend this to 01:59:072 and make this spinner silenced?
02:25:322 (1,1) - Can you combine this into one spinner?
02:30:322 (1,1) - ^
02:42:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Did you use distance snap for this? If not, please fix this

[Help me!]
00:44:697 (9) - Move 1 grid down?
02:24:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Can you lower the sound for these? This is too loud for me

[Nana]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR
NanaDesu
NanaDesu

Tiny stone wrote:

hi~
I'm from sunny holic's Modding Queue

图不错,不过有点难，辛苦了.
=================

Nana
太难了，玩不了。所以可能帮不了你太多。 （玩了2次都是C 的路过，黑化nana不厚道啊 噗...一不小心就.
00:19:853 (1) - 这个取消new combo 吧 有點變奏..不適合
01:45:009 (7) - 左一格
03:45:322 (3) - 最后一个去掉拍手换成finish
:D:D:D:D
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Royal Flare

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General](ok)
Delete 2 OSB

[Just for fun](ok)
01:12:822 (6) - New combo?
01:54:697 (1) - Extend this to 01:59:072 and make this spinner silenced?
02:25:322 (1,1) - Can you combine this into one spinner?
02:30:322 (1,1) - ^
02:42:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Did you use distance snap for this? If not, please fix this

[Help me!](0k)
00:44:697 (9) - Move 1 grid down?
02:24:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Can you lower the sound for these? This is too loud for me
Thank you
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Lovely Crab
[General]
建议所有的KIAI可以统一起来.

[It's a joke]
00:47:822(1) - 个人建议Easy最好不要出现Slide变速
00:57:822(1) - 不适合出现在Easy里,最好放到Hard甚至更高的难度里
03:15:947(2,3) - 间距有问题

[Just for fun]
01:16:962 - 将近20秒的Break,填掉至少8秒
01:54:384(3) - add a finish
02:44:618 - 将近20秒的Break,填掉至少8秒
03:21:884(5) - add a finish

[Help me!]
01:07:822(1,1) - 整齐点,可以多设置几个白点
02:39:384(1) - 位置没放好
整体感觉有点单调.这个做的是INSANE吧?可以多增加一点jump.

[Nana]
我感觉可以把滑条的声音去掉,特别是前面几个Slide滑条的声音听起来很别扭.
没有Whistle感觉缺了点什么,不过也没有什么大碍..
00:09:072(9) - 这个9我感觉可以去掉
00:14:072(8) - ^
00:18:603(5) - 2 gird left
00:21:415(3) - 去掉这个3，然后在00:21:572加1个NOTE
01:33:759(4) - 移到01:33:915然后把后面1的New combo转到这个NOTE上
02:29:072(9) - 同第一条
02:49:384(7) - 这个变速感觉没有什么意义..
03:10:322(9) - 这段我还是建议和前面一样设置变速
后面半段的BREAK有点多,建议填掉一些(如果是考虑分数的话不填也罢)

my star~
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Royal Flare

Lovely Crab wrote:

[General]
建议所有的KIAI可以统一起来.

[It's a joke]
00:47:822(1) - 个人建议Easy最好不要出现Slide变速(ok,调完了)
00:57:822(1) - 不适合出现在Easy里,最好放到Hard甚至更高的难度里(别的难度貌似没处放>_>)
03:15:947(2,3) - 间距有问题（ok）

[Just for fun]（OK）
01:16:962 - 将近20秒的Break,填掉至少8秒
01:54:384(3) - add a finish
02:44:618 - 将近20秒的Break,填掉至少8秒
03:21:884(5) - add a finish

[Help me!](OK)
01:07:822(1,1) - 整齐点,可以多设置几个白点
02:39:384(1) - 位置没放好
整体感觉有点单调.这个做的是INSANE吧?可以多增加一点jump.（....抱歉的告诉你，这是HARD，jump我也很想加的说）

[Nana]
我感觉可以把滑条的声音去掉,特别是前面几个Slide滑条的声音听起来很别扭.
没有Whistle感觉缺了点什么,不过也没有什么大碍..
00:09:072(9) - 这个9我感觉可以去掉
00:14:072(8) - ^
00:18:603(5) - 2 gird left
00:21:415(3) - 去掉这个3，然后在00:21:572加1个NOTE
01:33:759(4) - 移到01:33:915然后把后面1的New combo转到这个NOTE上
02:29:072(9) - 同第一条
02:49:384(7) - 这个变速感觉没有什么意义..
03:10:322(9) - 这段我还是建议和前面一样设置变速
后面半段的BREAK有点多,建议填掉一些(如果是考虑分数的话不填也罢)

my star~
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
:P
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Sorry, Kinda Late ~

General:
  1. Are the diffs related on any way? They should be.
  2. Try to use the same combo colours for the whole mapset.
  3. Btw I said no Touhou in my queue, Read the rules the next time please.
It's a Joke:
  1. 00:24:323 - This timing section is some ms off.
  2. 00:37:822 (1,2,3,4) - It'd be nice if you unstack these, Stacks are hard for beginners. Try [url=http://puu.sh/pyX]this[/url
  3. Look spacing is not consistent on the map, You need to go through the map using distance snap and make sure everything is correctly spaced, I'll point out some of the patterns that aren't spaced correctly:
  4. 00:47:822 (1,2,3,4,5)
  5. 00:52:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  6. There's more.
  7. Now, you must not use big jumps on easy fix jumps like the following ones:
  8. 01:22:822 (1,2,3,4)
  9. 01:32:822 (1,2)
  10. As I said b4 spacing is not consistent and It's hard to mod if you don't fix those issues.
Just for fun:
  1. Again, Go trough the map using Distance Snap and make sure everything is ok.
Help me!:
  1. 00:23:759 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  2. 01:05:322 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 02:39:072 (10) - ^
  4. 02:39:384 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. Slow Downs do not fit with this diff.
Nana:
  1. Ok This is quite better.
The mapset still needs some work, I'll star it for the effort and because I liked the last diff, Keep up with the good job.
NanaDesu
NanaDesu

Lovely Crab wrote:

[General]
建议所有的KIAI可以统一起来.

[Nana]
我感觉可以把滑条的声音去掉,特别是前面几个Slide滑条的声音听起来很别扭.
没有Whistle感觉缺了点什么,不过也没有什么大碍..
00:09:072(9) - 这个9我感觉可以去掉
00:14:072(8) - ^
00:18:603(5) - 2 gird left
00:21:415(3) - 去掉这个3，然后在00:21:572加1个NOTE K
01:33:759(4) - 移到01:33:915然后把后面1的New combo转到这个NOTE上
02:29:072(9) - 同第一条
02:49:384(7) - 这个变速感觉没有什么意义..
03:10:322(9) - 这段我还是建议和前面一样设置变速 原本就打算這樣設定..
后面半段的BREAK有点多,建议填掉一些(如果是考虑分数的话不填也罢)考慮分數

my star~


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Download: Dark PHOENiX - Taketori Hishou (xlFXTZ) [Nana].osu
rockit_old
rockit_old
Hey, I must did a Taiko version for.
When you think it's good, you can uploaded this Taiko version too!

Greetz

~star

Download: Dark PHOENiX - Taketori Hishou (xlFXTZ) [rockit's Taiko].osu
Royal Flare
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Royal Flare

rockit wrote:

Hey, I must did a Taiko version for.
When you think it's good, you can uploaded this Taiko version too!

Greetz

~star
Thank you very much>.<I will uploaded it :)
rockit_old
rockit_old
You're welcome ;)
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