This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 31, 2011 at 11:58:00 AM

Artist: Earth, Wind and Fire
Title: September
BPM: 124.18
Filesize: 5112kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.44 stars, 142 notes)
2. Frozen's Elements (4.47 stars, 262 notes)
3. Hard (4.36 stars, 277 notes)
4. Normal (2.88 stars, 191 notes)

Download: Earth, Wind and Fire - September
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please note that this is not an attempt at doing an authentic of the EBA cover. This is the original version of the song done in my own style.

11/18: Added an unfinished Normal and more hitsounds in Hard.
12/8: Finished mapping Normal and adding the hitsounds to Hard. Easy coming soon.
12/30: Added WIP Easy. All difficulties almost done.
4/2: Changed slider speed in Easy and adjusted accordingly. Going to go over all difficulties before submitting to Pending.
4/23: Finished hitsounds and changed volume on all difficulties. Moved to Pending.
8/24: Added CoolBoy963's difficulty.
10/15: Made some of Loctav's suggested changes and replaced CoolBoy's Fire with Frozen's Elements.

might make a diff...

EDIT: Making one now. Long combos, though -_-

EDIT2: Here ya go! (WIP) + STAR

Download: Earth, Wind and Fire - September (Behonkiss) [CoolBoy963's Fire].osu

<3 I love you.

star~.

Is this. Umm... going anywhere? I have a completed version of my diff if you're gonna update the map.

Here's my finished version. I'll add more hitsounds if you want.

You don't mind if I post this as an .osu file do you?

Download: Earth, Wind and Fire - September (Behonkiss) [CoolBoy963's Fire].osu

As we speak I'm just cleaning up my difficulty and timing some thingies.

Done!

Download: Earth, Wind and Fire - September (Behonkiss) [CoolBoy963's Fire].osu

Change that to Frozen's Fire . (Sounds a bit ironic :/) Ugh "message too short"

someone please deem my guest diff exempt of kudosu i dont want to get a MAT mad.

EDIT: ~KUDOSU STAR +1~

[General]
Maybe you can find the BG with a higher resolution? Preferable 1024x768.

[Easy]
01:43:085 (4) - weird timing for the slider ending (+it is unsnapped because of new timing section). I suggest shortening the slider to end on 01:43:805 and use a circle @01:44:728 (X); you could also add a repeat to the shortened slider (snapping problem will remain) but the non-repeat version sounds best to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145744 (excuse the crappy netbook resolution)
03:01:953 (2) - add finish?
03:07:604 (1,1) - maybe remove finish from ending points as it sounds quite off with the red tick endings

[Normal]
00:49:248 (1) - too close to spinner ending imo. Better end the spinner where circle (1) is and add a clap to the spinner ending to get a similar effect and much nicer transition
02:07:737 (3) - add clap to ending point to make it more consistent with previous placement?
02:09:873 (7) - again add clap to ending (and reuse this pattern for the following 2 combos in this KIAI)

[Hard]
00:49:248 (1) - similar problem as in normal but in a hard diff it is up to you I guess; anyway I think the spinner ending doesn't match the flow of this song at all so I still suggest ending the spinner on the circle (1) and add a clap to it's ending
01:55:664 (1) - careful with the slider ending point, it is way out of the ending circle (some other sliders have similar problems but as long as you don't resnap or recalc anything it should be fine...and you probably knew this )
02:14:619 (1) - ^

[coolboy936's fire]
I think he wanted to have this renamed to "Frozen's Fire" just in case...
00:38:853 (1,2) - maybe switch circle and slider for this part so the blue tick vocal mapping is easier to get the first time (as slider ending)
01:09:085 (4,5,1) - some hardcore overlaps here (propably unrankable or at least unwanted). Dunno if this is tolareted given the creation date of this mapset but just in case mentioning it here
01:17:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't know what to think of this stream...it surely sounds a bit off (late) but could be due to desynced offset on my netbook. Just in case you might want to check it @25%-50% to be sure
01:23:022 (3) - curved sliders like this could use some polish to make them go smoothly around the circle in the center
03:04:540 (1,2) - maybe increase spacing to previous to make it more readable and use jumps between the different combos instead of anti-jumps?



love the song choice. +1

. SORRY THIS WAS A DOUBLE POST -_- .

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p3n wrote:

[coolboy936's fire]
I think he wanted to have this renamed to "Frozen's Fire" just in case...

YES

00:38:853 (1,2) - maybe switch circle and slider for this part so the blue tick vocal mapping is easier to get the first time (as slider ending)
01:09:085 (4,5,1) - some hardcore overlaps here (propably unrankable or at least unwanted). Dunno if this is tolareted given the creation date of this mapset but just in case mentioning it here
01:17:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't know what to think of this stream...it surely sounds a bit
off (late) but could be due to desynced offset on my netbook. Just in case you might want to check it @25%-50% to be sure

Sounds fine to me tbh

01:23:022 (3) - curved sliders like this could use some polish to make them go smoothly around the circle in the center
03:04:540 (1,2) - maybe increase spacing to previous to make it more readable and use jumps between the different combos instead of anti-jumps?

please dont do this behonkiss; ill do it myself and then send you an updated .osu [/quote]

Yo yo, thanks for your request. Here are my humble advices and suggestions.
Sorry for being late, hadn't have the time to mod actively, sorry for that.
There we go~

[General]

1. Unneccessary .osb file can be deleted. (Full submit then.)
2. "original not cover or elite beat agents version" <- Eh, tags are not there for this. Please edit. XD
3. Add a Source (e.g. Album of the Song) if possible.
4. Eww, reduce kiai time, 1/4 of the song is in kiai mode.

[Easy]
01:02:202 (1,1) - Increase gap between spinner and hitobject
01:47:805 (1,1) - ^
02:03:248 (1,1) - ^
02:44:998 (1,2) - Don't do this jump on Easy.
03:03:834 (1,1) - as already mentioned.

[Normal]
00:54:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copypaste? D: More variety please. At least revert selection or turn it around, lol.
01:51:873 - 02:06:092 - Another reuse of the patterns? Come on...
02:52:546 - 03:07:127 - ^

[Hard]
I see alot of straight sliders. >: Shape them a bit. Make them beautiful.
Timing and spacing is fine, but you copypasted alot here, too, as it seems. Correct me, if I'm wrong.

[CoolBoy963's Fire]
02:07:040 - 02:48:067 (9) - Eh, 57 unsnapped objects are unsnapped.
01:06:959 (2) - spacing.
01:07:903 (4) - spacing.
01:10:738 (2) - ^
01:11:682 (4) - ^
01:17:589 - maybe you should reduce distance spacing to 0,5x and resnap the stream notes, looks better.
02:37:403 - Gnah, don't reuse this patterns and don't paste them flipped over.

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To be honest, I didn't like the often used copypasting in this mappack. I don't want to say, that you're lazy, but it feels like it.
If you add some variety within the patterns and don't reuse the whole chorus over and over again, I'd appreciate this.
Good luck with this map, anyways!

UPDATE!
Download: Earth, Wind and Fire - September (Behonkiss) [Frozen's Elements].osu

The stream at 01:17:589 sounds fine to me. It must just be p3n's settings.

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Loctav wrote:

[CoolBoy963's Fire]
02:07:040 - 02:48:067 (9) - Eh, 57 unsnapped objects are unsnapped. What?
01:06:959 (2) - spacing. Supposed to be like that; it looks good.
01:07:903 (4) - spacing. Supposed to be like that; it looks good.
01:10:738 (2) - ^ Supposed to be like that; it looks good.
01:11:682 (4) - ^ Supposed to be like that; it looks good.
01:17:589 - maybe you should reduce distance spacing to 0,5x and resnap the stream notes, looks better. Done
02:37:403 - Gnah, don't reuse this patterns and don't paste them flipped over. Just deleted it from there

p3n wrote:

[coolboy936's fire]
I think he wanted to have this renamed to "Frozen's Fire" just in case... Re-named to Frozen's Elements
00:38:853 (1,2) - maybe switch circle and slider for this part so the blue tick vocal mapping is easier to get the first time (as slider ending) Done
01:09:085 (4,5,1) - some hardcore overlaps here (propably unrankable or at least unwanted). Dunno if this is tolareted given the creation date of this mapset but just in case mentioning it here Fixed
01:17:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't know what to think of this stream...it surely sounds a bit off (late) but could be due to desynced offset on my netbook. Just in case you might want to check it @25%-50% to be sure Seems fine to me
01:23:022 (3) - curved sliders like this could use some polish to make them go smoothly around the circle in the center CAN'T FIX IT! ARGH! HOW DOES LARTO PERFECT SLIDER ART!?
03:04:540 (1,2) - maybe increase spacing to previous to make it more readable and use jumps between the different combos instead of anti-jumps? Removed part anyways

That's all of it.

Frozen wrote:

Loctav wrote:

[CoolBoy963's Fire]
02:07:040 - 02:48:067 (9) - Eh, 57 unsnapped objects are unsnapped. What?

Any questions? XD

Loctav wrote:

[CoolBoy963's Fire]
02:07:040 - 02:48:067 (9) - Eh, 57 unsnapped objects are unsnapped. What?

[/quote]


Any questions? XD[/quote]

Oh right, I think most of them are just to do with things like this...



Which look fine to me (as in it's supposed to look that way).

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