since you asked when

/me cri

1. 02:05:964 (7) - idk it's kinda hard to play in some skin, consider to stack with 02:05:774 (6) -
2. 02:25:900 (1) - remove finish in tail? I can't rly hear the stronk instrument on dat part in the song itself

1. 00:12:609 (2,3) - maybe 1.3DS works m8 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387479
2. 01:06:913 (1,2) - it should be same jump distance with 01:07:672 (5,6) - imo
3. 01:14:318 (8) - spread it more like grill's legs like how ur 01:13:369 (3,4) - was lol
4. 01:21:533 (6,8) - can swap it or can keep it as well, I just want to point out that this linear pattern 01:21:343 (5,6,7) - was a bit weird to play after I jumped the 4 notes before this
5. 01:27:989 (8) - unstack with (7) so you can emphasize more the ending of kiai like choking material https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387499
6. 02:26:280 (3) - maybe remove finish lol
7. 02:29:318 (2) - ^
8. 03:40:141 (6) - maybe start slider in 03:40:331 - instead so you can keep consistency of nc thingy
9. 03:44:698 (9) - unstack and continue jump for chokiezi, we're already on insane so y we need to hold back? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
10. 04:09:571 (4,1) - switch NC?
11. Send me more weird pix

1. 00:48:495 (7) - idk move lower a bit since triangle of 00:47:926 (4,5,7) - isn't clean
2. 01:03:875 (2) - NC?
3. 01:54:286 (2) - it should be same distance between 01:54:002 (1,3) - since there's no NC
4. it isn't bad but questionable one, 02:17:546 (1,1) - u used 2 sliders here while you used only 1 slider on 01:03:116 (1) - and 03:19:824 (1) - so maybe you convert it to 1 slider as well
5. 02:26:280 (3) - remove finish on head
6. 02:29:318 (3) - ^
7. 02:32:356 (3,4) - kinda weird to play at least for me since tail of (3) can be clickable and maybe there's skip-beat on 02:33:116 - as well
8. 03:35:394 - I felt empty here since she's still singing :c

Akitoshi wrote:

MrSergio's Hard

1. 02:05:964 (7) - idk it's kinda hard to play in some skin, consider to stack with 02:05:774 (6) - Apart from the skin itself, moving it on top of 6 creates a counter-emphasis on the red tick, which is something I avoided for all the map. No fix
2. 02:25:900 (1) - remove finish in tail? I can't rly hear the stronk instrument on dat part in the song itself lol, indeed. @Sotarks, move the finish on the slider head for me (I won't send you an update for just one hitsound =3=)

pinataman wrote:

Hello. Here on request, but I'm too lazy to do more than one difficulty. Hope this helps.

[Inherit the Stars]

The hitnormal is so appropriate for this song Ikr

00:07:483 (7,1) – This flow feels a little odd, a flow more in line with ctrl + G on (1) feels nicer imo I like this sudden change, to emphasize the clap, and the structure of this patern imo, for the moment I'll keep it like this but If someone notice this again i might change it.. But you're the first one who told me that.

00:17:166 (2,3,4,5) – Structure this out into a trapezoid? I guess you don't want this kind of suggestion :/

00:31:407 (5,6,7,1) – I'm biased against stacks, but I would like to see this be different. I tend to like really small spacing instead of stacking for (6) and then go to normal spacing for (7,1). (ex: http://puu.sh/mG9bK/50d5e47046.jpg) okay
03:49:065 (7,8) – Similarly, try making the spacing 1.0x into (8) no, i used this stacks my whole map.. And I like them.
04:06:153 (1,2) - ^ ^

00:53:052 (7,1) – The downbeat is kind of strong, and the two measures are rather different, so wouldn't it be nice to separate them more with a jump of some kind I guess you don't want this either

00:53:242 (1,2,3,4) – Going into 1/1 rhythm is strange pacing. 00:56:280 (1,2,3) – played so much better. If you don't want to use ½ sliders on all of them, try having 00:53:242 (1) – be a ½ slider since there is a slightly held vocal, and leave the rest as 1/1 rhythm for a better transition into the reduced intensity section. see that as a build up xD i like tthe transition here between vocals and rythmn..

01:06:343 (5,7) – This is me being bad at the game, so if you don't change it I don't think you'll have a problem, but I have a problem reading this stacked pattern. It'd be nice if you moved (7) so that its +8x, +8y away from (5) so that the note is a little more obvious to the player. this is fine tho.. but I understand what do you mean.
02:38:432 (3,4,5) – A similar thing. Why hide information from the player by overlapping this so heavily? you're not the first one who notcied this, but i quit like this and doesn't bother me, but i can understand, but also have no idea how to fix this tbh..

01:25:141 (1,2) – For someone who doesn't like how I overlap, you surprised with this. well I didn't say I dislike all your overlaps, there are some overlap who doesn't fit to the song/rythmn, but i think this one is fine here tho.
01:25:710 (2) – Add a green line here to restore the normal volume. There's no reason to silence these notes. 01:28:179 (1) – But then add one here because these should be quieter. owo my bad, i failed here like yesturday, a green line disapeared for some reasons...

01:32:166 (4,5,6) – and 01:35:204 (4,5,6) – I don't see why these stacks are inconsistently placed in the rhythm. What's the reason behind this? why not?

03:35:394 – I know you're going with the drums, but are you sure missing this pretty strong beat is worth it? How does adding a circle here detract from the gameplay? oh my god why ppl complain of this all the time, this is so good LOOOL

03:44:698 (2,1,2) – The change in rhythm without a change in spacing felt a little odd i kinda agree but no idea how to fix this xD tbh

Good luck

Akitoshi wrote:

hai again, plz no kds

since you asked when

/me cri

owwww but u wanted to steal Linada from meh doode!

Inherit the stars I can't really mod expert maps but lemme try

1. 00:48:495 (7) - idk move lower a bit since triangle of 00:47:926 (4,5,7) - isn't clean this is fine lol
2. 01:03:875 (2) - NC? LOOOL yes xDDD
3. 01:54:286 (2) - it should be same distance between 01:54:002 (1,3) - since there's no NC yep mb
4. it isn't bad but questionable one, 02:17:546 (1,1) - u used 2 sliders here while you used only 1 slider on 01:03:116 (1) - and 03:19:824 (1) - so maybe you convert it to 1 slider as well NO TOUCH TO MY Z SLIDER ! xD
5. 02:26:280 (3) - remove finish on head yes done
6. 02:29:318 (3) - ^ok
7. 02:32:356 (3,4) - kinda weird to play at least for me since tail of (3) can be clickable and maybe there's skip-beat on 02:33:116 - as well this is fine
8. 03:35:394 - I felt empty here since she's still singing :csdlkfnvjqdeofikgbnsdikhjufbgnodqifsfklgn

gr8 mapset, Goodluck

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi
Discussed some things in-game

[HB]
00:47:926 (5,6) - For the preiovus 4 circles you use stacks. I also though this was going to be a stack. Consider changing it into a stack done
01:21:343 (5,6,7) - This sudden spacing decrease feela really awkward for. Try to keep the spacing relatively high ok
01:41:850 (1) - imo it's better if you delete this, as the drumroll ended deleted
02:35:204 (2,3) - Flow is a bit abrupt. Move (2) to 292:344 or smth like that for a less linear flow sure
02:42:040 (6) - Move this further apart from 02:42:229 (7) - to give more emphasis, 104:168 looks nice done
03:34:445 (1) - It has an NC, but a relatively low spacing. Please raise it (Stack with 03:35:014 (3) - would work well) fixed
04:09:381 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream is weird. A NC and a strong move on a blue tick. Better make that happen on the white tick! hope its gud now ;w;

MrSergio wrote:

mofu mofu :3

1. 00:50:204(3)- Just my own opinion: I don't feel that this slider follows the instruments really good being a 2/1 slider.If you want to follow the instruments much better in my opinion,you can shorten it to an 1/1 slider and then you have to add a repeat.It should be like in the image above *Click*
2. 00:55:141- Maybe a note here? There are the starting of the vocals and I think they needs some little emphasis instead leaving them empty
3. 01:17:546(4)- As I can see here,I don't hear any cymbal sound here so I guess you have to remove the finish since you don't have cymbal sound to emphasize using finish hitsound
4. 02:04:255(3)- Missing whistle on head? Just my though
5. 02:29:698(4)- I think there's missing finish on head and also on tail can be finish instead of whistle just having consistency with other kiais

09:57 ByBy13: hi
09:57 FCL: hi!
09:58 ByBy13: can you fix your gd now? 
09:58 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/872121 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z [FCL's Normal]]
09:58 FCL: okay, What exactly?
09:58 ByBy13: lemme see
10:08 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/872121 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z [FCL's Normal]]
10:18 ByBy13: 00:03:685 (2)- ; 00:06:723 (2)- just my own opinion.I see that you are following mostly the instruments but you are ignoring the drums.You can use a rhythm such as an 1/2 note (a note which is snapped on the red tick) + 1/2 slider.feel free to decline xD
10:22 FCL: interesting
10:22 FCL: but i follow to melody at moments like this
10:22 ByBy13: okay 
10:22 FCL: if want to decline this, if i can
10:22 ByBy13: you can ofc XD
10:22 FCL: lol xD
10:26 ByBy13: 00:26:660 (4,1)- don't you think that this flow looks a bit odd? after you aim 4,the cursor goes down but the head of the next slider is right up so maybe you have to change the slider for a  better flow because moving the last anchor of that slider could break the pattern with 3 too
10:28 FCL: okay, ctrl+j form will be fine?
10:28 ByBy13: okay
10:45 ByBy13: 01:21:343 (6)- I'd like to replace this note with an 1/2 slider because on 01:21:533 - there seems to be a stronger beat and it is ignored instead being followed or emphasized
10:47 FCL: yep, i replaced it to 1/2 repeat slider
10:48 FCL: it's more follow to rhythm
10:49 ByBy13: okay :)
10:51 ByBy13: 02:10:331 (4,5)- minor spacing perhaps
10:52 FCL: fixed
10:52 ByBy13: okay
10:54 ByBy13: 02:25:900 (5)- I think the finish is supposed to be at the head,not at the reverse arrow
10:54 ByBy13: 02:29:698 (2)- missing finish on head and tail?
10:56 FCL: sure, all fixed
10:56 ByBy13: oki
10:59 ByBy13: uhm in the last kiai you added whistles but on the other kiais i think you didn't :/
11:00 ByBy13: why you don't remove the whistles from the last kiai or adding on other kiais?
11:02 FCL: idk, i just copied hs's from Sotarks diff
11:02 ByBy13: o.o
11:02 FCL: well, i will remove whistles
11:02 ByBy13: okay
11:07 ByBy13: that's all from now
11:08 ByBy13: for*
11:09 FCL: hmm, i think that whitstes beginning with 04:10:710 looks fine
11:09 ByBy13: yes it looks fine
11:10 FCL: ok, i wll kepp it there
11:10 ByBy13: oki

1. 02:02:356(4)- Aici simt ca vocea se opreste la 02:02:546- dupa cum se vede.As propune sa-l 'snap it' la acel tick rosu (1/2 tick) adica 02:02:546- ca sa sune mai bine si mai ales sa se termine odata cu vocea dupa cum vad
   
   Nu prea am multe de spus aici.Arata bine dificultatea asta

1. 01:26:280(5,6)- Why you don't increase the spacing here a bit?Because here the vocals are really stronger and I think they need some emphasis using a little jump instead of antijump

I will continue tomorrow with the mod

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello!
[MrSergio's Hard]
I will mod this difficulty in romanian

1. 02:02:356(4)- Aici simt ca vocea se opreste la 02:02:546- dupa cum se vede.As propune sa-l 'snap it' la acel tick rosu (1/2 tick) adica 02:02:546- ca sa sune mai bine si mai ales sa se termine odata cu vocea dupa cum vad
   
   Păi... cănd am făcut partea acesta credeam că 02:02:641 - era pe baterie lol. Vocea se termina unde ai spus, dar fiind că jucători nu au de apăsat per nota aia nu cred că e problematică chestia asta. Mai mult vroiam să fac ceva de interesant pentru jucatori, e partea cea mai faina (părere personală) din toată melodia >~<
   
   Nu prea am multe de spus aici.Arata bine dificultatea asta :3

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello!

[apple's Easy]

1. 00:50:204(3)- Just my own opinion: I don't feel that this slider follows the instruments really good being a 2/1 slider.If you want to follow the instruments much better in my opinion,you can shorten it to an 1/1 slider and then you have to add a repeat.It should be like in the image above *Click* No change, In the first section I used a really long slider for vocal too... so I use long sliders to emphasize vocals in slow parts >_>
2. 00:55:141- Maybe a note here? There are the starting of the vocals and I think they needs some little emphasis instead leaving them empty Well, actually I did that for clap emphasis.. but I guess that's weird. Changed!
3. 01:17:546(4)- As I can see here,I don't hear any cymbal sound here so I guess you have to remove the finish since you don't have cymbal sound to emphasize using finish hitsound Sotarks did most of my hitsounds, but I myself added this cymbal. Many downbeats + claps are on the red tick, and following them all + maintaining playability for new players won't let me map all those important sounds. A lot of sounds cannot be hitsounded and almost no feedback can be given. Since this note lands on the downbeat, but doesn't have a cymbal in the song, I still found it appropriate to add one for emphasis/feedback.
4. 02:04:255(3)- Missing whistle on head? Just my though Fixed!
5. 02:29:698(4)- I think there's missing finish on head and also on tail can be finish instead of whistle just having consistency with other kiais Actually, redid the hitsounds a bit here.. hope it's okay to put claps instead.

Okoratu wrote:

04:28:748 - sounds very stupid and loud with that slidertick

SPOILER

lol

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Lol I was planning to mod this today and realised it is ranked already kill me

Since I owe you a mod, call me for a mod on your other mapsets anytime~
And congrats!

Sotarks wrote:

Ok son

Sotarks wrote:

Ok son

Sotarks wrote:

I don't thing my map bring cancer to this game, and also I don't like poeple that randomly come on a map already ranked and trashtalk it...
If you had something to say, tell it before.

And chill a bit more about this game guys, you're taking this too seriously ffs. You guys really make me laugh.
But haters will always hate i guess

Anyway I have nothing to discuss with you guys on this map, so please end the drama here and complain about other map, thanks.

And also I accept critism, you guys just don't know, stop judging someone you don't know about.. Your messages brought me cancer for real.
And btw, I didn't insult him by message

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Oh. There's drama even after the mapset got ranked. #ThanksPeppy

Sotarks wrote:

End of the drama

Okoratu wrote:

Why this is handled on such a personal level on a map that cannot be changed anymore is beyond me.