SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z · forum

Mint

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-20T12:32:14+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
mod req via forum pm~
sorry to be late ;w;

[apple's Easy]
00:17:546 (2) - 04:18:685 (3) - 01:40:331 (2,3) - DS Only fixed the middle one. The rest is done on purpose for stacking. Also .04 is still acceptable.

00:41:850 (3) - I recommend to move this to (188, 40) for DS
00:44:128 (3) - Move to (224, 260)
01:23:622 (3) - Blanket :p
02:09:571 (2) - Add NC instead of 02:08:432 (1) -
02:15:267 (3) - Add NC like 01:00:837 (1) -
02:41:090 (2) - Move to (176, 212) for DS Fixed the rest!

Jana Marie wrote:
apple's Easy
01:57:040 (1) - Why not make this beat the same as 01:54:002 (1) ?
I can hear the raging drum sound here It's still a calm part. The strongest drum sound here is actually on the red tick so mapping the white one still wont make sense. I find that the 1/1 slider fits okay here.
03:07:862 (3) - Maybe put this on the previous white tick, i can
hear a drum sound there and extend it to the bookmark Yeah, the 3/4 gap is a bit confusing, but the sound on the red tick (the beep) is so much more powerful than the one on the white tick. Keeping this for now.
04:00:837 (3,1) - Polish this blanket Fixed.
04:24:761 - Missing note The instruments just faded away a few seconds from this. Therefore, I find that this break fits nicely here.
04:27:419 (3) - I think a 1/2 reverse slider will suit on the
lyrics I actually tried that before, but it ended up being too confusing for such a calm part like this one. Sticking to the main track.

Thanks for modding! http://puu.sh/mCKcB/07c153f01b.osu

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-01-20T18:06:47+00:00

Hi!
Sorry I only mod 1 diff, too lazy lol

Inherit the Stars
- AR 9.2 on 158 bpm song are overkill in my opinion. I think AR 9 would be perfect, but thats your decision to make
- 00:06:723 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play very well in my opinion. First, 00:06:913 (4,5) - momentum from previous jump makes these felt awkward because they spaced pretty close (compared with previous jumps). Second 00:07:293 (6,7,1) - This back and forth jumps doesn't flow at all compared from your previous pattern, this could throw player off. Third, 00:08:052 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - double back and forth jumps followed by stacking notes while the music intensity is pretty much the same, I don't think that this is a good idea. I would suggest you to tweak this pattern to let it have better flow overall, in my eyes your current one seems too forced.
- 00:12:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - I know you're trying to make this cool triangle pattern, but this seems too cramped. How about putting 00:13:179 (5) - in 244|128 instead?
- 01:03:875 (2) - LOL what the heck with those hitsound xD
- 01:25:710 (2) - Better to avoid overlap with the slider
- 01:41:850 - I know that there's no drum's sound, but currently it sounds too empty and ends reaaalllyyy awkwardly ._. Put a note here

- 02:05:584 (6,7,8,1) - I personally would put streams in the end of this cool drum section, a little bit of variation wouldn't hurt right? xD
- 02:17:546 (1,1) - Increase the hitsounds volume please, 15% is cool. Because this may be an unrankable issue (not entirely sure tho)
- 02:58:748 (6) - Bring it down a bit, around 340|184. Don't worry too much about not stacking it onto 02:57:040 (4) - tail

- 02:58:938 (7,8) - and bring this up 372|76
- 03:19:634 (1) - I'm sure that this slider should've started at 03:19:824 -
- 03:32:166 (6,7,8) - You should nerf this. Just compare it spacing with similar section before 01:15:647 (5,6,1) - 02:30:078 (7,8,1) -
- 03:35:014 (7) - NC for readability
- 03:35:584 (9) - NC
- 03:35:774 (1) - Remove NC
- 03:44:128 (1,2) - Nerf this a bit
- 03:57:989 (1,1,1) - Why you spam NC here? I see no reason to do so

Nice, Good Luck!

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-01-20T19:49:59+00:00

M4M

[Inherit the Stars]

00:16:027 (2,3,4,5) - separate them in pairs, for example:
00:22:103 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:32:926 (4,5) - these are too close to each other. Maybe move 00:32:926 (4) - this to (171, 272)?
02:42:229 (3,1) - Its hard to suddenly slow down here and tap on 1/2 after 02:41:850 (1,2,3) - this pattern
00:35:014 (1) - ctrl + G?
00:42:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I really think that NC should start from the sliders here, it fits to the sound you're following now.
00:57:040 (3) - It should look like 00:56:280 (1) - . Its way more comfortable to play
01:03:875 - This gun shot doesnt really fit to the song or even the anime. There are a lot better hitsounds you can use here. Not to mention that it can give a serious heart attack.
01:12:229 (3) - This slider can look... better?
01:22:672 (2) - I dont like the way you omitted this white tick without reason especially when lyrics start from this point
01:36:913 (1,3) - swap NC
01:36:913 (1,3,1,3) - ^
02:16:597 (6) - How about 1/2 slider?
02:36:153 (6) - Move the white point to (251, 277)
02:42:609 (1,2,3,4) - You can change them into 1/4 sliders and silence their ends
03:44:128 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is soo unreadable because you're switching from 1/4 by 1/2 into 1/1 and their distance is either constant or completely wrong

[HB's Insane]

01:26:660 (1,3) - If you unstacked these then you should do the same with 01:26:470 (6,4) -
04:09:571 (4,1) - Swap NC
04:10:141 (6,7,8) - How about 1/4 sliders?

Thats it! Its probably the best diff in the mapset!

[MrSergio's Hard]

00:05:014 (5,6) - Make them more blanket-ish
00:14:508 (6,7) - I think they shouldn't be stacked
00:28:748 - You should place a note here and make a double like you did 00:27:419 (1,2,3) - here.
01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:48:685 (1) - Blanket here, you can copy 00:47:926 (3) -
01:16:976 (4,5) - Ctrl + G feels a lot better here
03:54:002 (1,2) - ^
02:10:710 (1,2,1) - You tried to make a heart here but it can look a lot better
02:12:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These circles at the end of the sliders feel spammed, try to place them at the start of the next slider
03:50:014 (2,3) - What happened to the spacing here?

[FCL's Normal]

01:19:634 (2,3) - Look at AIMod, these are too far from each other
00:35:014 (3,4) - Place them on a straight line
02:32:736 (5) - Blanket?
02:54:761 - It feels like there should be a reverse arrow
03:22:483 (3,4,5,1) - Looks a bit messy
Its just my opinion but you're using too many linear patterns

Mod as much as you think I deserve

Good luck with this map ^^

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-20T22:00:46+00:00

[Sotarks' Mod Reply]

pink = stuff fixed
purple = i take it in consideration but keep it like that for the moment
red = missunderstanding
dark blue = keep my own patern

Yohanes wrote:
Hi!
Sorry I only mod 1 diff, too lazy lol

Inherit the Stars
- AR 9.2 on 158 bpm song are overkill in my opinion. I think AR 9 would be perfect, but thats your decision to make okay, i changed the AR to 9,1 for the moment, but I really don't want to put it to 9 though...
- 00:06:723 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play very well in my opinion. First, 00:06:913 (4,5) - momentum from previous jump makes these felt awkward because they spaced pretty close (compared with previous jumps). Second 00:07:293 (6,7,1) - This back and forth jumps doesn't flow at all compared from your previous pattern, this could throw player off. Third, 00:08:052 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - double back and forth jumps followed by stacking notes while the music intensity is pretty much the same, I don't think that this is a good idea. I would suggest you to tweak this pattern to let it have better flow overall, in my eyes your current one seems too forced. well, okay I changed my whole patern, i agree with u.
- 00:12:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - I know you're trying to make this cool triangle pattern, but this seems too cramped. How about putting 00:13:179 (5) - in 244|128 instead? good idea, fixed
- 01:03:875 (2) - LOL what the heck with those hitsound xD removed the shotgun here.
- 01:25:710 (2) - Better to avoid overlap with the slider well, i'll keep it for the moment..
- 01:41:850 - I know that there's no drum's sound, but currently it sounds too empty and ends reaaalllyyy awkwardly ._. Put a note here nope, it's fine here...
- 02:05:584 (6,7,8,1) - I personally would put streams in the end of this cool drum section, a little bit of variation wouldn't hurt right? xD fck streams xD
- 02:17:546 (1,1) - Increase the hitsounds volume please, 15% is cool. Because this may be an unrankable issue (not entirely sure tho) I'll keep it like that tho, for the moment, until BN tell me it's not good enough xD
- 02:58:748 (6) - Bring it down a bit, around 340|184. Don't worry too much about not stacking it onto 02:57:040 (4) - tail y
- 02:58:938 (7,8) - and bring this up 372|76 ^
- 03:19:634 (1) - I'm sure that this slider should've started at 03:19:824 - right, fixed..
- 03:32:166 (6,7,8) - You should nerf this. Just compare it spacing with similar section before 01:15:647 (5,6,1) - 02:30:078 (7,8,1) - ok
- 03:35:014 (7) - NC for readability ok
- 03:35:584 (9) - NC ok
- 03:35:774 (1) - Remove NC ^
- 03:44:128 (1,2) - Nerf this a bit ^^
- 03:57:989 (1,1,1) - Why you spam NC here? I see no reason to do so okok

Nice, Good Luck!

Exile- wrote:
M4M

[Inherit the Stars]
00:16:027 (2,3,4,5) - separate them in pairs, for example: nah this is fine
SPOILER
00:22:103 (5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:32:926 (4,5) - these are too close to each other. Maybe move 00:32:926 (4) - this to (171, 272)? well no, I like the actual spacing of this patern .. :/
02:42:229 (3,1) - Its hard to suddenly slow down here and tap on 1/2 after 02:41:850 (1,2,3) - this pattern It's a tricky moment, well the music slows down aswell dude...
00:35:014 (1) - ctrl + G? Nope, changing flow here to follow vocals..
00:42:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I really think that NC should start from the sliders here, it fits to the sound you're following now. okay
00:57:040 (3) - It should look like 00:56:280 (1) - . Its way more comfortable to play okay
SPOILER
01:03:875 - This gun shot doesnt really fit to the song or even the anime. There are a lot better hitsounds you can use here. Not to mention that it can give a serious heart attack. it's a gun anime tho.. and it fits xD
01:12:229 (3) - This slider can look... better? no?
01:22:672 (2) - I dont like the way you omitted this white tick without reason especially when lyrics start from this point well it fits dude
01:36:913 (1,3) - swap NC Nah
01:36:913 (1,3,1,3) - ^^
02:16:597 (6) - How about 1/2 slider?
02:36:153 (6) - Move the white point to (251, 277)
02:42:609 (1,2,3,4) - You can change them into 1/4 sliders and silence their ends
03:44:128 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is soo unreadable because you're switching from 1/4 by 1/2 into 1/1 and their distance is either constant or completely wrong

Mod as much as you think I deserve

Good luck with this map ^^

Thanks for the mod guys!!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-01-21T16:42:26+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[FCL's Normal]
Generally in Normal diff, stacked notes are not a good choice. Please place the note flexibly as the music's flow. and if you don't intend to emphasize the beat or the flow, i recommend you to add NC at per 2 downbeat.
And, how about erasing non-used inherited points? 02:15:647 - ~ 02:16:597 - << it is just suggestion :3 dont worry, circle+slider stack are fine in Normal

00:31:786 (2) - Remove the circle ^
02:00:078 (1) - Fix blacket too nazi lol
02:10:710 (5) - How about this?? flow is fine, don't want
02:50:204 (1) - Stack this on 02:48:685 (4) - k
02:50:584 (2) - Stack this on 02:48:305 (3) - not necessary lol
03:22:862 (4) - I think it's really unnecessary.. How about removing this? sure
04:19:065 - You missed a circle i follow to vocal here, it's fine
04:27:040 (4,5) - Don't stack xD xd

Jana Marie wrote:
FCL's Normal

Check AiMod for DS issues AiMod is shit. Idk, i checked all thing and all right
00:27:419 (1) - I think this beat suits more than you've made i just want to keep it
01:29:698 (1) - Here also ^
http://puu.sh/mCESU/53b74d501b.jpg
01:41:470 (4) - Remove the clap ok
02:47:166 (1,2,3) - Maybe try this?
http://puu.sh/mCFn3/d36e8fb24b.jpg yayaya nice idea
03:20:584 (1) - Add clap on the head
03:49:445 (1) - Try this http://puu.sh/mCFwq/5568e726bf.jpg nah

Exile- wrote:
[FCL's Normal]

01:19:634 (2,3) - Look at AIMod, these are too far from each other fxed
00:35:014 (3,4) - Place them on a straight line no needs
02:32:736 (5) - Blanket? ok
02:54:761 - It feels like there should be a reverse arrow probably, but not, if u follow to vocal
03:22:483 (3,4,5,1) - Looks a bit messy
Its just my opinion but you're using too many linear patterns linear patterns = best patterns

Thanks to all for modding

SPOILER

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Last edited by FCL 2016-01-21T17:26:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-01-21T17:12:49+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Hard
00:06:913 (4,5) - bad overlap It is intended and it isn't the only one in the map
00:15:078 (8) - please correct stack If you're referring to the nazi x0.01 DS on that, I can't fix it...
03:54:761 (4) -
can make it so, so it will be better
I wanted the curve there tho lol
GL and star~

Electoz wrote:
[Hard]

00:06:913 (4,5) - Not a fan of this overlap imo, maybe do cutting sliders like what you did on 00:03:875 (3,4) ? The pattern suggestion doesn't work the same horizontally and vertically, therefore it isn't the best fit there too. Since this is already the second time someone mentions the overlap I may consider changing it but tbh I don't really see the problem
00:28:559 (5,1) - Kinda hard to read because you do a stack here 00:27:799 (2,3) earlier but with a different beat spacing. lol, sorry but that's not really close to be hard to read. I give a 1/1 break to make the player understand the passage. On a side note: if I use just one pattern for the stacked notes it will become boring too... no please...
At first I thought there's an object here 00:52:293 but there isn't lol, I think you should break the flow here 00:51:343 (5,1) so players can notice the changes in density of objects. That reasoning should be made in case the density increases imo. As it is now it's easy enough to catch up with the rhythm change
01:04:824 (3,4,5) - Now I thought you will do some stacks like you used to do in other parts lol. The same patterns become boring after a while and using stacks everywhere isn't fitting anyway imo
02:25:900 (1,2,3) - The flow here feels a bit uncomfortable, maybe it's just me. It is lol. My bad, this pattern was made "on the spur" and I was going to change it anyway lol
Nice diff. Thanks >~<
Grrrr, I'm not sure that I'll be any help on Insane and stuff so I guess I'll stop here.
Good luck~

Dailycare wrote:
[MrSergio's Hard]
EDIT. You used x1.0 where SV should be slow. In Hard diff, you can control SV more actively There is no need to change SV without valid reasons anyway. As long as the songs has the same pace I won't change the SV (as you can see at the end of the map I did change the SV where the song calmed down)

01:01:597 (3,4,5) - How about this >> (5) is stacked on 01:03:685 (2) - That's exactly the same as my pattern, just mirrored horizontally. I don't see the point in stacking something on an object coming 2 secs later anyway, sorry
01:05:394 (1) - Stack this on 01:04:445 (2) - 's tail It was supposed to be like that lol. The editor did it itself I guess
01:56:660 (5) - Move to (48, 32) Why? What does it change if it goes there? Is the current positioning that wrong?
02:59:128 (5) - Move to (432, 156) Same ^
03:40:900 (2,3) - it's awkward flow imo I rotated 3 a bit but the flow is perfectly fine imo
03:56:850 (5,1,2) - j,just suggestion I'm not a fan of sliders starting on red ticks since they don't play well and I also tried to follow more vocals there than the rest
04:02:926 (5,1) - same as above Same ^

I didn't mod both of insane diffs because you didn't reply to Ambient's modding
~~it's my 100th post~~

@Jana_Marie No problem :3

Exile- wrote:
[MrSergio's Hard]
00:05:014 (5,6) - Make them more blanket-ish Not meant for blanket anyways and I'm full of seeing so many blankets around anyways, so nope
00:14:508 (6,7) - I think they shouldn't be stacked How so? If you give me a reason I can take in consideration. As for my opinion, those circles are following the same sound in the music, therefore same placement
00:28:748 - You should place a note here and make a double like you did 00:27:419 (1,2,3) - here. Inteded, in order to give some breathe to the player and also to make things a bit more interesting
01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:48:685 (1) - Blanket here, you can copy 00:47:926 (3) - For me, this is already enough as a blanket. Unless you are able to notice such things in gameplay and the perfect blanket changes your whole gameplay experience, then yeah, I'm probably being lazy
01:16:976 (4,5) - Ctrl + G feels a lot better here That's not a triangle, but a zig-zag. It was meant to be played like that. My intention was to put emphasis on 01:17:356 (6) - 's role
03:54:002 (1,2) - ^ Same ^
02:10:710 (1,2,1) - You tried to make a heart here but it can look a lot better Slider art isn't my forte Working on something...
02:12:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These circles at the end of the sliders feel spammed, try to place them at the start of the next slider Fixed only for the violet combo, since the other one changes totally flow if I do so and I don't like it
03:50:014 (2,3) - What happened to the spacing here? I can decrease it and hide completely the slider's start if you want, but that jump isn't the first one, neither the last one, so it's fine (I'm also using the previous slider's leniency for that jump, so...)
Good luck with this map ^^

Ok, I guess that's all I had to do here

UPDATE

Spiraler

152 posts

Joined November 2014

Spiraler 2016-01-21T23:22:55+00:00

Requested in my queue, but I can't really find anything in it. In fact I liked it a lot. Starred

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-22T08:58:11+00:00

Spiral527 wrote:
Requested in my queue, but I can't really find anything in it. In fact I liked it a lot. Starred

No problem, thanks.

SoySauce

174 posts

Joined July 2015

SoySauce 2016-01-22T10:19:31+00:00

Hi from my queue

FCL's Normal

00:27:419 (1) - This is too simplified. Shorten the slider to a whole beat and add a beat at where the slider used to end
00:30:457 (1) - ^
00:52:103 (2,3,4,5) - This bunch of notes might be hard too read for a beginner. Try rearraging them or simplifying them
01:07:672 (3) - This circle doesn't represent anything imo. Try deleting this then move this 01:08:052 (3) - to 01:07:862 - and add a repeat
02:15:647 - Spinner here? End it at 02:16:786 - for recovery time
02:18:305 (1) - Why no finish at the big chorus beat?

MrSergio's Hard

00:10:521 (5,6) - Feels kinda weird playing this. Maybe you can try ctrl+j 00:10:521 (5) - ?
00:33:875 (2) - Maybe you can increase the angle of the corner? Looks a bit weird too
03:22:103 (1) - ctrl+h this?
03:29:698 (1) - ^
03:35:774 (1,2) - Flow of these too feels bad. Try changing the circle to another shape though you could keep it if you want

HB's Insane

Can't find anything. Really good diff

Inherit the Stars

00:16:217 (3,4,5) - Spacing feels too different. Consider reducing their difference
00:22:293 (6,7,8) - ^
00:42:609 (8) - NC
00:42:989 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:293 (2,3,4) - same as above
01:35:014 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:153 (3,4,5) - ^
01:36:533 (5,6,1) - ^
01:57:419 (2,3,4) - ^
01:59:128 (3,4,5) - ^
There are more others and I don't know if you did those as a pattern or just on purpose. Although try to revise the others and make the spacing not too different
02:55:710 (1) - Remove NC
03:34:634 (6,1,2,1) - The pauses are quite confusing to read. Maybe you can add a beat at one of those pauses

And that's it! Hope this helps!

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-01-22T13:38:47+00:00

Well, as requested :3/

- MrSergio's Hard have inconsistent Combo Colour 2 with other diffs, please change : (151,255,151) to (72,255,196)

apple's Easy

- Why not just decrease HP to 2 for consistent HP spread? {2, 4 , 5,5...}
- 00:31:976 (3) - How about Ctrl H this slider to make a better (for me ofc) transision with 00:31:597 (2) - ?
- 03:07:672 (3) - When this slider is on red tick - i think it's a little bit off. The neater way is to move this on white tick ( 03:07:672 - ) instead and extend end to downbeat ofc. Sounds nicer imo. And btw 03:08:242 - slidertick is weirrddd, cause he hit on nothing lol.
- Really nice Easy, apple :3

FCL's Normal

- Raise AR to 5 for consistent spread ( AR 4 seems small dude )
- 02:27:040 (6) - I don't hear any Clap sound on this circle, i hear a Whistle one.
- 02:59:128 (5) - Clap on end sounds off too, bcs actual Clap is on 02:59:318 - tho.
- 03:26:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern might be misleading for Normal players, cause of too many stack.. unstack few circles with ds.
- 03:53:242 (3) - Ctrl J could better about flow imo.

MrSergio's Hard

- Wew, OD and HP seems a bit hard. 6 | 5 works better to me B)
- 01:03:875 - Dat finizz xd
- 03:34:065 (6) - minor - Maybe stack this on (5) instead of slider, because the slider one have a finish, starts on downbeat, so it'll be cool if you emphasis it object.
- Nice !

Ok, that's all. Pretty clean mapset, shoot a star like here 02:07:672 - vocalist also want to do that. Idk, maybe later will mod the hardest one, but i'm not certain. Good luck Sotarks o/

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-01-22T14:30:10+00:00

I saw your map on my inbox so here you go even tho you told me "Fuck off" before ;3
idk how to mod never curse me

apple's Easy

02:18:305 (1,2) - idk about this but doing 02:18:875 - as slider is pretty good to hear too since u noted red ticks in 01:03:875 (1) - and 03:20:584 (2) - as well
03:06:533 - maybe add note idk
04:08:432 (2) - just some my shitty taste tho but curve this looks gud too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4383028

FCL's Normal

00:09:191 (1,2) - this flow may pretty hard, try rotate 00:09:761 (2) - to make flow more connected
01:17:356 (4,1) - stack?
02:15:647 - to 02:16:597 - unused green lines lol
02:27:040 (6,7) - convert to slider like 02:38:432 (6,7) -
02:48:305 (3,2) - stack?
03:38:052 (4,3) - stack?

I will continue this tomorrow, I need to sleep early because fuk college life ;3

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-01-22T15:56:22+00:00

Cagrux wrote:
MrSergio's Hard
00:10:521 (5,6) - Feels kinda weird playing this. Maybe you can try ctrl+j 00:10:521 (5) - ? The ctrl + j is the one feeling weird lol
00:33:875 (2) - Maybe you can increase the angle of the corner? Looks a bit weird too If you can define better what "weird" means I can think it up, but for me it's totally fine since that's what I was aiming to from the start
03:22:103 (1) - ctrl+h this? Since that curve is just a decoration it doesn't make much difference whether it's on the right or the left. Btw, I wanted it like that to resemble patterns like 00:06:913 (4,5) -
03:29:698 (1) - ^ Same as above. It also feels kinda weird having it the other way for some reason...
03:35:774 (1,2) - Flow of these too feels bad. Try changing the circle to another shape though you could keep it if you want Changed

Kalibe wrote:
- MrSergio's Hard have inconsistent Combo Colour 2 with other diffs, please change : (151,255,151) to (72,255,196) Not needed at all: combo colors may be inconsistent with the other diffs if the map in question is a GD. Same goes for the kiai times

MrSergio's Hard

- Wew, OD and HP seems a bit hard. 6 | 5 works better to me B) Reduced OD only, since HP is already balanced with the set as it is
- 01:03:875 - Dat finizz xd Blame Sotarks :^)
- 03:34:065 (6) - minor - Maybe stack this on (5) instead of slider, because the slider one have a finish, starts on downbeat, so it'll be cool if you emphasis it object. Why not, cool
- Nice ! Thanks >~<

Thanks for the mods :3

UPDATE

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2016-01-22T18:15:11+00:00

Heya

[Inherit the Stars]

00:04:634 (1) - évite l'overlap en le déplacant juste entre (4) et (5)
00:16:407 (4,5) - faire un jump cassant le DS comme ça en angle obtus (00:16:217 (3,4,5) - ) est assez génant à jouer car le joueur n'a pas assez d'inertie pour le jouer naturellement, aussi je ne comprends pas trop l'intérêt du stack avec 00:16:597 (5,1) -
A mon avis, ça serait plus judicieux de stack (5) avec (4) pour accentuer (1)
00:18:116 - peut-être faire de (5) un slider 1/2 pour mapper la voix
00:18:305 (1) - retire le NC
00:19:634 (4) - comme plus haut, je ferais plutôt un jump avec (1) que de le stack dessus, je suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
SPOILER
00:22:672 (8,1) - ^, bref, je ne reporterai plus ce genre de chose, je pense que tu as compris, après tout dépend de toi et de ton style
00:21:343 (3) - NC
00:27:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - un peu lassant je trouve, que dis-tu de ça, ça permet un peu de build-up:
SPOILER
00:32:926 (4,5) - le spacing est plus petit que 00:32:736 (3,4) - alors qu'il devrait être plus accentué
00:42:609 (8,1) - switch NC
00:58:369 (2) - un peu génant à jouer et surtout je pense qu'il serait plus intéressant s'il était stack au bout de (1) par ex
01:00:647 (4,1) - tu devrais utiliser un spacing plus important, au moins aussi grand que 01:00:837 (1,2) -
01:03:495 - où est le beat? :'^(
01:04:065 (3) - pourquoi autant de spacing comparé à 01:03:116 (1,2) - ?
01:05:964 (6) - positionne-le de façon à ce que 01:05:964 (3,4,6) - forme un triangle, non seulement tu auras un joli pattern mais le spacing de 01:06:723 (7,1) - sera correct relativement aux autres jumps
01:22:103 (1,2) - où est passé le pattern slider - cercle - slider?
01:24:381 (5,6) - je ne vois pas trop l'intérêt de ce stack
01:36:913 (1,3) - switch NC et retire celui de 01:37:672 (1) -
01:38:812 (1,2,3) - spacing encore
01:39:951 (1,3) - switch NC
01:41:850 - tu devrais mettre un cercle ici pour marquer la pause
02:28:559 (7,8,1,2) - tu pourrais former un triangle avec eux, en plaçant 02:28:938 (1,2) - vers x:400 y:230
02:38:622 - je pense que ça casse un peu le rythme si tu ne mappes pas ça
02:45:457 (6,1) - spacing
02:55:710 (1) - retire NC
03:20:204 - comme plus haut
03:33:305 (1) - retire NC
03:34:824 - et 03:35:394 - , je peux comprendre l'intérêt, mais ça fait un peu bizarre rythmiquement, surtout subitement comme ça
04:23:242 (1) - retire NC et je pense que tu peux le placer presque en stack comme 00:18:305 (1,2) -
04:24:381 (5) - NC
04:30:457 (5,1) - switch NC
04:34:255 (5,2) - overlap
dans l'ensemble ça se joue plutôt bien, essaie de revoir ta map avec ce que j'ai dit sur le spacing et accentuations, j'ai sûrement loupé deux trois trucs

[HB's Insane]

00:12:989 (4) - you should space more for emphasis
02:12:229 (1) - ^
02:07:672 (5) - NC
02:10:710 (5) - ^
03:06:723 (7,1) - switch NC, this helps reading the stream as connected to the sldier, instead of a new stream begining on a white tick
04:09:666 (1) - remove NC, or at least place it on 04:09:571 (4) - instead
04:24:381 (6) - NC
04:30:457 (4) - ^

[MrSergio's Hard]

00:58:369 (2,4) - I think you should stack them under (1) and (3)'s respective end instead, like 00:59:318 (1,2) - , this is for more emphasis on the accentuated following white tick
02:46:217 (2) - ^
03:39:381 (2) - ^

[FCL's Normal]

00:42:609 (1) - avoid the overlap by placing it a bit more down
00:54:381 (2) - ^, to the right
01:08:052 (4,1) - avoid overlaping (4)'s end with (1)'s end
01:14:508 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - you should spread this part a bit more and add changes in its flow, looks like a merry-go-round lol
02:39:571 (1,3) - overlap
03:01:027 (1,3) - ^
03:04:634 (3,5) - ^, avoid doing this in normals, this is very confusing to read for beginners
03:38:052 (4,3) - ^
04:35:014 - circle?

[apple's Easy]

00:39:571 (1) - you could make this look better by making the anchors symmetrical
01:16:786 (3,4) - i'd suggest doing this:
SPOILER
02:59:318 (1,2) - maybe something like this instead, less confusing rhythmically:
SPOILER
03:06:913 (2,3) - maybe:
SPOILER
03:20:584 (2) - NC
03:56:280 (2,3) - :
SPOILER
04:02:926 (2,3) - ^

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-01-22T18:59:28+00:00

Cagrux wrote:
FCL's Normal
00:27:419 (1) - This is too simplified. Shorten the slider to a whole beat and add a beat at where the slider used to end it' fine i guess
00:30:457 (1) - ^
00:52:103 (2,3,4,5) - This bunch of notes might be hard too read for a beginner. Try rearraging them or simplifying them
01:07:672 (3) - This circle doesn't represent anything imo. Try deleting this then move this 01:08:052 (3) - to 01:07:862 - and add a repeat rhythm are fine
02:15:647 - Spinner here? End it at 02:16:786 - for recovery time i can't since spacing between spinnerend and circlse will be too less
02:18:305 (1) - Why no finish at the big chorus beat?

Kalibe wrote:
FCL's Normal

- Raise AR to 5 for consistent spread ( AR 4 seems small dude )
- 02:27:040 (6) - I don't hear any Clap sound on this circle, i hear a Whistle one.
- 02:59:128 (5) - Clap on end sounds off too, bcs actual Clap is on 02:59:318 - tho.
- 03:26:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern might be misleading for Normal players, cause of too many stack.. unstack few circles with ds. not think so
- 03:53:242 (3) - Ctrl J could better about flow imo. nice flow, not see a problem

Akitoshi wrote:
FCL's Normal
00:09:191 (1,2) - this flow may pretty hard, try rotate 00:09:761 (2) - to make flow more connected
01:17:356 (4,1) - stack?
02:15:647 - to 02:16:597 - unused green lines lol
02:27:040 (6,7) - convert to slider like 02:38:432 (6,7) - i can't because 7 have clap
02:48:305 (3,2) - stack? 2nazi
03:38:052 (4,3) - stack? ^

Alheak wrote:
[FCL's Normal]
00:42:609 (1) - avoid the overlap by placing it a bit more down n
00:54:381 (2) - ^, to the right
01:08:052 (4,1) - avoid overlaping (4)'s end with (1)'s end it intentionally
01:14:508 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - you should spread this part a bit more and add changes in its flow, looks like a merry-go-round lol
02:39:571 (1,3) - overlap
03:01:027 (1,3) - ^
03:04:634 (3,5) - ^, avoid doing this in normals, this is very confusing to read for beginners
03:38:052 (4,3) - ^
04:35:014 - circle? no

Thnaks for mods!

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_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-01-22T20:22:46+00:00

hey m4m

[Normal]

00:25:331 (2) - delete this note
00:52:103 (2,3,4,5,1) - This pattern is hard to read. Use the one you've used at 00:55:141 (4,5,6,7,1)
00:54:761 (1) - NC here OR delete NC at 00:48:685 (1). This would keep patterns consistent
02:01:217 (4) - make a prettier slider??
02:17:546 (1,2) - reduce hitsound volume a bit and and/or use a different hitsound
02:38:052 (5) - optional - turn into a 1/1 slider like 02:36:533 (1,3) ? its probably the rhythm a beginner has in their head when playing
03:50:964 (2) - reduce the curve a bit so it contrasts with 03:49:445 (1)

[HB's Insane]

00:32:736 (3) - Make the angle of these 2 sliders the same?
00:35:394 (2,3) - - Increase the DS like you did for 00:34:065 (3,4)
01:22:862 (3) - Idk why you didnt put a 1/1 slider when you put one 01:22:103 (1)
02:05:774 (7) - create a small stream or a pair of kick sliders here? It definitely fits the music as well as creates a good transition for the next measure. You also mapped loads of 1/4 notes in this section so I dont see why not

[Inherit the Stars]

01:07:483 (3,4) - shouldnt these be a 1/2 slider since its the same sound as 01:06:913 (1) and 01:08:052 (6) -
01:41:850 - I would love to be able to click something here
02:17:546 (1,1) - I think you should make it more obvious that theses are 3/4 like reduce the DS or something
02:39:191 - the break doesnt feel right imo
03:34:634 (6,2) - turn these into 1/2 sliders?
04:16:217 (4) - I think you should delete this and add 2 kick sliders at 04:16:407 since you've been following this pattern throughout the rest of the section

I couldnt really find much. Couldnt find anything at all worth mentioning in Sergio's diff Oo
I hope this mod was useful in anyway, GL!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-01-22T22:07:44+00:00

@Alheak lol, I had them like the previously, but it was a bit hard to read and I used it too much anyway, so no, but I won't place them again there since it's too heavy to play (tested myself)

Thanks for the mod tho :3

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-22T23:52:22+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
apple's Easy

- Why not just decrease HP to 2 for consistent HP spread? {2, 4 , 5,5...} Changed to 2.5 instead.
- 00:31:976 (3) - How about Ctrl H this slider to make a better (for me ofc) transision with 00:31:597 (2) - ? Current pattern flows much better imo. If I were to CTRL+H the slider, flow with (4) would be broken.
- 03:07:672 (3) - When this slider is on red tick - i think it's a little bit off. The neater way is to move this on white tick ( 03:07:672 - ) instead and extend end to downbeat ofc. Sounds nicer imo. And btw 03:08:242 - slidertick is weirrddd, cause he hit on nothing lol. The thing is, creating a rhythm on the white tick, which is one tick earlier, won't capture the loudest sound. 3/4 gaps are preferred over 1/2 sliders anyways, so I'll keep this. I made it a bit more clear that this is 1/2 by adding a note a few moments before this pattern.
- Really nice Easy, apple :3 thnx :3

Akitoshi wrote:
apple's Easy
02:18:305 (1,2) - idk about this but doing 02:18:875 - as slider is pretty good to hear too since u noted red ticks in 01:03:875 (1) - and 03:20:584 (2) - as well I've got quite some complaints for this note already, which I completely understand. Switching to the vocals immediately might be confusing indeed. Problem is, I just don't know any better alternative. Unlike other KIAI sections, I can not use the reverse sliders as the song just doesn't allow it here. I've tried to keep in sync with the instruments as much as possible (and would like to) with (1,2). I could've continued with the instruments, but with this weird rhythm, I don't think adding another 3/4 gap on top of that would do any better. Therefore I followed the vocals afterwards.
03:06:533 - maybe add note idk Fixed!
04:08:432 (2) - just some my shitty taste tho but curve this looks gud too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4383028 Enormous curve slider before + after this, having a regular slider here fits well imo (also she sings it too!!)

Alheak wrote:
[apple's Easy]
00:39:571 (1) - you could make this look better by making the anchors symmetrical I tried.
01:16:786 (3,4) - i'd suggest doing this: Even tho many main beats land on the red tick now, I feel that skipping the large white tick, while the majority of the map follows a normal rhythm, would be even more confusing.
SPOILER
02:59:318 (1,2) - maybe something like this instead, less confusing rhythmically: I would agree, but it's not advised to use 1/2 sliders in Easy difficulties. People these days seem to prefer 3/4 gaps instead. Something I don't agree on myself, but it's the way it is.
SPOILER
03:06:913 (2,3) - maybe: Did something different (previous mod)
SPOILER
03:20:584 (2) - NC I find it lame to have (1) before this as a single combo.
03:56:280 (2,3) - :
SPOILER
04:02:926 (2,3) - ^ Same as previous answer.

Thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/mFUbE/4afd63ea5e.osu

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-22T23:55:09+00:00

[Sotarks' Mod Reply]

pink = stuff fixed
purple = i take it in consideration but keep it like that for the moment
red = missunderstanding
dark blue = keep my own patern

Cagrux wrote:
Hi from my queue

Inherit the Stars
00:16:217 (3,4,5) - Spacing feels too different. Consider reducing their difference nah fine
00:22:293 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:42:609 (8) - NC okay my bad i forgot this one
00:42:989 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:293 (2,3,4) - same as above
01:35:014 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:153 (3,4,5) - ^
01:36:533 (5,6,1) - ^
01:57:419 (2,3,4) - ^
01:59:128 (3,4,5) - ^ same for all LOL
There are more others and I don't know if you did those as a pattern or just on purpose. Although try to revise the others and make the spacing not too different
02:55:710 (1) - Remove NC
03:34:634 (6,1,2,1) - The pauses are quite confusing to read. Maybe you can add a beat at one of those pauses
[/notice]

And that's it! Hope this helps!

Thanks for the mod Cagrux !

Alheak wrote:
Heya

[Inherit the Stars]
00:04:634 (1) - évite l'overlap en le déplacant juste entre (4) et (5) nah il est pas visible en jeu celui là...
00:16:407 (4,5) - faire un jump cassant le DS comme ça en angle obtus (00:16:217 (3,4,5) - ) est assez génant à jouer car le joueur n'a pas assez d'inertie pour le jouer naturellement, aussi je ne comprends pas trop l'intérêt du stack avec 00:16:597 (5,1) -
A mon avis, ça serait plus judicieux de stack (5) avec (4) pour accentuer (1) qu'es que vous avez tous avec ce patern, il est cool ... Il a rien de grave, et le stack sur le slider c'est parce que je suit les vocals.. Et je trouve que ça rend bien donc voilà.
00:18:116 - peut-être faire de (5) un slider 1/2 pour mapper la voix ouai ok, bonne idée.
00:18:305 (1) - retire le NC ok
00:19:634 (4) - comme plus haut, je ferais plutôt un jump avec (1) que de le stack dessus, je suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
SPOILER
00:22:672 (8,1) - ^, bref, je ne reporterai plus ce genre de chose, je pense que tu as compris, après tout dépend de toi et de ton style
00:21:343 (3) - NC
00:27:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - un peu lassant je trouve, que dis-tu de ça, ça permet un peu de build-up: nope, je prefere mon patern.
SPOILER

00:32:926 (4,5) - le spacing est plus petit que 00:32:736 (3,4) - alors qu'il devrait être plus accentué yes j'ai fix
00:42:609 (8,1) - switch NC yep
00:58:369 (2) - un peu génant à jouer et surtout je pense qu'il serait plus intéressant s'il était stack au bout de (1) par ex ok
01:00:647 (4,1) - tu devrais utiliser un spacing plus important, au moins aussi grand que 01:00:837 (1,2) - nope
01:03:495 - où est le beat? :'^( j'ai pas envi d'en mettre ?
01:04:065 (3) - pourquoi autant de spacing comparé à 01:03:116 (1,2) - ?
01:05:964 (6) - positionne-le de façon à ce que 01:05:964 (3,4,6) - forme un triangle, non seulement tu auras un joli pattern mais le spacing de 01:06:723 (7,1) - sera correct relativement aux autres jumps
01:22:103 (1,2) - où est passé le pattern slider - cercle - slider? il a disparu :O
01:24:381 (5,6) - je ne vois pas trop l'intérêt de ce stack
01:36:913 (1,3) - switch NC et retire celui de 01:37:672 (1) - nope je NC au gros beat de guitare.
01:38:812 (1,2,3) - spacing encore
01:39:951 (1,3) - switch NC
01:41:850 - tu devrais mettre un cercle ici pour marquer la pause oki
02:28:559 (7,8,1,2) - tu pourrais former un triangle avec eux, en plaçant 02:28:938 (1,2) - vers x:400 y:230 nope
02:38:622 - je pense que ça casse un peu le rythme si tu ne mappes pas ça je trouve pas
02:45:457 (6,1) - spacing
02:55:710 (1) - retire NC
03:20:204 - comme plus haut
03:33:305 (1) - retire NC
03:34:824 - et 03:35:394 - , je peux comprendre l'intérêt, mais ça fait un peu bizarre rythmiquement, surtout subitement comme ça franchement je vois pas le problème ici...
04:23:242 (1) - retire NC et je pense que tu peux le placer presque en stack comme 00:18:305 (1,2) -
04:24:381 (5) - NC
04:30:457 (5,1) - switch NC
04:34:255 (5,2) - overlap
dans l'ensemble ça se joue plutôt bien, essaie de revoir ta map avec ce que j'ai dit sur le spacing et accentuations, j'ai sûrement loupé deux trois trucs

Thanks for the mod!

Nathan Kiss wrote:
hey m4m
[Inherit the Stars]
01:07:483 (3,4) - shouldnt these be a 1/2 slider since its the same sound as 01:06:913 (1) and 01:08:052 (6) - not really
01:41:850 - I would love to be able to click something here fixed above
02:17:546 (1,1) - I think you should make it more obvious that theses are 3/4 like reduce the DS or something i'm not so sure of that, but for this patern i'll wait for a BN/QAT to validate this...
02:39:191 - the break doesnt feel right imo feels right for me
03:34:634 (6,2) - turn these into 1/2 sliders? nope
04:16:217 (4) - I think you should delete this and add 2 kick sliders at 04:16:407 since you've been following this pattern throughout the rest of the section well, i don't want to

I couldnt really find much. Couldnt find anything at all worth mentioning in Sergio's diff Oo
I hope this mod was useful in anyway, GL!

Thanks for the mod !!

All dif updated~

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-01-23T04:46:16+00:00

Hello. Here on request, but I'm too lazy to do more than one difficulty. Hope this helps.

[Inherit the Stars]

The hitnormal is so appropriate for this song

00:07:483 (7,1) – This flow feels a little odd, a flow more in line with ctrl + G on (1) feels nicer imo

00:17:166 (2,3,4,5) – ~~Structure this out into a trapezoid?~~ I guess you don't want this kind of suggestion :/

00:31:407 (5,6,7,1) – I'm biased against stacks, but I would like to see this be different. I tend to like really small spacing instead of stacking for (6) and then go to normal spacing for (7,1). (ex: http://puu.sh/mG9bK/50d5e47046.jpg)
03:49:065 (7,8) – Similarly, try making the spacing 1.0x into (8)
04:06:153 (1,2) - ^

00:53:052 (7,1) – ~~The downbeat is kind of strong, and the two measures are rather different, so wouldn't it be nice to separate them more with a jump of some kind~~ I guess you don't want this either

00:53:242 (1,2,3,4) – Going into 1/1 rhythm is strange pacing. 00:56:280 (1,2,3) – played so much better. If you don't want to use ½ sliders on all of them, try having 00:53:242 (1) – be a ½ slider since there is a slightly held vocal, and leave the rest as 1/1 rhythm for a better transition into the reduced intensity section.

01:06:343 (5,7) – This is me being bad at the game, so if you don't change it I don't think you'll have a problem, but I have a problem reading this stacked pattern. It'd be nice if you moved (7) so that its +8x, +8y away from (5) so that the note is a little more obvious to the player.
02:38:432 (3,4,5) – A similar thing. Why hide information from the player by overlapping this so heavily?

01:25:141 (1,2) – For someone who doesn't like how I overlap, you surprised with this.
01:25:710 (2) – Add a green line here to restore the normal volume. There's no reason to silence these notes. 01:28:179 (1) – But then add one here because these should be quieter.

01:32:166 (4,5,6) – and 01:35:204 (4,5,6) – I don't see why these stacks are inconsistently placed in the rhythm. What's the reason behind this?

03:35:394 – I know you're going with the drums, but are you sure missing this pretty strong beat is worth it? How does adding a circle here detract from the gameplay?

03:44:698 (2,1,2) – The change in rhythm without a change in spacing felt a little odd

Good luck

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2016-01-23T06:05:38+00:00

hai again, plz no kds

since you asked when

/me cri

MrSergio's Hard

02:05:964 (7) - idk it's kinda hard to play in some skin, consider to stack with 02:05:774 (6) -
02:25:900 (1) - remove finish in tail? I can't rly hear the stronk instrument on dat part in the song itself

HB's Insane

00:12:609 (2,3) - maybe 1.3DS works m8 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387479
01:06:913 (1,2) - it should be same jump distance with 01:07:672 (5,6) - imo
01:14:318 (8) - spread it more like grill's legs like how ur 01:13:369 (3,4) - was lol
01:21:533 (6,8) - can swap it or can keep it as well, I just want to point out that this linear pattern 01:21:343 (5,6,7) - was a bit weird to play after I jumped the 4 notes before this
01:27:989 (8) - unstack with (7) so you can emphasize more the ending of kiai like choking material https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387499
02:26:280 (3) - maybe remove finish lol
02:29:318 (2) - ^
03:40:141 (6) - maybe start slider in 03:40:331 - instead so you can keep consistency of nc thingy
03:44:698 (9) - unstack and continue jump for chokiezi, we're already on insane so y we need to hold back? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
04:09:571 (4,1) - switch NC?
Send me more weird pix

Inherit the stars I can't really mod expert maps but lemme try

00:48:495 (7) - idk move lower a bit since triangle of 00:47:926 (4,5,7) - isn't clean
01:03:875 (2) - NC?
01:54:286 (2) - it should be same distance between 01:54:002 (1,3) - since there's no NC
it isn't bad but questionable one, 02:17:546 (1,1) - u used 2 sliders here while you used only 1 slider on 01:03:116 (1) - and 03:19:824 (1) - so maybe you convert it to 1 slider as well
02:26:280 (3) - remove finish on head
02:29:318 (3) - ^
02:32:356 (3,4) - kinda weird to play at least for me since tail of (3) can be clickable and maybe there's skip-beat on 02:33:116 - as well
03:35:394 - I felt empty here since she's still singing :c

gr8 mapset, Goodluck

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-01-23T10:37:43+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
MrSergio's Hard
02:05:964 (7) - idk it's kinda hard to play in some skin, consider to stack with 02:05:774 (6) - Apart from the skin itself, moving it on top of 6 creates a counter-emphasis on the red tick, which is something I avoided for all the map. No fix
02:25:900 (1) - remove finish in tail? I can't rly hear the stronk instrument on dat part in the song itself lol, indeed. @Sotarks, move the finish on the slider head for me (I won't send you an update for just one hitsound =3=)

Thanks for your mod :3

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-23T11:21:09+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hello. Here on request, but I'm too lazy to do more than one difficulty. Hope this helps.

[Inherit the Stars]

The hitnormal is so appropriate for this song Ikr

00:07:483 (7,1) – This flow feels a little odd, a flow more in line with ctrl + G on (1) feels nicer imo I like this sudden change, to emphasize the clap, and the structure of this patern imo, for the moment I'll keep it like this but If someone notice this again i might change it.. But you're the first one who told me that.

00:17:166 (2,3,4,5) – ~~Structure this out into a trapezoid?~~ I guess you don't want this kind of suggestion :/

00:31:407 (5,6,7,1) – I'm biased against stacks, but I would like to see this be different. I tend to like really small spacing instead of stacking for (6) and then go to normal spacing for (7,1). (ex: http://puu.sh/mG9bK/50d5e47046.jpg) okay
03:49:065 (7,8) – Similarly, try making the spacing 1.0x into (8) no, i used this stacks my whole map.. And I like them.
04:06:153 (1,2) - ^ ^

00:53:052 (7,1) – ~~The downbeat is kind of strong, and the two measures are rather different, so wouldn't it be nice to separate them more with a jump of some kind~~ I guess you don't want this either

00:53:242 (1,2,3,4) – Going into 1/1 rhythm is strange pacing. 00:56:280 (1,2,3) – played so much better. If you don't want to use ½ sliders on all of them, try having 00:53:242 (1) – be a ½ slider since there is a slightly held vocal, and leave the rest as 1/1 rhythm for a better transition into the reduced intensity section. see that as a build up xD i like tthe transition here between vocals and rythmn..

01:06:343 (5,7) – This is me being bad at the game, so if you don't change it I don't think you'll have a problem, but I have a problem reading this stacked pattern. It'd be nice if you moved (7) so that its +8x, +8y away from (5) so that the note is a little more obvious to the player. this is fine tho.. but I understand what do you mean.
02:38:432 (3,4,5) – A similar thing. Why hide information from the player by overlapping this so heavily? you're not the first one who notcied this, but i quit like this and doesn't bother me, but i can understand, but also have no idea how to fix this tbh..

01:25:141 (1,2) – For someone who doesn't like how I overlap, you surprised with this. well I didn't say I dislike all your overlaps, there are some overlap who doesn't fit to the song/rythmn, but i think this one is fine here tho.
01:25:710 (2) – Add a green line here to restore the normal volume. There's no reason to silence these notes. 01:28:179 (1) – But then add one here because these should be quieter. owo my bad, i failed here like yesturday, a green line disapeared for some reasons...

01:32:166 (4,5,6) – and 01:35:204 (4,5,6) – I don't see why these stacks are inconsistently placed in the rhythm. What's the reason behind this? why not?

03:35:394 – I know you're going with the drums, but are you sure missing this pretty strong beat is worth it? How does adding a circle here detract from the gameplay? oh my god why ppl complain of this all the time, this is so good LOOOL

03:44:698 (2,1,2) – The change in rhythm without a change in spacing felt a little odd i kinda agree but no idea how to fix this xD tbh

Good luck

Thanks for the mod dude, i apreciate !

Akitoshi wrote:
hai again, plz no kds
since you asked when
/me cri
owwww but u wanted to steal Linada from meh doode!

Inherit the stars I can't really mod expert maps but lemme try
00:48:495 (7) - idk move lower a bit since triangle of 00:47:926 (4,5,7) - isn't clean this is fine lol
01:03:875 (2) - NC? LOOOL yes xDDD
01:54:286 (2) - it should be same distance between 01:54:002 (1,3) - since there's no NC yep mb
it isn't bad but questionable one, 02:17:546 (1,1) - u used 2 sliders here while you used only 1 slider on 01:03:116 (1) - and 03:19:824 (1) - so maybe you convert it to 1 slider as well NO TOUCH TO MY Z SLIDER ! xD
02:26:280 (3) - remove finish on head yes done
02:29:318 (3) - ^ok
02:32:356 (3,4) - kinda weird to play at least for me since tail of (3) can be clickable and maybe there's skip-beat on 02:33:116 - as well this is fine
03:35:394 - I felt empty here since she's still singing :csdlkfnvjqdeofikgbnsdikhjufbgnodqifsfklgn
gr8 mapset, Goodluck

Thanks for the mod guys!!
03:35:014 (1,2) - PLS GUYS WHY U ALL NOTICE THIS!!! ><

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-01-23T15:21:39+00:00

Hi
Discussed some things in-game

[HB]
00:47:926 (5,6) - For the preiovus 4 circles you use stacks. I also though this was going to be a stack. Consider changing it into a stack
01:21:343 (5,6,7) - This sudden spacing decrease feela really awkward for. Try to keep the spacing relatively high
01:41:850 (1) - imo it's better if you delete this, as the drumroll ended
02:35:204 (2,3) - Flow is a bit abrupt. Move (2) to 292:344 or smth like that for a less linear flow
02:42:040 (6) - Move this further apart from 02:42:229 (7) - to give more emphasis, 104:168 looks nice
03:34:445 (1) - It has an NC, but a relatively low spacing. Please raise it (Stack with 03:35:014 (3) - would work well)
04:09:381 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream is weird. A NC and a strong move on a blue tick. Better make that happen on the white tick!

[ItS]
00:09:002 (6) - This part is rather brutal, as it's stacked under (5) and causes a loss of movementspeed, but then the movement to the next note requires high speed, which is rather hard to read
00:16:597 (5) - Spacing was really confusing for me. Please keep the low spacing from (2,3,4)
01:07:483 (3,4,5) - Please increase spacing. A high spacing with a low spacing part plays even worse then the other way around imo
02:42:229 (3) - Te sounds on both the start and end are strong. Make this 2 circles (with high spacing) to accentuate this
03:44:698 (2,1) - Increase spacing please

Other diffs are fine

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-01-23T16:50:57+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Hi
Discussed some things in-game

[HB]
00:47:926 (5,6) - For the preiovus 4 circles you use stacks. I also though this was going to be a stack. Consider changing it into a stack done
01:21:343 (5,6,7) - This sudden spacing decrease feela really awkward for. Try to keep the spacing relatively high ok
01:41:850 (1) - imo it's better if you delete this, as the drumroll ended deleted
02:35:204 (2,3) - Flow is a bit abrupt. Move (2) to 292:344 or smth like that for a less linear flow sure
02:42:040 (6) - Move this further apart from 02:42:229 (7) - to give more emphasis, 104:168 looks nice done
03:34:445 (1) - It has an NC, but a relatively low spacing. Please raise it (Stack with 03:35:014 (3) - would work well) fixed
04:09:381 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream is weird. A NC and a strong move on a blue tick. Better make that happen on the white tick! hope its gud now ;w;

Thanks 0/

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-23T17:38:16+00:00

All diff updated~

02:17:546 - Fixed volume here for hard, insane and my diff.

Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-01-23T22:24:01+00:00

Hi, as requested m4m w/e

z

[General]
Imo, sergio and apple's kiai's sections make more sense since 02:44:128 - really doesn't feel like it deserves a kiai time, but that's just me
nice bg

[N]
00:47:166 (3,4,5) - Interesting since it's very different from 1/2s sequences like 00:55:141 (4,5) - , maybe make like below since it only requires to reshape sliders

SPOILER

00:55:900 (6,7) - Since you make these clickable, why not make 00:52:862 (4) - as well?
01:05:014 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Try to make neater, this looks pretty all over the place right now
03:35:014 (4) - Missing clap at end?

[H]
00:23:622 (3,4) - It follows vocals but it's interesting how it's the only not repeat slider lol
01:03:875 (1) - remove finish
02:32:736 (4,1) - not stack on purpose (I know it's because of stack leniency but could you possibly lower it)?

[I]
01:03:875 (1) - Remove finish
01:31:976 (5) - this is the only thing that didn't really look like a jump with the drum so yeah
02:07:672 (5,6,1) - I dunno, this is a whole stack leniency thing, so you can probably reduce it if you wanted to, it just looks awk, alternative to having stack leniency changed is just moving 1
02:17:546 (1) - Since you want to make into a slider instead of clicking it (i really don't see why though), make it so the curve is where the slider tick is, since that's when the second vocal w/e gets said, so there's at least some emphasis on it

That's all from me, didn't look at apple's because it's probably fine, and didn't look at ItS because listening to ~15 minutes of the same song is kinda tiring

Seijiro

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Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-01-24T13:39:51+00:00

@Battle I didn't fix just the first one since I kinda wanted a transition for the nest part and using always repeat sliders on that gets boring =3=

Thanks for the mod :3

UPDATE

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-24T14:09:50+00:00

All diff updated~

Bara-

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Bara- 2016-01-24T14:32:18+00:00

Bubbled!

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-01-24T14:33:19+00:00

THANKS ! <3

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-01-24T14:34:34+00:00

mofu mofu :3

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-01-24T14:35:56+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
mofu mofu :3

nya mofu mofu mofu hashiridasu~ :3

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DeletedUser_1574070 2016-01-25T11:31:07+00:00

oh bubbled sry for coming too late

Janpai

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Janpai 2016-01-25T12:33:26+00:00

Wao └(^o^)┘

meii18

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meii18 2016-01-25T20:00:44+00:00

Hello!

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apple's Easy]

00:50:204(3)- Just my own opinion: I don't feel that this slider follows the instruments really good being a 2/1 slider.If you want to follow the instruments much better in my opinion,you can shorten it to an 1/1 slider and then you have to add a repeat.It should be like in the image above *Click*
00:55:141- Maybe a note here? There are the starting of the vocals and I think they needs some little emphasis instead leaving them empty
01:17:546(4)- As I can see here,I don't hear any cymbal sound here so I guess you have to remove the finish since you don't have cymbal sound to emphasize using finish hitsound
02:04:255(3)- Missing whistle on head? Just my though
02:29:698(4)- I think there's missing finish on head and also on tail can be finish instead of whistle just having consistency with other kiais

For FCL's Normal I did an IRC with him

mod

09:57 ByBy13: hi
09:57 FCL: hi!
09:58 ByBy13: can you fix your gd now? 
09:58 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/872121 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z [FCL's Normal]]
09:58 FCL: okay, What exactly?
09:58 ByBy13: lemme see
10:08 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/872121 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z [FCL's Normal]]
10:18 ByBy13: 00:03:685 (2)- ; 00:06:723 (2)- just my own opinion.I see that you are following mostly the instruments but you are ignoring the drums.You can use a rhythm such as an 1/2 note (a note which is snapped on the red tick) + 1/2 slider.feel free to decline xD
10:22 FCL: interesting
10:22 FCL: but i follow to melody at moments like this
10:22 ByBy13: okay 
10:22 FCL: if want to decline this, if i can
10:22 ByBy13: you can ofc XD
10:22 FCL: lol xD
10:26 ByBy13: 00:26:660 (4,1)- don't you think that this flow looks a bit odd? after you aim 4,the cursor goes down but the head of the next slider is right up so maybe you have to change the slider for a  better flow because moving the last anchor of that slider could break the pattern with 3 too
10:28 FCL: okay, ctrl+j form will be fine?
10:28 ByBy13: okay
10:45 ByBy13: 01:21:343 (6)- I'd like to replace this note with an 1/2 slider because on 01:21:533 - there seems to be a stronger beat and it is ignored instead being followed or emphasized
10:47 FCL: yep, i replaced it to 1/2 repeat slider
10:48 FCL: it's more follow to rhythm
10:49 ByBy13: okay :)
10:51 ByBy13: 02:10:331 (4,5)- minor spacing perhaps
10:52 FCL: fixed
10:52 ByBy13: okay
10:54 ByBy13: 02:25:900 (5)- I think the finish is supposed to be at the head,not at the reverse arrow
10:54 ByBy13: 02:29:698 (2)- missing finish on head and tail?
10:56 FCL: sure, all fixed
10:56 ByBy13: oki
10:59 ByBy13: uhm in the last kiai you added whistles but on the other kiais i think you didn't :/
11:00 ByBy13: why you don't remove the whistles from the last kiai or adding on other kiais?
11:02 FCL: idk, i just copied hs's from Sotarks diff
11:02 ByBy13: o.o
11:02 FCL: well, i will remove whistles
11:02 ByBy13: okay
11:07 ByBy13: that's all from now
11:08 ByBy13: for*
11:09 FCL: hmm, i think that whitstes beginning with 04:10:710 looks fine
11:09 ByBy13: yes it looks fine
11:10 FCL: ok, i wll kepp it there
11:10 ByBy13: oki

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MrSergio's Hard]
I will mod this difficulty in romanian

02:02:356(4)- Aici simt ca vocea se opreste la 02:02:546- dupa cum se vede.As propune sa-l 'snap it' la acel tick rosu (1/2 tick) adica 02:02:546- ca sa sune mai bine si mai ales sa se termine odata cu vocea dupa cum vad

Nu prea am multe de spus aici.Arata bine dificultatea asta

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HB's Insane]

01:26:280(5,6)- Why you don't increase the spacing here a bit?Because here the vocals are really stronger and I think they need some emphasis using a little jump instead of antijump

~~I will continue tomorrow with the mod~~ Did IRCs with mapper and GDers

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Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-01-25T22:34:47+00:00

ByBy13 wrote:
Hello!
[MrSergio's Hard]
I will mod this difficulty in romanian
02:02:356(4)- Aici simt ca vocea se opreste la 02:02:546- dupa cum se vede.As propune sa-l 'snap it' la acel tick rosu (1/2 tick) adica 02:02:546- ca sa sune mai bine si mai ales sa se termine odata cu vocea dupa cum vad

Păi... cănd am făcut partea acesta credeam că 02:02:641 - era pe baterie lol. Vocea se termina unde ai spus, dar fiind că jucători nu au de apăsat per nota aia nu cred că e problematică chestia asta. Mai mult vroiam să fac ceva de interesant pentru jucatori, e partea cea mai faina (părere personală) din toată melodia >~<

Nu prea am multe de spus aici.Arata bine dificultatea asta :3

Mint

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Mint 2016-01-25T22:56:38+00:00

ByBy13 wrote:
Hello!

[apple's Easy]
00:50:204(3)- Just my own opinion: I don't feel that this slider follows the instruments really good being a 2/1 slider.If you want to follow the instruments much better in my opinion,you can shorten it to an 1/1 slider and then you have to add a repeat.It should be like in the image above *Click* No change, In the first section I used a really long slider for vocal too... so I use long sliders to emphasize vocals in slow parts >_>
00:55:141- Maybe a note here? There are the starting of the vocals and I think they needs some little emphasis instead leaving them empty Well, actually I did that for clap emphasis.. but I guess that's weird. Changed!
01:17:546(4)- As I can see here,I don't hear any cymbal sound here so I guess you have to remove the finish since you don't have cymbal sound to emphasize using finish hitsound Sotarks did most of my hitsounds, but I myself added this cymbal. Many downbeats + claps are on the red tick, and following them all + maintaining playability for new players won't let me map all those important sounds. A lot of sounds cannot be hitsounded and almost no feedback can be given. Since this note lands on the downbeat, but doesn't have a cymbal in the song, I still found it appropriate to add one for emphasis/feedback.
02:04:255(3)- Missing whistle on head? Just my though Fixed!
02:29:698(4)- I think there's missing finish on head and also on tail can be finish instead of whistle just having consistency with other kiais Actually, redid the hitsounds a bit here.. hope it's okay to put claps instead.

Thanks! http://puu.sh/mJDue/9c0411a8cd.osu

meii18

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meii18 2016-01-26T20:25:06+00:00

I did IRCs with GDers and with the mapper.We did changes,also changed the HP to 2.5 in easy and AR to 7 in Hard.Seems fine to my eyes now
Qualified!

Bara-

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Bara- 2016-01-26T20:25:52+00:00

Gratz!!!

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-01-26T20:26:55+00:00

YEEEEEEEEEEY !!!!

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