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Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose [Osu|Taiko]

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arien666
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arien666
[General]
First of all, delete unused osb file :3

[Easy]
01:20:482 (3,4,5) - [Suggestion and nazi orz] How about move 1 grid right and down?
01:25:282 (1,1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make same distance?
01:35:482 (4) - It might be 2 returns, not 3 returns ;_;

[Hard]
00:18:682 (3,4,1) - It seems like Insane thing imo ;_; Cuz of confusion :3...?
01:09:982 (1) - Delete NC :3
01:09:682 (1) - If you do ^ thing, change combo color please :3

[Taiko :3]
OMG TOO HARD ;_;
00:33:682 (219) - Delete Finish :3?

[Extreme]
OMG, TOO HARD :3
01:21:082 (6,7,8,9,10) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

[Sharon's]
Seems fine :3



Umm...
Where's goose ?<<<
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Simple of sounding ~~~

At first, it is a good song.
Get your best ! 加油!

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Hard].osu
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
Fixed lol...
Fung XD

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
Muya
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Joined August 2009
Muya
:shock:
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
wmfchris
>_<
Pokie
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Pokie
General
  • - sliderwhistle基本不需要
    - Offset: 2472 統一各難度offset, resnap, 調整綠線位置
    - Combo Color:
    Combo1 : 20,96,222
    Combo2 : 184,225,237
    Combo3 : 89,197,255
    Combo4 : 40,148,255

Easy
  • 00:16:572 (2,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32483
    00:32:472 (1) - sliderwhistle再見
    00:48:072 (1,2,3) - 給Easy的話難度偏高, 建議複製00:45:672 (1,2,3) - 再重新排
    01:11:172 (6,1) - 這裡的連接性差


    Hard
    [list:2f4ea]
00:24:522 (2) - 這裡可以考慮new combo 或加上 00:23:482 (1) - 取消new combo
00:30:072 (3,4) - 不打算放在一水平上?
00:51:672 (2) - 少了一個折返
00:56:172 (3,4) - 會造成誤讀, 試著4 new combo?
01:07:572 (1,2,3) - 這三個基本看不到順序 slider短的話沒關係 但如果以後也要放這種排法的長slider就要注意一下
01:36:672 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 低AR造成5連的外圈擠在一起 在不動OA的情況下 希望可以把5連換成1/4 slider 另外這個結尾處理的不夠


Extreme
  • - 我不理解為什麼AR要和Hard一樣 AR +2 OA隨便你加不加
00:20:172 (4) - new combo
00:21:372 (5) - ^
00:21:672 (1) - 取消
00:22:872 (6) - new combo
00:23:472 (11) - ^
00:40:872 (1) - 結束點: 00:42:072 -
00:42:072 (1) - 起始點: 00:42:147 - 結束點不變
00:50:472 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個即使開了AR8 也是難以閱讀 改間距
00:50:772 (1) - 取消new combo
00:51:372 (5) - ^
01:00:672 (3,4,5,6) - 這四個note的角度太那啥了啊
01:27:672 (7) - new combo 方便辨認3/4


Sharon's
  • - wth saymun's dBu mix Himiko
沒什麼能挑的 cp痕跡稍明顯
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Heya there o/

[General]

As usual, delete the .osb file and full submit blah blah blah...

mp3 = 320kbit/s

orz...

You need to reencode it at 256kbit/s
320kbit/s is unrankable :/
Try to find someone for that

Also, there is a different kiai time on Sharon's and...a different timing ?! o.o

PS : I don't know how to mod Taiko, sorry...

[Easy]

Seems fine

[Hard]

Sometimes, it's very...square

01:06:382 (5) - Make it 1/1 shorter then add a reverse arrow or a circle
01:36:682 (3) - New combo ?

[Extreme]

00:40:882 (1) - Finish this spinner at 00:41:782
00:43:432 (1) - Finish this slider at 00:43:732 (make it 1/2 shorter)
00:44:782 (6) - Move this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:50:482 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Look like a weird accelerated spacing
01:00:532 - This part don't fit very well with the song, something like that should be fine : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32490
01:09:843 - ^ : http://puu.sh/kPR
01:18:532 (5) - Make it 1/2 shorter and add a reverse arrow (like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32489 )
01:24:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uh ? This spacing is... o.o
01:33:832 (1,2,3) - Hardly readable due to previous sliders
01:37:132 (6) - Use 2 circles instead of a slider ?

I don't like this diff very much :/

[Sharon's]

01:10:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The spacing seems a bit different from the previous circles here
01:34:730 (7) - The whistle on this slider seems weird (yeah, I dunno how I've noticed it xD)

Nice job !
(so haaaard ! xD)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
ok fixed
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
[Sharon's]

01:10:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The spacing seems a bit different from the previous circles here I know.. cause I want
01:34:730 (7) - The whistle on this slider seems weird (yeah, I dunno how I've noticed it xD) fixedNice job !
(so haaaard ! xD)[/quote]

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
ignorethis
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ignorethis
offset +15ms

The score gap between hard and sharon's is too large. A difficulty with a total score of ~5-7m is needed.

sharon's dif is cool though 8-)
Saturio
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Joined July 2008
Saturio
fixed!!!

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
IceBeam
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IceBeam
[Easy]
Rename to Normal.
I suggest you to reduce volume of hitsounds,they're much louder then the song.
00:08:480 - Add some hitsounds,finish at least.
00:20:480 - Rhytm breaks w/o this note,add please.
00:21:680 - ^
00:33:680 - Finish.
00:40:580 - Add a note?
00:46:880 - Finish?
00:52:880 - ^
01:12:080 - ^

[Hard]
Same suggestions about finishes as in Easy.
00:24:080 - Finish.

Others seems fine to me.
kenji
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Joined April 2009
kenji
star!!
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
8-)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
nice.
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
About difficulty spread, the difficulty spread is N-I-(I)-I-I. That difficult spread is very very extreme. I suggest you make an easier diff or average diff. So the there is much space for average player

[Easy]
Ugh, the slider velocity is waaaay too high for easy diff, please reduce it, otherwise the new/beginner player will difficult to trace it

00:21:698 (4) - New combo?
00:24:548 (2) - ^
00:38:198 (1) - Remove whistle at trace (keep the whistle at start and end of slider), whistle at slider trace is so odd
01:09:398 (3,4,5) - Ugly overlapping, maybe?

[Hard]
00:34:148 (1) - Make symetric?
00:34:898 (2) - ^
01:33:098 (3) - Extend this to 01:33:398?

[Extreme]
No kiai??

00:26:198 (7) - New combo?
00:36:398 (x) - Add note here?

[Sharon's]
Sharon is robot~

Nice song
STAR
wmfchris
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wmfchris
My plan is
1)Current easy -> normal
2)Substitute extreme by ign's diff with similar score
3)Add a easy (which is really easy) is needed.

Back in a few hours and will fix them.
ignorethis
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ignorethis
done

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [ignore's Hard].osu
wmfchris
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wmfchris
fixed so it will be
Normal - Hard - Hard+ - Insane - Taiko
this should be fine enough :/
Dotsu
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Dotsu
~STAR~
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
fixed

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) tag加上ignore
2) 基本上黎講，最易果個diff ，star rating 低於3好d.. 而家[Nomral] 係3.12，得閒就改改佢啦，唔得閒就加油了 (拍肩
3) 總覺得default clap使人聽得不舒服。但又找不到非常合適的hitsound，試聽聽附件的2個吧，效果未必很好，不用也可。

[Normal]
01:06:998 加clap?

[Hard]
00:18:098 (1,2,3) - 主要係1同2疊得太亂，攪到有點hard to read
總覺得有d節奏好亂，要玩家去跟有難度，例如00:56:198 (3,4,5,6,7) (我沙包，我承認 囧)


[ignore's hard]
00:23:573 (4) - timing point 與note 重疊了，把綠線放前1/8~?
00:23:873 (7) - ^

[Taiko]
太鼓沒有需要我的地方 (拍肩

[Sharon's]
B_T stream (拍肩
00:52:898 (1) - kiai time不能同時作聲音加大的效果，在00:52:860 加一timing point 改聲量吧? (用1/8)
01:01:523 kiai time 改在 01:01:448 end? (習慣來說，會與note一起結束，較同步)
01:30:030 這timing point 是要使spinner 靜音? 若然是的話，就放前一點吧，放在spinner的end 達不到這效果。
01:30:060 在這裏加一timing point改聲量? (kiai不能同時改聲量)

Download: test.rar
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
Fixed

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
snow gooooooooooooose, haha

STAR ;)
wmfchris
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wmfchris

[Shalon] wrote:

snow gooooooooooooose, haha

STAR ;)
hey you haven't star it (runs
Kotone
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Kotone
Sharon's
01:02:498(1,2,3,4,5,......) - long stream.再鬼畜也不能10s都是circle吧(遠目

Normal
00:02:498(1) - spinner好長,轉這么久會手軟吧
00:48:848(3) - 1 grid down
01:21:747 - Delete Break

Hard
hitsound有點吵
00:02:498(1) - like Normal
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
[quote="karenying"]Sharon's
01:02:498(1,2,3,4,5,......) - long stream.再鬼畜也不能10s都是circle吧(遠目
DEEPSEA SAID IT IS OKAY!!!! ;)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
看见歌顿时就stress
你真的想要countdown吗（实际上没有表现）

[Normal]
00:24:998 (2,3) - 换slider，对应后面
00:43:748 - 加音
00:51:698 (1) - 这里之后我认为已经超出Normal范畴，虽然星数可以，但我还是建议你弄个Easy防万一
01:34:898 (3) - 去掉sliderwhistle

[Hard]
00:55:598 (1) - 这一串压力
00:57:548 (7,1) - 跳的没什么理由啊。。
01:08:498 (4) - 去掉sliderwhistle
01:15:998 (5) - 尾finish

[ignore's Hard]
声音略小
00:25:298 (5) - new combo
01:02:948 (2,3,4,5,6) - 卧槽自重。3new combo吧至少
01:04:148 (2,3,4,5,6) - ……^
01:05:348 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:998 - 少个音
结合BPM，我很难认为这是Hard.

[Taiko]
……我都习以为常

[Sharon's]
00:52:748 (4,1) - 这有点太过奔放
01:00:998 (4,5) - 感觉应该继续slider不要停鼠标
01:02:498 (1) - 这一段压力。真的有这样的必要么。我觉得歌的节奏没到非1/4啪啪啪不可。
01:27:098 (2) - 用Normal音好些
wmfchris
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wmfchris
normal - Holy Moon [Easy] 我也是這樣做 過了 [stress]


normal, hard fixed.
matthewhln
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matthewhln
Star
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
-Normal-
看起来没啥毛病

-Hard-
我看着这diff怎么像是zekira做的._. 真的是太方正了
没发现什么错误

-一个脑-
00:25:298 (5) - new combo！ 我2次没看出来这里的变化 D:

-Sharon-
countdown没用 去掉
01:02:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,
7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,
12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - stress 这没毛病 不过你这难度要真是光为那几个插件做的话我一句话都没有 ╮(╯▽╰)╭
我不想nazi这里 不过这里真的打不动啊 D:

图没啥毛病._.
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio
FIXED!!!

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose (wmfchris) [Sharon's].osu
chocomint
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chocomint
nice xD
Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio

Cookiezi wrote:

nice xD
THS!
Roddie
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Roddie
Hi, Chris 8-)

I here to do my part of the bargain.

Blue: Suggestions.
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed.

Normal:

00:48:848 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:21:698 to 01:24:098-Add a break here. Your Hard has one, why not Normal?

Hard:

Nothing I can find.

ignore's Hard:

00:08:948(3)- The hit burst from the spinner is blocking the view of that slider. ._. Move that slider somewhere else.


Taiko:

Skipping.

Sharon's:

I suppose its okay.

I didn't think I mod this properly...

Just take my star.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
ok fixed~
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
Crazy._.
orioncomet
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orioncomet
i'm just a random preson looking at bubbled map

[ignore's Hard]
- imo, pretty low AR for high bpm and too hard for a 'hard' and note look a bit overlapped, change this diff to Insane and AR+1?

[Sharon's]
- look really impposible to FC to me, 200bpm with those streams. and I am not good at streams so dont mind me.

Normal and Hard look ok
wmfchris
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wmfchris
ok edited~

(ign ask me to change to "insane" before but I've forgotten it orz)
kiddly
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:x
crazy guy
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