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>w</ nice map~
ah...and there are two thing,
1.Please fix taiko's offset to same with other diffs (690) xD
2.And except yk's insane, there are unsnap notes on other diffs. xD
I think it's because you do offset 698->690 and not do resnap. lol
so please resnap all notes on those diffs to use this button.
hmm and that's all~
star and gogogo >~</
ah...and there are two thing,
1.Please fix taiko's offset to same with other diffs (690) xD
2.And except yk's insane, there are unsnap notes on other diffs. xD
I think it's because you do offset 698->690 and not do resnap. lol
so please resnap all notes on those diffs to use this button.
hmm and that's all~
star and gogogo >~</
Topic Starter
Thx for advice, I'll fix it when school is end, here is school XDquintitem wrote:
>w</ nice map~
ah...and there are two thing,
1.Please fix taiko's offset to same with other diffs (690) xD
2.And except yk's insane, there are unsnap notes on other diffs. xDSPOILERI think it's because you do offset 698->690 and not do resnap. lol[attachment=1:71a68]unsnap.PNG[/attachment:71a68]
so please resnap all notes on those diffs to use this button.SPOILER[attachment=0:71a68]snap.PNG[/attachment:71a68]
hmm and that's all~
star and gogogo >~</
Thx for starkenji wrote:
♪
Hi [Shalon]
Mod it to you^_^
--------------------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just suggestion
[easy]
00:30:912(3)add whistle?
00:33:578(2)^
00:54:023(1)remove new combo?
00:57:578(x)the spinner should stop in 00:58:912?
[Normal]]
What happen to the offset?Use green line please?>.<
[Hard]
00:11:134(x)The spinner should start in 00:11:356?
00:19:356(1)remove new combo?
00:26:467(1)spacing(not suitable jump here)
00:37:134(1)remove new combo?
00:40:689(1)Not completeness gemination with (2)
[Taiko]
Awsome map
00:03:801(x)add a note here?my suggestion is k
00:07:356(x)^
00:24:023(42)change to k?
00:24:245(43)^
I love shoalon's taiko>.<I got 1FC^_^
awsome star~
PLZ PM me if you need cross check
Mod it to you^_^
--------------------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just suggestion
[easy]
00:30:912(3)add whistle?
00:33:578(2)^
00:54:023(1)remove new combo?
00:57:578(x)the spinner should stop in 00:58:912?
[Normal]]
What happen to the offset?Use green line please?>.<
[Hard]
00:11:134(x)The spinner should start in 00:11:356?
00:19:356(1)remove new combo?
00:26:467(1)spacing(not suitable jump here)
00:37:134(1)remove new combo?
00:40:689(1)Not completeness gemination with (2)
[Taiko]
Awsome map
00:03:801(x)add a note here?my suggestion is k
00:07:356(x)^
00:24:023(42)change to k?
00:24:245(43)^
I love shoalon's taiko>.<I got 1FC^_^
awsome star~
PLZ PM me if you need cross check
Topic Starter
kanpakyin wrote:
Hi [Shalon]
Mod it to you^_^
--------------------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just suggestion
[easy]
00:30:912(3)add whistle?
00:33:578(2)^
00:54:023(1)remove new combo?
00:57:578(x)the spinner should stop in 00:58:912?
[Normal]]
What happen to the offset?Use green line please?>.<
[Hard]
00:11:134(x)The spinner should start in 00:11:356?
00:19:356(1)remove new combo?
00:26:467(1)spacing(not suitable jump here)
00:37:134(1)remove new combo?
00:40:689(1)Not completeness gemination with (2)
[Taiko]
Awsome map
00:03:801(x)add a note here?my suggestion is k
00:07:356(x)^
00:24:023(42)change to k?
00:24:245(43)^
I love shoalon's taiko>.<I got 1FC^_^
awsome star~
PLZ PM me if you need cross check
Thx to help and thx to love my map
and, most of sentences are fixed, thx again for you
Topic Starter
I've got mod by you via IRC before, So I give you a kudosu.0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:
Star !
and, thx for star ~
Seems an odd time to end kiai, end it on a white tick?
Easy:
At least hp + 1, lowest hp is too low for most maps
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:11:134 (1) - start at 00:11:356? -- Same for every difficulty
00:22:023 (1,2) - make slightly more symmetrical?
00:39:801 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:57:578 (1,1) - try and separate these more for an Easy
Normal:
HP and OD are very low for a Normal, I would say + 2 to both
00:10:467 (1) - move away from hp bar?
00:30:912 (1,2,3,1,2) - keep whistle rhythm going? (same for any other parts where it randomly stops)
01:07:356 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure if this suits a Normal
01:09:134 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:467 (2,3,4) - make sure spacing on stuff like this stays equal (and any others that do this)
Hard:
Resnap all notes
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:06:912 (2,3,1) - ^ (timing section messes up distance snap but it still needs to be equal)
00:45:134 (3) - I wouldn't have a 0.5 slider here (you can't see the ticks so you can't tell)
00:52:245 (5) - ^
01:01:578 (3,4,5) - check spacing? Doesn't look equal
01:09:254 - Remove un-inherited timing section here (looks like you forgot it when removing the rest)
Insane:
Looks good
Taiko:
Looks ok
Needs some more work done on it but deserves a star~
Easy:
At least hp + 1, lowest hp is too low for most maps
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:11:134 (1) - start at 00:11:356? -- Same for every difficulty
00:22:023 (1,2) - make slightly more symmetrical?
00:39:801 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:57:578 (1,1) - try and separate these more for an Easy
Normal:
HP and OD are very low for a Normal, I would say + 2 to both
00:10:467 (1) - move away from hp bar?
00:30:912 (1,2,3,1,2) - keep whistle rhythm going? (same for any other parts where it randomly stops)
01:07:356 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure if this suits a Normal
01:09:134 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:467 (2,3,4) - make sure spacing on stuff like this stays equal (and any others that do this)
Hard:
Resnap all notes
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:06:912 (2,3,1) - ^ (timing section messes up distance snap but it still needs to be equal)
00:45:134 (3) - I wouldn't have a 0.5 slider here (you can't see the ticks so you can't tell)
00:52:245 (5) - ^
01:01:578 (3,4,5) - check spacing? Doesn't look equal
01:09:254 - Remove un-inherited timing section here (looks like you forgot it when removing the rest)
Insane:
Looks good
Taiko:
Looks ok
Needs some more work done on it but deserves a star~
[Easy]
00:23:801 (2) - ctrl+r로 리버스 한다음에 그리드 스냅 끄고 0.0x 디스턴스스냅으로 스택하고 다시 ctrl+r로 돌아
옵니당.
00:34:467 (3) - 반복 한번 더?
01:08:245 (1) - 01:07:356 (3) - 과 스택하심이?
[Normal]
음..... GJ임당
[Hard]
00:15:801 (1) - remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:59:801 (2,3) - 슬라이더로 교체?
01:03:356 (2,3) - ^
[ykcarrot's Insane]
노트와 노트 사이가 좀 허전한데.. Circle Size 한칸 크게?..
00:09:134 (5) - 00:09:578 - 여기서 끝나는걸 고려해 보심이~
00:52:912 (6) - 00:53:356 - 여기서 끝내고 00:53:578 - 여기에 노트 추가?
00:23:801 (2) - ctrl+r로 리버스 한다음에 그리드 스냅 끄고 0.0x 디스턴스스냅으로 스택하고 다시 ctrl+r로 돌아
옵니당.
00:34:467 (3) - 반복 한번 더?
01:08:245 (1) - 01:07:356 (3) - 과 스택하심이?
[Normal]
음..... GJ임당
[Hard]
00:15:801 (1) - remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:59:801 (2,3) - 슬라이더로 교체?
01:03:356 (2,3) - ^
[ykcarrot's Insane]
노트와 노트 사이가 좀 허전한데.. Circle Size 한칸 크게?..
00:09:134 (5) - 00:09:578 - 여기서 끝나는걸 고려해 보심이~
00:52:912 (6) - 00:53:356 - 여기서 끝내고 00:53:578 - 여기에 노트 추가?
모딩 감사합니다~Sunny Holic wrote:
[ykcarrot's Insane]
노트와 노트 사이가 좀 허전한데.. Circle Size 한칸 크게?.. // 아니요
00:09:134 (5) - 00:09:578 - 여기서 끝나는걸 고려해 보심이~ // 보컬에 맞춘겁니다
00:52:912 (6) - 00:53:356 - 여기서 끝내고 00:53:578 - 여기에 노트 추가? // 고쳤습니다
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Hi~
[General]
The "hitcircle.png" seems not fit the "hitcircleoverlay.png",the gray part can't appear in right side.(Hope you could understand what I mean> <)
[Easy]
Fine~
[Normal]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
01:08:245 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:12:689 (1) - ^
01:14:467 (2) - ^
01:22:467 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
01:24:245 (4) - New combo?
01:25:578 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:912 - End KIAI here?
[Hard]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
00:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:43:578 (1) - ^
00:47:801 (3) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:12:689 (1) - Remove new combo?
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Great~
STAR~!
[General]
The "hitcircle.png" seems not fit the "hitcircleoverlay.png",the gray part can't appear in right side.(Hope you could understand what I mean> <)
[Easy]
Fine~
[Normal]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
01:08:245 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:12:689 (1) - ^
01:14:467 (2) - ^
01:22:467 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
01:24:245 (4) - New combo?
01:25:578 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:912 - End KIAI here?
[Hard]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
00:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:43:578 (1) - ^
00:47:801 (3) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:12:689 (1) - Remove new combo?
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Great~
STAR~!
Topic Starter
almost done.kino77 wrote:
Hi~
[General]
The "hitcircle.png" seems not fit the "hitcircleoverlay.png",the gray part can't appear in right side.(Hope you could understand what I mean> <)
[Easy]
Fine~
[Normal]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
01:08:245 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:12:689 (1) - ^
01:14:467 (2) - ^
01:22:467 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
01:24:245 (4) - New combo?
01:25:578 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:912 - End KIAI here?
[Hard]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
00:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:43:578 (1) - ^
00:47:801 (3) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:12:689 (1) - Remove new combo?
STAR~!
well, I think current hitcircle and overlay is good. the gray part is looks like shadow, so maybe I don't fix it, haha.
thx for mod
hi
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
the yellow circles look too light on the background, especially during kiai time.
ykcarrot's Insane
fine
Hard
00:17:578 (3) - 1 more repeat?
00:47:801 (3) - ^
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?
Normal
00:08:245 (2,4) - put them farther apart
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?
Easy
00:57:578 (1) - this spinner is too short for a easy.Maybe start it on 00:56:912
also add some claps during kiai time
nice map
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
the yellow circles look too light on the background, especially during kiai time.
ykcarrot's Insane
fine
Hard
00:17:578 (3) - 1 more repeat?
00:47:801 (3) - ^
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?
Normal
00:08:245 (2,4) - put them farther apart
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?
Easy
00:57:578 (1) - this spinner is too short for a easy.Maybe start it on 00:56:912
also add some claps during kiai time
nice map
Fixed position of some notes.
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
updatedykcarrot wrote:
Fixed position of some notes.
Hello
this is my some suggestions
[Overall]
offset 698 maybe to best for me
why you not use soft-hitclap in your diff ?
maybe you should like ykcarrot use it.
[ps.I uesd offset 698 modding]
[Easy]
00:43:807 [2] remove whistle?
00:44:695 [4] ^
00:45:584 [2] ^
00:46:473 [4] ^
00:50:918 [2] ^
00:51:807 [4] ^
00:52:695 [2] ^
00:53:584 [4] ^
01:09:140 [3.4] hard to read for me
(maybe i'm stupid XD
[Normal]
00:45:134 [3] change whistle?
other are good
[Hard]
00:58:473 [3.4-1.2.3.4] if you use soft-hitclap in here. maybe sounds good
01:12:697 [3.4-1.2.3.4 ^
other are good
[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3]
other are good
Nice map and song >M< star~
this is my some suggestions
[Overall]
offset 698 maybe to best for me
why you not use soft-hitclap in your diff ?
maybe you should like ykcarrot use it.
[ps.I uesd offset 698 modding]
[Easy]
00:43:807 [2] remove whistle?
00:44:695 [4] ^
00:45:584 [2] ^
00:46:473 [4] ^
00:50:918 [2] ^
00:51:807 [4] ^
00:52:695 [2] ^
00:53:584 [4] ^
01:09:140 [3.4] hard to read for me
(maybe i'm stupid XD[Normal]
00:45:134 [3] change whistle?
other are good
[Hard]
00:58:473 [3.4-1.2.3.4] if you use soft-hitclap in here. maybe sounds good
01:12:697 [3.4-1.2.3.4 ^
other are good
[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3]
other are good
Nice map and song >M< star~
Ah yeah,I remember this map.
Kay,time to check once again.
[Easy]
00:32:689 (1) - I'd add a finish.
00:36:245 (1) - ^
01:09:134 (3) - Move it back to 01:08:912.
01:26:023 (x) - Last spinner should finish here.
[Normal]
Spacing is kinda random sometimes,but it's pretty acceptable.
00:10:467 (1) - Combo spam,remove NC.
00:32:689 (1) - Finish?
00:58:912 - Remove finish.
01:06:023 (4) - Too close,fix.
01:13:578 (1) - Finish.
[Hard]
Fine,but missed some finishes,use I posted above.
Nice,star.
Kay,time to check once again.
[Easy]
00:32:689 (1) - I'd add a finish.
00:36:245 (1) - ^
01:09:134 (3) - Move it back to 01:08:912.
01:26:023 (x) - Last spinner should finish here.
[Normal]
Spacing is kinda random sometimes,but it's pretty acceptable.
00:10:467 (1) - Combo spam,remove NC.
00:32:689 (1) - Finish?
00:58:912 - Remove finish.
01:06:023 (4) - Too close,fix.
01:13:578 (1) - Finish.
[Hard]
Fine,but missed some finishes,use I posted above.
Nice,
Licnect wrote:
[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3] // The repeat arrow is shown while following slider ball. I asked some players to test this map, they never missed it. I won't fix.
Okay~i can read tooykcarrot wrote:
Licnect wrote:
[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3] // The repeat arrow is shown while following slider ball. I asked some player to test this map, they never missed it. I won't fix.
but my map have same question
you can consultation :
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=36379&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=30
maybe can help you
@Licnect
I know what is definitely unrankable thing. It's defined by timing difference.
BPM of this song and slider velocity aren't very fast, so repeat arrow appears when slider ball passes middle point of slider.
It needs just little attention.
Anyway thanks for your kindness.
I know what is definitely unrankable thing. It's defined by timing difference.
BPM of this song and slider velocity aren't very fast, so repeat arrow appears when slider ball passes middle point of slider.
It needs just little attention.
Anyway thanks for your kindness.
Topic Starter
thx to Lincect and IceBeam, most of your mod sentences are fixed.
anyway, I have no idea with timing, so I'll ask for timing experts.
anyway, I have no idea with timing, so I'll ask for timing experts.
Annyong
[General]
1) In my opinion, you should change your video quality from high to low, or find the low quality of your video on website and download them to make bad/poor PC have a lot FPS (Frame per Second?) otherwise the poor/bad PC are completely lag during gameplay
2) Those approachcircle is from Nya-Chan! (osu!M@ster) Did you give a permission to her? OR you can credit her ON your beatmap creator words, otherwise, Nya-Chan will be mad at you because she is already did some hard work to make the approachcircle.png
3) Your BG is very very very very flat, you should find another BG so the BG looks good and clean
4) Make sure the comboburst has not cut off, I saw some comboburst are cut off. If you found the comboburst that cut off, you should replace them with the original one, otherwise comboburst are very ugly
5) Ugh, the mp3 Bit Rate are soooooooo unrankable. Maximum of bit rate is 192kbps and the minimum is 128kbps. You need to re-encode it using the program that program can to re-enconde your mp3, otherwise the mp3 quality is completely bad and very bad for listening the music
[Easy]
The slider velocity is too fast! Reduce it please
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (1) - ^
00:48:697 (1) - ^
01:08:697 (2,3) - Can you combine this into one slider? This is pretty difficult because 01:08:920 (3) place in red tick
[Normal]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:23:809 (1) - ^
00:38:031 (1) - ^
00:39:809 (1,2,3,4) - I guess you might want to arrange pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36757
01:08:697 (3) - Move 2 grid up? So the pattern looks clean?
01:20:697 (1,2,3,4) - These pattern are make no sense for me, maybe?
01:24:253 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern are weird~
[Hard]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (2) - Remove finish at beginning?
00:14:920 (1) - Finish?
00:48:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36758
01:19:809 (1,2) - Spacing? (correct me if I am wrong!)
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Nice one
[Taiko]
Fine, but too easy for me~
Good song
STAR
[General]
1) In my opinion, you should change your video quality from high to low, or find the low quality of your video on website and download them to make bad/poor PC have a lot FPS (Frame per Second?) otherwise the poor/bad PC are completely lag during gameplay
2) Those approachcircle is from Nya-Chan! (osu!M@ster) Did you give a permission to her? OR you can credit her ON your beatmap creator words, otherwise, Nya-Chan will be mad at you because she is already did some hard work to make the approachcircle.png
3) Your BG is very very very very flat, you should find another BG so the BG looks good and clean
4) Make sure the comboburst has not cut off, I saw some comboburst are cut off. If you found the comboburst that cut off, you should replace them with the original one, otherwise comboburst are very ugly
5) Ugh, the mp3 Bit Rate are soooooooo unrankable. Maximum of bit rate is 192kbps and the minimum is 128kbps. You need to re-encode it using the program that program can to re-enconde your mp3, otherwise the mp3 quality is completely bad and very bad for listening the music
[Easy]
The slider velocity is too fast! Reduce it please
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (1) - ^
00:48:697 (1) - ^
01:08:697 (2,3) - Can you combine this into one slider? This is pretty difficult because 01:08:920 (3) place in red tick
[Normal]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:23:809 (1) - ^
00:38:031 (1) - ^
00:39:809 (1,2,3,4) - I guess you might want to arrange pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36757
01:08:697 (3) - Move 2 grid up? So the pattern looks clean?
01:20:697 (1,2,3,4) - These pattern are make no sense for me, maybe?
01:24:253 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern are weird~
[Hard]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (2) - Remove finish at beginning?
00:14:920 (1) - Finish?
00:48:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36758
01:19:809 (1,2) - Spacing? (correct me if I am wrong!)
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Nice one
[Taiko]
Fine, but too easy for me~
Good song
STAR
Topic Starter
Well, I can't fix my map rightnow, but I'll fix it soon.Leorda wrote:
Annyong
2) Those approachcircle is from Nya-Chan! (osu!M@ster) Did you give a permission to her? OR you can credit her ON your beatmap creator words, otherwise, Nya-Chan will be mad at you because she is already did some hard work to make the approachcircle.png
I find that approachcircle in this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15677, and got permission to him,
but I didn't know that this circle's maker is not same with that mapper(youngdow). I'll ask him to use this awesome skin,
and thx to noticing me. If you don't tell me about that, I never know who is this approachcircle's maker.
thank you so much!
I'll provide much better BG image, BG video and MP3 (even comboburst.png) than now.
EDIT : Here you are.
DL Link removed.
New MP3 was encoded by Lame VBR V2.
The new offset is 710 what I got. But I'm not sure about it, please ask timing expert.
And I tried my best at making comboburst images, but thier hairs are little bit messy.. orz
사실 예전 MP3는 소리가 너무컸어요.
지금건 크롭핑을 어느정도 고려해서 볼륨 키워놓은거라서 예전거보다 소리는 약간 작긴한데,
지금 설정해놓은 오디오볼륨(타이밍 섹션)들을 굳이 조정할 필요까진 없어보입니다.
오프셋을 710으로 잡아놓긴했는데, 제가 수차례 테스트 해봐도 좀 이상하군요.
아무래도 BPM문제일것 같은데 확실하진 않습니다. DJPop 모딩큐에 타이밍헬프 요청해보세요.
그리고 콤보버스트 이미지는 포토샵갖고 좀 끄적거려봤는데 머리카락 쪽은 좀 힘드네요.
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
EDIT : Here you are.
DL Link removed.
New MP3 was encoded by Lame VBR V2.
The new offset is 710 what I got. But I'm not sure about it, please ask timing expert.
And I tried my best at making comboburst images, but thier hairs are little bit messy.. orz
사실 예전 MP3는 소리가 너무컸어요.
지금건 크롭핑을 어느정도 고려해서 볼륨 키워놓은거라서 예전거보다 소리는 약간 작긴한데,
지금 설정해놓은 오디오볼륨(타이밍 섹션)들을 굳이 조정할 필요까진 없어보입니다.
오프셋을 710으로 잡아놓긴했는데, 제가 수차례 테스트 해봐도 좀 이상하군요.
아무래도 BPM문제일것 같은데 확실하진 않습니다. DJPop 모딩큐에 타이밍헬프 요청해보세요.
그리고 콤보버스트 이미지는 포토샵갖고 좀 끄적거려봤는데 머리카락 쪽은 좀 힘드네요.
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Ohai~
[Easy]
HP Drain Rate +1 ?
01:09:364 (3) - Too close to the previous slider, It's confusing.
01:13:586 (1) -[Nazi] - Move 1 grid down
[Normal]
01:09:142 (5) - Sounds weird :/
[Hard]
00:38:697 (4,5) - Better like -> http://puu.sh/tQi
[ykcarrot]
<3<3<3
Nice *.*
[Easy]
HP Drain Rate +1 ?
01:09:364 (3) - Too close to the previous slider, It's confusing.
01:13:586 (1) -[Nazi] - Move 1 grid down
[Normal]
01:09:142 (5) - Sounds weird :/
[Hard]
00:38:697 (4,5) - Better like -> http://puu.sh/tQi
[ykcarrot]
<3<3<3
Nice *.*
Speed Mod
It's so cold today D: Freezing @_@
[Easy]
00:57:586 (1) - Remove Finish (there's too much hitsounds here) Adding less noise before Kiai Time makes it stand out more.
[Normal]
00:45:142 (3,4) - Remove one of the finishes here and replace with a whistle?
[Hard]
00:23:364 (4) - Spacing seems a bit weird compared to (2,3)
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Seems Fine.
[Taiko]
Seems Fine. Plays great.
Overall, I saw some overlapping combos (circle/sliders) that I usually don't like. Since the patterns themselves weren't wrong I didn't mention it.
Starr'd
It's so cold today D: Freezing @_@
[Easy]
00:57:586 (1) - Remove Finish (there's too much hitsounds here) Adding less noise before Kiai Time makes it stand out more.
[Normal]
00:45:142 (3,4) - Remove one of the finishes here and replace with a whistle?
[Hard]
00:23:364 (4) - Spacing seems a bit weird compared to (2,3)
[ykcarrot's Insane]
Seems Fine.
[Taiko]
Seems Fine. Plays great.
Overall, I saw some overlapping combos (circle/sliders) that I usually don't like. Since the patterns themselves weren't wrong I didn't mention it.
Starr'd
Topic Starter
Thx a lot, I'll fix it after. cuz here is school 
amagami~
[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)
[Normal] - fine~
[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)
[YK] - nice
mapset look fine ~ well done!
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)
[Normal] - fine~
[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)
[YK] - nice
mapset look fine ~ well done!
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot, but now, my main computer have some problems, so I can't fix it few days T^Torioncomet wrote:
[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)
[Normal] - fine~
[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)
[YK] - nice
mapset look fine ~ well done!
I'll fix both computer and map soon
Topic Starter
ALL DONEorioncomet wrote:
[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)
[Normal] - fine~
[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)
[YK] - nice
mapset look fine ~ well done!
As per your request:
[General]
comboburst-6.png sticks out compared to the rest of the images since the top of the head is cut off. Perhaps find another image of this character?
[Easy]
00:23:809 (2,1,2) - I didn't like the overlap from these. :/
00:48:697 (1,1) - Overlap here doesn't look good either.
00:50:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Felt a bit devoid of hitsounds here. Maybe add a soft whistle to the 4's?
00:57:586 (1) - Eh, kind of short. Might work better as a slider.
01:01:142 (3,4,5) - Even up this spacing
01:09:364 (3,1) - Overlap. :<
01:24:031 (1) - This felt better starting at 01:24:253 -
Strange that this difficulty ends earlier than your other two.
[Normal]
Spacing feels a bit far especially compared to Easy.
00:21:364 (3,4,1) - More overlap~ Eh, I won't point 'em out anymore. You know what to look for by now if you want to change. ;p
00:27:809 (2) - Forget a whistle?
01:09:364 (1) - Kind of felt weird to have sound on a spinner now, haha. Ah well
Overall the patterns are fine, but the rhythms felt a little bland. It felt like I was just playing the same thing the entire song. Especially from 01:20:697 (1) - to the end of the song... it's just quarter notes the entire way and a spinner. :/
[Hard]
00:07:364 (3,1) - Check your spacing here. The .5x section messes with distance snap.
The map itself is fine, but the first half up to the kiai felt kind of boring. It's just mostly a constant eighth note stream with little rhythmic variety. Try to make it work with the music more and this map would benefit greatly for it. :D
[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it.
Nice~
Taiko looks fine too.
Call me back~
[General]
comboburst-6.png sticks out compared to the rest of the images since the top of the head is cut off. Perhaps find another image of this character?
[Easy]
00:23:809 (2,1,2) - I didn't like the overlap from these. :/
00:48:697 (1,1) - Overlap here doesn't look good either.
00:50:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Felt a bit devoid of hitsounds here. Maybe add a soft whistle to the 4's?
00:57:586 (1) - Eh, kind of short. Might work better as a slider.
01:01:142 (3,4,5) - Even up this spacing
01:09:364 (3,1) - Overlap. :<
01:24:031 (1) - This felt better starting at 01:24:253 -
Strange that this difficulty ends earlier than your other two.
[Normal]
Spacing feels a bit far especially compared to Easy.
00:21:364 (3,4,1) - More overlap~ Eh, I won't point 'em out anymore. You know what to look for by now if you want to change. ;p
00:27:809 (2) - Forget a whistle?
01:09:364 (1) - Kind of felt weird to have sound on a spinner now, haha. Ah well
Overall the patterns are fine, but the rhythms felt a little bland. It felt like I was just playing the same thing the entire song. Especially from 01:20:697 (1) - to the end of the song... it's just quarter notes the entire way and a spinner. :/
[Hard]
00:07:364 (3,1) - Check your spacing here. The .5x section messes with distance snap.
The map itself is fine, but the first half up to the kiai felt kind of boring. It's just mostly a constant eighth note stream with little rhythmic variety. Try to make it work with the music more and this map would benefit greatly for it. :D
[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it.
Nice~
Taiko looks fine too.
Call me back~
I would like you to delete 'comboburst-6.png'. Because she isn't leading character.Garven wrote:
[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it. // fixed
Nice~
저라면 comboburst-6.png는 지우겠습니다. 적어도 본편 주인공은 아니니까요..
어쨌든 판단은 샤론님께 맡깁니다.
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Done. I do what I can , but idk you like this, haha.Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[General]
comboburst-6.png sticks out compared to the rest of the images since the top of the head is cut off. Perhaps find another image of this character?
[Easy]
00:23:809 (2,1,2) - I didn't like the overlap from these. :/
00:48:697 (1,1) - Overlap here doesn't look good either.
00:50:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Felt a bit devoid of hitsounds here. Maybe add a soft whistle to the 4's?
00:57:586 (1) - Eh, kind of short. Might work better as a slider.
01:01:142 (3,4,5) - Even up this spacing
01:09:364 (3,1) - Overlap. :<
01:24:031 (1) - This felt better starting at 01:24:253 -
Strange that this difficulty ends earlier than your other two.
[Normal]
Spacing feels a bit far especially compared to Easy.
00:21:364 (3,4,1) - More overlap~ Eh, I won't point 'em out anymore. You know what to look for by now if you want to change. ;p
00:27:809 (2) - Forget a whistle?
01:09:364 (1) - Kind of felt weird to have sound on a spinner now, haha. Ah well
Overall the patterns are fine, but the rhythms felt a little bland. It felt like I was just playing the same thing the entire song. Especially from 01:20:697 (1) - to the end of the song... it's just quarter notes the entire way and a spinner. :/
[Hard]
00:07:364 (3,1) - Check your spacing here. The .5x section messes with distance snap.
The map itself is fine, but the first half up to the kiai felt kind of boring. It's just mostly a constant eighth note stream with little rhythmic variety. Try to make it work with the music more and this map would benefit greatly for it.
[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it.
Nice~
Taiko looks fine too.
Call me back~
and comboburst-6- is deleted.
star
Recheck~
[Easy]
00:57:586 (2,3) - Check your spacing here. The .5 section halves distance snap distance, so double the distance between these two and the next combo as well
01:09:364 (3) - [nazi] Move end point left and right 1 grid for symmetry
Edit:
Looks good.
:U
[Easy]
00:57:586 (2,3) - Check your spacing here. The .5 section halves distance snap distance, so double the distance between these two and the next combo as well
01:09:364 (3) - [nazi] Move end point left and right 1 grid for symmetry
Edit:
Looks good.
:U
Hooray!
말도안돼 사랑은 물색보다 이게 더 먼저 랭크되버리다닠ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
어쨌든 ㅊㅋ~ 이제 나보다 랭맵많네 ㅋㅋ
어쨌든 ㅊㅋ~ 이제 나보다 랭맵많네 ㅋㅋ
Yay! Finally
Congrats~
Congrats~
Congratulations
Congrats~>A<
Topic Starter
Wow!
thx a lot !
finally I got 2nd ranked map, haha !
thx a lot
! finally I got 2nd ranked map, haha !
Sae-chan 
Congratulations!
Congratulations!
why is the song title not capitalized properly
little bit tacky, how many people modded this and managed to miss it?
little bit tacky, how many people modded this and managed to miss it?
*hides*Ephemeral wrote:
why is the song title not capitalized properly
little bit tacky, how many people modded this and managed to miss it?
