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Sure
Sleep Powder
Speed Mod

It's so cold today D: Freezing @_@

[Easy]

00:57:586 (1) - Remove Finish (there's too much hitsounds here) Adding less noise before Kiai Time makes it stand out more.

[Normal]

00:45:142 (3,4) - Remove one of the finishes here and replace with a whistle?


[Hard]

00:23:364 (4) - Spacing seems a bit weird compared to (2,3)

[ykcarrot's Insane]

Seems Fine.

[Taiko]

Seems Fine. Plays great.

Overall, I saw some overlapping combos (circle/sliders) that I usually don't like. Since the patterns themselves weren't wrong I didn't mention it.

Starr'd
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
Thx a lot, I'll fix it after. cuz here is school :(
KSHR
amagami~ :)
orioncomet
[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)

[Normal] - fine~

[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)

[YK] - nice

mapset look fine ~ well done!
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)

[Normal] - fine~

[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)

[YK] - nice

mapset look fine ~ well done!
Thanks a lot, but now, my main computer have some problems, so I can't fix it few days T^T

I'll fix both computer and map soon
Sharp
;)
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)

[Normal] - fine~

[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)

[YK] - nice

mapset look fine ~ well done!
ALL DONE :D
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
comboburst-6.png sticks out compared to the rest of the images since the top of the head is cut off. Perhaps find another image of this character?

[Easy]
00:23:809 (2,1,2) - I didn't like the overlap from these. :/
00:48:697 (1,1) - Overlap here doesn't look good either.
00:50:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Felt a bit devoid of hitsounds here. Maybe add a soft whistle to the 4's?
00:57:586 (1) - Eh, kind of short. Might work better as a slider.
01:01:142 (3,4,5) - Even up this spacing
01:09:364 (3,1) - Overlap. :<
01:24:031 (1) - This felt better starting at 01:24:253 -
Strange that this difficulty ends earlier than your other two.

[Normal]
Spacing feels a bit far especially compared to Easy.
00:21:364 (3,4,1) - More overlap~ Eh, I won't point 'em out anymore. You know what to look for by now if you want to change. ;p
00:27:809 (2) - Forget a whistle?
01:09:364 (1) - Kind of felt weird to have sound on a spinner now, haha. Ah well
Overall the patterns are fine, but the rhythms felt a little bland. It felt like I was just playing the same thing the entire song. Especially from 01:20:697 (1) - to the end of the song... it's just quarter notes the entire way and a spinner. :/

[Hard]
00:07:364 (3,1) - Check your spacing here. The .5x section messes with distance snap.
The map itself is fine, but the first half up to the kiai felt kind of boring. It's just mostly a constant eighth note stream with little rhythmic variety. Try to make it work with the music more and this map would benefit greatly for it. :D

[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it.
Nice~

Taiko looks fine too.

Call me back~
Sure

Garven wrote:

[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it. // fixed
Nice~
I would like you to delete 'comboburst-6.png'. Because she isn't leading character.
저라면 comboburst-6.png는 지우겠습니다. 적어도 본편 주인공은 아니니까요..
어쨌든 판단은 샤론님께 맡깁니다.

Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
comboburst-6.png sticks out compared to the rest of the images since the top of the head is cut off. Perhaps find another image of this character?

[Easy]
00:23:809 (2,1,2) - I didn't like the overlap from these. :/
00:48:697 (1,1) - Overlap here doesn't look good either.
00:50:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Felt a bit devoid of hitsounds here. Maybe add a soft whistle to the 4's?
00:57:586 (1) - Eh, kind of short. Might work better as a slider.
01:01:142 (3,4,5) - Even up this spacing
01:09:364 (3,1) - Overlap. :<
01:24:031 (1) - This felt better starting at 01:24:253 -
Strange that this difficulty ends earlier than your other two.

[Normal]
Spacing feels a bit far especially compared to Easy.
00:21:364 (3,4,1) - More overlap~ Eh, I won't point 'em out anymore. You know what to look for by now if you want to change. ;p
00:27:809 (2) - Forget a whistle?
01:09:364 (1) - Kind of felt weird to have sound on a spinner now, haha. Ah well
Overall the patterns are fine, but the rhythms felt a little bland. It felt like I was just playing the same thing the entire song. Especially from 01:20:697 (1) - to the end of the song... it's just quarter notes the entire way and a spinner. :/

[Hard]
00:07:364 (3,1) - Check your spacing here. The .5x section messes with distance snap.
The map itself is fine, but the first half up to the kiai felt kind of boring. It's just mostly a constant eighth note stream with little rhythmic variety. Try to make it work with the music more and this map would benefit greatly for it. :D

[yk's Insane]
01:26:697 (10) - This arrow is facing in a weird direction, if you want to fix it.
Nice~

Taiko looks fine too.

Call me back~
Done. I do what I can , but idk you like this, haha.

and comboburst-6- is deleted.
HakuNoKaemi
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Garven
Recheck~

[Easy]
00:57:586 (2,3) - Check your spacing here. The .5 section halves distance snap distance, so double the distance between these two and the next combo as well
01:09:364 (3) - [nazi] Move end point left and right 1 grid for symmetry

Edit:

Looks good.

:U
Doomsday
Hooray!
KRZY
말도안돼 사랑은 물색보다 이게 더 먼저 랭크되버리다닠ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

어쨌든 ㅊㅋ~ 이제 나보다 랭맵많네 ㅋㅋ
Sure
Yay! Finally :D
Congrats~
aabc271
Congratulations :)
KanaRin
Congrats~>A<
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
Wow!

thx a lot :D !

finally I got 2nd ranked map, haha ! :D
Lunah_old
AMAGAMI<3
Pesar
Sae-chan :oops:
Congratulations!
Ephemeral
why is the song title not capitalized properly

little bit tacky, how many people modded this and managed to miss it?
James2250

Ephemeral wrote:

why is the song title not capitalized properly

little bit tacky, how many people modded this and managed to miss it?
*hides*
:roll:
Mikkuri
congrat :D
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