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Topic Starter
Holoaz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年11月3日 at 15:11:27

Artist: Rita
Title: Primary
Source: Primary~Magical Trouble Scramble~
Tags: gowww
BPM: 167
Filesize: 5318kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. gow's Trouble (4.87 stars, 450 notes)
  2. Magical (2.32 stars, 169 notes)
  3. Scramble (5 stars, 488 notes)
Download: Rita - Primary
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd map

Poor English sorry

--------Guest-----------

gowww

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[Magical]-----------------finished! changed diff Normal => Easy
[gow's Trouble]---------finished!
[Scramble]---------------finished!
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I will wait for MOD&advice.XD
Mod Thanks => banvi , ykcarrot , kioukiou , James2550
Oct 31 > Changed mp3 plz reDL
Cuuuuri
最速(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
NatsumeRin
random star.
swish
good map~ :oops: :oops:
mayosiiiiii
nice map~
y u c a
fight okayama>~</
Muya
:D
Topic Starter
Holoaz
star thank you!
loli_milk
ふぁいてぃん↑ :)
gowww
wring
star :)
S o r d a
Star~
banvi
I like <3
star :)
Topic Starter
Holoaz
star thank you!
Cyril Scarlet
(;´Д`)ハァハァ
Hakeru
ほしです~  :)
Lettel
oraora
Rusty
nice map :)
RayZer_old
star :D
ponsaku
8-)
nice map!応援してます!
Topic Starter
Holoaz
みんな☆ありがとー 頑張ります!
Frill
god
caramel_old
nice map
Star~~
kusakabe001
star~ლ(╹◡╹ლ) nice map!
がんばってね☆ミ
quo
I like this map~ :)
MeLLoN
Nice jump~☆
Cyde
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ ☆
taka1235
niceです :oops:
banvi
Kami map!!
緑の字以外は全部ただの提案なので変えたくなかったら無視してください ;)

General
mp3の不要な後半はcut
あと320kbpsから256kbpsに変えた方がいいかなあ :?
delete osb. file & fullsubmit


Magical
fine

gowww様
music lead-inを2にそろえましょう
01:15:097 (6) +1 repeat or 01:15:456 (n) add note?
awesome kami map

scramble
01:06:655 (2) spacing小さくなくてもいいと思います、なのでmove 1 grid up & 1 grid right
01:35:574 (6) move 1 grid right
02:10:420 (6) ^
02:15:090 (4) move 1 grid right & 1 grid down
awesome kami map

I think thismap become ranked soon~ :)
Topic Starter
Holoaz

banvi wrote:

Kami map!!
緑の字以外は全部ただの提案なので変えたくなかったら無視してください ;)

General
mp3の不要な後半はcut--諦めました
あと320kbpsから256kbpsに変えた方がいいかなあ :?--諦めました
delete osb. file & fullsubmit[/color]--fixed

Magical
fine

gowww様
music lead-inを2にそろえましょう--fixed
01:15:097 (6) +1 repeat or 01:15:456 (n) add note?
awesome kami map

scramble
01:06:655 (2) spacing小さくなくてもいいと思います、なのでmove 1 grid up & 1 grid right
01:35:574 (6) move 1 grid right
02:10:420 (6) ^
02:15:090 (4) move 1 grid right & 1 grid down
awesome kami map
All fixed

I think thismap become ranked soon~ :)
Thank you for mod banvi sensei!!
Rigeru_old
8-)
Lalarun
:oops:
Sure
Hi :D

BPM : 167.000
Offset : current is fine

and you should make more easy diff. >_<


From Official Ranking Submission Criteria

•Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total


Star for nice map. ^^
Topic Starter
Holoaz

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi :D

BPM : 167.000
Offset : current is fine

and you should make more easy diff. >_<


From Official Ranking Submission Criteria

•Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total


Star for nice map. ^^
All fixed!
Thankyou for mod & star!! :)
Apricot
:idea:
Patchouli
star~ :)
Aenna
nice~
miccoliasms
もうさいぼーぐにはあえんな
kioukiou
hmmm.. red line and green line are overlapped with each other,I think it's not a good idea.

so change offset to -1,061ms.(ALL diff)

don't forget resnap all notes and check green lines.

[Magical]

Remove Lead-in , it's useless.


[gow's Trouble]

Fine.


[Scramble]

02:06:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit hard to read, change it to other pattern? (Just a suggestion.)


star for now.
Topic Starter
Holoaz

kioukiou wrote:

hmmm.. red line and green line are overlapped with each other,I think it's not a good idea.

so change offset to -1,061ms.(ALL diff)

don't forget resnap all notes and check green lines.

[Magical]

Remove Lead-in , it's useless.


[gow's Trouble]

Fine.


[Scramble]

02:06:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit hard to read, change it to other pattern? (Just a suggestion.)


star for now.
All fixed!
thnak you for mod&star! moe moe oneesama <3
FutakiKanata
(ノ゚∀゚)ノミ☆
PSPDS Eddie
:)
DeadAlready
:O nice map and nice song xD

gogogo~ :D
kioukiou
Changed the mp3 file(192 kpbs) and set a new offset.

I think it's good for a bubble.

bubbled.
Topic Starter
Holoaz
oneesama thank you!!
moe moe <333333
James2250
I don't see a reason to have a 4 min+ mp3 and only map 2:30 of it, why not cut the rest off?

Magical:
00:36:383 (9,10) - bad stacking
You might as well map this to the same place as the other difficulties (it isn't required but it is a pretty short map at the moment)
I really don't see why the easiest difficultly needs combos going up to 12-15 (there are lots of places to make new combos in this song) Try and make them all below 10 at least (lower if possible)
I suggest you use the same hitsounds as you use on your insane, as these whistles don't sound as good -- claps seem to fit more the way you are using the hitsounds anyway

gow's Trouble:
01:38:718 (6,7) - hidden repeat

Scramble:
Some kind of random jumps but ok
00:38:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - keep spacing equal if possible
00:45:365 (1,2,3) - ^
01:31:173 (3,4,5) - ^

I like the other difficulties I just believe that Easy could be improved, it seems kind of rushed at the moment
Call me back after fixes
Topic Starter
Holoaz

James2250 wrote:

I don't see a reason to have a 4 min+ mp3 and only map 2:30 of it, why not cut the rest off?
This is good song and I want to let everyone hear
so I don't want tocut song sorry

Magical:
00:36:383 (9,10) - bad stacking
You might as well map this to the same place as the other difficulties (it isn't required but it is a pretty short map at the moment)
I really don't see why the easiest difficultly needs combos going up to 12-15 (there are lots of places to make new combos in this song) Try and make them all below 10 at least (lower if possible)
I suggest you use the same hitsounds as you use on your insane, as these whistles don't sound as good -- claps seem to fit more the way you are using the hitsounds anyway
All fixed!
gow's Trouble:
01:38:718 (6,7) - hidden repeat--fixed!

Scramble:
Some kind of random jumps but ok
00:38:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - keep spacing equal if possible
00:45:365 (1,2,3) - ^
01:31:173 (3,4,5) - ^
All fixed!
I like the other difficulties I just believe that Easy could be improved, it seems kind of rushed at the moment
Call me back after fixes
James sennsei thank you for mod&star!
orioncomet
offset is a bit late with hitsound and etc to me
try -990 as offset and resnap all note + green lines


EDIT: re-bubbled
Topic Starter
Holoaz
orion thank you <3333
Mafiamaster
[Magical]
02:28:471 (1) - What's up with this spinner? The map should end at 02:28:471 like the other 2 difficulties.

Also about the mp3 length. If you wanted to let "everyone hear the song", then you should have mapped the whole song.
Either cut and fade out the mp3 to save some space or map the whole thing.
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