since you had bad luck 2 times (wow)
why dont i just go on ahead and point out the things that bother me quickily
it's like a 10min mod so dont expect much but i hope i can still do something
hopes and dreams
00:00:010 (1,2) - idk think this would be nicer as a blanket tbh
00:09:510 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - for the star rating, I'd personally put up some sliders instead of circles to fit the intensity better
00:21:343 (1) - aaaa whistle on slider body get rid of
all of them01:02:676 (1,2,3,4) - uh this could be made more into a perfect square tbh
01:04:009 (1,2) - this connection is weird, would curve (1) up a bit more so the curve flows more naturally into the next note
01:18:009 (4) - because of this curve going the other way you have a double negative flow--that isn't so nice. try to maybe ctrl+j so the curve catches the wrist movement better
01:23:843 (1) - just what is this slider mapped to? you're missing important beats on notes like 01:24:009 - ! try to change the rythm
01:31:343 (3,4) - would curve these two a little like
this so it looks nicer and connects better to 01:32:009 (1) -
01:44:343 (2,4) - uh blanket?
02:02:676 (1) - perhaps place this slider a little like
this for a better circular movement
02:07:676 (4,5,6,7,1) - would be nice to see this curve the other way, the connection now is kinda weird
02:19:343 (3,5,2) - change in spacing feels weird, maybe move (3) a bit around
02:34:343 (3,4,1) - would put (3,1) on the same y coordinate so there occurs a little triangle
02:48:009 (1) - uh the sound it starts with ends on 02:50:343 - maybe change this (tho it isnt needed that badly)
03:11:343 (5) - NC here because completely new sounds!
03:33:509 (2,2,2) - maybe place these around so it forms a triangle with 03:33:342 (1,1,1) - in the middle, would look epic
03:54:176 (3,4) - why the spacing change get this out of here pls!!!
04:07:343 (4) - why the rythm change you dont have to here!
04:41:176 (1) - same as before all the skipped beats!! (they sure are strong beats so map them!!!!!!)
04:46:676 (1,2,3) - make the spacing between these consistent please!
04:53:343 (1,2) - stacking in this section feels awkward, maybe as an idea, try something like
this to make it more interesting
05:13:343 (1) - for natural flow i expected this to be more to the left, so that you kinda have a sharper curve between 05:12:676 (3,4,1) -
with the ending part, you can keep on catching the 1/3 beats a little longer, like 1 or 2 big white ticks more
speaking of dreams, imma sleep now because sleep = gud stuff
okbye!