Feint - Stray · forum

xDarxen

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-07T10:59:35+00:00

shmiklak wrote:
xDarxen's Normal
00:46:714 (5,6) - Check DS (AiMod)
01:05:443 (3,4) - Try some change slider for better blanket

Fixed all. Thanks and sorry for the wait.

Update

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Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2015-12-08T14:11:00+00:00

can someone remove my kudosu please?

pretty much of my mod was useless

thank you

Aihuro

329 posts

Joined January 2015

Aihuro 2015-12-17T13:17:08+00:00

Hey! NM request from my queue.
Well, here goes nothing.

General:

Please remove "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB.

HB's Easy:

00:19:662 (1,1) - The reaction time here is too short. There must be 4 lines open between them. (Since this is the easiest diff.)
Nothing else to say here.

xDarxen's Normal:

00:19:662 (1,1) - Same for Normal as well. The reaction time is too short.
00:59:894 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J? It will improve the flow imo.
01:24:171 (2) - This slider is too high, please lower it.
This diff looks also fine.

Advance:

00:26:599 (1) - Uhm, why did you place him there? It feels really crammed, why not spread a little, I mean there are plenty much space on the other side of the screen. I think it will play better if you move the note away from the others.
00:32:148 (1,2) - Why didn't you use DS here. The music doesn't call for a little jump like this one. I highly suggest you make them consistent.
00:39:605 (2,2) - A very ugly overlap, don't you think. Why not stack 00:40:992 (2) - on 00:39:605 (2) - tail? There might be a little DS problem but you might be able to fix that.
00:43:420 (1) - I personally suggest you turn that slider into 2 notes. I think it will play nicely.
01:16:714 (2) - I don't really think that slider is necessary here. Why not add a note instead.
01:20:356 (5) - Curve him maybe like the others.
Overall, nice diff.

I will end my mod here.
Good Luck with this mapset of yours. Hopefully my mod was useful~

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-17T13:50:34+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Hey! NM request from my queue.
Well, here goes nothing.

General:
Please remove "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB. done

Advance:
00:26:599 (1) - Uhm, why did you place him there? It feels really crammed, why not spread a little, I mean there are plenty much space on the other side of the screen. I think it will play better if you move the note away from the others. sure, you are right
00:32:148 (1,2) - Why didn't you use DS here. The music doesn't call for a little jump like this one. I highly suggest you make them consistent. fixed
00:39:605 (2,2) - A very ugly overlap, don't you think. Why not stack 00:40:992 (2) - on 00:39:605 (2) - tail? There might be a little DS problem but you might be able to fix that. xied
00:43:420 (1) - I personally suggest you turn that slider into 2 notes. I think it will play nicely. okay
01:16:714 (2) - I don't really think that slider is necessary here. Why not add a note instead. because it's my style
01:20:356 (5) - Curve him maybe like the others. sure
Overall, nice diff.

I will end my mod here. will wait
Good Luck with this mapset of yours. Hopefully my mod was useful~

Thanks for mod!

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-18T12:47:29+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
xDarxen's Normal:
00:19:662 (1,1) - Same for Normal as well. The reaction time is too short. Removed the spinner
00:59:894 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J? It will improve the flow imo. Yep
01:24:171 (2) - This slider is too high, please lower it. Done
This diff looks also fine.

Thanks!

Update

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2015-12-18T15:44:59+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Hey! NM request from my queue.

HB's Easy:
00:19:662 (1,1) - The reaction time here is too short. There must be 4 lines open between them. (Since this is the easiest diff.)
Nothing else to say here.

Thanks

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43246
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Stray
TitleUnicode:Stray
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:FCL
Version:HB's Easy
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro
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BeatmapSetID:384535

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Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-21T12:21:03+00:00

really nice map, i like how you put that 1/4 sliders in some parts

Insane:
00:37:350 (6,2) - maybe put slider to down a bit (prevent overlap a bit)
00:48:969 (2) - make this thing curved (blanket it with 00:49:142 (3) - can be nice)
00:49:402 (4) - looks this thing overmapped a bit, and well this 00:49:402 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - pattern kinda confused to read because small spacing maybe and much stacks
00:51:570 (1) - ctrl+h can be a good options on this, make sure players didnt seing stacked objects too much, because its really confusing and needs much concentration
00:54:518 (2) - well i gues you need to move this slider to down a little bit, slidertail node is y=-4 so make it y=0 or more
00:57:119 (1) - how about like this? http://puu.sh/m3uCl/c2502da324.jpg (it's 2 times more flowy and more visile than current one)
00:59:894 (1,2,3) - this burst flow seems hard to expect, maybe change flow direction first at 00:59:894 (1,2) - (rotate 01:00:067 (2,3) - 111 degrees counter clockwise and move it to x216y144 to make good straight rhombus jump pattern)
01:05:616 (2,5) - this overlap so nasty lol
01:15:154 (1,2) - i think make sure you need to move 2 to x316y96 to make 01:15:501 (2,3) - flow more better and make 01:15:154 (1,2) - too close away
01:26:252 (1) - wow this is clearly needs blanket fixing lol

well looks this map is okay
and yeah i have something for you

if you want it just take this map

Feint is really cool dnb artist

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hope this thing helps
see ya later
pm me if you want to ask something :3

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-21T13:03:56+00:00

aaasdasdsadasd
Thanks you, love you!!!

Idk what to say about mod, i fixed all things who you say, Thanks again!

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-12-21T14:03:01+00:00

fort thing

00:35:963 (6) - kinda weird for this to be straight
01:17:928 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand this, can't see reason to put kicksliders here
01:24:865 (1,2) - ^

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2015-12-21T21:21:23+00:00

sorry for not modding ur Monk map, I stopped modding maps before u posted it lol

[HB's Easy]
• 00:36:310 (1,3) - I'm a bit unsure about this pattern here because (3) exactly appears as soon as (1) is clicked (even though you should keep in mind that newer players click way earlier) and this could cause that some players panic and keep clicking (3) instead to go over to the slider.
• 01:10:992 (3,4) - I'd rather place it more to the left because this transition looks dirty to me. :c

But a neat and simple diff overall. c:

[xDarxen's Normal]
• 00:46:714 (5,6,1) - I'd like to see a better looking transition. I don't like it this way and I'm sure there are better solutions. But it's just my opinion.
• 01:01:975 (2) - Don't you think it's a bit far down there? D:
• 01:03:362 (5,6,1) - Same as above.
• 01:20:009 (5,6,1) - ^
• 01:20:703 (1) - There's a risk this could touch some HP-Bars.

[Advanced]
• 01:06:483 (1) - This NC isn't really needed and makes no sense. If you want to keep the NC there because of the sound, consider NC'ing 01:06:136 (4) - instead because the sound starts there.
• 01:13:767 (1,2,3) - Seperate these 2 circles and the slider for a bit more...eh...fun?
• 01:24:518 (4,2) - Overlap on purpose?

[Zectro's Hard]
sup m8

• 00:39:951 (4,2) - Small overlap.
• 01:09:257 (3,1) - Little bit high up there. D:
• 01:26:772 (2) - This could also hit HP-Bars.

[MKL's Insane]
• 00:43:246 (1,1) - This is kinda lazy if you ask me. On 00:43:593 and 00:44:287 are strong sounds that should be mapped imo. I'd really love to see a nice build-up into the kiai here.
• 01:06:483 (5,1) - Letting them overlap is imo not the best idea in a Light Insane. People in this skilllevel have problems reading streams properly and would mash a bit longer than this stream actually is. And because of this, they will most likely get a sliderbreak here.

[Insane]
• Can't really complain here except for some slidershapes that could blanket some circles way better like 00:27:466 (7,1) - 00:55:732 (1,2,3,4) .

[Fort's Wondering]
• 00:30:241 (5,1) - Improve this blanket.
• 00:35:616 (4,5,6) - A bit boring that this goes down in a line.

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-22T01:22:18+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
fort thing

00:35:963 (6) - kinda weird for this to be straight there is now way for that slider to make some direction change flow without doing like this, maybe i can keep this for that thing
01:17:928 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand this, can't see reason to put kicksliders here
01:24:865 (1,2) - ^ temporally keeping this for some factors

Stjpa wrote:
sorry for not modding ur Monk map, I stopped modding maps before u posted it lol

[Fort's Wondering]
• 00:30:241 (5,1) - Improve this blanket.
• 00:35:616 (4,5,6) - A bit boring that this goes down in a line. sorry for that thing but well this is my last choices to make sure i didnt get any overlaps with my previous patterning, so maybe im gonna keep this thing

thanks for mod guys, i fix all problems except red one
update below

a

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Stray.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43246
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Stray
TitleUnicode:Stray
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:FCL
Version:Fort's Wondering
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort
BeatmapID:859207
BeatmapSetID:384535

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-12-22T07:53:31+00:00

hb
00:19:662 (1,1) - probably gonna have to do something about the not-4-beats-of-recovery-time-after-spinner gl

advanced
00:27:466 (5,6,1) - not really appropriate for the level of difficulty. spacing should be as clear as possible on this sort of thing so mixing 1/2 and 1/1 as the same is eh. stacking 1 under 6 is k tho
00:28:680 (3,1) - samez
01:05:443 (1,2,3) - i really dont think the way 2 is stacked is how you intended it and if it is it's confusing af
01:06:483 (1) - new combo pretty unnecesssary. same thing's repeated at the end and there isn't one lol

zectrp
00:54:605 (2) - 01:16:801 (2) - blue tick 1/4 sliders pretty confusing when there's more emphasis on white/red ticks surrounding it. 2 circles = more appropriate
01:06:483 (5,1) - 01:28:680 (5,1) - try to treat this like 1/1 spacing. rhythmically it's already confusing, but spacing makes it even more waht since it looks like your ordianry 1/2

Flc
00:19:662 (1) - silenced spinner end is kind of nonsense when it's on a super clear sound lol
00:55:385 (7,8,1) - 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - would be nice to take angles into account for emphasis sometimes:( while you're handling spacing fine for this sort of stuff, angles that are linear or really wide don't give as much emphasis on the final object compared to like sharper angles into the downbeat. would require a lot of restructuring so just keep that in mind for future maps at least yeyeyeye

fprt
00:22:090 (5) - needs to be audible okokok

happy holidays!!!!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2015-12-22T10:11:18+00:00

u know wat...remove this fcking spinner xD

update

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Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-22T11:28:09+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
[MKL's Insane]
• 00:43:246 (1,1) - This is kinda lazy if you ask me. On 00:43:593 and 00:44:287 are strong sounds that should be mapped imo. I'd really love to see a nice build-up into the kiai here. - asdf
• 01:06:483 (5,1) - Letting them overlap is imo not the best idea in a Light Insane. People in this skilllevel have problems reading streams properly and would mash a bit longer than this stream actually is. And because of this, they will most likely get a sliderbreak here. idk it might me more confusing now lol this is my first time mapping this kind of stuff

there is only one country between finland and north korea

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FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-22T11:54:02+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
[Advanced]

• 01:06:483 (1) - This NC isn't really needed and makes no sense. If you want to keep the NC there because of the sound, consider NC'ing 01:06:136 (4) - instead because the sound starts there. lol why i did it?
• 01:13:767 (1,2,3) - Seperate these 2 circles and the slider for a bit more...eh...fun? will try
• 01:24:518 (4,2) - Overlap on purpose? fixed

[Insane]

• Can't really complain here except for some slidershapes that could blanket some circles way better like 00:27:466 (7,1) - 00:55:732 (1,2,3,4) . improved i guess

pishifat wrote:
advanced
00:27:466 (5,6,1) - not really appropriate for the level of difficulty. spacing should be as clear as possible on this sort of thing so mixing 1/2 and 1/1 as the same is eh. stacking 1 under 6 is k tho WHYYYY i did it, omg
00:28:680 (3,1) - samez
01:05:443 (1,2,3) - i really dont think the way 2 is stacked is how you intended it and if it is it's confusing af error i guess, fixed
01:06:483 (1) - new combo pretty unnecesssary. same thing's repeated at the end and there isn't one lol changed before

Flc xD
00:19:662 (1) - silenced spinner end is kind of nonsense when it's on a super clear sound lol lol
00:55:385 (7,8,1) - 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - would be nice to take angles into account for emphasis sometimes:( while you're handling spacing fine for this sort of stuff, angles that are linear or really wide don't give as much emphasis on the final object compared to like sharper angles into the downbeat. would require a lot of restructuring so just keep that in mind for future maps at least yeyeyeye okay, will try at future

happy holidays!!!! same

Thanks for modding guys!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-12-22T12:31:30+00:00

hmm ya

im sorry :c

[Insane]
00:54:518 (2,3) - they seem to be uncomfortable to play due to the angle, mind ctrl g (2) or just move (3) somewhere a bit up-right ?
01:06:483 (1) - hmm why did you NC this ? might be nice if you keep consistency with 00:44:287 (7) -
01:11:339 (4) - normal sampleset on the slider's tail ?
01:27:293 (7) - curve it on the opposite direction instead ?
01:29:027 (1) - the drum whistle kinda bother me a bit ._.
00:57:986 (5,6,7) - these pattern would've neater transition and more natural to play, try it

00:59:027 (3,4,5) - move this left side to create better flow from (2)

[Hard]
00:28:333 (2,3,4) - this was quite confusing to read, try stacking (3) with (2) instead of (4)
00:48:795 (1) - missing normal sampleset ?
00:49:489 - i found this stop was pretty weird during gameplay, why not keep the pace of the rhythm ?
00:51:223 (5) - replace with symmetrical slider with 00:51:570 (1) - ? i think those were more neat
00:54:171 (5) - ctrl g ? it's kinda hard for players on hard diff level
01:06:483 (5) - single note pls >< same like the next one

it's more like light insane with bigger CS imo xD , but well that's fine for the spread

[Advanced]
00:26:772 (2) - it might be fine if you're going for triplet here
00:36:830 (2,3) - they looks cramped ><
00:44:634 (1) - try ctrl G
00:46:194 (2) - stack this with (3) instead ?
00:48:795 (1) - i wonder why this one don't have a normal sampleset

~

Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2015-12-22T12:48:31+00:00

o v e r m a p p e djok

hb

00:22:437 - why u miss this note? its really stonk beat so i think u should put at least a circle here

00:46:021 - not mapping on a stronk beat here, but putting the beginning of the slider 00:46:714 here, when there is no sound
suggesting this

00:51:917 (4,1) - spacing is a bit different here

00:57:466 (4,1) - this blanket can be improved i guess

01:02:321 (3) - same situation as before

01:11:339 (4,1) - again spacing

01:20:703 (1,3) - not sure if stacking these notes is not prohibited in easy

xdarken

rhytm is so brokkenn

00:23:651 (3) - why? no real sound here and 00:24:518 - here and..

u are also missing the stronk sounds like 00:27:119 - or 00:25:732 -

just why?

00:31:802 (2,3,4,5) - maybe u will try a normal square? seems messy

00:42:206 (2) - u probably should move it lower other way it looks like broken square 00:41:512 (6,1,2,3)

00:54:345 (4) - probably might be out of someone's screen. i suggest u to move it, just to be safe

01:01:281 (1) - this polyline looks weird a bit

01:15:154 (1) - move to x=149 y=193 for a better flow

01:27:986 (4) - move to x =221 y=231 for a better flow, symmetry doesnt fit here at all

adv

00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) - не очень мне нравится этот оверлап, лучше исправь

01:07:871 (4,2) - стакни получш

01:19:662 (3,4,5) - если прошлый такой момент еще работал, то этот выглядит вообще не очень

zectro

pls stack notes asdsadsadsdasd its not marathon 5*

i mean this 00:26:599 (1,3) - 00:29:373 (1,5) -

00:34:836 (9) - really very weak sound.. dunno if circle is really needed here

00:58:506 (1,2) - mom pls no...... even this will work better

01:04:056 (1) - stack with the beginning of 01:03:362 (3) - is really needed here or it will look messy

01:20:703 (1,2) - same thing as with polylines

01:25:558 (3,1) - again stack pls

01:26:772 (2) - touching the HP bar, can be hard to play

01:28:767 - why? just a circle on 01:28:680 - will be ok i think

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-22T13:34:17+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hmm ya

im sorry :c np

[Insane]
00:54:518 (2,3) - they seem to be uncomfortable to play due to the angle, mind ctrl g (2) or just move (3) somewhere a bit up-right ?
01:06:483 (1) - hmm why did you NC this ? might be nice if you keep consistency with 00:44:287 (7) -
01:11:339 (4) - normal sampleset on the slider's tail ?
01:27:293 (7) - curve it on the opposite direction instead ? my style xd
01:29:027 (1) - the drum whistle kinda bother me a bit ._. idk, fine for me
00:57:986 (5,6,7) - these pattern would've neater transition and more natural to play, try it

00:59:027 (3,4,5) - move this left side to create better flow from (2) moved (2)

[Advanced]
00:26:772 (2) - it might be fine if you're going for triplet here maybe, mayyybe
00:36:830 (2,3) - they looks cramped ><
00:44:634 (1) - try ctrl G nah
00:46:194 (2) - stack this with (3) instead ?
00:48:795 (1) - i wonder why this one don't have a normal sampleset

~

Thanks for mod, no comment=fixed

Slayed wrote:
o v e r m a p p e djok

adv

00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) - не очень мне нравится этот оверлап, лучше исправь

01:07:871 (4,2) - стакни получш к

01:19:662 (3,4,5) - если прошлый такой момент еще работал, то этот выглядит вообще не очень да не, нормально

Спасибо братишка

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-22T14:22:51+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
[xDarxen's Normal]
• 00:46:714 (5,6,1) - I'd like to see a better looking transition. I don't like it this way and I'm sure there are better solutions. But it's just my opinion. I think this is totaly fine. If someone else mentions it, I will consider changing it.
• 01:01:975 (2) - Don't you think it's a bit far down there? D: Moved up
• 01:03:362 (5,6,1) - Same as above.
• 01:20:009 (5,6,1) - ^
• 01:20:703 (1) - There's a risk this could touch some HP-Bars.Moved down a little bit

Slayed wrote:
[notice]xdarken xdarken, ok

rhytm is so brokkenn

00:23:651 (3) - why? no real sound here and 00:24:518 - here and.. If you listen closely to the backround drum, this is what I was following here. If someone else mentions that kind of rhythm, I will change it

u are also missing the stronk sounds like 00:27:119 - or 00:25:732 -

just why? Same, I don't feel like changing it right now, since there is consistency on the rhythm throughout the diff.

00:31:802 (2,3,4,5) - maybe u will try a normal square? seems messy Changed it

00:42:206 (2) - u probably should move it lower other way it looks like broken square 00:41:512 (6,1,2,3) Done

00:54:345 (4) - probably might be out of someone's screen. i suggest u to move it, just to be safe Moved it to the right a little bit

01:01:281 (1) - this polyline looks weird a bit Did something

01:15:154 (1) - move to x=149 y=193 for a better flow ok

01:27:986 (4) - move to x =221 y=231 for a better flow, symmetry doesnt fit here at all y

Thanks you guys!

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Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-22T14:33:22+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
sorry for not modding ur Monk map, I stopped modding maps before u posted it lo

[Zectro's Hard]
sup m8 hiaiaiai

• 00:39:951 (4,2) - Small overlap.
• 01:09:257 (3,1) - Little bit high up there. D:
• 01:26:772 (2) - This could also hit HP-Bars.

thx fixed everything

pishifat wrote:
zectrp
00:54:605 (2) - 01:16:801 (2) - blue tick 1/4 sliders pretty confusing when there's more emphasis on white/red ticks surrounding it. 2 circles = more appropriate
01:06:483 (5,1) - 01:28:680 (5,1) - try to treat this like 1/1 spacing. rhythmically it's already confusing, but spacing makes it even more waht since it looks like your ordianry 1/2

happy holidays!!!!

thank you i tried
happy holidays to you aswell pishi!

Momochikun wrote:
[Hard]
00:28:333 (2,3,4) - this was quite confusing to read, try stacking (3) with (2) instead of (4) fixed in own way
00:48:795 (1) - missing normal sampleset ?
00:49:489 - i found this stop was pretty weird during gameplay, why not keep the pace of the rhythm ? its k
00:51:223 (5) - replace with symmetrical slider with 00:51:570 (1) - ? i think those were more neat what why this makes much more sense
00:54:171 (5) - ctrl g ? it's kinda hard for players on hard diff level current one is easier tbh lol
01:06:483 (5) - single note pls >< same like the next one

it's more like light insane with bigger CS imo xD , but well that's fine for the spread

~

~thanx

Slayed wrote:
o v e r m a p p e djok :c

zectro

pls stack notes asdsadsadsdasd its not marathon 5* wat which ones

i mean this 00:26:599 (1,3) - 00:29:373 (1,5) - o i thought it was easier to read like that

00:34:836 (9) - really very weak sound.. dunno if circle is really needed here

00:58:506 (1,2) - mom pls no...... even this will work better subjective x.x

01:04:056 (1) - stack with the beginning of 01:03:362 (3) - is really needed here or it will look messy

01:20:703 (1,2) - same thing as with polylines

01:25:558 (3,1) - again stack pls

01:26:772 (2) - touching the HP bar, can be hard to play

01:28:767 - why? just a circle on 01:28:680 - will be ok i think

thenk5med

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Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2015-12-24T02:12:07+00:00

[Fort's Wondering]

00:33:882 (2) - add clap on head for consistency
00:52:610 (6) - how about tilting this slider upward a little so it flows smoothly from 00:52:437 (5) ?
01:01:801 (3,4,5) - consider ctrl+J (flip vertically) these circles for a more circular flow from 01:01:281 (1,2)

[Insane]

00:25:212 (1) - the flow from this slider to the next stream feels a bit awkward to play imo D: how about removing the repeat and placing a circle somewhere above the stream (ex: http://puu.sh/m6BTB/3d3fefc099.jpg), and the circle would emphasize the beat
00:30:414 (8) - the flow from the stream to this circle feels slightly jarring to me, how about putting it to the left of 00:30:761 (1)? ex: http://puu.sh/m6C4Q/5b205a8c68.jpg
00:57:986 (5,6) - ctrl+G feels better for me to play

[MKL's Insane]
can't think of anything e_e

[Advanced]

01:01:281 (1) - could blanket 5 a bit better
01:20:356 (5) - add clap to head

[Zectro's Hard]

01:06:483 (5) - i think this would be better as a circle or 1/2 slider, since there's no beat on the blue tick
01:28:680 (5) - ^

[xDarxen's Normal]

00:44:634 (1) - add finish on head?
01:29:027 (1) - add whistle to end of spinner?

[HB's Easy]

00:44:634 (1,2,3) - doesn't really match the background music imo, how about switch the rhythm to circle, long slider, slider (http://puu.sh/m6G8q/567c2f6b8e.png)?
00:47:408 (1) - add whistle here and similar places, like 00:47:408 (1) for variation in hitsounding

Hope my mod was helpful!!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-24T09:14:18+00:00

00:57:986 (5,6) - ctrl+G feels better for me to play not fixed since break a flow sometimes is okay
Other fixed, thanks!

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-12-24T09:39:48+00:00

Hey~ From my M4M queue.

General:
Looks clean to me.

Fort’s Wondering:

00:44:807 (2,5) –I don’t like this overlap at all. Stack or avoid them touching.
00:46:194 (2,5) -^
00:57:293 (2,5) -^
01:04:229 (2,5) -^, etc.
01:07:350 (3) –It’s weird that you suddenly use a shaped slider like this when you didn’t use it anywhere else.
01:12:899 (4) –Maybe rather place this circle here to create a square shape with 01:12:379 (1,2,3) –
Picture

Insane:

Maybe lower the HP drain rate to 6.5 so it isn’t the same as Fort’s diff. It has to be easier afterall.
00:25:212 (1) –I would try to place this slider somewhere else where the slider isn’t crammed between 00:24:171 (2,3) – and causes unnecessary overlappings. Just for neatness reasons.
00:33:535 (1) -^
00:35:443 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –Personally I would try to map these in the right side of the grid and not try to force the pattern to the left where it looks crammed with 00:32:755 (4,5,6,7,2,3,7) –
00:43:073 (7) –In the editor, the tail of this slider is quite hidden behind 00:42:466 (3) – Perhaps place that slider somewhere else where the tail is more visible so that players can see that it’s a short slider.

MKL’s Insane:

00:28:506 (3,2) –This overlap looks bad. It even looks as if the slider is hiding behind the circles. I suggest you try to avoid an overlap like that.
01:06:570 – and 01:06:657 – and 01:06:743 –Perhaps make the stream longer by placing notes there as well. Would play better imo.

I guess some of the overlappings in the editor bugged me a bit, but since it’s not really visible in testplaying, I guess it’s fine.

Zectro’s Hard:

00:22:437 (1,5) –Try to avoid this overlap please. It’s unnecessary.
00:26:599 (1,3) –Personally I feel it would be better to stack this.
00:29:373 (1,5) -^
00:49:489 –Quite an important beat and it feels empty if you leave it empty like this. I suggest you place a note here.
00:53:477 (3) –This slider seems a bit out of place since you miss beats that could have been mapped. Maybe this:
Picture
01:09:604 (1) –This circle is slightly touching the HP bar. I suggest you lower it a bit.
01:11:686 –Same as 00:49:489 –
01:15:674 (3) –Same as 00:53:477 (3) –
01:17:061 (4,6) –Uhh, why this ugly placement? Seriously, this overlapping looks so bad to me.
01:26:772 (2) –The head of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. Lower it a bit.

Advanced:

00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) –Perfect this stack. That jump also looks a bit big, especially since there’s a triple which is a bit difficult to play.

xDarxen's Normal:

Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead?
00:19:662 –I highly suggest you start mapping here since most of the other mappers have and it is mappable.

HB’s Easy:

Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead?
00:19:662 –Same thing I suggested to xdarxen. Why not start mapping here like most of the mappers? It is mappable.
01:00:241 (4) –Ctrl+J this. Better flow.
01:20:703 (1,3) –Be careful of making stacks like this since (3) is hidden behind (1) and it can be a bit hard for beginners to see it clearly. Pointing this out because a QAT has pointed this out to me as well before.
01:27:986 (4) –Same as 01:00:241 (4) –

Nice mapset overall. Take a shiny star from me.
Good Luck with getting this ranked, FCL~!

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-12-24T10:04:15+00:00

Hey M4M~

[Insane]

00:26:079 (7) - I don't like this overlap since it's not well stacked on 00:24:518 (5) -
00:43:073 (7) - i don't really like this overlap imo
00:55:905 (2) - It's better if you curve your slider better to make them blanket perfectly
01:01:975 (4) - blanket is off, Ctrl G this slider to see that the blanket is off - and place the slider at the middle of the other slider to make a perfect blanket by disableing the Grid
SPOILER
01:12:379 (1,2,3,4) - same ^

[HentaiBoy24's Easy]

00:19:662 - put a spinner here doode
00:57:466 (4,1) - blanket this better doode

i know you'll fix nothing 'cause you're a scumbad <3

[MKL's Insane]

Nice diff :O

[Fort's Wondering]
Nothing to sa here to, nice diff :O

____

That's all for me, nice map dude, hope i'll see this rank soon! <3

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-24T10:11:11+00:00

Helo im not home atm and prolly wont be for about five days but ill try to answer mods this evening with my moms laptop lol
Also merry christmas aaaaaaaa

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-24T10:39:15+00:00

ayayayay thanks for modding!!!

-Nya- wrote:
Insane:
Maybe lower the HP drain rate to 6.5 so it isn’t the same as Fort’s diff. It has to be easier afterall. change to 6.7, don't like 6.5
00:25:212 (1) –I would try to place this slider somewhere else where the slider isn’t crammed between 00:24:171 (2,3) – and causes unnecessary overlappings. Just for neatness reasons. like this, maybe later
00:33:535 (1) -^ ^
00:35:443 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –Personally I would try to map these in the right side of the grid and not try to force the pattern to the left where it looks crammed with 00:32:755 (4,5,6,7,2,3,7) – well, remaped previous part
00:43:073 (7) –In the editor, the tail of this slider is quite hidden behind 00:42:466 (3) – Perhaps place that slider somewhere else where the tail is more visible so that players can see that it’s a short slider. fixed

-Nya- wrote:
Advanced:
00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) –Perfect this stack. That jump also looks a bit big, especially since there’s a triple which is a bit difficult to play. sure, fxd

Sotarks wrote:
[Insane]

00:26:079 (7) - I don't like this overlap since it's not well stacked on 00:24:518 (5) - it's my style, just accept it xD. Stack fixed
00:43:073 (7) - i don't really like this overlap imo fixed before
00:55:905 (2) - It's better if you curve your slider better to make them blanket perfectly aaaa, i tired to fix it
01:01:975 (4) - blanket is off, Ctrl G this slider to see that the blanket is off - and place the slider at the middle of the other slider to make a perfect blanket by disableing the Grid tbh it's not noticeably in game, but okay
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01:12:379 (1,2,3,4) - same ^ ^

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2015-12-24T10:50:40+00:00

Okey fixed almost everything thx guys 0/

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xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-24T11:42:11+00:00

Raose wrote:
[xDarxen's Normal]
00:44:634 (1) - add finish on head?
01:29:027 (1) - add whistle to end of spinner?
Done all

Hope my mod was helpful!!

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ From my M4M queue.

xDarxen's Normal:
Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead? Yep, I split it to two parts
00:19:662 –I highly suggest you start mapping here since most of the other mappers have and it is mappable. The problem with this is that this part is too quiet and the only thing I can add is a spinner, which I had before, but ppl said the reaction time was too short so, I removed it.

Thanks!

xDarxen's Normal

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Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-24T12:12:24+00:00

Raose wrote:
[Zectro's Hard]
01:06:483 (5) - i think this would be better as a circle or 1/2 slider, since there's no beat on the blue tick
01:28:680 (5) - ^
Hope my mod was helpful!!

Thank you sir c:

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ From my M4M queue.

Zectro’s Hard:
00:22:437 (1,5) –Try to avoid this overlap please. It’s unnecessary.
00:26:599 (1,3) –Personally I feel it would be better to stack this.
00:29:373 (1,5) -^
00:49:489 –Quite an important beat and it feels empty if you leave it empty like this. I suggest you place a note here.
00:53:477 (3) –This slider seems a bit out of place since you miss beats that could have been mapped. Maybe this:
Picture
01:09:604 (1) –This circle is slightly touching the HP bar. I suggest you lower it a bit.
01:11:686 –Same as 00:49:489 –
01:15:674 (3) –Same as 00:53:477 (3) –
01:17:061 (4,6) –Uhh, why this ugly placement? Seriously, this overlapping looks so bad to me.
01:26:772 (2) –The head of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. Lower it a bit.

Nice mapset overall. Take a shiny star from me.
Good Luck with getting this ranked, FCL~!

Thank you! Fixed everything from both mods~

Zectro's Hard

osu file format v14

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reanik

51 posts

Joined May 2015

reanik 2015-12-24T16:40:15+00:00

Hey, I'm that idiot who used the wrong tab xD - no worries still had the map there so I thought I'd have a bit of a look

It's just gonna be minor things if anything, 'cause I've not modded in ages

It's all personal opinion, so you can ignore pretty much anything I say, I just wanted to get back into doing this

HB's Easy
Nothing I can see wrong here! Nicely done

xDarxen's Normal
Again, nothing I can see

Advanced
00:27:293 (4,1) - Um... yeah find this confusing to read, the overlap looks a little weird in my opinion

It's a nice map, that's just the only thing that bugged me about it

Zectro's Hard
00:25:905 - there could be a circle here. White tick shouldn't be left. I can hear something there as well.

00:53:998 (5,6,1,2,3) - Not too sure about this section, I think the slider (6) would work better as 2 hit circles leading in from (5) personally

01:00:414 (3) - Slider could probably look a little better

01:16:367 (6,1,2,3) - Same as a couple of comments back, although, this one might be easier to read how it is... I'm not massively sure on this one actually, but I'll put it here just in case

01:22:610 (3) - Another odd looking slider.

That's about it, It's a nice map, This is all just opinions though, so feel free to ignore the more nitpicky ones xD

I don't think I'll mod the higher diffs... I'm not the best mod in the world and it's been ages since I last did one.

It's not a full mod, but I hope you're okay with that, it's just a couple of things I saw in the lower diff range that I thought might be either hard to read, or looked a little off.

Good luck on getting this ranked. The insane difficulties are fun to play!

~Reanik

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-26T01:33:36+00:00

pishifat wrote:
fprt
00:22:090 (5) - needs to be audible okokok deleted inheritted points

Raose wrote:
[Fort's Wondering]
00:33:882 (2) - add clap on head for consistency F
00:52:610 (6) - how about tilting this slider upward a little so it flows smoothly from 00:52:437 (5) ? F
01:01:801 (3,4,5) - consider ctrl+J (flip vertically) these circles for a more circular flow from 01:01:281 (1,2) looks i need to keep this thing because well that triplet have good flow on 01:01:801 (3,4,5,6) -

-Nya- wrote:
Fort’s Wondering:
00:44:807 (2,5) –I don’t like this overlap at all. Stack or avoid them touching.
00:46:194 (2,5) -^
00:57:293 (2,5) -^
01:04:229 (2,5) -^, etc. i was wondering if this changed with other style method it will be okay, but well tbh i like this direction changin on overlap parts, this has cool crossing movement haha, well i will keep all overlaps
01:07:350 (3) –It’s weird that you suddenly use a shaped slider like this when you didn’t use it anywhere else. 01:06:830 (1,3) - this slider 1 block my way, makes slider tail has overlapped if i put common curve in slider 3
01:12:899 (4) –Maybe rather place this circle here to create a square shape with 01:12:379 (1,2,3) – ummm sure
Picture

Sotarks wrote:
[Fort's Wondering]
Nothing to sa here to, nice diff :O thanks you very much

thanks for mods guys!

i fix all suggestion and problems except red one
okay here the update

W

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Title:Stray
TitleUnicode:Stray
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:FCL
Version:Fort's Wondering
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort cut version
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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-12-26T09:46:53+00:00

[Fort's Wandering]

→ 00:21:050 (1,2) - This 1/4 is quite noticeable. I think it's best if you made this a 1/2 slider and added a circle on 00:21:310 - because right now you're skipping the red tick entirely.
→ 00:24:518 (5,6) - No jump? 00:20:183 (2,3) - 00:21:570 (3,4) - 00:23:131 (4,5) - all jumps xD.
→ 00:29:200 (6) - This note is barely audible for me. I think a 1/2 slider is better on 5.
→ 00:59:547 (7,8,9,10,1) - The spacing on this stream is a bit weird... each circle has a different spacing like 00:59:807 (10) - is 0.56 xD. I think you might have accidentally converted to stream with grid-snap on.
→ 01:13:246 (6,7) - A jump here would be niiice.
→ 01:22:090 (1,2) - I would reduce the spacing a bit. This jump is a bit sudden for me xP.

[Insane]

→ 00:42:899 (6,7) - I don't really get this jump tbh. it doesn't really emphasize anything
→ 00:46:021 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense. Make 00:46:368 - clickable xD
→ 00:54:691 (3) - I would stack this with 00:53:477 (3) - . Looks nicer than the partial overlap, and makes things easier to read.
→ 01:00:761 (6,1) - Would be cool if you could get them to stack.
→ 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - I don't really like this linear motion tbh xP. Linear motion in general doesn't play very well because its difficult to snap. You could try simple Ctrl J'ing 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - . Looks cool too.

[MKL's Insane]

→ 00:27:639 (6,1,2) - This is a bit confusing to read mainly because 6>1 is 1/1 and 1>2 is 1/2 but they are both stacked and 2 is even stacked under the slider. I would just use normal DS here.

Tbh that was my only concern, your stop and go flow is really enjoyable and what i mentioned above was the only place where i found it hard to read because of the double stack xD. Nice diff.

[Zextro's Hard]

→ 00:25:558 (2) - I feel a circle followed by a 1/2 slider is a better rhythm here.

~

→ 00:34:402 (7,8) - Ctrl+G the rhythm imo. The snares 00:34:576 - really deserve to be clickable lol.
→ 01:19:836 (3,4) - Idk I don't think the kicksliders are that necessary here. They just add unnecessary difficulty imo, and the sound on 01:19:836 - isn't even that strong (no snare or kick). So it shouldn't need that kind of emphasis.

[Advanced]

→ 00:27:986 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit weird. especially since 2>3 are overlapping. Compare to 00:27:293 (4,5,6) - visually you should see a difference.
→ 00:29:373 (1,2) - Here too, these slight overlaps don't look really great.

talking about stuff like this

[xDarken's Normal]

→ 00:23:651 (3) - I feel like for a normal, this beat isn't all that necessary. You could skip it and it would still be playable.
→ 00:25:558 (2) - However, for rhythms like this there is a very noticeable kick on 00:25:732 - that you completely ignore. You should map to those.

You could try a rhythm like this

→ ^Mentioned above applies to quite a few parts where you map a circle to non-snare/kick (loud beats) but skip over louder ones.
→ 00:30:761 (1) - For example.

[HB's Easy]

→ 00:23:824 (2,3) - Ayy blanket's off.

Good luck dude!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-26T11:20:11+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Insane]

→ 00:42:899 (6,7) - I don't really get this jump tbh. it doesn't really emphasize anything fine for me, but okay
→ 00:46:021 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense. Make 00:46:368 - clickable xD fine for me, but okay
→ 00:54:691 (3) - I would stack this with 00:53:477 (3) - . Looks nicer than the partial overlap, and makes things easier to read. stack almost imperceptible lol
→ 01:00:761 (6,1) - Would be cool if you could get them to stack. ooops
→ 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - I don't really like this linear motion tbh xP. Linear motion in general doesn't play very well because its difficult to snap. You could try simple Ctrl J'ing 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - . Looks cool too. okay
also fixed other unclickable claps

monstrata wrote:
[Advanced]

→ 00:27:986 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit weird. especially since 2>3 are overlapping. Compare to 00:27:293 (4,5,6) - visually you should see a difference. ayyyyy lmao, spacing error
→ 00:29:373 (1,2) - Here too, these slight overlaps don't look really great.
talking about stuff like this

Thanks dude!

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-26T12:08:53+00:00

Thanks for the mods and I'm still not home so I still can't fix anything cuz my mom's laptop is shit and aæææ
Äfkfhwklgkhwuj
Have a fucking awesome new year everyone but pls don't drive and drink cuz thats just D.O.A

My rank is decaying I NEED PP

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-12-26T12:58:58+00:00

Hi

[General]

Widescreen conflicts in Fort's diff.

[Easy]

00:49:142 (4,1) - A very very very random suggestion. How about sth like this? > http://puu.sh/m96XV/26d172735d.jpg

[Normal]

Nothing found in particular

[Advanced]

1/4 sliders is kinda difficult for Advanced imo. I think triplets would be easier.
00:31:975 (4,1,2) - Spacing here should be balanced.

[Hard]

00:23:824 (1,2) - 00:27:119 (3,4) - The spacing is too small imo, compared to what you did on 00:25:558 (2,3) - 00:36:830 (3,4) . Some players might interpret this as 1/2 jump.
01:09:951 (3,4) - Should they have a similar spacing? Compared to 01:09:604 (1,2,3) .

Probably gonna stop here tho, I feel the map quality is very high now. I didn't mod insanes cuz I don't wanna throw some trash suggestions on them.
Good luck bro~

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-26T15:51:55+00:00

In Advance spacing fixed a bit, thanks

Maakkeli wrote:
Thanks for the mods and I'm still not home so I still can't fix anything cuz my mom's laptop is shit and aæææ
Äfkfhwklgkhwuj
Have a fucking awesome new year everyone but pls don't drive and drink cuz thats just D.O.A

My rank is decaying I NEED PP

np, i wait you

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-27T10:06:49+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[xDarken's Normal]

→ 00:23:651 (3) - I feel like for a normal, this beat isn't all that necessary. You could skip it and it would still be playable.
→ 00:25:558 (2) - However, for rhythms like this there is a very noticeable kick on 00:25:732 - that you completely ignore. You should map to those.
You could try a rhythm like this
→ ^Mentioned above applies to quite a few parts where you map a circle to non-snare/kick (loud beats) but skip over louder ones.
→ 00:30:761 (1) - For example.

Thanks monstrata! Alright, I did a kind of remap, hope it's better now. Also, it is xDarxen not xDarken lol

xDarxen's Normal

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Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-27T15:57:52+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Fort's Wandering]

→ 00:21:050 (1,2) - This 1/4 is quite noticeable. I think it's best if you made this a 1/2 slider and added a circle on 00:21:310 - because right now you're skipping the red tick entirely. but there is no something in red tick :/
→ 00:24:518 (5,6) - No jump? 00:20:183 (2,3) - 00:21:570 (3,4) - 00:23:131 (4,5) - all jumps xD. get rekt m8
→ 00:29:200 (6) - This note is barely audible for me. I think a 1/2 slider is better on 5. rekt the circles
→ 00:59:547 (7,8,9,10,1) - The spacing on this stream is a bit weird... each circle has a different spacing like 00:59:807 (10) - is 0.56 xD. I think you might have accidentally converted to stream with grid-snap on. fixed
→ 01:13:246 (6,7) - A jump here would be niiice. that jump is enough for 4 stars map
→ 01:22:090 (1,2) - I would reduce the spacing a bit. This jump is a bit sudden for me xP. then fixed a spacing

thanks for mod, monstrata. Fix all things except red one
update

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Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-27T16:03:46+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
MKL’s Insane:
00:28:506 (3,2) –This overlap looks bad. It even looks as if the slider is hiding behind the circles. I suggest you try to avoid an overlap like that. - stacked some stuff
01:06:570 – and 01:06:657 – and 01:06:743 –Perhaps make the stream longer by placing notes there as well. Would play better imo. - SR = UP

I guess some of the overlappings in the editor bugged me a bit, but since it’s not really visible in testplaying, I guess it’s fine.

monstrata wrote:
[MKL's Insane]

→ 00:27:639 (6,1,2) - This is a bit confusing to read mainly because 6>1 is 1/1 and 1>2 is 1/2 but they are both stacked and 2 is even stacked under the slider. I would just use normal DS here. - that's the difference and that's how i thought it should be that (6) is stacked and (2) is that custom stack thing but idk i still think it's fine really

Tbh that was my only concern, your stop and go flow is really enjoyable and what i mentioned above was the only place where i found it hard to read because of the double stack xD. Nice diff. - tyty

Thanks for da mods aaaaaaaasdadfg

i can't think of anything clever here

osu file format v14

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Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort cut version
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162,34,83477,6,0,L|157:137,1,88.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,198,83824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,235,83998,1,0,1:0:0:0:
217,239,84084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,241,84171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,241,84258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,237,84345,1,0,1:0:0:0:
239,111,84518,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,170,84691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,105,84865,6,0,B|290:101|290:101|336:103,1,88.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,163,85212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,28,85385,1,0,1:0:0:0:
398,28,85472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,28,85558,2,0,P|373:24|332:22,2,44.25,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
277,103,85905,2,0,L|183:108,1,88.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,213,86252,6,0,L|139:208,1,88.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,219,86599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,87,86772,1,0,1:0:0:0:
89,87,86859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,87,86946,2,0,P|92:64|93:32,2,44.25,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
27,234,87293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,192,87466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,363,87639,5,2,1:2:0:0:
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82,240,87899,1,0,1:0:0:0:
82,240,87986,1,0,1:0:0:0:
223,314,88160,2,0,B|266:319|266:319|318:317,1,88.5,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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164,379,88680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2015-12-28T00:57:56+00:00

hi.

Easy and Normal... are fine, but feels without love

[advanced]
00:27:293 (4) - ~~delete maybe?~~ nahh, is fine.
01:29:027 (1) - I want to suggest this:

[Zectro's hard]
00:54:865 (4,5,6,7) - sorry, but this play very bad. Flow is very confusing. Pls, try other way.
map feels a bit "messy" imo.

[MKL's insane]
I dislike stacks like 01:23:131 (6,1) - (you use a lot in this map), stacks made this very quiet (and not feels dynamic).

[Insane]
00:54:518 (2) - wow, that was really evil ;w;, I think this will be bad idea, its very difficult to read.

[fort]
01:27:899 (2,3) - here was a bit difficult to read.

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Very simple song (nice for speedrank hahaha)

Good luck!

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