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00:13:145 (2) - move the slider to 00:12:974 - and make it reverse FixedItasha_S13 wrote:
Hi im not really a high experienced mapper but ill try my best :'v
00:13:145 (2) - move the slider to 00:12:974 - and make it reverse
00:16:059 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:16:231 - and add a circle at 00:16:574 -
00:18:802 (4) - add a circle here and move the slider to 00:18:974 -
00:33:374 (1) - this slider should be longer (end at 00:33:631 - )
00:44:517 (3) - add a triple here?
00:55:317 (7) - make this slider long like 00:33:374 -
02:00:802 (4) - reverse slider here its better
05:15:888 (7) - make this lionger
05:27:545 (1) - this jump isnt necessary..
I hope this help :'v
All fixed too lazy to make a list and shitNerthar wrote:
Hey here is the mod you asked for
00:30:116 (1,2) - I saw you did those sliders during the whole map so i just show one, i think you could space them a little bit
00:44:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool jumps (triangles fanboy)
00:50:345 (3,1,2) - Confusing part, could be spaced a bit
01:13:659 (5,6,7,8) - move the 7 on the right or the 5 on the left, to get something symetrical
01:46:402 (3,4) - put the 3 further from the 4
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I had to say it, I love this stream :3
03:24:802 (4,5,6) - those triples doesn't look good (there are others after, won't point them)
03:44:688 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Triples should be a bit less spaced imo, maybe something like x2.8~x3.0
04:48:459 (1,2,3) - 04:49:317 (5,6,7) - It hurts... You can't know if this is 1/4 the first time you play it, spacing should be reduced a bit
04:53:088 (1,2,3) - ^
04:55:659 (1,2,3) - ^ + hard to aim properly, I won't point this spacing problem anymore
05:09:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's what i wanted to see
That's all, good luck at ranking this
Naprawiłem wszystko (CHYBA) oprócz "02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - em, do czego to jest zmapowane?"; nie chce tu spinnera, tak nieładnie wygląda ;-; A i spinner, skróciłem i początek zamieniłem na streamXVoIR wrote:
[Black Coffin]
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - czemu tu są finishe?
00:45:031 (3) - może przesuń to do X:205 Y:88?
00:47:259 (5) - raczej ten slider nie pasuje
01:04:231 (8) - NC
01:22:745 (3,4) - zmiana 01:22:745 (3) na zwykły circle i przeniesienie 01:23:259 (4) do 01:23:088 powinno lepiej pasować
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - em, do czego to jest zmapowane?
02:29:088 (4) - położenie tego slidera jakoś mi nie bardzo pasuje... może spróbuj po prawej go dać
02:45:545 (1) - zakończ ten spinner na 02:46:745
02:46:917 - dodaj tu kółko plz
02:59:431 (1) - ten spinner też się powinien skończyć na white beacie
04:27:545 (2) - dodaj może repeat do tego slidera?
04:28:231 (1) - ten spinner powinien zacząć się na 0:4:28:574
04:52:402 (1) - 04:52:916 (7) - ta część streamu już chyba nie jest potrzebna
05:33:031 (1) - nie żeby coś, ale ten spinner może zabić na HR, jeżeli nie jest to constant 400 RPM :/
everything is fixed. I left only that stream,(02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like a spinner is better? ) I feel like spinner doesn't fit there ;w;Tachibana Kanade wrote:
Hi MJ! Nice map&song, my advice:
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove finish sound
00:40:745 (4,5,6) - ^ same
00:42:974 (1) - ^
00:47:259 (5) - not catch up with the song?
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like a spinner is better?
03:20:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ compulsory combos? feel weird while testplay, not match with the sound
03:24:974 (6) - same distance with 03:24:802 (4,5) -
03:26:174 (7) - ^ 03:26:002 (5,6) -
04:17:088 (2) - starts at 04:16:917 (2) - , also add another slider in 04:17:259 (3) -
04:17:945 (6) - add a note
good luck:)
Lol wtf noLostRedX wrote:
Mods
04:16:917 (2,3) - Consider adding a stream to bridge the gap between those two sliders.
Good Job on the map btw. I hope it gets ranked
Kudos to you, my friend! Unluckily, I don't have access to any device where I could apply the mod, I will do it just as I will get my laptop backShyotamaze wrote:
Hi, from #modreqsGeneral
- Try to not use grid snap too much
- That's a lot of combo colours dude
Black CoffinHmm not really much to say about it, nice song and map
- 00:12:117 (1,2) - Blanket maybe
- 00:15:717 (1,2) - ^
- 00:41:431 (1,2) - Try to make a better blanket
- 00:51:374 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe a bit too much spaced and not really expected imo
- 00:54:288 (5,6) - Try to make a better blanket
- 00:57:374 (7) - Blanket maybe
- 00:58:231 (1,2,3,4) - Not really expected imo
- 01:23:088 (4,1) - A bit weird to read but should be fine
- 01:39:374 (4,5) - Blanket maybe
- 02:40:231 (4) - Weird to read
- 05:33:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Maybe start the stream with a low DS and increase it like you did on the other streams
Good luck!
EDIT: whoops wrong diff name
żadnych 1/8, nie brzmi dobrze. zmieniłem to, co uważałem za słuszne. Kudos i tak lecideadpon3 wrote:
Black Coffin:
00:14:859 (6,1) - You can curve these sliders a bit and place them different way.
00:21:202 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make it more natural, without simple slider and triangles in corners.
00:23:774 (4,5) - You can move "5" a little bit more to the bottom.
00:24:460 (3,4) - Move the circle a bit to the left corner.
00:25:489 (1,2) - These can be curved.
00:29:602 (4) - Too far on the left.
00:30:117 (1,2) - Should be 1/8 notes before "2".
00:30:974 (4,5) - Reverse these notes.
00:32:774 (1,2,3,4) - Space the stream a little bit.
00:34:231 (1,2,3) - Copy/Paste. Edit them.
00:38:345 (3) - Move it to the top/right a bit.
00:41:945 (2) - Ugly slider.
00:42:288 (3,4) - Again, there should be 1/8 notes before "4".
00:45:545 (2,3,4) - Weird shape, rotate the second slider.
00:49:831 (1) - Another ugly slider.
00:50:859 (1,2) - 1/8 before "2".
00:54:802 (6) - Weird slider.
00:56:345 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3"
00:57:374 (7) - Rotate it somehow.
00:58:745 (4,5) - Weird shape.
01:08:688 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3".
01:10:059 (1,2) - Also 1/8 before "2".
01:11:602 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:14:859 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:20:002 (1) - Reverse it.
01:21:374 (1,2) - Boring copy paste, edit.
01:23:774 (1,2) - You know, try to make sliders unique, not simple and random.
01:30:631 (3,4) - 1/8 before "4".
01:32:517 (3,4,5) - Space these objects a bit.
01:34:574 (3,4) - 1/8.
01:42:802 (4,5) - 1/8, also you can make a note after 5 without reverser.
01:46:917 (5,6) - 1/8.
01:54:117 (3,4) - 1/8 again.
01:56:517 (6,7) - Again.
01:58:574 (5,6) - And here.
02:15:545 (5) - Make the slider turned to the previous stream direction without a reverser.
02:16:917 (1,2) - 1/8.
02:19:831 (7,8) - 1/8.
02:21:888 (2,3) - Same here.
02:26:002 (5,6) - And here.
02:29:602 (1,2) - And here.
02:30:802 (1,2) - Here too.
02:32:002 (6,7) - Also.
02:34:231 (7,8) - And heeere
All the rest seems cool, but edit all these sliders for 1/8 notes and it will be nice.
Good luck!
Shiiiiiiiit nrg modded my map *eats fame*Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
pleb
[general][diff]
- you got a 1365x768 bg lmao
- delete that useless osb
most of the problem can be applied to the whole map, like strong beats, NCs....etc.
- 00:14:859 (6,1) - switch NC. (6) sounds much stronger.
- 00:16:231 - 00:19:317 - your objects are based on vocal, which makes this beat skipping quite strange.
- 00:22:145 - to be honest i can't hear anything important on this blue tick.
- 00:23:088 - welp, personally i don't like using spinner ends for strong beats. That's not clickable, and not as strong as normal circles/sliders.
- 00:23:260 (1,1,1) - no disrespect, but it seems like your NCing can be improved. placing them constantly will be better.
- 00:26:517 (5,6) - there's a forced angle on (5), it makes your flow become weird.
- 00:32:945 - the sound here is not really clear. maybe you should delete the note here.
- 00:36:117 - 00:36:459 - those strong beats are skipped, and they are obviously not intentional. a slider end is weaker than a slider head.
- 02:38:517 - the note density around here can be increased. the song is still intense, so low density is not recommended.
- 04:30:117 (1,3) - reverse arrow block. unrankable.
also there are a lot more space for you to use in the gridimageand stream shapes, try to combine some different sliders with slider-to-stream tool and make some mind-blowing shapesmost of the object are placed at the center of grid
it's possible to take a look at the whole map and find more points to fix by yourself.
gl
some parts of this mod are just not, but some are very useful. thanks anyway :3dark_assassin16 wrote:
[Black coffin]
00:16:659 - Maybe put a small spinner right here.
00:58:917 (5) - Increase repeat by 1.
01:04:231 (1) - Cut this in half and make it a repeating slider.
01:17:259 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - Maybe make this spot like this? http://prnt.sc/a3rzop, http://prnt.sc/a3s05q, http://prnt.sc/a3s0bk
01:19:317 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe add a circle between the sliders like so: http://prnt.sc/a3s0n6
01:24:974 (3) - Add a slider like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s1i7
01:25:659 (2) - ^, but after the circle (2 ticks).
02:00:288 (2) - Add a 2 tick slider here.
02:37:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Instead of what it is now, make it like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s88l
03:35:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like earlier, add a circle between each slider.
04:08:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Turn it into this: http://prnt.sc/a3s7jf
04:16:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Either you forgot or something, but here: http://prnt.sc/a3s97b
05:33:031 (1) - Just make this into an extremely long spinner.
[Side Notes]
Overall, just a ton of additions and combinations, but overall pretty nice. I hope you get ranked!