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501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky

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yongtw123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 03, 2011 at 4:01:32 AM

Artist: 501st Joint Fighter Wing
Title: Over Sky
Source: STRIKE WITCHES 2
Tags: Fukuen Misato Seto Saori Tanaka Rie Sawashiro Miyuki Nazuka Kaori Nogawa Sakura Sonozaki Mie Saitou Chiwa Koshimizu Ami Kadowaki Mai Oohashi Ayuru
BPM: 168
Filesize: 6458kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.29 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Normal (2.66 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Sky (4.87 stars, 641 notes)
Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<Full version>
I need some serious suggestions on hitsounods (cry face)

Status: ready for modding

Updates:
(03/03) Colin Hou's modding: Done
(02/19) removed taiko diff by mapper's consent
(01/03) KanaRin, yangzd88, Selee's modding: Done
(12/23) IceBeam's modding: Done
(12/15) NatsumeRin's modding: Done
(12/08) wmfchris, Verdisphena's modding: Done
(12/07) Hitsounds finalized; difficulty name change
(12/06) frost-b-spec's modding: Done
kanpakyin
star~~

繼續做個Taiko給你>.<
Topic Starter
yongtw123

kanpakyin wrote:

star~~

繼續做個Taiko給你>.<
Alright we got a taiko diff WIP~
kanpakyin
frost-b-spec
nice map

[General]
delete source and add artist "STRIKE WITCHES 2"
add tag "voice actor name" and "character name"
SPOILER
Miyafuji Yoshika (Fukuen Misato)
Sakamoto Mio (Seto Saori)
Tanaka Rie (Minna-Dietlinde Wilcke)
Sawashiro Miyuki (Perrine-H.Clostermann)
Nazuka Kaori (Lynette Bishop)
Nogawa Sakura (Erica Hartmann)
Sonozaki Mie (Gertrud Barkhorn)
Saito Chiwa (Francesca Lucchini)
Koshimizu Ami (Charlotte E Yeager)
Kadowaki Mai (Sanya V.Litvyak)
Oohashi Ayuru (Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen) +Nakai Erika(old voice actor name)
Topic Starter
yongtw123

frost-b-spec wrote:

nice map

[General]
delete source and add artist "STRIKE WITCHES 2"
add tag "voice actor name" and "character name"
SPOILER
Miyafuji Yoshika (Fukuen Misato)
Sakamoto Mio (Seto Saori)
Tanaka Rie (Minna-Dietlinde Wilcke)
Sawashiro Miyuki (Perrine-H.Clostermann)
Nazuka Kaori (Lynette Bishop)
Nogawa Sakura (Erica Hartmann)
Sonozaki Mie (Gertrud Barkhorn)
Saito Chiwa (Francesca Lucchini)
Koshimizu Ami (Charlotte E Yeager)
Kadowaki Mai (Sanya V.Litvyak)
Oohashi Ayuru (Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen) +Nakai Erika(old voice actor name)
Below is my opinion:
Strike Witches 2 is the name of the anime. It would be more logial to put it in "Source".
I admit "501st Joint Fighter Wing" isn't a good choice for "Artist" but neither is "Strike Witches 2".
Putting just "Strike Witches" won't really make sense either because technically, "Strike Witch" is an "occupation", not necessarily representing the 501st Joint Fighter Wing we are referring here.
"Strike Witches 2 Cast" may work, but it's a bit long.

Leveling the options, I'd stay with the current Artist for now. I'll see if any other can come up with better ideas.

Tags appended.
wmfchris
[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192 kbps.

[taiko]
2-plets in the first 15 seconds is not appropiate.
~0:40 the 2-plets and 4-plets is strange too
kiai - the 4-plets is strange, cut the last notes for those 4-plets. If nesscary, add a 1/2 note
...
You should try to recheck all your 2-plets and 4-plets, if they're on a single / two vocal sound, reduce them into single notes / triplets.
this is the general idea, no time for a detailed mod orz

[Sky]
0:44:703 (1,2) spacing
0:50:595 (3,4) ^
that's all I can find

[Hard]
2:26:310 (4,5) up 1 grid?


nice mapping, star~
Topic Starter
yongtw123

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192 kbps.
lol, I will generate a bitrate diagram to clear this up.

[Sky]
0:44:703 (1,2) spacing
0:50:595 (3,4) ^
that's all I can find
ok

[Hard]
2:26:310 (4,5) up 1 grid?
ok
Verdisphena
Sky:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)

Hard:
01:25:774 (1) - Better like this?
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)

Normal:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
04:10:774 (x) - D:?
Make this section with not kiai


Bad english ;_;
Gl with the map
Topic Starter
yongtw123

Verdisphena wrote:

Sky:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
um, nope, I am following the loud cymbal sound there.

Hard:
01:25:774 (1) - Better like this?
Minor so I didn't change it.
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
same as before

Normal:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
><
04:10:774 (x) - D:?
Make this section with not kiai
Now thank you lol I missed on this one.
Thanks for checking out!
kanpakyin
NatsumeRin
sorry for my late.
all i write here are just suggestions.

[Normal]
01:12:203 (3) - finish?
02:20:774 (4) - emm... why not add N1 clap at the reverse?
a series of whistles may be added if you want...
03:31:488 (2) - / 03:34:345 (2) - / 03:35:060 (1) - reverse / 03:37:203 (2) - / 03:39:345 (5) - reverse / 03:40:060 (6) - beginning
03:44:881 (3,1) - maybe remove 3 and let 1 start at 3's current time... not sure.

[Hard]
00:03:453 (3) - whistle at reverse?
00:04:881 (1) - whistle at first reverse?
00:05:595 (2) - whistle at the end?
01:08:453 (2) - move it 1/2 earlier? (then add a note at 01:08:988)
...whistles?
03:29:345 (1) - end / 03:30:595 (3) - beginning / 03:31:131 (4) - / 03:32:203 (2) - beginning / 03:33:453 (4) -
03:56:667 - add a note?

[Sky]
00:59:345 (1) - maybe start this earlier...?
01:23:631 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - not sure if players could read it... (also, the note's group is strange... maybe use sliders at first and then use combos like this?)
02:06:220 (5) - make the triple 1/2 later = =
02:36:488 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same
03:56:667 (1,2) - too far 0 0

[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
00:13:631 (46,47,48) - a simple kat is enough
01:24:166 (64,65) - switch them... i guess you made it wrong
节奏密度实在不高……虽然歌长。但还是过简单了点。。。?

star of course.
kanpakyin

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
00:13:631 (46,47,48) - a simple kat is enough fix
01:24:166 (64,65) - switch them... i guess you made it wrong lol
节奏密度实在不高……虽然歌长。但还是过简单了点。。。?這歌太難就不好玩了.__.
Thanks Rin

Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky (yongtw123) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
yongtw123

NatsumeRin wrote:

sorry for my late.
all i write here are just suggestions.

[Normal]
01:12:203 (3) - finish? ok
02:20:774 (4) - emm... why not add N1 clap at the reverse? oh no i missed on this lol
a series of whistles may be added if you want...
03:31:488 (2) - / 03:34:345 (2) - / 03:35:060 (1) - reverse / 03:37:203 (2) - / 03:39:345 (5) - reverse / 03:40:060 (6) - beginning
all added, thanks~
03:44:881 (3,1) - maybe remove 3 and let 1 start at 3's current time... not sure.
hmm, maybe not

[Hard]
00:03:453 (3) - whistle at reverse?
00:04:881 (1) - whistle at first reverse?
00:05:595 (2) - whistle at the end?
all added, plus some myself
01:08:453 (2) - move it 1/2 earlier? (then add a note at 01:08:988)
hmm, nope i guess
...whistles?
03:29:345 (1) - end / 03:30:595 (3) - beginning / 03:31:131 (4) - / 03:32:203 (2) - beginning / 03:33:453 (4) -
some of them already have whistles lol
03:56:667 - add a note? nope i think

[Sky]
00:59:345 (1) - maybe start this earlier...? this spinner is sync-ed in all diffs, so probably no for now
01:23:631 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - not sure if players could read it... (also, the note's group is strange... maybe use sliders at first and then use combos like this?) yea... i am thinking about readability too. What i did was just flipping horizontally and vertically. Now I made the 4 occurrences of this group of notes more gradual in terms of difficulty.
02:06:220 (5) - make the triple 1/2 later = = i think it sounds okay? :?
02:36:488 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same changed. Hope it's better?
03:56:667 (1,2) - too far 0 0 I meant it that way. A tiny tweak is made though.
Thanks for the thorough modding!
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Very nice map, good work

May be do sounds just a little louder? (Suggestion)

Star :)
Topic Starter
yongtw123

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Very nice map, good work

May be do sounds just a little louder? (Suggestion)
Hmm...maybe I'll increase volume once another mod says so

Star :)
Thanks for checking out~!
IceBeam
I wouldn't said that volume in Normal hitsound is high.
But some moments,like:
[Normal]: 00:12:917 (3) - Where the music stops,they sound a bit rough,it's not really neccesary cause there're only few moments like this,but still,if you want your map to be perfect,consider adding some hitsound on those notes/reducing volume/changing to Soft samples.

Kay,here's mod:
[Normal]
03:56:131 - Add a note?

[Hard]
00:07:917 - From here I'd suggest this:
01:17:917 (3) - ^ Same pattern.
01:20:774 - ^

[Sky]
Pretty nice~

Perfect,star~
Topic Starter
yongtw123

IceBeam wrote:

I wouldn't said that volume in Normal hitsound is high.
But some moments,like:
[Normal]: 00:12:917 (3) - Where the music stops,they sound a bit rough,it's not really neccesary cause there're only few moments like this,but still,if you want your map to be perfect,consider adding some hitsound on those notes/reducing volume/changing to Soft samples.
allright, fixed~

Kay,here's mod:
[Normal]
03:56:131 - Add a note? good!

[Hard]
00:07:917 - From here I'd suggest this:
SPOILER
[attachment=0:63e7e]jjj.JPG[/attachment:63e7e]
01:17:917 (3) - ^ Same pattern.
01:20:774 - ^
changed 2 out of 3

[Sky]
Pretty nice~

Perfect,star~ yay thanks~
Thanks for the modding!
KanaRin
>w< Over Sky! I love this song so much =w=
Here's some mod >w<
Also, I'm a new modder =w= But i will try'
K, Let's go. Remind that my mod should be suggestion>a<

[Normal]
00:21:131 - Maybe you can delete this green line (?)
01:12:203 (1) - New combo
01:12:560 (x) -add a circle
03:47:560 (1) - New combo

[Hard]
Fine~


[Sky]
Beautiful >w< I love your map style!

[Taiko]
ALL: 有點二連打 不符合音樂 改一改比較好
00:16:844 (x) - I think you should add note in this break time.
02:42:559 (x) - ^ same. I think that's too long and it will make player boring *3*
other is ok for me.


From Ying's modding queue.
Star~
Licnect
GO~~UP UP
and shooting star~ :D
Weez
could fine nothing wrong on my end >w<
star :D
Topic Starter
yongtw123

KanaRin wrote:

>w< Over Sky! I love this song so much =w= yay~
Here's some mod >w<
Also, I'm a new modder =w= But i will try'
K, Let's go. Remind that my mod should be suggestion>a<

[Normal]
00:21:131 - Maybe you can delete this green line (?)
01:12:203 (1) - New combo
01:12:560 (x) -add a circle
03:47:560 (1) - New combo
fixed all

[Hard]
Fine~

[Sky]
Beautiful >w< I love your map style! thanks~
Thanks for modding! Waiting for kanpakyin to update the taiko diff.

Weezy wrote:

could fine nothing wrong on my end >w<
star :D
Thanks for checking out!
Curisu
对不起来太晚了>_<

[NM]
00:05:595 (2) - 后半段不加soft whistle大丈夫?
00:07:024 (X) - 加一个圈?总觉得这一段不合歌..
01:02:917 (3) - copy 01:00:774 (1).
01:10:774 (1) - 这个slider最左边的一个点往左拖1 grid
01:38:274 (2) - 这个slider最右边的一个点往上拖1 grid
01:49:345 (1,2) - 交换new combo

[HD]
00:29:703 (4) - 放在5的开头做成jump?
00:58:453 (7) - 再回转一次.
01:25:774 (1) - 改成绕屏幕三角jump可能会好一些...这样感觉没有什么力量感
01:53:810 (3,4,5) - 改成与678呼应的直线?

[Skyyyyyyy]
00:05:595 (1) - 这个跳很突然..
00:08:810 (8) - remove clap.
00:10:238 (4) - ^

02:22:917 (4) - copy 3.

~star
Selee
[General]

  • Artist: Misato Fukuen & Saori Seto (why 501st Joint Fighter Wing? There are only two of them...Also the artist should be the vocal rather than anime characters...)

    Source: STRIKE WITCHES 2? (lol, letters should be capitalized. I'm not sure if 2 should be in source..)
[Hard]

  • 03:31:131 (4,5) - Switch whistle?
    03:42:917 (4) - Move 1/2 beat forward?
[Sky]

  • 03:10:417 (4) - Clap?
    03:11:488 (3) - Clap end?
[Kanpakyin's Taiko]

Offset is different from other diff ._.


I'd rather give up modding than mod your beatmaps... lol ...

Star~
Topic Starter
yongtw123

yangzd88 wrote:

对不起来太晚了>_<
it's ok :D

[NM]
00:05:595 (2) - 后半段不加soft whistle大丈夫? 應該...還好吧w
00:07:024 (X) - 加一个圈?总觉得这一段不合歌.. 那樣感覺難了一點...
01:02:917 (3) - copy 01:00:774 (1).
01:10:774 (1) - 这个slider最左边的一个点往左拖1 grid
01:38:274 (2) - 这个slider最右边的一个点往上拖1 grid
01:49:345 (1,2) - 交换new combo
above 4 all done

[HD]
00:29:703 (4) - 放在5的开头做成jump? hard裡面不太想放jump
00:58:453 (7) - 再回转一次. ooh 好
01:25:774 (1) - 改成绕屏幕三角jump可能会好一些...这样感觉没有什么力量感 改了 但不是jump ><
01:53:810 (3,4,5) - 改成与678呼应的直线? good

[Skyyyyyyy]
00:05:595 (1) - 这个跳很突然.. scaled down 0.9 倍
00:08:810 (8) - remove clap.
00:10:238 (4) - ^
above 2 done
02:22:917 (4) - copy 3. tweaked

~star
Thanks for modding!

Selee wrote:

[General]

  • Artist: Misato Fukuen & Saori Seto (why 501st Joint Fighter Wing? There are only two of them...Also the artist should be the vocal rather than anime characters...)
    Uh, this version is sung by the entire cast, not just two characters. I wonder if "STRIKE WITCHES 2 Cast" will do.

    Source: STRIKE WITCHES 2? (lol, letters should be capitalized. I'm not sure if 2 should be in source..) capitalized
[Hard]

  • 03:31:131 (4,5) - Switch whistle? ok
    03:42:917 (4) - Move 1/2 beat forward? eh nope
[Sky]

  • 03:10:417 (4) - Clap? ok
    03:11:488 (3) - Clap end? ok
[Kanpakyin's Taiko]

Offset is different from other diff ._. oops, fixed

I'd rather give up modding than mod your beatmaps... lol ...
(tilts head) So namely, you mean...? lol

Star~
Thanks for modding!
miss_dior
star
;)
kanpakyin
Topic Starter
yongtw123

kanpakyin wrote:

= =應該..可以了
Thanks~~ :D
Updated

miss_dior wrote:

star
;)
And thanks for star~
wmfchris
kanp says that he want to remap...?
kanpakyin
決定Re-map
Q_Q

這個做得不好..
Topic Starter
yongtw123

kanpakyin wrote:

決定Re-map
Q_Q

這個做得不好..
:? 那我就等吧...
加油~
Hinanawi-sama
love the fact that this is a full cast full length version, SW FTW

[normal]
01:55:774 - add note? to me, adding a note would allow the combo to flow thru this stanza instead of stuttering but its entirely your decision

[hard]
well made, fav diff level

[sky]
flows beautifully, no problems :)

best song on my fav list
Topic Starter
yongtw123

mathwizi2005 wrote:

love the fact that this is a full cast full length version, SW FTW yay lol

[normal]
01:55:774 - add note? to me, adding a note would allow the combo to flow thru this stanza instead of stuttering but its entirely your decision
hmm, I prefer not to, as to make some variations.

[hard]
well made, fav diff level thanks~

[sky]
flows beautifully, no problems :)

best song on my fav list
Thanks for checking out!
Gcode
AWESOME
Topic Starter
yongtw123

Gcode2 wrote:

AWESOME
w33t thanks for star~
bossandy
做的真好~
star~
我的譜要記得看喔~
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. 棕色的combo color换个稍亮点的
  2. offset: 774
[Hard]:
  1. 04:03:631 (1,2,3) - spacing
  2. 03:41:488 (2,3,4) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. 02:21:756 (T) - 无用绿线
改好了说下
Topic Starter
yongtw123

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. 棕色的combo color换个稍亮点的 不知道換成黃色如何@@
  2. offset: 774 我知道這是移到前面一個長白線 不過需要嗎? 修正
[Hard]:
  1. 04:03:631 (1,2,3) - spacing i forgot about the green line lol
  2. 03:41:488 (2,3,4) - ^ moved around a bit
[Normal]:
  1. 02:21:756 (T) - 无用绿线 removed
改好了说下
Thanks for modding~
Saten
Get this ranked :D

osu! needs more pantsu maps :P
Topic Starter
yongtw123

Saten-san wrote:

Get this ranked :D

osu! needs more pantsu maps :P
LOL pantsu/pantsu/pantsu/

Thanks for star XD
Colin Hou
pantsu map? +_+
Larto
Niiice, I'm so suggesting that for the charts.
Komeiji Yuki
恭喜RANK了~
Cyril Scarlet
.☆.+:^ヽ(∇ ̄*)o♪Congratulations♪o(* ̄∇)ノ^;+.☆.
Saten
Yay~

Gratz :3
Topic Starter
yongtw123
Thanks, all :)
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