forum

Shiokara-zu - Now or Never [Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
29
show more
Shinzo-
[Muzukashii]
00:05:919 - maybe you can add spinner or slider since you even youse and jumpy 1/4 in oni... so maybe for spread tho
00:14:397 (61) - maybe change to k for high pitch
00:15:702 (64,65,66) - k d k ? better for pitch imo
00:21:897 (86) - change to d ? for pitch maybe
00:27:115 (105) - delete for a break ?
00:44:561 (169,170,171) - k d k ? for reverse pattern with 00:41:952 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162) -
00:45:376 (175) - change to d for pitch ? and 00:45:702 (176,177) - to k d
00:59:071 (39) - change to k for consistency with 00:53:528 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - etc ?
[Oni]
00:06:408 (37) - change to d for the reverse pattern of 00:05:919 (32,33,34) - ?since you do that on 00:03:310 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - maybe you already know this so i know maybe this will be rejected xD
00:11:300 (63) - move to 00:11:218 - ?
00:21:734 (117) - move to 00:21:816 - ? and change 00:21:897 (118) - to d ... idk just suggestion
00:26:789 (142,143,144) - maybe change to k ? just like 00:06:245 -
00:32:414 (170) - maybe better to move this to 00:32:251 - ? just my opinion
00:51:571 (278,279,280) - maybe change to k ? and also change 00:51:897 (281) - to d ... better IMO
[Inner Oni]
00:05:511 (53) - maybe change this to k ? so you can change 00:03:799 (32) - to d ? well for the kick sound ._. maybe
00:11:789 (110) - change to d ? for consistency with 00:06:571 (66) - ?
00:45:702 (372) - same as above ? for consistency with 00:40:484 (324) -

im sorry that i can't find anything on futsuu and kantan x..x
im still newbie tho here so i hope you could understand if my mod isn't helpfull
Good Luck >w<
Surono
dem squidward chan!!1!!

>Inner Oni
* 00:05:756 - and I know this why katkatkatkat.. same think must taktaktaktaktkat. oraorao
* 00:08:039 - over with emphasize sir!! :U dkd instead. katkatk just block that flow, let me say this.. 00:06:734 - from here you can see the varies mirror. ddk kdk, kkd dkd :^V
* 00:08:609 - you need kat for for contrasting de instrument sir? flow vocal just ooooo. so you can emphasize that.. I just cri with 00:08:691 - this sound if kdddk..
* 00:10:729 - dem sir.. cus instrument not high too
* 00:11:299 - and dem this did kkddk?!?!? but okay if you accept before.. here kdkdk more works with dub sounds, 00:11:299 - tongduntong
* 00:13:256 - now its started high.. keep this
* 00:13:745 - okay I saw this.. maybe from first.. kdddk, kdkdk, and here kkddk. cus here on 3rd notes is high than the on begining part
* 00:16:191 - emphasize with kat? de stop vocal is 00:16:272 - here
* 00:17:577 - I think here is good for kdd.. I was breathink and not telling reaSON dem lel
* 00:20:185 - ... dont think I point this for varies sir.. I cri, but kdd is yeah for emphasize. 00:20:104 - and before. wupp~
* 00:21:897 - idk with this.. why dd/ xdddd
* 00:22:794 - aaa
* 00:26:544 - kkd? just for consistent before if u accept.. about stop.. I think is still able to hit. since has follow the sounds, prefer sounds..
* 00:27:115 - and dem this part mixed with dudududu.. but same think/feels.. kat is life, kat is life bcus high on feeling.. snare drum.. dem
* 00:30:946 - I just think is not high, but potential as high. cus 00:30:294 - this has normal sounds.
* 00:31:191 - from here kkk ddd? a. ,
* 00:31:843 - note,note,note,note_note,note
* 00:32:577 - don for slow vocal..? dem my mom was said the BG " wahh, dracula with glaseess " wat de dem...
* 00:33:310 - that don at right, move to here? I not see this well. just laaaaaa and tuw du du, tuw du du.. but from 00:33:963 - here yeah!
* 00:35:430 - and from here.. like before, my weird... word suggestion
* 00:38:365 - and 00:39:017 - kdk, so that next ddk ddk emp-
* and kiai.. same like previous suggestion but kiai has given additional pattern? okok!
* 00:51:897 - if you want don for same emphasize on 00:51:571 - and last stream

>Onki
this yeah good..
* 00:59:071 - kkkkd for last better emphasize..

>Muzukas
dem variaton nicesuu.. but 00:17:006 (69) - from here.. aa fine?
00:58:746 (37,41) - kat

>property
* KKd, wrong caps. edit: last of song.., current is ddD. lazy to ctrl c & v. kkD

>Ka
* okey I fine with this. 00:59:397 - okey kat.

maybe.. on first begining of Oni try fill blue tick for stream? so like futsuu, has x x xxx x x and spread kantan like muzu. long and have rest. idk with my word

cya sir! edit when will posting: dem, idk with my mod.. cus is dem ozi style, like increasing.. but now I not see the kraji trap things xd
Prophecy
Here you're evil devil Satan lovely Ozzy

[General]
- Remove "WideScreen Support" because you don't have a SB

[Inner]
NO PLEASE. I can't play it well (actually I can play but I really don't know how to check this)

[Onzzy]
00:27:033 - add a d here, ddddk
00:40:403 - add a k here, kkkkd. to make a difference between Muzu
00:51:816 - add a d here, same as above
00:59:071- kkkkd to emphasize!

[Muzu]
00:40:158 (149) - here, you can hear a sound lol, kkk is better, the beginning part is lack 1/4 (I think)
00:58:746 (37) - k
00:59:398 (41) - k, higher pitch

[Futsuu]
00:50:919 (1) - I don't really fine with this Spinner, check how you map at 00:48:310 (91,92,93) - , it should be same.
00:59:398 (19) - same as Muzu, k

[Kantan]
Fine for me! why many 1/2.



[]
anyway, the spread is fine.
Prophecy

Surono wrote:

>property No this difficulties as well.
Surono
wat propersich. i just typing ur famus things. grwat mapper desu~

edit: dem you Douvle post D:
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Surono wrote:

dem squidward chan!!1!!

>Inner Oni
* 00:05:756 - and I know this why katkatkatkat.. same think must taktaktaktaktkat. oraorao
* 00:08:039 - over with emphasize sir!! :U dkd instead. katkatk just block that flow, let me say this.. 00:06:734 - from here you can see the varies mirror. ddk kdk, kkd dkd :^V
* 00:08:609 - you need kat for for contrasting de instrument sir? flow vocal just ooooo. so you can emphasize that.. I just cri with 00:08:691 - this sound if kdddk..
* 00:10:729 - dem sir.. cus instrument not high too
* 00:11:299 - and dem this did kkddk?!?!? but okay if you accept before.. here kdkdk more works with dub sounds, 00:11:299 - tongduntong
* 00:13:256 - now its started high.. keep this
* 00:13:745 - okay I saw this.. maybe from first.. kdddk, kdkdk, and here kkddk. cus here on 3rd notes is high than the on begining part
* 00:16:191 - emphasize with kat? de stop vocal is 00:16:272 - here
* 00:17:577 - I think here is good for kdd.. I was breathink and not telling reaSON dem lel
* 00:20:185 - ... dont think I point this for varies sir.. I cri, but kdd is yeah for emphasize. 00:20:104 - and before. wupp~
* 00:21:897 - idk with this.. why dd/ xdddd
* 00:22:794 - aaa
* 00:26:544 - kkd? just for consistent before if u accept.. about stop.. I think is still able to hit. since has follow the sounds, prefer sounds..
* 00:27:115 - and dem this part mixed with dudududu.. but same think/feels.. kat is life, kat is life bcus high on feeling.. snare drum.. dem
* 00:30:946 - I just think is not high, but potential as high. cus 00:30:294 - this has normal sounds.
* 00:31:191 - from here kkk ddd? a. ,
* 00:31:843 - note,note,note,note_note,note
* 00:32:577 - don for slow vocal..? dem my mom was said the BG " wahh, dracula with glaseess " wat de dem...
* 00:33:310 - that don at right, move to here? I not see this well. just laaaaaa and tuw du du, tuw du du.. but from 00:33:963 - here yeah!
* 00:35:430 - and from here.. like before, my weird... word suggestion
* 00:38:365 - and 00:39:017 - kdk, so that next ddk ddk emp-
* and kiai.. same like previous suggestion but kiai has given additional pattern? okok!
* 00:51:897 - if you want don for same emphasize on 00:51:571 - and last stream

>Onki
this yeah good..
* 00:59:071 - kkkkd for last better emphasize..

>Muzukas
dem variaton nicesuu.. but 00:17:006 (69) - from here.. aa fine?
00:58:746 (37,41) - kat

>property
* KKd, wrong caps. edit: last of song.., current is ddD. lazy to ctrl c & v. kkD

>Ka
* okey I fine with this. 00:59:397 - okey kat.

cya sir! edit when will posting: dem, idk with my mod.. cus is dem ozi style, like increasing.. but now I not see the kraji trap things xd
i lost response... but i add only stuff about ending :( dem... dracula..

Prophecy wrote:

Here you're evil devil Satan lovely Ozzy

[General]
- Remove "WideScreen Support" because you don't have a SB It makes no difference actually

[Onzzy]
00:27:033 - add a d here, ddddk No need for 5plet
00:40:403 - add a k here, kkkkd. to make a difference between Muzu ^
00:51:816 - add a d here, same as above ^
00:59:071- kkkkd to emphasize! Surono suggested, I applied

[Muzu]
00:40:158 (149) - here, you can hear a sound lol, kkk is better, the beginning part is lack 1/4 (I think) Rather not have 1/4
00:58:746 (37) - k Surono
00:59:398 (41) - k, higher pitch ^

[Futsuu]
00:50:919 (1) - I don't really fine with this Spinner, check how you map at 00:48:310 (91,92,93) - , it should be same. It is very different musically.
00:59:398 (19) - same as Muzu, k. Surono
Thanks Property! :^)
Prophecy

Surono wrote:

wat propersich. i just typing ur famus things. grwat mapper desu~

edit: dem you Douvle post D:

ok, sorry lol
bank78952
hi o/
oh evil map D: //runs
[General]
Uncheck widescreen support
[Inker oni]
00:21:897 (188) - k is better?
00:23:854 (203) - k to follow vocal?
it's pure evil map //runs
[Oni]
00:08:528 (48,49) - k for follow vocal?
[Muzukashii]
00:42:441 (159,160,161) - k ?
00:42:767 (162) - d ?
00:47:658 (185,186,187) - k ?
00:47:984 (188) - d ?
Futsuu and kantan are fine for me im newble modder D:
no kuds if not helpful
HimemiyaChikane
Hi for BN check.

[Inker Oni]
This diff is so awesome that I can't find a place to fix it!

[Oni]
00:07:060 (40) - delete?
00:09:669 (54) - ^
00:17:332 - add d?
00:19:941 - ^
00:22:549 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:15:865 (65,66) - delete?
00:49:778 (193,194) - ^

I can't mod Kantan and Futsuu,sorry.

A excellent map in my view!Good luck for ranking!
Akiyama Mizuki
placeholder #2

NOW OR NEVER IKUTSU MONO NOW OR NEVER MEMORY WO o shit wrong song

Kantan
nothing to really poke at.

Futsuu
w00t you gotta watch out for that density at the end

MuzuCA$Hii
density is kinda too much at the beginning and the end part, but I guess it's okay because the spread works

Oni
nothing to really poke at.

The diffname that makes OnosakiHito pretty mad
00:05:267 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdkdkk or ddkdkdkd would fit better imo (I'd suggest the latter)
00:30:049 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) -
How about making it like
d ddk dkd ddk dk
d ddk kkd ddk kk
d
00:35:267 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - ^

damn the set is pretty sweet already, get BNs
Midnaait
modding because i need kds

d=don k... you know this stuff
// //= Suggestion

[General]

Go disable widescreen support kek
Use these BG coordinates, Callie's head is a bit covered by the playfield lol

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"allBGsforthissongarebad.jpg",0,50


[Kantan]

00:37:549 - Add a d here? It is not too difficult and follows the melody and a kick
00:39:180 (73) - // Change to d? The melody goes lower here //
00:50:919 - This spinner is weird imo, but it's okay

[Futsuu]

00:26:626 - Remove for consistency with previous pattern?
00:50:104 - ^
00:50:919 (1) - Same as kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:17:169 - Move this 1/2 to the right, follows the vocals
00:17:495 - // You can move this 1/2 to the right as well if you did ^ //
Same for the rest of this part, but keep if you want some variety
00:50:919 (1) - Spinner blah

[Oni]

Help idk how to mod Oni

00:40:403 - // You can add a kat here, it's not a difficult pattern for an Oni and follows the snares //

[Inker Oni]

Noice :)

ok.
yassu-
M4M

Kantan
・so fast ! change to SV1.20

・dkdkd is so hard?

・00:37:549 add d There is a noticeable sound.

・00:38:854 delete There is no noticeable sound.

Futsuu
・so fast ! change to SV1.2 or 1.3?

・OD change to 4.5?

・00:03:473 change to k fit to sounds

・00:14:886 delete 00:25:321 00:48:799 pattern

・00:20:756 change to d fit to voices

・00:54:343 change to k fit to sounds

・00:56:299 delete 00:05:430 pattern

・00:59:397 change to d fit to sounds

Muzukashii
・00:11:463 delete break

・00:21:897 delete break

・00:24:995(95,96) delete break and 00:14:560 00:24:995 pattern

・00:34:778 change to k fit to voices

・00:31:680(117,118,119,120,121,122) change to dkd kkd fit to sounds

・00:59:397 change to d ^

Oni
・OD change to 5.5?

・00:14:805 delete fit to following Muzukashii.

・00:25:240 delete ^

・00:48:718 delete ^

・00:24:669 delete 00:14:234 pattern

・00:47:658(251,252,253) change to k fit to sounds

・00:54:180 change to k ^

Inner Oni
・00:35:104 change to k fit to voices

・00:43:093 change to d 00:40:484 pattern

・00:45:702 change to d ^

・nice map ;3

good lack~ :D
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

bank78952 wrote:

hi o/
oh evil map D: //runs
[General]
Uncheck widescreen support
[Inker oni]
00:21:897 (188) - k is better?
00:23:854 (203) - k to follow vocal?
it's pure evil map //runs
[Oni]
00:08:528 (48,49) - k for follow vocal?
[Muzukashii]
00:42:441 (159,160,161) - k ?
00:42:767 (162) - d ?
00:47:658 (185,186,187) - k ?
00:47:984 (188) - d ?
Futsuu and kantan are fine for me im newble modder D:
no kuds if not helpful
didn't agree with any as far as what im following but thanks!

HimemiyaChikane wrote:

Hi for BN check.

[Inker Oni]
This diff is so awesome that I can't find a place to fix it!

[Oni]
00:07:060 (40) - delete?
00:09:669 (54) - ^
00:17:332 - add d?
00:19:941 - ^
00:22:549 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:15:865 (65,66) - delete?
00:49:778 (193,194) - ^

I can't mod Kantan and Futsuu,sorry.

A excellent map in my view!Good luck for ranking!
Oni made me consider some things, but otherwise the changes kind of disrupt some structure.

bbj0920 wrote:

placeholder #2

NOW OR NEVER IKUTSU MONO NOW OR NEVER MEMORY WO o shit wrong song

Kantan
nothing to really poke at.

Futsuu
w00t you gotta watch out for that density at the end

MuzuCA$Hii
density is kinda too much at the beginning and the end part, but I guess it's okay because the spread works

Oni
nothing to really poke at.

The diffname that makes OnosakiHito pretty mad
00:05:267 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdkdkk or ddkdkdkd would fit better imo (I'd suggest the latter)
00:30:049 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) -
How about making it like
d ddk dkd ddk dk
d ddk kkd ddk kk
d
00:35:267 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - ^

damn the set is pretty sweet already, get BNs
did the inker oni change!

Midnaait wrote:

modding because i need kds

d=don k... you know this stuff
// //= Suggestion

[General]

Go disable widescreen support kek
Use these BG coordinates, Callie's head is a bit covered by the playfield lol

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"allBGsforthissongarebad.jpg",0,50


[Kantan]

00:37:549 - Add a d here? It is not too difficult and follows the melody and a kick
00:39:180 (73) - // Change to d? The melody goes lower here //
00:50:919 - This spinner is weird imo, but it's okay

[Futsuu]

00:26:626 - Remove for consistency with previous pattern?
00:50:104 - ^
00:50:919 (1) - Same as kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:17:169 - Move this 1/2 to the right, follows the vocals
00:17:495 - // You can move this 1/2 to the right as well if you did ^ //
Same for the rest of this part, but keep if you want some variety
00:50:919 (1) - Spinner blah

[Oni]

Help idk how to mod Oni

00:40:403 - // You can add a kat here, it's not a difficult pattern for an Oni and follows the snares //

[Inker Oni]

Noice :)

ok.
removed that futsuu for consistency, changed bg location more, and those parts mentioned in muzu are meant to follow the bg rhythm, to vary it a little :B

yassu- wrote:

M4M

Kantan
・so fast ! change to SV1.20

・dkdkd is so hard?

・00:37:549 add d There is a noticeable sound.

・00:38:854 delete There is no noticeable sound.

Futsuu
・so fast ! change to SV1.2 or 1.3?

・OD change to 4.5?

・00:03:473 change to k fit to sounds

・00:14:886 delete 00:25:321 00:48:799 pattern

・00:20:756 change to d fit to voices

・00:54:343 change to k fit to sounds

・00:56:299 delete 00:05:430 pattern

・00:59:397 change to d fit to sounds

Muzukashii
・00:11:463 delete break

・00:21:897 delete break

・00:24:995(95,96) delete break and 00:14:560 00:24:995 pattern

・00:34:778 change to k fit to voices

・00:31:680(117,118,119,120,121,122) change to dkd kkd fit to sounds

・00:59:397 change to d ^

Oni
・OD change to 5.5?

・00:14:805 delete fit to following Muzukashii.

・00:25:240 delete ^

・00:48:718 delete ^

・00:24:669 delete 00:14:234 pattern

・00:47:658(251,252,253) change to k fit to sounds

・00:54:180 change to k ^

Inner Oni
・00:35:104 change to k fit to voices

・00:43:093 change to d 00:40:484 pattern

・00:45:702 change to d ^

・nice map ;3

good lack~ :D
made some breaks, made some color changes to vary nicely, and made some other changes. fitting voices is not my priority, but some rhythms were modified a little. thanks!

finally xd
Stefan
(´・ω・)

[NICE PUN M8]
00:01:354 - 00:06:571 - this is obligatory my personal opinion for this stream, barely a request to change it: I find the switch from ddkkddkk.. to dkkkdkkkk.. sorta weird, also the 2nd loop with dkddkdkkk... feels odd. for 00:02:658 - 00:03:881 - I tried kkddkkdd.. since the music had some reversal feeling from 00:01:354 - 00:02:577 - to 00:02:658 - 00:03:881 - . Another idea would be kdddk instead of dkkkd.
00:19:126 (167) - Shouldn't the note be on 00:18:963 - instead? I feel the break comes too early and kicks you out of the flow.
00:57:441 - since it's the end it obviously should be different - which happened here. for my person, I tried kkkdk, the kkk fits pretty well to the light sound while I don't find dkk soooo natural.

[Oni]
00:17:006 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - It's hard to declare what you're following with the dk k ddk rhythm, personally. I had kdk kddk in my mind: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/9LGTuFxW.png It goes well with the vocals. (Repeat this for the other three loops)

cute

[Muzukashii]
00:17:006 (69,70,71) - well. It's the same like Oni: move 00:17:495 (71) - to 00:17:658 - and add k on 00:17:332 - . Repeat this.

the begin of the map bothers me personally but it's objectively fine.

[Futsuu/Kantan]
Yeah, leave it like that. That's okay.


TOO BAD I SUCK
wish I could bubble this already..
Chromoxx
yo

[General]
metadata source? remember there being some trouble before with another splatoon meme

[Nice Pun Oni]
seems good, streams are questionable but i feel like they are fun and kind of fit the theme of the map well... maybe consider deleting notes like 00:03:881 (33) - or something to make it a bit less overdone but the streams reflect the hurtling motion in the music pretty well so i'm fine either way tbh

[Oni]
maybe keep the end "streamy" part a bit more consistent with the start but otherwise it seems clean lol

[Muzu]
seems fine :D

[Futsuu]
00:50:919 - maybe remove the spinner since it doesn't really act as a break and there's a pretty long pattern coming up

[Kantan]
too over the top in general, lacking some 4/1 breaks and overusing 1/1 patterns a bit with some patterns being way too long, 5plets are kinda the maximum in a kantan yet you are using them pretty lightly here and throwing in even longer ones

以上です。
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock
I swear I responded to both of you but apparently not!

The first long stream has a nice gap in the middle, but the patterns haven't changed. I'm not sure if I'll consider ddkdddkdddk as far as alternatives go. Oni has been slightly nerfed and modified.

Kantan has faced a nerf to pattern length, but not to breaks, as I'm sticking to the frequent 3/1 breaks.

And metadata fixed ofc.

Thanks switched role duo!
Arrival
old m4m!..

[Futsuu]

00:42:115 (118) - What about putting this note (and the other related later in the kiai) here 00:42:278 - ? Would follow the vocal better than the actual rhythm.

[Inner Oni]

00:30:049 - Kinda repetitive, adding a note here 00:32:414 - could emphasize the end of the measure and avoid too much pattern repetition.

Call me back...
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Arrival wrote:

old m4m!..

[Futsuu]

00:42:115 (118) - What about putting this note (and the other related later in the kiai) here 00:42:278 - ? Would follow the vocal better than the actual rhythm.
Because the earlier rhythm doesn't follow vocals either, and I don't want it to with how weird ending with a double is.
[Inner Oni]

00:30:049 - Kinda repetitive, adding a note here 00:32:414 - could emphasize the end of the measure and avoid too much pattern repetition.
Changed to kkdd dk since the song apparently does that and I never noticed.
Thanks! Metadata was changed to be more correct once again.
Arrival
inker bubble
Stefan
(´・ω ・`)
Please sign in to reply.

New reply