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kamome sano - eclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix)

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lenpai

Reyzra wrote:

Sry i got busy suddenly, i mod 7k diff tomorrow, so i do 4K mod for now~
finally got time to mod, sry for delay :o

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate
Collumn |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

00:10:604 (10604|5) - move to 5 col 6 jack intentional
00:10:687 (10687|0) - move to 3 for balance
if ^ applied 00:10:934 (10934|4,11017|2) - CTRL + G this including ^, right hand stress works out well for transition
00:11:676 (11676|4,11758|5) - ^ ok
00:17:363 (17363|4,17445|3) - CTRL +G for balance moved something else for said reason
00:23:297 (23297|4) - move to 4 kk
00:26:593 - Delete 1 note? you use 3 note before, for consistency things initially thought this had some other sound. fixd
00:28:901 (28901|4) - move to 7 for a better space kk
00:31:539 (31539|5) - Delete, you use 2 note for kick not 3 right? same issue. fixd
00:36:978 (36978|4) - move to 3? [13] 1 is not really nice
00:41:099 (41099|5) - move to 4 balance stuff
00:55:275 - the stream part start from here actually i know that, i just dont want to ditch the current layer after only one whole measure
00:57:995 - missing note for stream
00:58:159 - ^
00:58:324 - ^
00:58:489 - ^ best to start at the "bar"
00:59:148 (59148|0,59231|1) - CTRL + G dont like the [13] 2
01:00:879 (60879|2,60962|6) - ^ looking good
01:06:154 - add 1 note, this kind of impact sound is need more note lol true
01:19:835 (79835|3,80000|2) - CTRL + G kk
01:34:753 - this is actually a kick sound, delete 1 note here, and that actually 3 was here 01:34:670
01:35:000 - this too a kick sound so delete 1 note, and 3 note should here 01:34:918 despite it only being a kick, using doubles is a good diff raise transition
01:35:783 (95783|6) - unsnap? or are you following scratch sound? scratch
01:37:143 - add note? nu
01:37:802 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610009 should work well
01:40:604 - delete 1 note, its just a kick ok :c
01:44:396 (104396|1,104725|1) - these move to col 1 and this 01:44:560 (104560|0) - move to 2 for balance kk
01:45:385 (105385|2) - delete
01:45:879 (105879|0) - ^ deleted in red line triples
01:47:692 (107692|6) - delete for consistency eh how was that a quad
01:55:934 (115934|2,116099|2) - this kinda odd isnt it? not really, its just a 313 trill that looks intimidating
01:56:593 - add 1 note for impact sound eh sure
02:02:198 - the stream part start here only want to chart the stream starting at the "bar"
02:06:813 - add note here? seems its not high enough for just 1 note justified by col 4 usage
02:12:747 - youve got 2 Finish HS here i generally have big issues with stacked HS, will delete all samples and copy from base diff
02:13:407 - ^
02:14:725 - ^
03:12:665 (192665|4,192747|5) - CTRL + G? nop
03:22:308 (202308|1) - move to 3 ok
03:27:582 - delete 1 note, you usually use 2 note (but somehow i think from like part should use 3 note in white line, since it carry the same sound to me) my bad
03:30:714 (210714|5,210714|2,210714|3,210797|1,210797|4,210797|0,210962|1,210962|6,210962|2,211044|5,211044|4,211044|3) - this is just same prob like i mention in here 01:34:753 refer to last blue comment
03:41:758 - try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610142 sure
03:47:033 - add note (it seems the pattern consistency getting harder from this point 3 note for kick and 4 for snare) ditched consistency due to diff spike
03:48:352 - add note ^ kk
03:48:352 - ^
03:49:670 - ^ refer to last red comment
03:50:330 - ^
03:50:989 - ^ ok ^
04:02:280 - want to try like this pattern? just my suggestion tho https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610206 amazing eyecandy
04:18:681 (258681|5) - move to col 4 no >:(
04:39:780 (279780|5) - move to col 1 done + other stuff
04:54:945 (294945|1) - move to 7 kk
04:57:582 (297582|1) - ^ kk
04:59:890 (299890|2) - move to col 2 nop
05:02:198 (302198|0) - move to col 6 nop
05:15:714 (315714|0) - move to col 4? nop
05:27:582 (327582|3) - i think the LN should end here 05:32:857 just like in 4k diff fair enough

okay thats it for 7k mod from me sry if happens to be a bad mod since im not usually modding 7k ;)
NP : no kudosu since you already gave me[/quote]

Level 51 wrote:

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7| but i think i only reference columns once
[7K Gourmet Chocolate]
00:01:374 (1374|2) - add a second note here? the sound at 00:03:022 (3022|2,3022|6) - sounds similar but has two notes, so hay consistency etc wot what was that a double ?_?
00:03:104 - add a note here? i think there's a vocal thing at this time
^ there are a few more instances of these, i'll just dump the ones i notice here but there may be more. probably up to your discretion so i don't want to crowd out the mod with them.
here
add a second note?
00:06:648 (6648|4) -
00:11:923 (11923|2) -

add a note?
00:08:050 -
00:08:626 -
00:09:203 -
00:13:654 -
yep the doubles were my mistake

00:10:604 (10604|5) - second note here to match with 00:10:934 (10934|4,10934|5) - ? i am now questioning my life choices
00:19:423 (19423|1) - this note doesn't sound like it should be a jack imo sounds the same as previous, im keeping this
00:37:390 (37390|4) - not sure there's a sound here weird sound, removed
00:40:275 (40275|5,40275|2) - remove one of these for consistency? unless there's some extra sound i can't hear yep, really questioning myself
00:43:407 (43407|0,43407|5) - notes here have the same sound as at (e.g.) 00:44:066 (44066|5) - or 00:45:385 (45385|6) - , why is it 2 notes as opposed to 1?
eh the echoed kick is more deserving for a double than the normal kick. Also sets that difference between two sounds.
01:04:011 (64011|5) - this sound appears to start at 01:03:846 - ill have to think about it considering the laning and the unwanted trill if this were to be done.
01:05:989 - add some LNs here? just a suggestion maybe nop
01:06:484 - why did you choose to focus on the beat as compared to the main melody? seems to make the map a tad monotonous over here :P following the melody could add more variety to this section, since you have a wider range of sounds (you could try layering them!) and even different rhythms (e.g. the 1/6 sounds over at 01:21:648 - could be taken advantage of) diff curving + setting a difference between this chorus and the other
01:34:176 (94176|3,94176|0,94341|1,94341|4) - consider making these notes 3-chords for greater emphasis. i like that
01:36:648 (96648|4) - i think this note starts and ends 1/8 later sounds correct
01:37:473 (97473|2,97473|1) - add a note here to emphasise the bass? not a very good spot to triple
01:38:132 (98132|1) - ^ previously done
01:48:352 - you could even incorporate jacks into this chord section here if you wanted to be mean LN usage after prevents me from doing it
01:55:934 (115934|2) - might wanna move this note somewhere so it doesn't create a reverse shield with the note after nu >:(
02:12:047 (132047|4) - p sure this note doesn't exist but could just be me. referenced from 4k ver. Also kinda sure that it is there
03:30:385 (210385|0,210385|4) - add a note here? to emphasise the beat nah, no convincing lane to place another note
04:29:313 (269313|4,269478|4) - a pretty nasty reverse shield D: yes it is :)
04:32:363 (272363|2,272610|2) - ^ ;)
04:39:739 (279739|1) - i feel like if you put a note here there should be another one at 04:39:698 - for flow. perhaps put that on column 1?previously changed
04:46:703 - section again feels a tad monotonous but i'm not sure you can do much about it. :P ran out of creative juice here

good luck with getting rank~!
Thanks everyone

reapplied hitsounds!

update: http://pastebin.com/HZHrPn3E
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
update
deadbill
hello o/

this is a M4M as requested :)
i will try to be brief and clear in modding your map.
and i will try to give the best shot.

okay here we go!

First thing first,

Design.
No problemo.
Nekopara <3

Metadata.
according to https://remywiki.com/Eclair_au_chocolat and http://vgmdb.net/album/51316

the bittersweet remix is from:

SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC- album

original title: éclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix)
original artist: kamome sano

no problem on source either.

I will mod the 7K diff

Offset.
No problem

Hitsound.
The hitsound is great! btw you should turn up the volume, please :(

Pattern.
00:07:143 - did you miss the 3 notes? .-.
00:21:319 - 00:21:648 - i suggest to make it jacks on the left hand and single notes at the right hand (braketing), since the kick is strong on this one :p

just a pattern suggestion :)
location 00:21:319 - 00:21:648 -


00:21:648 - also if you want, you can add a note since there is a crash cymbal here

i understand that you are using synth as reference. therefore, for consistency, i suggest you to add LN for each sustained note of synth :)

add LN, from; to
00:23:462 - 00:23:626 -
00:24:780 - 00:24:945 -
00:27:418 - 00:27:582 -
00:28:736 - 00:28:901 -
00:30:055 - 00:30:220 -

and also... i think quarter notes are not necessary... since rhythm synth on the song are filling half notes

please consider to remove these notes..
00:22:225 (22225|2) -
00:23:544 (23544|2) -
00:24:863 (24863|2) -
00:26:181 (26181|5) -
00:27:500 (27500|5) -
00:28:819 (28819|1) -
00:30:137 (30137|3) -
00:31:456 (31456|1) -
00:32:775 (32775|4) -
00:34:093 (34093|1) -
00:35:412 (35412|1) -
00:36:731 (36731|4) -
00:38:050 (38050|2) -
00:39:368 (39368|1) -

omg the SV is beautiful <3 00:37:473 -

at this part.. 01:06:484 - I suggest you to refer to main melodic synth instead of backing/rhythmic synth.
And also for consistency, i suggest you to add LN refering to sustained note of synth :)

please extend the jacks from
01:13:736 - to 01:14:231 -

omg scratch part 01:35:495 -

for consistency.. 01:52:637 - why not using LN for scratch ? :)

yeah this is what im talking about! 02:07:143 - well added LNs! (beat wise)

next part, sustained notes detected
please add LN, from; to
02:49:835 - 02:50:165 -
02:50:495 - 02:50:824 -
02:51:154 - 02:51:484 -
02:51:978 - 02:52:308 -
02:52:637 - 02:52:967 -
02:53:626 - 02:53:956 -
02:53:956 - 02:54:203 -
02:54:286 - 02:54:615 -
02:54:615 - 02:54:863 -
02:54:945 - 02:55:275 -
02:55:769 - 02:56:099 -
02:56:429 - 02:56:758 -
03:00:385 - 03:00:714 -
03:01:044 - 03:01:374 -
03:01:703 - 03:02:033 -
03:02:528 - 03:02:857 -
03:03:187 - 03:03:517 -
03:04:176 - 03:04:506 -
03:04:506 - 03:04:753 -
03:04:835 - 03:05:165 -
03:05:165 - 03:05:412 -
03:05:495 - 03:05:824 -
03:06:319 - 03:06:648 -

umm.. refering to what? .-. ??
03:10:934 (190934|2,190934|1) -
03:13:571 (193571|5,193571|6) -
03:16:209 (196209|4,196209|5) -
03:18:846 (198846|6,198846|0) -
03:21:484 (201484|0,201484|3) -
03:24:121 (204121|6,204121|3) -
03:26:758 (206758|6,206758|1) -
03:29:396 (209396|2,209396|0) -

beat wise this part 03:35:659 - is great.. but pitch wise is a no no ... i suggest you to revise, pitch wisely.
just merely a pattern suggestion :)
location 03:35:495 - 03:36:154 -


04:46:703 - i kinda against these mini LNs due to consistency.. since from the beginning of the song, this kind of note do not added as mini LNs. However, it is your choice :)

thats all~ thank you for your attention. and goodluck :)
lenpai
thanks a lot ill reply when i can

deadbill wrote:

hello o/

this is a M4M as requested :)
i will try to be brief and clear in modding your map.
and i will try to give the best shot.

okay here we go!

First thing first,

Design.
No problemo.
Nekopara <3

Metadata.
according to https://remywiki.com/Eclair_au_chocolat and http://vgmdb.net/album/51316

the bittersweet remix is from:

SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC- album

original title: éclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix)
original artist: kamome sano

no problem on source either.

I will mod the 7K diff

Offset.
No problem

Hitsound.
The hitsound is great! btw you should turn up the volume, please :(

Pattern.
00:07:143 - did you miss the 3 notes? .-. ye :c added
00:21:319 - 00:21:648 - i suggest to make it jacks on the left hand and single notes at the right hand (braketing), since the kick is strong on this one :p

just a pattern suggestion :)
location 00:21:319 - 00:21:648 -
i like the current finger motion more gonna pass thisone

00:21:648 - also if you want, you can add a note since there is a crash cymbal here added

i understand that you are using synth as reference. therefore, for consistency, i suggest you to add LN for each sustained note of synth :)

add LN, from; to
00:23:462 - 00:23:626 -
00:24:780 - 00:24:945 -
00:27:418 - 00:27:582 -
00:28:736 - 00:28:901 -
00:30:055 - 00:30:220 -

intentionally dropped that certain synth because the section will be overly difficult considering that it is just the early part of the song

and also... i think quarter notes are not necessary... since rhythm synth on the song are filling half notes that my chosen layering :c

please consider to remove these notes..
00:22:225 (22225|2) -
00:23:544 (23544|2) -
00:24:863 (24863|2) -
00:26:181 (26181|5) -
00:27:500 (27500|5) -
00:28:819 (28819|1) -
00:30:137 (30137|3) -
00:31:456 (31456|1) -
00:32:775 (32775|4) -
00:34:093 (34093|1) -
00:35:412 (35412|1) -
00:36:731 (36731|4) -
00:38:050 (38050|2) -
00:39:368 (39368|1) -

omg the SV is beautiful <3 00:37:473 - ;)

at this part.. 01:06:484 - I suggest you to refer to main melodic synth instead of backing/rhythmic synth.
And also for consistency, i suggest you to add LN refering to sustained note of synth :) done this for the reason that this is a rather long map and that variety is of the essence

please extend the jacks from
01:13:736 - to 01:14:231 - did sth else

omg scratch part 01:35:495 - is that a good thing?

for consistency.. 01:52:637 - why not using LN for scratch ? :) will consider

yeah this is what im talking about! 02:07:143 - well added LNs! (beat wise)

next part, sustained notes detected you should save yourself the effort of listing all these :c I regard these sounds as too weak to have LNs
please add LN, from; to
02:49:835 - 02:50:165 -
02:50:495 - 02:50:824 -
02:51:154 - 02:51:484 -
02:51:978 - 02:52:308 -
02:52:637 - 02:52:967 -
02:53:626 - 02:53:956 -
02:53:956 - 02:54:203 -
02:54:286 - 02:54:615 -
02:54:615 - 02:54:863 -
02:54:945 - 02:55:275 -
02:55:769 - 02:56:099 -
02:56:429 - 02:56:758 -
03:00:385 - 03:00:714 -
03:01:044 - 03:01:374 -
03:01:703 - 03:02:033 -
03:02:528 - 03:02:857 -
03:03:187 - 03:03:517 -
03:04:176 - 03:04:506 -
03:04:506 - 03:04:753 -
03:04:835 - 03:05:165 -
03:05:165 - 03:05:412 -
03:05:495 - 03:05:824 -
03:06:319 - 03:06:648 -

umm.. refering to what? .-. ?? additional follow-up synth sounds(?) dunno what to call them
03:10:934 (190934|2,190934|1) -
03:13:571 (193571|5,193571|6) -
03:16:209 (196209|4,196209|5) -
03:18:846 (198846|6,198846|0) -
03:21:484 (201484|0,201484|3) -
03:24:121 (204121|6,204121|3) -
03:26:758 (206758|6,206758|1) -
03:29:396 (209396|2,209396|0) -

beat wise this part 03:35:659 - is great.. but pitch wise is a no no ... i suggest you to revise, pitch wisely. that example nerfed my layering :c did something else but has a very similar stream usage
location 03:35:495 - 03:36:154 -


04:46:703 - i kinda against these mini LNs due to consistency.. since from the beginning of the song, this kind of note do not added as mini LNs. However, it is your choice :) sure is ahaha

thats all~ thank you for your attention. and goodluck :)
thanks for the mod!

update: http://pastebin.com/XpAsyVA8
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
Updated
Parachor
Here's my part of our M4M~.


[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


[4K Pretzel Bread]
  1. 00:15:385 (15385|0,15385|1,16044|1,16044|0) - I think in this intro section it would be really nice to avoid the doubles repeating like this. It keeps the nice movement that you've established.
  2. 00:19:341 (19341|1,19341|2,20000|2,20000|1) - ^
  3. 00:50:989 (50989|1) - remove this to keep it consistent with the patterns before it (they don't use a double)
  4. 00:55:275 - It feels *really* weird to start the streams here. It's hard for me to comment on though, because the song definitely suggests that the streams start here. Maybe let the cymbal-based patterns have some time to breathe before starting the stream, if that makes any sense. I started to get into the rhythm of the cymbals and then suddenly streeeeeeeeeeeeams. Maybe start them at 00:58:571? Completely up to you as my reasoning is a tad subjective :P
  5. 01:00:879 - 01:02:528 - It's really strange that you fell into this pattern for that amount of time lol. Maybe you should vary the patterning a little bit more for this bit. Repetitive patterns in jumpstreams is something I'd expect to be at the end (or the entirety) of a jumpstream or something.
  6. 01:11:758 (71758|3,71758|2,72088|3,72088|2,72418|2,72418|3,72747|3,72747|2) - The repetition of [34] is somewhat strange here. Try to vary the double note placement.
    -
  7. 01:24:451 (84451|0) - to column |3|
  8. 01:25:110 (85110|1,85604|0) - Not quite sure what these are mapped to?
  9. 01:33:517 (93517|1) - Possibly delete for consistency.
  10. 01:41:593 (101593|0,101635|1,101676|3,101717|2,101758|0,101758|1) - Ctrl + H
  11. 01:43:407 (103407|2,103407|3,103571|0,103571|1) - I'd probably make these two have identical column placement to really emphasize the repetition in the song.
  12. 01:43:901 (103901|0,104066|0) - I wouldn't have these in the same column though.
  13. 01:47:528 - 01:48:269 - I recommend this pattern instead. http://prntscr.com/abga8v Or something else that uses the same RLRLRLRL feel.
  14. 01:48:681 (108681|0) - Having a chord at the end of this feels so weird. Maybe not have this here.
  15. 01:53:379 - 01:53:874 - Try this? http://prntscr.com/abgaw0
    -
  16. 02:03:187 (123187|0,123352|0,123517|0,123681|0,123846|0) - Maybe try to avoid anchors here lol
  17. 02:06:813 - To make the SV a little more user friendly (because it's really weird when the LN looks the same size as the ones after it and then BAM! sv in your face.) I recommend having a double LN. Just one in column |3| the same length as the one in |4| (removing the note at the end of course.). It just creates a subtle hint that there's an SV. Or maybe you could just change the speed of the SV so it's not so invisible. Up to you.
  18. 02:26:264 (146264|0,146264|1,146429|0) - This feels really awkward to have right here. Perhaps swap the column placement for these two? 02:26:429 (146429|0,146593|2) -
    -
  19. 03:23:297 (203297|0,203297|2,203626|2,203626|0,203956|2,203956|0,204286|0,204286|2) - Maybe try to avoid this repetition.
  20. 03:44:396 (224396|0) - I don't think you need this.
    03:50:495 (230495|3,230577|2,230659|0,230659|1,230742|2,230824|3,230907|2,230989|1,230989|3,230989|0) - This pattern is an odd choice for this stream. I somewhat recommend changing it slightly?
    -
  21. 04:00:220 - The SV here rushes into the LN + Stream way too fast. Tune it a bit more to make the entry as smooth as possible.
  22. 04:30:385 (270385|1) - column |3|?
  23. 04:37:967 (277967|2) - column |1| for consistency with the rest of the map I think. So far you've only repeated the LN, not the note with it.
  24. 05:23:626 - Literally none of the notes in this stream are actually in time with the beeps lmao. But for playability's sake, you should be fine :)
This diff is wonderful to play! The LN's feel natural and flowy, and your streams are comfortable and a joy to play :)

[7K Gourmet Chocolate]
Mmmmm... Chocolate... Also I have absolutely zero clue how to mod 7k, so I tried my best just to find a couple things to help ^^
  1. 00:45:385 (45385|6,45879|0) - It would be nice to see notes like these be in the same column. Just to emphasise the repetition of that sound. This applies to the rest of this little section as well. While you haven't explicitly mapped that sound like the 4k diff did, it's still nice to bring attention to it when it's so prominent.
  2. 01:19:258 - It feels like there should be a note here somewhere.
  3. 02:12:047 (132047|4) - You picked up on this gliding note half the time, otherwise you don't map it. I'd try to pick one of the other: to map them or not to map them.
  4. 02:28:407 - I LOVE your pitch relevancy in this section <3
  5. 04:52:143 (292143|0,292143|1) - Lol this feels weird to play with all the spread notes around it. Maybe spread this one out too.

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!
lenpai

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.


[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


[7K Gourmet Chocolate]
Mmmmm... Chocolate... Also I have absolutely zero clue how to mod 7k, so I tried my best just to find a couple things to help ^^
  1. 00:45:385 (45385|6,45879|0) - It would be nice to see notes like these be in the same column. Just to emphasise the repetition of that sound. This applies to the rest of this little section as well. While you haven't explicitly mapped that sound like the 4k diff did, it's still nice to bring attention to it when it's so prominent.would have done that if this section didnt repeat as long as it currently does
  2. 01:19:258 - It feels like there should be a note here somewhere. the lead synth is the only sound there, and it is not included in my layers for that section so no
  3. 02:12:047 (132047|4) - You picked up on this gliding note half the time, otherwise you don't map it. I'd try to pick one of the other: to map them or not to map them. not sure what you meant by a gliding note but all the notes ignoring the LN follows a triple - double alternation for every beat. Might have been covered unintentionally or idk.
  4. 02:28:407 - I LOVE your pitch relevancy in this section <3 had some help from another modder to pull this off ;w;
  5. 04:52:143 (292143|0,292143|1) - Lol this feels weird to play with all the spread notes around it. Maybe spread this one out too.done!

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!

@ID9, im too lazy to paste in pastebin and repaste the unicode stuff so if possible just apply it for me <3. Effort is rather unnecessary for such a quick fix.

04:52:143 (292143|0) - goes to 5
04:52:308 (292308|4) - goes to 3
Topic Starter
- ID9 -

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.


[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

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[4K Pretzel Bread]
  1. 00:15:385 (15385|0,15385|1,16044|1,16044|0) - I think in this intro section it would be really nice to avoid the doubles repeating like this. It keeps the nice movement that you've established.
  2. 00:19:341 (19341|1,19341|2,20000|2,20000|1) - ^
  3. 00:50:989 (50989|1) - remove this to keep it consistent with the patterns before it (they don't use a double)
  4. 00:55:275 - It feels *really* weird to start the streams here. It's hard for me to comment on though, because the song definitely suggests that the streams start here. Maybe let the cymbal-based patterns have some time to breathe before starting the stream, if that makes any sense. I started to get into the rhythm of the cymbals and then suddenly streeeeeeeeeeeeams. Maybe start them at 00:58:571? Completely up to you as my reasoning is a tad subjective :P Im also had a same feeling in here, when cymbal just starting but immediately came a stream
  5. 01:00:879 - 01:02:528 - It's really strange that you fell into this pattern for that amount of time lol. Maybe you should vary the patterning a little bit more for this bit. Repetitive patterns in jumpstreams is something I'd expect to be at the end (or the entirety) of a jumpstream or something.
  6. 01:11:758 (71758|3,71758|2,72088|3,72088|2,72418|2,72418|3,72747|3,72747|2) - The repetition of [34] is somewhat strange here. Try to vary the double note placement.
    -
  7. 01:24:451 (84451|0) - to column |3|
  8. 01:25:110 (85110|1,85604|0) - Not quite sure what these are mapped to?
  9. 01:33:517 (93517|1) - Possibly delete for consistency. nein
  10. 01:41:593 (101593|0,101635|1,101676|3,101717|2,101758|0,101758|1) - Ctrl + H
  11. 01:43:407 (103407|2,103407|3,103571|0,103571|1) - I'd probably make these two have identical column placement to really emphasize the repetition in the song.
  12. 01:43:901 (103901|0,104066|0) - I wouldn't have these in the same column though.
  13. 01:47:528 - 01:48:269 - I recommend this pattern instead. http://prntscr.com/abga8v Or something else that uses the same RLRLRLRL feel.
  14. 01:48:681 (108681|0) - Having a chord at the end of this feels so weird. Maybe not have this here.
  15. 01:53:379 - 01:53:874 - Try this? http://prntscr.com/abgaw0 ok
    -
  16. 02:03:187 (123187|0,123352|0,123517|0,123681|0,123846|0) - Maybe try to avoid anchors here lol
  17. 02:06:813 - To make the SV a little more user friendly (because it's really weird when the LN looks the same size as the ones after it and then BAM! sv in your face.) I recommend having a double LN. Just one in column |3| the same length as the one in |4| (removing the note at the end of course.). It just creates a subtle hint that there's an SV. Or maybe you could just change the speed of the SV so it's not so invisible. Up to you. use Len SV
  18. 02:26:264 (146264|0,146264|1,146429|0) - This feels really awkward to have right here. Perhaps swap the column placement for these two? 02:26:429 (146429|0,146593|2) -
    -
  19. 03:23:297 (203297|0,203297|2,203626|2,203626|0,203956|2,203956|0,204286|0,204286|2) - Maybe try to avoid this repetition. fixed
  20. 03:44:396 (224396|0) - I don't think you need this. nein
    03:50:495 (230495|3,230577|2,230659|0,230659|1,230742|2,230824|3,230907|2,230989|1,230989|3,230989|0) - This pattern is an odd choice for this stream. I somewhat recommend changing it slightly?
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  21. 04:00:220 - The SV here rushes into the LN + Stream way too fast. Tune it a bit more to make the entry as smooth as possible.
  22. 04:30:385 (270385|1) - column |3|?
  23. 04:37:967 (277967|2) - column |1| for consistency with the rest of the map I think. So far you've only repeated the LN, not the note with it.
  24. 05:23:626 - Literally none of the notes in this stream are actually in time with the beeps lmao. But for playability's sake, you should be fine :)
This diff is wonderful to play! The LN's feel natural and flowy, and your streams are comfortable and a joy to play :)

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!
Thanks Paradoxq13

Lenfried- wrote:

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.


[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


[7K Gourmet Chocolate]
Mmmmm... Chocolate... Also I have absolutely zero clue how to mod 7k, so I tried my best just to find a couple things to help ^^
  1. 00:45:385 (45385|6,45879|0) - It would be nice to see notes like these be in the same column. Just to emphasise the repetition of that sound. This applies to the rest of this little section as well. While you haven't explicitly mapped that sound like the 4k diff did, it's still nice to bring attention to it when it's so prominent.would have done that if this section didnt repeat as long as it currently does
  2. 01:19:258 - It feels like there should be a note here somewhere. the lead synth is the only sound there, and it is not included in my layers for that section so no
  3. 02:12:047 (132047|4) - You picked up on this gliding note half the time, otherwise you don't map it. I'd try to pick one of the other: to map them or not to map them. not sure what you meant by a gliding note but all the notes ignoring the LN follows a triple - double alternation for every beat. Might have been covered unintentionally or idk.
  4. 02:28:407 - I LOVE your pitch relevancy in this section <3 had some help from another modder to pull this off ;w;
  5. 04:52:143 (292143|0,292143|1) - Lol this feels weird to play with all the spread notes around it. Maybe spread this one out too.done!

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!

@ID9, im too lazy to paste in pastebin and repaste the unicode stuff so if possible just apply it for me <3. Effort is rather unnecessary for such a quick fix.
ok Len XD
04:52:143 (292143|0) - goes to 5
04:52:308 (292308|4) - goes to 3
Updated anjayy turun lagi 0,02

8-) 8-) Thanks Redball for the kudo
Tohkazumi
M4M :>

4K
It is based on the pitch of the notes from the keyboard/piano
it feels better(I mean ung tono ng keys XD) :)

(01:56:758-02:01:703)
01:56:923 (116923|0) - move to col 4
01:57:088 (117088|2) - move to col 1
01:57:418 (117418|0) - move to col 3
01:57:582 (117582|3) - move to col 1
01:57:912 (117912|1) - move to col 4
01:58:242 (118242|3) - move to col 3
01:58:407 (118407|2) - move to col 2
01:58:571 (118571|1) - move to col 3
01:59:396 (119396|2) - move to col 4
01:59:560 (119560|3) - move to col 2
01:59:725 (119725|1) - move to col 3
01:59:890 (119890|2) - move to col 4
02:00:055 (120055|0) - move to col 2
02:00:220 (120220|1) - move to col 3
02:00:385 (120385|2) - move to col 1
02:00:550 (120550|3) - move to col 3
02:01:209 (121209|3) - move to col 2
02:01:539 (121539|1) - move to col 4


(02:55:440-03:03:517)
02:55:604 (175604|2) - move to col 4
02:55:769 (175769|3) - move to col 3
02:56:099 (176099|2) - move to col 1
02:56:429 (176429|0) - move to col 3
02:56:923 (176923|2) - move to col 1
02:57:088 (177088|3) - move to col 3
02:57:253 (177253|3) - move to col 4
02:57:418 (177418|1) - move to col 3
02:57:582 (177582|0) - move to col 2
02:57:747 (177747|1) - move to col 3
02:57:912 (177912|3) - move to col 1
02:58:077 (178077|2) - move to col 2
02:58:242 (178242|1) - move to col 4
02:58:407 (178407|3) - move to col 1
02:58:571 (178571|1) - move to col 3
02:58:736 (178736|0) - move to col 2
02:59:231 (179231|1) - move to col 1
02:59:396 (179396|0) - move to col 2
02:59:560 (179560|1) - move to col 3
02:59:725 (179725|2) - move to col 2
03:00:220 (180220|1) - move to col 3
03:00:385 (180385|3) - move to col 2
03:01:539 (181539|2) - move to col 4
03:01:703 (181703|3) - move to col 3
03:02:033 (182033|1) - move to col 1
03:02:198 (182198|0) - move to col 3
03:02:363 (182363|1) - move to col 4
03:02:528 (182528|2) - move to col 2

(03:04:176-03:07:802)
03:04:176 (184176|3) - move to col 1
03:04:506 (184506|1) - move to col 4 and end the ln here 03:04:753
03:04:753 - add note to col 2
03:04:794 - add note to col 3 using beat snap divisor 1/8
03:04:835 (184835|0) - move to col 2
03:06:978 (186978|3) - move to col 1
03:07:143 (187143|0) - move to col 3
03:07:198 (187198|1) - move to col 4
03:07:308 (187308|3) - move to col 2
03:07:473 (187473|2) - move to col 1

Thats all~ Sry I could only do 4K :<
Im not that good yet on modding but hoped diz helped :)
good luck!~
Topic Starter
- ID9 -

Tohkazumi wrote:

M4M :>

4K
It is based on the pitch of the notes from the keyboard/piano
it feels better(I mean ung tono ng keys XD) :)

(01:56:758-02:01:703)
01:56:923 (116923|0) - move to col 4
01:57:088 (117088|2) - move to col 1
01:57:418 (117418|0) - move to col 3
01:57:582 (117582|3) - move to col 1
01:57:912 (117912|1) - move to col 4
01:58:242 (118242|3) - move to col 3
01:58:407 (118407|2) - move to col 2
01:58:571 (118571|1) - move to col 3
01:59:396 (119396|2) - move to col 4
01:59:560 (119560|3) - move to col 2
01:59:725 (119725|1) - move to col 3
01:59:890 (119890|2) - move to col 4
02:00:055 (120055|0) - move to col 2
02:00:220 (120220|1) - move to col 3
02:00:385 (120385|2) - move to col 1
02:00:550 (120550|3) - move to col 3
02:01:209 (121209|3) - move to col 2
02:01:539 (121539|1) - move to col 4


(02:55:440-03:03:517)
02:55:604 (175604|2) - move to col 4
02:55:769 (175769|3) - move to col 3
02:56:099 (176099|2) - move to col 1
02:56:429 (176429|0) - move to col 3
02:56:923 (176923|2) - move to col 1
02:57:088 (177088|3) - move to col 3
02:57:253 (177253|3) - move to col 4
02:57:418 (177418|1) - move to col 3
02:57:582 (177582|0) - move to col 2
02:57:747 (177747|1) - move to col 3
02:57:912 (177912|3) - move to col 1
02:58:077 (178077|2) - move to col 2
02:58:242 (178242|1) - move to col 4
02:58:407 (178407|3) - move to col 1
02:58:571 (178571|1) - move to col 3
02:58:736 (178736|0) - move to col 2
02:59:231 (179231|1) - move to col 1
02:59:396 (179396|0) - move to col 2
02:59:560 (179560|1) - move to col 3
02:59:725 (179725|2) - move to col 2
03:00:220 (180220|1) - move to col 3
03:00:385 (180385|3) - move to col 2
03:01:539 (181539|2) - move to col 4
03:01:703 (181703|3) - move to col 3
03:02:033 (182033|1) - move to col 1
03:02:198 (182198|0) - move to col 3
03:02:363 (182363|1) - move to col 4
03:02:528 (182528|2) - move to col 2

(03:04:176-03:07:802)
03:04:176 (184176|3) - move to col 1
03:04:506 (184506|1) - move to col 4 and end the ln here 03:04:753
03:04:753 - add note to col 2 at this section, add note to 3
03:04:794 - add note to col 3 using beat snap divisor 1/8 add to 2
03:04:835 (184835|0) - move to col 2 to 1
03:06:978 (186978|3) - move to col 1
03:07:143 (187143|0) - move to col 3
03:07:198 (187198|1) - move to col 4
03:07:308 (187308|3) - move to col 2
03:07:473 (187473|2) - move to col 1

Thats all~ Sry I could only do 4K :<
Im not that good yet on modding but hoped diz helped :)
good luck!~
Thanks Tohkazumi :D
Kaito-kun
Just passing by:

[General]
Source shouldn't be "SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-". That's the album's name, and album name is never as source. So remove the current source and add it to tags.
Topic Starter
- ID9 -

Kaito-kun wrote:

Just passing by:

[General]
Source shouldn't be "SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-". That's the album's name, and album name is never as source. So remove the current source and add it to tags.
How about now?
Kaito-kun

- ID9 - wrote:

Kaito-kun wrote:

Just passing by:

[General]
Source shouldn't be "SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-". That's the album's name, and album name is never as source. So remove the current source and add it to tags.
How about now?
Can't be "SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH" either. Since this is both a remix and an extended version of the original song. My bet would be to leave Source empty, since only actual source for that specific song is only on the album, and album should be on tags, not source :p
Topic Starter
- ID9 -

Kaito-kun wrote:

Can't be "SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH" either. Since this is both a remix and an extended version of the original song. My bet would be to leave Source empty, since only actual source for that specific song is only on the album, and album should be on tags, not source :p
Done :cry:
MadBricktree
From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

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7K as requested~

7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:12:582 - A bit hard to read imo. Maybe you can use a pattern like this?
00:41:429 - Slow scroll speed + LN = hell
01:04:341 (64341|5) - The LN ends at a somewhat unexpected time.
01:35:495 - 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|4,95632|2) - These three LNs ends at 01:35:824 but 01:35:783 (95783|6) This LN starts at 01:35:783
02:12:047 (132047|4) - Ghost note?

Can't mod anymore :?
The map is pretty good already.
Quite hard for a 5* imo :o
Good luck on ranking
lenpai

Minseo2000 wrote:

From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

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7K as requested~

7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:12:582 - A bit hard to read imo. Maybe you can use a pattern like this? did something else
00:41:429 - Slow scroll speed + LN = hell not complex so ill keep it, also suits the current situation
01:04:341 (64341|5) - The LN ends at a somewhat unexpected time. may seem "off" but it perfectly follows the layer
01:35:495 - 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|4,95632|2) - These three LNs ends at 01:35:824 but 01:35:783 (95783|6) This LN starts at 01:35:783 OH MY GOD NO, I can't place the LN end on the proper time because of 1/12 and 1/8th conflict the QAT should determine how to fix this issue
02:12:047 (132047|4) - Ghost note? nope

Can't mod anymore :?
The map is pretty good already.
Quite hard for a 5* imo :o
Good luck on ranking
thanks!

update:
http://pastebin.com/EJiYEcxk
CloudHolic
Hi from ArtaHolic's modding queue! :)
Here are my suggestions. You can reject all of them.

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Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate
  1. 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|2,95632|4) - These LNs end with 01:35:783.
  2. 02:12:006 - Add a note. Sounds in 02:12:047 (132047|4,132088|3) starts with here.
  3. 03:26:181 - I think there should be another note, but it doesn't looks good...
  4. 04:24:286 (264286|6) - This LN ends with 04:26:841.
  5. 04:39:698 - Same with 02:12:006.
  6. 04:46:703 ~ 05:27:582 - This part is too long with same pattern. And these short LNs are too hard.

Yeah, that's all.
I can't mod it anymore; it's really good. :)
lenpai
Ill apply ^ and do some staccato revisions at the ending and maybe you can start trying to gets BNs QAQ

Thanks cloud!
lenpai

CloudHolic wrote:

Hi from ArtaHolic's modding queue! :)
Here are my suggestions. You can reject all of them.

0|1|2|3|4|5|6

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate
  1. 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|2,95632|4) - These LNs end with 01:35:783. found out a way how to do this
  2. 02:12:006 - Add a note. Sounds in 02:12:047 (132047|4,132088|3) starts with here.done!
  3. 03:26:181 - I think there should be another note, but it doesn't looks good... space usage justifies lack of second note
  4. 04:24:286 (264286|6) - This LN ends with 04:26:841. have to give way to the bracket
  5. 04:39:698 - Same with 02:12:006. done!
  6. 04:46:703 ~ 05:27:582 - This part is too long with same pattern. And these short LNs are too hard. can't really think of an alternative pattern scheme for this section :(

Yeah, that's all.
I can't mod it anymore; it's really good. :)
Thanks!

update: http://pastebin.com/Y1dqLcmy

ill add PR for the last section then I'm ready for BN check
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
updated
Kurisu Makise


Hi, guys. Mod for Lenfried :3

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7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:05:824 (5824|3,5989|5) - Try 6-4 instead if you want to avoid awkward patterns.
00:06:896 (6896|2) - Maybe move it to 5 to keep the same column with 00:06:484 (6484|4,6648|4) - like here 00:01:209 (1209|2,1374|2,1621|2) -
If accept previous, 00:07:060 (7060|5) - apparently goes to 3.
00:08:050 - 00:08:544 - 00:08:709 - I tried to guess what are you following here, but it seems like notes after that are still for vocal. So i think, you missed those 3 notes.
00:14:808 - Missed?
00:21:236 (21236|6,21319|4,21401|5) - What about 5-7-5? A bit better for consistency and it kinda shows "swinging" of vocal.
A few words about following LNs:
00:22:143 - Here's starting new synth sound and it lasts till 00:22:308 - . It hasn't any significant difference from others, so you just can't ignore it.
00:21:648 (21648|5,21648|4) - This should end a bit earlier. 1/8 according to sound, but it's nonsense in high bpm map, so use 1/4 better.
There're several similar places further.
Then, 00:24:286 - here pitch changes sharply, so you should end old LNs and start new. 00:22:802 (22802|6,22802|2) - Here you can see sort of ambient, so you just can't catch exact time when pitch changes and single LN is acceptable.
00:29:560 - Same. I think, new LNs are needed here.
00:28:242 - Still not sure about this. You could divide only one of two LNs when pitch change is smooth (even at 00:22:967 -, it seems good at full speed). I mean something like this: http://puu.sh/nYIiB/33ccabb67b.png.
00:34:835 - Pitch change is apparent enough to make new LN. Btw, why did you start to use one LN where had been two before?
00:40:110 - Several sounds are in a single LN. There should be something like http://puu.sh/nYJii/2848435e99.png (1st column is for low pitch sound, others are for same synth as before). Maybe wrong pattern, i just used one column for low pitch to make it more clear (and less difficult for me, lol).
01:09:039 (69039|3) - Normal-hitfinish to follow music. However it sounds too loud, so you need to set volume at 25-30% (samlpe import (hotkey ctrl+shift+I) - none & 30% - apply, then just add hitsound from your set).
01:15:879 - Missed note?
01:16:786 (76786|6,76868|0,76951|3) - I think, you need to make them less loud. Use the same way, samlpe import - none & 30% - apply. That doesn't make any changes in hitsounds, just changes volume level.
01:22:473 (82473|2,82802|3,83132|1,83462|4) - Maybe 40%?
01:27:335 (87335|5,87418|3,87500|5) - Use clap.
01:25:852 (85852|2) - Some notes on blue lines are completely unreasoned in this section. And others are mostly ghost. Use LNs like those 01:19:835 (79835|5,80165|1,80495|6,80824|4) - or just make this section less dense, but i highly recommend you to delete notes on blue lines or at least follow that crisp synth sound, like at 01:32:280 -
01:37:885 (97885|5,97967|3,98050|6) - Use clap.
01:43:159 (103159|1,103242|4,103324|1) - ^
01:49:341 - Try this: http://puu.sh/nZthT/d9460ff8ce.png. Double for pitch and some re-arrange to enable this double.
01:51:978 - Try for some consistency and balance: http://puu.sh/nZtxE/ac0ac78c37.png.
02:12:047 (132047|4,132088|3) - Maybe ctrl+j to make connection between LNs more apparent.
02:16:703 (136703|0,136868|2) - Maybe ctrl+j for pattern consistency?
02:21:648 (141648|3,141813|2) - Add one more note on both lines for that bell-like sounds. 7-6 is good, then 02:21:978 (141978|5) - to 7.
02:22:555 - Don't you want to make it like here 02:11:758 (131758|2,132088|5) - ?
02:34:670 (154670|2,154835|0,155165|2,155330|1) - Reversed pitch seems weird, cause you use straight one in the whole section almost.
02:36:319 (156319|2,156484|0) - ^
02:33:022 (153022|0,153187|2) - Place them to same column.
02:38:791 (158791|4) - Make them less loud fom here. There's no aggressive sound like that in original song, so make it softer at least by decreasing volume. Use inheriting timing point, it's more rational here.
03:07:198 (187198|4,187253|5,187308|6) - and 03:07:473 (187473|4,187637|2) - ctrl+j for pitch.
03:09:121 (189121|1,189286|2,189451|3,189615|4,189780|2,189945|1,190110|0) - Why not keep pitch consistency till the section's end? Like 3-2-3-4-1-2-3.
Same as before i can say about blue lines here. Try to follow that crisp synth or whatever, but make it consistent to music.
03:20:495 (200495|2,200495|5) - Continue them till 03:20:989 -
03:33:846 (213846|1,213929|5,214011|2,214093|3) - 40%?
03:36:813 - Add another LN till 03:37:143 - not to leave this 03:36:319 (216319|6) - alone. You could make something like this: http://puu.sh/nZvYY/58d5356d90.png (i also moved last LNs for pitch).
03:39:945 (219945|2) - Maybe 5?
03:45:632 (225632|1) - What's this for?
03:47:445 (227445|5) - ^
03:49:588 - Add for vocal.
03:51:071 - ^
03:51:731 - ^
03:49:753 (229753|4,229835|3,229918|6) - 30%?
03:53:956 (233956|6,234039|5,234451|6,234615|5,234945|0) - Leave finish hs here and delete others.
03:56:593 (236593|2,236676|6,236923|0,236978|6,237033|4,237363|4) - ^
04:12:967 (252967|2,253022|1) - Add clap.
04:13:077 - This would be more comfortable: http://puu.sh/nZzP4/73364bdcf2.png.
04:27:500 (267500|1) - It sounds like note and LN from 04:27:582 - (shield note).
04:29:478 (269478|2) - Add finish hs, 25-30%.
04:33:475 - Add note (1/8).
04:37:225 (277225|2,277308|3,277390|5) - Change to clap maybe.
04:39:615 (279615|3,279739|1,279780|4) - Try 2-5-4.
04:40:028 (280028|1,280110|3) - Maybe 4-2 is more comfortable.
04:44:560 (284560|3) - Delete, cause there's no impact.
04:56:264 (296264|4,296264|3,296264|6,296264|5,296264|0) - Why so many? Leave 3 notes + LN as usual.

I could miss some loud finish hitsounds, so please recheck them once more on your own.

Good luck for rank! :D
lenpai

Kivicat wrote:



Hi, guys. Mod for Lenfried :3

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7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:05:824 (5824|3,5989|5) - Try 6-4 instead if you want to avoid awkward patterns. looking good
00:06:896 (6896|2) - Maybe move it to 5 to keep the same column with 00:06:484 (6484|4,6648|4) - like here 00:01:209 (1209|2,1374|2,1621|2) -
If accept previous, 00:07:060 (7060|5) - apparently goes to 3. done
00:08:050 - 00:08:544 - 00:08:709 - I tried to guess what are you following here, but it seems like notes after that are still for vocal. So i think, you missed those 3 notes.true
00:14:808 - Missed? yep
00:21:236 (21236|6,21319|4,21401|5) - What about 5-7-5? A bit better for consistency and it kinda shows "swinging" of vocal. kk
A few words about following LNs:
00:22:143 - Here's starting new synth sound and it lasts till 00:22:308 - . It hasn't any significant difference from others, so you just can't ignore it. if i stick with the doubles usage, the section will be way too hard for an early part which is why i dropped the synth for the following reasons
1: Difficulty curving
2: Eliminating "boredom" in a sense by using doubles and then fully charting the synth as singles afterwards

00:21:648 (21648|5,21648|4) - This should end a bit earlier. 1/8 according to sound, but it's nonsense in high bpm map, so use 1/4 better. ye
There're several similar places further.
Then, 00:24:286 - here pitch changes sharply, so you should end old LNs and start new. 00:22:802 (22802|6,22802|2) - Here you can see sort of ambient, so you just can't catch exact time when pitch changes and single LN is acceptable. did something
00:29:560 - Same. I think, new LNs are needed here.
00:28:242 - Still not sure about this. You could divide only one of two LNs when pitch change is smooth (even at 00:22:967 -, it seems good at full speed). I mean something like this: http://puu.sh/nYIiB/33ccabb67b.png.kinda did it
00:34:835 - Pitch change is apparent enough to make new LN. Btw, why did you start to use one LN where had been two before? look at previous statement
00:40:110 - Several sounds are in a single LN. There should be something like http://puu.sh/nYJii/2848435e99.png (1st column is for low pitch sound, others are for same synth as before). Maybe wrong pattern, i just used one column for low pitch to make it more clear (and less difficult for me, lol). that just looks too scary, the LNs represent the falling sound picked up the mini LNs when they are more noticeable
01:09:039 (69039|3) - Normal-hitfinish to follow music. However it sounds too loud, so you need to set volume at 25-30% (samlpe import (hotkey ctrl+shift+I) - none & 30% - apply, then just add hitsound from your set). ID9 samaaaaaaaaa
01:15:879 - Missed note? i think?
01:16:786 (76786|6,76868|0,76951|3) - I think, you need to make them less loud. Use the same way, samlpe import - none & 30% - apply. That doesn't make any changes in hitsounds, just changes volume level. ID9 samaaaaaaa <3 @kivi will ignore HS based mods from here on
01:22:473 (82473|2,82802|3,83132|1,83462|4) - Maybe 40%?
01:27:335 (87335|5,87418|3,87500|5) - Use clap.
01:25:852 (85852|2) - Some notes on blue lines are completely unreasoned in this section. And others are mostly ghost. Use LNs like those 01:19:835 (79835|5,80165|1,80495|6,80824|4) - or just make this section less dense, but i highly recommend you to delete notes on blue lines or at least follow that crisp synth sound, like at 01:32:280 - ill have to see more opinions on this, since the chorus already had the LN usage, i went for this as a layer switch provided how repetitive this song is :(
01:37:885 (97885|5,97967|3,98050|6) - Use clap.
01:43:159 (103159|1,103242|4,103324|1) - ^
01:49:341 - Try this: http://puu.sh/nZthT/d9460ff8ce.png. Double for pitch and some re-arrange to enable this double. ill accept anything PR
01:51:978 - Try for some consistency and balance: http://puu.sh/nZtxE/ac0ac78c37.png. done!
02:12:047 (132047|4,132088|3) - Maybe ctrl+j to make connection between LNs more apparent. impact with spacebar feels nicer
02:16:703 (136703|0,136868|2) - Maybe ctrl+j for pattern consistency? you so mean, i like that
02:21:648 (141648|3,141813|2) - Add one more note on both lines for that bell-like sounds. 7-6 is good, then 02:21:978 (141978|5) - to 7. not a part of layering(?)
02:22:555 - Don't you want to make it like here 02:11:758 (131758|2,132088|5) - ? i dont get it, ill assume that i should add a note
02:34:670 (154670|2,154835|0,155165|2,155330|1) - Reversed pitch seems weird, cause you use straight one in the whole section almost.
02:36:319 (156319|2,156484|0) - ^ blame the modder whom i asked for perfect PR, idk how to fix this
02:33:022 (153022|0,153187|2) - Place them to same column. kk
02:38:791 (158791|4) - Make them less loud fom here. There's no aggressive sound like that in original song, so make it softer at least by decreasing volume. Use inheriting timing point, it's more rational here.
03:07:198 (187198|4,187253|5,187308|6) - and 03:07:473 (187473|4,187637|2) - ctrl+j for pitch. kk
03:09:121 (189121|1,189286|2,189451|3,189615|4,189780|2,189945|1,190110|0) - Why not keep pitch consistency till the section's end? Like 3-2-3-4-1-2-3. because i dont know how ;w; applied
Same as before i can say about blue lines here. Try to follow that crisp synth or whatever, but make it consistent to music. like previous
03:20:495 (200495|2,200495|5) - Continue them till 03:20:989 - kk
03:33:846 (213846|1,213929|5,214011|2,214093|3) - 40%?
03:36:813 - Add another LN till 03:37:143 - not to leave this 03:36:319 (216319|6) - alone. You could make something like this: http://puu.sh/nZvYY/58d5356d90.png (i also moved last LNs for pitch). mostly done
03:39:945 (219945|2) - Maybe 5? yep
03:45:632 (225632|1) - What's this for?
03:47:445 (227445|5) - ^ probably vocal
03:49:588 - Add for vocal.
03:51:071 - ^
03:51:731 - ^ all done ^
03:49:753 (229753|4,229835|3,229918|6) - 30%?
03:53:956 (233956|6,234039|5,234451|6,234615|5,234945|0) - Leave finish hs here and delete others.
03:56:593 (236593|2,236676|6,236923|0,236978|6,237033|4,237363|4) - ^
04:12:967 (252967|2,253022|1) - Add clap.
04:13:077 - This would be more comfortable: http://puu.sh/nZzP4/73364bdcf2.png. kk
04:27:500 (267500|1) - It sounds like note and LN from 04:27:582 - (shield note). dont get what to do here, current thing looks correct
04:29:478 (269478|2) - Add finish hs, 25-30%.
04:33:475 - Add note (1/8). kk
04:37:225 (277225|2,277308|3,277390|5) - Change to clap maybe.
04:39:615 (279615|3,279739|1,279780|4) - Try 2-5-4. kk
04:40:028 (280028|1,280110|3) - Maybe 4-2 is more comfortable.seems like it
04:44:560 (284560|3) - Delete, cause there's no impact. done
04:56:264 (296264|4,296264|3,296264|6,296264|5,296264|0) - Why so many? Leave 3 notes + LN as usual. idk what i was thinking

I could miss some loud finish hitsounds, so please recheck them once more on your own.

Good luck for rank! :D
Thanks a lot for that awesome mod as usual :O

Will post update after im done with staccato PR
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
HS updated bray
lenpai
took me forever to PR those staccatos reapplied hitsounds too!

http://pastebin.com/xSWTvXFC
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
updated
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hai dit Rainbow Hunter
Mod req from chat

col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:13:901 - add note same here ? 00:13:571 (13571|3,13571|6) -
00:15:714 (15714|1,15879|0) - ctrl + g
00:22:637 (22637|4) - move to col 2
00:32:033 - add LN , same pattern 00:31:703 (31703|1,31703|5) -
00:53:956 (53956|2,53956|0,53956|1,53956|3) - Do not 1|2|3|4 in recomended 1|2|4|7 should not be made wall
00:56:593 (56593|4) - move col 4
00:57:912 (57912|5,57912|3,57912|4,57912|6) - make it 1|4|6|7 So balanced for hand 00:57:582 (57582|1,57582|4,57582|5,57747|2) -
00:58:242 (58242|4) - Make it LN, because 1 LN is not comparable with the noise
01:05:989 - add note
01:35:330 (95330|4,95412|5) - ctrl+g ?
01:35:783 (95783|6) - about snaping ? You follow the sound of what ? I could not hear it clearly T.T
01:43:736 - add note
02:06:813 - ^ ?
02:30:550 (150550|4,150714|5,150879|6) - ctrl+g 02:28:736 (148736|4,148901|1,149066|2,149231|5,149396|0,149560|2,149725|4,149890|0,150055|1,150220|3) - bored=w=
02:33:846 (153846|1,154011|5) - move one line to the right
03:07:143 (187143|3) - move col 1 or 2 03:07:198 (187198|6,187253|5,187308|4) - pity the right part =w=
03:26:099 (206099|4,206181|3) - ctrl+g
04:08:462 (248462|1,248462|3,248544|5,248626|4,248709|6,248791|3,248791|1,248874|5,248956|2,249039|4,249121|6,249203|0) - Should like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5034889 =w=
05:08:626 (308626|2) - move col 2

Mod End =w= I 'm sorry because I am still a newbie in the mod
Good luck for map (y) rank pliss xD
lenpai
:o mod will apply later
lenpai

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hai dit Rainbow Hunter
Mod req from chat

col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate
00:13:901 - add note same here ? 00:13:571 (13571|3,13571|6) - removed 7 in the double
00:15:714 (15714|1,15879|0) - ctrl + g both patterns look ok, ill stick w/ what i have
00:22:637 (22637|4) - move to col 2 additional stress on left hand
00:32:033 - add LN , same pattern 00:31:703 (31703|1,31703|5) - added a single note instead
00:53:956 (53956|2,53956|0,53956|1,53956|3) - Do not 1|2|3|4 in recomended 1|2|4|7 should not be made wall laning
00:56:593 (56593|4) - move col 4 ^
00:57:912 (57912|5,57912|3,57912|4,57912|6) - make it 1|4|6|7 So balanced for hand 00:57:582 (57582|1,57582|4,57582|5,57747|2) - ^
00:58:242 (58242|4) - Make it LN, because 1 LN is not comparable with the noise by using another LN, ill have to add another note to follow the consistent triple usage
01:05:989 - add note [color=#FF4000not necessary[/color]
01:35:330 (95330|4,95412|5) - ctrl+g ? also did a couple of other stuff
01:35:783 (95783|6) - about snaping ? You follow the sound of what ? I could not hear it clearly T.T scratch
01:43:736 - add note sure
02:06:813 - ^ ? no
02:30:550 (150550|4,150714|5,150879|6) - ctrl+g pr?
02:28:736 (148736|4,148901|1,149066|2,149231|5,149396|0,149560|2,149725|4,149890|0,150055|1,150220|3) - bored=w=
02:33:846 (153846|1,154011|5) - move one line to the right idk i got this PRed so ill stick with what i have
03:07:143 (187143|3) - move col 1 or 2 03:07:198 (187198|6,187253|5,187308|4) - pity the right part =w= same reason
03:26:099 (206099|4,206181|3) - ctrl+g nop
04:08:462 (248462|1,248462|3,248544|5,248626|4,248709|6,248791|3,248791|1,248874|5,248956|2,249039|4,249121|6,249203|0) - Should like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5034889 =w= synth reverb is not very noticeable, mostly during gameplay
05:08:626 (308626|2) - move col 2 staccato PR

Mod End =w= I 'm sorry because I am still a newbie in the mod
Good luck for map (y) rank pliss xD
Thanks!

update: http://pastebin.com/vRPpw8G0
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
updated

kampret dapet 2 kudo
Protastic101
Gahhhh, I suck at getting to my mods on time, sorry! I'm probably not going to find much though, since this has been modded so much XD

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Nom Nom Chocolate
[General]I think your HP values might be too low. ~8.5 might be better to discourage button mashing.
[7K Gourmet Chocolate]00:07:967 (7967|6,7967|2) - Uhhh, reduce to a single note? There's no specific accent here in the music.
00:08:626 (8626|1,8626|5,9286|1,9286|6) - ^^
00:17:198 (17198|0,17239|4,17280|2,17321|6) - This looks kind of difficult to read right now. Maybe move 00:17:239 (17239|4) to 2 and 00:17:321 (17321|6) to 4.
00:16:374 - Add an LN here for the vocal since it's kind of sustained? End at 00:16:539
00:22:308 - Make a triple since it's a kick like 00:21:978 (21978|1,21978|0,21978|6) and you used a triple to represent it.
00:22:967 - ^^
00:42:747 - So I'ma just mention a few of these in case you intentionally didn't map this, but add an LN here and end at 00:43:077 for that whistle sound like at 00:31:374 (31374|3,31374|6,31703|5,31703|1)
00:45:385 - ^^ one beat long
00:45:879 - ^^ 1/4 beat
00:47:528 - ^^ 1 and 1/2 beat long. And so on, that kind of thing.
00:55:934 - Why not start the 1/4 stream here? That's where the drum starts, and you can just layer it over the steady 1/1 triple chord stream you have, like at 00:58:571
01:30:137 (90137|0,90137|6,90220|1,90220|5) - This is personal preference, but wouldn't control J make this look a little nicer and be more readable?
01:35:934 (95934|0) - Shouldn't this start at 01:35:989 ? Cause everything's played in normal 4/4 rhythm except for this which starts on a 1/6 snap.
02:01:868 - Again, why not start the 1/4 stream here? Keep it to single notes (with exception to LN's) and then add jumps in the next measure.
02:12:047 (132047|4) - I think this is supposed to be at 02:12:006
02:17:033 - Add another note here to accent it since it's a louder sound.
03:26:181 (206181|3) - Make a double since it's a kick like the previous notes?
03:38:132 (218132|6,218462|4,218791|0,219121|6) - A small suggestion here, but maybe add short 1/4 LN's here to represent the sustained 8bit sound here? So it'd be something like (random note placements)
Sorry for the short mod Len's mapping is too perfect and I'm too lazy to mod 4k now, so take some stars instead.
lenpai

Protastic101 wrote:

Gahhhh, I suck at getting to my mods on time, sorry! I'm probably not going to find much though, since this has been modded so much XD

Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Nom Nom Chocolate
[General]I think your HP values might be too low. ~8.5 might be better to discourage button mashing. true

[7K Gourmet Chocolate]00:07:967 (7967|6,7967|2) - Uhhh, reduce to a single note? There's no specific accent here in the music. ya
00:08:626 (8626|1,8626|5,9286|1,9286|6) - ^^ ya
00:17:198 (17198|0,17239|4,17280|2,17321|6) - This looks kind of difficult to read right now. Maybe move 00:17:239 (17239|4) to 2 and 00:17:321 (17321|6) to 4. keeping it right now because it is actually very easy to play
00:16:374 - Add an LN here for the vocal since it's kind of sustained? End at 00:16:539 that might be a bit too hard
00:22:308 - Make a triple since it's a kick like 00:21:978 (21978|1,21978|0,21978|6) and you used a triple to represent it. i would consider doing this however sections like this 00:25:110 - will be subject to the change is not nice D:
00:22:967 - ^^
00:42:747 - So I'ma just mention a few of these in case you intentionally didn't map this, but add an LN here and end at 00:43:077 for that whistle sound like at 00:31:374 (31374|3,31374|6,31703|5,31703|1) simplifying layers here
00:45:385 - ^^ one beat long
00:45:879 - ^^ 1/4 beat
00:47:528 - ^^ 1 and 1/2 beat long. And so on, that kind of thing.
00:55:934 - Why not start the 1/4 stream here? That's where the drum starts, and you can just layer it over the steady 1/1 triple chord stream you have, like at 00:58:571 will only do this if very necessary, the volume of the sound of the stream significantly increases on the part where i started to chart it, also, doing this will not balance out the laning i did in 00:53:297 -
01:30:137 (90137|0,90137|6,90220|1,90220|5) - This is personal preference, but wouldn't control J make this look a little nicer and be more readable? settled for a different pattern
01:35:934 (95934|0) - Shouldn't this start at 01:35:989 ? Cause everything's played in normal 4/4 rhythm except for this which starts on a 1/6 snap. nop the snapping is correct this and 01:35:989 (95989|5) - are two distinct sratch sounds and has a delay between them
02:01:868 - Again, why not start the 1/4 stream here? Keep it to single notes (with exception to LN's) and then add jumps in the next measure. same logic applies
02:12:047 (132047|4) - I think this is supposed to be at 02:12:006 o right
02:17:033 - Add another note here to accent it since it's a louder sound. i would want to do this but a note addition can be very uncomfy will consider
03:26:181 (206181|3) - Make a double since it's a kick like the previous notes? ya
03:38:132 (218132|6,218462|4,218791|0,219121|6) - A small suggestion here, but maybe add short 1/4 LN's here to represent the sustained 8bit sound here? So it'd be something like (random note placements)
i see where you're going but they're very faint sounds maybe not
Sorry for the short mod Len's mapping is too perfect and I'm too lazy to mod 4k now, so take some stars instead.
dood thanks a bunch

also improved note lane distribution

update: http://pastebin.com/jDd1Caeu
Topic Starter
- ID9 -
Thanks Len- and Protastic101 for kudo :)


finally finish my exam :x
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' Osumania Mod Nest Of Mappers"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles


Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[4K Pretzel Bread]
SPOILER
00:21:319 - add note to 1 as its the same snare sound like 00:20:000 (20000|3,20000|1,20659|0,20659|1) -

00:41:429 (41429|0) - I assume this is for that verylow pitched long sound. but the long sound started at 00:41:429 (41429|0) - . Think about it mate.

00:53:132 (53132|3) - move to 3 to avoid 1/2 jack at 4th column.

00:59:396 (59396|1) - move to 4 to avoid 00:59:231 (59231|1,59396|1,59560|1) - and..

00:59:725 (59725|2) - move to 1 same reason.

01:02:692 (62692|2) - move to 1 same. *Up to you mate.

01:24:945 (84945|2) - remove? since the sound here is not that strong compared to 01:24:615 (84615|3,84615|0,84615|2) - which has an impact.

02:00:550 (120550|2) - move to 4

02:06:813 (126813|0) - remove? since you only made 01:56:593 (116593|3,116593|0) - doubles but much stronger than that.

02:49:011 (169011|2,169011|3) - swap column position so the LN selected will be at 3rd column to emphasize the pitch more.

03:28:077 (208077|1) - move to 4, 4-stacked: 03:27:912 (207912|1,208077|1,208242|1,208407|1) -

03:29:066 (209066|2,209231|2,209396|2,209560|2,209725|2,209890|2) - rearrange some notes at 03:29:560 (209560|1,209560|2,209643|3,209725|2,209808|0,209890|1,209890|2,209973|3) - to fix this stack.

03:44:396 (224396|0) - remove, the sound here is same sound strength of snare as 03:44:478 (224478|0,224478|1,224560|3,224560|2,224643|1,224643|0) - where it should be the same as 03:49:670 (229670|2,229670|3) -

03:52:637 - I love the way you used LNs here. good job!

04:22:967 - suggesting http://puu.sh/pjKhB/1bc35c2c8d.jpg which the singles selected fits on the kick sound. Much comfortabel to execute as well~

04:30:385 (270385|1) - move to 3 so it can be comfortable along with 04:30:550 (270550|1,270550|3) -

05:27:582 (327582|1) - change to LN as well. Fits with that angry sound effect haha.

Nice marathon!

[Overall]
The chocolate makes me drool haha.
I hope my mod helps, good luck~!


~ END OF MOD ~
Topic Starter
- ID9 -

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' Osumania Mod Nest Of Mappers"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles


Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[4K Pretzel Bread]
SPOILER
00:21:319 - add note to 1 as its the same snare sound like 00:20:000 (20000|3,20000|1,20659|0,20659|1) -

00:41:429 (41429|0) - I assume this is for that verylow pitched long sound. but the long sound started at 00:41:429 (41429|0) - . Think about it mate.

00:53:132 (53132|3) - move to 3 to avoid 1/2 jack at 4th column.

00:59:396 (59396|1) - move to 4 to avoid 00:59:231 (59231|1,59396|1,59560|1) - and..

00:59:725 (59725|2) - move to 1 same reason.

01:02:692 (62692|2) - move to 1 same. *Up to you mate.

01:24:945 (84945|2) - remove? since the sound here is not that strong compared to 01:24:615 (84615|3,84615|0,84615|2) - which has an impact.

02:00:550 (120550|2) - move to 4

02:06:813 (126813|0) - remove? since you only made 01:56:593 (116593|3,116593|0) - doubles but much stronger than that.

02:49:011 (169011|2,169011|3) - swap column position so the LN selected will be at 3rd column to emphasize the pitch more.

03:28:077 (208077|1) - move to 4, 4-stacked: 03:27:912 (207912|1,208077|1,208242|1,208407|1) -

03:29:066 (209066|2,209231|2,209396|2,209560|2,209725|2,209890|2) - rearrange some notes at 03:29:560 (209560|1,209560|2,209643|3,209725|2,209808|0,209890|1,209890|2,209973|3) - to fix this stack.

03:44:396 (224396|0) - remove, the sound here is same sound strength of snare as 03:44:478 (224478|0,224478|1,224560|3,224560|2,224643|1,224643|0) - where it should be the same as 03:49:670 (229670|2,229670|3) -

03:52:637 - I love the way you used LNs here. good job!

04:22:967 - suggesting http://puu.sh/pjKhB/1bc35c2c8d.jpg which the singles selected fits on the kick sound. Much comfortabel to execute as well~

04:30:385 (270385|1) - move to 3 so it can be comfortable along with 04:30:550 (270550|1,270550|3) -

05:27:582 (327582|1) - change to LN as well. Fits with that angry sound effect haha.

Nice marathon!

[Overall]
The chocolate makes me drool haha.
I hope my mod helps, good luck~!

almost accepted all mod
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I forgot to tell you to mod lenfried's diff :|
but thanks, your mod helps a lot haha
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