Anxient wrote:

everything im about to say is not meant to offend anyone, so id appreciate if anyone would uhh... respond to this complaint in a civil say? that means no angry talk. thanks!

general

- .mp3 quality: come on man this was almost painful to listen to.idk what are u talking about... mp3 was provided by Shad0w1and and it has good quality... at least to me
examples:

• 00:06:384 - yume
  00:08:850 - ima
  00:16:247 - ta
  00:11:315 - tte

consider finding a better mp3 please. try asking Wafu for mp3 coz well... he collects lossless mp3s. its literally plastered on his page.

-bg quality: this... uhh... this bg is really interesting. come on man, please. with a show as popular as dragon ball, finding a good bg should be a piece of cake! i'll change it... but i still prefer the previous one

insane
while this map doesnt break any rules and things like that, this map doesnt not look up to date. this is the sort of maps that would look good for rank in the 2011 era.so... it has no problems, right? is a 2011 map bad?

00:01:453 (3) - stab me with a spoon for being too nazi with the blanket, but it seems a bit too curved for a proper blanket. consider loosening it up.rotated 2° it should be better now

00:01:453 (3,4) - while this might take a bit of naziing to see, but this pattern looks like uhh... bad? idk how to explain. slider entry is a mess? what i mean by slider entry is this. it might be me being a complete nazi, but this is the year 2016, so might as well increase the quality of the maps being thrown into qualification mk? i can suggest a more better pattern in the lines below:
http://puu.sh/mo3pu/05a95e637a.jpg: remember that all patterns do NOT need to mirror each other.i like my pattern... so i'll leave as is

00:01:453 (3,1) - well this overlap is really close. try spacing it out a bit.yup... fixed

00:02:480 (2,3) - slider entry complaint, http://puu.sh/mo5F9/a5c6f7eb91.jpg related pic. how i would fix it: http://puu.sh/mo5Gf/4bd10eecc4.jpgitsn't a problem imo

00:02:685 (3,4) - this is a problem that shouldve been fixed ages but it isnt. if your intention wasnt to make a blanket, then make it less... blanketty.ya... i moved the anchor like 1 grip left... so it should be good now

00:05:151 (4,1) - bad blanket. reposition (1)^

00:06:384 (3,4) - poor blanketting and lack of emphasis on 3. as for 3 i recommend a ctrl g. repositon (4) so that the clap hitsound makes more sense.now there's a jump between 00:06:177 (2,3) -

00:09:672 (3) - this is really a sort of position you would give to a note with aLOT of emphasis, such as 00:10:083 (4) - this. so why is 3 given a larger emphassis location than 4?cuz here 00:09:672 (3) - is when the singer raises his voice... so it's ok to me

00:19:329 (3) - use the same slider as 1. i would also like to point out poor blanketting for 00:18:302 (5) - .ok

00:19:329 (3,4) - slider entry exit complaint (the point still stands.) http://puu.sh/mo5HU/508794a9b3.jpg <-- related pic, how i would fix it: http://puu.sh/mo5JT/9adeb439f5.jpg. reasoning behind spacing from 6,7,1 was because song was entering a new song part, so flowbreak is good emphasis to that?no thx... i like my style

00:22:617 (2,3) - any reason on why 3 is given a larger DS? why isnt it equal?
kinda weird, fixed tho

00:35:151 (1,2) - if this wasnt meant to be a blanket, make it less obvious or fix the blanket.ok

00:35:562 (2,3) - slider entry exit complaint, http://puu.sh/mo5N7/be7e0c959b.jpg <-- related pic, how i would fix it: http://puu.sh/mo5Pr/0777937151.jpg, kept the overlap to mirror the overlapping nature of this map.no thx... i like my style

00:36:179 (5,6,7) - well this is rather random. the song doesnt indicate any sort of emphasis for this sorta thing. far too wide, consider changing the DS, or use sliders. that always works.jumps are consistent across all the song... maybe it looks random cuz it crosses all the screen but i changed it a little

00:38:439 (1,2,3) - do 0.84 DS and place appropriately. put in x:y (232:117)no thx... i like my style

00:38:439 (1,3) - use the same slider btw. part is related and by your positoning, itll look aLOT better.its exactly the same slider... idk what are u talking about

00:40:905 (3,4) - this looks terrible imo. looks 2012 ish. try doing somehting like http://puu.sh/mo447/f20d438a88.jpg this. imo it looks better and flows alot better.no thx... i like my style

00:43:165 (7,1) - not enough emphasis on 1. 7 doesnt have emphasis at all. tbh, doing this http://puu.sh/mo46t/55886f7583.jpg would make aLOT more sense. seriously. will see

00:45:631 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern looks very random, like its placed there as if you felt like, "i think im lacking jumps. lets just put a jump down there, and yep! that should do it!". youre doign a 3.87 star so dont place random diffspikes everywhere. try doing this. itll play aLOT better.i already replied this... and also, i'm not making a 3.87 diff, i'm mapping an insane diff... so it's ok to me

00:50:768 (3,4,1,2) - this entire section looks too stiff... try doing a mix of circle and slider usage. i would recommend this.http://puu.sh/mo4xh/3ab19126c2.mp4no thx... i like my style

i really hate to be the bearer of bad news, but i wanna request a dq for this map for lack of quality in the Insane diff. i took a skim on the hard diff and found similar issues. please adress them. if you want me to take a look at the hard diff as well to prove my point, i will do so.

EDIT 1: i got too rude. i apologize. removed the unnecessary comment.
EDIT 2: added details to slider entry mods so that it looks more related.

Anxient wrote:

i wonder if ill ever get kudosu for my "mod" lmao

Shiirn wrote:

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues

GeneralThis is almost entirely out of my curiosity. Such drama.

1. Good god this BG is blurry. Are you sure you can't find a better one?
2. There are massive amounts of blanketting issues I could go over here, but I will gloss over all but the most glaring ones here.
3. Anxient needs to take a chill pill.
4. If a map is bad, it's bad. If it's good, it's good. A lot of subjective taste can be explained through objective reasoning. If you can't figure out why you like or hate something, you shouldn't open your mouth as you're only going to look silly to the people who know what they're talking about. This includes yourself after you gain some experience!
5. This mod is not intended to imply that I want to DQ this map. This mod is partially to show Anxient how to not be a right ass, and also to provide some advice to the mappers within. I didn't do this for kudosu.

Easy

1. 00:00:631 (1,3) - These don't blanket properly. There are a ton of barely-off blankets in this difficulty that I would normally point out but seeing as this is already qualified, I'll not waste my time or yours.fixed
2. 00:00:631 (1,2,3,4) - The fact that this combo seems to be tilted off the axis by 6 degrees (and aren't symmetrical over that axis) is kind of... well, ugly. There's no reason not to make it perfect if you're going to have it somewhat look structured."fixed" since it's not really a problem to me

Insane

1. I see no mechanical problems here.
2. It's certainly awkward at points, and the flow is imperfect, but let's be honest here it's a boring little TV size map that nobody will really care about all that much. If there are any maps to practice mapping to get better on that you still want to rank, it's boring little TV sizes.

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